Comments on community poems by PoeticBiscuit
- You stole from me (ARTreborn)
I’m sorry for your loss. The emotion jumps from your words, beautifully...
August 11th, 2023 14:20
- Cross Purposes (Lorna)
A feeling we all know too well. Splendid write.
August 13th, 2021 14:15
- I didn\'t know this until you came to exist (Poetic Dan)
Great write Dan. This community is definitely amazing. Being able to ride...
November 29th, 2020 03:25
- chaos in every beauty (Payton_loves_poetry)
Love is one of the strongest aspects of life. It can be your savior or...
November 29th, 2020 02:31
- In the End (Neville)
Yet if we spend too much time thinking of the end, do we ever truly allow...
November 29th, 2020 02:27
- My Lady Was a Poem (Neville)
Truly a breathtaking poem that I feel many could relate to. The way it...
November 27th, 2020 16:16
- Clarity of Remembrance within Gratitude (L. B. Mek)
I always felt it was sad that we’d let kids dress up as cowboys and...
November 27th, 2020 16:00
- A soulful purge! (Poetic Dan)
Poetry is one of many therapies. To take your thoughts and place them on...
November 27th, 2020 15:45
- covid robbery (Dusk arising)
This pandemic is truly robbing many of key life moments. Graduations,...
July 14th, 2020 14:05
- Treasured. (Fay Slimm.)
Our memories are one of the greatest things we have. Being able to...
July 8th, 2020 02:47
- Drunk Like Black Stones (Satishverma)
The way you put words together is a masterpiece within itself.
July 7th, 2020 20:56
- What we lost (JoshLohr)
All wins come with loss from others no? A very thought provoking piece...
July 7th, 2020 12:50
- Eye with no sight (Poetic Dan)
I agree with you on those first two lines! We are all beautifully unique...
July 7th, 2020 10:46
- Rhymester muses (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
A lovely little poem that makes you feel as if you’re flying along with...
July 7th, 2020 10:43
- White Violets (Neville)
Sweet, and fulfilling. What more could you ask from a good write?
July 5th, 2020 08:57
- Grow (Poetic Dan)
Your ripple is reaching mine my friend, I think I’ve just found some...
July 5th, 2020 08:43
- The Murder of Minds (Valkrians)
Such a rough experience blooms a pleasant poem. Welcome to MPS!
July 3rd, 2020 12:28
- The Logic of Fools (Neville)
We can only ever choose to forget history, though it’ll never change....
July 3rd, 2020 12:26
- forever judas? (Dusk arising)
Well said Dusk, well said.
July 3rd, 2020 12:21
- a little love song (Dusk arising)
Splendid write with a happy little end I wasn’t expecting. A very...
July 2nd, 2020 15:29
- Facebook... (Bragee)
I thoroughly enjoyed this. Made me smile with the “book to the face”...
July 2nd, 2020 15:27
- global warning (Dusk arising)
So many lines throughout this write that sends chills down your spine....
March 26th, 2020 16:09
- My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions (Neville)
Simple yet impactful write that encourages thoughts among your readers....
March 26th, 2020 15:07
- Living Side - Poet’s Note 2 (Nafis Light)
Wonderful write Joker. Sometimes a little maturing will do a great amount...
March 26th, 2020 14:41
- silent waves of time (Crystal Hope)
Nothing as soothing as watching the waves ripple. That last line sent...
March 24th, 2020 17:41
- Blissful Moon (PoeticBiscuit)
Thanks for stopping by, glad I could help you reminisce a little.
-PB
March 24th, 2020 14:40
- bruises (Dusk arising)
Wonderful write Dusk. It’s unfortunate how often these situations arise....
March 24th, 2020 14:30
- Still trying Mr Lee (Poetic Dan)
The first few lines hold so much truth. Well written as always my...
March 24th, 2020 14:23
- Job Lot of Biro’s (Neville)
A very touching write Neville. Time takes all except for the memories that...
March 24th, 2020 14:19
- Living Side - Poet’s Note 1 (Nafis Light)
Its a shame how much we take for granted this beautiful world around us. I...
