Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- The Day Is Here. (Goldfinch60)
Every day matters. Grab as much enjoyment as you can from each.
April 6th, 2023 13:15 - Slàinte Mhath. (Goldfinch60)
A fine birthday tribute.
April 6th, 2023 13:11 - Libra Distressed (Lorna)
Such a loss can be devastating, like the world will never be the same...
April 5th, 2023 19:21 - Dance of The Wind Children (Neville)
\"Dandelion children,\" or our own they must all go... their separate...
April 5th, 2023 19:10 - A Poem About Spring (MysteryGhost)
Outside it is a sunny springtime day with children playing. Inside the...
April 5th, 2023 15:20 - Telling. (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m a believer that it is not self-love that propels these kinds of...
March 29th, 2023 09:49 - Upon Learning to Fly (Neville)
Here\'s an opposite type of risk: I was part of the crew of a submarine...
March 29th, 2023 09:41 - Becoming Other (Fay Slimm.)
\"Transmutation\" by \"losing the I,\" to empathize with \"Other\" of...
March 27th, 2023 19:43 - In a Moment of Poetry (Neville)
At first, I thought this would turn out to be an Enlightenment era...
March 27th, 2023 19:30 - No Reason Required (Neville)
Sometimes we remember things we wish we could forget and other times we...
March 25th, 2023 15:14 - One Size (Kayla.terry)
\"One size,\" is a fallacy. No two people are alike, even twins have...
March 24th, 2023 21:08 - Hanging by a Halo (HangingbyaHalo)
Keep hanging on. The dystopian images you have displayed seem to spreading...
March 24th, 2023 20:55 - Storked (Neville)
Rooftop chimneys and stork nests against a mountain backdrop is quite the...
March 24th, 2023 20:43 - Well, at least I\'m not late (Hzugman)
This resonated with me. I guess it\'s part of the retired life. Try some...
March 24th, 2023 13:10 - Autumn Renewal (Shaakir)
Interesting Haiku. Nature and life intertwined. To rise against all...
March 24th, 2023 13:05 - The poet in me (-The poet in me)
Good stuff. I like rhyming. Your poem delivers a point cleverly....
March 24th, 2023 12:59 - Music In Time. (Goldfinch60)
Well spoken. Music is surely one of life\'s greatest pleasures. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 12:48 - Invention (Fay Slimm.)
Sounds like the birth of an idea. Enjoyed your second line of stanza 3,...
March 24th, 2023 12:45 - Flows. (Doggerel Dave)
Venting on the state of affairs, I see. The sharing of wealth is an...
March 24th, 2023 09:08 - Problems (2781)
Amen! They say a gift from caring comes back two-fold, and you seem to...
March 23rd, 2023 10:44 - Almost Without Purpose (Neville)
Everything in life has a reason and a purpose, everything else are the...
March 3rd, 2023 22:46 - Let’s Not Forget Syria #2 (Neville)
It is being reported here that the death toll had climbed to over 50,000...
March 1st, 2023 20:03 - Leftovers (Neville)
To me, a list filled with sadness, as though inheriting these leftovers...
February 28th, 2023 21:46 - More Than Nearly Dearly Departed (Neville)
This leaves so much to the readers imagination. All of the \"Who, What,...
January 15th, 2023 13:06 - After Today (Fay Slimm.)
A worthy outlook on life\'s many tribulations. Affairs of the heart weigh...
January 15th, 2023 12:44 - Philosophy And Reason. (Goldfinch60)
Charlatans! They only play the odds and blame God or chance when it...
January 13th, 2023 14:35 - Seen (Fay Slimm.)
I like the visual structure of this poem,
how it relates to the words,...
January 13th, 2023 14:22 - An Uncertain Certainty (Neville)
\"contagious self-doubt,\" caught from getting too close? Would loving her...
January 13th, 2023 14:10 - No Limits (Fay Slimm.)
\"Women write from and about the inside of a person, men write about only...
January 12th, 2023 23:34 - Rape of the Sabine Women (Neville)
Mythologically, this could be a scene between Jupiter and Terra Mater with...
January 12th, 2023 22:53 - Stirrings (Fay Slimm.)
Sometimes we come out on the other side a lot stronger and less...
January 11th, 2023 16:06 - A Sure Sign of His Passing (Neville)
A \"cold,\" \"empty and bare,\" home \"a sure sign of his passing\" -...
January 11th, 2023 16:00 - Heed (Neville)
Amen. We learn through our mistakes. The harder the lesson. the more we...
January 11th, 2023 15:42 - Glory Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Live your life as you choose. Your river will return to you one day, but...
January 11th, 2023 15:37 - Peace And Harmony. (Goldfinch60)
The power of music to transcend, to take you where you want to be, to lift...
