Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Just Supposing (Neville)
Too true that I can think of one who I seem to see right through the more...
September 23rd, 2020 13:11 - Bruises (Neville)
A most moving write that stirs the heart Nev........... bruises leave...
September 20th, 2020 02:51 - Stella. (Goldfinch60)
As a dog lover the poem on Stella reached into my heart dear Andy -- her...
September 18th, 2020 02:27 - ONION (Michael Edwards)
Just been doing that same thing Michael - chopping up onions and crying a...
September 17th, 2020 12:05 - WORK ~ HOME OR AWAY ? WHICH WOULD U CHOOSE ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Choices galore in this question of working from home or away - - your...
September 17th, 2020 11:58 - crossroads (Dusk arising)
Roads forward or cross but no going back - - yes your words of wisdom put...
September 16th, 2020 12:54 - Vessel (SerenWise)
How true these few words Seren - - love cannot but feed us and set us on...
September 16th, 2020 02:22 - Endless daze, sweaty nights (Trenz Pruca)
Admirable opening on a description of insomnia which filled with good...
September 16th, 2020 02:19 - Together. (Goldfinch60)
She never leaves your side dear Andy - - love cannot die and is part of...
September 15th, 2020 19:00 - wild horses (Dusk arising)
Some of your phrasing in this poem D.A. will ring true to many a heart -...
September 15th, 2020 16:16 - Dichotomy (Gavin)
A compelling read Gavin - - as your well balanced stanzas show...
September 15th, 2020 13:41 - ANYONE FOR TENNIS ? A PARODY ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ha ha - - this read gave me more than a smile as I relate to the...
September 15th, 2020 13:37 - Geographia (Neville)
Yes despite the attraction of sky-play triangles home is certainly where...
September 15th, 2020 04:01 - stood up (Dusk arising)
Another compelling read with the scene so perfectly presented - so...
September 14th, 2020 13:46 - IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
Thanks for sharing the amazing drawing Mike and those scary words ...
September 12th, 2020 02:10 - How Are You? Goldiku. (Goldfinch60)
Good answer and well worth remembering Andy.
September 11th, 2020 12:54 - Creator Consciousness (Orchidee)
Praise is indeed beautiful and worthy of our daily attention. A needed...
September 11th, 2020 12:53 - A THING AS LOVELY AS A TREE ~ A SHAPED POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love the tree-shape dear duo and love the poem - trees deserve all the...
September 11th, 2020 12:48 - DOWNTOWN GIRL (Laura🌻)
A tribute to two lovely friends one of whom met her untimely end it seems...
September 11th, 2020 12:47 - Water is life and seems alive (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
You capture the movement of water so well with your tempo and style - a...
September 10th, 2020 15:58 - Diverse Paths. (Goldfinch60)
Thoughts on which to ponder and learn from dear friend and thank you for...
September 10th, 2020 10:17 - love beyond (Dusk arising)
Such a tender blessing of memories ooze from your lines - love than...
September 10th, 2020 05:30 - FARMERS & POETS ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your pantoum does credit to the early rising of farmers and gathers and...
September 9th, 2020 12:39 - Searching (John Prophet)
You outline the search for answers so well with descriptive short phrasing...
September 9th, 2020 02:23 - mill street bridge (Dusk arising)
A haunt of a read and with your apt usage of short-line wording that...
September 9th, 2020 02:17 - A HAPPY BIRTHDAY ~ BRIAN ~ A 1 5 8 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hope you have been having a great Birthday dear Brian - I love the...
September 8th, 2020 15:52 - WOVEN IDIOMS (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha - - am wordless with laughter at that camel coat..........
September 7th, 2020 12:38 - Maybe (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Such a potent romantic read - who knows who we have met before -- hope...
September 7th, 2020 12:36 - storm (Dusk arising)
Oh what a tale - - you are a born story teller my friend - - and as for...
September 7th, 2020 12:34 - into the woodgreen realm (Dusk arising)
Ah - a wonderful read laced with admirable imagery - crying a leaf...
September 6th, 2020 10:58 - That Annoying Drop. (Goldfinch60)
A shamble of tricks lie behind every mask and I dare not look at what...
September 6th, 2020 10:17 - EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (3) (Michael Edwards)
Too true that the impossible is always there to be declared possible by...
September 5th, 2020 13:55 - Self Portrait (Ron parrish aka wordman)
The whole read was to me very touching dear Ron - - a most moving write.
September 5th, 2020 13:52 - Storm Stilled (Orchidee)
What better example of the powers that Christ demonstrated. a good read...
September 5th, 2020 13:51 - Absolutely Stunning! (Goldfinch60)
Nature\'s colours at sunset are simply amazing - good that you caught such...
