Comments on community poems by Bella Shepard
- Doing his Best (Fay Slimm.)
A beautiful tribute to a beautiful creature. I can envision as I read,...
November 28th, 2022 13:17 - so once (Dusk arising)
The mind is filled with so many doors, just waiting for the right key. ...
November 28th, 2022 12:58 - baggage claim delay (Arqios)
I love the way music can help enhance the tone of a poem, and you sure...
November 28th, 2022 12:48 - Full Life. (Goldfinch60)
Dear friend, as I read I see that the threads of all you love have been...
November 28th, 2022 12:41 - Wheat And Chaff (Orchidee)
Such a beautiful and serene video and voices to accompany a beautiful poem...
November 28th, 2022 12:29 - How you look at it (Sorenbarrett)
For me, this poem became more powerful with each line. The way you have...
November 28th, 2022 12:25 - Just Another Zen Thing (Neville)
The zen of life meets the enigma of existence in two 3 line stanzas. ...
November 28th, 2022 12:18 - Early Encouragings (Orchidee)
Your first stanza strikes me deeply. Upon rising early, my morning walk...
November 23rd, 2022 12:17 - as if (Dusk arising)
Living in a neighborhood that is surrounded by woodlands, I\'ve had the...
November 23rd, 2022 11:55 - as if (Dusk arising)
Living in a neighborhood that is surrounded by woodlands, I\'ve had the...
November 23rd, 2022 11:54 - new car (Arqios)
Need to set this one to music, would make a great song. Stuck at home,...
November 23rd, 2022 11:42 - And It Rains. (Goldfinch60)
I just love your tribute to rain! It always holds a fascination for me. ...
November 23rd, 2022 11:30 - When Things Were Perfectly Perfect (Neville)
How beautiful those memories, seen through the mist of time, can be. They...
November 23rd, 2022 11:23 - Seeing (Fay Slimm.)
I had to read this poem aloud, with all the emotion that reverberates...
November 22nd, 2022 17:37 - What if (Natalie Gladmir)
Very thought provoking and finely written verse dear poet. Self discovery...
November 22nd, 2022 14:15 - Forbidden Fruit (SureshG)
You have found the perfect words to explain something that plagues the...
November 19th, 2022 15:00 - Peace And Love. (Goldfinch60)
Comfortably Numb is such a great choice. The magic of music is that it...
November 18th, 2022 16:37 - Happy House (Orchidee)
Lovely video, beautiful images and voices. Your last two lines are so...
November 18th, 2022 16:28 - Algarvia (Neville)
As I read, I\'m drawn into this story. With all of the rich imagery I can...
November 18th, 2022 16:19 - capricious recollections (Arqios)
The musical accompaniment seems to embody the different moods of poetry so...
November 18th, 2022 15:39 - Until All\'s Undone (Rocky Lagou)
This is such a deeply emotional poem my dear Rocky, one that courageously...
November 18th, 2022 15:27 - Glass Full. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s the friends, at the end, that can keep you sane. The beer sure...
November 17th, 2022 12:57 - Readiness Responsibility (Orchidee)
An inspirational parable and a lovely write my friend.
November 17th, 2022 12:46 - where might you be? (Arqios)
I feel past, present and future converge, to beguile and entreat. So well...
November 17th, 2022 12:43 - A thought (Sorenbarrett)
Concise and beautifully to the point. The last line is a gem. Love it!
November 17th, 2022 12:31 - Mislaid (Fay Slimm.)
I love the way you have described a relationship crippled by what seem to...
November 16th, 2022 16:29 - Where is the rhyme? (Sorenbarrett)
This is a rhyming junkies dream, and I stand accused. Love it, love it,...
November 16th, 2022 16:22 - Forget Four Letter Words. (Doggerel Dave)
I always find the collective \"they\" and \"we\" so nebulous. Certain...
November 16th, 2022 10:19 - My Good Life. (Goldfinch60)
My smile grows broader with each line! Your joy is so palpable and...
November 16th, 2022 10:09 - Potential Possibilities (Orchidee)
Thank you my friend for this lovely write and the beautiful musical...
November 16th, 2022 10:05 - substacking (Arqios)
Nice treatment of a sticky subject. I have never heard of Substack. I...
November 16th, 2022 09:59 - Old To New (Orchidee)
Dear poet, such a beautiful poem, tribute, remembrance. I read first, and...
November 13th, 2022 14:55 - transitions (Arqios)
A timely write dear poet. Something we think we can control, but our...
November 13th, 2022 14:44 - I alone (Sorenbarrett)
You\'ve created something very unique with this rhyming pattern, and it...
