Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- I M A G I N A T I O N ~ AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I enjoyed the the thoughts in this tribute to imagination Where would...
June 22nd, 2020 16:13 - Sixty Nine Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Giving and accepting is the right way to live dear Andy and you are such a...
June 22nd, 2020 02:09 - Another 575 (Michael Edwards)
Am shocked with 575 excitement and love your new border Mike ..........
June 19th, 2020 08:20 - Living Side - 14 (Nafis Light)
A much needed reminder that for peace to flourish there must be...
June 18th, 2020 16:20 - Hopeful Help (Orchidee)
A fine write my friend.
June 18th, 2020 16:18 - THE PATH NOT TAKEN ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A FREE VERSE PARABLE (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So pleased my verse inspired you dear Duo to write The Path Not Taken and...
June 18th, 2020 14:01 - What is in Your Life? (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful summary of what is important in our lives and what we can take...
June 18th, 2020 03:47 - my breath (Dusk arising)
Breath-taking romance in such poetic and beautiful wording - your chosen...
June 18th, 2020 03:20 - Nature\'s Glory for Me. (Goldfinch60)
You paint the perfect attitude which is brought to positive better by...
June 17th, 2020 03:56 - DESERTED NOW (Michael Edwards)
A watercolour of creative intrigue Michael and it sets the scene so well...
June 17th, 2020 01:09 - S H O P P I N G ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love the quirky rhymes about shopping - so pleased to find more shops...
June 16th, 2020 13:12 - Solace of Time. (Goldfinch60)
Yes time can be friend or foe dear Andy - - all we can do is make the best...
June 15th, 2020 16:11 - Romancing the Dead (Sylviasearcher)
A brilliant interpretation of endless non-existence. Into my faves with...
June 15th, 2020 03:43 - JOBS FOR THE BOYS 💛 GIRLS 💛 TEN DOUBLETS 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Helping others is the best job to work at - well done for listing all the...
June 12th, 2020 13:26 - Andy\'s Tin. (Goldfinch60)
Sharing is so rewarding in all sorts of ways dear Andy - -- great to hear...
June 12th, 2020 05:33 - Old And New (Orchidee)
I believe a pig\'s or goat\'s bladder was used to store wine in days or...
June 12th, 2020 04:53 - when life comes around (Dusk arising)
Yes life ;has to be faced and coping with cancer must be the biggest of...
June 11th, 2020 05:13 - Out Beyond the Ideas. (Goldfinch60)
I love the quote you used as before reading your tender invitation I have...
June 11th, 2020 05:06 - Sea-Dog (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Ah - great flow to this ballad of wilted love Kevin....... a most...
June 10th, 2020 09:55 - Shown the Way. (Goldfinch60)
Wishing you Andy a Happy birthday with warm moments to be remembered and...
June 10th, 2020 05:00 - WE LOVE SMOKEY CAT 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 A 4 4 4 2 LOVE 💛 SONNET 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A pet makes a house a home and Smokey has done that for you dear Duo - - ...
June 9th, 2020 16:40 - in a place he wants to be (Dusk arising)
The tragedy is that these heroes among us never receive the respect they...
June 9th, 2020 02:25 - Star Spangled Soul. (Goldfinch60)
Love is forever and your words plus the music make that fact so clear -...
June 9th, 2020 02:22 - Loyalties of Love (Orchidee)
An honour indeed that my words on Love have been included in your list of...
June 9th, 2020 02:18 - The Art of Giving a F*ck (SerenWise)
This emotive write touches the core of age-old abuse - - seen from male...
June 9th, 2020 02:13 - the great healer (Dusk arising)
A truly intriguing piece of prose that captures those moments of love\'s...
June 8th, 2020 17:49 - Climax (Neville)
Ha - - what a striking description of reaching the climax before...
June 8th, 2020 16:01 - EQUALITY (Michael Edwards)
I agree with each and every line here in your powerful verse Michael.
June 7th, 2020 05:34 - I will do my part (Poetic Dan)
With you all the way Dan re more understanding of canines - - a lovely...
June 7th, 2020 04:50 - bear faced lies (Dusk arising)
You bring that critta alive with your banter of lighthearted facts and how...
June 7th, 2020 04:47 - Kanreki (Neville)
Amid happy feasting and celebration your write provided yet one further...
June 7th, 2020 03:31 - Trusting Theme (Orchidee)
A beautiful word is Trust.
June 6th, 2020 07:56 - Falling for Icarus (Neville)
Flying too near the sun whatever the reason results in melt-down where...
June 6th, 2020 05:15 - May contain nuts! (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Laughed my socks off as I nodded my head....... what a truth Andrew.
June 5th, 2020 12:49 - Endless sea (Saxon Crow)
An exquisite poetic prayer that outlines the reasons why wehuman beings ...
