Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• Rank Order (Neville) Someone just got put in their place. All need remember, the higher up you...
  December 20th, 2023 15:36
• Shadowbright (Neville) She had her way with many things, words included. A great, though short,...
  December 17th, 2023 15:17
• Suburban Sunflower (Neville) Was she the apricot or one of the sunflowers? I\'m thinking Sunflower....
  December 15th, 2023 15:04
• Survivor (Gray0328) Very sad, and very true. All \"survivor\'s\" feel a sense of guilt. Your...
  December 12th, 2023 18:28
• Train Tracks (Hapadalecki) A very poignant poem, filled with sadness and hope. A tale of loss, and...
  December 4th, 2023 22:48
• Love Is (Angelia Lamar) A great definition of love. everything you said is true. I think love is...
  December 4th, 2023 22:38
• The Power of Love (Accidental Poet) A very good poem, this. It struck a chord with me, bringing back memories...
  December 4th, 2023 22:31
• Whispered (Neville) It won\'t be the first time you \"whisper\" in that \"baby\'s ear.\"...
  November 14th, 2023 11:39
• Hold It, Swill Then Swallow (Neville)
  November 13th, 2023 14:23
• Squeezed Between Our Now and Thens (Neville) The \"here and now\" are massively different from the \" there and then \"...
  November 11th, 2023 17:47
• Outside Nikolai’s Café Bar and Restaurant (Neville) A pleasant memory, of a brief encounter brought on by attraction and \"a...
  November 10th, 2023 11:59
• Blue (Thomas W Case) A poem of loneliness and despair with scenes depicting that, and at the...
  November 10th, 2023 11:47
• Upon Leaving One’s Shadow Behind (Neville) Seems like one is slowly withdrawing into darkness and the other is trying...
  November 9th, 2023 16:25
• Dog Lonely (Teddy.15) A poem filled with raw honesty and power. It takes a brave soul to reveal...
  November 9th, 2023 16:07
• A Whispers\' Breath (Dove) Beautiful poetry. Sonnet-like in a way. Very mystical in tone. Loved the...
  November 7th, 2023 13:00
• Senryu 3 (Teddy.15) Great sentiment is this. We all would love for it to happen. We\'ll just...
  November 7th, 2023 12:52
• When the Balance Wheel is Broken (Neville) Hope you\'re OK. Ignore my last comments to you. They were in jest....
  November 7th, 2023 12:49
• View Before Lunch (Neville) This morning I saw a man feeding Seagulls from out of his hand. Thought...
  November 6th, 2023 14:16
• How Many Ways Precisely (Neville) Will anyone ever know how many there are, \"Precisely?\" There may be as...
  November 4th, 2023 20:59
• Twisted History the Rape of the Plains People   (Neville) Probably one of the greatest genocides in human history, the elimination...
  November 3rd, 2023 15:05
• Carpe Diem Motherfuckers (Thomas W Case) Today\'s youngsters are slaves to technology. It seems their lives get...
  November 2nd, 2023 19:40
• In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself. (Teddy.15) It made me think what if? What if I could redo what happened \"In The...
  November 2nd, 2023 19:32
• Chat Up Lies (Neville) Some \"chat up\" lines seem phony. Yours at least has some truth to it. I...
  November 2nd, 2023 19:26
• Floating Down On a Whisper (Neville) Ole! As a bull charges toward that falling \"red silk.\" Ole! And that...
  November 1st, 2023 12:09
• I See Monsters Eating Quiche (Thomas W Case) We\'ve all done it one time or another, the thoughtless portrayal of...
  November 1st, 2023 11:52
• The Greatest Love Album Ever Written (Teddy.15) Reading your poem and my computer plays \"Love Hurts\" by the Everly...
  October 31st, 2023 16:42
• Tu Es Tout Pour Moi (Neville) I was taken aback by this one. You \"ache, long, bleed, and love\" and...
  October 31st, 2023 15:52
• She Wore Him So Well (Neville) Better a \"glove\" than a mitten, five times the fun. Seriously, this...
  October 30th, 2023 09:58
• Indecent Proposal (Teddy.15) Perhaps in some ethereal way he already has visited you. Your writing...
  October 30th, 2023 09:46
• Birth of a Poet (Thomas W Case) A poignant poem of discovery. To sense a poetic yearning at 5 years is...
  October 29th, 2023 17:50
• On Moving On (Neville) The burden of being of a certain age. We never think of these things when...
  October 29th, 2023 14:00
• Will They Remember Me Well? (Thomas W Case) Opening and closing lines are full of wisdom. They in turn answer your...
  October 27th, 2023 18:44
• This is Us .. (Neville) This is beautiful and real. It hit me like a gut punch, the last two...
