Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Faith Through Fears (Orchidee)
Faith despite fear is described so well here Orchi.
December 23rd, 2020 17:01 - Happy Birthday Chet. (Goldfinch60)
Ah great sound Andy - -Chet B. will ever remain in my choicest list of...
December 23rd, 2020 16:59 - A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS (Michael Edwards)
Got it and love it my friend and the wery same wishes to - - hic - ...
December 23rd, 2020 12:38 - The Kiss (SerenWise)
Your choice of right words for this love poem drew my mind into a similar...
December 18th, 2020 03:46 - When you\'re miles away (MendedFences27)
A gentle but powerful lament Phil. - - as your words aptly say - -each...
December 11th, 2020 02:51 - PLEASE RECYCLE GLASS ! FIVE QUATRAINS & A DOUBLET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Could not agree more dear duo - glass has so many uses and as for me I...
December 10th, 2020 16:54 - HERITAGE (Thomas J. Dooley)
Much food for thought in these well chosen lines my friend. Our heritage...
December 9th, 2020 08:34 - Turning And Trusting (Orchidee)
Thanks for sharing these words of appeal - - a fine write Orchi.....
December 9th, 2020 03:54 - Tapestry of Words. (Goldfinch60)
Applause indeed dear Andy for this tribute to poetic words that coated...
December 9th, 2020 03:22 - destiny (Dusk arising)
What a wonderfully well-written and positive first read of my day that...
December 9th, 2020 03:17 - CHRISTMAS CRACKERS ~ TRADITION ! ~ A BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Tradition of crackers have always excited the child in me - old fashioned...
December 8th, 2020 17:18 - Happy Birthday Joyce. (Goldfinch60)
Your loving words on this special day as a tribute to Joyce and in...
December 8th, 2020 12:45 - Vermeil (Neville)
Such a gentle old-fashioned tribute to sentimentality when politeness wins...
December 8th, 2020 07:12 - Never too late, to reflect (L. B. Mek)
This is surely the best letter that could be written to a goading bully - ...
December 7th, 2020 09:21 - Swansong (Neville)
Don\'t we all have that same illusion mon ami ? The inevitable occurs and...
December 7th, 2020 08:48 - I pluck the sun from my pocket (Trenz Pruca)
What a truly positive and well crafted piece as a first read of my morning...
December 7th, 2020 03:35 - Brubeck Lives On. (Goldfinch60)
What a talent and what an unforgettable sound Brubeck made in his day - ...
December 7th, 2020 03:09 - Carbonito de Sophie (Neville)
A sagaciously delicate verse with such clever usage of word-definitions...
December 6th, 2020 03:53 - Sense Perception (Suresh)
First rate writing which puts the two sides of each sense so engagingly...
December 5th, 2020 17:19 - PASSION OVERHEATED (Michael Edwards)
Laughter that comes from humour makes the whole world light up with ...
December 5th, 2020 17:12 - She Was Standing There. (Goldfinch60)
A heart-rending read of love which defies every parting my dear friend - -...
December 5th, 2020 17:06 - Groundhog Day (Neville)
The passing of things and of those held so dear makes love and...
December 5th, 2020 16:59 - The Gift of Love (Dove)
Whatever and for whom Love is always a treasure as this lovely verse...
December 4th, 2020 14:14 - of Destiny (L. B. Mek)
An incredible imagery-filled poem on what love means as time passes and...
December 4th, 2020 05:43 - Manifesto or Look Beyond the Name. (Doggerel Dave)
Liberation has first place with all those who refuse to be sheep without...
December 3rd, 2020 06:39 - Strictly, Here I Come! (Goldfinch60)
Am tapping my feet to the number and smiling at imagining you dancing...
December 3rd, 2020 06:35 - MORNING HAS BROKEN ~ AGAIN AMEN ! ~ A BALLAD (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loved this positive read Brian - the flow and the rhyme brought to life...
December 2nd, 2020 17:09 - RECALLING (Michael Edwards)
Michael your stylish verses always leave me with wanting more and today\'s...
December 2nd, 2020 17:04 - In reflection (RDS)
A lovely word-entanglement which flows and gyrates to captivate readers in...
December 2nd, 2020 16:51 - Soul Satisfaction (Orchidee)
A very comforting read my friend - - and expertly crafted.
December 2nd, 2020 16:46 - With Nature Once More (Goldfinch60)
You verse the sunrise so beautifully Andy - - that poetic walk took me too...
December 2nd, 2020 13:26 - CAD. (Goldfinch60)
Ah yes - -- road-bounders and cads are everywhere Andy whatever their...