March 24th, 2020 14:16
- Biscuit? (Saxon Crow)
Nothing wrong with being a biscuit! Who knew a biscuit could have such...
March 13th, 2020 08:31
- Every biscuit but one (Poetic Dan)
Seems like you enjoyed writing this one, and I for one enjoyed reading it....
March 13th, 2020 08:29
- Wedding Bells or Warning Signs? (PoeticBiscuit)
Thanks for reading dusk, your feedback have and always will be greatly...
March 12th, 2020 17:52
- None will ever know existed (Poetic Dan)
Fantastic Write to go with a fantastic message.
November 7th, 2019 12:47
- Unwilling subjects (Poetic Dan)
Absolutely love the message Dan, speak your truth with the words from the...
November 6th, 2019 16:44
- Take Me Somewhere (Neville)
Sounds like someone’s enjoying themselves,
Great write!
November 5th, 2019 15:06
- pure as driven (Dusk arising)
A much needed message in today’s times. That last line perfectly sums it...
August 16th, 2019 20:14
- Perfectly imperfect (Poetic Dan)
Wonderfully spoken Dan, keep being that light!
August 16th, 2019 20:08
- Through a Tangle of Shadows (Neville)
Hmm, so many ways to interpret this one. Well done N, this one is a
August 16th, 2019 20:05
- War a Senryu (Neville)
Speaking the truth in a nice little write.
August 15th, 2019 23:15
- Unlikely (V)
Actions do speak louder than words yet love can go far deeper than...
August 14th, 2019 14:09
- Find your rainbow (Poetic Dan)
But what’s at the end of the rainbow?
Jokes aside this was a lovely...
August 14th, 2019 14:08
- Singular I’s (Neville)
I very much enjoy the formatting of your poems, they’re always so...
August 14th, 2019 14:06
- Living Life. (Goldfinch60)
Strive to be someone the world will mourn when you’re gone. Beautiful...
August 14th, 2019 14:04
- Mature Love (Christina8)
The beauty is in the simplicity. Your words are dripping with emotion....
August 14th, 2019 00:20
- what lights your eyes (Dusk arising)
I love this. Such emotional lyrics that really just pull you in. Has to be...
August 13th, 2019 13:51
- See beyond & travel on (Poetic Dan)
I’m absolutely loving all the positivity you have been putting into your...
August 13th, 2019 13:48
- Gangster of love! (Poetic Dan)
The happiness from this one is quite contagious, thank you for being the...
August 12th, 2019 21:31
- Bated Breath (Christina8)
This one is a little steamy haha. It was well written though!
August 12th, 2019 21:28
- we need a whole lot of love (Dusk arising)
Wish I could hear those instruments because the words alone almost have me...
August 11th, 2019 21:56
- Kunoichi no Geisha (Neville)
Without danger would being safe feel as comforting? Just a thought. This...
August 11th, 2019 21:54
- King\'s, Queens and all in between (Poetic Dan)
You’re such a kind hearted person. Oh and also an amazing writer. Thanks...
August 11th, 2019 21:52
- Rare (Poetic Dan)
Always so kind Dan! That type of personality is rare.
August 10th, 2019 21:35
- all the times she tried (Dusk arising)
Keep them coming DA I’ll be here for them all!
August 10th, 2019 21:33
- Flawed (Neville)
Giving just enough information to paint a vivid picture yet remain...
August 10th, 2019 21:26
- Let the voices in (Poetic Dan)
Did you say you needed a Biscuit?
Jokes aside, this was another good...
August 9th, 2019 20:11
- Why When Where and How (Neville)
Simple yet entertaining, keep it up!
August 9th, 2019 20:06
- Entirely devoted (BoxMyHeart)
Now where have you been hiding? Cause apparently I’ve been missing out...
August 9th, 2019 20:05
- Walking Home. (Goldfinch60)
I love it! That last comedic line tying the pieces together, very well...
August 9th, 2019 19:55
- be able to enter (Dusk arising)
I may not fully agree with the message but the write is well done...
