Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards

• Broken (Neville) Really felt the weight of this - a finely crafted work.
  March 6th, 2020 14:19
• A HOUSE AND A HOME 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Great news - sounds idylic (except for the cat!) - you\'ll soon make it...
  March 6th, 2020 14:17
• Only Love. (Fay Slimm.) Love - such a wonderful thing - mind you after 56 years of marriage we...
  March 6th, 2020 14:15
• Heard And Helped (Orchidee) Free of enemies - that\'s why elephants hide in cherry trees.
  March 6th, 2020 14:11
• Within Our Worlds. (Goldfinch60) Always a magical sight -
  March 6th, 2020 14:10
• An Old Wives Charm to Dispel Bad Weather (Saxon Crow) A lesson to be learnt - never wear trainers to work - I feel your...
  March 6th, 2020 02:22
• No Eulogy (FredPeyer) Me too - like this a lot.
  March 6th, 2020 02:18
• Mischief. (Fay Slimm.) Super stuff Fay.
  March 5th, 2020 12:38
• all in a dream (Dusk arising) Magic words - a great write DA
  March 5th, 2020 12:37
• The Wind and Me (Saxon Crow) Great poem but I did have trouble reading it with the coloured background.
  March 5th, 2020 12:34
• National Book Day (Orchidee) Do you read poetry books or only cover versions.
  March 5th, 2020 12:33
• Tom Bowling. (Goldfinch60) Listening to it as I write this - a real song - I\'ll listen to it again...
  March 5th, 2020 02:50
• tower (Dusk arising) Certainly held my attention - great read.
  March 4th, 2020 15:59
• Sylvia\'s Mother Said (Neville) ✔✔👍
  March 4th, 2020 12:25
• Yellowness. (Fay Slimm.) Super write and, like Fred, I love the concluding two lines.
  March 4th, 2020 12:23
• First Rant of the Year! (Goldfinch60) That\'s so bad - I feel for you.
  March 4th, 2020 02:50
• quench (Dusk arising) A real poets poem - a super write.
  March 3rd, 2020 16:41
• What Poetry is All About (FredPeyer) Great wite - good to your name again Fred.
  March 3rd, 2020 16:38
• The Wood is Green (Saxon Crow) Super write - roll on spring.
  March 3rd, 2020 16:36
• Richer. (Fay Slimm.) You paint a fabulous picture and it\'s all there for us all to enjoy - at...
  March 3rd, 2020 08:02
• Salvation Sure (Orchidee) Your pen\'s still working then O - not like it packed up.
  March 3rd, 2020 08:00
• THE FLOWERS OF SPRING UK 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 FIVE HAIKU (ANGELA & BRIAN) The flowers of spring - nothing like them. I have a small bed of helebores...
  March 3rd, 2020 07:59
• Self Belief. (Goldfinch60) A great write to return to and I agree with the sentiments - he who never...
  March 3rd, 2020 07:51
• Swansong. (Fay Slimm.) A little gem Fay - love it.
  February 24th, 2020 04:45
• The Untrod Path. (Goldfinch60) Enjoyed - we each make our own choices but sadly for some these choices...
  February 24th, 2020 04:44
• CARPE DIEM ~ SEIZE THE DAY 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) Great read - enjoyed this one muchly.
  February 24th, 2020 04:42
• My Dad Moves On (Saxon Crow) No never too old. I have a friend who was widowed in her early eighties...
  February 21st, 2020 04:47
• Lordship Laudings (Orchidee) Keep \'em comin\' O
  February 21st, 2020 03:24
• Death by Drowning (Sylviasearcher) I got drawn into this - never heard of Cf until her death (not my idea of...
  February 21st, 2020 03:24
• She Rises. (Fay Slimm.) There\'s sunshine on the horizon - super write Fay.
  February 21st, 2020 03:21
• Loneliness (Myself and me) Totally inspired - I love it and the first fave for a couple of months.
  February 21st, 2020 01:13
• Knowing. (Fay Slimm.) I knew I\'d like this before I read it - great stuff Fay.
  February 20th, 2020 11:00
• WEDDING DAY BLUES ! 💙 ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN 💙 A RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) All in hand - easy peasy - It\'ll all work out swell. Good luck to you...
  February 20th, 2020 07:50
• Humble-Hearted (Orchidee) Nice one - did Hum Berles help with the title?
  February 20th, 2020 07:06
• Drug of Choice. (Goldfinch60) I\'m in trouble this morning -and my drug of choice is to blame. I.ve got...
  February 20th, 2020 07:04
• Besting. (Fay Slimm.) A super write but then I wouldn\'t expect anything less from your talented...