December 2nd, 2020 03:33 - OF LOVE WRITTEN (RDS)
A wonderful scent of foreverness pervades the read of this tribute to...
November 30th, 2020 13:35 - Life Changer. (Goldfinch60)
you have crafted well this universal truth my friend that our self and no...
November 30th, 2020 13:30 - Remaining Span (Suresh)
A needed and well crafted reminder that time spent reviewing the past...
November 30th, 2020 05:36 - AUTUMN TO WINTER ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A grand acrostic highlighting the wonders of winter which helps to explain...
November 30th, 2020 03:04 - A beggars banquet (RDS)
Yes - couldn\'t be bettered - such a kick of new breath in this amended...
November 29th, 2020 10:16 - A beggars banquet (RDS)
The fuel of fantastic imagery makes this verse a delight to read though...
November 29th, 2020 08:49 - GENDER NEUTRAL (Michael Edwards)
I laughed out loud at some of these hilarious alterations dear Michael - -...
November 29th, 2020 08:41 - In the End (Neville)
Back for a second read of your 757 on shared truth of humanity\'s common...
November 29th, 2020 03:58 - Hark, A Herald (Orchidee)
Sharing good news is an example of love - a good read dear Orchi.
November 29th, 2020 03:03 - Decisive (Fay Slimm.)
Thanks a load for adding this poem to your list of favourites Trenz
November 28th, 2020 13:45 - Tell Them (Tayama)
Telling those dearest and nearest how much they mean to your life is so...
November 28th, 2020 12:01 - We are not in control (Tayama)
Short and to the point this piece on t the spirit of love - I look...
November 28th, 2020 11:54 - Love First (Tayama)
Yes showing love instead of the list of alternatives would be a wise way...
November 28th, 2020 11:51 - 20 ways of dying and 20 hopes to live for (RDS)
A mélange of combined ways my friend of saying a last goodbye to this...
November 28th, 2020 05:03 - summer No 17 (Dusk arising)
Ah - -- as the song said - -\"Those were the days my friend - We thought...
November 28th, 2020 04:15 - In the End (Neville)
There is no escape from this bit of truth. as your three liner powerfully...
November 28th, 2020 03:40 - Clarity of Remembrance within Gratitude (L. B. Mek)
My eyes too have been opened by this poetic outing of genocide and my...
November 27th, 2020 11:06 - Cannabis Cool (A Nonsense Poem) (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A very clever nonsense poem that calls for another reading dear Alan - - I...
November 27th, 2020 10:57 - Idyllic Inspiration - Isaiah Series (28) (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi and thank you for sharing the news of new heavens new...
November 27th, 2020 10:53 - My Lady Was a Poem (Neville)
Once a minion of written memory and although now aged this lady will live...
November 27th, 2020 05:40 - Where Nobody Has Gone Before. (Goldfinch60)
Ha - - up-cycling the old to give a trendy new face just gave me my first...
November 27th, 2020 04:19 - there and here (Dusk arising)
A gentle reminder that limbs can bud best when mature - colours of love...
November 27th, 2020 04:04 - THANKSGIVING FOR THE USA ~ SEVEN BALANCED QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An informative read on Thanksgiving that leaves us wishing unity and...
November 26th, 2020 17:03 - Me & my Singing Bowl (Neville)
The gender of this graceful but potent relationship makes the singing-bowl...
November 26th, 2020 12:10 - the long goodnight (Dusk arising)
Had to read this over again before I could not find words to describe the...
November 24th, 2020 13:45 - Those Who Would Love Light (Neville)
This bouquet of exquisite medley carries the scent of true poetic talent...
November 24th, 2020 12:16 - MISS SYLLA BERLES (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - loved both the verse and the reference to misgivings when...
November 23rd, 2020 04:57 - With a ball at their feet (L. B. Mek)
Thrill of the game captured with detailed imagery throws this well-crafted...
November 23rd, 2020 04:51 - Another Golden Dawn (Neville)
Much food for thought in this little gem. After the light is gone unclear...
November 22nd, 2020 18:02 - Need (Christina8)
Wow - how alive you make the scene of coupling pleasure my friend - A...
November 22nd, 2020 03:30 - Practical Perusals (Orchidee)
Good and sound sense in all these well presented lines dear Orchi.
November 21st, 2020 12:22 - In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude (Dove)
A touching read Dove - your versing of emotional togetherness is so clear...
November 21st, 2020 12:21 - My Joy (Christina8)
Grand to read of your joy at this time of year dear Christina - - what a...
November 21st, 2020 10:37 - Aperitif (Neville)
What a fortunate she to be receiving such mouth-watering reminders that...