August 8th, 2019 20:24
- DROLL COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
A good laugh can make a day much better. Thank you for doing just that!
August 8th, 2019 20:17
- Not a Poet (V)
Welcome to the site V.G, looking forward to more of your work after this...
August 8th, 2019 20:16
- That Secret Place (Neville)
I’m glad I decided to take a look into your writing because now I...
August 8th, 2019 12:45
- Night Time Symphony (Christina8)
The world has changed so much from when I was a child and I’m not even...
August 8th, 2019 12:36
- Life is yours (Poetic Dan)
You just took who you are as a person and put it into a poem. and just...
August 7th, 2019 21:54
- there (Dusk arising)
Perhaps you could show me where this place is? I could use a bit of...
August 7th, 2019 21:21
- Senseless (Christina8)
I’d have to agree with the others and say you’re wrong. This is...
August 7th, 2019 02:10
- Thinking Backwards (Neville)
I can’t explain it but your poems always put me in a trance! And I enjoy...
August 6th, 2019 13:57
- Play a role, listening to your soul (Poetic Dan)
Always using those big words! I really loved the last bit with all the...
August 6th, 2019 13:54
- my lonely (Purged-soul whispered-sin)
This one played with the heart strings, very well done.
August 5th, 2019 11:51
- Being Here Is A Hobby...No It\'s Not (Nafis Light)
This one can really make you think about what’s actually hobbies or...
August 5th, 2019 11:48
- Herb Song (Neville)
This one transported me to that very same meadow, and I felt as if I...
August 5th, 2019 11:46
- Dreamworld Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Sometimes we just have to disappear into our own dreamworld just to get...
August 5th, 2019 11:41
- Finding Neverland (Woodkatie28)
Just because we grow old who says we can no longer believe? Fantastic...
August 5th, 2019 11:39
- Fearless (Poetic Dan)
My favorite line would have to be “ I no longer look for validation to...
August 5th, 2019 11:37
- Summer Daze (Christina8)
This one kind of outlines the feelings I’ve been having. My anxiety has...
August 5th, 2019 11:33
- Nature said (Poetic Dan)
Wonderfully done dan, loved every bit of it! Nature is one of the greatest...
August 4th, 2019 09:29
- I can\'t write (Aa Harvey)
I understand exactly how that feels, when you just hit that spot where...
August 3rd, 2019 12:22
- Elders are the question, youth are the answer (Poetic Dan)
This is just an amazing piece of art. Congratulations on the little one...
August 3rd, 2019 11:09
- takes me there (Dusk arising)
Always writing zingers my friend please keep them coming for I am always...
August 3rd, 2019 11:05
- Panic! (Christina8)
Panic attacks are truly rough, and your poems are truly amazing. I...
August 3rd, 2019 00:58
- Facade (Christina8)
Who knew you could put so much emotion into only four lines? Another great...
August 2nd, 2019 20:49
- Who covers the young ears, explicit language (Poetic Dan)
I love this, a great poem with an even greater message. I struggle with...
August 2nd, 2019 17:45
- A Cup Of Tea (Christina8)
I really enjoyed the sweet simplicity of this one. Would you like a...
July 31st, 2019 01:51
- A speck (Poetic Dan)
Sometimes all we can do is do the best we can with what we have. If...
July 31st, 2019 01:49
- Out of it (PoeticBiscuit)
I can say my mind is in a much better place than it once was, however I...
July 29th, 2019 16:04
- The Fall (Christina8)
I think you did a fabulous job, it was a really enjoyable read. Sometimes...
July 29th, 2019 12:44
- Strange! Come see \"it\" in my brain (Poetic Dan)
You’re very much unique. Each write you share with us sends me on a...
July 29th, 2019 12:41
- Break Your Heart (Christina8)
Simple yet powerful, and very well written.
July 28th, 2019 14:10
- Love rays everyday (Poetic Dan)
This has to be my favorite read yet. Its just such a delicate piece of...
July 28th, 2019 14:07
- dusk arises (Dusk arising)
This poem painted me a very vivid picture. and it was spectacular.
July 26th, 2019 01:18