Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat (Neville) The girl may have forgotten you but the elephant sure as hell hasn\'t. A...
  August 3rd, 2023 15:20
• Just a Dream I Had (Teddy.15) This is what Elvis is doing these days, traveling around filling women\'s...
  August 3rd, 2023 14:01
• The Perfect Painting (Teddy.15) If pictures could talk, this one would have uttered your words. Made me...
  August 2nd, 2023 10:53
• These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather (Neville) Some folks change with the weather, some are sunny all the time, others...
  August 2nd, 2023 10:08
• “Sommelier Full-Time Wanted” (Teddy.15) Well, OK, first, congrats on getting the job. Second, I loved your little...
  August 1st, 2023 14:41
• Tongue Spillage (Neville) Liking this one, especially \"dandelion clocks.\" In and out of love...
  August 1st, 2023 14:10
• Requiem For a Lost Cause (Neville) I think this is a desire to focus on the important things in life,...
  July 22nd, 2023 18:36
• In the Wake of New Gods (Neville) Is worshipping the cell phone the latest cult.? Will they all walk into...
  July 20th, 2023 15:07
• Two Ants One Question (Neville) The fewer \'ants dancing in\" sugar pots the \'sweeter\" it will be. A...
  July 19th, 2023 22:26
• The Mess They Leave Behind (Neville) Here, attempting suicide is a crime. She would have been prosecuted....
  July 18th, 2023 11:05
• The Last Goodbye (Teddy.15) Funny how the historical \"Last Goodbye,\" has changed with the...
  July 17th, 2023 21:29
• Clearly Departed (Neville) A gruesome thing to witness. By penning this poem maybe some will take...
  July 17th, 2023 12:39
• Destination (Teddy.15) Beautifully spoken. A host of truth in so few words. One must have hope to...
  July 17th, 2023 12:28
• So Very Roughly Taken (Neville) Those last four lines paint the picture. We live in a troubled time, but...
  July 16th, 2023 09:47
• Sunlight To Rain. (Goldfinch60) Such is life. Risky, but fun. - Phil A.
  July 16th, 2023 09:39
• A Very Temporary Arrangement (Neville) Yes, when you finally realize that she\'s not the one for you. That...
  July 15th, 2023 19:06
• Marmalade Fingers (Neville) Make sure it\'s made with Seville oranges, much more tangy. More of a hot...
  July 8th, 2023 22:08
• My Angel (Teddy.15) An Angel and a muse. A wonderful poem inspired your Angel. May she always...
  July 6th, 2023 17:39
• Strategic Untruths (Neville) Media report what people say. Where do the liars originate? Falsehoods...
  July 6th, 2023 17:07
• Call it How You Like….. (Doggerel Dave) Another opinion deftly expressed. It seems those who are chosen to lead,...
  July 6th, 2023 16:51
• No Rules for All (Neville) Love and time, the two things that can\'t be bought, but only spent, One...
  July 5th, 2023 22:14
• A Wedding. (Doggerel Dave) Symptomatic of the state of politics worldwide. Leaders who grift money...
  July 5th, 2023 21:51
• My Lover Senryu. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful. Bless you both. - Phil A.
  July 4th, 2023 15:44
• Defeat (Wackyheartache4) Scary words. I hope you\'re not sincere. As a poem some clever images...
  July 4th, 2023 15:41
• Portrait of Truth (Teddy.15) A unique image of the breadth of love. Well-spoken and as honest as it is...
  July 4th, 2023 15:33
• Along The Seashore. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful outlook on life. A poem that many will enjoy, understand, and...
  May 30th, 2023 14:21
• Memories (Bella Shepard) Wow! This is so bittersweet that it is beautiful. I\'ve never seen the...
  May 30th, 2023 14:10
• Problems To Opportunities. (Goldfinch60) Words full of wisdom. Igreat way to live. Phil A.
  May 26th, 2023 14:46
• The Simple Art of Wondering (Neville) Sometimes, science, medicine, psychology, philosophy, etc. take away from...
  May 22nd, 2023 10:06
• Undeniably Piqued (Neville) Oh, to climb to the mountaintop and find there is no way down. Stuck there...
  May 20th, 2023 16:20
• Dancing On The Water. (Goldfinch60) Such an easy read. It was smooth sailing for me. It\'s an amazing sight to...
  May 20th, 2023 11:32
• Woke (Neville) I found words in this that have a political connotation, here in the U.S....
  May 20th, 2023 11:22
• Into the arms of another (Y-not) A bit of sadness in this one. Loved the opening line. Sometimes when love...
  May 18th, 2023 09:02
• Musing (Fay Slimm.) Trying to write and your mind is occupied with thoughts of someone close ,...
