Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm. at My poetic side

Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

Life Changer. (Goldfinch60) you have crafted well this universal truth my friend that our self and no...
November 30th, 2020 13:30
Remaining Span (Suresh) A needed and well crafted reminder that time spent reviewing the past...
November 30th, 2020 05:36
AUTUMN TO WINTER ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) A grand acrostic highlighting the wonders of winter which helps to explain...
November 30th, 2020 03:04
A beggars banquet (RDS) Yes - couldn\'t be bettered - such a kick of new breath in this amended...
November 29th, 2020 10:16
A beggars banquet (RDS) The fuel of fantastic imagery makes this verse a delight to read though...
November 29th, 2020 08:49
GENDER NEUTRAL (Michael Edwards) I laughed out loud at some of these hilarious alterations dear Michael - -...
November 29th, 2020 08:41
In the End (Neville) Back for a second read of your 757 on shared truth of humanity\'s common...
November 29th, 2020 03:58
Hark, A Herald (Orchidee) Sharing good news is an example of love - a good read dear Orchi.
November 29th, 2020 03:03
Decisive (Fay Slimm.) Thanks a load for adding this poem to your list of favourites Trenz
November 28th, 2020 13:45
Tell Them (Tayama) Telling those dearest and nearest how much they mean to your life is so...
November 28th, 2020 12:01
We are not in control (Tayama) Short and to the point this piece on t the spirit of love - I look...
November 28th, 2020 11:54
Love First (Tayama) Yes showing love instead of the list of alternatives would be a wise way...
November 28th, 2020 11:51
20 ways of dying and 20 hopes to live for (RDS) A mélange of combined ways my friend of saying a last goodbye to this...
November 28th, 2020 05:03
summer No 17 (Dusk arising) Ah - -- as the song said - -\"Those were the days my friend - We thought...
November 28th, 2020 04:15
In the End (Neville) There is no escape from this bit of truth. as your three liner powerfully...
November 28th, 2020 03:40
Clarity of Remembrance within Gratitude (L. B. Mek) My eyes too have been opened by this poetic outing of genocide and my...
November 27th, 2020 11:06
Cannabis Cool (A Nonsense Poem) (Alan .S. Jeeves) A very clever nonsense poem that calls for another reading dear Alan - - I...
November 27th, 2020 10:57
Idyllic Inspiration - Isaiah Series (28) (Orchidee) Fine write Orchi and thank you for sharing the news of new heavens new...
November 27th, 2020 10:53
My Lady Was a Poem (Neville) Once a minion of written memory and although now aged this lady will live...
November 27th, 2020 05:40
Where Nobody Has Gone Before. (Goldfinch60) Ha - - up-cycling the old to give a trendy new face just gave me my first...
November 27th, 2020 04:19
there and here (Dusk arising) A gentle reminder that limbs can bud best when mature - colours of love...
November 27th, 2020 04:04
THANKSGIVING FOR THE USA ~ SEVEN BALANCED QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN) An informative read on Thanksgiving that leaves us wishing unity and...
November 26th, 2020 17:03
Me & my Singing Bowl (Neville) The gender of this graceful but potent relationship makes the singing-bowl...
November 26th, 2020 12:10
the long goodnight (Dusk arising) Had to read this over again before I could not find words to describe the...
November 24th, 2020 13:45
Those Who Would Love Light (Neville) This bouquet of exquisite medley carries the scent of true poetic talent...
November 24th, 2020 12:16
MISS SYLLA BERLES (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - - loved both the verse and the reference to misgivings when...
November 23rd, 2020 04:57
With a ball at their feet (L. B. Mek) Thrill of the game captured with detailed imagery throws this well-crafted...
November 23rd, 2020 04:51
Another Golden Dawn (Neville) Much food for thought in this little gem. After the light is gone unclear...
November 22nd, 2020 18:02
Need (Christina8) Wow - how alive you make the scene of coupling pleasure my friend - A...
November 22nd, 2020 03:30
Practical Perusals (Orchidee) Good and sound sense in all these well presented lines dear Orchi.
November 21st, 2020 12:22
In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude (Dove) A touching read Dove - your versing of emotional togetherness is so clear...
November 21st, 2020 12:21
My Joy (Christina8) Grand to read of your joy at this time of year dear Christina - - what a...
November 21st, 2020 10:37
Aperitif (Neville) What a fortunate she to be receiving such mouth-watering reminders that...
