Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4) (Michael Edwards)
Well done (again) Michael! If I had to choose one of the three, it would...
December 6th, 2017 12:50 - Discipleship Discourse (Orchidee)
Very nice recording, orchi, but your poem outshines the song!
December 6th, 2017 04:12 - PASSING STRANGERS (Louis Gibbs)
Definitely a favorite, Louis!
You do have a gift of getting to the...
December 6th, 2017 02:59 - Time (Its Raskolnikov)
Well written, Ras! Sometimes we wish we could slow down time, and at other...
December 5th, 2017 13:10 - Pupa (M.E.M.)
Very intriguing, M.E.M, and applicable to a lot more than a sculpture.
I...
December 5th, 2017 13:07 - Here to teach and be taught (Poetic Dan)
Am with Fay here, PD! Very well written.
December 5th, 2017 12:55 - Paralyzing Tides (Baylee)
Wow, Nicole, this poem really touched me. Well written too. Learned a new...
December 5th, 2017 12:53 - Time (Accidental Poet)
Thank you, AP, for a very uplifting and positive outlook on life. Now all...
December 5th, 2017 05:00 - Do You ? (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully written, Fay!
December 5th, 2017 04:59 - Deacons Dynamism (Orchidee)
I have to say, orchidee, I admire all these deacons on how much time,...
December 5th, 2017 04:57 - Thinking of Nothing. (Goldfinch60)
First: Goldfinch, get well soon!
Second: Love that poem, and when I look...
December 5th, 2017 04:55 - In Flight (Thoff1)
And this well written poem proves your last line, Tomo!
December 5th, 2017 04:38 - Don\'t Look Back (Tanvir H)
Like the title and the song, tanvir! One should never look back, both in...
December 5th, 2017 04:37 - Cold (Adrianna Kjeld)
Adrianna, I like your raw, straight forward writing. I wonder though how...
December 5th, 2017 04:35 - Make Up For The Love (Its Raskolnikov)
Very well written, Ras! I do like it!
December 5th, 2017 04:27 - Worry Will Vanish (M.E.M.)
It is very hard to see the world through somebody else\'s eyes, because we...
December 5th, 2017 04:25 - Wrapped Up In Christmas (Christina8)
Well penned, Christina. With everything that is going on during the...
December 5th, 2017 04:22 - Springtime\'s First. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful poem, Fay!
I don\'t even know if daffodils grow here. But we...
December 5th, 2017 04:19 - Survivor (Accidental Poet)
Very well penned, AP! Yes, we are all survivors and we are all family too....
December 5th, 2017 04:17 - Beyond Pain (WL Schuett)
Great painting, great poem, WL!
And you are so right,
art is life, and...
December 5th, 2017 03:52 - who will leave you clean (Frank Prem)
After reading your poem, Frank, I could smell that clean smell you get...
December 5th, 2017 03:46 - Sweet Potion. (Fay Slimm.)
To use \'fragrance\' in writing about love is not only imaginative, but...
December 5th, 2017 03:44 - Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3) (Michael Edwards)
The watercolor is superb!
Love all three of them. To me they also sound...
December 5th, 2017 03:39 - A Portrait of a Dead Boy (MissileOfUncertainty)
The painting is very good, and so is the writing, MoU!
We tend not to...
December 5th, 2017 03:34 - ()
I love your poem, Diamond! You are delving into quantum theory, vibrating...
December 5th, 2017 03:26 - THE CONFORMIST (Michael Edwards)
To me \'thinking outside of the box\' is like an out of body experience,...
December 4th, 2017 04:13 - Spirit Stream (Orchidee)
The first two lines of this poem are just incredible, orchidee! Not that...
December 4th, 2017 04:04 - the purpose (of the St Nemom machine) (Frank Prem)
Incredible writing, incredible concept.
December 4th, 2017 03:58 - Supermoon. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful poem AND beautiful picture, Goldfinch! It is amazing how we...
December 4th, 2017 03:47 - THE PERPETUAL PRODUCTION (Louis Gibbs)
Wow, Louis, you described life perfectly. \'A play without an ending\' is...
December 4th, 2017 03:43 - GUILT (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful painting, and a nice story too regarding the sale.
Now for the...
December 4th, 2017 03:19 - Lightlessness (Baylee)
Nicole, it is not only the \'lightlessness\' that draws one in, it is your...
December 3rd, 2017 23:07 - ACHE (KoKoRosie)
KRM, it sounds like you had to give away a baby, and my heart goes out to...
December 3rd, 2017 23:04 - Yesterday (A__pott)
Alex, I have to assume you are talking about incontinence in the sense of...
