Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Tree of life (Poetic Dan)
So good to hear your short poem read aloud as the dogs wandered around...
September 3rd, 2020 10:00 - EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (1) (Michael Edwards)
You capture and extend a neat bit of wisdom in this effortless whimsy dear...
September 3rd, 2020 03:44 - A Fragment (Jarcher54)
A tender scene set to stay with the reader long after the four lines end....
September 3rd, 2020 03:38 - No Return. (Goldfinch60)
How true these reasons for not going back - a needed reminder and thank...
September 3rd, 2020 03:01 - Decisions & Choices (Neville)
An ouchy reminder of choices not made but filled with wisdom and truth...
September 3rd, 2020 03:00 - SAILING @ COWES ISLE OF WIGHT ~ A 7 7 SEA SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
For making salty memories there is nothing better than sailing the Solent ...
September 2nd, 2020 13:14 - la mer (Dusk arising)
Just expressed in many lines my appreciation for this ode to the sea and...
September 2nd, 2020 09:20 - Pictures at an Exhibition. (Goldfinch60)
What an amazingly awesome experience. Thanks for sharing it Andy
September 2nd, 2020 05:58 - Problem (Neville)
Attempting this barrier would be a problem so it seems you have a...
September 2nd, 2020 03:26 - The tale of Louise rabbit and Roland the hedgehog (Dusk arising)
Loud applause for this sweet love story - I have to confess it had...
September 1st, 2020 15:58 - HORSES AND CARTS (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - that image of G. dancing the can can did it for me Mike - ...
September 1st, 2020 04:30 - Tease (Neville)
Genteel teasing having long been a part of the feminine nature needs...
September 1st, 2020 02:32 - Still in Love. (Goldfinch60)
Such a moving read Andy. Thank you for sharing your eternal love.
September 1st, 2020 02:18 - Simple as That (Neville)
Absolutely agree with your thoughts on this matter of falling in love and...
August 31st, 2020 11:40 - Endsong (Neville)
Wise words and penned with inventive rhyming your Endsong is a reminder...
August 30th, 2020 13:38 - Living for a Dream (Jo March)
Well rhymed Jo this \"Living for a Dream\" with emphasis on facing reality...
August 30th, 2020 05:34 - Praise Proclamation (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
August 30th, 2020 05:29 - Hiss Undone. (Goldfinch60)
A caring assurance that joy lasts forever when demons are chased away -...
August 30th, 2020 05:28 - WE PLANTED A TREE ! A POSSESIVE PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a wonderful thing to do is to plant something living and a tree...
August 30th, 2020 05:26 - When I Find You (Neville)
Love making with someone not even met is so specially tied in with...
August 30th, 2020 04:39 - Twice Taken. (Goldfinch60)
A read of such moving love will every lift hearts who themselves wish to...
August 28th, 2020 07:03 - Merciful Matters (Orchidee)
An inspiring read Orchi.
August 28th, 2020 06:56 - Love Birds (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Loud applause Kevin for this greatly inventive Love-Bird rhyming .
August 28th, 2020 06:55 - LIMERICK 68 (Michael Edwards)
Ever beyond me limericks have always tickled my fancy - such a clever one...
August 28th, 2020 06:53 - HOME COOKIN* ? BRIAN & ANGELA ~ AN 8 4 2 RHYMING SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lurved that jazz number and your poem on Home-cookin\' left me with a big...
August 28th, 2020 05:31 - IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (9-12) (Michael Edwards)
Grins before bed after reading your latest - - great stuff Mike.
August 27th, 2020 16:06 - WE ALL NEED A HOLIDAY ! ~ AN ACROSTIC ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - - you poem this need very well dear duo - - too long spent indoors...
August 27th, 2020 12:11 - Modern Love (Neville)
Smilin\' big here at your worthy depiction of Modern Love Nev.
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August 27th, 2020 02:39 - MY SENSE OF TOUCH ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes touch is essential and you poem it well - - thank you for sharing...
August 26th, 2020 06:15 - Treasure Trove (Orchidee)
An inspiring hymn-poem Or;chi - thank you for sharing it.
August 26th, 2020 06:12 - Stop Washing. (Goldfinch60)
Stop washing and keep aging away ... ha - - That seems a good notion dear...
August 26th, 2020 03:03 - Summer’s End (Neville)
A moving read Nev. - -Tender pathos follows your goodbye-to-summer...
August 26th, 2020 02:03 - IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (1-4) (Michael Edwards)
You and your idioms for idiots like me one to four - - well as I laughed...
August 25th, 2020 10:06 - Bohemian Rhapsody. (Goldfinch60)
Ah - Andy - - What harmony and so unique that Rhapsody - - - and wow 45...
