Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Decisive (Fay Slimm.)
Thanks a load for adding this poem to your list of favourites Trenz
November 28th, 2020 13:45 - Tell Them (Tayama)
Telling those dearest and nearest how much they mean to your life is so...
November 28th, 2020 12:01 - We are not in control (Tayama)
Short and to the point this piece on t the spirit of love - I look...
November 28th, 2020 11:54 - Love First (Tayama)
Yes showing love instead of the list of alternatives would be a wise way...
November 28th, 2020 11:51 - 20 ways of dying and 20 hopes to live for (RDS)
A mélange of combined ways my friend of saying a last goodbye to this...
November 28th, 2020 05:03 - summer No 17 (Dusk arising)
Ah - -- as the song said - -\"Those were the days my friend - We thought...
November 28th, 2020 04:15 - In the End (Neville)
There is no escape from this bit of truth. as your three liner powerfully...
November 28th, 2020 03:40 - Clarity of Remembrance within Gratitude (L. B. Mek)
My eyes too have been opened by this poetic outing of genocide and my...
November 27th, 2020 11:06 - Cannabis Cool (A Nonsense Poem) (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A very clever nonsense poem that calls for another reading dear Alan - - I...
November 27th, 2020 10:57 - Idyllic Inspiration - Isaiah Series (28) (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi and thank you for sharing the news of new heavens new...
November 27th, 2020 10:53 - My Lady Was a Poem (Neville)
Once a minion of written memory and although now aged this lady will live...
November 27th, 2020 05:40 - Where Nobody Has Gone Before. (Goldfinch60)
Ha - - up-cycling the old to give a trendy new face just gave me my first...
November 27th, 2020 04:19 - there and here (Dusk arising)
A gentle reminder that limbs can bud best when mature - colours of love...
November 27th, 2020 04:04 - THANKSGIVING FOR THE USA ~ SEVEN BALANCED QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An informative read on Thanksgiving that leaves us wishing unity and...
November 26th, 2020 17:03 - Me & my Singing Bowl (Neville)
The gender of this graceful but potent relationship makes the singing-bowl...
November 26th, 2020 12:10 - the long goodnight (Dusk arising)
Had to read this over again before I could not find words to describe the...
November 24th, 2020 13:45 - Those Who Would Love Light (Neville)
This bouquet of exquisite medley carries the scent of true poetic talent...
November 24th, 2020 12:16 - MISS SYLLA BERLES (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - loved both the verse and the reference to misgivings when...
November 23rd, 2020 04:57 - With a ball at their feet (L. B. Mek)
Thrill of the game captured with detailed imagery throws this well-crafted...
November 23rd, 2020 04:51 - Another Golden Dawn (Neville)
Much food for thought in this little gem. After the light is gone unclear...
November 22nd, 2020 18:02 - Need (Christina8)
Wow - how alive you make the scene of coupling pleasure my friend - A...
November 22nd, 2020 03:30 - Practical Perusals (Orchidee)
Good and sound sense in all these well presented lines dear Orchi.
November 21st, 2020 12:22 - In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude (Dove)
A touching read Dove - your versing of emotional togetherness is so clear...
November 21st, 2020 12:21 - My Joy (Christina8)
Grand to read of your joy at this time of year dear Christina - - what a...
November 21st, 2020 10:37 - Aperitif (Neville)
What a fortunate she to be receiving such mouth-watering reminders that...
November 21st, 2020 09:27 - IM JUST A OWL IN A CHRISTMAS TREE ~ A SEASONABLE BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A lovely fun read that made me smile widely - -- am looking for one of...
November 21st, 2020 06:55 - Shadows & reflections (RDS)
What an emotive write about all things experienced by humans who...
November 21st, 2020 04:25 - UNSAMES (2) 4&5 (Michael Edwards)
Love both the unsames and the picture - - great stuff Mike.
November 21st, 2020 03:10 - This Moment. (Goldfinch60)
Yes there is only this moment and the advice your write gives is essential...
November 21st, 2020 03:08 - Reflections on ecstasy (RDS)
An explosion of glorious togetherness as belonging and its tender...
November 20th, 2020 13:25 - How Far. (Goldfinch60)
Such sound advice dear Andy -- those last two lines say it all - - only...
November 20th, 2020 05:56 - UNSAMES (2) 1-3 (Michael Edwards)
Well done Sebastian for taking up the five mile challenge and more power...
November 20th, 2020 03:29 - Windfallen (Neville)
Drowning in your fruitiest description of apple harvest reminds me of...