November 13th, 2022 14:26 - Mea Culpa (Sorenbarrett)
I love the rhyming pattern and cadence of this piece, it makes me want to...
November 12th, 2022 13:44 - Handels Music Flows. Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
This senryu flows beautifully in the confluence of words and music. What...
November 12th, 2022 13:09 - Sea Story (Orchidee)
The stormy sea of life! Well done dear friend. words to give us comfort.
November 12th, 2022 13:05 - Go! (Sorenbarrett)
I think you should have set this one to music, I can just hear myself...
November 12th, 2022 12:23 - Amare (Sorenbarrett)
You address the enigma of love in such a profound way, every line rings so...
November 12th, 2022 12:19 - Amare (Sorenbarrett)
You address the enigma of love in such a profound way, every line rings so...
November 12th, 2022 12:18 - Swirls and Straights (Annonymouswonder)
I feel the emotion of your poem, and understand that first step taken. ...
November 12th, 2022 12:05 - Not My Problem. (Goldfinch60)
Isn\'t it wonderful to reach an age where you are comfortable with who you...
November 10th, 2022 14:32 - fallen (Arqios)
Such wonderful, descriptive words dear poet. Sitting on my deck this...
November 10th, 2022 14:20 - Big Foot (Orchidee)
Dear Orchi, you put me in mind of Wallace and Gromit. Gromit, a well read...
November 10th, 2022 14:10 - A Wonderful World? (Goldfinch60)
I sometimes think that our technological world has led us to a place of...
November 9th, 2022 17:10 - Presence Perceived (Orchidee)
I truly enjoyed the beautiful video that accompanies this lovely poem. ...
November 9th, 2022 16:51 - asteriskos (Arqios)
Asteriskos, little star, how I wonder what you are? The night sky seems a...
November 9th, 2022 16:45 - POOL (Dusk arising)
Perfect analogy expressed here. One day, just the right lure may coax the...
November 9th, 2022 16:13 - Truth (Sorenbarrett)
You have expressed so beautifully, that truth is in the eye of the...
November 9th, 2022 16:00 - Liars Configure (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Dear poet, the questions you ask of 70 years are so very potent, and...
November 9th, 2022 15:50 - The Undisturbed (Fay Slimm.)
Dear Fay, you express so beautifully natures balm upon the soul. I love...
November 9th, 2022 15:43 - “meaning of it all” (SureshG)
Dear poet, your poem speaks to so many thoughts that rumble through my...
November 9th, 2022 10:07 - sea change (Arqios)
I think I see a transformation here, that the end of this relationship has...
November 9th, 2022 06:24 - They Are Here. (Goldfinch60)
Dear Andy, once again you have chosen one of my favorite subjects. It\'s...
November 8th, 2022 15:13 - Gospel Givers (Orchidee)
Lovely verse, beautiful musical accompaniment, truly enjoyed dear friend.
November 8th, 2022 14:58 - sea change (Arqios)
In reading I was a little confused with the line \"at one dcgree\" in the...
November 8th, 2022 14:50 - Blackrock (Fay Slimm.)
Such a tale of woe, told so well dear Fay. We truly are no match for this...
November 7th, 2022 15:24 - How Did This Happen? (Goldfinch60)
Such a love really has no answers, it simply is, in the purest sense. ...
November 7th, 2022 14:42 - Dwelling Delights (Orchidee)
Another wonderfully inspiring write my friend, worship is in our hearts no...
November 7th, 2022 14:35 - Eridu (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you my friend for this piece of history, I\'ve learned something new...
November 7th, 2022 14:06 - in there somewhere was goodbye (Arqios)
This poem evokes so poignantly the feeling of loss that accompanies the...
November 7th, 2022 13:55 - Dost Thou Still See Me? (Rocky Lagou)
Dearest Rocky, I do feel the despair in your words and I understand the...
November 7th, 2022 13:34 - Treasures In Life. (Goldfinch60)
I\'ve always disliked the phrase \"cost of living\", because at what...
November 3rd, 2022 14:55 - Collective Communion (Orchidee)
The sharing of a meal is truly communal, and can bring us together in...
November 3rd, 2022 14:42 - minding your portals (Arqios)
I love the version of \"Count Your Blessings\" you chose, it compliments...
November 3rd, 2022 14:40 - Integrity Issue (Doggerel Dave)
A change of scenery is nice, but one does long for home after a while....
November 3rd, 2022 14:25 - with you (Arqios)
As soon as I started the music I knew that this one would sweep me away. ...
November 2nd, 2022 13:20 - The C Word. (Goldfinch60)
As \"Mame\" sang in the musical \"We need a little Christmas, right this...
