Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- they never leave you (revisited) (Dusk arising)
The truth of these lines are shown in every old face who went there, did...
November 8th, 2020 09:15 - Nevafar (Neville)
Ah --- \"I will come back\" How compelling the sounds of those words from...
November 8th, 2020 09:05 - Harry (Doggerel Dave)
What an interesting read and a surprising end to the tale of Harry the...
November 7th, 2020 03:42 - Unity of Opposites (Neville)
Relatable words on how easy co-existence can be achieved my friend and...
November 7th, 2020 03:32 - Lockdown Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Loving this light-hearted approach to a further lockdown - your pie...
November 6th, 2020 14:18 - things to come (Dusk arising)
A scare of a read dear friend -- and so aptly formed with sombre wording ...
November 6th, 2020 14:16 - Roosting (Neville)
The voice of a she-bird calling from below the auditory level means the...
November 4th, 2020 13:46 - Peevish Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Ha - yes indeed Kevin most poets give way to ranting etc at senseless...
November 2nd, 2020 04:12 - CHRISTMAS PRESENTS ~ CHRISTMAS SPENDING ~ SIX RHYMING QUATRAINS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your list of no-no pressies raised a smile dear duo - these all too...
November 2nd, 2020 04:09 - Little Shepherdesses (Neville)
Ha - - for some reason this write reminded me of the olde ballad -...
November 1st, 2020 06:40 - MAKE ME (Amon)
An inventive and poetic love song penned with devotion which a fortunate...
October 31st, 2020 04:15 - Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Many thanks Amon for adding this piece to your list of favourites. Am so...
October 31st, 2020 04:11 - And So the Waves Whispered... (Dove)
A wonderfully calming read Dove -- especially liked the continued flow...
October 30th, 2020 08:34 - Summit of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Such a moving read dear Andy - may you continue to reach happiness as you...
October 30th, 2020 07:20 - Depression (L. B. Mek)
Ah your pen images it well this wide-spread depression - - a write to...
October 30th, 2020 07:19 - listen and lay back (Dusk arising)
Am on my way D.A. - - just the ticket for me today.......... love this...
October 30th, 2020 07:07 - Language and Music. (Goldfinch60)
If anyone can write on the language of music it has to be you dear Andy -...
October 29th, 2020 16:06 - I AM (Trenz Pruca)
I can relate to each line in this superb conception of the life we all...
October 29th, 2020 05:40 - UNSAME (2) (Michael Edwards)
Whooooo - Michael that artwork is more than superb - love your wit in...
October 29th, 2020 05:11 - Faithful Following - Isaiah Series (14) (Orchidee)
Yes peace is what we all need - - good write my friend.
October 29th, 2020 04:59 - Innerness (Neville)
Wildness inside - that holds a truth when boundaries are shattered by...
October 28th, 2020 04:49 - Tides of Fortune. (Goldfinch60)
Yes dear friend - your words well bring out the changes that life may...
October 28th, 2020 03:52 - ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER (Michael Edwards)
I wholly agree with the irks you feel Michael on bad pronunciation - -...
October 28th, 2020 03:47 - My Place of Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Am so glad to have have caught this wonderful piece after your walk round...
October 28th, 2020 03:36 - Hiding Behind New Dust (Neville)
Beauty tho\' dust-trapped finds ways through to let shine its attraction...
October 27th, 2020 11:02 - Unruly (L. B. Mek)
Top drawer writing on need for true self-expression when composing...
October 26th, 2020 04:57 - Dawn (Steve Unruh)
A breathtaking read of dawn\' wonder - you captured the changes made so...
October 25th, 2020 06:10 - Borrowed Time (BoxMyHeart)
Yes this feels like a song in the making along with the right music - -...
October 25th, 2020 05:30 - The beat of your tune (Lili Ahlam)
Welcome to M.P.S Lili and with this haunt of a read on the power of...
October 25th, 2020 05:27 - fallen dreams (Dusk arising)
Ah - a classic for sure this write of powerful imagery which draws this...
October 25th, 2020 05:21 - Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
Ye life is often what we see and make for ourselves my friend - our...
October 25th, 2020 03:44 - In The Last Century. (Goldfinch60)
It seems like such a long time ago to say the last century but how true it...
October 25th, 2020 02:39 - Beyond Broke (Neville)
Seriously good this concise diagnosis of delusion my...
October 24th, 2020 11:58 - Scary Sister -- A Fun Halloween Poem For My Kids (BlueHeron77)
So good to know that your growing family have love and security from a...
