Comments on community poems by Neville

• So dark, I can\'t find a smile (Poetic Dan) Listen to the little golden bird Dan .. He is a wise old bird indeed &...
  October 11th, 2020 01:03
• Sunshine (Dove) I doubt anyone can read these words without feeling a little warm glow .....
  October 11th, 2020 00:57
• Victory Vindicated (Orchidee) I dont know how you can mention Trump like that in a hymn poem .. dont...
  October 10th, 2020 12:35
• a lie became noble (Dusk arising) I am more than happy you have re-posted .. this is my single most...
  October 10th, 2020 09:07
• Never Forget (Fay Slimm.) these words, so perfectly laid, one after the other almost brought tears...
  October 10th, 2020 08:01
• The Things They Do (Lorna) said beautifully .... and I want some of it ...
  October 10th, 2020 04:58
• Laughter Wins. (Goldfinch60) Absolutely true ... a universal truth too ...
  October 10th, 2020 03:08
• Boris (Dusk arising) another visit .. just to say I agree with you entirely and to take...
  October 9th, 2020 11:49
• Balaam\'s Oracles (4) (Orchidee) Not completely forgotten though .. and maybe that is one of your major...
  October 9th, 2020 11:17
• So Met. (Fay Slimm.) I am always amazed at the sheer tenacity and drive to survive many of...
  October 9th, 2020 11:06
• Happy Trad. (Goldfinch60) I know where ya coming from my friend ... but make sure you keep ya eye...
  October 9th, 2020 02:50
• arms trade (Dusk arising) These words are certainly worthy of a second visit .... now dont that...
  October 8th, 2020 17:10
• Thirstless Times - Isaiah Series (5) (Orchidee) Not quite sure what to make of this one Orchidee .. I found it a...
  October 8th, 2020 11:14
• Bucket List Senryu (Lorna) superb ... how I wish I was your pen ..
  October 8th, 2020 04:05
• Trenched. (Fay Slimm.) said just as it was then, and as it needs to be said .. over and over...
  October 8th, 2020 03:35
• Sedoka : Glow of Soft Moonlight (Dove) I thought they made watches .... .... actually this is not only very...
  October 7th, 2020 11:34
• Ode to a Sticky D Key (Lorna) I have a missing G string & Key on my bloomin uitar and PC .. now I\'m...
  October 7th, 2020 08:27
• Praise Professions (Orchidee) I kinda like this hymn ... and poem
  October 7th, 2020 07:02
• Renzi (Dusk arising) I dont know why I never came across this poem before now ... and a fine...
  October 7th, 2020 06:50
• Battle (Fay Slimm.) well you got the sky covered & who is gonna argue with Phoebus eh\' ... ...
  October 7th, 2020 06:43
• Cleansing Our Lifetimes. (Goldfinch60) Nice un GF60 .. and only people make us cry ......
  October 7th, 2020 06:39
• ALPACA SOCKS (Michael Edwards) Not only hilarious and very niftily clever sir ... but a mighty...
  October 7th, 2020 02:18
• ESCAPE (Laura🌻) It has been over a year now since I found these words .. and my word,...
  October 7th, 2020 00:59
• Fear (Dove) there is not a single thing that I knowingly fear .. I do dread the...
  October 7th, 2020 00:53
• somehow something (Dusk arising) This is so bloomin well structured and fits the page which frames it...
  October 6th, 2020 11:43
• Seize Now (Fay Slimm.) another perfect title to introduce the body of a poem that is itself...
  October 6th, 2020 11:32
• Practising And Preaching (Orchidee) I quite like drums and drummers and whilst the guy in the clip aint...
  October 6th, 2020 11:28
• For A While (Lorna) this is one of those that invokes a slow and steady sigh ... filled...
  October 6th, 2020 04:40
• Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60) there will never be another year for you Goldie as bad as the one just...
  October 6th, 2020 02:49
• Lost Loves Memories (Suresh) there is indeed more than just a tinge of sadness here.... ...
  October 5th, 2020 16:30
• Wished-For (Fay Slimm.) You can beat an egg can\'t ya .. but you just cant beat a really good...
  October 5th, 2020 10:11
• Fearless Faith - Isaiah Series (4) (Orchidee) I had an auntie Faith .. she was a missionary in Africa .. and she was ...
  October 5th, 2020 09:56
• Beauty (Dove) This appeals to me no end .. so well writ and of course timely .......
  October 5th, 2020 05:15
• New Joys. (Goldfinch60) I\'m with the guinea pig opposite Andy .. that\'s a fine list of joys...
