Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Guilt Trip. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - what a temptation a tray full of shortbread - no worries or...
August 1st, 2020 13:37 - Friday night (when the light is right) AKA Mothballs (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Yes youth has to try out wings after occasions like these Andrew - let us...
August 1st, 2020 13:35 - Adonais is Fallen (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Such a well constructed tribute Kevin to a much-missed father and which...
July 29th, 2020 04:02 - SMOKEY *18* ADJUDICATOR ~ FIDOS DEPUTY CAT ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ha ha - - a fun read to brighten a bit of a cloudy-dull day here -...
July 29th, 2020 03:54 - pulsing fluff (Dusk arising)
Wow- wheee D.A. - there could be nothing more romantic than this...
July 29th, 2020 03:51 - Beyond Giving (Neville)
Yes easing an ego out of the way to find more maturity takes personal...
July 28th, 2020 04:23 - Trump (Dusk arising)
Oh and I lurved that yacket sax........
July 27th, 2020 08:33 - Trump (Dusk arising)
Ha ha ha - hilarious D.A. is this witty conclusion.
July 27th, 2020 08:32 - High Priest Petitioning (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi.
July 27th, 2020 07:49 - Two Weeks in July (Neville)
The painful realization of temporary oneness shoots all through this...
July 27th, 2020 07:48 - Thinking Back. (Goldfinch60)
A wise write Andy - - thinking back to regrets can only bring negative...
July 27th, 2020 06:21 - moment of release (Dusk arising)
A sliver of memory which intrigues more with each line - I love the draw...
July 26th, 2020 10:47 - Old One Eye (Neville)
A perfectly lyrical piece of poemed excitement lies in local shallows and ...
July 26th, 2020 06:22 - LIFE GETS TEDIOUS DON* IT ~ BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An engaging read and so unique in its wording - this shows things can only...
July 24th, 2020 10:57 - THE GUITAR ~ WEEPS (LORCA) ~ TRANSLATION BY ANGELA ~ AN 8 4 2 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This has to be one of your best dear Duo - - it pulls at the heartstrings...
July 23rd, 2020 10:15 - walk away (Dusk arising)
A telling write on self-preservation D.A. - - such a scent of sadness to...
July 22nd, 2020 03:31 - In the year twenty four hundred and ignorance (Dusk arising)
Such a sad read and showing how the planet and occupants may be in that...
July 22nd, 2020 02:09 - Words For Walking Wisely (Orchidee)
Good read Orchi.
July 20th, 2020 06:23 - an interesting day (Dusk arising)
A tale to take the imagination to heights of wanting a sequel - - - a...
July 20th, 2020 05:09 - TWENTY-SIX ASPECTS OF LOVE ~ AN ABCDarian POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your words have covered most aspects of Love dear duo - wishing you an...
July 20th, 2020 05:03 - Adrift With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely number and how I agree that nature is the experience we all need to...
July 20th, 2020 05:01 - Love Story (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A super read which brought me near tears - first of sadness then joy - -...
July 20th, 2020 04:57 - ON READING A LETTER (Michael Edwards)
You have poemed an intriguiing situation dear Michael with your winning...
July 16th, 2020 11:18 - Mullins Yard (Neville)
I had to read this flowing ballad out loud and twice to get the wonderful...
July 15th, 2020 08:44 - A MAN OF STUBBORN STEEL (Michael Edwards)
With you in these words of present discernment on what constitutes...
July 14th, 2020 04:03 - covid robbery (Dusk arising)
Oh the sadness in this lament dear friend - - to be robbed of your...
July 14th, 2020 04:00 - CONFUCIUS SAYS: (Michael Edwards)
Hard winters brought queues after that observation when loos were...
July 13th, 2020 13:26 - Ego\'s Down (Neville)
Love the clever play on words in this denunciation of all those...
July 13th, 2020 10:54 - KNIVES - FORKS & SPOONS ~ A 6 6 2 RHYMING SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - love reading this one as cutlery has always meant much to me - - the...
July 9th, 2020 04:49 - Untitled - XXXIII (Suresh)
This makes clear the need to become aware that human intellect often falls...
July 8th, 2020 03:00 - AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - how true Michael. More aging couplets please.
July 7th, 2020 15:04 - Our Little Wing... (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Someone important in your life will treasure this love wrapped up in lines...
July 7th, 2020 15:00 - Eye with no sight (Poetic Dan)
A real treat of a read Dan - - this \"coming out from within\" is going...
July 7th, 2020 14:39 - Poor Git (Neville)
The speed which cross contamination can hit is expertly poemed in this...
