Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Oblivious (Neville)
Your write so cleverly roused this reader\'s attention to the past tense...
October 1st, 2020 02:34 - SHADES OF GREEN ~ ANGELA ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - green - - my favourite colour too - a lovely card showing all the...
September 30th, 2020 13:30 - Entirely Gone (Lorna)
Welcome back Lorna - you have been missed and this sad posting tells why...
September 30th, 2020 11:31 - “Sonnet” From the Ashes (Dove)
A bouquet of romantic reasons why flicker remains once love has fades - ...
September 30th, 2020 10:54 - A Patchwork of Ashes (Neville)
This read with its unique ending left me with a smile despite its artful...
September 30th, 2020 03:24 - lies to kill for (Dusk arising)
Yes so true D.A. - faith in dogma can poison forgiveness -- your...
September 30th, 2020 03:01 - Laughter For All. (Goldfinch60)
The best of all healers is laughter and you shared well in that on both...
September 30th, 2020 02:24 - Long Days (Whimsical_1)
Yes long days of frustration indeed and thank you for versing the reasons...
September 29th, 2020 16:17 - seeing ..... her way (Dusk arising)
Wow - A first rate description of how words can take us on journeys of...
September 29th, 2020 16:09 - Together (Fay Slimm.)
Many thanks Dan and D.A. for your read and for adding Together into your...
September 29th, 2020 11:31 - ODE TO~SPIDER~WEB ~ AN ACROSTIC 3 2 6 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A much needed ode to the beauty of spider-webs and so thankful to hear you...
September 29th, 2020 08:47 - No hiding here! (Poetic Dan)
A top drawer write Dan and one that I will read over again for a long time...
September 29th, 2020 05:17 - Shallow Brown. (Goldfinch60)
You poem the wonder of music so well in this lovely verse dear Andy - -...
September 29th, 2020 03:06 - Michaelmas Melody (Orchidee)
Michaelmas explained very well
- - thanking you Orchi.
September 29th, 2020 03:04 - Come-a-Day (Neville)
A heart tugger for sure this poignant use of a walk through nature which...
September 29th, 2020 02:53 - The Interview (MendedFences27)
I could not help but read this tale again and again before writing a...
September 28th, 2020 16:23 - GINGERBREAD~MAN~BLUES A TRIOLET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Glad your own gingerbread man meets all requirements my lovely - - we...
September 28th, 2020 13:19 - Making His Way Home (Neville)
Love songs need a finish and home seems the place in which they like to...
September 28th, 2020 08:17 - Beautiful Sunflower (Jacob Mead)
You poem the glorious Sunflower so well here my friend. It certainly sings...
September 28th, 2020 03:47 - rude Awakenings (L. B. Mek)
A familiar picture your impressive pen paints behind many drawn curtains...
September 28th, 2020 03:44 - Will She Sing to Me? (Goldfinch60)
A sincere thank you for sharing that moment here Andy - I can feel what...
September 28th, 2020 02:25 - “ Promises of Vows (Dove)
Triolet or not this write about vows raises many a question in the hearts...
September 27th, 2020 13:20 - Hope is There. (Goldfinch60)
Loud applause for the message your words state today dear Andy - - action...
September 27th, 2020 04:02 - SO IT\'S SUNDAY (Michael Edwards)
A Sunday tale to which many relate - where does the chance go for a drink...
September 27th, 2020 04:00 - Discarded 2 (Neville)
The love and care shown will be remembered by those who received when...
September 27th, 2020 03:54 - Transmutation (Laura🌻)
Such a perceptive outlook on love and its power to transmute so that...
September 27th, 2020 03:42 - Words (MendedFences27)
You have poemed the power of words so well here Phil - - great read.
September 27th, 2020 02:43 - Song of a poor scavenger. (Trenz Pruca)
Oh how true these few well chosen words on what is wasted daily by the...
September 26th, 2020 16:14 - Cheese Straws. (Goldfinch60)
Wow - how weird dear Andy - do your cheese straws just like mine do a...
September 26th, 2020 03:10 - GWYNEDD (Michael Edwards)
An inviting description of Welsh beauty no doubt Mike while the...
September 26th, 2020 03:07 - All the Ends of Me (Neville)
Powerful imagery makes this write outstanding with its poetic appeal that...
September 26th, 2020 03:01 - Gospel Given (Orchidee)
We all need good news to build up our faith - fine write Orchi.
September 25th, 2020 16:19 - LITTER LOUTS ~A SALUTARY PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Agree wholeheartedly with every stanza - litter is really a measure of...