June 5th, 2020 12:47 - Mother Nature (Thesunseeker)
Your lovely rhyme is a worthy tribute to the real connection through all...
June 5th, 2020 04:44 - SO FAR SO GOOD (Michael Edwards)
Forward me that recipe Mike - then I may join you in everlasting life. ...
June 5th, 2020 04:41 - Each New Day. (Goldfinch60)
A beautifully positive start to your day and a fine example to follow dear...
June 5th, 2020 04:38 - Trumpet Triumph (Orchidee)
A thunderous write today Orchi.
June 5th, 2020 04:37 - Let This For You Be Poetry (Kevin Michael Bloor)
More wonderful reasons in this admirable read for poets to stay alive and...
June 5th, 2020 04:36 - Free Fall (Neville)
Why not indeed - - reaching for light can divert the fall. Good advice...
June 5th, 2020 04:32 - The Sorriest of Words (Neville)
Times like you so aptly describe are etched in the heart and mind where...
June 4th, 2020 08:07 - Wandering in the Wood. (Goldfinch60)
Trees are such a gift in so many ways - good to read your lovely tribute...
June 4th, 2020 06:08 - it matters (Dusk arising)
YES from me too. - Black lives certainly matter and should matter to all.
June 4th, 2020 05:23 - SUMMERTIME IS HERE ! 🧡 A 🤍 PANTOUM 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Summertime by Gershwin stays in the mind long after hearing - yes June is...
June 3rd, 2020 10:05 - Heaven made (Saxon Crow)
A truly emotive read full of poetic description and appeal - a romantic...
June 3rd, 2020 09:20 - Remote (Neville)
A sensible way to end a fading affair - - letting it be and enjoying the...
June 3rd, 2020 07:05 - The Two Ladies. (Goldfinch60)
Another of your fine poems with wonderful music to boot - - thank you...
June 3rd, 2020 05:36 - it was as if (Dusk arising)
This wonderful verse of personified nymphs as they meet and mate on the...
June 3rd, 2020 04:53 - Just Another Murmeration (Neville)
Flying high and surrounded with feelings of love must be a kind of...
June 2nd, 2020 06:07 - Selfish - and don\'t care! (Orchidee)
You made a very strong point with these words Orchi.
June 2nd, 2020 04:15 - If Only. (Goldfinch60)
Two very potent words Andy - we all repeat them to no avail. Good to have...
June 2nd, 2020 03:48 - THE UMBRELLA BIRD ! ~ AN ABCDARIAN POEM ~ N to Z (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loads of fun-reasons for knowing birds better - thanks dear duo for an N...
June 1st, 2020 13:46 - Unrest and The END (Sylviasearcher)
Yes - well said my friend - in the end is the end........as far as we...
June 1st, 2020 13:40 - the haunting fifty fives (Dusk arising)
An account to store and remember - heroes are all around now and in need...
June 1st, 2020 07:46 - Nob Hill Hotel Ca (Neville)
Book me a ticket on the first plane then - Nob Hill eh ? - ah - this...
June 1st, 2020 05:30 - Kathleen. (Goldfinch60)
A voice to delight in and spend time with as your verse advocates Andy -...
May 31st, 2020 06:53 - Pentecost Promise (Orchidee)
Powerful words Orchi.
May 31st, 2020 06:51 - MORE MONOSUCHS 5 (Michael Edwards)
Good one to remember my friend.
May 31st, 2020 06:49 - isnt it about time? (Dusk arising)
Well said indeed D.A. - hoping this write gets through to whomever it is...
May 31st, 2020 06:48 - Skien (Neville)
Yes coming or going has often foxed me -- but just to recall that murmur...
May 31st, 2020 04:22 - Skien (Neville)
Ooooh I too love to stand and watch this special performance -...
May 31st, 2020 03:35 - MORE MONOSUCHS 4 (Michael Edwards)
Yes jumping in before then can lead to more than confusion. I love these...
May 30th, 2020 01:01 - betrayal (Dusk arising)
Reading your honest words gives tribute by drawing attention to their...
May 30th, 2020 00:58 - WHITE DOVE ~ UNA PALOMA BLANCA ~ UNA POEMA PANTOUMA ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A beautifully apt tribute to Dove which I am sure will delight and upbuild...
May 29th, 2020 09:28 - Music is My Life. (Goldfinch60)
Your very words bring music to my ears dear Andy - I believe we were made...
May 29th, 2020 09:24 - Badgers (Neville)
Agreed my friend - Badgers see life as a simple black-and-white way of...
May 29th, 2020 07:05 - Clothes Flattener. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - - do I understand you to have presented a crumpled appearance for...
