Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• THE PERPETUAL PRODUCTION (Louis Gibbs) Wow, Louis, you described life perfectly. \'A play without an ending\' is...
  December 4th, 2017 03:43
• GUILT (Michael Edwards) Beautiful painting, and a nice story too regarding the sale. Now for the...
  December 4th, 2017 03:19
• Lightlessness (Baylee) Nicole, it is not only the \'lightlessness\' that draws one in, it is your...
  December 3rd, 2017 23:07
• ACHE (KoKoRosie) KRM, it sounds like you had to give away a baby, and my heart goes out to...
  December 3rd, 2017 23:04
• Yesterday (A__pott) Alex, I have to assume you are talking about incontinence in the sense of...
  December 3rd, 2017 22:59
• A COUPLE OF COUPLETS TIMES TWO (Michael Edwards) You are a master of couplets: the brush and the pen!
  December 3rd, 2017 22:28
• I WILL NOT APOLOGIZE FOR THE WAY I SPEAK (Madisontoure) Welcome to MPS, Madison! Here you do not have to apologize for your...
  December 1st, 2017 01:35
• Preyed Upon (W c) It is called the \'food-chain\', and you wrote it well! Nice rhyming too!
  November 30th, 2017 13:52
• Be True (Tony36) Short and to the point, love it, Tony!
  November 30th, 2017 13:49
• Concluding Formal Prayers Series - 7 (Orchidee) For being short on time, I am impressed by this \'lickle\' wee bit of...
  November 30th, 2017 13:46
• Flower Over Love (Kevin browne) \'My heart has gone, God knows only where\'....\'old lovers lane kissed...
  November 30th, 2017 13:38
• Magic Is Still There (Christina8) Beautifully written, Christina, AND a great reminder what this season is...
  November 30th, 2017 13:33
• Seize and See. (Fay Slimm.) Carpe diem! Beautifully expressed, interesting, incredible structure! Fay,...
  November 30th, 2017 13:27
• WINTER LUNES (5 3 5) ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian, in your comment you said \'Lunes are like Tunes\', so would you...
  November 30th, 2017 13:24
• Jazz Without Sparkle. (Goldfinch60) The sparkle may have been missing in the jazz performance, but it...
  November 30th, 2017 13:16
• A FEW LUNES (Michael Edwards) Michael, what can I say? You are a master at these \"technical\' poems!...
  November 30th, 2017 00:29
• child (Frank Prem) And you are a child of beautiful poems, Frank! I admire your imagination...
  November 30th, 2017 00:17
• My Butterfly (DuKord) Well written and rhymed, DuKord! \'A heady spin, that draws me in\' drew...
  November 29th, 2017 23:04
• Do I Love You Too Much? (Its Raskolnikov) Ras, the ONE thing you cannot do too much of is LOVE! Everything else is...
  November 29th, 2017 22:10
• Beneath The Cloth (Thegirlwhowrites) Very well written, love the repetition of \'beneath the cloth\'. There is...
  November 29th, 2017 20:00
• those hours (Frank Prem) Completely agree with you, Frank! There is only one good thing about these...
  November 29th, 2017 19:07
• Letting Him Go (Chocolate_daisies) Another well written poem, c-d! Good rhyming, good flow. As for the...
  November 29th, 2017 18:50
• Dear Father (Chocolate_daisies) Incredibly well written, c-d. It hurts seeing a loved one, especially a...
  November 29th, 2017 18:46
• Lordship Laudings (Orchidee) Well written, well rhymed, orchidee! And you meet our needs...poetrywise!
  November 29th, 2017 18:40
• AUTUMN MEMORIES (Lasergraph) Well said, lasergraph! Holiday memories are the best!
  November 29th, 2017 18:37
• To Stay Or To Go (Mocuisle) Mocuisle, this poem seems to be a continuation of the last one. You wrote...
  November 29th, 2017 18:29
• Found Absent. (Fay Slimm.) A picture of a thousand words and a poem that paints a...
  November 29th, 2017 18:16
• CHRISTMAS QUICKIES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Looks like you are off to a good start into the Christmas Season! Enjoyed...
  November 29th, 2017 12:49
• SUMMER SOLSTICE (Michael Edwards) Michael, the painting is incredible. This is exactly how we...
  November 29th, 2017 03:59
• THE PRISONER (Louis Gibbs) Thank you Louis, for continuing this subject. It is about time that it...
  November 29th, 2017 03:57
• Stop the violence (Celena) Kind of hard to read, Celena, but I get the gist of your poem. Well done!...
  November 29th, 2017 03:36
• Day By Day (Orchidee) When I saw the title, orchidee, I thought you were gonna write about your...
  November 29th, 2017 03:28
• In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, after reading your incredible poem, I will never look at raindrops...
