Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• ADVERSARY RHYMES 7 8 & 9 (Michael Edwards) Just great, Michael! Enjoyed all three very much!
  December 14th, 2017 14:12
• TEACHINGS (Louis Gibbs) Louis, I made this a favorite because I want to read it again and again....
  December 14th, 2017 14:09
• For Love Is Life. (Kevin browne) Well written, Kevin! Love that last line!
  December 14th, 2017 14:04
• Unjustified (Adrianna Kjeld) Well written, Adrianna! You captured that feeling of sadness well, but at...
  December 14th, 2017 14:02
• wishful thoughts (Lostthoughts) I like the structure and the repetition. Well written T!
  December 14th, 2017 13:57
• ODE TO BARBIE (Lasergraph) Building things with or for the grand children is so much fun, and you...
  December 14th, 2017 13:55
• Peace (Christina8) Now if ten people who read your beautiful poem each tell another ten and...
  December 14th, 2017 13:51
• pleasure (Celena) Very nicely rhymed, good structure, but the content started to melt my...
  December 11th, 2017 23:55
• ENGLAND IS COVERED IN SNOW ! A Villanelle (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great pic, Brian! And as you so eloquently point out, snow can be both,...
  December 11th, 2017 23:50
• Poetry is.... Part two (Poetic Dan) Just like you, I too still have that \'Poetry Is\' in my head, like an...
  December 11th, 2017 23:47
• The Perfect Chocolate Cake (Larosamarchitada) The metaphor of chocolate cake is genius! Well penned, larosa!
  December 11th, 2017 23:44
• How it feels to overeat (Larosamarchitada) You do say a lot in these few lines, larosa! Very well penned. Love the...
  December 11th, 2017 23:41
• Fused. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful, stunning, gorgeous declaration of love! I too am a believer...
  December 11th, 2017 15:56
• POETRY IS (Lasergraph) As Michael already said, it is amazing how diverse poetry is, and how...
  December 11th, 2017 12:34
• Unbreakable (Baylee) Beautifully written, Nicole!
  December 11th, 2017 12:30
• forbidden (Mich3) I like your short, direct, well penned poem. Well penned, well...
  December 11th, 2017 12:23
• the a-philosopher (Frank Prem) Frank, your mind and your writing are awesome!
  December 11th, 2017 05:17
• The Door (Carmine) k4, this is one of the most inventive and original poems I have read in a...
  December 11th, 2017 05:06
• Can you help?! (Orchidee) In regards to Michaels comment: We don\'t call it \'bonkers\', here in...
  December 11th, 2017 04:55
• Infectious Joy. (Goldfinch60) Your well penned poem reminded me that it is the little things in life...
  December 11th, 2017 04:50
• POETRY IS .... (Michael Edwards) You ARE a master, Michael! What indeed is poetry? Judging from all the...
  December 11th, 2017 02:37
• FUTURE REFLECTIONS (Louis Gibbs) Well penned, interesting concept, Louis! That future could have been...
  December 11th, 2017 02:36
• I Dream Of Cupid And The Lovers Within. (Kevin browne) And what a dream it is! Well penned, Kevin.
  December 10th, 2017 21:11
• Sketch 160A (M.E.M.) Wow, M.E.M., what a ride I had reading your poem. I don\'t want the...
  December 10th, 2017 21:10
• Poetry is (inspired by L.Gibbs) (Poetic Dan) Wonderful, PD! Like the consciousness connecting universe and higher...
  December 10th, 2017 21:05
• YOU ARE A TREE ! A 7 7 Blank Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Nice poem, Brian. But I guess God must have had a bad hair day when He...
  December 10th, 2017 21:00
• Sound-Encounter. (Fay Slimm.) So well written again, Fay! Bird migration is an incredible thing and I...
  December 10th, 2017 20:44
• Glory Gleamings (Orchidee) Well penned, orchi!
  December 10th, 2017 20:39
• The Way She Looked At Me (ShannonXx) Really like your poem, Shannon! Some great word choices, well...
  December 10th, 2017 17:45
• TREASURE OF SNOW ~An Acrostic 8 2 4 Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Snow.....a distant memory! Thanks for reminding me.
  December 10th, 2017 17:42
• Faithful Focus (Orchidee) \'For you have need of patience\' Orchi, that I do! The older I get the...
  December 10th, 2017 17:37
• Life is poetry. Poetry is life. (Aa Harvey) All I can say is that anybody who can write that well, should never
  December 10th, 2017 17:33
• The Beat of the Drum. (Goldfinch60) Very nice poem, Goldfinch, reminds me of \'the little drummer boy\'!