September 25th, 2020 16:16 - Just Supposing (Neville)
Too true that I can think of one who I seem to see right through the more...
September 23rd, 2020 13:11 - Bruises (Neville)
A most moving write that stirs the heart Nev........... bruises leave...
September 20th, 2020 02:51 - Stella. (Goldfinch60)
As a dog lover the poem on Stella reached into my heart dear Andy -- her...
September 18th, 2020 02:27 - ONION (Michael Edwards)
Just been doing that same thing Michael - chopping up onions and crying a...
September 17th, 2020 12:05 - WORK ~ HOME OR AWAY ? WHICH WOULD U CHOOSE ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Choices galore in this question of working from home or away - - your...
September 17th, 2020 11:58 - crossroads (Dusk arising)
Roads forward or cross but no going back - - yes your words of wisdom put...
September 16th, 2020 12:54 - Vessel (SerenWise)
How true these few words Seren - - love cannot but feed us and set us on...
September 16th, 2020 02:22 - Endless daze, sweaty nights (Trenz Pruca)
Admirable opening on a description of insomnia which filled with good...
September 16th, 2020 02:19 - Together. (Goldfinch60)
She never leaves your side dear Andy - - love cannot die and is part of...
September 15th, 2020 19:00 - wild horses (Dusk arising)
Some of your phrasing in this poem D.A. will ring true to many a heart -...
September 15th, 2020 16:16 - Dichotomy (Gavin)
A compelling read Gavin - - as your well balanced stanzas show...
September 15th, 2020 13:41 - ANYONE FOR TENNIS ? A PARODY ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ha ha - - this read gave me more than a smile as I relate to the...
September 15th, 2020 13:37 - Geographia (Neville)
Yes despite the attraction of sky-play triangles home is certainly where...
September 15th, 2020 04:01 - stood up (Dusk arising)
Another compelling read with the scene so perfectly presented - so...
September 14th, 2020 13:46 - IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
Thanks for sharing the amazing drawing Mike and those scary words ...
September 12th, 2020 02:10 - How Are You? Goldiku. (Goldfinch60)
Good answer and well worth remembering Andy.
September 11th, 2020 12:54 - Creator Consciousness (Orchidee)
Praise is indeed beautiful and worthy of our daily attention. A needed...
September 11th, 2020 12:53 - A THING AS LOVELY AS A TREE ~ A SHAPED POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love the tree-shape dear duo and love the poem - trees deserve all the...
September 11th, 2020 12:48 - DOWNTOWN GIRL (Laura🌻)
A tribute to two lovely friends one of whom met her untimely end it seems...
September 11th, 2020 12:47 - Water is life and seems alive (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
You capture the movement of water so well with your tempo and style - a...
September 10th, 2020 15:58 - Diverse Paths. (Goldfinch60)
Thoughts on which to ponder and learn from dear friend and thank you for...
September 10th, 2020 10:17 - love beyond (Dusk arising)
Such a tender blessing of memories ooze from your lines - love than...
September 10th, 2020 05:30 - FARMERS & POETS ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your pantoum does credit to the early rising of farmers and gathers and...
September 9th, 2020 12:39 - Searching (John Prophet)
You outline the search for answers so well with descriptive short phrasing...
September 9th, 2020 02:23 - mill street bridge (Dusk arising)
A haunt of a read and with your apt usage of short-line wording that...
September 9th, 2020 02:17 - A HAPPY BIRTHDAY ~ BRIAN ~ A 1 5 8 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hope you have been having a great Birthday dear Brian - I love the...
September 8th, 2020 15:52 - WOVEN IDIOMS (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha - - am wordless with laughter at that camel coat..........
September 7th, 2020 12:38 - Maybe (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Such a potent romantic read - who knows who we have met before -- hope...
September 7th, 2020 12:36 - storm (Dusk arising)
Oh what a tale - - you are a born story teller my friend - - and as for...
September 7th, 2020 12:34 - into the woodgreen realm (Dusk arising)
Ah - a wonderful read laced with admirable imagery - crying a leaf...
September 6th, 2020 10:58 - That Annoying Drop. (Goldfinch60)
A shamble of tricks lie behind every mask and I dare not look at what...
September 6th, 2020 10:17 - EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (3) (Michael Edwards)
Too true that the impossible is always there to be declared possible by...
September 5th, 2020 13:55 - Self Portrait (Ron parrish aka wordman)
The whole read was to me very touching dear Ron - - a most moving write.
September 5th, 2020 13:52 - Storm Stilled (Orchidee)
What better example of the powers that Christ demonstrated. a good read...
