Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- UNSAMES (2) 1-3 (Michael Edwards)
Well done Sebastian for taking up the five mile challenge and more power...
November 20th, 2020 03:29 - Windfallen (Neville)
Drowning in your fruitiest description of apple harvest reminds me of...
November 19th, 2020 04:56 - PRECOGNITION (Michael Edwards)
Super write Michael - - I love every well chosen word.
November 19th, 2020 03:27 - Isle of Skye (Clara)
An enchanting read Clara - This poetic picture and altogether delightful...
November 18th, 2020 22:30 - Beginner to Winner. (Goldfinch60)
Tryers who get up once they drop are worth copying as your fine verse says...
November 18th, 2020 11:39 - Trench Life (Neville)
Razor-sharp versing of nightly horrors when war blocked all quiet - your...
November 18th, 2020 05:28 - Gone (Neville)
So moving these words of appeal to a special someone - -- gone only in...
November 16th, 2020 15:43 - please, so much (Dusk arising)
Ha - - yes you were right on with your assessment D.A. and I remember...
November 16th, 2020 06:43 - A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville)
Lessons learned by this reader from your two short lines my perceptive...
November 15th, 2020 08:49 - AS TIME GOES BY ~ A CLASSIC PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Memories made poetic by your nostalgic picture, song and pantoum - - well...
November 15th, 2020 08:19 - LIFETIME (Dove)
Oh lovely -- - all through the loving tender appeal makes its claims so...
November 14th, 2020 13:39 - Happy Diwali 2020 (Suresh)
Good to see you posting again Suresh - - wishing you happy memories of...
November 14th, 2020 05:39 - Sugar Coated. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful scene and you capture its grace so well my friend.
November 12th, 2020 16:43 - Better for Seeing (Sylviasearcher)
Loud applause for this perfectly created piece of poetic positivity - -...
November 12th, 2020 12:56 - my dreams light (Dusk arising)
And what better tribute to the beautiful moon than your verse today D.A....
November 12th, 2020 07:51 - to end all wars (Dusk arising)
Numberless markers set out as remembrance of youth sacrificed and backed...
November 11th, 2020 07:40 - Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.)
Good to see you put this little tribute to Our Tune into you list of...
November 10th, 2020 11:56 - Love will find a way (Poetic Dan)
Keep on dancing in that river of dreams Dan - a lovely and inspiring read.
November 10th, 2020 10:16 - Seas of Dreams (Dove)
What a wonderful flow to this romantic verse - - a delightfully dreamy...
November 9th, 2020 13:02 - it saddens me (Dusk arising)
I remember a documentary about that tragic affair and the Highland...
November 9th, 2020 11:37 - Ode to the snail (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
A miracle wrapped in an awesome shell is paid special tribute in your...
November 9th, 2020 11:29 - PRESIDENT OF USA ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 2 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Interesting read on what and on who America selected - - thanks dear duo...
November 9th, 2020 11:24 - Gospel Glories - Isaiah Series (19) (Orchidee)
Those first two lines took me back to times we had to memorize a choral...
November 9th, 2020 11:16 - The Unknown Is Out There. (Goldfinch60)
Your spiritual thoughts when walking make my day when on reading I almost...
November 9th, 2020 11:12 - Somewhere Between Trees (Neville)
The golden and treasured moments of love seep through every short line of...
November 9th, 2020 07:21 - 🧡 AMERICA 🤍 AMERICA 💙 ~ ACROSTIC 7 - 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Viewing its beauty only in pictures I have come to respect the vastness of...
November 8th, 2020 14:54 - War Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor)
You capture the feelings of poets who with experience of war tried to...
November 8th, 2020 14:49 - they never leave you (revisited) (Dusk arising)
The truth of these lines are shown in every old face who went there, did...
November 8th, 2020 09:15 - Nevafar (Neville)
Ah --- \"I will come back\" How compelling the sounds of those words from...
November 8th, 2020 09:05 - Harry (Doggerel Dave)
What an interesting read and a surprising end to the tale of Harry the...
November 7th, 2020 03:42 - Unity of Opposites (Neville)
Relatable words on how easy co-existence can be achieved my friend and...
November 7th, 2020 03:32 - Lockdown Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Loving this light-hearted approach to a further lockdown - your pie...
November 6th, 2020 14:18 - things to come (Dusk arising)
A scare of a read dear friend -- and so aptly formed with sombre wording ...
November 6th, 2020 14:16 - Roosting (Neville)
The voice of a she-bird calling from below the auditory level means the...