  October 27th, 2023 18:37
• call it a drug (Anonymous_Poet) The muse is a fickle beast, She/he/it comes on their own terms and leaves...
  October 25th, 2023 16:22
• POETIC JUSTICE (LIZ)
  October 25th, 2023 16:06
• Conchetta - Voice of the Sea (Neville) \"The Voice of the Sea\" has called many to her bosom, and all were thus...
  October 25th, 2023 15:53
• A Very Modern Tale (Teddy.15) A twist on olde Will\'s R & J, with a more gruesome ending. Whatever...
  October 24th, 2023 11:36
• Advice on Learning to Fall (Neville) Sound advice on how to break a fall and to survive a broken heart. A very...
  October 24th, 2023 11:19
• Dream (Teddy.15) Do not countenance evil. Do not fly too close to the Sun. Stay in your own...
  October 20th, 2023 21:04
• Lonely Canvas (Teddy.15) A multi-faceted man, you have painted a picture of him as he is best...
  October 18th, 2023 18:51
• 4 Walls (Thomas W Case) Our four walls can define us all. I\'m sure the living quarters of every...
  October 18th, 2023 18:38
• The Measure of a Single Year (Neville) Someone once said, I think it was me, that, \"The only good year is the...
  October 12th, 2023 18:43
•   It May Blow Me In The Right Direction (Teddy.15) Fresh air, sunshine, and a \"stroll\" sounds like the perfect day. A...
  October 12th, 2023 18:22
• An Ode to my very own Sanity (Teddy.15) Maybe she meant an E. M. T. or maybe she\'s from another planet and we\'re...
  October 11th, 2023 15:24
• Me My Bro and A Chainsaw (Neville) Was this before or after the visit to your local. Either way a topiary of...
  October 11th, 2023 14:58
• An ode to the Mushroom (Teddy.15) L.O.L. My second reading of \"Mushrooms\" today. Are they all coming out...
  October 10th, 2023 14:57
• Nothing Clever To Say (Bella Shepard) Enjoy the R & R! Your poem says it all. Going Southwest, enjoy the food....
  October 10th, 2023 14:43
• MUSHROOM PARADISE (Natalie Gladmir) Mushrooms. really? I love them atop or in a gravy with the steak I\'m...
  October 10th, 2023 14:38
• Why Else Wish Him So Blind (Neville) If one was blind, they could feel more about a person than they could...
  October 10th, 2023 14:20
• Overheated. (Goldfinch60) Croquet in the snow? ( Is that anything like skiing on the lawn? ) It must...
  October 10th, 2023 12:52
• It’s not ok, it will NEVER be alright! (L. B. Mek) MEK, very well spoken and I agree with your stance. We have three...
  October 9th, 2023 22:35
• My Life On Earth (Bella Shepard) A wonderful poem. We are all \"made from star stuff\" all a part of the...
  October 9th, 2023 15:12
• Scammed (Neville) \"Hypocrisy, selfishness, and lies,\" way too much these days. Whatever...
  October 9th, 2023 15:03
• On Writing and Words (Pop64) Agreed! Although I think Love will always be poetry\'s most popular...
  October 8th, 2023 16:26
• The Scent of Autumn (Summersounds68) A beautiful take on autumn\'s scent, an oft overlooked part of what makes...
  October 8th, 2023 16:17
• green skies (Seventeen) I don\'t know what the basis for this poem is, but it sounds like you\'re...
  October 8th, 2023 16:00
• No Contest (Neville) Choose your battles wisely, so as not to taste the bitterness of defeat....
  October 8th, 2023 15:38
• A Beautiful Madness (Teddy.15) Wow, this word-art is for sure a masterpiece. Is it a sensation of being...
  October 7th, 2023 21:27
• The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257 (Neville) A beautiful description of what you saw. Old things seem to have less...
  October 7th, 2023 21:20
• The Sense of Something Before it is Something (Neville) Could there be more? So many things get overlooked, are never sought...
  October 6th, 2023 14:09
• Briefly Interrupted by Sleep (Neville) A traffic light of artful intent. We squeeze a moment here, a moment...
  October 5th, 2023 11:52
• When it rains (JoyJoy) What is rain but the moisture of yesteryears? Perhaps that why, one...
  October 4th, 2023 21:25
• The Courage to Be: Embracing My Authenticity (GeekSusie) We must be at peace with our own heart, before we can ever truly love...
  October 4th, 2023 21:15
• Ink to paper (Noni) This is beautiful poetry. A statement of love for another, that perhaps is...
  October 4th, 2023 21:02
• Rainbow Rooms Incorporated (Neville) A fantasy of the highest order. An amazing tale of sexual fulfillment with...
  October 4th, 2023 20:48
• Reflection (Teddy.15) Saying the most with the fewest words. True poetry at its best. A...