  November 29th, 2017 03:26
• HARRY AND MEGHAN ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Kind of nice, American Actress royalty together with English real...
  November 29th, 2017 03:22
• What! No Yorkshire!! (Goldfinch60) Goldie, I feel for you! I am cooking most of the meals at home here and...
  November 29th, 2017 03:14
• BE MINE (Michael Edwards) Michael, if you could bottle this poem, I would love to buy one and then...
  November 29th, 2017 03:09
• An oldie but a goodie (Renzi) Your re-appearance here and your oh so Renzi-like wee little poem (didn\'t...
  November 28th, 2017 12:06
• Used (KoKoRosie) You go girl!!! Very well written, good rhyming again, and a very powerful...
  November 28th, 2017 11:59
• Demon of Love (KoKoRosie) Very powerfully written, well rhymed, a great poem, KRM! I don\'t know...
  November 28th, 2017 11:57
• Roaming (KoKoRosie) Well written, KRM! It is not always easy to find oneself, and/or the place...
  November 28th, 2017 11:53
• AFFLICTIONS (Louis Gibbs) Louis, thank you for opening our eyes to this affliction! I know a couple...
  November 27th, 2017 21:30
• Lost/Found love (Celena) Welcome to MPS, Celena! Love and life can be a real roller coaster and...
  November 27th, 2017 21:25
• CHICKS (Michael Edwards) Nicely done, Michael!
  November 27th, 2017 21:20
• Walk To Eternity. (Goldfinch60) Who knows, Goldfinch, maybe one day we will all walk this path together,...
  November 27th, 2017 21:19
• H O M E IS WHERE THE C A T IS ! Diablo Reflection Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) You nailed it, Brian!
  November 27th, 2017 21:15
• A Thought. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, nobody could say it better than you just did!
  November 27th, 2017 21:06
• Keeping gratefulness on my plate (Poetic Dan) With my kids living in California, and me on this rock here in the middle...
  November 27th, 2017 21:04
• Mission Mandate (Orchidee) What can I say, orchidee, another good one penned in your original style!
  November 27th, 2017 21:02
• Temporal Faith Floats (WL Schuett) WL, you are a great writer! \'artillery of knowledge\', \'time on thin...
  November 27th, 2017 20:56
• mixing the signals (Mocuisle) Love the way you write, Locuisle! I guess you have to be like a gambler:...
  November 27th, 2017 20:47
• Not the Problem (MissileOfUncertainty) Very well written, very well stated, MoU! I do agree with you that my...
  November 27th, 2017 20:36
• Fear (Christina8) \'Only Thing We Have to Fear Is Fear Itself\' (Franklin D....
  November 27th, 2017 20:23
• Mindful Ministerings - Thomas á Kempis Series - 6 (Orchidee) You are getting better and better, orchidee, and definitely not \'dull\'...
  November 24th, 2017 12:48
• Raindrops On My Blanket. (Kevin browne) \'Shivers in the sunshine when all I lost was never really mine\' Kevin,...
  November 24th, 2017 12:44
• No Words. (Fay Slimm.) Sometimes we learn more without words.... Beautifully said, as only you...
  November 24th, 2017 12:36
• THANKSGIVING DAY ~ A Rhyming Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well said, Brian! And you are right, Thanksgiving is HUGE, even in Hawaii,...
  November 24th, 2017 12:34
• Prison Walls (Goldfinch60) Goldie, my heart goes out to you and your wife! So much is written about...
  November 24th, 2017 12:29
• SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3) (Michael Edwards) I think, Michael, that this is the best of the three missing lines...
  November 24th, 2017 12:14
• Made to fight this fight peacefully (Poetic Dan) Dan, I not only admire your writing, but also your willingness to fight...
  November 24th, 2017 12:12
• 22/05/17 (Skyebellasario) Skye, this is a beautiful, well written reminder that no matter how bad,...
  November 24th, 2017 11:55
• Thanksgiving (Christina8) I really like the way you wrote this poem, Christina! That is until the...
  November 24th, 2017 11:50
• Blessings (Laura🌻) Well written and very fitting for this Thanksgiving day! Should be put on...
  November 24th, 2017 11:48
• Colour (Skyebellasario) \'How the quietest of us have the loudest minds\' That line grabbed me,...
  November 24th, 2017 11:45
• Were I. (Fay Slimm.) A simple message, said in an incredibly beautiful way. Fay, I adore your...
  November 24th, 2017 11:38
• I shall become the storm (Poetic Dan) Even in a dark room behind a closed door there is a sliver of light from...
  November 24th, 2017 11:34
• Timeless Affection. (Kevin browne) You are not called \'kingkev\' for nothing! This is \'royal writing\'...
  November 24th, 2017 11:20
• Build Bridges - Senryu. (Goldfinch60) ...and some of us were hippies at one time! Sage advice - well said,...
