Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Rank Order (Neville)
Someone just got put in their place. All need remember, the higher up you...
December 20th, 2023 15:36 - Shadowbright (Neville)
She had her way with many things, words included. A great, though short,...
December 17th, 2023 15:17 - Suburban Sunflower (Neville)
Was she the apricot or one of the sunflowers? I\'m thinking Sunflower....
December 15th, 2023 15:04 - Survivor (Gray0328)
Very sad, and very true. All \"survivor\'s\" feel a sense of guilt. Your...
December 12th, 2023 18:28 - Train Tracks (Hapadalecki)
A very poignant poem, filled with sadness and hope. A tale of loss, and...
December 4th, 2023 22:48 - Love Is (Angelia Lamar)
A great definition of love. everything you said is true. I think love is...
December 4th, 2023 22:38 - The Power of Love (Accidental Poet)
A very good poem, this. It struck a chord with me, bringing back memories...
December 4th, 2023 22:31 - Whispered (Neville)
It won\'t be the first time you \"whisper\" in that \"baby\'s ear.\"...
November 14th, 2023 11:39 - Hold It, Swill Then Swallow (Neville)
November 13th, 2023 14:23 - Squeezed Between Our Now and Thens (Neville)
The \"here and now\" are massively different from the \" there and then \"...
November 11th, 2023 17:47 - Outside Nikolai’s Café Bar and Restaurant (Neville)
A pleasant memory, of a brief encounter brought on by attraction and \"a...
November 10th, 2023 11:59 - Blue (Thomas W Case)
A poem of loneliness and despair with scenes depicting that, and at the...
November 10th, 2023 11:47 - Upon Leaving One’s Shadow Behind (Neville)
Seems like one is slowly withdrawing into darkness and the other is trying...
November 9th, 2023 16:25 - Dog Lonely (Teddy.15)
A poem filled with raw honesty and power. It takes a brave soul to reveal...
November 9th, 2023 16:07 - A Whispers\' Breath (Dove)
Beautiful poetry. Sonnet-like in a way.
Very mystical in tone. Loved the...
November 7th, 2023 13:00 - Senryu 3 (Teddy.15)
Great sentiment is this. We all would love for it to happen. We\'ll just...
November 7th, 2023 12:52 - When the Balance Wheel is Broken (Neville)
Hope you\'re OK. Ignore my last comments to you. They were in jest....
November 7th, 2023 12:49 - View Before Lunch (Neville)
This morning I saw a man feeding Seagulls from out of his hand. Thought...
November 6th, 2023 14:16 - How Many Ways Precisely (Neville)
Will anyone ever know how many there are, \"Precisely?\" There may be as...
November 4th, 2023 20:59 - Twisted History the Rape of the Plains People (Neville)
Probably one of the greatest genocides in human history, the elimination...
November 3rd, 2023 15:05 - Carpe Diem Motherfuckers (Thomas W Case)
Today\'s youngsters are slaves to technology. It seems their lives get...
November 2nd, 2023 19:40 - In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself. (Teddy.15)
It made me think what if? What if I could redo what happened \"In The...
November 2nd, 2023 19:32 - Chat Up Lies (Neville)
Some \"chat up\" lines seem phony. Yours at least has some truth to it. I...
November 2nd, 2023 19:26 - Floating Down On a Whisper (Neville)
Ole! As a bull charges toward that falling \"red silk.\" Ole! And that...
November 1st, 2023 12:09 - I See Monsters Eating Quiche (Thomas W Case)
We\'ve all done it one time or another, the thoughtless portrayal of...
November 1st, 2023 11:52 - The Greatest Love Album Ever Written (Teddy.15)
Reading your poem and my computer plays \"Love Hurts\" by the Everly...
October 31st, 2023 16:42 - Tu Es Tout Pour Moi (Neville)
I was taken aback by this one. You \"ache, long, bleed, and love\" and...
October 31st, 2023 15:52 - She Wore Him So Well (Neville)
Better a \"glove\" than a mitten, five times the fun. Seriously, this...
October 30th, 2023 09:58 - Indecent Proposal (Teddy.15)
Perhaps in some ethereal way he already has visited you. Your writing...
October 30th, 2023 09:46 - Birth of a Poet (Thomas W Case)
A poignant poem of discovery. To sense a poetic yearning at 5 years is...
October 29th, 2023 17:50 - On Moving On (Neville)
The burden of being of a certain age. We never think of these things when...
October 29th, 2023 14:00 - Will They Remember Me Well? (Thomas W Case)
Opening and closing lines are full of wisdom. They in turn answer your...
October 27th, 2023 18:44 - This is Us .. (Neville)
This is beautiful and real. It hit me like a gut punch, the last two...
