Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Camber Powered (Fay Slimm.)
What a hopeful and joyous poem. It will brighten my day and other\'s as...
May 10th, 2023 21:34 - Still Some Way to Go (Neville)
Yes, that someone long ago that maybe could have been a muse, and never...
May 10th, 2023 07:55 - Personification of my eyes (Jjulia)
A beautiful poem. I may not have gotten its full impact due to my singular...
May 10th, 2023 07:44 - beauty of a storm (Phoebe)
Brilliant Haiku. The bright side of a rainy day. Loved it. - Phil A
May 9th, 2023 12:29 - Duplicity (Neville)
And he replied, \"We were just having coffee.\" And she replied, \" Yes,...
May 9th, 2023 12:09 - Themes of the mind no. 2 (Jjulia)
A beautiful poem, JJ. You raise a great point, \" What is the magic behind...
May 8th, 2023 21:46 - Did You Ever Dare to Ask (Neville)
Some might wonder, \" Why question a good thing?\" But without complete...
May 8th, 2023 21:32 - Echoes Seldom Lie These Days (Neville)
Besides the physical ties that bind there are the emotional and...
May 8th, 2023 15:32 - Upon Recalling Youth and Poetry (Neville)
Youth is the sweetest time of life, often filled with romance, friends,...
May 8th, 2023 15:14 - CONNECTION (Bobby O)
Connecting despite the distractions and the noise, seeing another in a...
May 7th, 2023 11:28 - The Small Space (Jarcher54)
\"to die,\" \"finish me, \"petty art,\" \"shame,\" these final stanza...
May 7th, 2023 11:19 - Mark Well the Purpose of Night (Neville)
Dreams of love as \"the purpose of the night.\" Could anything be more...
May 2nd, 2023 21:30 - Girl With a Blue Vase (Neville)
Seems more like a memory of the girl and not the vase, but that may be...
April 26th, 2023 18:32 - Happiness (Lonelydove)
There are many forms of happiness. Some are small slice of the larger pie....
April 24th, 2023 17:31 - Only Seventeen (Emily Bradshaw)
A brave and forceful poem about the current situation facing America. It...
April 24th, 2023 17:20 - miscarried (Msa)
It may be fiction, but it\'s great writing. Hope you\'ve managed to get...
April 24th, 2023 17:10 - My System (Doggerel Dave)
Well, at last the truth is known. I have to filter through the garbage to...
April 24th, 2023 16:55 - The Heartbeat Of The Universe. (Goldfinch60)
Great words Andy. Love the comparison to the \"heartbeat of the...
April 24th, 2023 16:33 - I Have A Dream. (Goldfinch60)
Love your \"dream.\" Wish it could be true, but still hopeful. \"Where...
April 22nd, 2023 12:07 - WHAT IS (Fay Slimm.)
Probably the deepest and most meaningful to-do list I have ever...
April 22nd, 2023 08:40 - Into A Darkened Room. (Goldfinch60)
With a bit of music no doubt. I used to hate mowing. Mine was a lot of...
April 19th, 2023 14:03 - WORDS (Bobby O)
Words are the poets tool to deal with this world. Choosing the right ones...
April 19th, 2023 13:58 - CORRECTION (Bobby O)
If you lie with dogs you get fleas. Sometimes , letting them go is the...
April 19th, 2023 13:53 - As Free As a Proverbial Bird (Neville)
Someone once said, when asked about his commitments, \"I\'m retired, I...
April 18th, 2023 10:27 - Sculpture Of Happiness. (Goldfinch60)
Remove all the badness and leave only the good. I have often marveled at...
April 17th, 2023 16:03 - In So Few Words Gone (Neville)
Sounds like a bitter end to a relationship, by text no less. Your poem...
April 17th, 2023 15:55 - Call it How You Like….. (Doggerel Dave)
Corrupt or \"do-nothing\" leaders keep getting elected by the people. It...
April 17th, 2023 15:43 - Bucket List (Neville)
Live life to the fullest!! Retirement is meant to be happy times. So go...
April 16th, 2023 12:07 - WHERE THE BALLS OF HELL HANG LOW (Michael Edwards)
Graphic title. Wonderful words expressing the darkness before the light,...
April 16th, 2023 11:59 - Knowledge And Wisdom. (Goldfinch60)
\"Wisdom\" is \"knowledge\" under control. Sometimes the smartest thing...
April 16th, 2023 11:43 - The Uniqueness In Us (Oluwasolape Akode)
No two people alike, not even twins, and no one is ever perfect. So...
April 16th, 2023 11:37 - What We Had. (Fay Slimm.)
Such a great poem about a love lost, and cherished. A sad lament indeed....
April 14th, 2023 21:03 - Still Calm, Safe and Free (Neville)
Well, I\'m digging deep here when I say that from mainly one word \"own,\"...