  February 19th, 2020 16:25
• Musings For Music (Orchidee) Can\'t beat a good muse - great write as always.
  February 19th, 2020 03:52
• WW1 - They were all Related (Suresh) Written with feeling - great write Suresh.
  February 19th, 2020 03:18
• Into Life. (Goldfinch60) Uplifting write - may the journey continue.
  February 19th, 2020 03:15
• TULIPS FOR MICHAEL 💛 ANGELA 💛 AN ACROSTIC SEXTET (IAMBIC PENTAMETER) (ANGELA & BRIAN) Ah thank you for the dedication - a great acrostic for a a great flower. I...
  February 19th, 2020 03:12
• LIKE A ROSE 💛 OF 🧡 PEACE ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) A bitter sweet read - bitter with sadness and sweet as the rose.
  February 18th, 2020 14:37
• the receptionist mumbles (Dusk arising) Lips that look like inflated sausages I do know but i\'ve yet to see...
  February 18th, 2020 14:33
• Into My New World. (Goldfinch60) Here\'s to the future - Live for today and plan for tomorrow.
  February 18th, 2020 03:22
• Encouraging Expressions (In praise of MPS) (Orchidee) Well expressed - a round of applause - and a big congrats on your historic...
  February 18th, 2020 03:20
• Over ? (Fay Slimm.) Really invokes the senses - leaves me feeling sad yet full of hope.
  February 17th, 2020 17:37
• HOME 🧡 SWEET 🤍 HOME 💙 A 4 4 4 2 BLANK VERSE SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Here in MH because of the train links to London and its inclusion in...
  February 17th, 2020 04:07
• Parables Perceptions (Orchidee) Ah there\'s still ink in the pen - keep writing Orchi.
  February 17th, 2020 04:03
• For Unsub. (Goldfinch60) Super read - and like Maxine - i love the concluding line .
  February 17th, 2020 02:51
• Ocean (Dusk arising) A great work with some super lines - much enjoyed.
  February 17th, 2020 01:37
• Departed Manners. (Goldfinch60) It\'s sadly not just the young ones - I can\'t recall the number of times...
  February 10th, 2020 08:53
• the fogs of Jayne (Dusk arising) Now she seems a spirited lass - super write Dusk.
  February 8th, 2020 05:17
• THE OXFORD COMMA (Michael Edwards) The easiest one I can think of is the following: I was accompanied by...
  February 7th, 2020 16:14
• Diligent Workman - 2 Timothy Series (3) (Orchidee) Miss Berles knows Dilly Gent and Tim O\'Thee.
  February 7th, 2020 03:05
• This Must be a Special Day. (Goldfinch60) It is a special day - we had a new fireplce fitted earlier in the week and...
  February 7th, 2020 03:02
• THE OXFORD COMMA (Michael Edwards) When you\'re driving a car if no other cars are around why bother to...
  February 7th, 2020 02:20
• GREECE SPOT (Joe Marcello) Nice one Joe
  February 7th, 2020 02:01
• the curse of the apostrophe (Dusk arising) Ah punctuation in total. I get hot under the collar when it\'s used...
  February 6th, 2020 08:05
• Single-Minded Soldier - 2 Timothy Series (2) (Orchidee) Top marks for such an original title - nice one O.
  February 6th, 2020 06:19
• Stunning Art. (Goldfinch60) Wow - you\'ve more than done it justice = many thanks Andy.
  February 6th, 2020 06:18
• Greeting. (Fay Slimm.) A beauty of a write - just showing colour in my garden - will be out by...
  February 4th, 2020 13:51
• SUNDAY 02 - 02 - 2020 DATE WAS PALINDROMIC ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Nice one - yes I also like a good semordnilap - aw heck - that doesn\'t...
  February 4th, 2020 07:26
• BORIS🧡BOOSTS🤍BREXIT💙 BLANK VERSE 8 6 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Such a difficult issue. One of the problems that we face is we have no ...
  February 3rd, 2020 05:01
• Faith In Following (Orchidee) Keep \'em coming Orchi.
  February 3rd, 2020 03:38
• People Scare Easy (Adam Shirley (Rea)) Yes people do scare easly but that shouldn\'t stop us reachimg out - a...
  February 3rd, 2020 03:36
• Empty House. (Goldfinch60) I read this and felt myself welling up - (selfishly ?) I thought of...
  February 3rd, 2020 03:33
• Witness To Widows (Orchidee) A thought provoking read and comments.