November 19th, 2020 04:56 - PRECOGNITION (Michael Edwards)
Super write Michael - - I love every well chosen word.
November 19th, 2020 03:27 - Isle of Skye (Clara)
An enchanting read Clara - This poetic picture and altogether delightful...
November 18th, 2020 22:30 - Beginner to Winner. (Goldfinch60)
Tryers who get up once they drop are worth copying as your fine verse says...
November 18th, 2020 11:39 - Trench Life (Neville)
Razor-sharp versing of nightly horrors when war blocked all quiet - your...
November 18th, 2020 05:28 - Gone (Neville)
So moving these words of appeal to a special someone - -- gone only in...
November 16th, 2020 15:43 - please, so much (Dusk arising)
Ha - - yes you were right on with your assessment D.A. and I remember...
November 16th, 2020 06:43 - A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville)
Lessons learned by this reader from your two short lines my perceptive...
November 15th, 2020 08:49 - AS TIME GOES BY ~ A CLASSIC PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Memories made poetic by your nostalgic picture, song and pantoum - - well...
November 15th, 2020 08:19 - LIFETIME (Dove)
Oh lovely -- - all through the loving tender appeal makes its claims so...
November 14th, 2020 13:39 - Happy Diwali 2020 (Suresh)
Good to see you posting again Suresh - - wishing you happy memories of...
November 14th, 2020 05:39 - Love Is How It Feels (MendedFences27)
The lilt and flow of this tender love-song feels just right for my first...
November 12th, 2020 23:38 - Sugar Coated. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful scene and you capture its grace so well my friend.
November 12th, 2020 16:43 - Better for Seeing (Sylviasearcher)
Loud applause for this perfectly created piece of poetic positivity - -...
November 12th, 2020 12:56 - my dreams light (Dusk arising)
And what better tribute to the beautiful moon than your verse today D.A....
November 12th, 2020 07:51 - to end all wars (Dusk arising)
Numberless markers set out as remembrance of youth sacrificed and backed...
November 11th, 2020 07:40 - Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.)
Good to see you put this little tribute to Our Tune into you list of...
November 10th, 2020 11:56 - Love will find a way (Poetic Dan)
Keep on dancing in that river of dreams Dan - a lovely and inspiring read.
November 10th, 2020 10:16 - Seas of Dreams (Dove)
What a wonderful flow to this romantic verse - - a delightfully dreamy...
November 9th, 2020 13:02 - it saddens me (Dusk arising)
I remember a documentary about that tragic affair and the Highland...
November 9th, 2020 11:37 - Ode to the snail (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
A miracle wrapped in an awesome shell is paid special tribute in your...
November 9th, 2020 11:29 - PRESIDENT OF USA ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 2 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Interesting read on what and on who America selected - - thanks dear duo...
November 9th, 2020 11:24 - Gospel Glories - Isaiah Series (19) (Orchidee)
Those first two lines took me back to times we had to memorize a choral...
November 9th, 2020 11:16 - The Unknown Is Out There. (Goldfinch60)
Your spiritual thoughts when walking make my day when on reading I almost...
November 9th, 2020 11:12 - Somewhere Between Trees (Neville)
The golden and treasured moments of love seep through every short line of...
November 9th, 2020 07:21 - 🧡 AMERICA 🤍 AMERICA 💙 ~ ACROSTIC 7 - 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Viewing its beauty only in pictures I have come to respect the vastness of...
November 8th, 2020 14:54 - War Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor)
You capture the feelings of poets who with experience of war tried to...
November 8th, 2020 14:49 - they never leave you (revisited) (Dusk arising)
The truth of these lines are shown in every old face who went there, did...
November 8th, 2020 09:15 - Nevafar (Neville)
Ah --- \"I will come back\" How compelling the sounds of those words from...
November 8th, 2020 09:05 - Harry (Doggerel Dave)
What an interesting read and a surprising end to the tale of Harry the...
November 7th, 2020 03:42 - Unity of Opposites (Neville)
Relatable words on how easy co-existence can be achieved my friend and...
November 7th, 2020 03:32 - Lockdown Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Loving this light-hearted approach to a further lockdown - your pie...
November 6th, 2020 14:18 - things to come (Dusk arising)
A scare of a read dear friend -- and so aptly formed with sombre wording ...
November 6th, 2020 14:16 - Roosting (Neville)
The voice of a she-bird calling from below the auditory level means the...
November 4th, 2020 13:46 - Peevish Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Ha - yes indeed Kevin most poets give way to ranting etc at senseless...