July 7th, 2020 13:01 - PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILTY ~ A VILLANELLE (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine contribution of classic poetry on which you have obviously worked...
July 7th, 2020 04:10 - Mother Nature’s Masterpiece (PoeticBiscuit)
You aptly word the dynamic force found in nature and thank you for sharing...
July 6th, 2020 15:59 - goodbye Morricone (Dusk arising)
And enchanting his contribution to cinema was D.A. -- - a fantastic...
July 6th, 2020 07:51 - Presence Perceived (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
July 6th, 2020 05:50 - Mid Summer Meadow (Neville)
Picture-perfect this rendering of such a near miss Nev which many of us...
July 6th, 2020 05:49 - Art Where No Men Tread (Goldfinch60)
A wonderfully flowing and very inspiring tribute to Michael\'s abstract...
July 6th, 2020 03:14 - My Dad is My Hero (PoeticBiscuit)
Who would not be proud with a Dad like that - - - - -thanks for sharing...
July 5th, 2020 15:41 - Imagine (Peto)
Filled with great comparisons this romantic verse puts the pain of love on...
July 5th, 2020 14:54 - White Violets (Neville)
The rise and fall of that whiteness on green with every female breath I...
July 5th, 2020 10:30 - it will come (Dusk arising)
Danci\' and wrigglin\' at my desk as I read your ballad to love - Wow - ...
July 4th, 2020 01:59 - Special Sheep (Orchidee)
A fine piece of gentle reminder that sheep know their owner and vice...
July 4th, 2020 01:55 - LIBERATION SATURDAY BLUES ~ FIVE 57577 TANKAS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oh - you have chosen a fave. singer for me -- and the number always brings...
July 3rd, 2020 07:43 - WHERE NO MEN TREAD (Michael Edwards)
The force of your words along with the strength of texture and colour in...
July 3rd, 2020 03:34 - Lost in Words. (Goldfinch60)
So often that happens to me too - minds take wings to another dimension...
July 3rd, 2020 03:30 - The Logic of Fools (Neville)
Anti-social to the greatest extent is this kind of destruction Nev and...
July 3rd, 2020 03:03 - Creation Cantabilations (Orchidee)
Lovely read Orchi - nature can teach us so many things.
July 2nd, 2020 16:23 - FUTURE IS ORANGE ~ ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Certainly lots feel as the song goes - dear Duo - - \"bewitched - bothered...
July 2nd, 2020 16:14 - FUTURE IS ORANGE ~ ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Certainly lots feel as the song goes - dear Duo - - \"bewitched - bothered...
July 2nd, 2020 16:14 - a little love song (Dusk arising)
An engaging read D.A. Despite what we make up our minds to do Love has its...
July 2nd, 2020 16:10 - Being Bilingual. (Goldfinch60)
You last line left me smiling dear Andy as I expected no less than a...
July 2nd, 2020 04:54 - Simplicity (Suresh)
Simple is always the best Suresh -and magically captured in just a few...
July 2nd, 2020 02:08 - Your Country Say\'s it Needs You (Neville)
Not so many years back the terrible carnage and captured so well the life...
July 2nd, 2020 02:06 - Cuts (Peto)
A powerful write petp with a finalé to bring signs of better things...
July 1st, 2020 15:07 - Remembering a Poet (Laura🌻)
A wonderful gesture indeed as Kevin\'s work was very well received here on...
July 1st, 2020 09:46 - music amplified (Dusk arising)
One word only for this poetic gem combined with the moving music -
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July 1st, 2020 08:09 - A moment of bliss (Aa Harvey)
That experience must be worth a visit to the dentist for me very soon -...
July 1st, 2020 03:25 - Waiting at the Tip. (Goldfinch60)
Oooh - and there is plenty prunings waiting in the shed for just that...
July 1st, 2020 03:23 - Aftertaste (Neville)
A refreshing conception of tastes your pen makes here Nev and compares so...
July 1st, 2020 02:20 - Untitled - XXIX (Suresh)
So true Suresh - and this planet though surrounded with intelligence...
June 30th, 2020 02:25 - Depression is.... (MelissaJA)
Thanks Melissa for a well written verse on depression - - expressed...
June 30th, 2020 02:22 - Is She a Bad Mother. (Goldfinch60)
Those offspring who fly the nest invariably come back again after...
June 30th, 2020 02:20 - Waiting for the Big E (Neville)
Truth and love certainly do matter in the journey toward enlightenment and...
