Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- DAYS OF THE WEEK ~ IN SEVEN 5 7 5 SENRYU (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love this collab. on days of the week - and in haiku well what could be...
August 18th, 2020 08:02 - One Heart. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful array of loving words from your tender pen which your Joyce...
August 18th, 2020 06:15 - A Mermaids Tale (Neville)
The essence of mermaid tales are so well enfolded in this colourful read ...
August 18th, 2020 03:46 - body part (Dusk arising)
Ha -- the secret now outed as to what was the body part is you favour ...
August 17th, 2020 12:28 - No Edgeways. (Goldfinch60)
How great for you to see both lady friend and daughter getting on well as...
August 17th, 2020 02:01 - Wax Butterflies (Neville)
A dream of a read that takes a tale and embellishes its half-remembered...
August 17th, 2020 01:59 - THE WATER CYCLES ~ AN ACROSTIC ~ BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loud applause A + B for this tribute to wonderful water and all its...
August 15th, 2020 16:08 - for VJ Day (Dusk arising)
The very sad fact of war heroes who get forgotten or those who did not...
August 15th, 2020 10:10 - Theory of Endurance (Neville)
Time is form and form as this piece of wisdom states is temporary in...
August 15th, 2020 06:56 - Steph at Thirty. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely read Andy on this special occasion - Steph has a very...
August 15th, 2020 05:12 - PEOPLEZ PETZ ~ DIMINUTIVE DITTIES ~ SMOKEY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Do I spy the real A & B with their beloved Smokey ? Whether or no the...
August 14th, 2020 10:46 - Times of Youth. (Goldfinch60)
Memory supplies those time again whenever we need them dear Andy - a...
August 14th, 2020 09:17 - Maybe Old but Not Daft (Neville)
Dame-games never sit well with disinterested sailors whose love of the sea...
August 14th, 2020 03:23 - EXAM RESULTS ~ RULE KO ! ~ FIVE SENRYU 5-7-5-7-7 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes each child is gifted with something special and that is enough or...
August 13th, 2020 15:09 - It Rained. (Goldfinch60)
Yes rain can do wonders to dry August ground and still be soaked up by the...
August 13th, 2020 04:33 - Beaten (Neville)
This maybe a game of who wins at shove-halfpenny but I have known...
August 13th, 2020 02:14 - Back to School. (Goldfinch60)
We are fed and controlled at the moment by those who want us to fear -dear...
August 12th, 2020 13:05 - DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (2) (Michael Edwards)
Mystical listening in your wonderful art-work signifies music is magically...
August 12th, 2020 13:02 - CATS ~ A DIAMOND SHAPE POEM ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Cats poemed so well in this tribute and most instructive video too - -...
August 12th, 2020 11:30 - Of Kept Men & Their Secrets (Neville)
The title itself raised my curiosity about what follows and wow what a...
August 12th, 2020 04:18 - 26 SHAKESPERIAN MANTRAS ~ A COMPLETE ABCDARIAN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You have worked so hard to write the almost- ABCDarian dear duo - - some...
August 11th, 2020 10:18 - DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (4) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - well that one way to save water dear Micheal -- but Hic ! - - I...
August 11th, 2020 02:43 - Bottles of Pandemic. (Goldfinch60)
Andy I had forgotten the Corona of yesteryear and what a co-incidence it...
August 11th, 2020 02:36 - Quenching Quest (Orchidee)
A good use of words and texts here Orchi.
August 11th, 2020 02:32 - Crabbin (Neville)
Memories of yesteryear happenings poemed so clearly in readable slang...
August 11th, 2020 02:29 - fate hangs (Dusk arising)
A shudder succeeds this haunt of a read and stays long after D.A. - - --...
August 10th, 2020 07:58 - Fare ye well (L. B. Mek)
The sense of on-going time echoes from your well chosen phrasing and flows...
August 10th, 2020 07:52 - Freckles (Neville)
Ah - - big smiles for resurrecting those intimate freedoms of sunny...
August 10th, 2020 04:24 - MSM (Goldfinch60)
Good and needed rant dear Andy - with you all the way,
August 10th, 2020 02:39 - Unearthing the Daisy (Sylviasearcher)
A delightful flow to this read Sylvia - - I liked the rhyming too which...
August 10th, 2020 02:03 - Fallen Leaves Behind (Neville)
I truly admire the metaphor you use in this solemn verse Nev. - grieving...
August 9th, 2020 02:24 - EL LOCO DE LAS RAMBLAS ~ MADMAN OF THE RAMBLAS ~ BARCELONA ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What an unexpected ending to this story of he who was called \"mad\" - -...
August 8th, 2020 16:05 - The Sixties, Was I There. (Goldfinch60)
Great number - - remember being there for that and others and your...