October 27th, 2023 18:37 - call it a drug (Anonymous_Poet)
The muse is a fickle beast, She/he/it comes on their own terms and leaves...
October 25th, 2023 16:22 - POETIC JUSTICE (LIZ)
October 25th, 2023 16:06 - Conchetta - Voice of the Sea (Neville)
\"The Voice of the Sea\" has called many to her bosom, and all were thus...
October 25th, 2023 15:53 - A Very Modern Tale (Teddy.15)
A twist on olde Will\'s R & J, with a more gruesome ending. Whatever...
October 24th, 2023 11:36 - Advice on Learning to Fall (Neville)
Sound advice on how to break a fall and to survive a broken heart. A very...
October 24th, 2023 11:19 - Dream (Teddy.15)
Do not countenance evil. Do not fly too close to the Sun. Stay in your own...
October 20th, 2023 21:04 - Lonely Canvas (Teddy.15)
A multi-faceted man, you have painted a picture of him as he is best...
October 18th, 2023 18:51 - 4 Walls (Thomas W Case)
Our four walls can define us all. I\'m sure the living quarters of every...
October 18th, 2023 18:38 - The Measure of a Single Year (Neville)
Someone once said, I think it was me, that, \"The only good year is the...
October 12th, 2023 18:43 - It May Blow Me In The Right Direction (Teddy.15)
Fresh air, sunshine, and a \"stroll\" sounds like the perfect day. A...
October 12th, 2023 18:22 - An Ode to my very own Sanity (Teddy.15)
Maybe she meant an E. M. T. or maybe she\'s from another planet and we\'re...
October 11th, 2023 15:24 - Me My Bro and A Chainsaw (Neville)
Was this before or after the visit to your local. Either way a topiary of...
October 11th, 2023 14:58 - An ode to the Mushroom (Teddy.15)
L.O.L. My second reading of \"Mushrooms\" today. Are they all coming out...
October 10th, 2023 14:57 - Nothing Clever To Say (Bella Shepard)
Enjoy the R & R! Your poem says it all.
Going Southwest, enjoy the food....
October 10th, 2023 14:43 - MUSHROOM PARADISE (Natalie Gladmir)
Mushrooms. really? I love them atop or in a gravy with the steak I\'m...
October 10th, 2023 14:38 - Why Else Wish Him So Blind (Neville)
If one was blind, they could feel more about a person than they could...
October 10th, 2023 14:20 - Overheated. (Goldfinch60)
Croquet in the snow? ( Is that anything like skiing on the lawn? ) It must...
October 10th, 2023 12:52 - It’s not ok, it will NEVER be alright! (L. B. Mek)
MEK, very well spoken and I agree with your stance. We have three...
October 9th, 2023 22:35 - My Life On Earth (Bella Shepard)
A wonderful poem. We are all \"made from star stuff\" all a part of the...
October 9th, 2023 15:12 - Scammed (Neville)
\"Hypocrisy, selfishness, and lies,\" way too much these days. Whatever...
October 9th, 2023 15:03 - On Writing and Words (Pop64)
Agreed! Although I think Love will always be poetry\'s most popular...
October 8th, 2023 16:26 - The Scent of Autumn (Summersounds68)
A beautiful take on autumn\'s scent, an oft overlooked part of what makes...
October 8th, 2023 16:17 - green skies (Seventeen)
I don\'t know what the basis for this poem is, but it sounds like you\'re...
October 8th, 2023 16:00 - No Contest (Neville)
Choose your battles wisely, so as not to taste the bitterness of defeat....
October 8th, 2023 15:38 - A Beautiful Madness (Teddy.15)
Wow, this word-art is for sure a masterpiece. Is it a sensation of being...
October 7th, 2023 21:27 - The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257 (Neville)
A beautiful description of what you saw. Old things seem to have less...
October 7th, 2023 21:20 - The Sense of Something Before it is Something (Neville)
Could there be more? So many things get overlooked, are never sought...
October 6th, 2023 14:09 - Briefly Interrupted by Sleep (Neville)
A traffic light of artful intent. We squeeze a moment here, a moment...
October 5th, 2023 11:52 - When it rains (JoyJoy)
What is rain but the moisture of yesteryears? Perhaps that why, one...
October 4th, 2023 21:25 - The Courage to Be: Embracing My Authenticity (GeekSusie)
We must be at peace with our own heart, before we can ever truly love...
October 4th, 2023 21:15 - Ink to paper (Noni)
This is beautiful poetry. A statement of love for another, that perhaps is...
October 4th, 2023 21:02 - Rainbow Rooms Incorporated (Neville)
A fantasy of the highest order. An amazing tale of sexual fulfillment with...
October 4th, 2023 20:48 - Reflection (Teddy.15)
Saying the most with the fewest words. True poetry at its best. A...
