Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Welcome to Miami (Neville)
A subtly portrayed interlude. The scene is amplified through small and...
July 17th, 2024 12:40 - Trebrimar (Neville)
Sounds like a beautiful spot. In Cornwall overlooking the sea. Very...
July 16th, 2024 12:10 - What Else is A Metaphor (Neville)
It\'s for Mark Zuckerberg to get even richer. (Corny joke).
Three lines...
July 15th, 2024 16:06 - Living In A Quieter World. (Goldfinch60)
A terrible thing to have to endure, but understandable. The world can be a...
July 13th, 2024 15:44 - The Way of Us (Neville)
Someone\'s past, present, and future summed up in three lines. From full,...
July 13th, 2024 15:37 - What Women Want (Neville)
Wow! If word gets out about this poem, you may become a lonely man....
July 12th, 2024 08:39 - I Fell in Love with a Dream (Thomas W Case)
Good work. and a truth well spoken. I would guess that we\'ve all been...
July 12th, 2024 08:27 - Come With Me. (Goldfinch60)
Wow! What a piece of music. Your poem tops it off and expresses your...
July 12th, 2024 08:24 - When Two Roads Diverge (Teddy.15)
Well as the great Yogi Berra once said, \"When you come to a fork in the...
July 11th, 2024 21:45 - The Longest Journey (Tony36)
A thoughtful poem filled with some very wise sayings. It made me think....
July 11th, 2024 21:38 - Quartet For The End Of Time. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful music and wonderful story. Thanks for making my Thursday. _ Phil...
July 11th, 2024 21:35 - Temporary Blemishes (Neville)
Funny how stimulation is often found in the least expected places and...
July 11th, 2024 21:28 - For All Those Wearing Pink (Neville)
Have experience both. Will and have donated, this side of the pond. Thanks...
July 10th, 2024 09:40 - Four Apparitions O\'er the Rio Grande (MendedFences27)
July 7th, 2024 09:05 - Letting Go (Sassy Lou)
Sometimes a loss is a good thing. Losing a bad relationship is one of...
July 6th, 2024 18:05 - Playing The Game. (Goldfinch60)
We think we make our own lives, but in reality, we respond to Nature....
July 6th, 2024 17:57 - Tranquil Waters (Dev Parth)
It seems it\'s always in a moment of solitude that wisdom unfolds to us....
July 6th, 2024 17:47 - Forget Me Not (Teddy.15)
A lot of wisdom here. A poem that shows the innocent wisdom of a...
July 6th, 2024 17:37 - Fear to be wrong (Sophenia)
One must learn to love themself before they can be loved by others. Love...
July 5th, 2024 15:49 - In Lieu of Flowers (Thomas W Case)
Let love flower. A poem of simile. You as a flower, in need of watery...
July 5th, 2024 15:41 - Beyonds The Limits (Dev Parth)
Well, I for one hope you are absolutely right. It takes all of us, working...
July 5th, 2024 15:27 - Their Lips Move. (Goldfinch60)
Oh, it may not be a perfect world, but it\'s far ahead of whatever is in...
July 5th, 2024 15:21 - The Lake (NafisaSB)
Wonderful descriptions and imagery.
It seemed a peaceful lake, yet one...
July 5th, 2024 15:14 - The Lake (NafisaSB)
July 5th, 2024 15:10 - poem video (Jim56)
Absolutely beautiful, sad, but beautiful. Enjoyed it all, music, song,...
July 4th, 2024 10:42 - The Backbone of a Poem (Teddy.15)
Well, my belly\'s full. You\'ve defined the poem to a tee. I don\'t think...
July 4th, 2024 10:20 - Different Measures (Neville)
All those \"different times\" and \"distant\" places become \"shams\" as...
June 2nd, 2024 16:02 - The Untimely Death of a Wonderful Soul (Teddy.15)
A strong voice for the light as opposed to the dark. Your conclusion is...
June 2nd, 2024 15:47 - Poor Poet (Teddy.15)
Here\'s a thought - If there\'s a chance at a second passing through life,...
May 30th, 2024 15:09 - Too Long In the Tooth (Neville)
Closure upon a relationship is a heartfelt and wonderful thing. Yet, we...
May 30th, 2024 14:58 - Walking To the End Of Time. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful poem, Andy. It combines your love of Nature and Music and...
May 29th, 2024 16:59 - Who am I (Byyvette)
A great bit of introspection here. Where you question one\'s own...
May 29th, 2024 16:46 - So Very Lightly Hued (Neville)
Like every fire ever created it is reduced to ashes, but during its...
May 29th, 2024 16:27 - A Leap In The Dark (Teddy.15)
Head or heart, matters not, neither can live without the other. If one...
