Comments on community poems by Christina8
- No. 1 (Undecidedpoet)
First of all, welcome to MPS. A very good but such a sad write! Thank you...
September 25th, 2017 19:47 - The Day (Simple-Man87)
Sounds like you are head over heels for your blue eyed love. wonderful...
September 25th, 2017 17:09 - NEVER (Lasergraph)
Oh, this gave me the chills and my eyes welled up. I have suffered loss...
September 25th, 2017 12:47 - THE SMILE (Tat2edheart)
A very heartwarming write and very well written! It\'s nice to hear such...
September 25th, 2017 11:05 - The Alley (WL Schuett)
A chilling write, WL! wonder if I\'ve been down this alley or just in my...
September 25th, 2017 10:42 - What a wonderful time (Renzi)
Welcome back, Renzi! Your writes are refreshing to see once again. I liked...
September 25th, 2017 08:52 - Not Yet.. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write Fay, but sad. I would\'ve used \"evocative\" but it\'s...
September 25th, 2017 06:59 - Dark Comfort. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful perspective into your work, GF! Very nice! Thanks for sharing.
September 25th, 2017 06:57 - The Music That Moves My Soul (Accidental Poet)
I grew up with music too! Different era but music is so therapeutic! Very...
September 25th, 2017 06:53 - IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
I loved your poem-so lovely- and that you have introduced us to the...
September 25th, 2017 06:30 - TEN POLITICAL OXYMORONS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great job Brian. Affordable housing is an oxymoron anywhere you live! I...
September 25th, 2017 06:19 - Heartache (HeartfullyFallen)
Well, I\'m listening and I hear you. Depression and anxiety and all these...
September 24th, 2017 18:23 - Communing Contemplations 2 (Orchidee)
Lovely hymn, especially for Sunday, orchi!
September 24th, 2017 13:51 - From the unknown (Poetic Dan)
Very nice write! I think music is very important and like you said \"is...
September 24th, 2017 13:38 - Mind Games (FredPeyer)
Great write! This one had me thinking a bit. But very true!
September 24th, 2017 13:34 - Me VS. What You Deserve (Syd)
Beautifully expressed. I am sure for someone you are exactly what you need...
September 24th, 2017 13:11 - Addiction. (Fay Slimm.)
Such a gorgeous write about sunset and sunrise. Wonderful metaphors leap...
September 24th, 2017 13:06 - Love Sonnet (AlyxPoems)
Welcome to MPS. Great first write. I hope these beautiful words of love...
September 24th, 2017 12:59 - He played as a monster (Malubotelho)
Thank you for sharing such a deeply personal story. It\'s amazing how many...
September 24th, 2017 12:57 - Beauty Revealed. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks for this uplifting poem, Goldie! A good reminder for
September 24th, 2017 12:47 - Two Smiles (FredPeyer)
Great write! Smiles are contagious! a heartfelt and wonderful read.
September 24th, 2017 12:44 - DORCAS (Michael Edwards)
I thought the poem was hilarious! Great poem! Who would name a donkey...
September 24th, 2017 11:17 - Lost Yesterdays (Accidental Poet)
Very good poem AP! I keep all photos going back generations. They are...
September 24th, 2017 09:48 - Storm (Dusk arising)
Excellent writing! The ending was unexpected for sure. Great job dusk!
September 24th, 2017 09:33 - OUT OF THE IVORY PALACES (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I like the refrain you have in BOLD. A comforting thought. Nice Sunday...
September 24th, 2017 09:12 - No More.. (Fay Slimm.)
Outstanding write, Fay! In America we face two leaders that both say...
September 23rd, 2017 12:57 - FIRST LOVE (Michael Edwards)
Excellent poem Michael! So very well written! I just love the last stanza....
September 23rd, 2017 11:16 - When Life Gets You Down. (Kevin browne)
I like the way you write. \"And in the deepest darkest places where not...
September 23rd, 2017 11:06 - Drive-thru Lovers (Accidental Poet)
Great write! When I was young I visited clubs--not to be picked up or...
September 23rd, 2017 10:57 - The Man at the Door. (Goldfinch60)
I find it odd that he made you check his ID badge but who knows? Never...
September 23rd, 2017 10:53 - About sex and orgasm (Malubotelho)
This is a wonderful expression of what sex should be for both partners and...
September 23rd, 2017 10:41 - SAY IT WITH FLOWERS ~ Collaboration ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wonderful job Brian with your addition to the collab--Roses and snowdrops!...
September 23rd, 2017 10:34 - First Love. (Fay Slimm.)
Perfect depiction of young love at it\'s finest! Beautifully written as...