December 3rd, 2017 22:59 - Heaven\'s Strongest Love (Accidental Poet)
AP, this is a very strong and beautiful poem, celebrating all our moms!
December 3rd, 2017 22:52 - A COUPLE OF COUPLETS TIMES TWO (Michael Edwards)
You are a master of couplets: the brush and the pen!
December 3rd, 2017 22:28 - I WILL NOT APOLOGIZE FOR THE WAY I SPEAK (Madisontoure)
Welcome to MPS, Madison! Here you do not have to apologize for your...
December 1st, 2017 01:35 - Preyed Upon (W c)
It is called the \'food-chain\', and you wrote it well! Nice rhyming too!
November 30th, 2017 13:52 - Be True (Tony36)
Short and to the point, love it, Tony!
November 30th, 2017 13:49 - Concluding Formal Prayers Series - 7 (Orchidee)
For being short on time, I am impressed by this \'lickle\' wee bit of...
November 30th, 2017 13:46 - Flower Over Love (Kevin browne)
\'My heart has gone, God knows only where\'....\'old lovers lane kissed...
November 30th, 2017 13:38 - Magic Is Still There (Christina8)
Beautifully written, Christina, AND a great reminder what this season is...
November 30th, 2017 13:33 - Seize and See. (Fay Slimm.)
Carpe diem! Beautifully expressed, interesting, incredible structure! Fay,...
November 30th, 2017 13:27 - WINTER LUNES (5 3 5) ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, in your comment you said \'Lunes are like Tunes\', so would you...
November 30th, 2017 13:24 - In Retrospect (Accidental Poet)
This is a well written thoughtful poem, AP. It touches something I think...
November 30th, 2017 13:21 - Jazz Without Sparkle. (Goldfinch60)
The sparkle may have been missing in the jazz performance, but it...
November 30th, 2017 13:16 - A FEW LUNES (Michael Edwards)
Michael, what can I say? You are a master at these \"technical\' poems!...
November 30th, 2017 00:29 - child (Frank Prem)
And you are a child of beautiful poems, Frank!
I admire your imagination...
November 30th, 2017 00:17 - My Butterfly (DuKord)
Well written and rhymed, DuKord!
\'A heady spin, that draws me in\' drew...
November 29th, 2017 23:04 - Do I Love You Too Much? (Its Raskolnikov)
Ras, the ONE thing you cannot do too much of is LOVE! Everything else is...
November 29th, 2017 22:10 - Beneath The Cloth (Thegirlwhowrites)
Very well written, love the repetition of \'beneath the cloth\'. There is...
November 29th, 2017 20:00 - those hours (Frank Prem)
Completely agree with you, Frank! There is only one good thing about these...
November 29th, 2017 19:07 - Letting Him Go (Chocolate_daisies)
Another well written poem, c-d! Good rhyming, good flow.
As for the...
November 29th, 2017 18:50 - Dear Father (Chocolate_daisies)
Incredibly well written, c-d. It hurts seeing a loved one, especially a...
November 29th, 2017 18:46 - Lordship Laudings (Orchidee)
Well written, well rhymed, orchidee! And you meet our needs...poetrywise!
November 29th, 2017 18:40 - AUTUMN MEMORIES (Lasergraph)
Well said, lasergraph! Holiday memories are the best!
November 29th, 2017 18:37 - To Stay Or To Go (Mocuisle)
Mocuisle, this poem seems to be a continuation of the last one. You wrote...
November 29th, 2017 18:29 - Found Absent. (Fay Slimm.)
A picture of a thousand words and a poem that paints a...
November 29th, 2017 18:16 - For When a Man (Accidental Poet)
Great writing, AP! It reminded me that we wear all these masks, trying to...
November 29th, 2017 13:02 - CHRISTMAS QUICKIES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Looks like you are off to a good start into the Christmas Season! Enjoyed...
November 29th, 2017 12:49 - SUMMER SOLSTICE (Michael Edwards)
Michael, the painting is incredible. This is exactly how we...
November 29th, 2017 03:59 - THE PRISONER (Louis Gibbs)
Thank you Louis, for continuing this subject. It is about time that it...
November 29th, 2017 03:57 - Stop the violence (Celena)
Kind of hard to read, Celena, but I get the gist of your poem. Well done!...
November 29th, 2017 03:36 - Day By Day (Orchidee)
When I saw the title, orchidee, I thought you were gonna write about your...
November 29th, 2017 03:28 - In Transit. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, after reading your incredible poem, I will never look at raindrops...
November 29th, 2017 03:26 - HARRY AND MEGHAN ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Kind of nice, American Actress royalty together with English real...
November 29th, 2017 03:22 - Old Stuff (Accidental Poet)
AP, I am with you all the way, including the look into the mirror! Great...