November 2nd, 2022 13:11 - Speaking To Our Soul (Orchidee)
Lovely verse dear Orchidee, in all aspects!
November 2nd, 2022 13:06 - Searching for Light (Neville)
Hope this respite gives you the peace and space to rejuvenate, and come...
November 2nd, 2022 13:03 - Tree (Sorenbarrett)
This one hits me where I live, literally. My home is pretty much...
November 2nd, 2022 12:40 - falling leaves (Arqios)
You touch on a season dear to my heart, along with one of my favorite...
November 1st, 2022 16:41 - Teaching Respect. (Goldfinch60)
This is so touching dear friend. He seems to have qualities at a young...
November 1st, 2022 16:32 - Availing Armour (Orchidee)
Your coloring coding is a treat! I love the last stanza, could we just...
November 1st, 2022 15:17 - Look At Me (Fay Slimm.)
As I read I am caught up in a wonderful swirl of color, texture, such...
November 1st, 2022 10:41 - Laccaria Amethystina (Neville)
Looks can be deceptive, as you so aptly put. And yet the element of...
October 31st, 2022 16:43 - Raindrop (Sorenbarrett)
For me, the second stanza breathtakingly epitomizes the endless cycle and...
October 31st, 2022 13:54 - Remembering Salinger (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I love Salinger, an exceptional tribute!
October 31st, 2022 13:34 - Luxury (Spilleronsheet)
I see your title and think the Luxury of time, which in my senior years...
October 31st, 2022 13:27 - Turtle On A Brick (Bella Shepard)
thank you dear friend, I always love your comments. I spied this little...
October 30th, 2022 16:42 - 3 moods in 1 (Poetic Dan)
I find your allusion to life as a riddle quite powerful; begging to be...
October 30th, 2022 15:00 - Promises Preserved (Orchidee)
A fine write dear friend, you keep us on our toes and that\'s a good
October 30th, 2022 14:43 - Live In Peace. (Goldfinch60)
I sometimes wonder; if we could bring peace into our own lives, might we...
October 30th, 2022 14:39 - Primroses and Kites (Neville)
When I was a child March winds brought kite season, and the sky was full...
October 30th, 2022 14:32 - Matched (Fay Slimm.)
An incredible graphic to accompany this soul consuming poem dear Fay. ...
October 30th, 2022 14:23 - Golden Arrows: No 17 Squadron Indian Air Force (Adventuressmalik)
What a stunning tribute to a wonderful air force squadron, national pride...
October 30th, 2022 14:14 - main architect (Arqios)
To rhyme or not to rhyme, that is the question? I say rhyme away my...
October 30th, 2022 14:08 - Flowing Around Your Life. (Goldfinch60)
You write beautifully of something unseen, but ever present. It\'s power...
October 29th, 2022 14:56 - Not Today, Thank You! (Orchidee)
I was a little Catholic grade school girl, and we always got All Saints...
October 29th, 2022 14:45 - Looking Forward to Change (Neville)
In our youth, time is here and now. It becomes a commodity to consume,...
October 29th, 2022 14:36 - Caught (Fay Slimm.)
We have wildfires burning in 8 states right now due to drought, and it\'s...
October 29th, 2022 14:14 - Counter Intrinsic (Kurt Philip Behm)
Your first stanza! How do we mere mortals navigate this amazing puzzle of...
October 28th, 2022 15:46 - Beached (Fay Slimm.)
Such a wonderful piece dear friend. Your pebble lies in wait for just the...
October 28th, 2022 15:33 - Nightfall (Rocky Lagou)
Your poem gives me the feeling of being adrift between two realms, one...
October 27th, 2022 10:05 - Two Loners at the Pond (Haiku/Senryū #6) (Rocky Lagou)
You have phrased this so aptly, the feeling of being close to a living...
October 27th, 2022 09:58 - Big Band Swing. (Goldfinch60)
With this beautiful Tommy Dorsey song playing as I read your poem, it...
October 26th, 2022 15:23 - Mercifully Maintained (Orchidee)
As always dear friend, a beautifully written piece. Always appreciated!
October 26th, 2022 15:14 - Poetic relationship (Sorenbarrett)
I read this poem aloud several times, and each time it became more...
October 26th, 2022 15:11 - Empty rooms (Sorenbarrett)
Dear friend I find this incredible on so many levels. I love the...
October 25th, 2022 13:29 - Together In Jazz. (Goldfinch60)
Dear Andy, I have to say that you had my toes tapping, head swaying and a...
October 25th, 2022 13:21
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