Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket (Neville)
Politics is a dirty game and, as such, does not lend itself to poetry very...
June 9th, 2022 16:45 - Four Together. (Goldfinch60)
What a wonderful way to view life. You must believe in your words and...
June 9th, 2022 16:25 - This tangled life (Morwenna)
Weeds and insects, two of the greatest symbols of endurance and...
June 8th, 2022 14:36 - Over and Out (Neville)
Best to be clear of that temptation. It seems you would always be...
June 8th, 2022 14:17 - Gone (Fay Slimm.)
A sad but true image and allegory, of receding tides and love lost. Loved,...
June 8th, 2022 14:10 - Performance. (Fay Slimm.)
I think Sunset is the most beautiful part of a day. The Sun can play many...
June 7th, 2022 21:01 - It’s All in The Seeing (Neville)
\"looking at\" something is just that, looking. Seeing is having a sense...
June 7th, 2022 08:02 - Lasting (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s like a Gothic novel with a happy ending, well at least a hopeful...
June 5th, 2022 19:10 - Petite Mort #2 (Neville)
Somehow, I sense a passage of time and \" those exquisite little deaths of...
June 5th, 2022 18:53 - Grief for a probable future (Morwenna)
\"An undertow of future grief flows on,\" and does it ever. There is an...
June 5th, 2022 10:14 - Grief for a probable future (Morwenna)
June 5th, 2022 10:01 - Music of the Shore, St Andrews, Scotland (Morwenna)
This is terrific. Your phrases are creative and fresh. You have described...
June 4th, 2022 16:38 - Weatherscape (Morwenna)
Wow. Love this poem. It captures the scene with originality and...
June 4th, 2022 16:34 - Reed Song (Neville)
Well, that\'s a unique comparison. I guess the \"wind\" can do a lot of...
June 4th, 2022 16:20 - Where Recollections Reside (Neville)
Memories, both fond and fondled, where do they reside? People will say in...
June 2nd, 2022 12:24 - Snow globe of me. (Kitty the naughty poet)
Sometimes people feel the loneliness of acceptability. Constantly trying...
May 31st, 2022 16:16 - Out of Nowhere. (Fay Slimm.)
Later in life it\'s more difficult to climb those \"mountains\" and find...
May 31st, 2022 16:06 - Do You Ever Look Back on Those Days (Neville)
\"Do you ever look back,\" is somewhat rhetorical. We all look back and...
May 31st, 2022 15:53 - part of all this (Dusk arising)
\"as if the land talked,\" \"I am proud to be among them.\" human...
May 31st, 2022 15:34 - Sitting With Natures Realm. (Goldfinch60)
I will go out on a limb here and say that this poem is going to be very...
May 31st, 2022 15:25 - Role (DestinysPerspectives)
\" your soul and purpose is everything,\" words of wisdom. Your poem is...
May 30th, 2022 13:38 - Reinvention (Fay Slimm.)
I believe that it is human nature to see one\'s past through rose colored...
May 30th, 2022 13:08 - Walking To Infinity. (Goldfinch60)
Uplifting and poignant: \"A blessed life as one,\" and \"The newly born...
May 30th, 2022 12:57 - LIMERICK 119 (Michael Edwards)
My chuckle for the day. Some may not be aware of the chain in...
May 29th, 2022 11:56 - Love\'s Spell (DestinysPerspectives)
The attraction can be a spell, but true love is never one. You are most...
May 29th, 2022 11:48 - A Rose with Thorns (Aradhya)
A rose and her thorns, A great quandary of Nature. Excellently presented,...
May 28th, 2022 15:08 - Sinful eyes (Kitty the naughty poet)
Bette Davis eyes! Maybe the most alluring pair ever on screen.
Your poem...
May 26th, 2022 16:29 - Slaves of Eros (Neville)
Eros is a lousy archer. I was wounded several times with his inaccurate...
May 26th, 2022 16:06 - There was a time (Aradhya)
This is deep, layered, and thought provoking. It can be applied to many...
May 25th, 2022 10:40 - all in a dream (Dusk arising)
This is great stuff. I personally love story poems, and this is a worthy...
May 24th, 2022 18:52 - Seasoned. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh, the season brings, bird songs and flowerings. Oh, I must be...
May 24th, 2022 18:23 - Cycled Love (DestinysPerspectives)
Hey, I like this one. I don\'t know much about Tarot, but it doesn\'t...
May 24th, 2022 16:31 - Flower Girls At Lost Weddings (Mini.katie)
MK - Let me be the first to say that I think your poem is terrific. Your...
May 23rd, 2022 16:21 - Once a Icy Heart (DestinysPerspectives)
Loved this poem. - Phil A.
May 23rd, 2022 15:42 - Shadows Of Love. (Goldfinch60)
Beautifully sweet words, Andy. Passion reflected in the notion of...
