Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Where Would You Go? (Niallprideaux)
Niall, this is a perfect metaphor about choice. Do we opt for the...
December 16th, 2017 18:41 - The Piano. (Goldfinch60)
I watched the movie first and it really put me into the right mood to read...
December 16th, 2017 18:31 - A light shines now more brighter in heaven.... (Orchidee)
Sorry for your loss! It is amazing that you woke up at that exact time. I...
December 16th, 2017 18:20 - Dying in the Wind (Olivergreenwood19)
Very well written, Oliver, with an incredible metaphor.
December 16th, 2017 03:51 - Don\'t Speak (Baylee)
An incredible poem with an unexpected, yet truthful ending.
Well done,...
December 16th, 2017 03:49 - MY CHRISTMAS STOCKING ~ A Contour Poem ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well done, Brian!!!
December 16th, 2017 03:41 - His Last. (Fay Slimm.)
And what a fine tribute this is, Fay! Grant was a master photographer, you...
December 16th, 2017 03:36 - Jingle In My Bingle (Accidental Poet)
AP, this is a very lovely poem. If everybody in the world would wish for...
December 16th, 2017 03:33 - Light From Dark. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, I think my muse would have to use a sledge hammer to get me up...
December 16th, 2017 03:21 - Servant Salvation (Orchidee)
\'To open blind eyes\'
Your writing, Orchi, is opening our eyes.
December 16th, 2017 03:17 - POETRY IS.....RECEIVED BY LISTENING EARS (Michael Edwards)
You truly are an incredible poet, Michael! And this poem proves it.
PS:...
December 16th, 2017 03:14 - When The Weather Gets A Little Lonely. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, so well written, sad, but hopeful. Your poem took me through a...
December 16th, 2017 03:10 - Renamed (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very beautiful poem, Kurt. I admire your style and choice of words.
December 16th, 2017 03:06 - Mom (Anonymous_1226)
I am impressed by the raw power of your poem, A. Well written!
December 16th, 2017 03:03 - SNOWBALLS ! A Contour Mirror Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wanna throw a snowball, but no snow? No problem. Get a lyrical snowball...
December 15th, 2017 03:30 - LIMERICK 41 (Michael Edwards)
Lovely painting!
Great limerick, Michael. Well penned!
December 15th, 2017 03:27 - THE ENCOUNTER (Louis Gibbs)
I\'m with you all the way, Louis! Got my space helmet ready.
Your poem...
December 15th, 2017 03:24 - sharing the bed with the monsters that live underneath it (Abora)
So well written, Abora! Great metaphors, well structured! And that last...
December 14th, 2017 17:11 - The Memorable Moment (M.E.M.)
Am happy for you, M.E.M., that your first date worked out! And from the...
December 14th, 2017 14:47 - Goldie Christmas. (Goldfinch60)
Goldie, you look AWESOME! And the poem is great! And I just love that last...
December 14th, 2017 14:33 - Gabriel\'s Greetings (Orchidee)
Perfect poem for this Holiday Season!
December 14th, 2017 14:22 - ADVERSARY RHYMES 7 8 & 9 (Michael Edwards)
Just great, Michael! Enjoyed all three very much!
December 14th, 2017 14:12 - TEACHINGS (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, I made this a favorite because I want to read it again and again....
December 14th, 2017 14:09 - For Love Is Life. (Kevin browne)
Well written, Kevin! Love that last line!
December 14th, 2017 14:04 - Unjustified (Adrianna Kjeld)
Well written, Adrianna! You captured that feeling of sadness well, but at...
December 14th, 2017 14:02 - wishful thoughts (Lostthoughts)
I like the structure and the repetition. Well written T!
December 14th, 2017 13:57 - ODE TO BARBIE (Lasergraph)
Building things with or for the grand children is so much fun, and you...
December 14th, 2017 13:55 - Peace (Christina8)
Now if ten people who read your beautiful poem each tell another ten and...
December 14th, 2017 13:51 - pleasure (Celena)
Very nicely rhymed, good structure, but the content started to melt my...
December 11th, 2017 23:55 - ENGLAND IS COVERED IN SNOW ! A Villanelle (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great pic, Brian! And as you so eloquently point out, snow can be both,...
December 11th, 2017 23:50 - Poetry is.... Part two (Poetic Dan)
Just like you, I too still have that \'Poetry Is\' in my head, like an...
December 11th, 2017 23:47 - The Perfect Chocolate Cake (Larosamarchitada)
The metaphor of chocolate cake is genius! Well penned, larosa!
December 11th, 2017 23:44 - How it feels to overeat (Larosamarchitada)
You do say a lot in these few lines, larosa! Very well penned. Love the...