September 22nd, 2017 10:04 - Just memories 📌 (Malubotelho)
A great write, Malu! I liked how you wrote about your tears washing the...
September 22nd, 2017 09:40 - Missing You (FredPeyer)
Beautiful but sad write. Glad it was an imaginative poem. Good to know...
September 22nd, 2017 09:36 - colours (Dusk arising)
I loved your poem. I\'m still in my thirties so I can\'t speak about...
September 22nd, 2017 09:30 - RING RING (Michael Edwards)
Thanks for the giggle this morning! LOL No better writing material than...
September 22nd, 2017 09:25 - ()
Wonderful what you can do with 13 words! Perfect senryu and this is so...
September 22nd, 2017 09:22 - TEN OXYMORONS ~ Seriously Funny (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great job on these! Healthy tan is a good one! Lots of great oxymorons...
September 22nd, 2017 09:00 - Warm Stormy Rain (WL Schuett)
Beautifully written! This is a lovely gem of a find. A joy to read!
September 21st, 2017 20:35 - Cancer (Kaden Hudson)
You are so courageous! Awesome poem! And your daughter sounds like a real...
September 21st, 2017 20:27 - who should i be? (Jane-Doe)
Great write with raw emotion. I hope you will find MPS a supportive...
September 21st, 2017 17:03 - COMING CHANGE (Lasergraph)
Very good seasonal poem! I hate to see fall come because inevitably means...
September 21st, 2017 14:55 - Haiku Compilation (Simple-Man87)
Well done Haiku! Well worded! I like the 4th one the best. \"watch it come...
September 21st, 2017 14:50 - Slave (FredPeyer)
I\'m glad I read this! Very powerful sensual poem; Everyone (I hope) in...
September 21st, 2017 14:40 - VENUS ~ MARS ~ SUN & MOON ~ Collaboration ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian-I think we did a good collaborative poem together~you did a great...
September 21st, 2017 14:33 - The Door (FredPeyer)
An excellent poem! I think we all have that realization that if we could...
September 21st, 2017 10:03 - For those who love ❤️ (Malubotelho)
What a great poem! I love that you wrote (love) \"in perfect doses; cure,...
September 21st, 2017 09:32 - Viewpoint (Accidental Poet)
I think this is a really good poem. We need to \"walk a mile in someone...
September 21st, 2017 06:52 - HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET (Michael Edwards)
A very fine write! I don\'t know much about the green party in the UK but...
September 21st, 2017 06:24 - Brian (Nicki Jackson)
It\'s like they say, if you love it let it free. If it comes back to you...
September 20th, 2017 20:42 - Father (CadenGordon)
A beautiful poem, though filled with pain. I wrote one about my dad...
September 20th, 2017 20:39 - My Poetry (W c)
Great write! Its funny I wrote the same thing about being a part of the...
September 20th, 2017 20:32 - Stress (Edward Charles McDevitt)
I loved your write, it\'s odd because I wrote a poem about MPS friendship...
September 20th, 2017 20:24 - Fake happy face (Devilsadvocate)
First of all, welcome to MPS. Please know you are not alone in the face of...
September 20th, 2017 20:20 - A day (Myself and me)
Sounds perfect! A wonderful write M&M!
September 20th, 2017 13:25 - Captured (SunSearcher)
This is an excellent write! I know you will see the day when you can let...
September 20th, 2017 11:11 - Nobody\'s Fool, a short story (FredPeyer)
What an absolutely beautiful story! This is going straight into the...
September 20th, 2017 11:02 - MORE MONOSTICHS (Michael Edwards)
Oh I loved the last line! But they are all very good. I also read how you...
September 20th, 2017 10:57 - Throat Cutting. (Goldfinch60)
Well, despite what some have said, I thought it was funny! You wrote a...
September 20th, 2017 10:52 - Becoming Other. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful poem Fay! I agree with Fred in that it\'s a very insightful...
September 20th, 2017 10:43 - Let the Bells Sing (Accidental Poet)
Great write, AP! A very interesting read! I live near a lighthouse as...
September 20th, 2017 10:37 - Birthday blues, what a tune! (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful write Dan! Seems you\'ve been through a lot and now you are...
September 20th, 2017 10:31 - Inner debate (Malubotelho)
Great write, Malu! What a beautifully written poem! It\'s sad but at the...
September 20th, 2017 10:28 - AUTUMNS COLOURS ~ USA ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very nice acrostic!! You should see the colors around the great lakes!...
September 20th, 2017 06:18 - Thinking of you (Myself and me)
Very lovely write M&M!