August 8th, 2020 05:35 - Sun Drops (Neville)
Oh for the ability write short-line gems such as this one my friend. Full...
August 8th, 2020 05:11 - Something in the Air (Neville)
You pen a sad picture of today\'s strange state my literary friend....
August 7th, 2020 04:33 - Two Way Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
The movement of clouds is fascinating and standing watching them on a...
August 6th, 2020 05:33 - Now looking Back (Neville)
Heart-warming words which recall love once held higher even than poetry...
August 6th, 2020 03:51 - LOVE OF THE HORSE 💛 AN ACROSTIC 4 2 3 5 SONNET 💛 ENJOY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A wonderful creature the horse which is given an impressive acrostic in...
August 6th, 2020 02:41 - NO LONGER HEARD (Michael Edwards)
Glad you finished playing with words and posted this gem of a free-style,...
August 5th, 2020 06:01 - Smile For All. (Goldfinch60)
A smile cost nothing so my old Gran would say and oh how it lifts a gloomy...
August 4th, 2020 10:51 - Star of Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Dear Andy - I agree that Love cannot die and your way to meeting again...
August 3rd, 2020 10:47 - Homeless (Aa Harvey)
A moving heart-wrencher of a write with a last stanza that brings tears to...
August 3rd, 2020 09:39 - 2020 THAT WAS THE YEAR .. ! ~ YEAR OF COVID 19 ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A very telling calendar - and yes a very strange year indeed. Really...
August 3rd, 2020 02:20 - thank you for my son (Noah Malice)
A moving tribute to a much loved new addition to a caring family - - the...
August 2nd, 2020 04:30 - Guilt Trip. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - what a temptation a tray full of shortbread - no worries or...
August 1st, 2020 13:37 - Friday night (when the light is right) AKA Mothballs (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Yes youth has to try out wings after occasions like these Andrew - let us...
August 1st, 2020 13:35 - Adonais is Fallen (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Such a well constructed tribute Kevin to a much-missed father and which...
July 29th, 2020 04:02 - SMOKEY *18* ADJUDICATOR ~ FIDOS DEPUTY CAT ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ha ha - - a fun read to brighten a bit of a cloudy-dull day here -...
July 29th, 2020 03:54 - pulsing fluff (Dusk arising)
Wow- wheee D.A. - there could be nothing more romantic than this...
July 29th, 2020 03:51 - Beyond Giving (Neville)
Yes easing an ego out of the way to find more maturity takes personal...
July 28th, 2020 04:23 - Harmony of Souls (MendedFences27)
Romance always has its ups and downs Phil and your story in this part...
July 27th, 2020 16:04 - Trump (Dusk arising)
Oh and I lurved that yacket sax........
July 27th, 2020 08:33 - Trump (Dusk arising)
Ha ha ha - hilarious D.A. is this witty conclusion.
July 27th, 2020 08:32 - High Priest Petitioning (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi.
July 27th, 2020 07:49 - Two Weeks in July (Neville)
The painful realization of temporary oneness shoots all through this...
July 27th, 2020 07:48 - Thinking Back. (Goldfinch60)
A wise write Andy - - thinking back to regrets can only bring negative...
July 27th, 2020 06:21 - moment of release (Dusk arising)
A sliver of memory which intrigues more with each line - I love the draw...
July 26th, 2020 10:47 - Old One Eye (Neville)
A perfectly lyrical piece of poemed excitement lies in local shallows and ...
July 26th, 2020 06:22 - LIFE GETS TEDIOUS DON* IT ~ BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An engaging read and so unique in its wording - this shows things can only...
July 24th, 2020 10:57 - THE GUITAR ~ WEEPS (LORCA) ~ TRANSLATION BY ANGELA ~ AN 8 4 2 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This has to be one of your best dear Duo - - it pulls at the heartstrings...
July 23rd, 2020 10:15 - walk away (Dusk arising)
A telling write on self-preservation D.A. - - such a scent of sadness to...
July 22nd, 2020 03:31 - In the year twenty four hundred and ignorance (Dusk arising)
Such a sad read and showing how the planet and occupants may be in that...
July 22nd, 2020 02:09 - Words For Walking Wisely (Orchidee)
Good read Orchi.
July 20th, 2020 06:23 - an interesting day (Dusk arising)
A tale to take the imagination to heights of wanting a sequel - - - a...
July 20th, 2020 05:09 - TWENTY-SIX ASPECTS OF LOVE ~ AN ABCDarian POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your words have covered most aspects of Love dear duo - wishing you an...
July 20th, 2020 05:03 - Adrift With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely number and how I agree that nature is the experience we all need to...
