Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• Rainbow Rooms Incorporated (Neville) A fantasy of the highest order. An amazing tale of sexual fulfillment with...
  October 4th, 2023 20:48
• Reflection (Teddy.15) Saying the most with the fewest words. True poetry at its best. A...
  October 4th, 2023 20:26
• Life Is Like A Song (Teddy.15) If there is an afterlife, I perceive it to be a state of ecstasy, totally...
  September 21st, 2023 11:54
• Let\'s Eat! (Goldfinch60) I\'m in. Nothing beats a rare steak and some red wine. Why is everyone...
  September 21st, 2023 11:43
• Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind (Neville) Sounds like the final conquest of them all, \"While quaffing each last...
  September 21st, 2023 11:24
• Mamma\'s Winter Coat (Bella Shepard) Such a loving memory. It always seems to be the very small things in life...
  September 18th, 2023 21:53
• Only One Thing Can Silence Me (Teddy.15) Sounds like a plan. If I start with the $72. 48 I\'ve made so far it...
  September 18th, 2023 21:40
• SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE (Bobby O) Wow! !\'m impressed with your rapping skill. You have my sympathy, and I...
  September 18th, 2023 21:30
• THE VOICE WITHIN (LIZ) Love depends on total honesty. It is the foundation of trust. If we cannot...
  September 18th, 2023 11:40
• Mary (Neville) Mede me think of a recovering war-torn village or city church. Some can...
  September 18th, 2023 11:34
• When All Said and Done it’s All Over (Neville) It can end as starkly as you have described it. I recall two acquaintances...
  September 16th, 2023 19:28
• visionary (Teddy.15) A wonderful take on the reading experience. I understood fully what you...
  September 16th, 2023 19:17
• The Sound of Darkness (Neville) \"Darkness\" has a \"sound\" when that sound is of a pending storm. Your...
  September 14th, 2023 12:03
• The Death of Love (Teddy.15) If you could replace your violin-heart with any other instrument, what...
  September 14th, 2023 11:52
• A Dance with Myself: Growing Older, Remaining Unique (GeekSusie) I can comment on only your English poems. I chose this one because it...
  September 13th, 2023 17:59
• Violin Strings (Teddy.15) The violin is the only instrument that can cry. As a soul mate you have to...
  September 13th, 2023 16:26
• Shadow Dance (Neville) So, laughing tatoos is a creative image, as is this entire poem. Just...
  September 13th, 2023 16:17
• Hannah the Hellion (MendedFences27)
  September 9th, 2023 22:45
• In Her Eyes: A Legacy Unfolded (GeekSusie) Very nice, The love of a mother for her child, and the seeing of herself...
  September 9th, 2023 21:57
• When We Are One (Bella Shepard) There\'s an icy chill in the air, even as the planet heats up. When we all...
  September 9th, 2023 21:42
• When You Know You Are Blessed (Neville) Nothing can steal your heart away like the eyes of your granddaughter. She...
  September 9th, 2023 21:30
• That Certain Something (Neville) Don\'t know who, but was a great man from your description, and these are...
  September 8th, 2023 11:20
• Find Myself (Bella Shepard) Rainy day or not, your short but lovely, poem takes us to the place we all...
  September 8th, 2023 11:12
• Autumn\'s Painting (Teddy.15) \"Glorious,\" may also describe your artwork and your poem. It was a most...
  September 8th, 2023 11:06
• Ode to the Poet (Pop64) To any and all poets here on MPS this is a great inspiration. It expresses...
  September 8th, 2023 10:59
• Peace At The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60) Avoid meetings at all costs!! Sounded as though you and her managed to...
  August 25th, 2023 14:02
• Norms (Gbrlle_evrgrn) A wonderful poem of Love\'s strength and diversity. Your struggle for...
  August 25th, 2023 13:52
• The Nature (Essence of moon) The planet we live on is truly a gift from God, so why are we destroying...
  August 22nd, 2023 09:28
• Once Upon Her Night Scented Garden  (Neville) If you wander into the orchard, don\'t go picking any apples. Try to...
  August 22nd, 2023 09:10
• A Superb Day. (Goldfinch60) I didn\'t know Croquet could be so stressful. Sounded like a lot of fun. I...
  August 20th, 2023 19:33
• Where was I? (MendedFences27)
  August 20th, 2023 11:20
• Dust Jackets (Kinsey Peterson) Recover your books with a paper that is amenable to you. Your books will...
  August 19th, 2023 15:59
• Penicillium Notatum (Bella Shepard) I suffered with allergies for a long time. Not much anymore. Hope it all...