  October 5th, 2020 04:51
• I Want Her (To Be Mine) (Hpoetry) this is really quite something .. it is clear to your reader that you...
  October 4th, 2020 15:36
• STRUCK (Michael Edwards) I read ya loud n clear .. in between chuckles that is...
  October 4th, 2020 12:37
• the sea (Dusk arising) this has got the ache I used to recognise in the faces of folk I used to...
  October 4th, 2020 12:32
• Kites (Lorna) this is more than just a little Sunday whimsey .... this is the making...
  October 4th, 2020 12:21
• DON’T YOU? (Laura🌻) these words are still applicable ... unfortunately, they are timeless...
  October 4th, 2020 06:15
• Sweetness. (Fay Slimm.) I was drawn not like a poultice or a pen might draw one .. .. but by...
  October 4th, 2020 06:12
• Creation Collaboration (Orchidee) I like animals & the idea of St\' Frank appeals to me greatly .......
  October 4th, 2020 05:50
• I’m Leaning Towards Insane (Dove) Reads like a rainbow .. Ya need to dive right in ... when ya surface...
  October 3rd, 2020 12:50
• Woof, woof! (Orchidee) I like your very occasional \'not hymn poems\' Orchidee .. this one...
  October 3rd, 2020 05:10
• Tide-Turn. (Fay Slimm.) DA just took the words outa my own mouth .. this is another fine example...
  October 3rd, 2020 04:45
• The Winds on Which We Sail (Lorna) You just made me wanna fly a kite .. or just fly maybe .... You can...
  October 3rd, 2020 04:33
• WHAT A MUPPET (Michael Edwards) Seems like Trumps been trumped .. that\'s wot ya get when ya blow ya own...
  October 3rd, 2020 02:08
• keeping it to myself (Dusk arising) This is so sad .. I have known many poets who write along similar lines...
  October 3rd, 2020 02:06
• Playing Fair. (Goldfinch60) Dunno about that Trump issue but I agree with everything else you say...
  October 3rd, 2020 01:37
• The World at My Table. (Goldfinch60) Not only have you made me hungry .. just in time for my breakfast ... ...
  October 3rd, 2020 00:29
• The Moon & Stars (Dove) Surely the most perfect villanelle I have variously visited all day .......
  October 3rd, 2020 00:10
• Gracious Guidance (Orchidee) there but for the grace of gracious guidance go I .. or we or us .....
  October 2nd, 2020 11:07
• Stalled (Fay Slimm.) this is seriously good .. tis ragged and real as they come but with no...
  October 2nd, 2020 08:35
• Palette of the Day (Lorna) ....... If I half close my eyes and focus .. I can see the picture you...
  October 2nd, 2020 06:52
• Was it just a Dream (Dove) I really like the progressive unhurried flow of these words .. from a...
  October 1st, 2020 13:05
• A WINTER NIGHT (Michael Edwards) She is only just around the corner .. We have a log delivery due...
  October 1st, 2020 12:14
• Autumn\'s Glory. (Goldfinch60) Your poetic palette runneth over this fine fall mane Andy .. and what a...
  October 1st, 2020 04:17
• Myself (Fay Slimm.) Having read these words previously .. it was a delight to see them bubble...
  October 1st, 2020 04:07
• Dear Friend (L. B. Mek) I am back here simply because these few words stand tall .... and...
  October 1st, 2020 03:55
• Forward Faintless - Isaiah Series (3) (Orchidee) if there is one ... my bet is that you just got a free pass in ...
  October 1st, 2020 03:43
• Laughter For All. (Goldfinch60) the way it ought to be .... I say bring it on .... you should write a...
  October 1st, 2020 00:58
• Carolyn (Lorna) a little bird just got it write .. perfectly poemed Lorna .. and what...
  October 1st, 2020 00:53
• Entirely Gone (Lorna) unfortunately this is so very relatable and sad .. fortunately, and I am...
  September 30th, 2020 13:54
• “Sonnet” From the Ashes (Dove) I can\'t imagine how I could possibly inspire anyone or anything .. and...
  September 30th, 2020 11:02
• The Undisturbed (Fay Slimm.) If I tried to pretend.. even for a moment that these words, once read...
  September 30th, 2020 07:21
• lies to kill for (Dusk arising) This is not just a poem .. this is actually an exceptional piece of well...
  September 30th, 2020 07:06
• Greatness Of God - Isaiah Series (2) (Orchidee) I must confess, I do struggle with the general Christian conceptualisation...
  September 30th, 2020 06:54
• Long Days (Whimsical_1) Ah but it will, just you wait and see... you are not the only one who...