July 20th, 2020 05:01 - Love Story (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A super read which brought me near tears - first of sadness then joy - -...
July 20th, 2020 04:57 - ON READING A LETTER (Michael Edwards)
You have poemed an intriguiing situation dear Michael with your winning...
July 16th, 2020 11:18 - Mullins Yard (Neville)
I had to read this flowing ballad out loud and twice to get the wonderful...
July 15th, 2020 08:44 - A MAN OF STUBBORN STEEL (Michael Edwards)
With you in these words of present discernment on what constitutes...
July 14th, 2020 04:03 - covid robbery (Dusk arising)
Oh the sadness in this lament dear friend - - to be robbed of your...
July 14th, 2020 04:00 - CONFUCIUS SAYS: (Michael Edwards)
Hard winters brought queues after that observation when loos were...
July 13th, 2020 13:26 - Ego\'s Down (Neville)
Love the clever play on words in this denunciation of all those...
July 13th, 2020 10:54 - Extraordinary Love (MendedFences27)
Excellent conception of love in this moving short story my friend. - ...
July 12th, 2020 23:41 - KNIVES - FORKS & SPOONS ~ A 6 6 2 RHYMING SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - love reading this one as cutlery has always meant much to me - - the...
July 9th, 2020 04:49 - Untitled - XXXIII (Suresh)
This makes clear the need to become aware that human intellect often falls...
July 8th, 2020 03:00 - AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - how true Michael. More aging couplets please.
July 7th, 2020 15:04 - Our Little Wing... (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Someone important in your life will treasure this love wrapped up in lines...
July 7th, 2020 15:00 - Eye with no sight (Poetic Dan)
A real treat of a read Dan - - this \"coming out from within\" is going...
July 7th, 2020 14:39 - Poor Git (Neville)
The speed which cross contamination can hit is expertly poemed in this...
July 7th, 2020 13:01 - PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILTY ~ A VILLANELLE (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine contribution of classic poetry on which you have obviously worked...
July 7th, 2020 04:10 - Mother Nature’s Masterpiece (PoeticBiscuit)
You aptly word the dynamic force found in nature and thank you for sharing...
July 6th, 2020 15:59 - goodbye Morricone (Dusk arising)
And enchanting his contribution to cinema was D.A. -- - a fantastic...
July 6th, 2020 07:51 - Presence Perceived (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
July 6th, 2020 05:50 - Mid Summer Meadow (Neville)
Picture-perfect this rendering of such a near miss Nev which many of us...
July 6th, 2020 05:49 - Art Where No Men Tread (Goldfinch60)
A wonderfully flowing and very inspiring tribute to Michael\'s abstract...
July 6th, 2020 03:14 - My Dad is My Hero (PoeticBiscuit)
Who would not be proud with a Dad like that - - - - -thanks for sharing...
July 5th, 2020 15:41 - Imagine (Peto)
Filled with great comparisons this romantic verse puts the pain of love on...
July 5th, 2020 14:54 - White Violets (Neville)
The rise and fall of that whiteness on green with every female breath I...
July 5th, 2020 10:30 - it will come (Dusk arising)
Danci\' and wrigglin\' at my desk as I read your ballad to love - Wow - ...
July 4th, 2020 01:59 - Special Sheep (Orchidee)
A fine piece of gentle reminder that sheep know their owner and vice...
July 4th, 2020 01:55 - LIBERATION SATURDAY BLUES ~ FIVE 57577 TANKAS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oh - you have chosen a fave. singer for me -- and the number always brings...
July 3rd, 2020 07:43 - WHERE NO MEN TREAD (Michael Edwards)
The force of your words along with the strength of texture and colour in...
July 3rd, 2020 03:34 - Lost in Words. (Goldfinch60)
So often that happens to me too - minds take wings to another dimension...
July 3rd, 2020 03:30 - The Logic of Fools (Neville)
Anti-social to the greatest extent is this kind of destruction Nev and...
July 3rd, 2020 03:03 - Creation Cantabilations (Orchidee)
Lovely read Orchi - nature can teach us so many things.
July 2nd, 2020 16:23 - FUTURE IS ORANGE ~ ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Certainly lots feel as the song goes - dear Duo - - \"bewitched - bothered...
July 2nd, 2020 16:14 - FUTURE IS ORANGE ~ ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Certainly lots feel as the song goes - dear Duo - - \"bewitched - bothered...
July 2nd, 2020 16:14 - a little love song (Dusk arising)
An engaging read D.A. Despite what we make up our minds to do Love has its...
July 2nd, 2020 16:10 - Being Bilingual. (Goldfinch60)
You last line left me smiling dear Andy as I expected no less than a...
July 2nd, 2020 04:54
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