August 25th, 2020 10:03 - sheep (Dusk arising)
Ha - try counting backwards next time my friend -- am right now being...
August 25th, 2020 07:15 - Drop Me off @ the Next Stop (Neville)
Hearts grow not old though skin starts to wrinkle and hope keeps the...
August 25th, 2020 03:09 - MUSIC ~ MUSIC ~ MUSIC 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 ESSENTIAL FOOD OF LIFE ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love all the musical references in this tribute to positive songs for this...
August 24th, 2020 13:56 - giggle strips (Dusk arising)
What a great flow to this little bit of gentle erotica - - being young in...
August 24th, 2020 09:36 - Sun Shy (Neville)
Wow the speed of that beautifully rhymed romantic happening leaves me...
August 24th, 2020 03:58 - That Smile. (Goldfinch60)
Your Joyce had that lovely smile which would light up every day and also...
August 23rd, 2020 03:08 - IDIOMS REMODELED (9-12) (Michael Edwards)
Your clever rearranged idioms are creasing me up with giggles - more...
August 23rd, 2020 02:36 - Bridges (Neville)
The lure of bridges worldwide must provide a sad how for the unbalanced...
August 23rd, 2020 02:32 - Beautiful Contradictions (Neville)
Never knew contradictions could be termed beautiful but that\'s what love...
August 22nd, 2020 03:36 - Carol\'s Autumn. (Goldfinch60)
What a talent your daughter has Andy - her work with charcoal is simply...
August 22nd, 2020 02:54 - BRIDGES GET US TO THE OTHER SIDE ! ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Well after reading your pantoum tribute to bridges I intend now to looker...
August 21st, 2020 06:41 - about Lisa (Dusk arising)
Oh what a number and my favourite instrument - thanks too D.A. for Lisa...
August 21st, 2020 04:28 - Jerusalem Joyful And Just (Orchidee)
\"Peace be in you today\" - what a lovely wish for one and all. A...
August 21st, 2020 03:59 - Sky Hungry (Neville)
I love this impressive flight of fancy where \"sky lay-bys\" give hours of...
August 21st, 2020 02:14 - a little of England (Dusk arising)
This read is better than best this exquisite poem on all this summer has...
August 20th, 2020 12:39 - NO CAT FOR ME (Michael Edwards)
A doggie for me so I can take it for daily walkies............... great...
August 20th, 2020 08:12 - Pretty as a Pin (Neville)
Rag-tied cotton-capped hair would put any male off methinks but maybe...
August 20th, 2020 04:32 - AUTUMN LEAVES OK ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 6 2 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
That voice brings such tender memories and your autumn acrostic is another...
August 19th, 2020 10:59 - Natures Glory. (Goldfinch60)
Each day gives its treasure of that there\'s no doubt but glorious...
August 19th, 2020 07:47 - NO LITTER (Michael Edwards)
Your wit always amazes dear Michael - I truly admire the drawing and the...
August 19th, 2020 07:43 - First Focus (Orchidee)
Yes we must firstly focus and let faith take our hand before reaching...
August 19th, 2020 07:41 - Crimson Ribbon (Neville)
The fate of some females is frayed just like your tender verse says like...
August 19th, 2020 04:35 - DAYS OF THE WEEK ~ IN SEVEN 5 7 5 SENRYU (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love this collab. on days of the week - and in haiku well what could be...
August 18th, 2020 08:02 - One Heart. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful array of loving words from your tender pen which your Joyce...
August 18th, 2020 06:15 - A Mermaids Tale (Neville)
The essence of mermaid tales are so well enfolded in this colourful read ...
August 18th, 2020 03:46 - body part (Dusk arising)
Ha -- the secret now outed as to what was the body part is you favour ...
August 17th, 2020 12:28 - No Edgeways. (Goldfinch60)
How great for you to see both lady friend and daughter getting on well as...
August 17th, 2020 02:01 - Wax Butterflies (Neville)
A dream of a read that takes a tale and embellishes its half-remembered...
August 17th, 2020 01:59 - THE WATER CYCLES ~ AN ACROSTIC ~ BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loud applause A + B for this tribute to wonderful water and all its...
August 15th, 2020 16:08 - for VJ Day (Dusk arising)
The very sad fact of war heroes who get forgotten or those who did not...
August 15th, 2020 10:10 - Theory of Endurance (Neville)
Time is form and form as this piece of wisdom states is temporary in...
August 15th, 2020 06:56 - Steph at Thirty. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely read Andy on this special occasion - Steph has a very...
August 15th, 2020 05:12 - PEOPLEZ PETZ ~ DIMINUTIVE DITTIES ~ SMOKEY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Do I spy the real A & B with their beloved Smokey ? Whether or no the...
August 14th, 2020 10:46 - Times of Youth. (Goldfinch60)
Memory supplies those time again whenever we need them dear Andy - a...
