Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Scary Sister -- A Fun Halloween Poem For My Kids (BlueHeron77)
So good to know that your growing family have love and security from a...
October 22nd, 2020 02:14 - Chemistry of Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Yes love has a chemistry deeper than any humanity has yet to discover - a...
October 20th, 2020 11:32 - Los Echoes (Neville)
Freeing feelings from guilt makes former clandestine days full of meaning...
October 20th, 2020 05:20 - A CURRY A WEEK ~ SAVES LIVES ! ~ TEN RHYMING DOUBLETS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Curries described so lightheartedly here dear duo - - - not too keen on...
October 20th, 2020 01:52 - go then (Dusk arising)
A heart-tugging read from the first line to the last - losing a much...
October 19th, 2020 03:09 - bored through overkill (Dusk arising)
I second your outcry D.A. about being bored by continual media attention...
October 18th, 2020 02:00 - Driving Into Daylight. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful title for all sorts of subjects but the one you chose of...
October 17th, 2020 05:00 - A NEW DOOR (Michael Edwards)
Best wishes for Jeanne\'s full recovery as you take good care that she...
October 17th, 2020 02:37 - in fields of green (Dusk arising)
Yes the unending gravestones must move every visitor to those foreign...
October 17th, 2020 02:05 - Very,Very Fast Food. (Goldfinch60)
The fun you had in cooking that steak left me with a smile when you...
October 16th, 2020 15:48 - of november fallen (Dusk arising)
Your words bring their own shiver as November peeps through each line - -...
October 16th, 2020 15:45 - Waving at Dolphins (Neville)
The calm of this poemed scene passes into a harbouring dance such as I see...
October 16th, 2020 06:24 - Quarantine Senryu (Lorna)
Hilarious song and loved the Sen......
October 16th, 2020 04:43 - Death Missed. (Goldfinch60)
Your posting is full to the brim of an inspiring and upbuilding outlook on...
October 15th, 2020 07:21 - the downstream tide (Dusk arising)
Love the freestyle you chose for this haunt of a read D.A. - - your pen...
October 15th, 2020 07:18 - Wasps (Neville)
Loving this short and pithy opinion of stingers that prey on sweet flesh...
October 14th, 2020 03:04 - The Arrows of Time (Lorna)
Love this exposure of macho men and what happens when meeting that female...
October 13th, 2020 06:54 - Bring us More Liquor (Neville)
Have learnt a new name with a most gruesome calling from this sombre but...
October 13th, 2020 04:20 - Addiction. (Fay Slimm.)
Dan thanking you most sincerely for adding this piece to your list of...
October 12th, 2020 16:11 - EFFECT OF COVID 19 ~ A 6 3 5 LAMENT SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes each one has been affected in one way or another by hearing of losses...
October 12th, 2020 10:09 - The Four Letter Word (Lorna)
How true your final lines Lorna.- love is elusive and you rhyme the...
October 12th, 2020 06:37 - Where do Dreams Go (Neville)
Sensually potent this verse on what memory dreams before it melts into...
October 12th, 2020 04:01 - Sunshine (Dove)
A pleasure to read such a sun-shiny verse - -- - I enjoyed every warm and...
October 11th, 2020 10:43 - Lunch at My House (Lorna)
Ah Lorna - - I love this kitcheny message of drummed -down catastrophe - ...
October 11th, 2020 05:24 - Yellow Umbrella\'s (Neville)
Methinks that suggestion of love in a dim hallway takes precedence over...
October 11th, 2020 02:48 - Spit it Out (Neville)
With an appeal like this how could anyone refuse to let sleeping dogs lie...
October 10th, 2020 07:42 - LIMERICK No 69 (Michael Edwards)
Oooooh Plumply attractive with curvy assets yet feeling too fat - -- I...
October 10th, 2020 02:12 - a lie became noble (Dusk arising)
Your words capture the whole scene back then Dusk -- the shame of those...
October 10th, 2020 02:05 - Laughter Wins. (Goldfinch60)
Too true Andy - - the words remind me of a saying I heard many moons ago -...
October 10th, 2020 02:02 - Heaven on Earth? (Saxon Crow)
Words of truth and thank you for sharing them S.C.
October 10th, 2020 02:00 - Autumn Rain (Lorna)
Soup followed by chocolate - well that should put paid to the cold of wet...
October 9th, 2020 09:27 - Mile High (Neville)
Icarus would surely agree that the flight with a lover feels mile high...
October 9th, 2020 09:24 - BE OPTIMISTIC ~ THE BEST CHOICE ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes an optimistic outlook is always a winner in facing this troubled world...
