Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Dancing On The Water. (Goldfinch60)
A brilliant description of a yacht race. So many descriptive images. I...
August 31st, 2024 16:14 - One Last Night With The Fireflies (Teddy.15)
A night well spent. To commune with Nature is always an exhilarating...
August 31st, 2024 16:07 - Sonnet For Autumn. (Goldfinch60)
Amen to Autumn loving. She\'s a bit early this year. Perhaps, because the...
August 30th, 2024 13:04 - When The Shadows Come Calling (Teddy.15)
Can\'t say as I have seen any Angels. Maybe in disguise, they do wear...
August 30th, 2024 09:21 - When Motown Meets The Blues (Teddy.15)
I think, maybe, Billie could have used a lot more understanding. If only...
August 29th, 2024 11:09 - All Was Well Forever. (Goldfinch60)
Enjoy your stay in that wonderful place. What a clarinetist. Superb....
August 29th, 2024 10:59 - The Mocking Bird (JD Boye)
And so, life goes on. A painful experience or learning lesson. Take from...
August 28th, 2024 14:10 - RAW 👤 (ChrisLyn🕊)
A painful experience that has taken control of one\'s life, something from...
August 28th, 2024 14:03 - War (Rrodriguez)
The harshness of the moment softened by notes from a \"little boy\'s...
August 27th, 2024 18:56 - Holes in the ground (Sorenbarrett)
We leave an imprint everywhere we go. Not traceable by us, but Nature is...
August 27th, 2024 18:43 - Bello Casentino (Teddy.15)
Wonderful images. Like being in the forest. Well-spoken in a few words and...
August 27th, 2024 18:38 - The Ferris Wheel. (Goldfinch60)
A great memory, Andy. You described it beautifully. It made me think of...
August 27th, 2024 18:28 - Ends of My Arms (Dan Williams)
Strange dreams, where do they come from? Probably an unanswerable...
August 27th, 2024 18:18 - Missing (Cassie58)
Beautiful work Cassie. You\'ve personified your garden flowers, and we all...
August 23rd, 2024 15:08 - Temporal Lobe (Teddy.15)
That\'s me, just a minion with no skills and dangerous around things that...
August 23rd, 2024 14:57 - For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken (Neville)
A poet\'s brain and a lover\'s heart, or is it the other way round? One...
August 23rd, 2024 14:51 - A Walk On The Moors. (Goldfinch60)
Loved this one. I took the walk with you and have been uplifted it. Great...
August 22nd, 2024 09:59 - Gone The Summer (Cassie58)
Love the rhyming in this one, Love the subject matter and how you have...
August 22nd, 2024 09:55 - About to Be Forgot (Neville)
Some things are best left unlit, hidden in the shadows, so to speak....
August 22nd, 2024 09:49 - Three Things. (Goldfinch60)
The truth has been spoken. I could not agree more with the theme of your...
August 19th, 2024 09:14 - An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15)
There is nothing quite like a relaxing Sunday with the freedom to do as...
August 18th, 2024 20:45 - CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards)
One can feel the sadness in this scene you have painted in words. The...
August 18th, 2024 20:30 - You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo (Neville)
I traveled in Somerset, once. Went into a pub there, and the barman said I...
August 18th, 2024 09:57 - Iconic Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful way of expressing your love for her. - Phil A.
August 17th, 2024 10:55 - Making Green & Reflex (Neville)
Loved both of these. \'Making Green\" I would say, would be my favorite....
August 17th, 2024 10:50 - Yesterday (Sorenbarrett)
The constant change of life, exemplified by your poem. It reads like a sad...
August 17th, 2024 10:45 - Misunderstood (Cassie58)
A wonderful story, a great poem, what else can we ask for. Oh yeah, the...
August 15th, 2024 13:03 - Growth (Doggerel Dave)
The problem is that our planet cannot sustain the \"population increase\"...
August 15th, 2024 12:55 - More Heritage Down the Pan & Fuck Ann Summers (Neville)
Well, I am somewhat befuddled. It appears you are not happy with the Royal...
August 15th, 2024 12:37 - Walking (MendedFences27)
August 14th, 2024 16:45 - Floating (JoyJoy)
Why write about death? If the mood is desperate enough that you write...
August 14th, 2024 13:42 - The Joy Of Old Age. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful music. Yet, I enjoyed your poem more. It seemed so real to me....
August 14th, 2024 13:16 - Bitter Sweet Springs (Neville)
This planet can sustain only a given number of people, before it dies....
August 14th, 2024 11:55 - At the Beach (Tony36)
There is a magic that comes from being near the sea, it somehow relieves...
August 13th, 2024 12:25 - Because My Darling It all Belongs to You (Teddy.15)
A sweet tribute to one\'s lover. Taking the night sky and giving it to...
