Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Responsibility Reminder (Orchidee)
A jog of the mind to remember whence we came.
A good poem-hymn. Phil A.
August 29th, 2022 13:05 - Resignation To Life. (Goldfinch60)
Sometimes, the bravest of us all are secretive. She felt no need to share...
August 29th, 2022 12:56 - Peace In Music. (Goldfinch60)
If only the world could make music and not war. I\'ve often considered...
August 28th, 2022 20:10 - Renewal (Fay Slimm.)
People change with time and can find that they hardly recognize...
August 28th, 2022 20:01 - Why Not Just Throw Away The Key (Neville)
There is no sensibility here, only burning desire. She was only pretty as...
August 24th, 2022 10:43 - Creating Memories. (Goldfinch60)
The by-gone days of youth memorialized. Yeah, those were some great...
August 24th, 2022 10:29 - Epitaph for a PC (Doggerel Dave)
Gosh, D.D. It\'s a known fact that a new computer is like a new girlfriend...
August 24th, 2022 10:24 - With Only Five Leaves Left (Neville)
Not got a clue, that\'s me. Nick Drake, sad story, sad life, sad way to...
August 23rd, 2022 22:02 - Anticipating Angels (Neville)
\"Here\" vs \"There.\" \"Anticipating\" vs. \"Entertaining.\" I thought...
August 21st, 2022 13:55 - Abundance (Fay Slimm.)
Loved your lush description of Autumn. A time of plenty, of brilliant...
August 20th, 2022 15:25 - Trapped In A Telephone. (Goldfinch60)
I think you might be onto something here Andy. Maybe they are prisoners,...
August 20th, 2022 15:14 - To the Memories... (Aradhya)
A reflection or a remembrance, I thought, of someone close to the poet....
August 20th, 2022 15:02 - We\'re Here..... (Doggerel Dave)
Let everybody be what they gotta be, believe what they gotta believe, and...
August 11th, 2022 11:42 - Solitude (MendedFences27)
August 11th, 2022 10:19 - Strange Sight. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s a wonder you lived through that experience. Shocking! A young one...
August 10th, 2022 13:37 - Naturally (Neville)
For sure, Nature is a product of \"oxygen and a splash of H2O,\" but then...
August 9th, 2022 08:30 - Well I Never… (Doggerel Dave)
I can\'t really comment on the political stuff. We are kind of isolated...
August 7th, 2022 20:09 - Toreador (Tallisman)
I like this. It tells of embedded dreams which I think we all have and...
August 7th, 2022 17:09 - A Poet (Fay Slimm.)
This is wonderful. Two things just changed for me,:
1) I have to look for...
August 7th, 2022 16:58 - Wordsworth Reversed. (Goldfinch60)
Wordsworth Reversed is Worth Words and this is certainly worth a few words...
August 6th, 2022 13:46 - talking Bukowski (Tj Struska)
And a fine tribute at that. I\'ve read some Bukowski and this seems true...
August 6th, 2022 13:25 - The Lost Idea. (Goldfinch60)
Very, very true. Happens all the time. I also have stacks of unfinished...
August 5th, 2022 13:40 - Worn Out (ElaineAnneWestheimer)
What a story the laundry can tell. The fabric of our lives exposed. What...
August 5th, 2022 13:20 - Those Days (Fay Slimm.)
Is this the \"Hard Rock Cafe?\" \"No welcome,\" there either.
You spoke...
August 2nd, 2022 15:13 - Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor (Neville)
Or as Mel Brooks (age 96) once said,
\"I get up in the morning. I read...
August 2nd, 2022 14:44 - Satisfaction (Fay Slimm.)
Two great questions, Fay.
The \"satisfaction\" of which you speak does...
August 1st, 2022 15:09 - Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please (Neville)
The sweet taste of love, when found, lingers. A great expression of...
August 1st, 2022 14:58 - 4/2/22 (Wren)
Some great images. Your phrasings are unique and colorful. I like how your...
July 31st, 2022 18:49 - That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings (Neville)
Memories woven into a quilt of poetic
recollections; of \"cotton...
July 31st, 2022 17:06 - The Shame of Yesterday’s News (Neville)
Shameful! The way children across the Globe get treated these days....
July 30th, 2022 21:52 - Lunacy (Fay Slimm.)
A very important issue that you have expressed brilliantly. Why can\'t we...
July 30th, 2022 21:41 - The Lovers of Modena Disturbed (Neville)
Two people in one grave is unusual, today, but I can\'t say about the...
July 29th, 2022 15:11 - Just a Few Significant Ponderings (Neville)
Well, if one thinks they are never wrong, and also fails to enjoy life,...
July 14th, 2022 22:05 - Andy’s New Car (Doggerel Dave)
Had to chuckle at this bit of humor. Yeah, 5 years on the car, but the...
