Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Blue Light (Neville)
Apart from concluding the obvious I confess I am all at sea with this...
October 7th, 2020 02:48 - ALPACA SOCKS (Michael Edwards)
I never knew alpacas needed socks but now shall knit some for my flock...
October 7th, 2020 02:29 - Battlegrounds in the Mind (MaddieJ)
Slow and rhythmic the fall of these words down the page give the pace and...
October 7th, 2020 02:10 - For A While (Lorna)
The feel of sad parting oozes through these poignant lines my friend - -...
October 6th, 2020 05:28 - A Solitary Passing (Neville)
The read gave me a picture of the dire situation when on battlefields...
October 6th, 2020 05:27 - New Joys. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful and uplifting read -- joy is there to experience whatever our...
October 5th, 2020 10:56 - You can tell everybody, this is my song (Sylviasearcher)
The superb rhyming in this raw piece of deep introspection draws out the...
October 5th, 2020 10:52 - Attrition (Neville)
Oh what a meaningful title to your reminder of what not to do - - --
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October 5th, 2020 08:05 - THE TIDE (Michael Edwards)
Now that is an innovative way of putting it - - agreed the tide indeed...
October 5th, 2020 02:41 - Autumnal Walk (The Uneducated O.A.P)
Seeing the clear and colourful picture brought back some memories Bill and...
October 5th, 2020 01:54 - Mr. Mediocre (Neville)
Hurt and feelin\' alone \"Mediocre\" this man is certainly not - for with...
October 4th, 2020 05:37 - STRUCK (Michael Edwards)
Fits of giggles galore after reading your little beauty today.
October 4th, 2020 03:31 - the sea (Dusk arising)
Am highly honoured D.A.that my few words brought from your pen this moving...
October 4th, 2020 03:28 - WHAT A MUPPET (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - you never fail to make me smile with your inherent wit my dear...
October 3rd, 2020 07:29 - keeping it to myself (Dusk arising)
Oh the sorrow in these few lines - the loss of the feel of being loved in...
October 3rd, 2020 07:26
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