  August 19th, 2023 15:54
• Memory1 (Longingforheart) Sweet memories, a great subject for poetic expression. You achieved it in...
  August 19th, 2023 15:46
• Cloud Gazing (The Great Kateri) Very colorful image. If only we could paint life the way we want it to...
  August 19th, 2023 15:36
• The Witnessing (FallingAwake2) There\'s nothing like a shoreline respite to awaken a sense of \"reality\"...
  August 19th, 2023 15:20
• Don\'t Feel Bad. (Goldfinch60) Lots of wisdom in this one. A well written poem. Loved it. - Phil A.
  August 19th, 2023 12:17
• Would You Kindly Pass the Entonox Babe (Neville) There was one hospital whose maternity room had 30 times the limit allowed...
  August 19th, 2023 11:53
• The Dahlias. (Goldfinch60) Very sentimental. A fond memory brought to life from your pen. We could...
  August 18th, 2023 15:10
• All Bases Covered (Neville) I believe he wrote for a lover and she became well known, while he...
  August 18th, 2023 15:05
• A Myth Untrue (MendedFences27)
  August 17th, 2023 21:31
• While Out Busy Partying (Neville) A scathing report of someone not worthy of a person like her. So...
  August 16th, 2023 10:44
• Sailing (Bellapastro777) This sounds scary, frightening, suicidal., or I completely missed the...
  August 16th, 2023 10:14
• Recollecting Unusual Positions (Neville) Perhaps he died happy with his memories of her? Not to say that it appears...
  August 14th, 2023 11:34
• Binding Pages (Teddy.15) Ever so true. Without one we would soon be bored of the other. A lot of...
  August 12th, 2023 18:59
• Mused (Neville) Sometimes finding an ending can be more difficult than finding a...
  August 12th, 2023 18:49
• The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair (Neville) You shouldn\'t fool around while baking, that\'s how you get Munchkins. ...
  August 8th, 2023 09:15
• When Absolutely Gone (Neville) I\'m feeling philosophical this morning and can\'t help but say (there...
  August 5th, 2023 11:04
• JAZZ IS LIFE (Bobby O) I read this as a piece of Jazz, itself. Sometimes it (Jazz) can seem...
  August 5th, 2023 10:41
• Observing a Miracle (Teddy.15) An absolutely wonder poem of observation and imagination. \"As every...
  August 5th, 2023 10:31
• How to Eat a Can of Worms (Pop64) An aftertaste of humble pie? This is humorous and entertaining. I liked,...
  August 5th, 2023 10:16
• A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat (Neville) The girl may have forgotten you but the elephant sure as hell hasn\'t. A...
  August 3rd, 2023 15:20
• Just a Dream I Had (Teddy.15) This is what Elvis is doing these days, traveling around filling women\'s...
  August 3rd, 2023 14:01
• The Perfect Painting (Teddy.15) If pictures could talk, this one would have uttered your words. Made me...
  August 2nd, 2023 10:53
• These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather (Neville) Some folks change with the weather, some are sunny all the time, others...
  August 2nd, 2023 10:08
• “Sommelier Full-Time Wanted” (Teddy.15) Well, OK, first, congrats on getting the job. Second, I loved your little...
  August 1st, 2023 14:41
• Tongue Spillage (Neville) Liking this one, especially \"dandelion clocks.\" In and out of love...
  August 1st, 2023 14:10
• Requiem For a Lost Cause (Neville) I think this is a desire to focus on the important things in life,...
  July 22nd, 2023 18:36
• In the Wake of New Gods (Neville) Is worshipping the cell phone the latest cult.? Will they all walk into...
  July 20th, 2023 15:07
• Two Ants One Question (Neville) The fewer \'ants dancing in\" sugar pots the \'sweeter\" it will be. A...
  July 19th, 2023 22:26
• The Mess They Leave Behind (Neville) Here, attempting suicide is a crime. She would have been prosecuted....
  July 18th, 2023 11:05
• The Last Goodbye (Teddy.15) Funny how the historical \"Last Goodbye,\" has changed with the...
  July 17th, 2023 21:29
• Clearly Departed (Neville) A gruesome thing to witness. By penning this poem maybe some will take...
  July 17th, 2023 12:39
• Destination (Teddy.15) Beautifully spoken. A host of truth in so few words. One must have hope to...
  July 17th, 2023 12:28
• So Very Roughly Taken (Neville) Those last four lines paint the picture. We live in a troubled time, but...
  July 16th, 2023 09:47
• Sunlight To Rain. (Goldfinch60) Such is life. Risky, but fun. - Phil A.
  July 16th, 2023 09:39
• A Very Temporary Arrangement (Neville) Yes, when you finally realize that she\'s not the one for you. That...