September 19th, 2017 17:34 - Conscience (Simple-Man87)
That\'s quite a story. Very well written piece of poetry, I must say....
September 19th, 2017 17:32 - Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum (Accidental Poet)
Hilarious poem! Loved the read!
September 19th, 2017 13:28 - Regret (Writings From The Unknown13)
Well written write. I have scars too. They are reminders. Hopefully you...
September 19th, 2017 13:19 - my panic attacks (Starr_)
Panic attacks are the worst! I sympathize. A poem well done!
September 19th, 2017 13:10 - THE BURGESS SHALE (Michael Edwards)
Wonderful abstract! I learned some things from your authors notes and your...
September 19th, 2017 13:01 - Lesser (Baylee)
This is a really good write! And I agree with you. Even those struggling...
September 19th, 2017 11:39 - QUESTIONS (Lasergraph)
That was a beautiful poem, laser, and a delight to read!
September 19th, 2017 11:35 - Always know just enough (Poetic Dan)
I know what you mean, I have a very old grandma too thats just starting to...
September 19th, 2017 09:58 - Stalled. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful poem full of yearning. Very beautiful, Fay!
September 19th, 2017 09:52 - Raindrops on Cherries (WL Schuett)
So beautifully written I got the chills and I almost cried. My mother is...
September 19th, 2017 09:48 - Treasure Trove (Orchidee)
Great psalm Orchidee! Very calming.
September 19th, 2017 09:42 - You May Say I\'m A Dreamer (Edthepoet)
Great write. We\'d definitely be \"equals\", now wouldn\'t we?
September 19th, 2017 09:38 - RICE PEAS \'N CHICK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Sounds yummy! Jealous that you got a taste of Barbados and I have not!...
September 19th, 2017 06:18 - Hurricane Irma (Rrodriguez)
What a beautiful but sad poem. You are definitely in my thoughts and...
September 18th, 2017 20:07 - Plan B (Accidental Poet)
Great poem! \"Make plans, God laughs!\" Loved this read! Plan B sounds...
September 18th, 2017 17:58 - Hiding with a Prescription (Jdblake)
Very poignant and well written. I think there are a lot of people that can...
September 18th, 2017 17:45 - Coma (Simple-Man87)
This is a really touching poem. From the perspective of a nurse, this...
September 18th, 2017 17:37 - LOVE IS ... ? A Collaboration Sonnet ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It was a pleasure to collaborate with you! It\'s neat seeing how it all...
September 18th, 2017 06:45 - Moment (Myself and me)
This poem really made me think. Very well written and thoughtful. Very...
September 17th, 2017 16:27 - Why? (FredPeyer)
To be young and innocent again. I wouldn\'t want to relive my 3 yr old...
September 17th, 2017 15:58 - Ptsd (Jdblake)
Thank you for sharing your intimate story of ptsd, depression and anxiety....
September 17th, 2017 15:42 - HARVEST SUNDAY 2017 ~ ENJOY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wonderful poem! I really liked the last stanza of your write! I know God...
September 17th, 2017 11:06 - Losing Apart of what Keeps Me Sane (Jdblake)
You wrote a beautiful poem in tribute for your grandma although you are...
September 16th, 2017 19:58 - Regrets (Rrodriguez)
Well written poem showing human struggles that most of us have pondered....
September 16th, 2017 16:31 - C I V I L I Z A T I O N OK ? An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You wrote a very fine and informative acrostic, Brian! I hope we can get...
September 16th, 2017 14:21 - Facing Reality (Simple-Man87)
I think this is a really great poem. Well written It tugs at the...
September 15th, 2017 15:26 - A friend (Tony36)
Great poem about friendship, Tony!
September 15th, 2017 15:21 - You are (Myself and me)
Very well done M&M! Very loving poem and I enjoyed reading it!
September 15th, 2017 15:20 - VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION (Louis Gibbs)
Great poem and good for you! It\'s a courageous thing to do to \"dismiss\"...
September 15th, 2017 07:17 - WELL FED AM I (Michael Edwards)
Love the abstract and the double mirrored edone. Touching poem.
September 15th, 2017 07:14 - My Baby Girl (FredPeyer)
Absolutely wonderful! Very sweet write! Loved it!
September 15th, 2017 07:08 - FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great job! I\'ve never fished at night so I wouldn\'t know (unless you...
September 15th, 2017 06:35 - BIRDS (Abhay2989)
Welcome to Mps, great first poem. Confused why there is an 18+ rating on...
September 14th, 2017 17:51 - Something Greater. (Fay Slimm.)
I love the language that you use in this poem. But it\'s a poem so...
September 14th, 2017 17:48
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