October 9th, 2020 07:14 - ...AND... (Michael Edwards)
Bidding on love can be filled with unseen appendages if time allows - --...
October 9th, 2020 04:38 - A return to romance (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Your romantic words swept me away Ron -- and beautiful music too - wht...
October 9th, 2020 02:19 - Wild Company (Lorna)
A positive menage of beautiful wild things and all around your daily...
October 8th, 2020 07:19 - Woollen Stockings (Neville)
You pen a rich encounter with those who make livings from simple...
October 8th, 2020 04:37 - Bucket List Senryu (Lorna)
What better to tick off than Lurve dear Lorna......... fun read.
October 8th, 2020 03:43 - Grab the Day (Trenz Pruca)
Howe true your last sentence Trenz - - this day will not come again so...
October 7th, 2020 13:17 - Cleansing Our Lifetimes. (Goldfinch60)
Yes the rain certainly does cleanse in this toe of Cornwall\'s south west ...
October 7th, 2020 03:24 - FACELESS (Hinnant)
You describe the present fearful condition of faceless communities so...
October 7th, 2020 03:19 - Praise Professions (Orchidee)
We all need restoration of laughter
in these troublesome days dear...
October 7th, 2020 02:54 - Blue Light (Neville)
Apart from concluding the obvious I confess I am all at sea with this...
October 7th, 2020 02:48 - ALPACA SOCKS (Michael Edwards)
I never knew alpacas needed socks but now shall knit some for my flock...
October 7th, 2020 02:29 - Battlegrounds in the Mind (MaddieJ)
Slow and rhythmic the fall of these words down the page give the pace and...
October 7th, 2020 02:10 - For A While (Lorna)
The feel of sad parting oozes through these poignant lines my friend - -...
October 6th, 2020 05:28 - A Solitary Passing (Neville)
The read gave me a picture of the dire situation when on battlefields...
October 6th, 2020 05:27 - New Joys. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful and uplifting read -- joy is there to experience whatever our...
October 5th, 2020 10:56 - You can tell everybody, this is my song (Sylviasearcher)
The superb rhyming in this raw piece of deep introspection draws out the...
October 5th, 2020 10:52 - Attrition (Neville)
Oh what a meaningful title to your reminder of what not to do - - --
-...
October 5th, 2020 08:05 - THE TIDE (Michael Edwards)
Now that is an innovative way of putting it - - agreed the tide indeed...
October 5th, 2020 02:41 - Mr. Mediocre (Neville)
Hurt and feelin\' alone \"Mediocre\" this man is certainly not - for with...
October 4th, 2020 05:37 - STRUCK (Michael Edwards)
Fits of giggles galore after reading your little beauty today.
October 4th, 2020 03:31 - the sea (Dusk arising)
Am highly honoured D.A.that my few words brought from your pen this moving...
October 4th, 2020 03:28 - WHAT A MUPPET (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - you never fail to make me smile with your inherent wit my dear...
October 3rd, 2020 07:29 - keeping it to myself (Dusk arising)
Oh the sorrow in these few lines - the loss of the feel of being loved in...
October 3rd, 2020 07:26 - The Winds on Which We Sail (Lorna)
A squall brings excitement when we are in love with the feel of sailing in...
October 3rd, 2020 05:49 - The Moon & Stars (Dove)
Loud applause for this wonderful villanelle - well done again D.......
October 3rd, 2020 04:16 - Some Words are not Just Words (Neville)
What a compelling title and a truly endearing thought about words Nev. -...
October 3rd, 2020 02:58 - Prepped (Neville)
Oh yes - Agreed that yang is for those who are angry but yieldingly yin...
October 2nd, 2020 07:49 - Palette of the Day (Lorna)
Love the inventive imagery you use in this gem of a write Lorna - - - I...
October 2nd, 2020 07:09 - The World at My Table. (Goldfinch60)
Inviting the world to join you at table sounds better than waiting in line...
October 2nd, 2020 05:44 - Gracious Guidance (Orchidee)
An inspiring prayer - thanks for sharing it Orchi.
October 2nd, 2020 04:37 - Was it just a Dream (Dove)
Yes unhurried and flowing slowly your verse depicts differing depths of...
October 1st, 2020 13:17 - Carolyn (Lorna)
A beautifully penned scene and sung so invitingly by a favourite...
October 1st, 2020 03:44 - Autumn\'s Glory. (Goldfinch60)
Oh what a glorious season your words describe dear Andy and as with me...
October 1st, 2020 02:47 - A WINTER NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Despite the shiver after perusing the poem I vote this a perfect...