  July 15th, 2023 19:06
• Marmalade Fingers (Neville) Make sure it\'s made with Seville oranges, much more tangy. More of a hot...
  July 8th, 2023 22:08
• My Angel (Teddy.15) An Angel and a muse. A wonderful poem inspired your Angel. May she always...
  July 6th, 2023 17:39
• Strategic Untruths (Neville) Media report what people say. Where do the liars originate? Falsehoods...
  July 6th, 2023 17:07
• Call it How You Like….. (Doggerel Dave) Another opinion deftly expressed. It seems those who are chosen to lead,...
  July 6th, 2023 16:51
• No Rules for All (Neville) Love and time, the two things that can\'t be bought, but only spent, One...
  July 5th, 2023 22:14
• A Wedding. (Doggerel Dave) Symptomatic of the state of politics worldwide. Leaders who grift money...
  July 5th, 2023 21:51
• My Lover Senryu. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful. Bless you both. - Phil A.
  July 4th, 2023 15:44
• Defeat (Wackyheartache4) Scary words. I hope you\'re not sincere. As a poem some clever images...
  July 4th, 2023 15:41
• Portrait of Truth (Teddy.15) A unique image of the breadth of love. Well-spoken and as honest as it is...
  July 4th, 2023 15:33
• Along The Seashore. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful outlook on life. A poem that many will enjoy, understand, and...
  May 30th, 2023 14:21
• Memories (Bella Shepard) Wow! This is so bittersweet that it is beautiful. I\'ve never seen the...
  May 30th, 2023 14:10
• Problems To Opportunities. (Goldfinch60) Words full of wisdom. Igreat way to live. Phil A.
  May 26th, 2023 14:46
• The Simple Art of Wondering (Neville) Sometimes, science, medicine, psychology, philosophy, etc. take away from...
  May 22nd, 2023 10:06
• Undeniably Piqued (Neville) Oh, to climb to the mountaintop and find there is no way down. Stuck there...
  May 20th, 2023 16:20
• Dancing On The Water. (Goldfinch60) Such an easy read. It was smooth sailing for me. It\'s an amazing sight to...
  May 20th, 2023 11:32
• Woke (Neville) I found words in this that have a political connotation, here in the U.S....
  May 20th, 2023 11:22
• Into the arms of another (Y-not) A bit of sadness in this one. Loved the opening line. Sometimes when love...
  May 18th, 2023 09:02
• Musing (Fay Slimm.) Trying to write and your mind is occupied with thoughts of someone close ,...
  May 18th, 2023 08:38
• Sans Echo’s (Neville) One time, I dropped some \"acid\".... and it burnt a hole in my...
  May 18th, 2023 08:29
• Routine (Natalya) Sounds like a rut. A repeating schedule. One way to add diversity is to...
  May 17th, 2023 12:03
• A Handful of Monsters (Neville) True!! One solution to the problem is a world government, but I don\'t...
  May 17th, 2023 11:51
• the collapsed city (Skpearl) Your very personal poem rang true to me. Several times I was in a place...
  May 16th, 2023 21:39
• Poesia no. 27 (Jjulia) Seems like a personal poem. Yet, so well written. \"The spare remains in...
  May 16th, 2023 21:17
• Celsius Rising (Neville) Somehow, I felt sorry for the yellow man of her artwork, short-lived from...
  May 16th, 2023 11:03
• Lost Among the Crowd (Mara \"Marzipan\") This is beautiful as it is. I saw these flowers floating away. But it is...
  May 16th, 2023 10:44
• Seen (Fay Slimm.) The rising Sun in all of its glory. A wonderful poem to start my day....
  May 16th, 2023 10:34
• Not The Place To Travel. (Goldfinch60) So true! Our journeys through life are altered not by what we see but by...
  May 16th, 2023 10:08
• I Do Now. (Goldfinch60) A sweet remembrance, Andy. What kind of coffee was that? Do they sell it...
  May 15th, 2023 15:23
• Redefining (Fay Slimm.) There is something about a tranquil body of water that can change one\'s...
  May 13th, 2023 14:04
• The Tears of a Crowd Forming (Neville) I share your anxiety about where the future will go. Once again, the...
  May 13th, 2023 13:48
• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Wow! Great write. Love by \"potion\" or otherwise, leads to sacrifice and...
  May 12th, 2023 13:48
• Just a Series of What ifs And a Maybe (Neville) Amen!! I\'ll add this though, \"in a world where no two things are ever...
  May 12th, 2023 12:56
• take me back to the hiraeth (Jjulia) Be sure to dress for the gala after your first book signing. You write...
  May 10th, 2023 21:57