September 5th, 2020 13:50 - Inevitability (Neville)
Yes the word \"improbable\" shot into my mind as I read your first telling...
September 5th, 2020 02:26 - bunch of criminals (Dusk arising)
What an exposure of gang-play back in the day and how did you guess - you...
September 5th, 2020 02:08 - his words (Dusk arising)
A clever use of seeing time as we perceive it and when a tomorrow can be...
September 4th, 2020 16:08 - A Taste of Nothing (Neville)
Falling the same way as the rest this unknown admirer can never get...
September 4th, 2020 08:55 - SEPTEMBER LOVES 💛BRIAN 💛 A 9 5 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An impressive tribute to what comes as your birth-month unclothes its...
September 4th, 2020 04:00 - WINE CATALOGUE MAJESTIC ~ A 8 6 BOOZY SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good advice at the end of your amazing knowledge and collection of wines...
September 3rd, 2020 11:20 - No Return. (Goldfinch60)
Must comment and forgot last time on the wonderful harpist playing that...
September 3rd, 2020 10:09 - Like thinking (MendedFences27)
A sigh of a read about how a lifetime of being same-minded with someone...
September 3rd, 2020 10:04 - Tree of life (Poetic Dan)
So good to hear your short poem read aloud as the dogs wandered around...
September 3rd, 2020 10:00 - EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (1) (Michael Edwards)
You capture and extend a neat bit of wisdom in this effortless whimsy dear...
September 3rd, 2020 03:44 - A Fragment (Jarcher54)
A tender scene set to stay with the reader long after the four lines end....
September 3rd, 2020 03:38 - No Return. (Goldfinch60)
How true these reasons for not going back - a needed reminder and thank...
September 3rd, 2020 03:01 - Decisions & Choices (Neville)
An ouchy reminder of choices not made but filled with wisdom and truth...
September 3rd, 2020 03:00 - SAILING @ COWES ISLE OF WIGHT ~ A 7 7 SEA SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
For making salty memories there is nothing better than sailing the Solent ...
September 2nd, 2020 13:14 - la mer (Dusk arising)
Just expressed in many lines my appreciation for this ode to the sea and...
September 2nd, 2020 09:20 - Pictures at an Exhibition. (Goldfinch60)
What an amazingly awesome experience. Thanks for sharing it Andy
September 2nd, 2020 05:58 - Problem (Neville)
Attempting this barrier would be a problem so it seems you have a...
September 2nd, 2020 03:26 - The tale of Louise rabbit and Roland the hedgehog (Dusk arising)
Loud applause for this sweet love story - I have to confess it had...
September 1st, 2020 15:58 - HORSES AND CARTS (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - that image of G. dancing the can can did it for me Mike - ...
September 1st, 2020 04:30 - Tease (Neville)
Genteel teasing having long been a part of the feminine nature needs...
September 1st, 2020 02:32 - Still in Love. (Goldfinch60)
Such a moving read Andy. Thank you for sharing your eternal love.
September 1st, 2020 02:18 - Simple as That (Neville)
Absolutely agree with your thoughts on this matter of falling in love and...
August 31st, 2020 11:40 - Endsong (Neville)
Wise words and penned with inventive rhyming your Endsong is a reminder...
August 30th, 2020 13:38 - Living for a Dream (Jo March)
Well rhymed Jo this \"Living for a Dream\" with emphasis on facing reality...
August 30th, 2020 05:34 - Praise Proclamation (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
August 30th, 2020 05:29 - Hiss Undone. (Goldfinch60)
A caring assurance that joy lasts forever when demons are chased away -...
August 30th, 2020 05:28 - WE PLANTED A TREE ! A POSSESIVE PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a wonderful thing to do is to plant something living and a tree...
August 30th, 2020 05:26 - When I Find You (Neville)
Love making with someone not even met is so specially tied in with...
August 30th, 2020 04:39 - Twice Taken. (Goldfinch60)
A read of such moving love will every lift hearts who themselves wish to...
August 28th, 2020 07:03 - Merciful Matters (Orchidee)
An inspiring read Orchi.
August 28th, 2020 06:56 - Love Birds (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Loud applause Kevin for this greatly inventive Love-Bird rhyming .
August 28th, 2020 06:55 - LIMERICK 68 (Michael Edwards)
Ever beyond me limericks have always tickled my fancy - such a clever one...
August 28th, 2020 06:53 - HOME COOKIN* ? BRIAN & ANGELA ~ AN 8 4 2 RHYMING SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lurved that jazz number and your poem on Home-cookin\' left me with a big...
