Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Simplicity (Suresh)
Simple is always the best Suresh -and magically captured in just a few...
July 2nd, 2020 02:08 - Your Country Say\'s it Needs You (Neville)
Not so many years back the terrible carnage and captured so well the life...
July 2nd, 2020 02:06 - Cuts (Peto)
A powerful write petp with a finalé to bring signs of better things...
July 1st, 2020 15:07 - Remembering a Poet (Laura🌻)
A wonderful gesture indeed as Kevin\'s work was very well received here on...
July 1st, 2020 09:46 - music amplified (Dusk arising)
One word only for this poetic gem combined with the moving music -
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July 1st, 2020 08:09 - A moment of bliss (Aa Harvey)
That experience must be worth a visit to the dentist for me very soon -...
July 1st, 2020 03:25 - Waiting at the Tip. (Goldfinch60)
Oooh - and there is plenty prunings waiting in the shed for just that...
July 1st, 2020 03:23 - Aftertaste (Neville)
A refreshing conception of tastes your pen makes here Nev and compares so...
July 1st, 2020 02:20 - Untitled - XXIX (Suresh)
So true Suresh - and this planet though surrounded with intelligence...
June 30th, 2020 02:25 - Depression is.... (MelissaJA)
Thanks Melissa for a well written verse on depression - - expressed...
June 30th, 2020 02:22 - Is She a Bad Mother. (Goldfinch60)
Those offspring who fly the nest invariably come back again after...
June 30th, 2020 02:20 - Waiting for the Big E (Neville)
Truth and love certainly do matter in the journey toward enlightenment and...
June 30th, 2020 02:01 - a different way (Dusk arising)
Your pen so aptly describes the depth of sorrow when time defeats our...
June 29th, 2020 09:35 - WANDERLUST ~ AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The bustle of travel to those is so well versed in this readable acrostic...
June 29th, 2020 09:30 - Just For Me. (Goldfinch60)
The depth of love cannot end as it is part of the wonderful permanent and...
June 29th, 2020 06:34 - Lovebirds (Benevolentbluebabe)
The love in this ode reaches the heart and stays - -- mated for life birds...
June 29th, 2020 06:31 - Mascara Daze (Neville)
One of those jobs that need concentration is applying mascara - says she...
June 29th, 2020 04:10 - MY HUBBY BRIAN ~ ANGELA ~ A MIRROR NONET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Diamond-bright reasons for loving a man who works well wherever he...
June 28th, 2020 05:16 - Flush (Neville)
Another intriguing array of imagery in this tale half yet expertly told...
June 28th, 2020 05:12 - for Julie-Ann (Dusk arising)
An appeal of a verse that really strikes home - - \"the glory we drank\"...
June 28th, 2020 04:14 - ...and then it rained (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Ouch on reading that final line - \"and then it rained\" how many times...
June 28th, 2020 03:39 - HOPE & COMFORT ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A thoroughly inspiring write and read with hope in my heart.
June 27th, 2020 17:31 - Untitled - XXVIII (Suresh)
Great three liner painted in strokes of truth.
June 27th, 2020 17:27 - Day Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
Your positive attitude is an example to all - - a wonderful trait to...
June 27th, 2020 13:05 - The Value of Tears (Neville)
Very appealing this piece of poemed praise to seen beauty and shed tears...
June 27th, 2020 10:08 - messing with the clock (Dusk arising)
Ah - - you verse with wisdom the foibles of wanting the clock turned back...
June 27th, 2020 04:10 - YET SLEEP ALONE (Michael Edwards)
You caught the reasons for sleep\'s chance to expand and ruminate in...
June 27th, 2020 01:00 - Untitled - XXVII (Suresh)
Thoughts to deepen my morning quiet-time - thank you Suresh for sharing...
June 27th, 2020 00:54 - Love must be quantum (Arobot)
A good piece of apt reminder that love lasts forever and not just ten...
June 26th, 2020 14:14 - Still Time (Neville)
How wise this reminder that to make changes takes action as your verse...
June 26th, 2020 14:11 - autumnal beauty (Dusk arising)
The pathos of missing nature\'s bounty comes over so deeply in these...
June 26th, 2020 12:24 - Selflessness (Laura🌻)
You nailed the truth in only four lines dear Laura - a lovely read.
June 26th, 2020 07:17 - Strong To Save (Orchidee)
Prayer like this is so needed ;in these troubled times Orchi.
June 26th, 2020 05:40 - Crows (Benevolentbluebabe)
An admirable comparison and well worded - showing crows can show us a lot ...