November 21st, 2020 09:27
IM JUST A OWL IN A CHRISTMAS TREE ~ A SEASONABLE BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) A lovely fun read that made me smile widely - -- am looking for one of...
November 21st, 2020 06:55
Shadows & reflections (RDS) What an emotive write about all things experienced by humans who...
November 21st, 2020 04:25
UNSAMES (2) 4&5 (Michael Edwards) Love both the unsames and the picture - - great stuff Mike.
November 21st, 2020 03:10
This Moment. (Goldfinch60) Yes there is only this moment and the advice your write gives is essential...
November 21st, 2020 03:08
Reflections on ecstasy (RDS) An explosion of glorious togetherness as belonging and its tender...
November 20th, 2020 13:25
How Far. (Goldfinch60) Such sound advice dear Andy -- those last two lines say it all - - only...
November 20th, 2020 05:56
UNSAMES (2) 1-3 (Michael Edwards) Well done Sebastian for taking up the five mile challenge and more power...
November 20th, 2020 03:29
Windfallen (Neville) Drowning in your fruitiest description of apple harvest reminds me of...
November 19th, 2020 04:56
PRECOGNITION (Michael Edwards) Super write Michael - - I love every well chosen word.
November 19th, 2020 03:27
Isle of Skye (Clara) An enchanting read Clara - This poetic picture and altogether delightful...
November 18th, 2020 22:30
Beginner to Winner. (Goldfinch60) Tryers who get up once they drop are worth copying as your fine verse says...
November 18th, 2020 11:39
Trench Life (Neville) Razor-sharp versing of nightly horrors when war blocked all quiet - your...
November 18th, 2020 05:28
Gone (Neville) So moving these words of appeal to a special someone - -- gone only in...
November 16th, 2020 15:43
please, so much (Dusk arising) Ha - - yes you were right on with your assessment D.A. and I remember...
November 16th, 2020 06:43
A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville) Lessons learned by this reader from your two short lines my perceptive...
November 15th, 2020 08:49
AS TIME GOES BY ~ A CLASSIC PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) Memories made poetic by your nostalgic picture, song and pantoum - - well...
November 15th, 2020 08:19
LIFETIME (Dove) Oh lovely -- - all through the loving tender appeal makes its claims so...
November 14th, 2020 13:39
Happy Diwali 2020 (Suresh) Good to see you posting again Suresh - - wishing you happy memories of...
November 14th, 2020 05:39
Love Is How It Feels (MendedFences27) The lilt and flow of this tender love-song feels just right for my first...
November 12th, 2020 23:38
Sugar Coated. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful scene and you capture its grace so well my friend.
November 12th, 2020 16:43
Better for Seeing (Sylviasearcher) Loud applause for this perfectly created piece of poetic positivity - -...
November 12th, 2020 12:56
my dreams light (Dusk arising) And what better tribute to the beautiful moon than your verse today D.A....
November 12th, 2020 07:51
to end all wars (Dusk arising) Numberless markers set out as remembrance of youth sacrificed and backed...
November 11th, 2020 07:40
Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.) Good to see you put this little tribute to Our Tune into you list of...
November 10th, 2020 11:56
Love will find a way (Poetic Dan) Keep on dancing in that river of dreams Dan - a lovely and inspiring read.
November 10th, 2020 10:16
Seas of Dreams (Dove) What a wonderful flow to this romantic verse - - a delightfully dreamy...
November 9th, 2020 13:02
it saddens me (Dusk arising) I remember a documentary about that tragic affair and the Highland...
November 9th, 2020 11:37
Ode to the snail (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) A miracle wrapped in an awesome shell is paid special tribute in your...
November 9th, 2020 11:29
PRESIDENT OF USA ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 2 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Interesting read on what and on who America selected - - thanks dear duo...
November 9th, 2020 11:24
Gospel Glories - Isaiah Series (19) (Orchidee) Those first two lines took me back to times we had to memorize a choral...
November 9th, 2020 11:16
The Unknown Is Out There. (Goldfinch60) Your spiritual thoughts when walking make my day when on reading I almost...
November 9th, 2020 11:12
Somewhere Between Trees (Neville) The golden and treasured moments of love seep through every short line of...
November 9th, 2020 07:21
🧡 AMERICA 🤍 AMERICA 💙 ~ ACROSTIC 7 - 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Viewing its beauty only in pictures I have come to respect the vastness of...
