Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• Into Sleep. (Goldfinch60) This is what music is all about, Goldfinch! You captured it perfectly!
  January 13th, 2018 22:19
• COLD CRABS (Michael Edwards) Didn\'t you mother tell you to wear long johns?
  January 13th, 2018 22:17
• Deep Freeze (Christina8) Very nicely written, Christina! Reminds me of the \'freezing rain\' we...
  January 13th, 2018 22:13
• My Precious Angel ❤️ (Lost-but-not-broken17) Congratulations mom! Make sure you print and frame this beautiful welcome...
  January 13th, 2018 22:00
• Alibis (WL Schuett) You have no alibi, so you were there! And that awesome poem proves it!
  January 13th, 2018 21:56
• Silent Music. (Fay Slimm.) And what a beautiful song it is!
  January 12th, 2018 12:49
• NESSUN DORMA (Michael Edwards) How do you come up with these, Michael? Your mind is like a pandora\'s...
  January 12th, 2018 02:27
• Thought it stopped but it came straight back (Poetic Dan) Sorry to disappoint you, PD, but the ringing won\'t stop. Had it for...
  January 11th, 2018 17:17
• Wednesday 10th (Renzi) Renzi, just hearing from you makes my day! I have a terrible cough and...
  January 11th, 2018 17:11
• Ravishing Rioja. (Goldfinch60) Absolutely love this poem, Goldfinch! I too cook a lot with wine, and...
  January 11th, 2018 16:52
• WHEN I WAS A TEEN (Lasergraph) And our parents experienced horse and wagon and steam engines, cooking and...
  January 11th, 2018 16:42
• Forsaken (M.E.M.) To understand others, to feel their joy or anguish, we have to walk in...
  January 11th, 2018 16:39
• My Mess His Mess (Avigail) Avigail, I do like this poem. The first six lines setting the stage,...
  January 11th, 2018 16:30
• Thirteen Stories of the End (Baylee) That was a marathon reading, Nicole! Must have taken you forever to...
  January 10th, 2018 12:24
• The Moon - Senryu. (Goldfinch60) Well penned, and it is lighting up our lives when we need it most: During...
  January 10th, 2018 12:18
• IN ECSTASY (Michael Edwards) Absolutely beautiful and mesmerizing. The third line carries the whole...
  January 10th, 2018 12:13
• way poem #06: perhaps by questions (Frank Prem) The age old question. Beautifully written. It nearly sounds like a fable...
  January 10th, 2018 12:00
• SHUT UP (Michael Edwards) Great poem, Michael. There are times when I realize right after I said it...
  January 10th, 2018 01:18
• Accents (Niallprideaux) Hat off to your grandma! Do like your poem. Sometimes I get cell phone...
  January 8th, 2018 23:20
• \"PASSIONATELY\" (Andrew Guzaldo) Your poem really gets across the loss, the memories, the emotions of a...
  January 8th, 2018 18:29
• Bullish Dreams (Its Raskolnikov) You are expressing what we all would like to see! Nice poem!
  January 8th, 2018 18:25
• Worst enemy (Renzi) Ahw, Renzi, we finally hear from you again and you break our hearts! Love...
  January 8th, 2018 12:11
• Winter Sounds. (Fay Slimm.) Interesting form, well written. Fay, you surprise us with so much talent...
  January 8th, 2018 12:04
• 2018 ~ NORTHERN HEMISPHERE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah, the gunpowder plot of 1605 (I admit, I had to look it up. Thank you...
  January 8th, 2018 11:55
• Trusting Truly (Orchidee) Well written again, orchie! Trusting truly....easy to say, so hard to do....
  January 8th, 2018 11:50
• Feeling Poetry. (Goldfinch60) Easy, Goldie, the words come from our muse. Have no idea though where the...
  January 8th, 2018 11:48
• GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards) I go along with all four of your one-liners, except the hip thing. With me...
  January 8th, 2018 11:40
• Dead Roses (Syd) Well written, Syd! But if you are happy now, maybe she did you a favor....
  January 8th, 2018 11:31
• help!! (Syddie) Welcome to MPS, syddie. We are hearing your cry for help and many of us...
  January 8th, 2018 11:27
• Ripples (Velvetlascivious) Very beautifully written! Like the ending.
  January 8th, 2018 01:43
• midnight cigarette (Velvetlascivious) Love the way you lead into it. I can see that place, see the woman....
  January 8th, 2018 01:42
• Hell On Earth. (Wallace) An interesting concept, Wallace. It surely looks that way sometimes when...
  January 8th, 2018 01:15
• Love Is Best (W c) An uplifting poem, w c! Well written.