July 14th, 2022 10:57 - Gaining Relief (Fay Slimm.)
A bit of rural living being lost to modern technology. One wonders if the...
July 14th, 2022 10:51 - Healing Hope (Orchidee)
Hope is what keeps us going. Without it we would be lost. A fine poem...
July 11th, 2022 13:15 - Dream Keepers (Fay Slimm.)
What a beautiful Poem to accompany a stellar photo. \'Dream Keepers\"...
July 11th, 2022 13:02 - Sonnet I (Junior Mboweni)
I really felt this one. Having been in a similar situation, (Divided by...
July 11th, 2022 12:38 - Catch (Fay Slimm.)
\"when wonder speaks,\" had me in awe, and I listened. What a beautiful...
July 10th, 2022 15:12 - No More. (Fay Slimm.)
Certain times when Nature flashes her beauty that last momentarily. We are...
July 7th, 2022 20:58 - Ocean of Teardrops- Villanelle (Dove)
Well done. Seems a difficult form to do. Yours is craftily done. The theme...
July 6th, 2022 18:22 - Ready (Fay Slimm.)
Wow! I felt the pent-up desire in this. A life of loneliness wanting to be...
July 6th, 2022 18:11 - MY INSPIRATION (Raven333)
You are very fortunate to have such a wonderful Mom. Your poem about...
July 6th, 2022 17:55 - Another Life Lesson (though I’m not quite sure…….) (Doggerel Dave)
Interesting tale revealing the risks and dangers psych. personnel endure....
July 6th, 2022 17:49 - My Pretty Little Psychopath (Neville)
\"Morphine shots\" will dull the pain, but last only a short while and...
June 11th, 2022 19:13 - Scaled (Fay Slimm.)
Love can conquer many things, and walls are the least to fall. Walls are...
June 11th, 2022 19:03 - Lyrical melody (Kitty the naughty poet)
I hear Sinatra singing \"Fly Me to The Moon,\" like in \"rivers of white...
June 11th, 2022 18:46 - Nightmare dreams (Kitty the naughty poet)
Is she seeing her own evil reflected in the beastly image and rustling...
June 10th, 2022 19:30 - The Old Gardener (Morwenna)
I love this as it is. Would not change anything. \"The Old Gardener\" has...
June 10th, 2022 19:00 - Impossibly useless: improbable delight (Morwenna)
We write. They read, and they interpret as they wish. The poet\'s intent...
June 9th, 2022 17:49 - Awayness (Fay Slimm.)
I too have experienced \"Awayness,\" and with it the pain. Mine, occurred...
June 9th, 2022 17:32 - Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket (Neville)
Politics is a dirty game and, as such, does not lend itself to poetry very...
June 9th, 2022 16:45 - Four Together. (Goldfinch60)
What a wonderful way to view life. You must believe in your words and...
June 9th, 2022 16:25 - This tangled life (Morwenna)
Weeds and insects, two of the greatest symbols of endurance and...
June 8th, 2022 14:36 - Over and Out (Neville)
Best to be clear of that temptation. It seems you would always be...
June 8th, 2022 14:17 - Gone (Fay Slimm.)
A sad but true image and allegory, of receding tides and love lost. Loved,...
June 8th, 2022 14:10 - Performance. (Fay Slimm.)
I think Sunset is the most beautiful part of a day. The Sun can play many...
June 7th, 2022 21:01 - It’s All in The Seeing (Neville)
\"looking at\" something is just that, looking. Seeing is having a sense...
June 7th, 2022 08:02 - Lasting (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s like a Gothic novel with a happy ending, well at least a hopeful...
June 5th, 2022 19:10 - Petite Mort #2 (Neville)
Somehow, I sense a passage of time and \" those exquisite little deaths of...
June 5th, 2022 18:53 - Grief for a probable future (Morwenna)
\"An undertow of future grief flows on,\" and does it ever. There is an...
June 5th, 2022 10:14 - Grief for a probable future (Morwenna)
June 5th, 2022 10:01 - Music of the Shore, St Andrews, Scotland (Morwenna)
This is terrific. Your phrases are creative and fresh. You have described...
June 4th, 2022 16:38 - Weatherscape (Morwenna)
Wow. Love this poem. It captures the scene with originality and...
June 4th, 2022 16:34 - Reed Song (Neville)
Well, that\'s a unique comparison. I guess the \"wind\" can do a lot of...
June 4th, 2022 16:20 - Where Recollections Reside (Neville)
Memories, both fond and fondled, where do they reside? People will say in...
June 2nd, 2022 12:24 - Snow globe of me. (Kitty the naughty poet)
Sometimes people feel the loneliness of acceptability. Constantly trying...
May 31st, 2022 16:16 - Out of Nowhere. (Fay Slimm.)
Later in life it\'s more difficult to climb those \"mountains\" and find...
