Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• This is Us .. (Neville) This is beautiful and real. It hit me like a gut punch, the last two...
  October 27th, 2023 18:37
• call it a drug (Anonymous_Poet) The muse is a fickle beast, She/he/it comes on their own terms and leaves...
  October 25th, 2023 16:22
• POETIC JUSTICE (LIZ)
  October 25th, 2023 16:06
• Conchetta - Voice of the Sea (Neville) \"The Voice of the Sea\" has called many to her bosom, and all were thus...
  October 25th, 2023 15:53
• A Very Modern Tale (Teddy.15) A twist on olde Will\'s R & J, with a more gruesome ending. Whatever...
  October 24th, 2023 11:36
• Advice on Learning to Fall (Neville) Sound advice on how to break a fall and to survive a broken heart. A very...
  October 24th, 2023 11:19
• Dream (Teddy.15) Do not countenance evil. Do not fly too close to the Sun. Stay in your own...
  October 20th, 2023 21:04
• Lonely Canvas (Teddy.15) A multi-faceted man, you have painted a picture of him as he is best...
  October 18th, 2023 18:51
• 4 Walls (Thomas W Case) Our four walls can define us all. I\'m sure the living quarters of every...
  October 18th, 2023 18:38
• The Measure of a Single Year (Neville) Someone once said, I think it was me, that, \"The only good year is the...
  October 12th, 2023 18:43
•   It May Blow Me In The Right Direction (Teddy.15) Fresh air, sunshine, and a \"stroll\" sounds like the perfect day. A...
  October 12th, 2023 18:22
• An Ode to my very own Sanity (Teddy.15) Maybe she meant an E. M. T. or maybe she\'s from another planet and we\'re...
  October 11th, 2023 15:24
• Me My Bro and A Chainsaw (Neville) Was this before or after the visit to your local. Either way a topiary of...
  October 11th, 2023 14:58
• An ode to the Mushroom (Teddy.15) L.O.L. My second reading of \"Mushrooms\" today. Are they all coming out...
  October 10th, 2023 14:57
• Nothing Clever To Say (Bella Shepard) Enjoy the R & R! Your poem says it all. Going Southwest, enjoy the food....
  October 10th, 2023 14:43
• MUSHROOM PARADISE (Natalie Gladmir) Mushrooms. really? I love them atop or in a gravy with the steak I\'m...
  October 10th, 2023 14:38
• Why Else Wish Him So Blind (Neville) If one was blind, they could feel more about a person than they could...
  October 10th, 2023 14:20
• Overheated. (Goldfinch60) Croquet in the snow? ( Is that anything like skiing on the lawn? ) It must...
  October 10th, 2023 12:52
• It’s not ok, it will NEVER be alright! (L. B. Mek) MEK, very well spoken and I agree with your stance. We have three...
  October 9th, 2023 22:35
• My Life On Earth (Bella Shepard) A wonderful poem. We are all \"made from star stuff\" all a part of the...
  October 9th, 2023 15:12
• Scammed (Neville) \"Hypocrisy, selfishness, and lies,\" way too much these days. Whatever...
  October 9th, 2023 15:03
• On Writing and Words (Pop64) Agreed! Although I think Love will always be poetry\'s most popular...
  October 8th, 2023 16:26
• The Scent of Autumn (Summersounds68) A beautiful take on autumn\'s scent, an oft overlooked part of what makes...
  October 8th, 2023 16:17
• green skies (Seventeen) I don\'t know what the basis for this poem is, but it sounds like you\'re...
  October 8th, 2023 16:00
• No Contest (Neville) Choose your battles wisely, so as not to taste the bitterness of defeat....
  October 8th, 2023 15:38
• A Beautiful Madness (Teddy.15) Wow, this word-art is for sure a masterpiece. Is it a sensation of being...
  October 7th, 2023 21:27
• The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257 (Neville) A beautiful description of what you saw. Old things seem to have less...
  October 7th, 2023 21:20
• The Sense of Something Before it is Something (Neville) Could there be more? So many things get overlooked, are never sought...
  October 6th, 2023 14:09
• Briefly Interrupted by Sleep (Neville) A traffic light of artful intent. We squeeze a moment here, a moment...
  October 5th, 2023 11:52
• When it rains (JoyJoy) What is rain but the moisture of yesteryears? Perhaps that why, one...
  October 4th, 2023 21:25
• The Courage to Be: Embracing My Authenticity (GeekSusie) We must be at peace with our own heart, before we can ever truly love...
  October 4th, 2023 21:15
• Ink to paper (Noni) This is beautiful poetry. A statement of love for another, that perhaps is...
  October 4th, 2023 21:02
• Rainbow Rooms Incorporated (Neville) A fantasy of the highest order. An amazing tale of sexual fulfillment with...