October 22nd, 2020 02:14 - Chemistry of Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Yes love has a chemistry deeper than any humanity has yet to discover - a...
October 20th, 2020 11:32 - Los Echoes (Neville)
Freeing feelings from guilt makes former clandestine days full of meaning...
October 20th, 2020 05:20 - A CURRY A WEEK ~ SAVES LIVES ! ~ TEN RHYMING DOUBLETS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Curries described so lightheartedly here dear duo - - - not too keen on...
October 20th, 2020 01:52 - go then (Dusk arising)
A heart-tugging read from the first line to the last - losing a much...
October 19th, 2020 03:09 - bored through overkill (Dusk arising)
I second your outcry D.A. about being bored by continual media attention...
October 18th, 2020 02:00 - Driving Into Daylight. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful title for all sorts of subjects but the one you chose of...
October 17th, 2020 05:00 - A NEW DOOR (Michael Edwards)
Best wishes for Jeanne\'s full recovery as you take good care that she...
October 17th, 2020 02:37 - in fields of green (Dusk arising)
Yes the unending gravestones must move every visitor to those foreign...
October 17th, 2020 02:05 - Very,Very Fast Food. (Goldfinch60)
The fun you had in cooking that steak left me with a smile when you...
October 16th, 2020 15:48 - of november fallen (Dusk arising)
Your words bring their own shiver as November peeps through each line - -...
October 16th, 2020 15:45 - Waving at Dolphins (Neville)
The calm of this poemed scene passes into a harbouring dance such as I see...
October 16th, 2020 06:24 - Quarantine Senryu (Lorna)
Hilarious song and loved the Sen......
October 16th, 2020 04:43 - Death Missed. (Goldfinch60)
Your posting is full to the brim of an inspiring and upbuilding outlook on...
October 15th, 2020 07:21 - the downstream tide (Dusk arising)
Love the freestyle you chose for this haunt of a read D.A. - - your pen...
October 15th, 2020 07:18 - Wasps (Neville)
Loving this short and pithy opinion of stingers that prey on sweet flesh...
October 14th, 2020 03:04 - The Arrows of Time (Lorna)
Love this exposure of macho men and what happens when meeting that female...
October 13th, 2020 06:54 - Bring us More Liquor (Neville)
Have learnt a new name with a most gruesome calling from this sombre but...
October 13th, 2020 04:20 - Addiction. (Fay Slimm.)
Dan thanking you most sincerely for adding this piece to your list of...
October 12th, 2020 16:11 - EFFECT OF COVID 19 ~ A 6 3 5 LAMENT SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes each one has been affected in one way or another by hearing of losses...
October 12th, 2020 10:09 - The Four Letter Word (Lorna)
How true your final lines Lorna.- love is elusive and you rhyme the...
October 12th, 2020 06:37 - Where do Dreams Go (Neville)
Sensually potent this verse on what memory dreams before it melts into...
October 12th, 2020 04:01 - Sunshine (Dove)
A pleasure to read such a sun-shiny verse - -- - I enjoyed every warm and...
October 11th, 2020 10:43 - Lunch at My House (Lorna)
Ah Lorna - - I love this kitcheny message of drummed -down catastrophe - ...
October 11th, 2020 05:24 - Yellow Umbrella\'s (Neville)
Methinks that suggestion of love in a dim hallway takes precedence over...
October 11th, 2020 02:48 - Spit it Out (Neville)
With an appeal like this how could anyone refuse to let sleeping dogs lie...
October 10th, 2020 07:42 - LIMERICK No 69 (Michael Edwards)
Oooooh Plumply attractive with curvy assets yet feeling too fat - -- I...
October 10th, 2020 02:12 - a lie became noble (Dusk arising)
Your words capture the whole scene back then Dusk -- the shame of those...
October 10th, 2020 02:05 - Laughter Wins. (Goldfinch60)
Too true Andy - - the words remind me of a saying I heard many moons ago -...
October 10th, 2020 02:02 - Heaven on Earth? (Saxon Crow)
Words of truth and thank you for sharing them S.C.
October 10th, 2020 02:00 - Autumn Rain (Lorna)
Soup followed by chocolate - well that should put paid to the cold of wet...
October 9th, 2020 09:27 - Mile High (Neville)
Icarus would surely agree that the flight with a lover feels mile high...
October 9th, 2020 09:24 - BE OPTIMISTIC ~ THE BEST CHOICE ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes an optimistic outlook is always a winner in facing this troubled world...
October 9th, 2020 07:14 - ...AND... (Michael Edwards)
Bidding on love can be filled with unseen appendages if time allows - --...