September 5th, 2020 13:51 - Absolutely Stunning! (Goldfinch60)
Nature\'s colours at sunset are simply amazing - good that you caught such...
September 5th, 2020 13:50 - Inevitability (Neville)
Yes the word \"improbable\" shot into my mind as I read your first telling...
September 5th, 2020 02:26 - bunch of criminals (Dusk arising)
What an exposure of gang-play back in the day and how did you guess - you...
September 5th, 2020 02:08 - his words (Dusk arising)
A clever use of seeing time as we perceive it and when a tomorrow can be...
September 4th, 2020 16:08 - A Taste of Nothing (Neville)
Falling the same way as the rest this unknown admirer can never get...
September 4th, 2020 08:55 - SEPTEMBER LOVES 💛BRIAN 💛 A 9 5 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An impressive tribute to what comes as your birth-month unclothes its...
September 4th, 2020 04:00 - WINE CATALOGUE MAJESTIC ~ A 8 6 BOOZY SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good advice at the end of your amazing knowledge and collection of wines...
September 3rd, 2020 11:20 - No Return. (Goldfinch60)
Must comment and forgot last time on the wonderful harpist playing that...
September 3rd, 2020 10:09 - Like thinking (MendedFences27)
A sigh of a read about how a lifetime of being same-minded with someone...
September 3rd, 2020 10:04 - Tree of life (Poetic Dan)
So good to hear your short poem read aloud as the dogs wandered around...
September 3rd, 2020 10:00 - EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (1) (Michael Edwards)
You capture and extend a neat bit of wisdom in this effortless whimsy dear...
September 3rd, 2020 03:44 - A Fragment (Jarcher54)
A tender scene set to stay with the reader long after the four lines end....
September 3rd, 2020 03:38 - No Return. (Goldfinch60)
How true these reasons for not going back - a needed reminder and thank...
September 3rd, 2020 03:01 - Decisions & Choices (Neville)
An ouchy reminder of choices not made but filled with wisdom and truth...
September 3rd, 2020 03:00 - SAILING @ COWES ISLE OF WIGHT ~ A 7 7 SEA SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
For making salty memories there is nothing better than sailing the Solent ...
September 2nd, 2020 13:14 - la mer (Dusk arising)
Just expressed in many lines my appreciation for this ode to the sea and...
September 2nd, 2020 09:20 - Pictures at an Exhibition. (Goldfinch60)
What an amazingly awesome experience. Thanks for sharing it Andy
September 2nd, 2020 05:58 - Problem (Neville)
Attempting this barrier would be a problem so it seems you have a...
September 2nd, 2020 03:26 - The tale of Louise rabbit and Roland the hedgehog (Dusk arising)
Loud applause for this sweet love story - I have to confess it had...
September 1st, 2020 15:58 - HORSES AND CARTS (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - that image of G. dancing the can can did it for me Mike - ...
September 1st, 2020 04:30 - Tease (Neville)
Genteel teasing having long been a part of the feminine nature needs...
September 1st, 2020 02:32 - Still in Love. (Goldfinch60)
Such a moving read Andy. Thank you for sharing your eternal love.
September 1st, 2020 02:18 - Simple as That (Neville)
Absolutely agree with your thoughts on this matter of falling in love and...
August 31st, 2020 11:40 - Endsong (Neville)
Wise words and penned with inventive rhyming your Endsong is a reminder...
August 30th, 2020 13:38 - Living for a Dream (Jo March)
Well rhymed Jo this \"Living for a Dream\" with emphasis on facing reality...
August 30th, 2020 05:34 - Praise Proclamation (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
August 30th, 2020 05:29 - Hiss Undone. (Goldfinch60)
A caring assurance that joy lasts forever when demons are chased away -...
August 30th, 2020 05:28 - WE PLANTED A TREE ! A POSSESIVE PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a wonderful thing to do is to plant something living and a tree...
August 30th, 2020 05:26 - When I Find You (Neville)
Love making with someone not even met is so specially tied in with...
August 30th, 2020 04:39 - Twice Taken. (Goldfinch60)
A read of such moving love will every lift hearts who themselves wish to...
August 28th, 2020 07:03 - Merciful Matters (Orchidee)
An inspiring read Orchi.
August 28th, 2020 06:56 - Love Birds (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Loud applause Kevin for this greatly inventive Love-Bird rhyming .
August 28th, 2020 06:55 - LIMERICK 68 (Michael Edwards)
Ever beyond me limericks have always tickled my fancy - such a clever one...
August 28th, 2020 06:53
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