Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• Bake Sale Cookies (W c) wc, I really do like your cookie poem! I usually don\'t even wait for the...
  January 3rd, 2018 04:46
• on an axis wheeling (Frank Prem) Frank, you make looking at the sky a big adventure! Kudos!
  January 3rd, 2018 04:43
• Victorious Visitation (Orchidee) Title of the song translates to: What lives, what floats, oh worship your...
  January 3rd, 2018 04:42
• Mothers shouldn\'t cry (Aa Harvey) A beautiful tribute to your mom!
  January 3rd, 2018 04:39
• ADVERSARY RHYMES 10 11 & 12 (Michael Edwards) Didn\'t know you can make love with a fiddling stick! :-) Am I wrong, or...
  January 3rd, 2018 04:37
• Contented Wealth. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, this poem could have been written by Buddha.
  January 3rd, 2018 04:34
• A Question (A__pott) tepo said it all already! Agree completely with him, Alex. Great poem!
  January 3rd, 2018 00:19
• Where Love Has No Ending. (Kevin browne) Love the last three lines, Kevin!
  January 3rd, 2018 00:17
• TROUT AN ACROSTIC ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) They look mean, but do they ever taste good. Did not have one for a long...
  January 3rd, 2018 00:15
• Communication (Aa Harvey) The last two lines are what it is all about!
  January 3rd, 2018 00:02
• Colours of Change. (Fay Slimm.) It is not just the fireworks that sparkle, it is your whole poem, Fay!
  January 3rd, 2018 00:01
• THE CHAPEL (Michael Edwards) There is beauty in simplicity, and you expressed it well, Michael! Both in...
  January 2nd, 2018 23:59
• Unity Unctions (Orchidee) Thanks for the daily uplift, orchi!
  January 2nd, 2018 23:57
• Smile at a Stranger. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful message, goldfinch! While waiting for boarding the plane, a...
  January 2nd, 2018 23:56
• A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Rhinoceros (Aa Harvey) Love is all of this.....and much more! Good one, Aa!
  January 2nd, 2018 23:53
• Passion Prosperings (Orchidee) You are starting the New Year with a good one, orchi!
  January 2nd, 2018 23:52
• New Year\'s Day (Niallprideaux) Niall, I sincerely hope your \'new shoes\' fit real well! All the BEST for...
  January 2nd, 2018 23:50
• Something (Aa Harvey) Sometimes the something is something and sometimes the something is...
  January 2nd, 2018 23:48
• Praise Persuals (Orchidee) A beautiful poem to finish the year, orchi! And we should be grateful for...
  January 2nd, 2018 23:46
• HAPPY NEW YEAR 2018 ~ A PRAYER (BRIAN & ANGELA) And a very happy, love-filled and healthy New Year to you too!
  January 2nd, 2018 23:44
• The New Year. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, your New Year poem is touching, tender, sad, happy, hopeful,...
  January 2nd, 2018 23:42
• OLD INTO NEW. (Fay Slimm.) Love your poem, Fay! Now, if that \'old into new\' would apply to us too,...
  January 2nd, 2018 23:39
• Liquid Poetry (Aa Harvey) Sometimes you find what you are looking for when you are not looking! With...
  January 2nd, 2018 13:36
• RACHEL (Michael Edwards) Michael, I think you missed your calling: You should be an art...
  January 1st, 2018 20:07
• Happy 2nd (Poetic Dan) Beautiful tender writing, PD! May your queen be with you for a long, long...
  January 1st, 2018 20:05
• Life is like an onion (Avigail) I like the onion metaphor, Avigail. At least with the onion you know what...
  January 1st, 2018 20:02
• Soft (WL Schuett) Wonderful choice of words, great writing, WL! Love the last stanza....
  January 1st, 2018 19:48
• New Year Shower. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, this is a great poem, a great metaphor of washing off the old...
  January 1st, 2018 19:36
• FROM COMMENTS AND FUSIONS (Michael Edwards) Michael, great writing! This year I will join your decade and start the...
  January 1st, 2018 19:28
• My Life Is A Mess (Lanaevans) I feel for you lana, but sometimes you just gotta get up and clean! You...
  December 30th, 2017 20:48
• Steamy (Christina8) Now at last I know where that beautiful smile on your face in your picture...
  December 30th, 2017 20:45
• Ourselves. (Kevin browne) Don\'t know how you did it, but somehow you seem to be able to put every...
  December 30th, 2017 20:40
• 2018 is just a number (Avigail) That first line says it all! Age is just a number as well. It is what we...
  December 30th, 2017 20:33
• A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Cloud (Aa Harvey) Yes, Aa, love does have two sides! Well said.
  December 30th, 2017 20:29
• this body/my body (Queer-with-a-pen) Completely agree with Lawless. While I feel comfortable in my body, I do...