  December 10th, 2017 17:23
• for the coming of the wind (Frank Prem) Our usual weather has the Trade Winds, blowing from East to West....
  December 10th, 2017 17:21
• No Sunset (Scout) I just commented on your latest poem and really like the last line. Same...
  December 10th, 2017 17:17
• If She Was Loved (Scout) Love that last line, Emma! Even though the poem as a whole is kind of...
  December 10th, 2017 17:15
• A Nightmare Within a Dream (Clarita) Clarita, books have always been my thing! As opposed to a movie where we...
  December 10th, 2017 17:07
• Christmas With You (Christina8) Beautifully written, Christina, and the last stanza is what Christmas is...
  December 10th, 2017 17:01
• You (Lostthoughts) Well written, T! A relationship can be a roller-coaster, and the reason...
  December 10th, 2017 07:31
• ANOTHER BUNCH OF ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards) The last one is good, but I do like the second to last better. Exquisite...
  December 10th, 2017 04:37
• Inside Out (WL Schuett) Love the painting, that view through broken sheetrock. The poem is...
  December 10th, 2017 04:35
• LIMERICKS 35 & 36 (Michael Edwards) Love the flowers, Michael, I am no gardener, so to me they look like...
  December 10th, 2017 04:31
• writing in the moon (Frank Prem) There are so many ways to get the message across, so many words to...
  December 10th, 2017 04:29
• Poetry is.... (Goldfinch60) This is a great extended version, Goldfinch! Love that last line!
  December 10th, 2017 04:21
• Poetry Is (FredPeyer) Thank you so much to everybody who contributed!!! Unfortunately, it seems...
  December 10th, 2017 04:17
• Fuzz (Skyebellasario) Hope you do real well with your exams, Skye! But then, I figure that if...
  December 9th, 2017 13:42
• Cobbled Steps. (Kevin browne) Was in England twice, but never visited London. Your excellent poem makes...
  December 9th, 2017 13:26
• HAIKU ITALIANU ~ Per LAURA con AMORE XOX (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great pic, and even greater writing!
  December 9th, 2017 13:22
• Boisterous. (Fay Slimm.) Watching the waves crash on the beach is magical and awesome. Your poem is...
  December 9th, 2017 13:16
• Alone in Darkness (Clarita) You are an incredible writer, Clarita! I said it before, but have to say...
  December 9th, 2017 13:07
• Imprisonment (Clarita) Well written, Clarita! Thank you for making my poem \'You\' a favorite! I...
  December 9th, 2017 13:02
• Presence Pleasantness (Orchidee) And I thought beatitudo had something to do with the Beatles! Thank you...
  December 8th, 2017 03:45
• SIMPLISTIC COMPLEXITY (Michael Edwards) And the same goes for painting!
  December 8th, 2017 03:43
• Thank You (Its Raskolnikov) Every relationship is give and take. If it is only one of the two, then...
  December 8th, 2017 03:42
• The Man From The Seventies. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, you are describing my late teens and early twenties!
  December 8th, 2017 03:39
• POETRY IS (Louis Gibbs) Very eloquent definition of poetry. I admire your penmanship, Louis. But...
  December 8th, 2017 03:37
• nostalgia in the night (Frank Prem) Perfectly written, Frank! I too am an aging fool, remembering the many...
  December 8th, 2017 03:20
• His \'I Love You\' (Anonymous18) A, this well written poem makes me realize how many times we say these...
  December 7th, 2017 20:45
• PEARL HARBOR (Lasergraph) Very well written, lasergraph! I visited Pearl Harbor memorial several...
  December 7th, 2017 20:27
• This Moment (Christina8) Great poem, Christina! Just think, if you can do it now (put aside your...
  December 7th, 2017 20:21
• Tonight, I feel lonely (Myself and me) Before you can build new, you have to destroy the old. And that is a sad...
  December 7th, 2017 20:18
• Cage (M.E.M.) Love your poem. How many times have we been told by parents, teachers,...
  December 7th, 2017 20:12
• Seduction. (Fay Slimm.) Even if I wanted to, I could not escape your incredible writing, Fay!
  December 7th, 2017 20:06
• C H R I S T M A S F A I R S ~ An Acrostic 9 5 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well done, Brian!
  December 7th, 2017 20:01
• Unforgiven Unease (Orchidee) Orchi, re second stanza: How many arrows did KP shoot into you? But as...
  December 7th, 2017 19:59
• NEW RESOLVE (Michael Edwards) Beautiful writing, Michael. \'her doubts fell into naked space\' Great...