  May 18th, 2023 08:38
• Sans Echo’s (Neville) One time, I dropped some \"acid\".... and it burnt a hole in my...
  May 18th, 2023 08:29
• Routine (Natalya) Sounds like a rut. A repeating schedule. One way to add diversity is to...
  May 17th, 2023 12:03
• A Handful of Monsters (Neville) True!! One solution to the problem is a world government, but I don\'t...
  May 17th, 2023 11:51
• the collapsed city (Skpearl) Your very personal poem rang true to me. Several times I was in a place...
  May 16th, 2023 21:39
• Poesia no. 27 (Jjulia) Seems like a personal poem. Yet, so well written. \"The spare remains in...
  May 16th, 2023 21:17
• Celsius Rising (Neville) Somehow, I felt sorry for the yellow man of her artwork, short-lived from...
  May 16th, 2023 11:03
• Lost Among the Crowd (Mara \"Marzipan\") This is beautiful as it is. I saw these flowers floating away. But it is...
  May 16th, 2023 10:44
• Seen (Fay Slimm.) The rising Sun in all of its glory. A wonderful poem to start my day....
  May 16th, 2023 10:34
• Not The Place To Travel. (Goldfinch60) So true! Our journeys through life are altered not by what we see but by...
  May 16th, 2023 10:08
• I Do Now. (Goldfinch60) A sweet remembrance, Andy. What kind of coffee was that? Do they sell it...
  May 15th, 2023 15:23
• Redefining (Fay Slimm.) There is something about a tranquil body of water that can change one\'s...
  May 13th, 2023 14:04
• The Tears of a Crowd Forming (Neville) I share your anxiety about where the future will go. Once again, the...
  May 13th, 2023 13:48
• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Wow! Great write. Love by \"potion\" or otherwise, leads to sacrifice and...
  May 12th, 2023 13:48
• Just a Series of What ifs And a Maybe (Neville) Amen!! I\'ll add this though, \"in a world where no two things are ever...
  May 12th, 2023 12:56
• take me back to the hiraeth (Jjulia) Be sure to dress for the gala after your first book signing. You write...
  May 10th, 2023 21:57
• Camber Powered (Fay Slimm.) What a hopeful and joyous poem. It will brighten my day and other\'s as...
  May 10th, 2023 21:34
• Still Some Way to Go (Neville) Yes, that someone long ago that maybe could have been a muse, and never...
  May 10th, 2023 07:55
• Personification of my eyes (Jjulia) A beautiful poem. I may not have gotten its full impact due to my singular...
  May 10th, 2023 07:44
• beauty of a storm (Phoebe) Brilliant Haiku. The bright side of a rainy day. Loved it. - Phil A
  May 9th, 2023 12:29
• Duplicity (Neville) And he replied, \"We were just having coffee.\" And she replied, \" Yes,...
  May 9th, 2023 12:09
• Themes of the mind no. 2 (Jjulia) A beautiful poem, JJ. You raise a great point, \" What is the magic behind...
  May 8th, 2023 21:46
• Did You Ever Dare to Ask (Neville) Some might wonder, \" Why question a good thing?\" But without complete...
  May 8th, 2023 21:32
• Echoes Seldom Lie These Days (Neville) Besides the physical ties that bind there are the emotional and...
  May 8th, 2023 15:32
• Upon Recalling Youth and Poetry (Neville) Youth is the sweetest time of life, often filled with romance, friends,...
  May 8th, 2023 15:14
• CONNECTION (Bobby O) Connecting despite the distractions and the noise, seeing another in a...
  May 7th, 2023 11:28
• The Small Space (Jarcher54) \"to die,\" \"finish me, \"petty art,\" \"shame,\" these final stanza...
  May 7th, 2023 11:19
• Mark Well the Purpose of Night (Neville) Dreams of love as \"the purpose of the night.\" Could anything be more...
  May 2nd, 2023 21:30
• Girl With a Blue Vase (Neville) Seems more like a memory of the girl and not the vase, but that may be...
  April 26th, 2023 18:32
• Happiness (Lonelydove) There are many forms of happiness. Some are small slice of the larger pie....
  April 24th, 2023 17:31
• Only Seventeen (Emily Bradshaw) A brave and forceful poem about the current situation facing America. It...
  April 24th, 2023 17:20
• miscarried (Msa) It may be fiction, but it\'s great writing. Hope you\'ve managed to get...
  April 24th, 2023 17:10
• My System (Doggerel Dave) Well, at last the truth is known. I have to filter through the garbage to...
  April 24th, 2023 16:55
• The Heartbeat Of The Universe. (Goldfinch60) Great words Andy. Love the comparison to the \"heartbeat of the...