November 4th, 2020 13:46 - Peevish Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Ha - yes indeed Kevin most poets give way to ranting etc at senseless...
November 2nd, 2020 04:12 - CHRISTMAS PRESENTS ~ CHRISTMAS SPENDING ~ SIX RHYMING QUATRAINS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your list of no-no pressies raised a smile dear duo - these all too...
November 2nd, 2020 04:09 - Little Shepherdesses (Neville)
Ha - - for some reason this write reminded me of the olde ballad -...
November 1st, 2020 06:40 - MAKE ME (Amon)
An inventive and poetic love song penned with devotion which a fortunate...
October 31st, 2020 04:15 - Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Many thanks Amon for adding this piece to your list of favourites. Am so...
October 31st, 2020 04:11 - And So the Waves Whispered... (Dove)
A wonderfully calming read Dove -- especially liked the continued flow...
October 30th, 2020 08:34 - Summit of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Such a moving read dear Andy - may you continue to reach happiness as you...
October 30th, 2020 07:20 - Depression (L. B. Mek)
Ah your pen images it well this wide-spread depression - - a write to...
October 30th, 2020 07:19 - listen and lay back (Dusk arising)
Am on my way D.A. - - just the ticket for me today.......... love this...
October 30th, 2020 07:07 - Language and Music. (Goldfinch60)
If anyone can write on the language of music it has to be you dear Andy -...
October 29th, 2020 16:06 - I AM (Trenz Pruca)
I can relate to each line in this superb conception of the life we all...
October 29th, 2020 05:40 - UNSAME (2) (Michael Edwards)
Whooooo - Michael that artwork is more than superb - love your wit in...
October 29th, 2020 05:11 - Faithful Following - Isaiah Series (14) (Orchidee)
Yes peace is what we all need - - good write my friend.
October 29th, 2020 04:59 - Innerness (Neville)
Wildness inside - that holds a truth when boundaries are shattered by...
October 28th, 2020 04:49 - Tides of Fortune. (Goldfinch60)
Yes dear friend - your words well bring out the changes that life may...
October 28th, 2020 03:52 - ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER (Michael Edwards)
I wholly agree with the irks you feel Michael on bad pronunciation - -...
October 28th, 2020 03:47 - My Place of Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Am so glad to have have caught this wonderful piece after your walk round...
October 28th, 2020 03:36 - Hiding Behind New Dust (Neville)
Beauty tho\' dust-trapped finds ways through to let shine its attraction...
October 27th, 2020 11:02 - Unruly (L. B. Mek)
Top drawer writing on need for true self-expression when composing...
October 26th, 2020 04:57 - Dawn (Steve Unruh)
A breathtaking read of dawn\' wonder - you captured the changes made so...
October 25th, 2020 06:10 - Borrowed Time (BoxMyHeart)
Yes this feels like a song in the making along with the right music - -...
October 25th, 2020 05:30 - The beat of your tune (Lili Ahlam)
Welcome to M.P.S Lili and with this haunt of a read on the power of...
October 25th, 2020 05:27 - fallen dreams (Dusk arising)
Ah - a classic for sure this write of powerful imagery which draws this...
October 25th, 2020 05:21 - Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
Ye life is often what we see and make for ourselves my friend - our...
October 25th, 2020 03:44 - In The Last Century. (Goldfinch60)
It seems like such a long time ago to say the last century but how true it...
October 25th, 2020 02:39 - Beyond Broke (Neville)
Seriously good this concise diagnosis of delusion my...
October 24th, 2020 11:58 - Scary Sister -- A Fun Halloween Poem For My Kids (BlueHeron77)
So good to know that your growing family have love and security from a...
October 22nd, 2020 02:14 - Chemistry of Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Yes love has a chemistry deeper than any humanity has yet to discover - a...
October 20th, 2020 11:32 - Los Echoes (Neville)
Freeing feelings from guilt makes former clandestine days full of meaning...
October 20th, 2020 05:20 - A CURRY A WEEK ~ SAVES LIVES ! ~ TEN RHYMING DOUBLETS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Curries described so lightheartedly here dear duo - - - not too keen on...
October 20th, 2020 01:52 - go then (Dusk arising)
A heart-tugging read from the first line to the last - losing a much...
October 19th, 2020 03:09 - bored through overkill (Dusk arising)
I second your outcry D.A. about being bored by continual media attention...
October 18th, 2020 02:00 - Driving Into Daylight. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful title for all sorts of subjects but the one you chose of...
October 17th, 2020 05:00 - A NEW DOOR (Michael Edwards)
Best wishes for Jeanne\'s full recovery as you take good care that she...