August 13th, 2024 12:21 - A GNATS CHUFF (Michael Edwards)
Welcome back. Hope all is well. Made me chuckle. (A chuckle\'s a whisper...
August 13th, 2024 12:05 - Home Another Way. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful. Often times a forced change brings new and rewarding...
August 13th, 2024 11:57 - Clocked (Neville)
Whoever \"she\" is she is sorely missed. I guess the end of time can cause...
August 13th, 2024 11:51 - Quite Potty. (Doggerel Dave)
Going potty over pots! Keep calm and keep planting. My complaint is with...
August 12th, 2024 11:13 - I write (Tony36)
A \"Stream of Consciousness\" writing. We\'ve all been there. It just...
August 12th, 2024 11:04 - Time eroded memories (Sorenbarrett)
Do as we all do, embellish. Those \"Time Eroded Memories\" can be expanded...
August 12th, 2024 10:59 - The Object and Outcome of Dreaming Alone (Neville)
Ah, the selfish male rises again. It\'s a wonder anyone finds the time for...
August 12th, 2024 10:53 - Housing Wreck. (Goldfinch60)
Looks like a start anew project. Pity the poor owner. Lovely beach for a...
August 12th, 2024 10:46 - Point of view (Sorenbarrett)
No two people see the same thing exactly the same.
Your poem on...
August 11th, 2024 18:13 - Mist And Foghorns. (Goldfinch60)
I was there on a day trip in 1970. I remember people drinking tea on the...
August 11th, 2024 16:17 - Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love. (Cassie58)
Saw them in what was supposed to be a joint concert on Boston Common in...
August 11th, 2024 16:03 - The Devil\'s In Town (Teddy.15)
Is it because its Sunday? everything I\'ve read so far today is all very...
August 11th, 2024 15:15 - Comparing Uncertain Potentialities (Neville)
Some deep thinking put into poetic form. Your theory offers \"divine...
August 11th, 2024 15:03 - Our Favourite Place Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Sometimes the simplest things can bring the greatest joy. A thoroughly...
August 10th, 2024 10:52 - Swan\'s Lake (Teddy.15)
As we pass through life beauty surrounds us. Most of it goes unnoticed,...
August 10th, 2024 10:50 - Rituals (Neville)
Somebody mentioned \"a full English\" and I got hungry and started...
August 10th, 2024 10:41 - Maybe To Be Continued (Neville)
Death is its own gate-keeper. I\'ve seen healthy people leave at 37 and...
August 9th, 2024 10:39 - As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples (Neville)
At 80 I look forward to an unlimited number of years ahead, and why...
August 8th, 2024 12:51 - Harmony Lost, Hope Restored (Rrodriguez)
Well, I love it. Sometimes it requires a few years of thought to complete...
August 8th, 2024 10:15 - She Lay In Her Bed (Bella Shepard)
Wow. Such empathy. A very difficult task working with hospice patients,...
August 7th, 2024 18:50 - A Very Grand Finale (Teddy.15)
Hang in there. Life is all we have. Loved your poem and it\'s rather...
August 7th, 2024 10:08 - Me, Mary And Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Most enjoyable imagery. Putting aside the competition for Love and nature....
August 7th, 2024 10:01 - I Think I Like You But .. (Neville)
Quite the encounter. The less said the better. Best not to engage in...
August 7th, 2024 09:56 - If I Was Just A Lonely House Upon a Hill (Teddy.15)
Not an easy task being a house, nor is it easy to be one metaphorically....
August 4th, 2024 22:26 - Immaterial Things Such as These (Neville)
I\'m assuming this is chronic among poets, I for one have this problem,...
August 4th, 2024 22:14 - Where zero meets infinity (Sorenbarrett)
Your line, \"death becomes life in the vastness of eternity\" caused me to...
August 3rd, 2024 09:17 - If Your Face Doesn’t Fit (Cassie58)
And so it is. My, but you captured the
way some less fortunate are...
August 3rd, 2024 09:01 - To the Skies (Anabella151)
This is clever, poignant, and melodic.
The repetition carries the flow...
August 3rd, 2024 08:14 - Breathing In Music. (Goldfinch60)
Not only does it take your breath away, but also, all of your troubles....
August 3rd, 2024 08:06 - One Without Frills Would Be Fine (Neville)
To find such a creature would be the end of many quests. Some of us are...
August 3rd, 2024 08:01 - Over Your Shoulder (Dan Williams)
The past is always there behind us. It will follow us to where ever we go....
August 3rd, 2024 07:57 - Just Like Some Well Read Woman (Neville)
I\'m not sure, but I think this is comparing a book to a woman or a woman...