June 26th, 2020 04:48 - IS 90 DEGREES TOO HOT (Joe Marcello)
Would like to try flying to that Joe - up and away eh ? - - good...
June 26th, 2020 04:46 - ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE (Michael Edwards)
Oh Michael. The image you conjour with these intriguing lines is so...
June 26th, 2020 03:53 - Where Music Takes Me (Goldfinch60)
Ah - - the magic of this piece of music has always transported me too dear...
June 26th, 2020 03:45 - Taking in Water (Neville)
A scary adventure at sea which demands another installment methinks - - -...
June 25th, 2020 05:51 - The Clique (Sylviasearcher)
You sum up cliques so well in this outing of reasons for social divides...
June 25th, 2020 03:58 - Beauty Within. (Goldfinch60)
Yes looking inside is the way to fine the real essence of any person - ...
June 25th, 2020 03:02 - Temporal Time (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
June 25th, 2020 03:00 - Trust Today (Orchidee)
A terrible happening and my heart aches for the families of victims.
June 24th, 2020 13:22 - Handels Music Flows Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Spot on this clever Sen my friend. - Handel had talent and how it shows in...
June 24th, 2020 04:07 - Tabitha Tootle (Neville)
A veritable hero that little Tabitha - should imagine this poem brought...
June 24th, 2020 04:05 - Fahrenheit (Suresh)
You verse the effect of passion when entertained by willing partners just...
June 24th, 2020 03:19 - PATIO 💛 POND 💛 PARADISE ~ A 4 6 4 4 2 VIGINTI (20 Lines) (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes however small a pond can enhance any garden - - wishing you loads...
June 23rd, 2020 16:01 - I M A G I N A T I O N ~ AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I enjoyed the the thoughts in this tribute to imagination Where would...
June 22nd, 2020 16:13 - Sixty Nine Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Giving and accepting is the right way to live dear Andy and you are such a...
June 22nd, 2020 02:09 - Another 575 (Michael Edwards)
Am shocked with 575 excitement and love your new border Mike ..........
June 19th, 2020 08:20 - Living Side - 14 (Nafis Light)
A much needed reminder that for peace to flourish there must be...
June 18th, 2020 16:20 - Hopeful Help (Orchidee)
A fine write my friend.
June 18th, 2020 16:18 - THE PATH NOT TAKEN ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A FREE VERSE PARABLE (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So pleased my verse inspired you dear Duo to write The Path Not Taken and...
June 18th, 2020 14:01 - What is in Your Life? (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful summary of what is important in our lives and what we can take...
June 18th, 2020 03:47 - my breath (Dusk arising)
Breath-taking romance in such poetic and beautiful wording - your chosen...
June 18th, 2020 03:20 - Nature\'s Glory for Me. (Goldfinch60)
You paint the perfect attitude which is brought to positive better by...
June 17th, 2020 03:56 - DESERTED NOW (Michael Edwards)
A watercolour of creative intrigue Michael and it sets the scene so well...
June 17th, 2020 01:09 - S H O P P I N G ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love the quirky rhymes about shopping - so pleased to find more shops...
June 16th, 2020 13:12 - Solace of Time. (Goldfinch60)
Yes time can be friend or foe dear Andy - - all we can do is make the best...
June 15th, 2020 16:11 - Romancing the Dead (Sylviasearcher)
A brilliant interpretation of endless non-existence. Into my faves with...
June 15th, 2020 03:43 - JOBS FOR THE BOYS 💛 GIRLS 💛 TEN DOUBLETS 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Helping others is the best job to work at - well done for listing all the...
June 12th, 2020 13:26 - Andy\'s Tin. (Goldfinch60)
Sharing is so rewarding in all sorts of ways dear Andy - -- great to hear...
June 12th, 2020 05:33 - Old And New (Orchidee)
I believe a pig\'s or goat\'s bladder was used to store wine in days or...
June 12th, 2020 04:53 - when life comes around (Dusk arising)
Yes life ;has to be faced and coping with cancer must be the biggest of...
June 11th, 2020 05:13 - Out Beyond the Ideas. (Goldfinch60)
I love the quote you used as before reading your tender invitation I have...
June 11th, 2020 05:06 - Sea-Dog (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Ah - great flow to this ballad of wilted love Kevin....... a most...
June 10th, 2020 09:55 - Shown the Way. (Goldfinch60)
Wishing you Andy a Happy birthday with warm moments to be remembered and...
June 10th, 2020 05:00 - WE LOVE SMOKEY CAT 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 A 4 4 4 2 LOVE 💛 SONNET 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A pet makes a house a home and Smokey has done that for you dear Duo - - ...