  April 24th, 2023 16:33
• I Have A Dream. (Goldfinch60) Love your \"dream.\" Wish it could be true, but still hopeful. \"Where...
  April 22nd, 2023 12:07
• WHAT IS (Fay Slimm.) Probably the deepest and most meaningful to-do list I have ever...
  April 22nd, 2023 08:40
• Into A Darkened Room. (Goldfinch60) With a bit of music no doubt. I used to hate mowing. Mine was a lot of...
  April 19th, 2023 14:03
• WORDS (Bobby O) Words are the poets tool to deal with this world. Choosing the right ones...
  April 19th, 2023 13:58
• CORRECTION (Bobby O) If you lie with dogs you get fleas. Sometimes , letting them go is the...
  April 19th, 2023 13:53
• As Free As a Proverbial Bird (Neville) Someone once said, when asked about his commitments, \"I\'m retired, I...
  April 18th, 2023 10:27
• Sculpture Of Happiness. (Goldfinch60) Remove all the badness and leave only the good. I have often marveled at...
  April 17th, 2023 16:03
• In So Few Words Gone (Neville) Sounds like a bitter end to a relationship, by text no less. Your poem...
  April 17th, 2023 15:55
• Call it How You Like….. (Doggerel Dave) Corrupt or \"do-nothing\" leaders keep getting elected by the people. It...
  April 17th, 2023 15:43
• Bucket List (Neville) Live life to the fullest!! Retirement is meant to be happy times. So go...
  April 16th, 2023 12:07
• WHERE THE BALLS OF HELL HANG LOW (Michael Edwards) Graphic title. Wonderful words expressing the darkness before the light,...
  April 16th, 2023 11:59
• Knowledge And Wisdom. (Goldfinch60) \"Wisdom\" is \"knowledge\" under control. Sometimes the smartest thing...
  April 16th, 2023 11:43
• The Uniqueness In Us (Oluwasolape Akode) No two people alike, not even twins, and no one is ever perfect. So...
  April 16th, 2023 11:37
• What We Had. (Fay Slimm.) Such a great poem about a love lost, and cherished. A sad lament indeed....
  April 14th, 2023 21:03
• Still Calm, Safe and Free (Neville) Well, I\'m digging deep here when I say that from mainly one word \"own,\"...
  April 14th, 2023 20:54
• Kinship (Fay Slimm.) A touching poem about the bond between sisters. Written such that it...
  April 6th, 2023 14:09
• When a Fine Line Might Just Make it Okay (Neville) There is not a line long enough. You have exposed a great human trait. We...
  April 6th, 2023 13:24
• The Day Is Here. (Goldfinch60) Every day matters. Grab as much enjoyment as you can from each.
  April 6th, 2023 13:15
• Slàinte Mhath. (Goldfinch60) A fine birthday tribute.
  April 6th, 2023 13:11
• Libra Distressed (Lorna) Such a loss can be devastating, like the world will never be the same...
  April 5th, 2023 19:21
• Dance of The Wind Children (Neville) \"Dandelion children,\" or our own they must all go... their separate...
  April 5th, 2023 19:10
• A Poem About Spring (MysteryGhost) Outside it is a sunny springtime day with children playing. Inside the...
  April 5th, 2023 15:20
• Telling. (Fay Slimm.) I\'m a believer that it is not self-love that propels these kinds of...
  March 29th, 2023 09:49
• Upon Learning to Fly (Neville) Here\'s an opposite type of risk: I was part of the crew of a submarine...
  March 29th, 2023 09:41
• Becoming Other (Fay Slimm.) \"Transmutation\" by \"losing the I,\" to empathize with \"Other\" of...
  March 27th, 2023 19:43
• In a Moment of Poetry (Neville) At first, I thought this would turn out to be an Enlightenment era...
  March 27th, 2023 19:30
• No Reason Required (Neville) Sometimes we remember things we wish we could forget and other times we...
  March 25th, 2023 15:14
• One Size (Kayla.terry) \"One size,\" is a fallacy. No two people are alike, even twins have...
  March 24th, 2023 21:08
• Hanging by a Halo (HangingbyaHalo) Keep hanging on. The dystopian images you have displayed seem to spreading...
  March 24th, 2023 20:55
• Storked (Neville) Rooftop chimneys and stork nests against a mountain backdrop is quite the...
  March 24th, 2023 20:43
• Well, at least I\'m not late (Hzugman) This resonated with me. I guess it\'s part of the retired life. Try some...
  March 24th, 2023 13:10
• Autumn Renewal (Shaakir) Interesting Haiku. Nature and life intertwined. To rise against all...
  March 24th, 2023 13:05
• The poet in me (-The poet in me) Good stuff. I like rhyming. Your poem delivers a point cleverly....
  March 24th, 2023 12:59