April 14th, 2023 20:54 - Kinship (Fay Slimm.)
A touching poem about the bond between sisters. Written such that it...
April 6th, 2023 14:09 - When a Fine Line Might Just Make it Okay (Neville)
There is not a line long enough. You have exposed a great human trait. We...
April 6th, 2023 13:24 - The Day Is Here. (Goldfinch60)
Every day matters. Grab as much enjoyment as you can from each.
April 6th, 2023 13:15 - Slàinte Mhath. (Goldfinch60)
A fine birthday tribute.
April 6th, 2023 13:11 - Libra Distressed (Lorna)
Such a loss can be devastating, like the world will never be the same...
April 5th, 2023 19:21 - Dance of The Wind Children (Neville)
\"Dandelion children,\" or our own they must all go... their separate...
April 5th, 2023 19:10 - A Poem About Spring (MysteryGhost)
Outside it is a sunny springtime day with children playing. Inside the...
April 5th, 2023 15:20 - Telling. (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m a believer that it is not self-love that propels these kinds of...
March 29th, 2023 09:49 - Upon Learning to Fly (Neville)
Here\'s an opposite type of risk: I was part of the crew of a submarine...
March 29th, 2023 09:41 - Becoming Other (Fay Slimm.)
\"Transmutation\" by \"losing the I,\" to empathize with \"Other\" of...
March 27th, 2023 19:43 - In a Moment of Poetry (Neville)
At first, I thought this would turn out to be an Enlightenment era...
March 27th, 2023 19:30 - No Reason Required (Neville)
Sometimes we remember things we wish we could forget and other times we...
March 25th, 2023 15:14 - One Size (Kayla.terry)
\"One size,\" is a fallacy. No two people are alike, even twins have...
March 24th, 2023 21:08 - Hanging by a Halo (HangingbyaHalo)
Keep hanging on. The dystopian images you have displayed seem to spreading...
March 24th, 2023 20:55 - Storked (Neville)
Rooftop chimneys and stork nests against a mountain backdrop is quite the...
March 24th, 2023 20:43 - Well, at least I\'m not late (Hzugman)
This resonated with me. I guess it\'s part of the retired life. Try some...
March 24th, 2023 13:10 - Autumn Renewal (Shaakir)
Interesting Haiku. Nature and life intertwined. To rise against all...
March 24th, 2023 13:05 - The poet in me (-The poet in me)
Good stuff. I like rhyming. Your poem delivers a point cleverly....
March 24th, 2023 12:59 - Music In Time. (Goldfinch60)
Well spoken. Music is surely one of life\'s greatest pleasures. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 12:48 - Invention (Fay Slimm.)
Sounds like the birth of an idea. Enjoyed your second line of stanza 3,...
March 24th, 2023 12:45 - Flows. (Doggerel Dave)
Venting on the state of affairs, I see. The sharing of wealth is an...
March 24th, 2023 09:08 - Problems (2781)
Amen! They say a gift from caring comes back two-fold, and you seem to...
March 23rd, 2023 10:44 - Almost Without Purpose (Neville)
Everything in life has a reason and a purpose, everything else are the...
March 3rd, 2023 22:46 - Let’s Not Forget Syria #2 (Neville)
It is being reported here that the death toll had climbed to over 50,000...
March 1st, 2023 20:03 - Leftovers (Neville)
To me, a list filled with sadness, as though inheriting these leftovers...
February 28th, 2023 21:46 - More Than Nearly Dearly Departed (Neville)
This leaves so much to the readers imagination. All of the \"Who, What,...
January 15th, 2023 13:06 - After Today (Fay Slimm.)
A worthy outlook on life\'s many tribulations. Affairs of the heart weigh...
January 15th, 2023 12:44 - Philosophy And Reason. (Goldfinch60)
Charlatans! They only play the odds and blame God or chance when it...
January 13th, 2023 14:35 - Seen (Fay Slimm.)
I like the visual structure of this poem,
how it relates to the words,...
January 13th, 2023 14:22 - An Uncertain Certainty (Neville)
\"contagious self-doubt,\" caught from getting too close? Would loving her...
January 13th, 2023 14:10 - No Limits (Fay Slimm.)
\"Women write from and about the inside of a person, men write about only...
January 12th, 2023 23:34 - Rape of the Sabine Women (Neville)
Mythologically, this could be a scene between Jupiter and Terra Mater with...
January 12th, 2023 22:53 - Stirrings (Fay Slimm.)
Sometimes we come out on the other side a lot stronger and less...
January 11th, 2023 16:06 - A Sure Sign of His Passing (Neville)
A \"cold,\" \"empty and bare,\" home \"a sure sign of his passing\" -...