  January 8th, 2018 01:13
• way poem #05: the five steps to wheaten pecks (Frank Prem) Very intriguing, Frank. You really drew me in right through to the end,...
  January 8th, 2018 01:12
• Fire (Christina8) Very beautiful declaration of love, Christina! And yes, a lasting marriage...
  January 8th, 2018 01:10
• The Curse This Country Has (ForeverJesus7) An epic, very well written!
  January 7th, 2018 15:08
• Vicious Cycle (10 words) (Syd) Some of the best 10 words I ever read, and read again, and read again...
  January 7th, 2018 15:06
• I don\'t know (Avigail) Very well written, Avigail, you seem to hold up a mirror where we can see...
  January 7th, 2018 11:41
• Applause. (Fay Slimm.) Simply beautiful!!! Worthy of being a favorite, and worthy of three of my...
  January 7th, 2018 11:33
• Gem (Michael J. Schaeffer) A nicely penned declaration of love! And a beautiful picture of Jessica...
  January 7th, 2018 11:24
• MY GOD IN HEAVEN BE PRAISED ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well written Brian!
  January 7th, 2018 11:12
• Pleasant Prospects (Orchidee) We all pass through that valley of tears and sorrows sometimes, and your...
  January 7th, 2018 11:10
• LOVE\'S FIRST TASTE (Michael Edwards) Michael, beautifully written, and I agree with SL, that last stanza is...
  January 7th, 2018 11:06
• Realising Belief. (Goldfinch60) I love the concept of \'talking to GOD\' to explain your belief. It makes...
  January 7th, 2018 11:01
• Night Sounds (WL Schuett) Beautiful writing, WL! Love the whole poem, but especially the last
  January 7th, 2018 10:51
• War of the Drobe! (Elsie) Elsie, I had a chuckle reading this. Really wants to make you buy...
  January 7th, 2018 10:40
• gippsland traveller (Frank Prem) Frank, I never set foot on your continent, but thanks to your poem I have...
  January 6th, 2018 15:41
• School is Manky (Tyler14) Taylor, sometimes not only school, but life, love, work, everything sucks!...
  January 6th, 2018 15:37
• You are my sunshine (Tony36) Love that second stanza, Tony! Well written poem!
  January 6th, 2018 15:35
• A no answer machine (Aa Harvey) Sad, but true!
  January 6th, 2018 15:34
• If you feel that the universe is not responding (Avigail) Great, thought provoking poem, Avigail! As per Nike: Just do it! You...
  January 6th, 2018 15:32
• HOW TO READ A POEM ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) Should be printed out and hung on the wall by every aspiring poet! Well...
  January 6th, 2018 15:26
• One More. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, you have a way of expressing life in beautiful terms, both the good...
  January 6th, 2018 15:22
• Holy Homage (Orchidee) Orchi, I am continuously surprised at how well you write, even with the...
  January 6th, 2018 15:17
• Sailing into the Light. (Goldfinch60) This is such a beautiful poem about finding the light. And I think we...
  January 6th, 2018 15:13
• SATURDAY (Michael Edwards) Maybe I should be, but am not retired yet, Michael. Saturday for me is a...
  January 6th, 2018 15:08
• I Follow My Tears. (Kevin browne) Well penned, Kevin! A beautiful declaration of love and love lost, sad,...
  January 6th, 2018 15:05
• Goodbye to the Cider Drinker (Elsie) Welcome to MPS, Elsie! I am sorry for your loss, but your dad came alive...
  January 5th, 2018 16:02
• Alone (M.E.M.) Very well expressed, an apt description of \'loneliness\'. Reading it I...
  January 5th, 2018 15:57
• Outside (Skyebellasario) What I like about this poem is that it is not limited to the geographical,...
  January 5th, 2018 14:22
• Thirst (Syd) An honest, raw, eye-opening account! Well written too! Having grown up...
  January 5th, 2018 13:47
• New Year\'s night (Aa Harvey) Very nicely said, Aa! Starting the New Year with peace just might make it...
  January 5th, 2018 11:55
• His Laughter. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, your beautifully written poem made me remember my own dad. He was...
  January 5th, 2018 11:53
• You Wash Me Down (Mottakeenur Rehman) Short and sweet. Great poem!
  January 5th, 2018 11:50
• Tug of War (Michael J. Schaeffer) Intriguing write, beautiful picture. (Is it from the 60\', 70\'s?)
  January 5th, 2018 11:48
• Praise Perusals 2 (Orchidee) Well done, orchidee!
  January 5th, 2018 11:44
• WHO CREATED THE ROSE ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well done Brian! Am with Michael all the way! So I guess I am...