August 28th, 2020 05:31 - IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (9-12) (Michael Edwards)
Grins before bed after reading your latest - - great stuff Mike.
August 27th, 2020 16:06 - WE ALL NEED A HOLIDAY ! ~ AN ACROSTIC ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - - you poem this need very well dear duo - - too long spent indoors...
August 27th, 2020 12:11 - Modern Love (Neville)
Smilin\' big here at your worthy depiction of Modern Love Nev.
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August 27th, 2020 02:39 - MY SENSE OF TOUCH ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes touch is essential and you poem it well - - thank you for sharing...
August 26th, 2020 06:15 - Treasure Trove (Orchidee)
An inspiring hymn-poem Or;chi - thank you for sharing it.
August 26th, 2020 06:12 - Stop Washing. (Goldfinch60)
Stop washing and keep aging away ... ha - - That seems a good notion dear...
August 26th, 2020 03:03 - Summer’s End (Neville)
A moving read Nev. - -Tender pathos follows your goodbye-to-summer...
August 26th, 2020 02:03 - IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (1-4) (Michael Edwards)
You and your idioms for idiots like me one to four - - well as I laughed...
August 25th, 2020 10:06 - Bohemian Rhapsody. (Goldfinch60)
Ah - Andy - - What harmony and so unique that Rhapsody - - - and wow 45...
August 25th, 2020 10:03 - sheep (Dusk arising)
Ha - try counting backwards next time my friend -- am right now being...
August 25th, 2020 07:15 - Drop Me off @ the Next Stop (Neville)
Hearts grow not old though skin starts to wrinkle and hope keeps the...
August 25th, 2020 03:09 - A Wet October Night (MendedFences27)
OOooh is the She who must be obeyed whatever the weather - - an eerie...
August 25th, 2020 00:56 - MUSIC ~ MUSIC ~ MUSIC 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 ESSENTIAL FOOD OF LIFE ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love all the musical references in this tribute to positive songs for this...
August 24th, 2020 13:56 - giggle strips (Dusk arising)
What a great flow to this little bit of gentle erotica - - being young in...
August 24th, 2020 09:36 - Sun Shy (Neville)
Wow the speed of that beautifully rhymed romantic happening leaves me...
August 24th, 2020 03:58 - That Smile. (Goldfinch60)
Your Joyce had that lovely smile which would light up every day and also...
August 23rd, 2020 03:08 - IDIOMS REMODELED (9-12) (Michael Edwards)
Your clever rearranged idioms are creasing me up with giggles - more...
August 23rd, 2020 02:36 - Bridges (Neville)
The lure of bridges worldwide must provide a sad how for the unbalanced...
August 23rd, 2020 02:32 - Beautiful Contradictions (Neville)
Never knew contradictions could be termed beautiful but that\'s what love...
August 22nd, 2020 03:36 - Carol\'s Autumn. (Goldfinch60)
What a talent your daughter has Andy - her work with charcoal is simply...
August 22nd, 2020 02:54 - BRIDGES GET US TO THE OTHER SIDE ! ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Well after reading your pantoum tribute to bridges I intend now to looker...
August 21st, 2020 06:41 - about Lisa (Dusk arising)
Oh what a number and my favourite instrument - thanks too D.A. for Lisa...
August 21st, 2020 04:28 - Jerusalem Joyful And Just (Orchidee)
\"Peace be in you today\" - what a lovely wish for one and all. A...
August 21st, 2020 03:59 - Sky Hungry (Neville)
I love this impressive flight of fancy where \"sky lay-bys\" give hours of...
August 21st, 2020 02:14 - a little of England (Dusk arising)
This read is better than best this exquisite poem on all this summer has...
August 20th, 2020 12:39 - NO CAT FOR ME (Michael Edwards)
A doggie for me so I can take it for daily walkies............... great...
August 20th, 2020 08:12 - Pretty as a Pin (Neville)
Rag-tied cotton-capped hair would put any male off methinks but maybe...
August 20th, 2020 04:32 - AUTUMN LEAVES OK ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 6 2 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
That voice brings such tender memories and your autumn acrostic is another...
August 19th, 2020 10:59 - Natures Glory. (Goldfinch60)
Each day gives its treasure of that there\'s no doubt but glorious...
August 19th, 2020 07:47 - NO LITTER (Michael Edwards)
Your wit always amazes dear Michael - I truly admire the drawing and the...
August 19th, 2020 07:43 - First Focus (Orchidee)
Yes we must firstly focus and let faith take our hand before reaching...
August 19th, 2020 07:41 - Crimson Ribbon (Neville)
The fate of some females is frayed just like your tender verse says like...
August 19th, 2020 04:35
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