June 9th, 2020 16:40 - in a place he wants to be (Dusk arising)
The tragedy is that these heroes among us never receive the respect they...
June 9th, 2020 02:25 - Star Spangled Soul. (Goldfinch60)
Love is forever and your words plus the music make that fact so clear -...
June 9th, 2020 02:22 - Loyalties of Love (Orchidee)
An honour indeed that my words on Love have been included in your list of...
June 9th, 2020 02:18 - The Art of Giving a F*ck (SerenWise)
This emotive write touches the core of age-old abuse - - seen from male...
June 9th, 2020 02:13 - the great healer (Dusk arising)
A truly intriguing piece of prose that captures those moments of love\'s...
June 8th, 2020 17:49 - Climax (Neville)
Ha - - what a striking description of reaching the climax before...
June 8th, 2020 16:01 - EQUALITY (Michael Edwards)
I agree with each and every line here in your powerful verse Michael.
June 7th, 2020 05:34 - I will do my part (Poetic Dan)
With you all the way Dan re more understanding of canines - - a lovely...
June 7th, 2020 04:50 - bear faced lies (Dusk arising)
You bring that critta alive with your banter of lighthearted facts and how...
June 7th, 2020 04:47 - Kanreki (Neville)
Amid happy feasting and celebration your write provided yet one further...
June 7th, 2020 03:31 - Trusting Theme (Orchidee)
A beautiful word is Trust.
June 6th, 2020 07:56 - Falling for Icarus (Neville)
Flying too near the sun whatever the reason results in melt-down where...
June 6th, 2020 05:15 - May contain nuts! (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Laughed my socks off as I nodded my head....... what a truth Andrew.
June 5th, 2020 12:49 - Endless sea (Saxon Crow)
An exquisite poetic prayer that outlines the reasons why wehuman beings ...
June 5th, 2020 12:47 - Mother Nature (Thesunseeker)
Your lovely rhyme is a worthy tribute to the real connection through all...
June 5th, 2020 04:44 - SO FAR SO GOOD (Michael Edwards)
Forward me that recipe Mike - then I may join you in everlasting life. ...
June 5th, 2020 04:41 - Each New Day. (Goldfinch60)
A beautifully positive start to your day and a fine example to follow dear...
June 5th, 2020 04:38 - Trumpet Triumph (Orchidee)
A thunderous write today Orchi.
June 5th, 2020 04:37 - Let This For You Be Poetry (Kevin Michael Bloor)
More wonderful reasons in this admirable read for poets to stay alive and...
June 5th, 2020 04:36 - Free Fall (Neville)
Why not indeed - - reaching for light can divert the fall. Good advice...
June 5th, 2020 04:32 - The Sorriest of Words (Neville)
Times like you so aptly describe are etched in the heart and mind where...
June 4th, 2020 08:07 - Wandering in the Wood. (Goldfinch60)
Trees are such a gift in so many ways - good to read your lovely tribute...
June 4th, 2020 06:08 - it matters (Dusk arising)
YES from me too. - Black lives certainly matter and should matter to all.
June 4th, 2020 05:23 - SUMMERTIME IS HERE ! 🧡 A 🤍 PANTOUM 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Summertime by Gershwin stays in the mind long after hearing - yes June is...
June 3rd, 2020 10:05 - Heaven made (Saxon Crow)
A truly emotive read full of poetic description and appeal - a romantic...
June 3rd, 2020 09:20 - Remote (Neville)
A sensible way to end a fading affair - - letting it be and enjoying the...
June 3rd, 2020 07:05 - The Two Ladies. (Goldfinch60)
Another of your fine poems with wonderful music to boot - - thank you...
June 3rd, 2020 05:36 - it was as if (Dusk arising)
This wonderful verse of personified nymphs as they meet and mate on the...
June 3rd, 2020 04:53 - Just Another Murmeration (Neville)
Flying high and surrounded with feelings of love must be a kind of...
June 2nd, 2020 06:07 - Selfish - and don\'t care! (Orchidee)
You made a very strong point with these words Orchi.
June 2nd, 2020 04:15 - If Only. (Goldfinch60)
Two very potent words Andy - we all repeat them to no avail. Good to have...
June 2nd, 2020 03:48 - THE UMBRELLA BIRD ! ~ AN ABCDARIAN POEM ~ N to Z (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loads of fun-reasons for knowing birds better - thanks dear duo for an N...
June 1st, 2020 13:46 - Unrest and The END (Sylviasearcher)
Yes - well said my friend - in the end is the end........as far as we...
June 1st, 2020 13:40
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