October 9th, 2020 04:38 - A return to romance (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Your romantic words swept me away Ron -- and beautiful music too - wht...
October 9th, 2020 02:19 - Wild Company (Lorna)
A positive menage of beautiful wild things and all around your daily...
October 8th, 2020 07:19 - Woollen Stockings (Neville)
You pen a rich encounter with those who make livings from simple...
October 8th, 2020 04:37 - Bucket List Senryu (Lorna)
What better to tick off than Lurve dear Lorna......... fun read.
October 8th, 2020 03:43 - Grab the Day (Trenz Pruca)
Howe true your last sentence Trenz - - this day will not come again so...
October 7th, 2020 13:17 - Cleansing Our Lifetimes. (Goldfinch60)
Yes the rain certainly does cleanse in this toe of Cornwall\'s south west ...
October 7th, 2020 03:24 - FACELESS (Hinnant)
You describe the present fearful condition of faceless communities so...
October 7th, 2020 03:19 - Praise Professions (Orchidee)
We all need restoration of laughter
in these troublesome days dear...
October 7th, 2020 02:54 - Blue Light (Neville)
Apart from concluding the obvious I confess I am all at sea with this...
October 7th, 2020 02:48 - ALPACA SOCKS (Michael Edwards)
I never knew alpacas needed socks but now shall knit some for my flock...
October 7th, 2020 02:29 - Battlegrounds in the Mind (MaddieJ)
Slow and rhythmic the fall of these words down the page give the pace and...
October 7th, 2020 02:10 - For A While (Lorna)
The feel of sad parting oozes through these poignant lines my friend - -...
October 6th, 2020 05:28 - A Solitary Passing (Neville)
The read gave me a picture of the dire situation when on battlefields...
October 6th, 2020 05:27 - New Joys. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful and uplifting read -- joy is there to experience whatever our...
October 5th, 2020 10:56 - You can tell everybody, this is my song (Sylviasearcher)
The superb rhyming in this raw piece of deep introspection draws out the...
October 5th, 2020 10:52 - Attrition (Neville)
Oh what a meaningful title to your reminder of what not to do - - --
-...
October 5th, 2020 08:05 - THE TIDE (Michael Edwards)
Now that is an innovative way of putting it - - agreed the tide indeed...
October 5th, 2020 02:41 - Mr. Mediocre (Neville)
Hurt and feelin\' alone \"Mediocre\" this man is certainly not - for with...
October 4th, 2020 05:37 - STRUCK (Michael Edwards)
Fits of giggles galore after reading your little beauty today.
October 4th, 2020 03:31 - the sea (Dusk arising)
Am highly honoured D.A.that my few words brought from your pen this moving...
October 4th, 2020 03:28 - WHAT A MUPPET (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - you never fail to make me smile with your inherent wit my dear...
October 3rd, 2020 07:29 - keeping it to myself (Dusk arising)
Oh the sorrow in these few lines - the loss of the feel of being loved in...
October 3rd, 2020 07:26 - The Winds on Which We Sail (Lorna)
A squall brings excitement when we are in love with the feel of sailing in...
October 3rd, 2020 05:49 - The Moon & Stars (Dove)
Loud applause for this wonderful villanelle - well done again D.......
October 3rd, 2020 04:16 - Some Words are not Just Words (Neville)
What a compelling title and a truly endearing thought about words Nev. -...
October 3rd, 2020 02:58 - Prepped (Neville)
Oh yes - Agreed that yang is for those who are angry but yieldingly yin...
October 2nd, 2020 07:49 - Palette of the Day (Lorna)
Love the inventive imagery you use in this gem of a write Lorna - - - I...
October 2nd, 2020 07:09 - The World at My Table. (Goldfinch60)
Inviting the world to join you at table sounds better than waiting in line...
October 2nd, 2020 05:44 - Gracious Guidance (Orchidee)
An inspiring prayer - thanks for sharing it Orchi.
October 2nd, 2020 04:37 - Was it just a Dream (Dove)
Yes unhurried and flowing slowly your verse depicts differing depths of...
October 1st, 2020 13:17 - Carolyn (Lorna)
A beautifully penned scene and sung so invitingly by a favourite...
October 1st, 2020 03:44 - Autumn\'s Glory. (Goldfinch60)
Oh what a glorious season your words describe dear Andy and as with me...
October 1st, 2020 02:47 - A WINTER NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Despite the shiver after perusing the poem I vote this a perfect...
October 1st, 2020 02:41
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