October 1st, 2020 02:41 - Oblivious (Neville)
Your write so cleverly roused this reader\'s attention to the past tense...
October 1st, 2020 02:34 - SHADES OF GREEN ~ ANGELA ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - green - - my favourite colour too - a lovely card showing all the...
September 30th, 2020 13:30 - Entirely Gone (Lorna)
Welcome back Lorna - you have been missed and this sad posting tells why...
September 30th, 2020 11:31 - “Sonnet” From the Ashes (Dove)
A bouquet of romantic reasons why flicker remains once love has fades - ...
September 30th, 2020 10:54 - A Patchwork of Ashes (Neville)
This read with its unique ending left me with a smile despite its artful...
September 30th, 2020 03:24 - lies to kill for (Dusk arising)
Yes so true D.A. - faith in dogma can poison forgiveness -- your...
September 30th, 2020 03:01 - Laughter For All. (Goldfinch60)
The best of all healers is laughter and you shared well in that on both...
September 30th, 2020 02:24 - Long Days (Whimsical_1)
Yes long days of frustration indeed and thank you for versing the reasons...
September 29th, 2020 16:17 - seeing ..... her way (Dusk arising)
Wow - A first rate description of how words can take us on journeys of...
September 29th, 2020 16:09 - Together (Fay Slimm.)
Many thanks Dan and D.A. for your read and for adding Together into your...
September 29th, 2020 11:31 - ODE TO~SPIDER~WEB ~ AN ACROSTIC 3 2 6 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A much needed ode to the beauty of spider-webs and so thankful to hear you...
September 29th, 2020 08:47 - No hiding here! (Poetic Dan)
A top drawer write Dan and one that I will read over again for a long time...
September 29th, 2020 05:17 - Shallow Brown. (Goldfinch60)
You poem the wonder of music so well in this lovely verse dear Andy - -...
September 29th, 2020 03:06 - Michaelmas Melody (Orchidee)
Michaelmas explained very well
- - thanking you Orchi.
September 29th, 2020 03:04 - Come-a-Day (Neville)
A heart tugger for sure this poignant use of a walk through nature which...
September 29th, 2020 02:53 - The Interview (MendedFences27)
I could not help but read this tale again and again before writing a...
September 28th, 2020 16:23 - GINGERBREAD~MAN~BLUES A TRIOLET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Glad your own gingerbread man meets all requirements my lovely - - we...
September 28th, 2020 13:19 - Making His Way Home (Neville)
Love songs need a finish and home seems the place in which they like to...
September 28th, 2020 08:17 - Beautiful Sunflower (Jacob Mead)
You poem the glorious Sunflower so well here my friend. It certainly sings...
September 28th, 2020 03:47 - rude Awakenings (L. B. Mek)
A familiar picture your impressive pen paints behind many drawn curtains...
September 28th, 2020 03:44 - Will She Sing to Me? (Goldfinch60)
A sincere thank you for sharing that moment here Andy - I can feel what...
September 28th, 2020 02:25 - “ Promises of Vows (Dove)
Triolet or not this write about vows raises many a question in the hearts...
September 27th, 2020 13:20 - Hope is There. (Goldfinch60)
Loud applause for the message your words state today dear Andy - - action...
September 27th, 2020 04:02 - SO IT\'S SUNDAY (Michael Edwards)
A Sunday tale to which many relate - where does the chance go for a drink...
September 27th, 2020 04:00 - Discarded 2 (Neville)
The love and care shown will be remembered by those who received when...
September 27th, 2020 03:54 - Transmutation (Laura🌻)
Such a perceptive outlook on love and its power to transmute so that...
September 27th, 2020 03:42 - Words (MendedFences27)
You have poemed the power of words so well here Phil - - great read.
September 27th, 2020 02:43 - Song of a poor scavenger. (Trenz Pruca)
Oh how true these few well chosen words on what is wasted daily by the...
September 26th, 2020 16:14 - Cheese Straws. (Goldfinch60)
Wow - how weird dear Andy - do your cheese straws just like mine do a...
September 26th, 2020 03:10 - GWYNEDD (Michael Edwards)
An inviting description of Welsh beauty no doubt Mike while the...
September 26th, 2020 03:07 - All the Ends of Me (Neville)
Powerful imagery makes this write outstanding with its poetic appeal that...
September 26th, 2020 03:01 - Gospel Given (Orchidee)
We all need good news to build up our faith - fine write Orchi.
September 25th, 2020 16:19 - LITTER LOUTS ~A SALUTARY PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Agree wholeheartedly with every stanza - litter is really a measure of...
September 25th, 2020 16:16
« Return to the profile of Fay Slimm.