May 23rd, 2022 14:23 - In a garden full of weeds (Kitty the naughty poet)
Not to slight anyone, but this poem is like a flower among the weeds. It...
May 23rd, 2022 14:16 - Bedtime (Multiple haikus) (Universal_guarantee)
Very well written Senryu poems. In particular, I enjoyed #3. I\'m sure...
May 23rd, 2022 14:08 - LIMERICKS 115, 116 and 117 (Michael Edwards)
Had to look up \"fly tipper.\" But then what a good chuckle I had to start...
May 22nd, 2022 09:10 - Missing (Paul Bell)
O.K. This is so real. A constant problem nationwide. For whatever reason,...
May 22nd, 2022 09:02 - MONDAY BLUES🌀 (ChrisLyn🕊)
Oh, how to ruin a great dream. The tone of this poem is perfect and the...
May 20th, 2022 10:51 - A DARKSOME PLACE (Michael Edwards)
Who is she? Oh so many choices. Is she goodness, democracy, civility, or...
May 20th, 2022 10:42 - Tears On The Pillow (Paul Bell)
To lose one yet have another requires great courage. Your tragic tale...
May 19th, 2022 19:42 - Wordiku Eight. (Goldfinch60)
Do you know what happens if you put \"a bomb in a bull?\" - It\'s...
May 19th, 2022 13:44 - Imagine without \'F\' (Rozina)
No guitar knowledge here, but I did enjoy your \" never give up\"...
May 19th, 2022 13:13 - Sad Day (Paul Bell)
Very well constructed. Humorous, and a cool play on words. I laughed. What...
May 17th, 2022 15:45 - sunset (Hazel_Blossom)
A beautiful poem. \"Little things\" \"kept in boxes for rainy days\", such...
May 17th, 2022 14:50 - Haiku To Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Brilliant Haiku and Senryu. Perfectly executed. Love your Senryu. It...
May 17th, 2022 14:24 - Its All in the Way that She Eddies and Flows (Neville)
Time to raise the sails and head for the open seas. Sometimes you\'re...
May 12th, 2022 21:56 - Throwing sticks (Dusk arising)
May the days on the beach linger ever longer for you both. What a terrific...
May 10th, 2022 11:15 - Mirror dimension (Kitty the naughty poet)
Nice. Very mystical. \"As my essence sits on the floor,\" could be the...
May 10th, 2022 11:06 - Tactics (Fay Slimm.)
The road to a sustained relationship is littered with nodes of decision...
May 6th, 2022 15:03 - All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat (Neville)
Funny how one small moment in time, when actions speak louder than words,...
May 6th, 2022 14:45 - Tea? (Kitty the naughty poet)
You seem well steeped in tease -oops - I meant teas. I\'m with you on...
May 2nd, 2022 14:54 - Fish Supper (Neville)
Now that you taught me how, I think I\'ll go fishing. This poem was as...
May 2nd, 2022 14:36 - Upon Reflections Shattered (Neville)
Let\'s not get angry at the mirror and crack it \"well and truly,\" just...
May 1st, 2022 19:21 - Like Some Old Discarded Stocking (Neville)
Careful! You may start a fashion trend. If life serves you lemons... make...
April 30th, 2022 16:38 - First Flush (Fay Slimm.)
A great expression of Spring\'s arrival. Color returns to replace the drab...
April 25th, 2022 19:41 - Wind Dancer .. a Haiku (Neville)
Dancing in the wind. Somewhere off a cliff I imagine. Free to be \"wild.\"...
April 25th, 2022 19:29 - Try To Remember (Bella Shepard)
\" Let me tell you Bella, they\'re most likely there in your pocketbook.\"...
April 24th, 2022 21:13 - A Snowfall (Peppino)
Well written. Enjoyed it. And how kind of you to feed them. It seemed I...
April 24th, 2022 21:03 - REWRITE THE PAST📜 (ChrisLyn🕊)
A good write, O.K. better than good. What struck me about it was the tone,...
April 24th, 2022 20:38 - Inside Her Pants #2 (Neville)
A funny place to be keeping your pets
even if one is Man\'s Best Friend....
April 24th, 2022 20:19 - raft of reeds (Dusk arising)
\"lies\" often spell the end of many things, \"bonds\" included. Terrific...
April 12th, 2022 11:47 - So Ready (Fay Slimm.)
Cries from the inner self rise up in the twilight of sleep. Moments are...
April 12th, 2022 11:42 - Gooder than Good Even (Neville)
\"by a mile and a smile,\" and a half! Does that mean this is Neopoetic....
April 12th, 2022 11:28 - Echo (Almost)
Think of yourself first. Let others come to you. The right partner will...
February 2nd, 2022 20:27 - Oh Summer – Tra La La (Doggerel Dave)
\"Oh Summer\" - How I miss her. Sub-zero temps, \"feets\" of snow, and...