  October 4th, 2023 20:48
• Reflection (Teddy.15) Saying the most with the fewest words. True poetry at its best. A...
  October 4th, 2023 20:26
• Life Is Like A Song (Teddy.15) If there is an afterlife, I perceive it to be a state of ecstasy, totally...
  September 21st, 2023 11:54
• Let\'s Eat! (Goldfinch60) I\'m in. Nothing beats a rare steak and some red wine. Why is everyone...
  September 21st, 2023 11:43
• Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind (Neville) Sounds like the final conquest of them all, \"While quaffing each last...
  September 21st, 2023 11:24
• Mamma\'s Winter Coat (Bella Shepard) Such a loving memory. It always seems to be the very small things in life...
  September 18th, 2023 21:53
• Only One Thing Can Silence Me (Teddy.15) Sounds like a plan. If I start with the $72. 48 I\'ve made so far it...
  September 18th, 2023 21:40
• SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE (Bobby O) Wow! !\'m impressed with your rapping skill. You have my sympathy, and I...
  September 18th, 2023 21:30
• THE VOICE WITHIN (LIZ) Love depends on total honesty. It is the foundation of trust. If we cannot...
  September 18th, 2023 11:40
• Mary (Neville) Mede me think of a recovering war-torn village or city church. Some can...
  September 18th, 2023 11:34
• When All Said and Done it’s All Over (Neville) It can end as starkly as you have described it. I recall two acquaintances...
  September 16th, 2023 19:28
• visionary (Teddy.15) A wonderful take on the reading experience. I understood fully what you...
  September 16th, 2023 19:17
• The Sound of Darkness (Neville) \"Darkness\" has a \"sound\" when that sound is of a pending storm. Your...
  September 14th, 2023 12:03
• The Death of Love (Teddy.15) If you could replace your violin-heart with any other instrument, what...
  September 14th, 2023 11:52
• A Dance with Myself: Growing Older, Remaining Unique (GeekSusie) I can comment on only your English poems. I chose this one because it...
  September 13th, 2023 17:59
• Violin Strings (Teddy.15) The violin is the only instrument that can cry. As a soul mate you have to...
  September 13th, 2023 16:26
• Shadow Dance (Neville) So, laughing tatoos is a creative image, as is this entire poem. Just...
  September 13th, 2023 16:17
• Hannah the Hellion (MendedFences27)
  September 9th, 2023 22:45
• In Her Eyes: A Legacy Unfolded (GeekSusie) Very nice, The love of a mother for her child, and the seeing of herself...
  September 9th, 2023 21:57
• When We Are One (Bella Shepard) There\'s an icy chill in the air, even as the planet heats up. When we all...
  September 9th, 2023 21:42
• When You Know You Are Blessed (Neville) Nothing can steal your heart away like the eyes of your granddaughter. She...
  September 9th, 2023 21:30
• That Certain Something (Neville) Don\'t know who, but was a great man from your description, and these are...
  September 8th, 2023 11:20
• Find Myself (Bella Shepard) Rainy day or not, your short but lovely, poem takes us to the place we all...
  September 8th, 2023 11:12
• Autumn\'s Painting (Teddy.15) \"Glorious,\" may also describe your artwork and your poem. It was a most...
  September 8th, 2023 11:06
• Ode to the Poet (Pop64) To any and all poets here on MPS this is a great inspiration. It expresses...
  September 8th, 2023 10:59
• Peace At The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60) Avoid meetings at all costs!! Sounded as though you and her managed to...
  August 25th, 2023 14:02
• Norms (Gbrlle_evrgrn) A wonderful poem of Love\'s strength and diversity. Your struggle for...
  August 25th, 2023 13:52
• The Nature (Essence of moon) The planet we live on is truly a gift from God, so why are we destroying...
  August 22nd, 2023 09:28
• Once Upon Her Night Scented Garden  (Neville) If you wander into the orchard, don\'t go picking any apples. Try to...
  August 22nd, 2023 09:10
• A Superb Day. (Goldfinch60) I didn\'t know Croquet could be so stressful. Sounded like a lot of fun. I...
  August 20th, 2023 19:33
• Where was I? (MendedFences27)
  August 20th, 2023 11:20
• Dust Jackets (Kinsey Peterson) Recover your books with a paper that is amenable to you. Your books will...
  August 19th, 2023 15:59
• Penicillium Notatum (Bella Shepard) I suffered with allergies for a long time. Not much anymore. Hope it all...
  August 19th, 2023 15:54
• Memory1 (Longingforheart) Sweet memories, a great subject for poetic expression. You achieved it in...