  September 29th, 2020 13:51
• seeing ..... her way (Dusk arising) By Jove .. I think he\'s got it ... .. this is something else DA .....
  September 29th, 2020 12:56
• crossroads (Dusk arising) there can\'t be many places where there are so many choices on top of...
  September 29th, 2020 10:59
• “ Alluette” Heaven (Dove) wot a lark eh\'... impossible to read without smiling and without...
  September 29th, 2020 10:43
• Shallow Brown. (Goldfinch60) Tis a goodly thing in all its guises
  September 29th, 2020 04:31
• Together (Fay Slimm.) I\'m right there with you .. both beside and behind ya ... I just...
  September 29th, 2020 03:18
• Michaelmas Melody (Orchidee) enjoyed .. now back to bed .. night night
  September 29th, 2020 02:53
• Transmutation (Laura🌻) Beauty is indeed in the eye of the beholder .. beautiful words Laura...
  September 29th, 2020 01:09
• Will She Sing to Me? (Goldfinch60) I dont think you are really asking are ya Andy .. I\'m pretty sure you...
  September 29th, 2020 00:34
• Take One (Fay Slimm.) sadder than sad and truly felt .. the title could not be bettered...
  September 28th, 2020 09:25
• Salvation Song (Orchidee) .... If there is such a place as heaven .. and I hope there is Orchidee...
  September 28th, 2020 07:08
• Dear Friend (L. B. Mek) Brevitas superbicus .. and quite writely ....
  September 28th, 2020 06:21
• rude Awakenings (L. B. Mek) Ah\' .. moments captured eh\' ... this is near perfect and all too...
  September 28th, 2020 04:36
• “ Promises of Vows (Dove) as a man of my word, as a rule, I vow never to make em ... however,...
  September 27th, 2020 12:07
• Enmeshed (Fay Slimm.) this is quite beautifully and intricately crafted .. and whilst I would...
  September 27th, 2020 05:25
• Salvation Seasons (Orchidee) I enjoy these harvest themed hymnal poems so I do .... Cheers Orchidee
  September 27th, 2020 05:21
• SO IT\'S SUNDAY (Michael Edwards) You got Sunday off to a fine art don\'t ya just .. I remember when...
  September 27th, 2020 05:18
• Perfect Victim (A Boy With Roses) once started, I could not stop until the end ... a compelling tale told...
  September 27th, 2020 03:07
• Hope is There. (Goldfinch60) ... a sentiment, philosophy and priceless value statement so well stated...
  September 27th, 2020 03:00
• “a kyrielle “ New Start (Dove) I think without doubt, this is the most perfectly crafted kyrielle that...
  September 26th, 2020 11:19
• “Palindrome” Passion (Dove) How absolutely amazing Romantic Bloom ... I have noted on several...
  September 26th, 2020 11:14
• Cheese Straws. (Goldfinch60) .. In my humble opinion, the only thing wrong with cheese straws, is the ...
  September 26th, 2020 03:41
• Compromise (Fay Slimm.) Having considered these words already, and several times before...
  September 26th, 2020 03:28
• “ Kyrielle Sonnet” Mountain Peaks (Dove) I used to do a lot of mountain climbing .. this made me shiver just...
  September 24th, 2020 14:09
• Sweetness. (Fay Slimm.) Hey... I\'m with L.B and never mind the queue .... a guy could wait all...
  September 24th, 2020 05:24
• Burden Bearers And Sharers (Orchidee) better to be a sharer than a lone bearer ....
  September 24th, 2020 02:05
• Sex Saves Lives. (Goldfinch60) although the sympathy vote has never swung my way before, and its...
  September 24th, 2020 01:41
• Changeling. (Fay Slimm.) .. So beautiful it almost hurts to expel or exhale any of it.... so...
  September 23rd, 2020 16:23
• Clerihews- comic verses (Dove) Hardly bardly, but wunderfully wurdly... Mary had a little duck, she...
  September 20th, 2020 09:31
• Wheat And Weeds (Orchidee) I lost all track of time ... is it that time of year already.. nice :)
  September 20th, 2020 07:42
• IN MEMORIAM TRACY LAMAR WYATT (Jarcher54) sadly and ever so.. but necessarily so .. this poem is quite like your...
  September 20th, 2020 07:38
• Hippie Am I. (Goldfinch60) Brilliant sir... and for what it’s worth, if I could endorse any poem...
  September 20th, 2020 02:59
• Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.) An absolutely great bit o poetry here Fay and even more than just...
  September 20th, 2020 01:05
• Hope of Heavenly Help (Orchidee)
  September 19th, 2020 06:03