November 29th, 2017 03:19 - What! No Yorkshire!! (Goldfinch60)
Goldie, I feel for you! I am cooking most of the meals at home here and...
November 29th, 2017 03:14 - BE MINE (Michael Edwards)
Michael, if you could bottle this poem, I would love to buy one and then...
November 29th, 2017 03:09 - An oldie but a goodie (Renzi)
Your re-appearance here and your oh so Renzi-like wee little poem (didn\'t...
November 28th, 2017 12:06 - Used (KoKoRosie)
You go girl!!! Very well written, good rhyming again, and a very powerful...
November 28th, 2017 11:59 - Demon of Love (KoKoRosie)
Very powerfully written, well rhymed, a great poem, KRM!
I don\'t know...
November 28th, 2017 11:57 - Roaming (KoKoRosie)
Well written, KRM! It is not always easy to find oneself, and/or the place...
November 28th, 2017 11:53 - AFFLICTIONS (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, thank you for opening our eyes to this affliction! I know a couple...
November 27th, 2017 21:30 - Lost/Found love (Celena)
Welcome to MPS, Celena!
Love and life can be a real roller coaster and...
November 27th, 2017 21:25 - CHICKS (Michael Edwards)
Nicely done, Michael!
November 27th, 2017 21:20 - Walk To Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Who knows, Goldfinch, maybe one day we will all walk this path together,...
November 27th, 2017 21:19 - H O M E IS WHERE THE C A T IS ! Diablo Reflection Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You nailed it, Brian!
November 27th, 2017 21:15 - Hello, Me Again (Accidental Poet)
I really like your poem! But I don\'t say \"Hello\", I say \"OK,...
November 27th, 2017 21:13 - A Thought. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, nobody could say it better than you just did!
November 27th, 2017 21:06 - Keeping gratefulness on my plate (Poetic Dan)
With my kids living in California, and me on this rock here in the middle...
November 27th, 2017 21:04 - Mission Mandate (Orchidee)
What can I say, orchidee, another good one penned in your original style!
November 27th, 2017 21:02 - Temporal Faith Floats (WL Schuett)
WL, you are a great writer! \'artillery of knowledge\', \'time on thin...
November 27th, 2017 20:56 - mixing the signals (Mocuisle)
Love the way you write, Locuisle! I guess you have to be like a gambler:...
November 27th, 2017 20:47 - Not the Problem (MissileOfUncertainty)
Very well written, very well stated, MoU! I do agree with you that my...
November 27th, 2017 20:36 - Fear (Christina8)
\'Only Thing We Have to Fear Is Fear Itself\' (Franklin D....
November 27th, 2017 20:23 - Mindful Ministerings - Thomas á Kempis Series - 6 (Orchidee)
You are getting better and better, orchidee, and definitely not \'dull\'...
November 24th, 2017 12:48 - Raindrops On My Blanket. (Kevin browne)
\'Shivers in the sunshine when all I lost was never really mine\'
Kevin,...
November 24th, 2017 12:44 - No Words. (Fay Slimm.)
Sometimes we learn more without words....
Beautifully said, as only you...
November 24th, 2017 12:36 - THANKSGIVING DAY ~ A Rhyming Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well said, Brian! And you are right, Thanksgiving is HUGE, even in Hawaii,...
November 24th, 2017 12:34 - Prison Walls (Goldfinch60)
Goldie, my heart goes out to you and your wife! So much is written about...
November 24th, 2017 12:29 - SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3) (Michael Edwards)
I think, Michael, that this is the best of the three missing lines...
November 24th, 2017 12:14 - Made to fight this fight peacefully (Poetic Dan)
Dan, I not only admire your writing, but also your willingness to fight...
November 24th, 2017 12:12 - Dance of the Poet\'s Pen (Accidental Poet)
May your pen keep on dancing forever! And what a beautiful dance it is!
November 24th, 2017 12:06 - 22/05/17 (Skyebellasario)
Skye, this is a beautiful, well written reminder that no matter how bad,...
November 24th, 2017 11:55 - Thanksgiving (Christina8)
I really like the way you wrote this poem, Christina! That is until the...
November 24th, 2017 11:50 - Blessings (Laura🌻)
Well written and very fitting for this Thanksgiving day! Should be put on...
November 24th, 2017 11:48 - Colour (Skyebellasario)
\'How the quietest of us have the loudest minds\'
That line grabbed me,...
November 24th, 2017 11:45 - Were I. (Fay Slimm.)
A simple message, said in an incredibly beautiful way. Fay, I adore your...
November 24th, 2017 11:38 - I shall become the storm (Poetic Dan)
Even in a dark room behind a closed door there is a sliver of light from...
November 24th, 2017 11:34
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