  November 24th, 2017 11:16
• TEN UNCERTAINTIES FOR 2018 (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well written, Brian! Life is not only uncertain, it is a gamble. And we...
  November 24th, 2017 11:14
• The End (Queer-with-a-pen) Very well written, Boaz! Agree with James, it sounds like a story of death...
  November 24th, 2017 11:09
• MAN\'S CONSTRUCT (Michael Edwards) You quite nailed this mathematical poem. Too early in the morning for me...
  November 24th, 2017 11:04
• KNOWING (Louis Gibbs) This is soooo deeeep, Louis! Had to read it a few times just to get over...
  November 24th, 2017 11:00
• Silence (Thegirlwhowrites) It is amazing how much impact three well written short lines can have! I...
  November 24th, 2017 10:53
• Multicultural Marvellings (Orchidee) If everybody would live according to your poem, this world would be a...
  November 24th, 2017 10:50
• Christ (Tony36) Very well written, Tony!
  November 24th, 2017 10:48
• Thanksgiving (Christina8) Beautiful, now I am really hungry! Being timewise behind everybody else,...
  November 23rd, 2017 21:57
• You (Tony36) A mighty fine declaration of love, Tony!
  November 22nd, 2017 15:06
• Four in the Morning Feeling (Edthepoet) You expressed these \'four in the morning\' feelings perfectly! Kudos!
  November 22nd, 2017 15:05
• I\'m Thankful (Rrodriguez) Very beautifully written - Happy Thanksgiving!
  November 22nd, 2017 15:04
• Defying Gravity (Baylee) This is so beautifully written, Nicole, it nearly feels like an out of...
  November 22nd, 2017 13:30
• Praise Parade (Orchidee) \'Ich bin erfreut!\' (I am rejoicing) just by reading your poem, orchidee!...
  November 22nd, 2017 13:26
• The Proof (Fay Slimm.) Fay, I love your poem, love the excellent choice of words, the flow,...
  November 22nd, 2017 13:24
• Supreme Sensation. (Kevin browne) That supreme sensation turned into a supreme poem, Kevin!
  November 22nd, 2017 13:22
• CHRISTMAS CRACKERS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Never heard of Christmas crackers, not even when I lived in Canada, but...
  November 22nd, 2017 13:19
• Morpheus, Where Did You Go? (Goldfinch60) Great, great poem, Goldfinch! There are nights where I wonder the same...
  November 22nd, 2017 13:13
• SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (2). (Michael Edwards) Oh heck, Michael, you did it again! This time you curved some the bard\'s...
  November 22nd, 2017 13:11
• HEAVENLY EXPRESSIONS (Louis Gibbs) Art is art, no matter what shape, size, sound, no matter if written, sung,...
  November 22nd, 2017 13:08
• Reflection of hate (JLL517) I really like your poem, Vic! Well written, like the repetitions and...
  November 22nd, 2017 13:03
• Fuck The Game (Olivergreenwood19) Sometimes all it is is a game, and you either play, win or lose, or you...
  November 22nd, 2017 13:00
• Ethiopian Evangelism (Orchidee) Another great write! Don\'t know how you do it, you are so consistently...
  November 22nd, 2017 12:58
• Sacred Creek (WL Schuett) Like the others, I was drawn into your poem right to the last and rather...
  November 22nd, 2017 12:56
• I Am Cloud. (Fay Slimm.) I always viewed clouds as objects, but thanks to you and your very...
  November 22nd, 2017 12:52
• Cupboard Love. (Goldfinch60) Love it, Goldfinch! So many times, what for us is a mess, is loving...
  November 22nd, 2017 12:49
• WRAPPING PARCEL ~ An 8 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I like to use the comics pages to wrap gifts, that way, if the recipient...
  November 22nd, 2017 12:47
• Ode to Pugs (M.E.M.) The picture is cute, the dogs are cute, and you are cute the way you write...
  November 22nd, 2017 12:43
• Is Anything Planned? (Surucipe) And you have been playing games with my head reading your poem! I do like...
  November 22nd, 2017 12:40
• Majestic Marriage (Orchidee) Even though I grew up and am living Queen-less, I can still appreciate...
  November 22nd, 2017 12:32
• THE BIRTH OF SALVATION. (Lasergraph) With all the hoopla and commercialism we tend to forget the REAL meaning...
  November 22nd, 2017 12:25
• This World As We Know It. (Kevin browne) \'Mouth filled with the tongue of intellect revealing all brand new\' In...
  November 22nd, 2017 12:19
• SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (Michael Edwards) I see you took all of Shakespeare\'s missing lines and made a painting of...
  November 21st, 2017 15:36
• Raging Flames (A__pott) Wow! You are messing around with me here. Flames inside the mind and...
  November 21st, 2017 03:26