August 2nd, 2024 22:38 - Just a Few Thoughts on Getting Even (Neville)
Not exactly sure of the meaning of \"culling\" but it doesn\'t sound good....
July 31st, 2024 11:35 - Heat Exhaustion. (Goldfinch60)
I know the kind of heat you mean, we get high humidity here a lot. It...
July 31st, 2024 11:27 - A Battle With Irony (Teddy.15)
Perhaps the best thing to stop your snoopy neighbors is to send them some...
July 31st, 2024 11:22 - My Favourite Colour Is Blue (Teddy.15)
As I write this, I\'m sitting here in my yellow shirt, not because it\'s...
July 30th, 2024 12:18 - Books (Goldfinch60)
Books will last as long as language survives. No two people will describe...
July 30th, 2024 12:03 - The Weatherman (Dan Williams)
I must admit that I think these
Weathermen,: by the way I see more...
July 30th, 2024 10:07 - Guilty But Free as A Bird (Neville)
Why do so many remain and take the beatings when they could be \"free as a...
July 30th, 2024 10:00 - Peace Love Rock and Roll (Tony36)
What the world needs is unity. Yes indeed. All people want is to live, not...
July 29th, 2024 12:18 - Comercial music (Sorenbarrett)
The popular music of today is rotten. I\'m just too old to figure out what...
July 29th, 2024 12:09 - Between Clouds (Neville)
Overcast with bits of sunshine, sounds like a forecast for life. We all...
July 29th, 2024 11:49 - Second Chance. (Goldfinch60)
That was quite an experience. It would make anyone become more positive....
July 29th, 2024 11:41 - One Side of Still (Dan Williams)
Nicely done, I was there with you beside that river, enjoying the silence...
July 28th, 2024 11:49 - Christmas In July. (Goldfinch60)
Here, \"Christmas in July\" is a charitable event for kids in hospital. It...
July 28th, 2024 11:44 - Friends With Benefits (Neville)
At a certain age we give up on \"friends with benefits\" and settle for...
July 28th, 2024 11:37 - Outsiders (Neville)
Eastern promises are mostly hot air, but (I believe the number is 15)...
July 27th, 2024 10:48 - Another Beautiful Day. (Goldfinch60)
Nature has her way of interacting with mankind, with you, she is a lovely...
July 27th, 2024 10:32 - Taste Bud Duel (Doggerel Dave)
Ok DD, let\'s not mess with Andy\'s choices. Each man can choose his own...
July 27th, 2024 10:22 - To the Bride and Groom (Teddy.15)
Nice celebration - Phil A.
July 26th, 2024 19:42 - By Invitation Only (Neville)
Ah, the hills and valleys of exploring unmapped frontiers. I think I\'ll...
July 26th, 2024 19:14 - Laphroaig. (Goldfinch60)
Here\'s to you, Andy. The first ode to a whiskey I\'ve ever read. A pretty...
July 26th, 2024 18:49 - Kindness. (Doggerel Dave)
Why do they call it a GYM? Was it named after a fella called Jim, and they...
July 25th, 2024 15:26 - Thanks for Coming But .. (Neville)
Friend or lover, it matters naught. A relationship falls apart and the...
July 25th, 2024 15:12 - Riopy Is Here. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful music. I think I\'m hooked. Will be getting some of his work...
July 25th, 2024 15:02 - There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge (Teddy.15)
The third stanza hit me the hardest.
The entire poem is masterful. It...
July 24th, 2024 15:27 - Light Bites (Neville)
Spiders win in my book. Flies are a nuisance. Clever that you gave them...
July 24th, 2024 15:14 - The Sky Calls (Thomas W Case)
Powerful words, that portray a longing. Perhaps the tense on the last few...
July 23rd, 2024 12:30 - Rainbow (Tony36)
A good message to live by. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2024 12:22 - Sex well done (Sorenbarrett)
Funny how some people want to turn Nature\'s most powerful emotion into a...
July 23rd, 2024 12:20 - Poet\'s True Worth (Teddy.15)
If writing in \"Word,\" just highlight the entire poem and select the...
July 23rd, 2024 12:10 - False Promises and Little White Lies (Neville)
I suppose one could follow the trail of white tissues and get to know...
July 23rd, 2024 12:04 - Hurt. (Goldfinch60)
One of my favorite singers. A great tribute you\'ve written. A meaningful...
July 23rd, 2024 11:59 - Lonesome Neon Nights (Thomas W Case)
A lot of despair in this poem, but the images are clear and concise. It...
July 22nd, 2024 17:45 - Apathy. (Goldfinch60)
If apathy is a defense, one could become a very powerful person, just by...
July 22nd, 2024 17:37
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