Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Why? (Bella Shepard)
Why? Yes a complicated question, though only three letters long. Access to...
June 3rd, 2022 21:16 - a lifetime ago haunts still. (Dusk arising)
No one no matter how famous or wealthy can escape the scars of emotional...
June 3rd, 2022 21:05 - Snakeskin (Rocky Lagou)
A wonderful montage of ideas, words and images. Your last line is what...
June 3rd, 2022 21:00 - Flights Of Fancy (Rozina)
Well rhymed and entertaining that is what it is about. Well done
May 1st, 2022 16:34 - The other side of clearing something up (Dusk arising)
Sad I thought this was a poetry site not facebook
May 1st, 2022 16:32 - Colonoscopy prep (Crowns4Christ)
Doesn\'t sound very pleasent
May 1st, 2022 16:29 - as they all went forward – I looked back (Rocky Lagou)
A wonderful poem with great metaphors and images \"like the bedsheet that...
April 28th, 2022 09:14 - Almost a sonnet (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you so much Rocky for your encouragement and lovely words. I titled...
April 28th, 2022 09:03 - My Mum (Rozina)
What a wonderful tribute to a strong woman. I can not even imagine losing...
April 27th, 2022 19:52 - Just A Little Poetic Thought (Rocky Lagou)
A little fantasy never hurts. It reminds me of an old song by Tex Ritter...
April 27th, 2022 13:01 - The Exchange (Luna Nera)
A puzzle that to me can be answered in love or peace. An intriguing...
April 27th, 2022 06:20 - Down Under (Rozina)
A wonderful poem of reunion with family. Something that most of us can...
April 27th, 2022 06:12 - Handheld God (Rocky Lagou)
What a great metaphor. So well written. I loved handheld God.
April 26th, 2022 12:09 - what need in me for kisses (Dusk arising)
A great metaphor well worded metered with a sad feeling.
April 26th, 2022 11:03 - Gossiping (Rozina)
Communication is so complicated that even between two people...
April 25th, 2022 20:17 - Try To Remember (Bella Shepard)
Bella I loved this write and its humorous but sad focus on old age and...
April 25th, 2022 20:10 - what makes a poet (Dusk arising)
Great measures for what is a poet. Much of what we write does come from...
April 25th, 2022 14:32 - Coffee (Rozina)
I could smell it brewing. Well written and organized as well as rhyme....
April 24th, 2022 20:29 - this special springtime (Dusk arising)
This reminded me of my childhood weekly visiting my grandparents farm and...
April 24th, 2022 10:06 - every now and again (Dusk arising)
A beautiful way of expressing this feeling of missing someone.
April 23rd, 2022 08:29 - CO2-ified Lungs (Haiku/Senryū #5) (Rocky Lagou)
It\'s a shame that some people don\'t seem to care much about the...
April 22nd, 2022 22:28 - Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde (Rozina)
Unfortunately such abrupt changes do occur far too frequently. The poem...
April 22nd, 2022 21:13 - looking forward (Dusk arising)
A statement of where we are in humanity. Sad but true. Well expressed.
April 22nd, 2022 06:26 - BLOOD (Rozina)
We are all different and at the same time all the same. A good write.
April 21st, 2022 19:46 - Swing of LIFE !! (Vamsi Sudha)
A beautiful metaphor. Children like swings and keeping a childlike...
April 21st, 2022 13:46 - A Free Flow Attempt (Rozina)
The story telling is good. The images are fitting and it like the stream...
April 20th, 2022 20:08 - offers of nonsense (Dusk arising)
I always loved nursery rhymes and your rendition put a smile on my face....
April 20th, 2022 05:57 - Fast And Furious (Rozina)
Rozina a very entertaining write. I love cooking and love to watch cooking...
April 19th, 2022 18:56 - within a picture in my mind (Dusk arising)
dusk such a great poem with the first half contrasting with the second...
April 19th, 2022 13:00 - a love note to the sea (Dahlia)
I too love the :hypnotic blue bliss\" it is no mistake that most people\'s...
April 18th, 2022 18:38 - Ye Wings of Wisdom (Rocky Lagou)
Eye opening. It is not only at birth or childhood that we can awaken to...
April 18th, 2022 18:35 - Psychotic world (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you so much for your welcome comments. I appreciate you taking your...
April 18th, 2022 07:16 - The Walk (Cassia DeSousa)
Well said Cassia we all are connected and this poem says this. Well done.
April 17th, 2022 19:10 - in dark woodland (Dusk arising)
Dusk this write registered as few do. I believe this to be one of your...