June 30th, 2020 02:01 - a different way (Dusk arising)
Your pen so aptly describes the depth of sorrow when time defeats our...
June 29th, 2020 09:35 - WANDERLUST ~ AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The bustle of travel to those is so well versed in this readable acrostic...
June 29th, 2020 09:30 - Just For Me. (Goldfinch60)
The depth of love cannot end as it is part of the wonderful permanent and...
June 29th, 2020 06:34 - Lovebirds (Benevolentbluebabe)
The love in this ode reaches the heart and stays - -- mated for life birds...
June 29th, 2020 06:31 - Mascara Daze (Neville)
One of those jobs that need concentration is applying mascara - says she...
June 29th, 2020 04:10 - MY HUBBY BRIAN ~ ANGELA ~ A MIRROR NONET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Diamond-bright reasons for loving a man who works well wherever he...
June 28th, 2020 05:16 - Flush (Neville)
Another intriguing array of imagery in this tale half yet expertly told...
June 28th, 2020 05:12 - for Julie-Ann (Dusk arising)
An appeal of a verse that really strikes home - - \"the glory we drank\"...
June 28th, 2020 04:14 - ...and then it rained (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Ouch on reading that final line - \"and then it rained\" how many times...
June 28th, 2020 03:39 - HOPE & COMFORT ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A thoroughly inspiring write and read with hope in my heart.
June 27th, 2020 17:31 - Untitled - XXVIII (Suresh)
Great three liner painted in strokes of truth.
June 27th, 2020 17:27 - Day Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
Your positive attitude is an example to all - - a wonderful trait to...
June 27th, 2020 13:05 - The Value of Tears (Neville)
Very appealing this piece of poemed praise to seen beauty and shed tears...
June 27th, 2020 10:08 - messing with the clock (Dusk arising)
Ah - - you verse with wisdom the foibles of wanting the clock turned back...
June 27th, 2020 04:10 - YET SLEEP ALONE (Michael Edwards)
You caught the reasons for sleep\'s chance to expand and ruminate in...
June 27th, 2020 01:00 - Untitled - XXVII (Suresh)
Thoughts to deepen my morning quiet-time - thank you Suresh for sharing...
June 27th, 2020 00:54 - Love must be quantum (Arobot)
A good piece of apt reminder that love lasts forever and not just ten...
June 26th, 2020 14:14 - Still Time (Neville)
How wise this reminder that to make changes takes action as your verse...
June 26th, 2020 14:11 - autumnal beauty (Dusk arising)
The pathos of missing nature\'s bounty comes over so deeply in these...
June 26th, 2020 12:24 - Selflessness (Laura🌻)
You nailed the truth in only four lines dear Laura - a lovely read.
June 26th, 2020 07:17 - Strong To Save (Orchidee)
Prayer like this is so needed ;in these troubled times Orchi.
June 26th, 2020 05:40 - Crows (Benevolentbluebabe)
An admirable comparison and well worded - showing crows can show us a lot ...
June 26th, 2020 04:48 - IS 90 DEGREES TOO HOT (Joe Marcello)
Would like to try flying to that Joe - up and away eh ? - - good...
June 26th, 2020 04:46 - ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE (Michael Edwards)
Oh Michael. The image you conjour with these intriguing lines is so...
June 26th, 2020 03:53 - Where Music Takes Me (Goldfinch60)
Ah - - the magic of this piece of music has always transported me too dear...
June 26th, 2020 03:45 - Taking in Water (Neville)
A scary adventure at sea which demands another installment methinks - - -...
June 25th, 2020 05:51 - The Clique (Sylviasearcher)
You sum up cliques so well in this outing of reasons for social divides...
June 25th, 2020 03:58 - Beauty Within. (Goldfinch60)
Yes looking inside is the way to fine the real essence of any person - ...
June 25th, 2020 03:02 - Temporal Time (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
June 25th, 2020 03:00 - Trust Today (Orchidee)
A terrible happening and my heart aches for the families of victims.
June 24th, 2020 13:22 - Handels Music Flows Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Spot on this clever Sen my friend. - Handel had talent and how it shows in...
June 24th, 2020 04:07 - Tabitha Tootle (Neville)
A veritable hero that little Tabitha - should imagine this poem brought...
June 24th, 2020 04:05 - Fahrenheit (Suresh)
You verse the effect of passion when entertained by willing partners just...
June 24th, 2020 03:19 - PATIO 💛 POND 💛 PARADISE ~ A 4 6 4 4 2 VIGINTI (20 Lines) (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes however small a pond can enhance any garden - - wishing you loads...
June 23rd, 2020 16:01
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