October 4th, 2023 20:26 - Life Is Like A Song (Teddy.15)
If there is an afterlife, I perceive it to be a state of ecstasy, totally...
September 21st, 2023 11:54 - Let\'s Eat! (Goldfinch60)
I\'m in. Nothing beats a rare steak and some red wine. Why is everyone...
September 21st, 2023 11:43 - Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind (Neville)
Sounds like the final conquest of them all, \"While quaffing each last...
September 21st, 2023 11:24 - Mamma\'s Winter Coat (Bella Shepard)
Such a loving memory. It always seems to be the very small things in life...
September 18th, 2023 21:53 - Only One Thing Can Silence Me (Teddy.15)
Sounds like a plan. If I start with the $72. 48 I\'ve made so far it...
September 18th, 2023 21:40 - SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE (Bobby O)
Wow! !\'m impressed with your rapping skill. You have my sympathy, and I...
September 18th, 2023 21:30 - THE VOICE WITHIN (LIZ)
Love depends on total honesty. It is the foundation of trust. If we cannot...
September 18th, 2023 11:40 - Mary (Neville)
Mede me think of a recovering war-torn village or city church. Some can...
September 18th, 2023 11:34 - When All Said and Done it’s All Over (Neville)
It can end as starkly as you have described it. I recall two acquaintances...
September 16th, 2023 19:28 - visionary (Teddy.15)
A wonderful take on the reading experience. I understood fully what you...
September 16th, 2023 19:17 - The Sound of Darkness (Neville)
\"Darkness\" has a \"sound\" when that sound is of a pending storm.
Your...
September 14th, 2023 12:03 - The Death of Love (Teddy.15)
If you could replace your violin-heart with any other instrument, what...
September 14th, 2023 11:52 - A Dance with Myself: Growing Older, Remaining Unique (GeekSusie)
I can comment on only your English poems. I chose this one because it...
September 13th, 2023 17:59 - Violin Strings (Teddy.15)
The violin is the only instrument that can cry. As a soul mate you have to...
September 13th, 2023 16:26 - Shadow Dance (Neville)
So, laughing tatoos is a creative image, as is this entire poem. Just...
September 13th, 2023 16:17 - Hannah the Hellion (MendedFences27)
September 9th, 2023 22:45 - In Her Eyes: A Legacy Unfolded (GeekSusie)
Very nice, The love of a mother for her child, and the seeing of herself...
September 9th, 2023 21:57 - When We Are One (Bella Shepard)
There\'s an icy chill in the air, even as the planet heats up. When we all...
September 9th, 2023 21:42 - When You Know You Are Blessed (Neville)
Nothing can steal your heart away like the eyes of your granddaughter. She...
September 9th, 2023 21:30 - That Certain Something (Neville)
Don\'t know who, but was a great man from your description, and these are...
September 8th, 2023 11:20 - Find Myself (Bella Shepard)
Rainy day or not, your short but lovely, poem takes us to the place we all...
September 8th, 2023 11:12 - Autumn\'s Painting (Teddy.15)
\"Glorious,\" may also describe your artwork and your poem. It was a most...
September 8th, 2023 11:06 - Ode to the Poet (Pop64)
To any and all poets here on MPS this is a great inspiration. It expresses...
September 8th, 2023 10:59 - Peace At The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60)
Avoid meetings at all costs!! Sounded as though you and her managed to...
August 25th, 2023 14:02 - Norms (Gbrlle_evrgrn)
A wonderful poem of Love\'s strength and diversity. Your struggle for...
August 25th, 2023 13:52 - The Nature (Essence of moon)
The planet we live on is truly a gift from God, so why are we destroying...
August 22nd, 2023 09:28 - Once Upon Her Night Scented Garden (Neville)
If you wander into the orchard, don\'t go picking any apples.
Try to...
August 22nd, 2023 09:10 - A Superb Day. (Goldfinch60)
I didn\'t know Croquet could be so stressful. Sounded like a lot of fun. I...
August 20th, 2023 19:33 - Where was I? (MendedFences27)
August 20th, 2023 11:20 - Dust Jackets (Kinsey Peterson)
Recover your books with a paper that is amenable to you. Your books will...
August 19th, 2023 15:59 - Penicillium Notatum (Bella Shepard)
I suffered with allergies for a long time. Not much anymore. Hope it all...
August 19th, 2023 15:54 - Memory1 (Longingforheart)
Sweet memories, a great subject for poetic expression. You achieved it in...
August 19th, 2023 15:46 - A Heart Needs a Home (Accidental Poet)
This is so true. It\'s as if my life was just encapsulated. Loved the...
August 19th, 2023 15:40 - Cloud Gazing (The Great Kateri)
Very colorful image. If only we could paint life the way we want it to...
August 19th, 2023 15:36
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