  January 5th, 2018 11:41
• New Facts. (Goldfinch60) Ingenious, Goldfinch! Now I know why I don\'t remember, and why I tell my...
  January 5th, 2018 11:33
• I\'m Not Dead Yet. (Lanaevans) Portrayal of a tortured soul. I could feel the anguish in your writing....
  January 5th, 2018 11:31
• Beautiful Wave (NaomiRayne) What I really like about your well written poem is that I can read it...
  January 5th, 2018 11:14
• SNOWDROP BEAUTY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well done, Brian! I remember them from Switzerland, but haven\'t seen any...
  January 5th, 2018 00:16
• TOO MUCH MUFFIN (Michael Edwards) You keep on surprising me with your humor, Michael. And your...
  January 5th, 2018 00:14
• amaze me (Frank Prem) Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, Frank! Well, you amazed me with your...
  January 5th, 2018 00:12
• Her Breath (NaomiRayne) Beautifully written, Rayne! You know, I don\'t think we will ever...
  January 4th, 2018 22:32
• Every Question has Two Answers (Clark) well written Taylor! Many questions have multiple answers. Go with your...
  January 4th, 2018 22:22
• My Daytime Nightmare (Autumn May) Welcome to MPS, Autumn! You wrote this when you were 12? Very good...
  January 4th, 2018 22:15
• My Daytime Nightmare (Autumn May) Welcome to MPS, Autumn! You wrote this when you were 12? Very good...
  January 4th, 2018 22:15
• Never Be Good Enough For Anyone (KiviLuv) And that day has come! Welcome to MPS, Kivi! Here you can be part of our...
  January 4th, 2018 22:11
• The Problems With Life (Becca Nieman) Welcome to MPS, Becca. \'Playing roles, fake smiles\' welcome to life...
  January 4th, 2018 22:06
• Mary\'s Mind 1 (Thoff1) True and something to think about. Good poem, Tomo
  January 4th, 2018 22:00
• REFLECTION ON AGE (Lasergraph) Lasergraph, you expressed very beautifully what many of us \'advanced...
  January 4th, 2018 16:29
• Insides (M.E.M.) Amazing write, M.E.M! There are times when we feel we can never be whole...
  January 4th, 2018 16:26
• To Drink Another For The Road. (Kevin browne) Awesome write, Kevin! And I love it that you got the \'Dire Straights\' in...
  January 4th, 2018 16:22
• DAVID T. (Laura🌻) This is what poetry is all about. To even express pain with beauty and...
  January 4th, 2018 16:17
• New Leaves. (Fay Slimm.) Great writing and stunning form/shape! And thank you for your New Year...
  January 4th, 2018 16:14
• Evangelism Expression (Orchidee) So well written, as always, orchi!
  January 4th, 2018 16:10
• Fireworks in the Sky (GeraldineTaylor) Geraldine, you are the queen of song poems!
  January 4th, 2018 03:20
• Eternity Calls - FIB, (Goldfinch60) How you can actually get a great message into this mathematical poem is...
  January 4th, 2018 03:18
• BLUNDERS (Michael Edwards) The master of the mathematical poems does it again!
  January 4th, 2018 03:16
• TO A GRANDCHILD IN PASSING (Louis Gibbs) Beautiful Louis! And it is also fitting for me and my new just over a...
  January 4th, 2018 00:21
• The Difference between Sponges and Miracles (Clark) Writing helps, and your writing, Taylor, is beautiful and raw, and moving,...
  January 3rd, 2018 20:27
• An answer doesn\'t help. (Moom) Well written and food for thought. Sometimes there are no good answers and...
  January 3rd, 2018 20:19
• Poetry and A Smile of Honesty (Mottakeenur Rehman) MR, a smile can make a huge difference, and you expressed it well!
  January 3rd, 2018 20:17
• Photographer (M.E.M.) Creative and interesting angle! Never thought of photographs as victims...
  January 3rd, 2018 12:59
• 2018 ~ GOD\'S BLESSINGS FOR PLANET EARTH ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) We are lucky to live on this planet. Now, if we could only keep from...
  January 3rd, 2018 12:57
• Every night...Every star (Roland Landa) Happy dreams, Roli! Nice declaration of love!
  January 3rd, 2018 10:09
• Kiss (Michael J. Schaeffer) Well written, Michael.
  January 3rd, 2018 10:07
• A Merryfull Christmas (GeraldineTaylor) Beautiful song, Geraldine! Will you write the notes too?
  January 3rd, 2018 10:05
• Jesus (Tony36) Short and to the point. Well done, Tony!
  January 3rd, 2018 10:03
• Into Forever. (Fay Slimm.) Only you could express the feelings of the one left behind in such a...
  January 3rd, 2018 09:59