January 11th, 2023 16:00 - Heed (Neville)
Amen. We learn through our mistakes. The harder the lesson. the more we...
January 11th, 2023 15:42 - Glory Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Live your life as you choose. Your river will return to you one day, but...
January 11th, 2023 15:37 - Peace And Harmony. (Goldfinch60)
The power of music to transcend, to take you where you want to be, to lift...
December 1st, 2022 14:25 - Just Another Shot in The Dark (Neville)
\'When there\'s no one else and nowhere to go,\" only then do you wish to...
December 1st, 2022 13:33 - Emerging December. (Fay Slimm.)
December - We have 5 grandkids and 1 daughter-in-law with December...
December 1st, 2022 13:13 - Just Another Zen Thing (Neville)
\"Disjointed fragments\" and \"mistaken\" identity, a split personality...
November 29th, 2022 18:57 - That Last Time Look (Neville)
I\'ve been told that, to a sailor\'s wife, every encounter is a last...
November 29th, 2022 10:20 - Death By a Thousand…… (Doggerel Dave)
DD, I get my double dose at the Dunkin\' Donuts which does not have a...
November 29th, 2022 10:04 - Forget Four Letter Words. (Doggerel Dave)
\"We\" and \"Us\" become divisive when used to separate people. \"We\" are...
November 21st, 2022 10:19 - So Very Strange. (Goldfinch60)
Enjoy the good life while it lasts. Live, love, and work together. Four...
October 15th, 2022 14:45 - The Science of Passing the Buck (Neville)
All it takes is one citizen to pass the buck to another, and then, because...
October 15th, 2022 14:33 - Upon Testing Positive (Neville)
Whoa. bad news that. Hope all goes well and you bounce back quick. - Phil...
October 14th, 2022 16:53 - Commissioned (Fay Slimm.)
This was the truth of those times, no doubt. Artists weren\'t free to...
October 5th, 2022 16:33 - Excuse Me I Love You She Said (Neville)
Look out mate, if provocation puts you in \"dangerous\" territory. Could...
October 5th, 2022 16:26 - With Nothing More to Lose (Neville)
To begin it reads like a love poem with all the trappings: \"rainbows,\"...
October 4th, 2022 19:01 - A moment of grace (Morwenna)
The English countryside can be a very pastoral setting, but a \"winding...
October 4th, 2022 18:47 - I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere.. (Doggerel Dave)
OK Dave. Loved this smell job. Never had a dead whatever in the wall but...
October 1st, 2022 20:58 - That Special Time. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds just fine Andy. I must admit that I too, listen to music as I...
September 30th, 2022 12:12 - Looking Back Long, Hard and Slow (Neville)
A fine recollection, full of color and heat, from the \"desert\" to the...
September 30th, 2022 11:57 - Duet (Fay Slimm.)
\"Bird song and ripples\" appearing tonight \"in concord\" at your local...
September 3rd, 2022 17:52 - On Being Too Gentle (Neville)
Sounds like this Dom is about to have a field day.
Well written, it...
September 3rd, 2022 17:22 - Roll Up (Doggerel Dave)
I remember Iron Lungs (used to scare me half to hell) and Polio Camps...
September 2nd, 2022 19:46 - Abandon (Fay Slimm.)
My stimulation for the day, Thank You.
Seriously, this is a lovely poem,...
September 2nd, 2022 19:13 - Dancing with a stranger (Shaa)
Oh Oh, sounds like primal attraction. You\'ve expressed this attraction in...
September 2nd, 2022 19:01 - Words of Heart (Dr. Soma)
Well, I have to agree about the beauty within this poem. Although, it...
September 2nd, 2022 18:47 - The most planless day of my life (Lincoln)
\"Carrying around my home,\" really? Or is it imagination? I can see to...
September 2nd, 2022 18:37 - Somewhere Between Lovers (Neville)
Her paper-thin veneer was finally shattered, and he voracious interior...
September 1st, 2022 18:17 - This Should be Obvious… (Doggerel Dave)
With every new invention there is a learning curve. The more complicated...
September 1st, 2022 13:39 - Fiery Fred. (Goldfinch60)
What does a cricket have to do with \"Cricket?\" Why isn\'t it called...
September 1st, 2022 13:09 - Girls (Fay Slimm.)
This is like the story of my life. Needless to say, we raised a few girls....
September 1st, 2022 12:22 - Frenzy (Fay Slimm.)
We currently have a nest of doves, living on the underside carrier beam...
August 31st, 2022 20:34 - A Few Moments After (Neville)
Is this the birthplace of erotic Emojis?
A lot is said here with but a...
August 30th, 2022 10:44 - Her (Fay Slimm.)
Women are half of the world but possess about one percent of the power in...
August 30th, 2022 10:05
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