  October 4th, 2023 20:26
• Life Is Like A Song (Teddy.15) If there is an afterlife, I perceive it to be a state of ecstasy, totally...
  September 21st, 2023 11:54
• Let\'s Eat! (Goldfinch60) I\'m in. Nothing beats a rare steak and some red wine. Why is everyone...
  September 21st, 2023 11:43
• Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind (Neville) Sounds like the final conquest of them all, \"While quaffing each last...
  September 21st, 2023 11:24
• Mamma\'s Winter Coat (Bella Shepard) Such a loving memory. It always seems to be the very small things in life...
  September 18th, 2023 21:53
• Only One Thing Can Silence Me (Teddy.15) Sounds like a plan. If I start with the $72. 48 I\'ve made so far it...
  September 18th, 2023 21:40
• SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE (Bobby O) Wow! !\'m impressed with your rapping skill. You have my sympathy, and I...
  September 18th, 2023 21:30
• THE VOICE WITHIN (LIZ) Love depends on total honesty. It is the foundation of trust. If we cannot...
  September 18th, 2023 11:40
• Mary (Neville) Mede me think of a recovering war-torn village or city church. Some can...
  September 18th, 2023 11:34
• When All Said and Done it’s All Over (Neville) It can end as starkly as you have described it. I recall two acquaintances...
  September 16th, 2023 19:28
• visionary (Teddy.15) A wonderful take on the reading experience. I understood fully what you...
  September 16th, 2023 19:17
• The Sound of Darkness (Neville) \"Darkness\" has a \"sound\" when that sound is of a pending storm. Your...
  September 14th, 2023 12:03
• The Death of Love (Teddy.15) If you could replace your violin-heart with any other instrument, what...
  September 14th, 2023 11:52
• A Dance with Myself: Growing Older, Remaining Unique (GeekSusie) I can comment on only your English poems. I chose this one because it...
  September 13th, 2023 17:59
• Violin Strings (Teddy.15) The violin is the only instrument that can cry. As a soul mate you have to...
  September 13th, 2023 16:26
• Shadow Dance (Neville) So, laughing tatoos is a creative image, as is this entire poem. Just...
  September 13th, 2023 16:17
• Hannah the Hellion (MendedFences27)
  September 9th, 2023 22:45
• In Her Eyes: A Legacy Unfolded (GeekSusie) Very nice, The love of a mother for her child, and the seeing of herself...
  September 9th, 2023 21:57
• When We Are One (Bella Shepard) There\'s an icy chill in the air, even as the planet heats up. When we all...
  September 9th, 2023 21:42
• When You Know You Are Blessed (Neville) Nothing can steal your heart away like the eyes of your granddaughter. She...
  September 9th, 2023 21:30
• That Certain Something (Neville) Don\'t know who, but was a great man from your description, and these are...
  September 8th, 2023 11:20
• Find Myself (Bella Shepard) Rainy day or not, your short but lovely, poem takes us to the place we all...
  September 8th, 2023 11:12
• Autumn\'s Painting (Teddy.15) \"Glorious,\" may also describe your artwork and your poem. It was a most...
  September 8th, 2023 11:06
• Ode to the Poet (Pop64) To any and all poets here on MPS this is a great inspiration. It expresses...
  September 8th, 2023 10:59
• Peace At The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60) Avoid meetings at all costs!! Sounded as though you and her managed to...
  August 25th, 2023 14:02
• Norms (Gbrlle_evrgrn) A wonderful poem of Love\'s strength and diversity. Your struggle for...
  August 25th, 2023 13:52
• The Nature (Essence of moon) The planet we live on is truly a gift from God, so why are we destroying...
  August 22nd, 2023 09:28
• Once Upon Her Night Scented Garden  (Neville) If you wander into the orchard, don\'t go picking any apples. Try to...
  August 22nd, 2023 09:10
• A Superb Day. (Goldfinch60) I didn\'t know Croquet could be so stressful. Sounded like a lot of fun. I...
  August 20th, 2023 19:33
• Where was I? (MendedFences27)
  August 20th, 2023 11:20
• Dust Jackets (Kinsey Peterson) Recover your books with a paper that is amenable to you. Your books will...
  August 19th, 2023 15:59
• Penicillium Notatum (Bella Shepard) I suffered with allergies for a long time. Not much anymore. Hope it all...
  August 19th, 2023 15:54
• Memory1 (Longingforheart) Sweet memories, a great subject for poetic expression. You achieved it in...
  August 19th, 2023 15:46
• A Heart Needs a Home (Accidental Poet) This is so true. It\'s as if my life was just encapsulated. Loved the...
  August 19th, 2023 15:40
• Cloud Gazing (The Great Kateri) Very colorful image. If only we could paint life the way we want it to...
  August 19th, 2023 15:36