November 2nd, 2020 04:12 - CHRISTMAS PRESENTS ~ CHRISTMAS SPENDING ~ SIX RHYMING QUATRAINS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your list of no-no pressies raised a smile dear duo - these all too...
November 2nd, 2020 04:09 - Little Shepherdesses (Neville)
Ha - - for some reason this write reminded me of the olde ballad -...
November 1st, 2020 06:40 - MAKE ME (Amon)
An inventive and poetic love song penned with devotion which a fortunate...
October 31st, 2020 04:15 - Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Many thanks Amon for adding this piece to your list of favourites. Am so...
October 31st, 2020 04:11 - And So the Waves Whispered... (Dove)
A wonderfully calming read Dove -- especially liked the continued flow...
October 30th, 2020 08:34 - Summit of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Such a moving read dear Andy - may you continue to reach happiness as you...
October 30th, 2020 07:20 - Depression (L. B. Mek)
Ah your pen images it well this wide-spread depression - - a write to...
October 30th, 2020 07:19 - listen and lay back (Dusk arising)
Am on my way D.A. - - just the ticket for me today.......... love this...
October 30th, 2020 07:07 - Language and Music. (Goldfinch60)
If anyone can write on the language of music it has to be you dear Andy -...
October 29th, 2020 16:06 - I AM (Trenz Pruca)
I can relate to each line in this superb conception of the life we all...
October 29th, 2020 05:40 - UNSAME (2) (Michael Edwards)
Whooooo - Michael that artwork is more than superb - love your wit in...
October 29th, 2020 05:11 - Faithful Following - Isaiah Series (14) (Orchidee)
Yes peace is what we all need - - good write my friend.
October 29th, 2020 04:59 - Innerness (Neville)
Wildness inside - that holds a truth when boundaries are shattered by...
October 28th, 2020 04:49 - Tides of Fortune. (Goldfinch60)
Yes dear friend - your words well bring out the changes that life may...
October 28th, 2020 03:52 - ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER (Michael Edwards)
I wholly agree with the irks you feel Michael on bad pronunciation - -...
October 28th, 2020 03:47 - My Place of Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Am so glad to have have caught this wonderful piece after your walk round...
October 28th, 2020 03:36 - Hiding Behind New Dust (Neville)
Beauty tho\' dust-trapped finds ways through to let shine its attraction...
October 27th, 2020 11:02 - Unruly (L. B. Mek)
Top drawer writing on need for true self-expression when composing...
October 26th, 2020 04:57 - Dawn (Steve Unruh)
A breathtaking read of dawn\' wonder - you captured the changes made so...
October 25th, 2020 06:10 - Borrowed Time (BoxMyHeart)
Yes this feels like a song in the making along with the right music - -...
October 25th, 2020 05:30 - The beat of your tune (Lili Ahlam)
Welcome to M.P.S Lili and with this haunt of a read on the power of...
October 25th, 2020 05:27 - fallen dreams (Dusk arising)
Ah - a classic for sure this write of powerful imagery which draws this...
October 25th, 2020 05:21 - Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
Ye life is often what we see and make for ourselves my friend - our...
October 25th, 2020 03:44 - In The Last Century. (Goldfinch60)
It seems like such a long time ago to say the last century but how true it...
October 25th, 2020 02:39 - Beyond Broke (Neville)
Seriously good this concise diagnosis of delusion my...
October 24th, 2020 11:58 - Scary Sister -- A Fun Halloween Poem For My Kids (BlueHeron77)
So good to know that your growing family have love and security from a...
October 22nd, 2020 02:14 - Chemistry of Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Yes love has a chemistry deeper than any humanity has yet to discover - a...
October 20th, 2020 11:32 - Los Echoes (Neville)
Freeing feelings from guilt makes former clandestine days full of meaning...
October 20th, 2020 05:20 - A CURRY A WEEK ~ SAVES LIVES ! ~ TEN RHYMING DOUBLETS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Curries described so lightheartedly here dear duo - - - not too keen on...
October 20th, 2020 01:52 - go then (Dusk arising)
A heart-tugging read from the first line to the last - losing a much...
October 19th, 2020 03:09 - bored through overkill (Dusk arising)
I second your outcry D.A. about being bored by continual media attention...
October 18th, 2020 02:00 - Driving Into Daylight. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful title for all sorts of subjects but the one you chose of...
October 17th, 2020 05:00 - A NEW DOOR (Michael Edwards)
Best wishes for Jeanne\'s full recovery as you take good care that she...
October 17th, 2020 02:37
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