December 1st, 2022 14:25 - Just Another Shot in The Dark (Neville)
\'When there\'s no one else and nowhere to go,\" only then do you wish to...
December 1st, 2022 13:33 - Emerging December. (Fay Slimm.)
December - We have 5 grandkids and 1 daughter-in-law with December...
December 1st, 2022 13:13 - Just Another Zen Thing (Neville)
\"Disjointed fragments\" and \"mistaken\" identity, a split personality...
November 29th, 2022 18:57 - That Last Time Look (Neville)
I\'ve been told that, to a sailor\'s wife, every encounter is a last...
November 29th, 2022 10:20 - Death By a Thousand…… (Doggerel Dave)
DD, I get my double dose at the Dunkin\' Donuts which does not have a...
November 29th, 2022 10:04 - Forget Four Letter Words. (Doggerel Dave)
\"We\" and \"Us\" become divisive when used to separate people. \"We\" are...
November 21st, 2022 10:19 - So Very Strange. (Goldfinch60)
Enjoy the good life while it lasts. Live, love, and work together. Four...
October 15th, 2022 14:45 - The Science of Passing the Buck (Neville)
All it takes is one citizen to pass the buck to another, and then, because...
October 15th, 2022 14:33 - Upon Testing Positive (Neville)
Whoa. bad news that. Hope all goes well and you bounce back quick. - Phil...
October 14th, 2022 16:53 - Commissioned (Fay Slimm.)
This was the truth of those times, no doubt. Artists weren\'t free to...
October 5th, 2022 16:33 - Excuse Me I Love You She Said (Neville)
Look out mate, if provocation puts you in \"dangerous\" territory. Could...
October 5th, 2022 16:26 - With Nothing More to Lose (Neville)
To begin it reads like a love poem with all the trappings: \"rainbows,\"...
October 4th, 2022 19:01 - A moment of grace (Morwenna)
The English countryside can be a very pastoral setting, but a \"winding...
October 4th, 2022 18:47 - I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere.. (Doggerel Dave)
OK Dave. Loved this smell job. Never had a dead whatever in the wall but...
October 1st, 2022 20:58 - That Special Time. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds just fine Andy. I must admit that I too, listen to music as I...
September 30th, 2022 12:12 - Looking Back Long, Hard and Slow (Neville)
A fine recollection, full of color and heat, from the \"desert\" to the...
September 30th, 2022 11:57 - Duet (Fay Slimm.)
\"Bird song and ripples\" appearing tonight \"in concord\" at your local...
September 3rd, 2022 17:52 - On Being Too Gentle (Neville)
Sounds like this Dom is about to have a field day.
Well written, it...
September 3rd, 2022 17:22 - Roll Up (Doggerel Dave)
I remember Iron Lungs (used to scare me half to hell) and Polio Camps...
September 2nd, 2022 19:46 - Abandon (Fay Slimm.)
My stimulation for the day, Thank You.
Seriously, this is a lovely poem,...
September 2nd, 2022 19:13 - Dancing with a stranger (Shaa)
Oh Oh, sounds like primal attraction. You\'ve expressed this attraction in...
September 2nd, 2022 19:01 - Words of Heart (Dr. Soma)
Well, I have to agree about the beauty within this poem. Although, it...
September 2nd, 2022 18:47 - The most planless day of my life (Lincoln)
\"Carrying around my home,\" really? Or is it imagination? I can see to...
September 2nd, 2022 18:37 - Somewhere Between Lovers (Neville)
Her paper-thin veneer was finally shattered, and he voracious interior...
September 1st, 2022 18:17 - This Should be Obvious… (Doggerel Dave)
With every new invention there is a learning curve. The more complicated...
September 1st, 2022 13:39 - Fiery Fred. (Goldfinch60)
What does a cricket have to do with \"Cricket?\" Why isn\'t it called...
September 1st, 2022 13:09 - Girls (Fay Slimm.)
This is like the story of my life. Needless to say, we raised a few girls....
September 1st, 2022 12:22 - Frenzy (Fay Slimm.)
We currently have a nest of doves, living on the underside carrier beam...
August 31st, 2022 20:34 - A Few Moments After (Neville)
Is this the birthplace of erotic Emojis?
A lot is said here with but a...
August 30th, 2022 10:44 - Her (Fay Slimm.)
Women are half of the world but possess about one percent of the power in...
August 30th, 2022 10:05 - Responsibility Reminder (Orchidee)
A jog of the mind to remember whence we came.
A good poem-hymn. Phil A.
August 29th, 2022 13:05 - Resignation To Life. (Goldfinch60)
Sometimes, the bravest of us all are secretive. She felt no need to share...