  December 7th, 2017 19:56
• Citrus Runs Down Your Chin (Thoff1) Great advice to anybody growing into adulthood!
  December 7th, 2017 19:51
• Awhile (Anonymous18) Welcome back A! Am looking forward to your witty little lines!
  December 7th, 2017 19:48
• AN ENGLISHMAN\'S \'OUSE ! A 6 6 2 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Nice house, nice picture, nice poem. And as you point out, in America we...
  December 7th, 2017 19:47
• Listening to my heart (Poetic Dan) And all you have to do is to trust and follow that inner light.
  December 7th, 2017 19:43
• Decisive. (Fay Slimm.) There is something magical about dusk and the onset of night and you...
  December 7th, 2017 19:41
• Umbrella or Parasol. (Goldfinch60) Simply beautifully written with a beautiful and uplifting message!
  December 7th, 2017 06:23
• The Poem We Did Not Understand. (Goldfinch60) Amen!
  December 6th, 2017 12:52
• ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4) (Michael Edwards) Well done (again) Michael! If I had to choose one of the three, it would...
  December 6th, 2017 12:50
• Discipleship Discourse (Orchidee) Very nice recording, orchi, but your poem outshines the song!
  December 6th, 2017 04:12
• PASSING STRANGERS (Louis Gibbs) Definitely a favorite, Louis! You do have a gift of getting to the...
  December 6th, 2017 02:59
• Time (Its Raskolnikov) Well written, Ras! Sometimes we wish we could slow down time, and at other...
  December 5th, 2017 13:10
• Pupa (M.E.M.) Very intriguing, M.E.M, and applicable to a lot more than a sculpture. I...
  December 5th, 2017 13:07
• Here to teach and be taught (Poetic Dan) Am with Fay here, PD! Very well written.
  December 5th, 2017 12:55
• Paralyzing Tides (Baylee) Wow, Nicole, this poem really touched me. Well written too. Learned a new...
  December 5th, 2017 12:53
• Do You ? (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully written, Fay!
  December 5th, 2017 04:59
• Deacons Dynamism (Orchidee) I have to say, orchidee, I admire all these deacons on how much time,...
  December 5th, 2017 04:57
• Thinking of Nothing. (Goldfinch60) First: Goldfinch, get well soon! Second: Love that poem, and when I look...
  December 5th, 2017 04:55
• In Flight (Thoff1) And this well written poem proves your last line, Tomo!
  December 5th, 2017 04:38
• Don\'t Look Back (Tanvir H) Like the title and the song, tanvir! One should never look back, both in...
  December 5th, 2017 04:37
• Cold (Adrianna Kjeld) Adrianna, I like your raw, straight forward writing. I wonder though how...
  December 5th, 2017 04:35
• Make Up For The Love (Its Raskolnikov) Very well written, Ras! I do like it!
  December 5th, 2017 04:27
• Worry Will Vanish (M.E.M.) It is very hard to see the world through somebody else\'s eyes, because we...
  December 5th, 2017 04:25
• Wrapped Up In Christmas (Christina8) Well penned, Christina. With everything that is going on during the...
  December 5th, 2017 04:22
• Springtime\'s First. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful poem, Fay! I don\'t even know if daffodils grow here. But we...
  December 5th, 2017 04:19
• Beyond Pain (WL Schuett) Great painting, great poem, WL! And you are so right, art is life, and...
  December 5th, 2017 03:52
• who will leave you clean (Frank Prem) After reading your poem, Frank, I could smell that clean smell you get...
  December 5th, 2017 03:46
• Sweet Potion. (Fay Slimm.) To use \'fragrance\' in writing about love is not only imaginative, but...
  December 5th, 2017 03:44
• Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3) (Michael Edwards) The watercolor is superb! Love all three of them. To me they also sound...
  December 5th, 2017 03:39
• A Portrait of a Dead Boy (MissileOfUncertainty) The painting is very good, and so is the writing, MoU! We tend not to...
  December 5th, 2017 03:34
• () I love your poem, Diamond! You are delving into quantum theory, vibrating...
  December 5th, 2017 03:26
• THE CONFORMIST (Michael Edwards) To me \'thinking outside of the box\' is like an out of body experience,...
  December 4th, 2017 04:13
• Spirit Stream (Orchidee) The first two lines of this poem are just incredible, orchidee! Not that...
  December 4th, 2017 04:04
• the purpose (of the St Nemom machine) (Frank Prem) Incredible writing, incredible concept.
  December 4th, 2017 03:58
• Supermoon. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful poem AND beautiful picture, Goldfinch! It is amazing how we...
  December 4th, 2017 03:47