Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Just Another Shot in The Dark (Neville)
\'When there\'s no one else and nowhere to go,\" only then do you wish to...
December 1st, 2022 13:33 - Emerging December. (Fay Slimm.)
December - We have 5 grandkids and 1 daughter-in-law with December...
December 1st, 2022 13:13 - Just Another Zen Thing (Neville)
\"Disjointed fragments\" and \"mistaken\" identity, a split personality...
November 29th, 2022 18:57 - That Last Time Look (Neville)
I\'ve been told that, to a sailor\'s wife, every encounter is a last...
November 29th, 2022 10:20 - Death By a Thousand…… (Doggerel Dave)
DD, I get my double dose at the Dunkin\' Donuts which does not have a...
November 29th, 2022 10:04 - Forget Four Letter Words. (Doggerel Dave)
\"We\" and \"Us\" become divisive when used to separate people. \"We\" are...
November 21st, 2022 10:19 - So Very Strange. (Goldfinch60)
Enjoy the good life while it lasts. Live, love, and work together. Four...
October 15th, 2022 14:45 - The Science of Passing the Buck (Neville)
All it takes is one citizen to pass the buck to another, and then, because...
October 15th, 2022 14:33 - Upon Testing Positive (Neville)
Whoa. bad news that. Hope all goes well and you bounce back quick. - Phil...
October 14th, 2022 16:53 - Commissioned (Fay Slimm.)
This was the truth of those times, no doubt. Artists weren\'t free to...
October 5th, 2022 16:33 - Excuse Me I Love You She Said (Neville)
Look out mate, if provocation puts you in \"dangerous\" territory. Could...
October 5th, 2022 16:26 - With Nothing More to Lose (Neville)
To begin it reads like a love poem with all the trappings: \"rainbows,\"...
October 4th, 2022 19:01 - A moment of grace (Morwenna)
The English countryside can be a very pastoral setting, but a \"winding...
October 4th, 2022 18:47 - I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere.. (Doggerel Dave)
OK Dave. Loved this smell job. Never had a dead whatever in the wall but...
October 1st, 2022 20:58 - That Special Time. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds just fine Andy. I must admit that I too, listen to music as I...
September 30th, 2022 12:12 - Looking Back Long, Hard and Slow (Neville)
A fine recollection, full of color and heat, from the \"desert\" to the...
September 30th, 2022 11:57 - Duet (Fay Slimm.)
\"Bird song and ripples\" appearing tonight \"in concord\" at your local...
September 3rd, 2022 17:52 - On Being Too Gentle (Neville)
Sounds like this Dom is about to have a field day.
Well written, it...
September 3rd, 2022 17:22 - Roll Up (Doggerel Dave)
I remember Iron Lungs (used to scare me half to hell) and Polio Camps...
September 2nd, 2022 19:46 - Abandon (Fay Slimm.)
My stimulation for the day, Thank You.
Seriously, this is a lovely poem,...
September 2nd, 2022 19:13 - Dancing with a stranger (Shaa)
Oh Oh, sounds like primal attraction. You\'ve expressed this attraction in...
September 2nd, 2022 19:01 - Words of Heart (Dr. Soma)
Well, I have to agree about the beauty within this poem. Although, it...
September 2nd, 2022 18:47 - The most planless day of my life (Lincoln)
\"Carrying around my home,\" really? Or is it imagination? I can see to...
September 2nd, 2022 18:37 - Somewhere Between Lovers (Neville)
Her paper-thin veneer was finally shattered, and he voracious interior...
September 1st, 2022 18:17 - This Should be Obvious… (Doggerel Dave)
With every new invention there is a learning curve. The more complicated...
September 1st, 2022 13:39 - Fiery Fred. (Goldfinch60)
What does a cricket have to do with \"Cricket?\" Why isn\'t it called...
September 1st, 2022 13:09 - Girls (Fay Slimm.)
This is like the story of my life. Needless to say, we raised a few girls....
September 1st, 2022 12:22 - Frenzy (Fay Slimm.)
We currently have a nest of doves, living on the underside carrier beam...
August 31st, 2022 20:34 - A Few Moments After (Neville)
Is this the birthplace of erotic Emojis?
A lot is said here with but a...
August 30th, 2022 10:44 - Her (Fay Slimm.)
Women are half of the world but possess about one percent of the power in...
August 30th, 2022 10:05 - Responsibility Reminder (Orchidee)
A jog of the mind to remember whence we came.
A good poem-hymn. Phil A.
August 29th, 2022 13:05 - Resignation To Life. (Goldfinch60)
Sometimes, the bravest of us all are secretive. She felt no need to share...
August 29th, 2022 12:56 - Peace In Music. (Goldfinch60)
If only the world could make music and not war. I\'ve often considered...