May 29th, 2024 16:20 - That Time of Year Again (Neville)
We\'ve got a couple of doves nesting about ten feet from our home on a...
May 28th, 2024 21:39 - Impressions of A Senryu (Neville)
Where were you? In a land of giants?
This caused be to wonder about being...
May 27th, 2024 14:41 - Through The Skylight (Cassie58)
A lovely poem. It\'s brilliant to thank the stars for company during the...
May 27th, 2024 14:33 - The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie). (Goldfinch60)
Well, a nice poem and a funny bit.
Sort of cheers up everyone. Well done....
May 27th, 2024 14:24 - Enlightened (Teddy.15)
Wow, loved this one, both your poetry and the image (Did you create it?). ...
April 3rd, 2024 19:40 - Oh What A Night. (Goldfinch60)
Oh, wow!! Wish I was there. Two hours well spent. My kind of music. Loved...
March 17th, 2024 11:15 - Dark Corners of the Soul (Thomas W Case)
Very relatable. I think lots of us have a \"little boy/girl\" inside them....
March 17th, 2024 10:49 - That Sorceriffic Ass (Thomas W Case)
Gritty. filled with some phrases I liked.
The Buddha Bit in the first...
March 12th, 2024 19:13 - Your Hand In Mine (Royce Earnest Rasmussen)
A wonderful expression of your love. May you both enjoy its fruits for a...
March 9th, 2024 12:03 - There are graveyards of people who\'re alive (Veronica Achlys writes)
Your loss of love symbolized as a graveyard. Quite emphatically. A very...
March 9th, 2024 11:58 - The Hippies World. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, you would be the perfect \"hippie.\" At least you would think like...
March 9th, 2024 11:46 - My Heart’s Story (Accidental Poet)
It\'s your heart, hold in it what you will,
but beware of it breaking...
March 9th, 2024 11:40 - The Difference in Our Similarities (Neville)
If all these fabled creatures were authors, they would be ruined by...
March 7th, 2024 17:04 - The Great Journey Home (Teddy.15)
Lovely poetry. Angels are what we cling to when seeking peace. They can...
March 7th, 2024 16:53 - The George. (Goldfinch60)
A very English experience. Here, much the same only broadly different....
March 7th, 2024 16:46 - Vuitton Clerihew (Doggerel Dave)
Staying within my criminal bent, I have to say that the sellers of...
March 7th, 2024 16:34 - Algebra of Love (Teddy.15)
Sometimes, they find one another and it lasts forever. They would tell you...
March 5th, 2024 17:57 - On Waking Up in Rio (Neville)
Waking up in Rio, disoriented and confused, sounds like movie...
March 5th, 2024 17:47 - How Many More Planets (Neville)
It\'s already too late, because we haven\'t learned the necessary skills...
January 26th, 2024 19:18 - kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru (Neville)
A wonderful tale of what must surely be a Japanese legend. I don\'t know...
January 21st, 2024 16:40 - Black Beauty (Accidental Poet)
Now that you\'ve christened her, it seems a shame to put her to work and...
January 17th, 2024 13:36 - The Whole of A Woman Shared (Neville)
If it\'s in the realm of human existence, it\'s fodder for poetry. From...
January 17th, 2024 13:27 - Lavished (Neville)
Will all those brush strokes be enough for a mural? Another double-sided...
January 16th, 2024 11:49 - Art’s Value (Doggerel Dave)
Don\'t know much about the art market, but I know this - For every...
January 16th, 2024 11:25 - Things I Wish I’d Said (Cassie58)
I guess we\'re both clearing the air today, saying what we\'ve wanted to...
January 16th, 2024 11:16 - Glorious Sunny Morn. (Goldfinch60)
Frosty, sunny morns are picturesque in the way the frost clings to the...
January 16th, 2024 11:08 - To Be In Love (Teddy.15)
Wow! - Such beautiful words, describing the sensation of Love. A love poem...
January 10th, 2024 13:53 - Together As One. (Goldfinch60)
Trying to capture love in words is like trying to capture a butterfly in a...
January 10th, 2024 13:36 - Feasting Upon Leftovers (Neville)
Some peoples\' \"leftovers\" are better than others\' main courses. Like...
January 10th, 2024 13:07 - A Sight Well Worth Going Blind For (Neville)
Love begins with the physical attractions and is remembered in the same...
January 9th, 2024 16:09 - Going Against the Flow (Neville)
I wondered what possessed her to leave, but then reading your comments...
December 21st, 2023 21:50 - Rank Order (Neville)
Someone just got put in their place. All need remember, the higher up you...
December 20th, 2023 15:36 - Shadowbright (Neville)
She had her way with many things, words included. A great, though short,...