August 29th, 2022 12:56 - Peace In Music. (Goldfinch60)
If only the world could make music and not war. I\'ve often considered...
August 28th, 2022 20:10 - Renewal (Fay Slimm.)
People change with time and can find that they hardly recognize...
August 28th, 2022 20:01 - Why Not Just Throw Away The Key (Neville)
There is no sensibility here, only burning desire. She was only pretty as...
August 24th, 2022 10:43 - Creating Memories. (Goldfinch60)
The by-gone days of youth memorialized. Yeah, those were some great...
August 24th, 2022 10:29 - Epitaph for a PC (Doggerel Dave)
Gosh, D.D. It\'s a known fact that a new computer is like a new girlfriend...
August 24th, 2022 10:24 - With Only Five Leaves Left (Neville)
Not got a clue, that\'s me. Nick Drake, sad story, sad life, sad way to...
August 23rd, 2022 22:02 - Anticipating Angels (Neville)
\"Here\" vs \"There.\" \"Anticipating\" vs. \"Entertaining.\" I thought...
August 21st, 2022 13:55 - Abundance (Fay Slimm.)
Loved your lush description of Autumn. A time of plenty, of brilliant...
August 20th, 2022 15:25 - Trapped In A Telephone. (Goldfinch60)
I think you might be onto something here Andy. Maybe they are prisoners,...
August 20th, 2022 15:14 - To the Memories... (Aradhya)
A reflection or a remembrance, I thought, of someone close to the poet....
August 20th, 2022 15:02 - We\'re Here..... (Doggerel Dave)
Let everybody be what they gotta be, believe what they gotta believe, and...
August 11th, 2022 11:42 - Solitude (MendedFences27)
August 11th, 2022 10:19 - Strange Sight. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s a wonder you lived through that experience. Shocking! A young one...
August 10th, 2022 13:37 - Naturally (Neville)
For sure, Nature is a product of \"oxygen and a splash of H2O,\" but then...
August 9th, 2022 08:30 - Well I Never… (Doggerel Dave)
I can\'t really comment on the political stuff. We are kind of isolated...
August 7th, 2022 20:09 - Toreador (Tallisman)
I like this. It tells of embedded dreams which I think we all have and...
August 7th, 2022 17:09 - A Poet (Fay Slimm.)
This is wonderful. Two things just changed for me,:
1) I have to look for...
August 7th, 2022 16:58 - Wordsworth Reversed. (Goldfinch60)
Wordsworth Reversed is Worth Words and this is certainly worth a few words...
August 6th, 2022 13:46 - talking Bukowski (Tj Struska)
And a fine tribute at that. I\'ve read some Bukowski and this seems true...
August 6th, 2022 13:25 - The Lost Idea. (Goldfinch60)
Very, very true. Happens all the time. I also have stacks of unfinished...
August 5th, 2022 13:40 - Worn Out (ElaineAnneWestheimer)
What a story the laundry can tell. The fabric of our lives exposed. What...
August 5th, 2022 13:20 - Those Days (Fay Slimm.)
Is this the \"Hard Rock Cafe?\" \"No welcome,\" there either.
You spoke...
August 2nd, 2022 15:13 - Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor (Neville)
Or as Mel Brooks (age 96) once said,
\"I get up in the morning. I read...
August 2nd, 2022 14:44 - Satisfaction (Fay Slimm.)
Two great questions, Fay.
The \"satisfaction\" of which you speak does...
August 1st, 2022 15:09 - Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please (Neville)
The sweet taste of love, when found, lingers. A great expression of...
August 1st, 2022 14:58 - 4/2/22 (Wren)
Some great images. Your phrasings are unique and colorful. I like how your...
July 31st, 2022 18:49 - That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings (Neville)
Memories woven into a quilt of poetic
recollections; of \"cotton...
July 31st, 2022 17:06 - The Shame of Yesterday’s News (Neville)
Shameful! The way children across the Globe get treated these days....
July 30th, 2022 21:52 - Lunacy (Fay Slimm.)
A very important issue that you have expressed brilliantly. Why can\'t we...
July 30th, 2022 21:41 - The Lovers of Modena Disturbed (Neville)
Two people in one grave is unusual, today, but I can\'t say about the...
July 29th, 2022 15:11 - Just a Few Significant Ponderings (Neville)
Well, if one thinks they are never wrong, and also fails to enjoy life,...
July 14th, 2022 22:05 - Andy’s New Car (Doggerel Dave)
Had to chuckle at this bit of humor. Yeah, 5 years on the car, but the...
July 14th, 2022 10:57 - Gaining Relief (Fay Slimm.)
A bit of rural living being lost to modern technology. One wonders if the...
July 14th, 2022 10:51
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