Comments on community poems by Bella Shepard
- Togethering (Fay Slimm.)
Brilliant dear Fay, just brilliant!
February 19th, 2023 14:18 - cursors and curses (Arqios)
That keyboard dance does get away from us at times. I find my fingers...
February 19th, 2023 14:14 - Graves In the Churches. (Sakwa Franc)
My dear friend you speak of the dilemna of religion. For my part I think...
February 19th, 2023 14:07 - Hopeless Romantic (A Poem on Valentine’s Day) (AuburnScribbler)
If we could somehow understand the multifacted, ever changing face of...
February 16th, 2023 15:42 - Treaty Words (Sorenbarrett)
You have chosen a wonderful sketch to accompany this poem. I so often...
February 16th, 2023 15:12 - October (between friends) (Willowthewisp)
Am I right, that in reading your poem I picture an online relationship? ...
February 16th, 2023 14:56 - My Biggest Fear (Rhmn_7)
How very wise, the message of this poem. As we race through life we too...
February 16th, 2023 14:38 - Sunrise (Rhmn_7)
Dear friend I just realized that when I first read this poem I wrote a...
February 16th, 2023 14:22 - For Everfriends Everywhere (Neville)
Maybe the moral is to know before you speak. It is so often easy to say,...
February 16th, 2023 14:10 - Kindness Of Snow. (Goldfinch60)
Such a beautiful analogy dear friend, the purity of snow that blankets all...
February 16th, 2023 14:05 - Forgiveness Freedom (Orchidee)
Such a wonderful message my friend! May we always find forgiveness in our...
February 16th, 2023 14:01 - Errant (Fay Slimm.)
The accompanying picture so aptly evokes the nature of your poem dear Fay....
February 16th, 2023 13:49 - star signed (Arqios)
Your poem and music bring such delight. At this time of year I can step...
February 16th, 2023 13:38 - Amateur (Sorenbarrett)
The whittler of words has created a piece that comes from the heart, the...
February 12th, 2023 15:26 - Distilled Time (Neville)
To capture a moment in time is serendipitous, to be saved and treasured. ...
February 12th, 2023 15:12 - Tasted. (Fay Slimm.)
One again you take me to an enchanted place, where it seems dreams are...
February 12th, 2023 15:02 - Working together (Greg57)
Such words of wisdom dear poet, and so much food for thought. Loved it...
February 12th, 2023 13:52 - Don\'t forget (Rhmn_7)
Dear poet this is such a wonderfully, intuitive write. The last two lines...
February 12th, 2023 12:28 - Shadows Dancing (Neville)
Such a beautiful image, dancing in the brightness of day and the shadows...
February 10th, 2023 16:31 - Nothing For Granted. (Goldfinch60)
As you express gratitude for the basic necessities of life, I can feel ...
February 10th, 2023 16:19 - Penitence For Persecutors (Orchidee)
Your poem applies so aptly to our world situation today in so many ways. ...
February 10th, 2023 16:01 - hidden valentine (Arqios)
Thank you dear poet for this look into a hidden history. Some good...
February 10th, 2023 15:58 - Enigma (Saxon Crow)
Methinks you got it quite right!
February 10th, 2023 15:13 - developmental linguistics (Willowthewisp)
Dear poet hold onto that child, for you\'ve created something truly...
February 6th, 2023 17:06 - River And Time. (Goldfinch60)
Your analogy of the river and time is perfect. This is so beautifully and...
February 6th, 2023 16:55 - Trusted Tutor (Orchidee)
The quintessential tutor, for without whom we are lost. Good write dear...
February 6th, 2023 16:47 - Pre-date-Her (Neville)
Your analogy to a predator waiting patiently, stimulated by movement of...
February 6th, 2023 16:44 - Adorning (Fay Slimm.)
Dear Fay you strike at the core of a poetic heart. It is a whim, the...
February 6th, 2023 16:33 - tongue in cheek (Arqios)
Oh, the anticipation of acceptance the validation, don\'t we all seek it? ...
February 6th, 2023 16:17 - Unending Love. (Sakwa Franc)
Beautiful words, beautiful poem, wonderfully inspiring.
February 4th, 2023 07:26 - Universal Love (Adventuressmalik)
You have described the many facets of love in this poem, and brought them...
February 4th, 2023 07:22 - Statues - a Rhymeless Rant (Doggerel Dave)
How brave of you to start this conversation dear friend. History is...
February 3rd, 2023 15:24 - Intracerebral (Tallisman)
Such a compelling picture you paint of schizophrenia. It\'s so difficult...
February 2nd, 2023 14:19 - Baldies. (Goldfinch60)
Dear poet you are most fortunate to be in the 30% of men who do not go...