November 21st, 2020 09:27 - IM JUST A OWL IN A CHRISTMAS TREE ~ A SEASONABLE BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A lovely fun read that made me smile widely - -- am looking for one of...
November 21st, 2020 06:55 - Shadows & reflections (RDS)
What an emotive write about all things experienced by humans who...
November 21st, 2020 04:25 - UNSAMES (2) 4&5 (Michael Edwards)
Love both the unsames and the picture - - great stuff Mike.
November 21st, 2020 03:10 - This Moment. (Goldfinch60)
Yes there is only this moment and the advice your write gives is essential...
November 21st, 2020 03:08 - Reflections on ecstasy (RDS)
An explosion of glorious togetherness as belonging and its tender...
November 20th, 2020 13:25 - How Far. (Goldfinch60)
Such sound advice dear Andy -- those last two lines say it all - - only...
November 20th, 2020 05:56 - UNSAMES (2) 1-3 (Michael Edwards)
Well done Sebastian for taking up the five mile challenge and more power...
November 20th, 2020 03:29 - Windfallen (Neville)
Drowning in your fruitiest description of apple harvest reminds me of...
November 19th, 2020 04:56 - PRECOGNITION (Michael Edwards)
Super write Michael - - I love every well chosen word.
November 19th, 2020 03:27 - Isle of Skye (Clara)
An enchanting read Clara - This poetic picture and altogether delightful...
November 18th, 2020 22:30 - Beginner to Winner. (Goldfinch60)
Tryers who get up once they drop are worth copying as your fine verse says...
November 18th, 2020 11:39 - Trench Life (Neville)
Razor-sharp versing of nightly horrors when war blocked all quiet - your...
November 18th, 2020 05:28 - Gone (Neville)
So moving these words of appeal to a special someone - -- gone only in...
November 16th, 2020 15:43 - please, so much (Dusk arising)
Ha - - yes you were right on with your assessment D.A. and I remember...
November 16th, 2020 06:43 - A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville)
Lessons learned by this reader from your two short lines my perceptive...
November 15th, 2020 08:49 - AS TIME GOES BY ~ A CLASSIC PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Memories made poetic by your nostalgic picture, song and pantoum - - well...
November 15th, 2020 08:19 - LIFETIME (Dove)
Oh lovely -- - all through the loving tender appeal makes its claims so...
November 14th, 2020 13:39 - Happy Diwali 2020 (Suresh)
Good to see you posting again Suresh - - wishing you happy memories of...
November 14th, 2020 05:39 - Love Is How It Feels (MendedFences27)
The lilt and flow of this tender love-song feels just right for my first...
November 12th, 2020 23:38 - Sugar Coated. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful scene and you capture its grace so well my friend.
November 12th, 2020 16:43 - Better for Seeing (Sylviasearcher)
Loud applause for this perfectly created piece of poetic positivity - -...
November 12th, 2020 12:56 - my dreams light (Dusk arising)
And what better tribute to the beautiful moon than your verse today D.A....
November 12th, 2020 07:51 - to end all wars (Dusk arising)
Numberless markers set out as remembrance of youth sacrificed and backed...
November 11th, 2020 07:40 - Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.)
Good to see you put this little tribute to Our Tune into you list of...
November 10th, 2020 11:56 - Love will find a way (Poetic Dan)
Keep on dancing in that river of dreams Dan - a lovely and inspiring read.
November 10th, 2020 10:16 - Seas of Dreams (Dove)
What a wonderful flow to this romantic verse - - a delightfully dreamy...
November 9th, 2020 13:02 - it saddens me (Dusk arising)
I remember a documentary about that tragic affair and the Highland...
November 9th, 2020 11:37 - Ode to the snail (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
A miracle wrapped in an awesome shell is paid special tribute in your...
November 9th, 2020 11:29 - PRESIDENT OF USA ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 2 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Interesting read on what and on who America selected - - thanks dear duo...
November 9th, 2020 11:24 - Gospel Glories - Isaiah Series (19) (Orchidee)
Those first two lines took me back to times we had to memorize a choral...
November 9th, 2020 11:16 - The Unknown Is Out There. (Goldfinch60)
Your spiritual thoughts when walking make my day when on reading I almost...
November 9th, 2020 11:12 - Somewhere Between Trees (Neville)
The golden and treasured moments of love seep through every short line of...
November 9th, 2020 07:21 - 🧡 AMERICA 🤍 AMERICA 💙 ~ ACROSTIC 7 - 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Viewing its beauty only in pictures I have come to respect the vastness of...
November 8th, 2020 14:54 - War Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor)
You capture the feelings of poets who with experience of war tried to...
November 8th, 2020 14:49
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