  August 19th, 2023 15:46
• Cloud Gazing (The Great Kateri) Very colorful image. If only we could paint life the way we want it to...
  August 19th, 2023 15:36
• The Witnessing (FallingAwake2) There\'s nothing like a shoreline respite to awaken a sense of \"reality\"...
  August 19th, 2023 15:20
• Don\'t Feel Bad. (Goldfinch60) Lots of wisdom in this one. A well written poem. Loved it. - Phil A.
  August 19th, 2023 12:17
• Would You Kindly Pass the Entonox Babe (Neville) There was one hospital whose maternity room had 30 times the limit allowed...
  August 19th, 2023 11:53
• The Dahlias. (Goldfinch60) Very sentimental. A fond memory brought to life from your pen. We could...
  August 18th, 2023 15:10
• All Bases Covered (Neville) I believe he wrote for a lover and she became well known, while he...
  August 18th, 2023 15:05
• A Myth Untrue (MendedFences27)
  August 17th, 2023 21:31
• While Out Busy Partying (Neville) A scathing report of someone not worthy of a person like her. So...
  August 16th, 2023 10:44
• Sailing (Bellapastro777) This sounds scary, frightening, suicidal., or I completely missed the...
  August 16th, 2023 10:14
• Recollecting Unusual Positions (Neville) Perhaps he died happy with his memories of her? Not to say that it appears...
  August 14th, 2023 11:34
• Binding Pages (Teddy.15) Ever so true. Without one we would soon be bored of the other. A lot of...
  August 12th, 2023 18:59
• Mused (Neville) Sometimes finding an ending can be more difficult than finding a...
  August 12th, 2023 18:49
• The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair (Neville) You shouldn\'t fool around while baking, that\'s how you get Munchkins. ...
  August 8th, 2023 09:15
• When Absolutely Gone (Neville) I\'m feeling philosophical this morning and can\'t help but say (there...
  August 5th, 2023 11:04
• JAZZ IS LIFE (Bobby O) I read this as a piece of Jazz, itself. Sometimes it (Jazz) can seem...
  August 5th, 2023 10:41
• Observing a Miracle (Teddy.15) An absolutely wonder poem of observation and imagination. \"As every...
  August 5th, 2023 10:31
• How to Eat a Can of Worms (Pop64) An aftertaste of humble pie? This is humorous and entertaining. I liked,...
  August 5th, 2023 10:16
• A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat (Neville) The girl may have forgotten you but the elephant sure as hell hasn\'t. A...
  August 3rd, 2023 15:20
• Just a Dream I Had (Teddy.15) This is what Elvis is doing these days, traveling around filling women\'s...
  August 3rd, 2023 14:01
• The Perfect Painting (Teddy.15) If pictures could talk, this one would have uttered your words. Made me...
  August 2nd, 2023 10:53
• These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather (Neville) Some folks change with the weather, some are sunny all the time, others...
  August 2nd, 2023 10:08
• “Sommelier Full-Time Wanted” (Teddy.15) Well, OK, first, congrats on getting the job. Second, I loved your little...
  August 1st, 2023 14:41
• Tongue Spillage (Neville) Liking this one, especially \"dandelion clocks.\" In and out of love...
  August 1st, 2023 14:10
• Requiem For a Lost Cause (Neville) I think this is a desire to focus on the important things in life,...
  July 22nd, 2023 18:36
• In the Wake of New Gods (Neville) Is worshipping the cell phone the latest cult.? Will they all walk into...
  July 20th, 2023 15:07
• Two Ants One Question (Neville) The fewer \'ants dancing in\" sugar pots the \'sweeter\" it will be. A...
  July 19th, 2023 22:26
• The Mess They Leave Behind (Neville) Here, attempting suicide is a crime. She would have been prosecuted....
  July 18th, 2023 11:05
• The Last Goodbye (Teddy.15) Funny how the historical \"Last Goodbye,\" has changed with the...
  July 17th, 2023 21:29
• Clearly Departed (Neville) A gruesome thing to witness. By penning this poem maybe some will take...
  July 17th, 2023 12:39
• Destination (Teddy.15) Beautifully spoken. A host of truth in so few words. One must have hope to...
  July 17th, 2023 12:28
• So Very Roughly Taken (Neville) Those last four lines paint the picture. We live in a troubled time, but...
  July 16th, 2023 09:47
• Sunlight To Rain. (Goldfinch60) Such is life. Risky, but fun. - Phil A.
  July 16th, 2023 09:39
• A Very Temporary Arrangement (Neville) Yes, when you finally realize that she\'s not the one for you. That...
  July 15th, 2023 19:06
• Marmalade Fingers (Neville) Make sure it\'s made with Seville oranges, much more tangy. More of a hot...
  July 8th, 2023 22:08