  February 1st, 2020 13:17
• Medicine of Laughter (Goldfinch60) My favourite medicine and I\'m a consumate giggler.
  February 1st, 2020 13:14
• SUNRISE ON SATURDAY 🧡 AMEN 🤍 ANGELA💙 A 3 3 3 3 2 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) A favourite subject for artists - the sort I like painting but you have to...
  February 1st, 2020 00:03
• FORGET ABOUT IT (Joe Marcello) Love it - right up my street wherever that it is - look forward to more.
  January 30th, 2020 17:27
• FIVE SENSES ~ 4 SENRYU & A TANKA ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Fine write A&B
  January 29th, 2020 14:23
• and I am happy that you are happy (Adam Shirley (Rea)) A fine read Adam.
  January 29th, 2020 14:16
• Notes. (Fay Slimm.) The sounds of nature - the most beautiful sounds of the planet.
  January 29th, 2020 14:12
• What Shall I do? (Goldfinch60) Decisions decisions - - and the potatoe wins.
  January 29th, 2020 14:01
• HOLOCAUST ~ WHAT DOES IT MEAN TO US IN 2020 ? A 7 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Without dpubt the most moving place I\'ve ever visited - great write -...
  January 28th, 2020 16:48
• Waken To Worship (Orchidee) Great write O
  January 28th, 2020 16:43
• My River of Joy. (Goldfinch60) And it will - fine write Andy - love your positivity.
  January 28th, 2020 03:18
• Stay Weird. (Goldfinch60) Weird? Me? I\'ll stay as I am - eccentric accrding to my family. Love...
  January 27th, 2020 03:40
• Where Roses Grow. (Goldfinch60) You flatter me with such a super response - and now I look to cutting the...
  January 26th, 2020 04:54
• they never leave you (Dusk arising) Publish it again you must - fine write da.
  January 25th, 2020 13:57
• TO A MOUSE ~ ROBBIE BURNS (ANGELA & BRIAN) Not from Liverpool but a bit of everything except Scots in me - bring on...
  January 25th, 2020 13:55
• Outcomes Of Obedience (Orchidee) Miss Berles jangles.
  January 25th, 2020 13:52
• New Chapter. (Goldfinch60) Every day\'s a new chapter
  January 25th, 2020 13:51
• Stirrings. (Fay Slimm.) Super work Fay.
  January 23rd, 2020 13:45
• BENGAL TIGER 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A DIAMOND (ANGELA & BRIAN) I\'m with you all the way and a fine write to boot !
  January 23rd, 2020 13:43
• Protection Perusal (Orchidee) Keep \'em comin\' O
  January 23rd, 2020 13:41
• Ooh Ironing! (Goldfinch60) I hate it as well - such a boring activity even when you\'re working flat...
  January 23rd, 2020 02:40
• SPIDER WEB 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) The poor spider - such a bad reputation and yet such fascinating little...
  January 18th, 2020 08:52
• Wondrous Words (Orchidee) Nice one O
  January 18th, 2020 08:50
• Unanswered. (Goldfinch60) Often we don\'t know what questions to ask - fine write Andy.
  January 18th, 2020 02:46
• Grand Union Canal - 6 and a half miles Wembley to Paddington (FineB) Sounds like a great walk. I often walk the Grand Union (I live close to...
  January 18th, 2020 01:00
• Challenge. (Fay Slimm.) If there is no chance that you may fall then there is no chance that you...
  January 16th, 2020 09:25
• BUYING OUR FIRST HOUSE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 OUR DREAM HOME ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Wish you luck with it (except the cat) - not easy but I know you\'ll get...
  January 16th, 2020 06:02
• Sacred Stone (Orchidee) I\'m full of clicks - Miss Berles is good at them.
  January 16th, 2020 06:00
• Grave Walking. (Goldfinch60) There\'s always someone who wants to change things - often to the...
  January 16th, 2020 05:59
• Breaking Through. (Fay Slimm.) And froiendship - it does - another brill piece Fay.
  January 15th, 2020 06:30
• Heard And Helped (Orchidee) Thumbs up O.
  January 15th, 2020 06:28
• Beautiful, Complex, African Complexions (Mildred Achoch) And they are all beautiful - this is super piece Mildred.
  January 15th, 2020 06:28
• Pill for Fitness. (Goldfinch60) And I\'ve just returned from an hours work-out at the gym - Oh when is it...
  January 15th, 2020 02:41
• I Remember (Nicholas Browning) A worthy read - so well expressed.
  January 14th, 2020 03:18
• Worship Wholesomeness (Orchidee) Good stuff O
  January 13th, 2020 04:37