December 17th, 2023 15:17 - Suburban Sunflower (Neville)
Was she the apricot or one of the sunflowers? I\'m thinking Sunflower....
December 15th, 2023 15:04 - Survivor (Gray0328)
Very sad, and very true. All \"survivor\'s\" feel a sense of guilt. Your...
December 12th, 2023 18:28 - Train Tracks (Hapadalecki)
A very poignant poem, filled with sadness and hope. A tale of loss, and...
December 4th, 2023 22:48 - Love Is (Angelia Lamar)
A great definition of love. everything you said is true. I think love is...
December 4th, 2023 22:38 - The Power of Love (Accidental Poet)
A very good poem, this. It struck a chord with me, bringing back memories...
December 4th, 2023 22:31 - Whispered (Neville)
It won\'t be the first time you \"whisper\" in that \"baby\'s ear.\"...
November 14th, 2023 11:39 - Hold It, Swill Then Swallow (Neville)
November 13th, 2023 14:23 - Squeezed Between Our Now and Thens (Neville)
The \"here and now\" are massively different from the \" there and then \"...
November 11th, 2023 17:47 - Outside Nikolai’s Café Bar and Restaurant (Neville)
A pleasant memory, of a brief encounter brought on by attraction and \"a...
November 10th, 2023 11:59 - Blue (Thomas W Case)
A poem of loneliness and despair with scenes depicting that, and at the...
November 10th, 2023 11:47 - Upon Leaving One’s Shadow Behind (Neville)
Seems like one is slowly withdrawing into darkness and the other is trying...
November 9th, 2023 16:25 - Dog Lonely (Teddy.15)
A poem filled with raw honesty and power. It takes a brave soul to reveal...
November 9th, 2023 16:07 - A Whispers\' Breath (Dove)
Beautiful poetry. Sonnet-like in a way.
Very mystical in tone. Loved the...
November 7th, 2023 13:00 - Senryu 3 (Teddy.15)
Great sentiment is this. We all would love for it to happen. We\'ll just...
November 7th, 2023 12:52 - When the Balance Wheel is Broken (Neville)
Hope you\'re OK. Ignore my last comments to you. They were in jest....
November 7th, 2023 12:49 - View Before Lunch (Neville)
This morning I saw a man feeding Seagulls from out of his hand. Thought...
November 6th, 2023 14:16 - How Many Ways Precisely (Neville)
Will anyone ever know how many there are, \"Precisely?\" There may be as...
November 4th, 2023 20:59 - Twisted History the Rape of the Plains People (Neville)
Probably one of the greatest genocides in human history, the elimination...
November 3rd, 2023 15:05 - Carpe Diem Motherfuckers (Thomas W Case)
Today\'s youngsters are slaves to technology. It seems their lives get...
November 2nd, 2023 19:40 - In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself. (Teddy.15)
It made me think what if? What if I could redo what happened \"In The...
November 2nd, 2023 19:32 - Chat Up Lies (Neville)
Some \"chat up\" lines seem phony. Yours at least has some truth to it. I...
November 2nd, 2023 19:26 - Floating Down On a Whisper (Neville)
Ole! As a bull charges toward that falling \"red silk.\" Ole! And that...
November 1st, 2023 12:09 - I See Monsters Eating Quiche (Thomas W Case)
We\'ve all done it one time or another, the thoughtless portrayal of...
November 1st, 2023 11:52 - The Greatest Love Album Ever Written (Teddy.15)
Reading your poem and my computer plays \"Love Hurts\" by the Everly...
October 31st, 2023 16:42 - Tu Es Tout Pour Moi (Neville)
I was taken aback by this one. You \"ache, long, bleed, and love\" and...
October 31st, 2023 15:52 - She Wore Him So Well (Neville)
Better a \"glove\" than a mitten, five times the fun. Seriously, this...
October 30th, 2023 09:58 - Indecent Proposal (Teddy.15)
Perhaps in some ethereal way he already has visited you. Your writing...
October 30th, 2023 09:46 - Birth of a Poet (Thomas W Case)
A poignant poem of discovery. To sense a poetic yearning at 5 years is...
October 29th, 2023 17:50 - On Moving On (Neville)
The burden of being of a certain age. We never think of these things when...
October 29th, 2023 14:00 - Will They Remember Me Well? (Thomas W Case)
Opening and closing lines are full of wisdom. They in turn answer your...
October 27th, 2023 18:44 - This is Us .. (Neville)
This is beautiful and real. It hit me like a gut punch, the last two...
October 27th, 2023 18:37 - call it a drug (Anonymous_Poet)
The muse is a fickle beast, She/he/it comes on their own terms and leaves...
October 25th, 2023 16:22 - POETIC JUSTICE (LIZ)
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