May 28th, 2020 10:45 - BIRDS ALPHABETICALLY (1) ~ AN ABCDARIAN ~ A to M ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Most interesting list of birds and their habits. - - well done again dear...
May 28th, 2020 09:41 - Wind (Shij)
Hello Shij - - welcome to M.P.S. This is a friendly poetry site and has...
May 27th, 2020 16:31 - BEGONE...COVID-19 (Laura🌻)
I agree with each line in this wise condemnation of an unwelcome virus.
May 27th, 2020 13:39 - Ruwa - Praise Series (Orchidee)
Though familiar with scriptural text the Hebrew word Ruwa is new to me so...
May 27th, 2020 12:46 - Upon the Morrow (Neville)
Ah Nev -the tense and linguistic simplicity of this tender ballad...
May 27th, 2020 10:20 - THE TOILET ROLLS ! 💛 A 3 6 5 💛 ACROSTIC 💛 SONNET 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Haha -- you phrased this unseen necessity so well and yes every newspaper...
May 27th, 2020 04:29 - MORE MONOSUCHS 3 (Michael Edwards)
Excellent one-liner advice Michael.
May 27th, 2020 04:22 - SMOKEY (III) HIS ATTRIBUTES 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A delightful assessment of Smokey as you are getting used to ;his regal...
May 25th, 2020 07:08 - Thin Linens (Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87)
A genuine cry in the wilderness hits this reader from your honest pen -...
May 25th, 2020 02:15 - Touching 2. (Goldfinch60)
Your words hold a powerful truth Andy - - touching most certainly creates...
May 24th, 2020 02:35 - MORE MONOSUCHS 1 (Michael Edwards)
A wise observation my friend. Hoping like me you are on your way up again...
May 24th, 2020 01:14 - SMOKEY (II) A CONTENT FELINE 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 A 1 7 6 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Describes perfectly what a feline requires - - Smokey is a fortunate...
May 23rd, 2020 12:16 - Mercy Missive (Orchidee)
A lovely and comforting read fr a Saturday - thanking you Orchi.
May 23rd, 2020 06:04 - Second Best (Neville)
That beauty was prettily doing what comes naturally - - - but your wrap...
May 23rd, 2020 06:02 - IN DAYS TO COME (Michael Edwards)
Hard days in the future await as your poem says Michael. Wounded the earth...
May 22nd, 2020 06:53 - SMOKEY (I) SMOKEY HAS LANDED ! 💛 BRIAN 💛 ANGELA 💛 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
ha ha - love this fun-pantoum with its welcome to Smokey - - landed...
May 22nd, 2020 04:49 - Lockdown (Neville)
Dotted with love-names this view of lockdown sounds like the perfect...
May 22nd, 2020 04:44 - Respect. (Goldfinch60)
That beautiful word so clearly described has got lost in the me-first...
May 22nd, 2020 03:52 - The Duck Billed Platypus (Neville)
Am searching round now-a-cus for your missing platypus and should I access...
May 21st, 2020 07:13 - Music and Lyrics. (Goldfinch60)
Never heard before what determines how you hear music - - thanks for...
May 21st, 2020 03:23 - More Words (Neville)
Ah - I love the measured rhyme in these seductive lines describing the...
May 20th, 2020 05:04 - LISTEN TO WORDS 2 (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - - the eternal accusation yet that is just what happens in many a...
May 20th, 2020 02:34 - Bubbles! (Sue.evans)
Bursting with hope this bubbly posting - thanks for sharing it sue
May 19th, 2020 11:35 - Star Trek Lives. (Goldfinch60)
Enjoyed this posting immensely - the wonderful voice brought back the...
May 19th, 2020 03:10 - Lockdown voyage! (Sue.evans)
Words of needed encouragement to keep carrying on while house-bound - a...
May 18th, 2020 13:08 - Too Late in the Day (Neville)
A poetic lesson in becoming more caring and penned with regret that...
May 18th, 2020 13:01 - SMOKEY ~ OUR FIRST CAT ! 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 FIVE QUATRAINS 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Congrats on having a cat of your one and one who needed a new home too ...
May 18th, 2020 06:39 - Stars Shine. (Goldfinch60)
Stars are such blessings to all on this earth - a lovely Sunday-read Andy...
May 17th, 2020 05:39 - Three Guys Walked into a Bear (Neville)
Yes - well said Nev - never turn your bare backside to the sight of an...
May 17th, 2020 04:01 - Leave the View Behind (Neville)
You pen the scene well my friend. A formidable female who points fingers...
May 16th, 2020 10:13 - Briefly (Neville)
Ha - - methinks a gentleman merely half-tells in this brief poem - --
May 15th, 2020 06:42 - amazed (Dusk arising)
Great words and tune to help along times when memory takes us away to...
May 13th, 2020 13:19
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