December 11th, 2017 23:41 - Heaven In My Heart (Accidental Poet)
A beautiful tribute to your mom, AP! And you are so right, they will...
December 11th, 2017 16:00 - Fused. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful, stunning, gorgeous declaration of love! I too am a believer...
December 11th, 2017 15:56 - POETRY IS (Lasergraph)
As Michael already said, it is amazing how diverse poetry is, and how...
December 11th, 2017 12:34 - Unbreakable (Baylee)
Beautifully written, Nicole!
December 11th, 2017 12:30 - forbidden (Mich3)
I like your short, direct, well penned poem. Well penned, well...
December 11th, 2017 12:23 - the a-philosopher (Frank Prem)
Frank, your mind and your writing are awesome!
December 11th, 2017 05:17 - The Door (Carmine)
k4, this is one of the most inventive and original poems I have read in a...
December 11th, 2017 05:06 - Can you help?! (Orchidee)
In regards to Michaels comment:
We don\'t call it \'bonkers\', here in...
December 11th, 2017 04:55 - Infectious Joy. (Goldfinch60)
Your well penned poem reminded me that it is the little things in life...
December 11th, 2017 04:50 - POETRY IS .... (Michael Edwards)
You ARE a master, Michael! What indeed is poetry? Judging from all the...
December 11th, 2017 02:37 - FUTURE REFLECTIONS (Louis Gibbs)
Well penned, interesting concept, Louis! That future could have been...
December 11th, 2017 02:36 - I Dream Of Cupid And The Lovers Within. (Kevin browne)
And what a dream it is! Well penned, Kevin.
December 10th, 2017 21:11 - Sketch 160A (M.E.M.)
Wow, M.E.M., what a ride I had reading your poem. I don\'t want the...
December 10th, 2017 21:10 - Poetry is (inspired by L.Gibbs) (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful, PD! Like the consciousness connecting universe and higher...
December 10th, 2017 21:05 - YOU ARE A TREE ! A 7 7 Blank Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nice poem, Brian. But I guess God must have had a bad hair day when He...
December 10th, 2017 21:00 - Young Man (Accidental Poet)
AP, no kidding, it sounds as if you wrote this poem for me!
I love it,...
December 10th, 2017 20:54 - Sound-Encounter. (Fay Slimm.)
So well written again, Fay! Bird migration is an incredible thing and I...
December 10th, 2017 20:44 - Glory Gleamings (Orchidee)
Well penned, orchi!
December 10th, 2017 20:39 - The Spirit Within (Accidental Poet)
Well written,. AP! Have to agree with Louis, we poets are all inhabited by...
December 10th, 2017 17:49 - The Way She Looked At Me (ShannonXx)
Really like your poem, Shannon! Some great word choices, well...
December 10th, 2017 17:45 - TREASURE OF SNOW ~An Acrostic 8 2 4 Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Snow.....a distant memory!
Thanks for reminding me.
December 10th, 2017 17:42 - The Sunrise in My Heart (Accidental Poet)
Very beautifully penned, AP!
\'The sunrise in my heart\'...love that
December 10th, 2017 17:40 - Faithful Focus (Orchidee)
\'For you have need of patience\'
Orchi, that I do! The older I get the...
December 10th, 2017 17:37 - Life is poetry. Poetry is life. (Aa Harvey)
All I can say is that anybody who can write that well, should never
December 10th, 2017 17:33 - The Beat of the Drum. (Goldfinch60)
Very nice poem, Goldfinch, reminds me of \'the little drummer boy\'!
December 10th, 2017 17:23 - for the coming of the wind (Frank Prem)
Our usual weather has the Trade Winds, blowing from East to West....
December 10th, 2017 17:21 - No Sunset (Scout)
I just commented on your latest poem and really like the last line. Same...
December 10th, 2017 17:17 - If She Was Loved (Scout)
Love that last line, Emma!
Even though the poem as a whole is kind of...
December 10th, 2017 17:15 - A Nightmare Within a Dream (Clarita)
Clarita, books have always been my thing! As opposed to a movie where we...
December 10th, 2017 17:07 - Christmas With You (Christina8)
Beautifully written, Christina, and the last stanza is what Christmas is...
December 10th, 2017 17:01 - You (Lostthoughts)
Well written, T! A relationship can be a roller-coaster, and the reason...
December 10th, 2017 07:31 - ANOTHER BUNCH OF ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
The last one is good, but I do like the second to last better.
Exquisite...
December 10th, 2017 04:37 - Inside Out (WL Schuett)
Love the painting, that view through broken sheetrock.
The poem is...