October 17th, 2020 02:37 - in fields of green (Dusk arising)
Yes the unending gravestones must move every visitor to those foreign...
October 17th, 2020 02:05 - Very,Very Fast Food. (Goldfinch60)
The fun you had in cooking that steak left me with a smile when you...
October 16th, 2020 15:48 - of november fallen (Dusk arising)
Your words bring their own shiver as November peeps through each line - -...
October 16th, 2020 15:45 - Waving at Dolphins (Neville)
The calm of this poemed scene passes into a harbouring dance such as I see...
October 16th, 2020 06:24 - Quarantine Senryu (Lorna)
Hilarious song and loved the Sen......
October 16th, 2020 04:43 - Death Missed. (Goldfinch60)
Your posting is full to the brim of an inspiring and upbuilding outlook on...
October 15th, 2020 07:21 - the downstream tide (Dusk arising)
Love the freestyle you chose for this haunt of a read D.A. - - your pen...
October 15th, 2020 07:18 - Wasps (Neville)
Loving this short and pithy opinion of stingers that prey on sweet flesh...
October 14th, 2020 03:04 - The Arrows of Time (Lorna)
Love this exposure of macho men and what happens when meeting that female...
October 13th, 2020 06:54 - Bring us More Liquor (Neville)
Have learnt a new name with a most gruesome calling from this sombre but...
October 13th, 2020 04:20 - Addiction. (Fay Slimm.)
Dan thanking you most sincerely for adding this piece to your list of...
October 12th, 2020 16:11 - EFFECT OF COVID 19 ~ A 6 3 5 LAMENT SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes each one has been affected in one way or another by hearing of losses...
October 12th, 2020 10:09 - The Four Letter Word (Lorna)
How true your final lines Lorna.- love is elusive and you rhyme the...
October 12th, 2020 06:37 - Where do Dreams Go (Neville)
Sensually potent this verse on what memory dreams before it melts into...
October 12th, 2020 04:01 - Sunshine (Dove)
A pleasure to read such a sun-shiny verse - -- - I enjoyed every warm and...
October 11th, 2020 10:43 - Lunch at My House (Lorna)
Ah Lorna - - I love this kitcheny message of drummed -down catastrophe - ...
October 11th, 2020 05:24 - Yellow Umbrella\'s (Neville)
Methinks that suggestion of love in a dim hallway takes precedence over...
October 11th, 2020 02:48 - Spit it Out (Neville)
With an appeal like this how could anyone refuse to let sleeping dogs lie...
October 10th, 2020 07:42 - LIMERICK No 69 (Michael Edwards)
Oooooh Plumply attractive with curvy assets yet feeling too fat - -- I...
October 10th, 2020 02:12 - a lie became noble (Dusk arising)
Your words capture the whole scene back then Dusk -- the shame of those...
October 10th, 2020 02:05 - Laughter Wins. (Goldfinch60)
Too true Andy - - the words remind me of a saying I heard many moons ago -...
October 10th, 2020 02:02 - Heaven on Earth? (Saxon Crow)
Words of truth and thank you for sharing them S.C.
October 10th, 2020 02:00 - Autumn Rain (Lorna)
Soup followed by chocolate - well that should put paid to the cold of wet...
October 9th, 2020 09:27 - Mile High (Neville)
Icarus would surely agree that the flight with a lover feels mile high...
October 9th, 2020 09:24 - BE OPTIMISTIC ~ THE BEST CHOICE ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes an optimistic outlook is always a winner in facing this troubled world...
October 9th, 2020 07:14 - ...AND... (Michael Edwards)
Bidding on love can be filled with unseen appendages if time allows - --...
October 9th, 2020 04:38 - A return to romance (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Your romantic words swept me away Ron -- and beautiful music too - wht...
October 9th, 2020 02:19 - Wild Company (Lorna)
A positive menage of beautiful wild things and all around your daily...
October 8th, 2020 07:19 - Woollen Stockings (Neville)
You pen a rich encounter with those who make livings from simple...
October 8th, 2020 04:37 - Bucket List Senryu (Lorna)
What better to tick off than Lurve dear Lorna......... fun read.
October 8th, 2020 03:43 - Grab the Day (Trenz Pruca)
Howe true your last sentence Trenz - - this day will not come again so...
October 7th, 2020 13:17 - Cleansing Our Lifetimes. (Goldfinch60)
Yes the rain certainly does cleanse in this toe of Cornwall\'s south west ...
October 7th, 2020 03:24
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