August 28th, 2022 20:10 - Renewal (Fay Slimm.)
People change with time and can find that they hardly recognize...
August 28th, 2022 20:01 - Why Not Just Throw Away The Key (Neville)
There is no sensibility here, only burning desire. She was only pretty as...
August 24th, 2022 10:43 - Creating Memories. (Goldfinch60)
The by-gone days of youth memorialized. Yeah, those were some great...
August 24th, 2022 10:29 - Epitaph for a PC (Doggerel Dave)
Gosh, D.D. It\'s a known fact that a new computer is like a new girlfriend...
August 24th, 2022 10:24 - With Only Five Leaves Left (Neville)
Not got a clue, that\'s me. Nick Drake, sad story, sad life, sad way to...
August 23rd, 2022 22:02 - Anticipating Angels (Neville)
\"Here\" vs \"There.\" \"Anticipating\" vs. \"Entertaining.\" I thought...
August 21st, 2022 13:55 - Abundance (Fay Slimm.)
Loved your lush description of Autumn. A time of plenty, of brilliant...
August 20th, 2022 15:25 - Trapped In A Telephone. (Goldfinch60)
I think you might be onto something here Andy. Maybe they are prisoners,...
August 20th, 2022 15:14 - To the Memories... (Aradhya)
A reflection or a remembrance, I thought, of someone close to the poet....
August 20th, 2022 15:02 - We\'re Here..... (Doggerel Dave)
Let everybody be what they gotta be, believe what they gotta believe, and...
August 11th, 2022 11:42 - Solitude (MendedFences27)
August 11th, 2022 10:19 - Strange Sight. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s a wonder you lived through that experience. Shocking! A young one...
August 10th, 2022 13:37 - Naturally (Neville)
For sure, Nature is a product of \"oxygen and a splash of H2O,\" but then...
August 9th, 2022 08:30 - Well I Never… (Doggerel Dave)
I can\'t really comment on the political stuff. We are kind of isolated...
August 7th, 2022 20:09 - Toreador (Tallisman)
I like this. It tells of embedded dreams which I think we all have and...
August 7th, 2022 17:09 - A Poet (Fay Slimm.)
This is wonderful. Two things just changed for me,:
1) I have to look for...
August 7th, 2022 16:58 - Wordsworth Reversed. (Goldfinch60)
Wordsworth Reversed is Worth Words and this is certainly worth a few words...
August 6th, 2022 13:46 - talking Bukowski (Tj Struska)
And a fine tribute at that. I\'ve read some Bukowski and this seems true...
August 6th, 2022 13:25 - The Lost Idea. (Goldfinch60)
Very, very true. Happens all the time. I also have stacks of unfinished...
August 5th, 2022 13:40 - Worn Out (ElaineAnneWestheimer)
What a story the laundry can tell. The fabric of our lives exposed. What...
August 5th, 2022 13:20 - Those Days (Fay Slimm.)
Is this the \"Hard Rock Cafe?\" \"No welcome,\" there either.
You spoke...
August 2nd, 2022 15:13 - Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor (Neville)
Or as Mel Brooks (age 96) once said,
\"I get up in the morning. I read...
August 2nd, 2022 14:44 - Satisfaction (Fay Slimm.)
Two great questions, Fay.
The \"satisfaction\" of which you speak does...
August 1st, 2022 15:09 - Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please (Neville)
The sweet taste of love, when found, lingers. A great expression of...
August 1st, 2022 14:58 - 4/2/22 (Wren)
Some great images. Your phrasings are unique and colorful. I like how your...
July 31st, 2022 18:49 - That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings (Neville)
Memories woven into a quilt of poetic
recollections; of \"cotton...
July 31st, 2022 17:06 - The Shame of Yesterday’s News (Neville)
Shameful! The way children across the Globe get treated these days....
July 30th, 2022 21:52 - Lunacy (Fay Slimm.)
A very important issue that you have expressed brilliantly. Why can\'t we...
July 30th, 2022 21:41 - The Lovers of Modena Disturbed (Neville)
Two people in one grave is unusual, today, but I can\'t say about the...
July 29th, 2022 15:11 - Just a Few Significant Ponderings (Neville)
Well, if one thinks they are never wrong, and also fails to enjoy life,...
July 14th, 2022 22:05 - Andy’s New Car (Doggerel Dave)
Had to chuckle at this bit of humor. Yeah, 5 years on the car, but the...
July 14th, 2022 10:57 - Gaining Relief (Fay Slimm.)
A bit of rural living being lost to modern technology. One wonders if the...
July 14th, 2022 10:51 - Healing Hope (Orchidee)
Hope is what keeps us going. Without it we would be lost. A fine poem...
July 11th, 2022 13:15 - Dream Keepers (Fay Slimm.)