  December 30th, 2017 20:26
• WORDS & ORIGINS 4 P Q R S T (BRIAN & ANGELA) Thanks Brian! You just managed to give me the last science lesson for
  December 30th, 2017 20:20
• Specsavers Here I Come. (Goldfinch60) With or without specs, sometimes we see what we want to see. You were just...
  December 30th, 2017 20:18
• Salvation Sufficiency (Orchidee) Very nicely penned (again), Orchi! Wishing you and yours a very happy and...
  December 30th, 2017 20:15
• RUMOURS (Michael Edwards) Love your poem. If you say something often enough, people tend to believe...
  December 30th, 2017 20:14
• The silence i speak (Mocuisle) Well, you say it how it is. Raw and honest, maybe a few \"f\" words too...
  December 30th, 2017 20:01
• Down & Out (KoKoRosie) I like your \'out\' poem. So when you hit that bottom, you have to shout...
  December 30th, 2017 19:54
• Happy Christmas MPS. (Goldfinch60) Thanks Goldie, and I wish you and your wife and family all the best for...
  December 25th, 2017 12:53
• My Guardian Angel (Lost-but-not-broken17) A beautiful tribute to your grandma! Wishing you both Male Kalikimaka and...
  December 24th, 2017 14:02
• Holiday Grin (MaddieJ) And a funny one it is! Happy Holidays Leya!
  December 23rd, 2017 02:27
• MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE (Michael Edwards) And a very merry Christmas, happy, healthy, prosperous New Year. May all...
  December 23rd, 2017 02:25
• A new dawn (Aa Harvey) Well written and intriguing. I too think we are moving towards the next...
  December 22nd, 2017 12:19
• A thankyou poem (Renzi) So good to hear from you again, Renzi! Mele Kalikimaka (Merry Christmas),...
  December 22nd, 2017 12:16
• CHRISTMAS BLESSINGS ~ TO ALL MPS MEMBERS (BRIAN & ANGELA) Mele Kalikimaka to you and your family!
  December 22nd, 2017 12:13
• Exist and flow (Poetic Dan) This must be one of your best poems, PD! Love it! And short too! Happy...
  December 22nd, 2017 12:12
• Preparing A people (Orchidee) Looks like you got it down pat, they just seem to flow from your...
  December 22nd, 2017 12:10
• The Challenge of Dreams. (Goldfinch60) That poem is going up on my wall! Thanks for sharing. What great last two...
  December 22nd, 2017 12:08
• CHRISTMAS ODE (2) (Michael Edwards) Looking at the US govt I don\'t think there is any shortage of turkeys...
  December 22nd, 2017 12:05
• Rainy (M.E.M.) A great last line that made me see the whole poem in a different way, more...
  December 22nd, 2017 12:01
• Forever there (Aa Harvey) A great tribute to the ones who went before us, Aa! And Happy Holidays to...
  December 21st, 2017 21:47
• Can you see me? (Niallprideaux) A nice tribute to your Grandma! She will always be with you in your heart,...
  December 21st, 2017 21:45
• Aegean (Baylee) Great second stanza! \'The colors of my brokeness\' ...beautiful choice of...
  December 21st, 2017 21:43
• Locked In. (Fay Slimm.) There is a lot of wisdom in your excellent poem, Fay! Thank you, and Happy...
  December 21st, 2017 21:38
• Whirley-gigging the coffee (Frank Prem) Thanks for that great story about your coffee! I too am a coffee lover. I...
  December 21st, 2017 21:28
• Now That I Love Her. (Kevin browne) Well expressed, Kevin, and yes, you may pick a rose for her and you may...
  December 21st, 2017 21:18
• Trail Of Sighs (La Plume De Noir) Beautiful poem, love the last stanza! Especially that beautiful choice of...
  December 21st, 2017 12:40
• Flower Of Life (La Plume De Noir) An incredibly well written ode to womanhood! Kudos, black feather!
  December 21st, 2017 12:37
• My Christmas Tree (Christina8) Merry Christmas Christina, to you and your birds! Great picture.
  December 21st, 2017 12:28
• CLOUDS & SUPERNOVA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Your poem brought me back to the time I learned to fly and had to memorize...
  December 21st, 2017 12:26
• Reflections. (Fay Slimm.) From my inner \'I\' to your inner \'I\': Merry Christmas and a happy,...
  December 21st, 2017 12:24
• Orchi Progress Report (Orchidee) Here is what you do, orchi: Close your eyes, take a deep breath, then a...
  December 21st, 2017 12:20
• Through My Eyes. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful pictures of Sophia Lauren. Your beautiful poem applies not only...
  December 21st, 2017 12:16
• CHRISTMAS ODE (1) (Michael Edwards) Good one, Michael, and I can see myself in the sketch! But with our...