April 17th, 2022 14:49 - Henry VIII and Senryu (Rozina)
Well done. A fun read reminding me of times that weren\'t so friendly.
April 15th, 2022 20:39 - The Spatula Can Support... or Slaughter (Haiku/Senryū #4) (Rocky Lagou)
Rocky this piece of work goes way beyond. So many elements incorporated in...
April 14th, 2022 08:37 - That MPS Glow (Christina8)
What aa beautiful expression of gratitude which is something so rare these...
April 13th, 2022 13:30 - Afternoon Tea (Bella Shepard)
A wonderful tale or tail. Anthropomorphism is underrated, I always loved...
April 13th, 2022 13:25 - Gravity (Pearcemelville 兎敏)
This poem is full of great lines. My favorite is the same as L.B. Mek\'s ....
April 12th, 2022 20:42 - now ready to depart (Dusk arising)
Very well done, a style I have never tried but can appreciate. Great write...
April 10th, 2022 11:50 - it aint our summer (Dusk arising)
Dusky a wonderful write. All seasons have their strengths and as we pass...
April 9th, 2022 12:33 - premonition (Dusk arising)
What a wonderfully stated claim that the human race has not progressed...
April 8th, 2022 11:53 - tide (Dusk arising)
Beautifully penned. Brimming over with metaphors, it paints a picture of...
April 7th, 2022 13:21 - To Nike (Bella Shepard)
Bella What a great poem. It was amusing to read and easy too in that it...
April 7th, 2022 13:15 - Vacation (Christina8)
I wonder if this qualifies as cannibalism? A great twist on the menu....
April 6th, 2022 19:20 - storm (Dusk arising)
An epic tale or maybe tail. From history to film to childhood to dream my...
April 6th, 2022 12:15 - Our Twins (Christina8)
What a marvelous poem. Such a trying time yet to face with such a...
April 5th, 2022 10:52 - lustfully greedily (Dusk arising)
A passionate gulp with all the taste of a fine wine. I\'m so glad you...
April 5th, 2022 08:13 - =showering with lilacs= (Dean langmuir)
Such a vivid sense of beauty in the visual and olfactory as well as...
April 5th, 2022 08:09 - May You Await Me on the Moon? (Rocky Lagou)
A wonderful write. Isis is one of my favorite Goddess symbols as she takes...
April 4th, 2022 15:24 - forever (Dusk arising)
What a wonderful feel I had reading this. Even without paying attention to...
April 3rd, 2022 15:23 - Romantic (Christina8)
Very romantic well worded with great images and metaphors. It flowed well...
April 3rd, 2022 15:17 - A Mouse\'s Tale (Bella Shepard)
Bella this wonderful tail brought images of the mouse from the movie \"The...
April 3rd, 2022 15:13 - Springtime femininity🌹 (FallenAngel1🕊)
Very feminine. An expression of exuberance and breaking free.
April 3rd, 2022 12:12 - -The Arrange of Art- (Dean langmuir)
Wonderfully expressed a great thought
April 3rd, 2022 12:08 - -Layman Sages- (Dean langmuir)
There are all kinds of intelligence, what we measure and call intelligence...
April 2nd, 2022 19:16 - Little Birdie (Bella Shepard)
I have a special affinity for nature and I think we underestimate animals...
April 2nd, 2022 12:46 - Giving Up Poetry (Rocky Lagou)
Rocky well said. We all write for different reasons and they are all...
April 1st, 2022 13:15 - Anaclictic metamorphosis (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you so much L.B. for your review and kind comments. They are deeply...
April 1st, 2022 12:51 - Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet) (Rocky Lagou)
Life limits the light of hope. Everything is a cycle. Instead of waiting...
March 31st, 2022 15:57 - Not A Saint (Christina8)
Saints can love too. Nothing wrong with that. Loved the poem it was...
March 31st, 2022 07:12 - slowly into a shadow (Dusk arising)
What a wonderful expression of memories of youth coming on gently as if in...
March 30th, 2022 19:10 - the cunning puppet (Dusk arising)
wearing sorrow to find a weeping audience in an attempt to paint a perfect...
March 29th, 2022 21:39 - Poet in the Beast (Rocky Lagou)
A very open write, revealing and raw. I noticed that the I\'s have...
March 29th, 2022 21:31 - A Swan, Named Freedom, Swims (Rocky Lagou)
An intriguing vision with vivid images and great metaphors. Swans are one...
March 28th, 2022 13:40 - My Eyes Are Closed (Bella Shepard)
Bella it\'s like that old Frank Sinatra song \"I did it my way\". Very...
March 26th, 2022 22:03 - Alzheimers (Bella Shepard)
An insidious illness that strikes at will and shows no mercy. A well...