February 2nd, 2023 14:11 - Chasing the Carpet (Neville)
The sadness is that that anyone should become the slave of such a monster,...
February 2nd, 2023 14:00 - Candlemas Communings (Orchidee)
I can imagine Simeon\'s joy, holding this beautiful baby, so full of...
February 2nd, 2023 13:53 - memorial garden (Arqios)
My father was a veteran of WWII, and both he and my mother are buried in...
February 2nd, 2023 13:50 - Waiting Existence (Fay Slimm.)
A beautiful image of love depicted it the ebb and flow of ocean tides. ...
February 2nd, 2023 13:40 - Possibilities. (Goldfinch60)
If we could but hold onto your words of wisdom, what wonderful days we...
January 31st, 2023 15:25 - Fisher Followers (Orchidee)
Complete trust in another, here there were no doubts. So beautifully...
January 31st, 2023 15:17 - Acceptance (Fay Slimm.)
It seems you have captured the stages of enlightenment in a brevity of...
January 31st, 2023 15:15 - trinketry (Arqios)
Your poem puts me in mind of a spell being cast, so enjoyed it. And the...
January 31st, 2023 15:12 - With Her Head Full of Feathers .. (Neville)
Feathers are such gentle things, ethereal and beautiful. Such fitting...
January 31st, 2023 15:03 - Circular journey (Sorenbarrett)
This one takes my breath away. Who knew that physics could be poetry. ...
January 31st, 2023 14:56 - Cat as trophy (Sorenbarrett)
This is a wonderful, engaging story with a punch line that is priceless. ...
January 31st, 2023 14:51 - Miss. Understanding/mind and soul agape (Sorenbarrett)
Dear poet this poem is such fun as you play with our extraordinary English...
January 31st, 2023 14:43 - Rainbows And Stars. (Goldfinch60)
These are the very best words in the world to live by. How did you get so...
January 29th, 2023 16:42 - Asking Assurances (Orchidee)
Another Sunday best dear friend. The fourth stanza, words to live by.!
January 29th, 2023 16:26 - ever closer (Arqios)
Dear poet this is so incredibly creative. Is it indeed your voice that I...
January 29th, 2023 16:20 - Shore Song (Fay Slimm.)
Incredible pic for this oh so lovely poem dear Fay. While I\'m here in my...
January 29th, 2023 15:58 - Making Out On a Loop (Neville)
You\'ve written brilliantly of the desire to capture the moment, the...
January 29th, 2023 15:47 - Sombras (Sorenbarrett)
While wandering through your archives I came across this gem. I pulled up...
January 29th, 2023 15:00 - Today. (Fay Slimm.)
Dear Fay the picture you so vividly paint in words is just beautiful....
January 28th, 2023 13:11 - Ageless Hippie. (Goldfinch60)
I was not a hippie, but I was a teenager in the Age of Aquarius and it was...
January 28th, 2023 12:59 - Prayer Pleas (Orchidee)
Your unwavering faith is an inspiration in all that you write dear friend,...
January 28th, 2023 12:46 - Flawed #2 (Neville)
How often do we feel a sense of disappointment when we come to find that...
January 28th, 2023 12:35 - Men today, gods tomorrow (Sorenbarrett)
As I read this poem I kept wanting to sing it to the tune of Billy Joel\'s...
January 28th, 2023 12:14 - Why do we trust in you? (Arqios)
So relevant and succinctly versed dear poet. You\'ve hit the proverbial...
January 28th, 2023 11:48 - Earth, Air, Fire (Sorenbarrett)
I\'ve read several books lately about the life cycles of ancient forests,...
January 25th, 2023 14:48 - So consider (Sorenbarrett)
I love the rhyming patterns that you employ in your poems, and this one is...
January 25th, 2023 14:38 - Art (Sorenbarrett)
I suppose art is in the eye of the beholder, but the eye must be wide open...
January 25th, 2023 14:31 - Resignation (Sorenbarrett)
This is such a breathtaking commentary on our modern, electrified,...
January 25th, 2023 14:25 - Queen Victoria Sits Again. (Doggerel Dave)
I certainly understand the desire for repatriation of treasured artifacts...
January 24th, 2023 14:39 - Watson And Holmes Went Camping. (Goldfinch60)
I read this, anticipating one of your classic zingers at the end, and you...
January 24th, 2023 14:27 - Good Graces (Orchidee)
There is so much good and beauty in the world, and we need to be reminded....
January 24th, 2023 14:19 - The dance (Sorenbarrett)
I love the wonderful rhyming scheme of this poem as I read it aloud, its...
January 24th, 2023 14:16 - Just Another Way Out (Neville)
Wonderfully worded my friend. Sad for the people who never seem to be...
January 24th, 2023 14:04 - Raining a Yesterday (Fay Slimm.)