  December 21st, 2017 12:06
• THE MAN I KNEW (Louis Gibbs) Louis, this poem is incredible! Love the idea, the words, the...
  December 21st, 2017 12:01
• Ghosted (Niallprideaux) Beautiful song, Niall! The poem is quite dark, raw and to the point. Hope...
  December 21st, 2017 11:56
• LOVE IS ~ CHRISTMAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Merry Christmas Brian, you nailed it!
  December 21st, 2017 11:35
• Garden of Eden (Entangledheart) This is a beautiful declaration of love, eh! And even though the pick up...
  December 21st, 2017 11:27
• THE CHINESE BRUSH (Completed Work) (Michael Edwards) Your last line also describes your poem, Michael! Nuff said!
  December 20th, 2017 20:09
• Six For Gold. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, your beautiful poem brings home the truth about life. If we...
  December 20th, 2017 20:07
• Winsome Worship (Orchidee) Well done, orchi!
  December 20th, 2017 20:04
• December Sun. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, you perfectly described a lot of our sunsets here! Magic, and so is...
  December 20th, 2017 20:03
• Feeding the light, nothing is ours (Poetic Dan) PD, love the picture of the three kids, yes, you are included! :-) Enjoy...
  December 20th, 2017 20:02
• Thinking (Adrianna Kjeld) Well written, Adrianna, but it does sound a bit like you are barking up...
  December 20th, 2017 19:55
• Your Warmth (Skyebellasario) Well written, skye! Great question at the end. Do I stay within my comfort...
  December 16th, 2017 18:53
• Poetry Is... (Christina8) Christina your poem is not only well written, it is so true. By writing we...
  December 16th, 2017 18:50
• Sweet Dividends. (Fay Slimm.) As you say so eloquently, Fay, it pays to invest in love!
  December 16th, 2017 18:47
• Where Would You Go? (Niallprideaux) Niall, this is a perfect metaphor about choice. Do we opt for the...
  December 16th, 2017 18:41
• The Piano. (Goldfinch60) I watched the movie first and it really put me into the right mood to read...
  December 16th, 2017 18:31
• A light shines now more brighter in heaven.... (Orchidee) Sorry for your loss! It is amazing that you woke up at that exact time. I...
  December 16th, 2017 18:20
• Dying in the Wind (Olivergreenwood19) Very well written, Oliver, with an incredible metaphor.
  December 16th, 2017 03:51
• Don\'t Speak (Baylee) An incredible poem with an unexpected, yet truthful ending. Well done,...
  December 16th, 2017 03:49
• MY CHRISTMAS STOCKING ~ A Contour Poem ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well done, Brian!!!
  December 16th, 2017 03:41
• His Last. (Fay Slimm.) And what a fine tribute this is, Fay! Grant was a master photographer, you...
  December 16th, 2017 03:36
• Light From Dark. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, I think my muse would have to use a sledge hammer to get me up...
  December 16th, 2017 03:21
• Servant Salvation (Orchidee) \'To open blind eyes\' Your writing, Orchi, is opening our eyes.
  December 16th, 2017 03:17
• POETRY IS.....RECEIVED BY LISTENING EARS (Michael Edwards) You truly are an incredible poet, Michael! And this poem proves it. PS:...
  December 16th, 2017 03:14
• When The Weather Gets A Little Lonely. (Kevin browne) Kevin, so well written, sad, but hopeful. Your poem took me through a...
  December 16th, 2017 03:10
• Renamed (Kurt Philip Behm) Very beautiful poem, Kurt. I admire your style and choice of words.
  December 16th, 2017 03:06
• Mom (Anonymous_1226) I am impressed by the raw power of your poem, A. Well written!
  December 16th, 2017 03:03
• SNOWBALLS ! A Contour Mirror Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) Wanna throw a snowball, but no snow? No problem. Get a lyrical snowball...
  December 15th, 2017 03:30
• LIMERICK 41 (Michael Edwards) Lovely painting! Great limerick, Michael. Well penned!
  December 15th, 2017 03:27
• THE ENCOUNTER (Louis Gibbs) I\'m with you all the way, Louis! Got my space helmet ready. Your poem...
  December 15th, 2017 03:24
• sharing the bed with the monsters that live underneath it (Abora) So well written, Abora! Great metaphors, well structured! And that last...
  December 14th, 2017 17:11
• The Memorable Moment (M.E.M.) Am happy for you, M.E.M., that your first date worked out! And from the...
  December 14th, 2017 14:47
• Goldie Christmas. (Goldfinch60) Goldie, you look AWESOME! And the poem is great! And I just love that last...
  December 14th, 2017 14:33
• Gabriel\'s Greetings (Orchidee) Perfect poem for this Holiday Season!
  December 14th, 2017 14:22