February 2nd, 2022 20:00 - Comingness (Fay Slimm.)
A very descriptive write. Mornings are the best time of day, their...
January 30th, 2022 20:43 - Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’ (Neville)
A \"shining brightly\" star becomes a fond remembrance of a loved one. The...
January 30th, 2022 20:25 - Old Age (Abantika Chakraborty)
A powerful piece of writing. It is a precise vision of a dream and...
January 30th, 2022 20:14 - What it All Boils Down To (Neville)
If poetry is a sin, we are all going to burn in hell. Probably worth it...
January 28th, 2022 21:10 - She Danced (Buzz Bray)
A sweet romantic poem filled with remembrances of her and the joy she...
January 28th, 2022 20:46 - Missed (Fay Slimm.)
Words as majestic as that oak tree. Such a loss will be a long time...
January 28th, 2022 20:22 - In Motion (Fay Slimm.)
I love the sound of a rushing stream or river as it pours over rocks. Your...
December 22nd, 2021 23:44 - Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars (Neville)
Sorry, I can\'t tell who, what, or where \"she\" is, but that doesn\'t...
November 16th, 2021 20:08 - Rain (James Alexander)
A pleasant reflection on \"Rain.\" Liked you words and phrasings. \"the...
November 14th, 2021 19:42 - Breakfast Rituals (Neville)
A tender moment caught and revealed in fine fashion. Sunday morning...
October 25th, 2021 21:18 - People Do Not Care Rant. (Goldfinch60)
All civility is disappearing. Mankind is regressing to barbaric times. I...
October 25th, 2021 13:08 - AND PUPPETS DANCE (Michael Edwards)
Someone\'s quiet time ( daydream ) is unexpectedly interrupted by a bird /...
October 25th, 2021 12:58 - Beautiful (Fay Slimm.)
To see such beauty in the evening sky and to capture it so eloquently is...
October 19th, 2021 18:28 - Dirty Laugh (Neville)
The difference between a \"laugh\" and a \"dirty laugh\" is that the...
October 19th, 2021 18:18 - A Final Plea (HangingbyaHalo)
This took me back to the passing of many a dear one. You have painted the...
October 19th, 2021 17:54 - Wind Powered Submarines. (Doggerel Dave)
Wind powered subs - Well hoist the mainsail Matey! Oh yeah they do have...
October 3rd, 2021 18:00 - Surprisingly More. (Goldfinch60)
So true Andy. Life is complicated and the variance is wide. We may or not...
October 3rd, 2021 17:48 - Respite (Fay Slimm.)
As beautiful as an autumn day. My favorite time of the year. Yes winter is...
October 3rd, 2021 17:45 - Words Left Unsaid (Saxon Crow)
A beautiful piece of poetry, of love never spoken and the aftermath of...
August 11th, 2021 13:26 - Otherness (Fay Slimm.)
I don\'t think these words are spontaneous, but rather they come from your...
August 11th, 2021 13:11 - Perfectly Hued (Neville)
\"Perfectly hued,\" is of itself a dream. Even a world without people,...
August 11th, 2021 12:22 - And Now (Fay Slimm.)
Four seasons in the countryside, painted with a time worn brush. It felt...
August 8th, 2021 16:13 - Calling Time (Neville)
A truly exceptional write. Taking time to \"ease into a favorite chair\"...
August 8th, 2021 16:06 - When You Find These Words (Neville)
I have found them and they speak to me. - Phil A.
August 6th, 2021 17:43 - Collusion (Fay Slimm.)
The Earth actually produces a sound as it spins on its axis. This and the...
August 4th, 2021 16:22 - Recovering From The Shock. (Goldfinch60)
Eventually they realize that the roles are shifting. Still a thrill when...
August 3rd, 2021 11:25 - Upon the Tip of His Tongue (Neville)
Frivolous affairs, some long remembered, some forgotten straight away. You...
July 25th, 2021 22:25 - Awake Before Sleep (M.E.M.)
It\'s just the chemical reactions of your brain as it readies for sleep....
July 18th, 2021 22:23 - Time Versus Love (Fay Slimm.)
Love is either a desert or a garden, never anything in between. The...
July 18th, 2021 22:14 - Love\'s Home. (Goldfinch60)
A lifetime of love cannot be destroyed by the passing of one. The...
July 18th, 2021 22:02 - Cathedral Bells (Neville)
One of religion\'s only good qualities is the art that it has inspired,...
July 18th, 2021 21:58 - The Main Drag (Rebmasters)
I guess the \"main drag\" is a drag. Too common place to be of interest....
July 18th, 2021 21:45 - Age Of Wisdom. (Goldfinch60)
No, No, No! We are not as old as we think, or feel. We are as old as we...
July 17th, 2021 14:31
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