November 8th, 2020 14:54
War Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor) You capture the feelings of poets who with experience of war tried to...
November 8th, 2020 14:49
they never leave you (revisited) (Dusk arising) The truth of these lines are shown in every old face who went there, did...
November 8th, 2020 09:15
Nevafar (Neville) Ah --- \"I will come back\" How compelling the sounds of those words from...
November 8th, 2020 09:05
Harry (Doggerel Dave) What an interesting read and a surprising end to the tale of Harry the...
November 7th, 2020 03:42
Unity of Opposites (Neville) Relatable words on how easy co-existence can be achieved my friend and...
November 7th, 2020 03:32
Lockdown Once More. (Goldfinch60) Loving this light-hearted approach to a further lockdown - your pie...
November 6th, 2020 14:18
things to come (Dusk arising) A scare of a read dear friend -- and so aptly formed with sombre wording ...
November 6th, 2020 14:16
Roosting (Neville) The voice of a she-bird calling from below the auditory level means the...
November 4th, 2020 13:46
Peevish Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor) Ha - yes indeed Kevin most poets give way to ranting etc at senseless...
November 2nd, 2020 04:12
CHRISTMAS PRESENTS ~ CHRISTMAS SPENDING ~ SIX RHYMING QUATRAINS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Your list of no-no pressies raised a smile dear duo - these all too...
November 2nd, 2020 04:09
Little Shepherdesses (Neville) Ha - - for some reason this write reminded me of the olde ballad -...
November 1st, 2020 06:40
MAKE ME (Amon) An inventive and poetic love song penned with devotion which a fortunate...
October 31st, 2020 04:15
Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.) Many thanks Amon for adding this piece to your list of favourites. Am so...
October 31st, 2020 04:11
And So the Waves Whispered... (Dove) A wonderfully calming read Dove -- especially liked the continued flow...
October 30th, 2020 08:34
Summit of Life. (Goldfinch60) Such a moving read dear Andy - may you continue to reach happiness as you...
October 30th, 2020 07:20
Depression (L. B. Mek) Ah your pen images it well this wide-spread depression - - a write to...
October 30th, 2020 07:19
listen and lay back (Dusk arising) Am on my way D.A. - - just the ticket for me today.......... love this...
October 30th, 2020 07:07
Language and Music. (Goldfinch60) If anyone can write on the language of music it has to be you dear Andy -...
October 29th, 2020 16:06
I AM (Trenz Pruca) I can relate to each line in this superb conception of the life we all...
October 29th, 2020 05:40
UNSAME (2) (Michael Edwards) Whooooo - Michael that artwork is more than superb - love your wit in...
October 29th, 2020 05:11
Faithful Following - Isaiah Series (14) (Orchidee) Yes peace is what we all need - - good write my friend.
October 29th, 2020 04:59
Innerness (Neville) Wildness inside - that holds a truth when boundaries are shattered by...
October 28th, 2020 04:49
Tides of Fortune. (Goldfinch60) Yes dear friend - your words well bring out the changes that life may...
October 28th, 2020 03:52
ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER (Michael Edwards) I wholly agree with the irks you feel Michael on bad pronunciation - -...
October 28th, 2020 03:47
My Place of Dreams. (Goldfinch60) Am so glad to have have caught this wonderful piece after your walk round...
October 28th, 2020 03:36
Hiding Behind New Dust (Neville) Beauty tho\' dust-trapped finds ways through to let shine its attraction...
October 27th, 2020 11:02
Unruly (L. B. Mek) Top drawer writing on need for true self-expression when composing...
October 26th, 2020 04:57
Dawn (Steve Unruh) A breathtaking read of dawn\' wonder - you captured the changes made so...
October 25th, 2020 06:10
Borrowed Time (BoxMyHeart) Yes this feels like a song in the making along with the right music - -...
October 25th, 2020 05:30
The beat of your tune (Lili Ahlam) Welcome to M.P.S Lili and with this haunt of a read on the power of...
October 25th, 2020 05:27
fallen dreams (Dusk arising) Ah - a classic for sure this write of powerful imagery which draws this...
October 25th, 2020 05:21
Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60) Ye life is often what we see and make for ourselves my friend - our...
October 25th, 2020 03:44
In The Last Century. (Goldfinch60) It seems like such a long time ago to say the last century but how true it...
October 25th, 2020 02:39
Beyond Broke (Neville) Seriously good this concise diagnosis of delusion my...
October 24th, 2020 11:58

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