December 10th, 2017 04:35 - LIMERICKS 35 & 36 (Michael Edwards)
Love the flowers, Michael, I am no gardener, so to me they look like...
December 10th, 2017 04:31 - writing in the moon (Frank Prem)
There are so many ways to get the message across, so many words to...
December 10th, 2017 04:29 - Poetry is.... (Goldfinch60)
This is a great extended version, Goldfinch! Love that last line!
December 10th, 2017 04:21 - Poetry Is (FredPeyer)
Thank you so much to everybody who contributed!!!
Unfortunately, it seems...
December 10th, 2017 04:17 - Fuzz (Skyebellasario)
Hope you do real well with your exams, Skye! But then, I figure that if...
December 9th, 2017 13:42 - Cobbled Steps. (Kevin browne)
Was in England twice, but never visited London. Your excellent poem makes...
December 9th, 2017 13:26 - HAIKU ITALIANU ~ Per LAURA con AMORE XOX (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great pic, and even greater writing!
December 9th, 2017 13:22 - Boisterous. (Fay Slimm.)
Watching the waves crash on the beach is magical and awesome. Your poem is...
December 9th, 2017 13:16 - Alone in Darkness (Clarita)
You are an incredible writer, Clarita! I said it before, but have to say...
December 9th, 2017 13:07 - Imprisonment (Clarita)
Well written, Clarita! Thank you for making my poem \'You\' a favorite! I...
December 9th, 2017 13:02 - Presence Pleasantness (Orchidee)
And I thought beatitudo had something to do with the Beatles!
Thank you...
December 8th, 2017 03:45 - SIMPLISTIC COMPLEXITY (Michael Edwards)
And the same goes for painting!
December 8th, 2017 03:43 - Thank You (Its Raskolnikov)
Every relationship is give and take. If it is only one of the two, then...
December 8th, 2017 03:42 - The Man From The Seventies. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, you are describing my late teens and early twenties!
December 8th, 2017 03:39 - POETRY IS (Louis Gibbs)
Very eloquent definition of poetry. I admire your penmanship, Louis.
But...
December 8th, 2017 03:37 - nostalgia in the night (Frank Prem)
Perfectly written, Frank! I too am an aging fool, remembering the many...
December 8th, 2017 03:20 - His \'I Love You\' (Anonymous18)
A, this well written poem makes me realize how many times we say these...
December 7th, 2017 20:45 - PEARL HARBOR (Lasergraph)
Very well written, lasergraph! I visited Pearl Harbor memorial several...
December 7th, 2017 20:27 - This Moment (Christina8)
Great poem, Christina! Just think, if you can do it now (put aside your...
December 7th, 2017 20:21 - Tonight, I feel lonely (Myself and me)
Before you can build new, you have to destroy the old. And that is a sad...
December 7th, 2017 20:18 - Cage (M.E.M.)
Love your poem. How many times have we been told by parents, teachers,...
December 7th, 2017 20:12 - Seduction. (Fay Slimm.)
Even if I wanted to, I could not escape your incredible writing, Fay!
December 7th, 2017 20:06 - You Will Come To Know (Accidental Poet)
A beautiful, empathetic write, AP, that will bring comfort to many!
December 7th, 2017 20:04 - C H R I S T M A S F A I R S ~ An Acrostic 9 5 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well done, Brian!
December 7th, 2017 20:01 - Unforgiven Unease (Orchidee)
Orchi, re second stanza: How many arrows did KP shoot into you?
But as...
December 7th, 2017 19:59 - NEW RESOLVE (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful writing, Michael.
\'her doubts fell into naked space\'
Great...
December 7th, 2017 19:56 - Citrus Runs Down Your Chin (Thoff1)
Great advice to anybody growing into adulthood!
December 7th, 2017 19:51 - Awhile (Anonymous18)
Welcome back A! Am looking forward to your witty little lines!
December 7th, 2017 19:48 - AN ENGLISHMAN\'S \'OUSE ! A 6 6 2 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nice house, nice picture, nice poem. And as you point out, in America we...
December 7th, 2017 19:47 - Listening to my heart (Poetic Dan)
And all you have to do is to trust and follow that inner light.
December 7th, 2017 19:43 - Decisive. (Fay Slimm.)
There is something magical about dusk and the onset of night and you...
December 7th, 2017 19:41 - Umbrella or Parasol. (Goldfinch60)
Simply beautifully written with a beautiful and uplifting message!
December 7th, 2017 06:23 - Culture (Accidental Poet)
Love your poem, AP!
Sitting on this lonely rock, thousands of miles away...
December 6th, 2017 13:01 - The Poem We Did Not Understand. (Goldfinch60)
Amen!
December 6th, 2017 12:52
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