March 25th, 2022 20:01 - i will comfort you (Dusk arising)
A wonderful metaphor stated in a very moving manner. It is an ingenious...
March 25th, 2022 19:53 - Lost Innocence (Sorenbarrett)
You comments are deeply appreciated.
March 25th, 2022 12:21 - To Ignorance (Bella Shepard)
Wonderfully metered and rhymed but more important the message was clearly...
March 24th, 2022 09:03 - Hey Little Kitty (Bella Shepard)
Dear Bella I loved this poem it holds a good deal of deeper meaning. We...
March 23rd, 2022 15:23 - When we meet again (Arvy)
A wonderful metaphor. We all come from different places though we walk...
March 22nd, 2022 13:23 - White shadows (Arvy)
Beautiful paradoxical images of white shadows and a weight pushing to...
March 22nd, 2022 13:17 - This Wonderful Place (Bella Shepard)
What a wonderful expression of the use of poetry. Very well done.
March 21st, 2022 16:14 - R.I.P my W.T.F (Dean langmuir)
Short to the point. Well stated.
March 20th, 2022 12:08 - 16... and still sane (A Little Handcrafted Paradise) (Rocky Lagou)
A great message. If you can accept yourself with all your strong points...
March 18th, 2022 15:07 - The Lone Cyclist (Bella Shepard)
This was a wonderful piece that makes the point that each small thing can...
March 17th, 2022 13:33 - Goodbye, until next time. (Arvy)
A complicated affair much like life itself is complicated. Painful at...
March 17th, 2022 13:06 - Fighting Spirit (Christina8)
A very interesting rhyme scheme AABDDB the theme was well expressed and...
March 17th, 2022 13:01 - the wind cries (Dusk arising)
An intriguing write. Open to interpretation, is this the thought of a...
March 17th, 2022 10:53 - Dance of Breath and Breeze (Rocky Lagou)
Like a musical piece it started, built, crescendo and declined to a...
March 17th, 2022 09:22 - Where the heart is (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you so much for your review and comment. I know that it is a touchy...
March 17th, 2022 09:15 - Remove the mask (SpokenEmotions)
A great message. So hard to let down the mask. Well written
March 15th, 2022 07:53 - Trust Not Them (Villanelle) (Rocky Lagou)
I have to admit that I am not sure that the way I took this is the way it...
March 14th, 2022 16:53 - The Music Wraps Around Me (Bella Shepard)
Very well said. Not only did the meter flow well but the message was a...
March 13th, 2022 19:46 - My Eyes Are Closed (Bella Shepard)
A wonderful positive piece, full of hope and taking ones own...
March 13th, 2022 19:41 - The hypocritic (Spilleronsheet)
Wonderful images, although the overt message of hypocrisy is clear it...
March 13th, 2022 19:32 - Bridge Chatter. (Goldfinch60)
A very pleasing read that conveys the message so well that our own likes...
March 13th, 2022 09:24 - how transient (Dusk arising)
I fully agree that man\'s arrogance will probably be his demise either...
March 10th, 2022 13:38 - When Trees Go To Sleep (Bella Shepard)
A wonderful description of the tree cycle. Anthropomorphized in such a...
March 10th, 2022 13:34 - WOMEN…..You are Special !! (Vamsi Sudha)
A wonderful commemoration of international women\'s day. Well written and...
March 10th, 2022 13:26 - The Piano Man (Bella Shepard)
Incongruities often bring issues out of focus into focus. To notice the...
March 7th, 2022 16:45 - Was Tomorrow Always Honeyed? (Rocky Lagou)
A wonderful piece full of philosophy. It conveys a sense of desperation...
March 7th, 2022 16:40 - From the dirt (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you so much for taking the time to review and comment on this poem....
March 7th, 2022 16:32 - Being Here With You (Christina8)
Glowing like its message, it leaves a warm feeling. Well done
March 5th, 2022 19:36 - Lovingly (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you so much for taking your time to review and comment on this poem
March 5th, 2022 19:34 - Hold Me Like Clair De Lune (Rocky Lagou)
Beautifully done. Music as much as poetry can carry us to heights beyond....
March 3rd, 2022 13:21 - An Answer Without a Question (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you Rocky for your review and comment. Reality is an illusion as are...
March 3rd, 2022 13:14 - я з тобою україно (Dusk arising)
Dusk a wonderful title that I don\'t understand about a war that I don\'t...
March 3rd, 2022 11:40 - An Answer Without a Question (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you for your review and comments. I selected the font because like...
March 3rd, 2022 11:36
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