What a beautiful Poem to accompany a stellar photo. \'Dream Keepers\"...
July 11th, 2022 13:02 - Sonnet I (Junior Mboweni)
I really felt this one. Having been in a similar situation, (Divided by...
July 11th, 2022 12:38 - Catch (Fay Slimm.)
\"when wonder speaks,\" had me in awe, and I listened. What a beautiful...
July 10th, 2022 15:12 - No More. (Fay Slimm.)
Certain times when Nature flashes her beauty that last momentarily. We are...
July 7th, 2022 20:58 - Ocean of Teardrops- Villanelle (Dove)
Well done. Seems a difficult form to do. Yours is craftily done. The theme...
July 6th, 2022 18:22 - Ready (Fay Slimm.)
Wow! I felt the pent-up desire in this. A life of loneliness wanting to be...
July 6th, 2022 18:11 - MY INSPIRATION (Raven333)
You are very fortunate to have such a wonderful Mom. Your poem about...
July 6th, 2022 17:55 - Another Life Lesson (though I’m not quite sure…….) (Doggerel Dave)
Interesting tale revealing the risks and dangers psych. personnel endure....
July 6th, 2022 17:49 - My Pretty Little Psychopath (Neville)
\"Morphine shots\" will dull the pain, but last only a short while and...
June 11th, 2022 19:13 - Scaled (Fay Slimm.)
Love can conquer many things, and walls are the least to fall. Walls are...
June 11th, 2022 19:03 - Lyrical melody (Kitty the naughty poet)
I hear Sinatra singing \"Fly Me to The Moon,\" like in \"rivers of white...
June 11th, 2022 18:46 - Nightmare dreams (Kitty the naughty poet)
Is she seeing her own evil reflected in the beastly image and rustling...
June 10th, 2022 19:30 - The Old Gardener (Morwenna)
I love this as it is. Would not change anything. \"The Old Gardener\" has...
June 10th, 2022 19:00 - Impossibly useless: improbable delight (Morwenna)
We write. They read, and they interpret as they wish. The poet\'s intent...
June 9th, 2022 17:49 - Awayness (Fay Slimm.)
I too have experienced \"Awayness,\" and with it the pain. Mine, occurred...
June 9th, 2022 17:32 - Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket (Neville)
Politics is a dirty game and, as such, does not lend itself to poetry very...
June 9th, 2022 16:45 - Four Together. (Goldfinch60)
What a wonderful way to view life. You must believe in your words and...
June 9th, 2022 16:25 - This tangled life (Morwenna)
Weeds and insects, two of the greatest symbols of endurance and...
June 8th, 2022 14:36 - Over and Out (Neville)
Best to be clear of that temptation. It seems you would always be...
June 8th, 2022 14:17 - Gone (Fay Slimm.)
A sad but true image and allegory, of receding tides and love lost. Loved,...
June 8th, 2022 14:10 - Performance. (Fay Slimm.)
I think Sunset is the most beautiful part of a day. The Sun can play many...
June 7th, 2022 21:01 - It’s All in The Seeing (Neville)
\"looking at\" something is just that, looking. Seeing is having a sense...
June 7th, 2022 08:02 - Lasting (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s like a Gothic novel with a happy ending, well at least a hopeful...
June 5th, 2022 19:10 - Petite Mort #2 (Neville)
Somehow, I sense a passage of time and \" those exquisite little deaths of...
June 5th, 2022 18:53 - Grief for a probable future (Morwenna)
\"An undertow of future grief flows on,\" and does it ever. There is an...
June 5th, 2022 10:14 - Grief for a probable future (Morwenna)
June 5th, 2022 10:01 - Music of the Shore, St Andrews, Scotland (Morwenna)
This is terrific. Your phrases are creative and fresh. You have described...
June 4th, 2022 16:38 - Weatherscape (Morwenna)
Wow. Love this poem. It captures the scene with originality and...
June 4th, 2022 16:34 - Reed Song (Neville)
Well, that\'s a unique comparison. I guess the \"wind\" can do a lot of...
June 4th, 2022 16:20 - Where Recollections Reside (Neville)
Memories, both fond and fondled, where do they reside? People will say in...
June 2nd, 2022 12:24 - Snow globe of me. (Kitty the naughty poet)
Sometimes people feel the loneliness of acceptability. Constantly trying...
May 31st, 2022 16:16 - Out of Nowhere. (Fay Slimm.)
Later in life it\'s more difficult to climb those \"mountains\" and find...
May 31st, 2022 16:06 - Do You Ever Look Back on Those Days (Neville)
\"Do you ever look back,\" is somewhat rhetorical. We all look back and...
May 31st, 2022 15:53 - part of all this (Dusk arising)
\"as if the land talked,\" \"I am proud to be among them.\" human...
May 31st, 2022 15:34
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