You describe so beautifully the aftermath of love, and the healing that...
January 24th, 2023 13:54 - Gone (Fay Slimm.)
The shadow pic is perfect, beautiful but fleeting as the day ages. The...
January 20th, 2023 17:45 - The Day Before the Day Before Today (Neville)
The mystery of time permeates your poem, and the last four lines are...
January 20th, 2023 17:08 - Prams. (Doggerel Dave)
Your point is well taken. My thought is that we really don\'t understand...
January 20th, 2023 14:32 - My Kind Of Day. (Goldfinch60)
As I read, I walk vicariously through the deep frost and bright sunshine...
January 20th, 2023 14:15 - fee free (Arqios)
You capture the freedom to be in such beautiful metaphor in this poem. ...
January 20th, 2023 14:11 - Guard Against Grieving (Orchidee)
This poem speaks to the kindness of your nature dear friend, beautifully...
January 20th, 2023 14:06 - Swallow a sunbeam (Sorenbarrett)
Dear poet, sadly your words are reverberating around the world. I see it...
January 20th, 2023 13:43 - Waiting For Godel (Kurt Philip Behm)
Love this poem. For me, your final stanza so beautifully phrases the...
January 20th, 2023 13:34 - A Handful of Random Thoughts and a Sunflower (Neville)
Your words evoke images, emotions and a sunflower pressed between the...
January 18th, 2023 13:32 - Midas touch (Sorenbarrett)
Beautifully poignant dear friend, who really knows what may be again. ...
January 18th, 2023 13:25 - Acromegaly. (Goldfinch60)
What a wonderful narrative dear Andy. Your choice of song mirrors so well...
January 18th, 2023 13:17 - Mercy Missive (Orchidee)
So lyrical and lovely, each stanza dear friend.
January 18th, 2023 13:02 - Blanketed. (Fay Slimm.)
Your picture speaks volumes, as does your words. To love it while it...
January 18th, 2023 12:59 - once (Arqios)
What those \"once\" moments lead to is often not within our power to see. ...
January 18th, 2023 12:53 - Philosophy And Reason. (Goldfinch60)
Point well taken dear friend. I suppose we may find faith in the healing...
January 13th, 2023 13:35 - Grace Given (Orchidee)
Thank you Orchi for another lovely verse, and for a hymn I have always...
January 13th, 2023 12:53 - Seen (Fay Slimm.)
Dear Fay, you have succinctly and wonderfully captured the essence of...
January 13th, 2023 12:21 - An Uncertain Certainty (Neville)
In matters of the heart it seems, the head grapples with emotion and a...
January 13th, 2023 09:52 - pygmalean ivory (Arqios)
All too familiar these days. I think of survivors, who thought they...
January 13th, 2023 09:39 - The scent of a dream (Sorenbarrett)
\"The scent of a dream\", haunting and beautiful, lingering as dreams so...
January 12th, 2023 17:39 - Concerning Some ‘C’ Words. (Doggerel Dave)
This was great fun to read my friend. Now \"Lady and the Tramp\" had it...
January 11th, 2023 16:17 - Disaster Trumps Competition. (Doggerel Dave)
A great write Dear poet. The rhyming pattern for me, treats the subject...
January 11th, 2023 15:59 - 17 (Rocky Lagou)
\"Born bold, born strong. The kid is poetic\". The kid knows himself at...
January 9th, 2023 15:17 - Villanelle in Subzero (Rocky Lagou)
I\'ve watched as icicles melt, slowly dripping, and I begin to feel the...
January 9th, 2023 15:09 - Cruising Past the Billboard That Declares: “It’s Ok to Say Gay” (Rocky Lagou)
This, dear Rocky, is such a powerful work, and the billboard such a...
January 9th, 2023 14:30 - Tears And Joy. (Goldfinch60)
Dear Andy I can only sigh, and tell you how beautiful this is, and how...
January 8th, 2023 11:15 - Star Seen (Orchidee)
A fond memory from childhood is arranging the nativity scene under the...
January 8th, 2023 11:14 - Something More Than Just Skin Deep (Neville)
This is a poem to truly dive into head first, and be immersed in the...
January 8th, 2023 11:04 - Dualities (Sorenbarrett)
Such a dichotomy you present here dear poet, and one we must grapple with...
January 8th, 2023 10:59 - Brightness (Fay Slimm.)
You grab my heart with this one dear Fay. The last stanza is so striking...
January 8th, 2023 10:46 - Beautiful Destinations. (Goldfinch60)
When we walk we observe, when we observe we appreciate, when we appreciate...
January 6th, 2023 14:40 - Epiphany Expectations (Orchidee)
The story is ageless and beautiful. No matter how we commercialize and...
January 6th, 2023 14:33
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