August 14th, 2020 09:17 - Maybe Old but Not Daft (Neville)
Dame-games never sit well with disinterested sailors whose love of the sea...
August 14th, 2020 03:23 - EXAM RESULTS ~ RULE KO ! ~ FIVE SENRYU 5-7-5-7-7 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes each child is gifted with something special and that is enough or...
August 13th, 2020 15:09 - It Rained. (Goldfinch60)
Yes rain can do wonders to dry August ground and still be soaked up by the...
August 13th, 2020 04:33 - Beaten (Neville)
This maybe a game of who wins at shove-halfpenny but I have known...
August 13th, 2020 02:14 - Back to School. (Goldfinch60)
We are fed and controlled at the moment by those who want us to fear -dear...
August 12th, 2020 13:05 - DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (2) (Michael Edwards)
Mystical listening in your wonderful art-work signifies music is magically...
August 12th, 2020 13:02 - CATS ~ A DIAMOND SHAPE POEM ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Cats poemed so well in this tribute and most instructive video too - -...
August 12th, 2020 11:30 - Of Kept Men & Their Secrets (Neville)
The title itself raised my curiosity about what follows and wow what a...
August 12th, 2020 04:18 - 26 SHAKESPERIAN MANTRAS ~ A COMPLETE ABCDARIAN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You have worked so hard to write the almost- ABCDarian dear duo - - some...
August 11th, 2020 10:18 - DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (4) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - well that one way to save water dear Micheal -- but Hic ! - - I...
August 11th, 2020 02:43 - Bottles of Pandemic. (Goldfinch60)
Andy I had forgotten the Corona of yesteryear and what a co-incidence it...
August 11th, 2020 02:36 - Quenching Quest (Orchidee)
A good use of words and texts here Orchi.
August 11th, 2020 02:32 - Crabbin (Neville)
Memories of yesteryear happenings poemed so clearly in readable slang...
August 11th, 2020 02:29 - fate hangs (Dusk arising)
A shudder succeeds this haunt of a read and stays long after D.A. - - --...
August 10th, 2020 07:58 - Fare ye well (L. B. Mek)
The sense of on-going time echoes from your well chosen phrasing and flows...
August 10th, 2020 07:52 - Freckles (Neville)
Ah - - big smiles for resurrecting those intimate freedoms of sunny...
August 10th, 2020 04:24 - MSM (Goldfinch60)
Good and needed rant dear Andy - with you all the way,
August 10th, 2020 02:39 - Unearthing the Daisy (Sylviasearcher)
A delightful flow to this read Sylvia - - I liked the rhyming too which...
August 10th, 2020 02:03 - Fallen Leaves Behind (Neville)
I truly admire the metaphor you use in this solemn verse Nev. - grieving...
August 9th, 2020 02:24 - EL LOCO DE LAS RAMBLAS ~ MADMAN OF THE RAMBLAS ~ BARCELONA ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What an unexpected ending to this story of he who was called \"mad\" - -...
August 8th, 2020 16:05 - The Sixties, Was I There. (Goldfinch60)
Great number - - remember being there for that and others and your...
August 8th, 2020 05:35 - Sun Drops (Neville)
Oh for the ability write short-line gems such as this one my friend. Full...
August 8th, 2020 05:11 - Something in the Air (Neville)
You pen a sad picture of today\'s strange state my literary friend....
August 7th, 2020 04:33 - Two Way Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
The movement of clouds is fascinating and standing watching them on a...
August 6th, 2020 05:33 - Now looking Back (Neville)
Heart-warming words which recall love once held higher even than poetry...
August 6th, 2020 03:51 - LOVE OF THE HORSE 💛 AN ACROSTIC 4 2 3 5 SONNET 💛 ENJOY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A wonderful creature the horse which is given an impressive acrostic in...
August 6th, 2020 02:41 - NO LONGER HEARD (Michael Edwards)
Glad you finished playing with words and posted this gem of a free-style,...
August 5th, 2020 06:01 - Smile For All. (Goldfinch60)
A smile cost nothing so my old Gran would say and oh how it lifts a gloomy...
August 4th, 2020 10:51 - Star of Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Dear Andy - I agree that Love cannot die and your way to meeting again...
August 3rd, 2020 10:47 - Homeless (Aa Harvey)
A moving heart-wrencher of a write with a last stanza that brings tears to...
August 3rd, 2020 09:39 - 2020 THAT WAS THE YEAR .. ! ~ YEAR OF COVID 19 ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A very telling calendar - and yes a very strange year indeed. Really...
August 3rd, 2020 02:20 - thank you for my son (Noah Malice)
A moving tribute to a much loved new addition to a caring family - - the...
August 2nd, 2020 04:30
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