May 31st, 2022 16:06 - Do You Ever Look Back on Those Days (Neville)
\"Do you ever look back,\" is somewhat rhetorical. We all look back and...
May 31st, 2022 15:53 - part of all this (Dusk arising)
\"as if the land talked,\" \"I am proud to be among them.\" human...
May 31st, 2022 15:34 - Sitting With Natures Realm. (Goldfinch60)
I will go out on a limb here and say that this poem is going to be very...
May 31st, 2022 15:25 - Role (DestinysPerspectives)
\" your soul and purpose is everything,\" words of wisdom. Your poem is...
May 30th, 2022 13:38 - Reinvention (Fay Slimm.)
I believe that it is human nature to see one\'s past through rose colored...
May 30th, 2022 13:08 - Walking To Infinity. (Goldfinch60)
Uplifting and poignant: \"A blessed life as one,\" and \"The newly born...
May 30th, 2022 12:57 - LIMERICK 119 (Michael Edwards)
My chuckle for the day. Some may not be aware of the chain in...
May 29th, 2022 11:56 - Love\'s Spell (DestinysPerspectives)
The attraction can be a spell, but true love is never one. You are most...
May 29th, 2022 11:48 - A Rose with Thorns (Aradhya)
A rose and her thorns, A great quandary of Nature. Excellently presented,...
May 28th, 2022 15:08 - Sinful eyes (Kitty the naughty poet)
Bette Davis eyes! Maybe the most alluring pair ever on screen.
Your poem...
May 26th, 2022 16:29 - Slaves of Eros (Neville)
Eros is a lousy archer. I was wounded several times with his inaccurate...
May 26th, 2022 16:06 - There was a time (Aradhya)
This is deep, layered, and thought provoking. It can be applied to many...
May 25th, 2022 10:40 - all in a dream (Dusk arising)
This is great stuff. I personally love story poems, and this is a worthy...
May 24th, 2022 18:52 - Seasoned. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh, the season brings, bird songs and flowerings. Oh, I must be...
May 24th, 2022 18:23 - Cycled Love (DestinysPerspectives)
Hey, I like this one. I don\'t know much about Tarot, but it doesn\'t...
May 24th, 2022 16:31 - Flower Girls At Lost Weddings (Mini.katie)
MK - Let me be the first to say that I think your poem is terrific. Your...
May 23rd, 2022 16:21 - Once a Icy Heart (DestinysPerspectives)
Loved this poem. - Phil A.
May 23rd, 2022 15:42 - Shadows Of Love. (Goldfinch60)
Beautifully sweet words, Andy. Passion reflected in the notion of...
May 23rd, 2022 14:23 - In a garden full of weeds (Kitty the naughty poet)
Not to slight anyone, but this poem is like a flower among the weeds. It...
May 23rd, 2022 14:16 - Bedtime (Multiple haikus) (Universal_guarantee)
Very well written Senryu poems. In particular, I enjoyed #3. I\'m sure...
May 23rd, 2022 14:08 - LIMERICKS 115, 116 and 117 (Michael Edwards)
Had to look up \"fly tipper.\" But then what a good chuckle I had to start...
May 22nd, 2022 09:10 - Missing (Paul Bell)
O.K. This is so real. A constant problem nationwide. For whatever reason,...
May 22nd, 2022 09:02 - MONDAY BLUES🌀 (ChrisLyn🕊)
Oh, how to ruin a great dream. The tone of this poem is perfect and the...
May 20th, 2022 10:51 - A DARKSOME PLACE (Michael Edwards)
Who is she? Oh so many choices. Is she goodness, democracy, civility, or...
May 20th, 2022 10:42 - Tears On The Pillow (Paul Bell)
To lose one yet have another requires great courage. Your tragic tale...
May 19th, 2022 19:42 - Wordiku Eight. (Goldfinch60)
Do you know what happens if you put \"a bomb in a bull?\" - It\'s...
May 19th, 2022 13:44 - Imagine without \'F\' (Rozina)
No guitar knowledge here, but I did enjoy your \" never give up\"...
May 19th, 2022 13:13 - Sad Day (Paul Bell)
Very well constructed. Humorous, and a cool play on words. I laughed. What...
May 17th, 2022 15:45 - sunset (Hazel_Blossom)
A beautiful poem. \"Little things\" \"kept in boxes for rainy days\", such...
May 17th, 2022 14:50 - Haiku To Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Brilliant Haiku and Senryu. Perfectly executed. Love your Senryu. It...
May 17th, 2022 14:24 - Its All in the Way that She Eddies and Flows (Neville)
Time to raise the sails and head for the open seas. Sometimes you\'re...
May 12th, 2022 21:56 - Throwing sticks (Dusk arising)
May the days on the beach linger ever longer for you both. What a terrific...
May 10th, 2022 11:15
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