Comments on community poems by Neville
- Twice Stirred. (Fay Slimm.)
Damn good in its own write
Calliope is all these things and more... ...
July 27th, 2019 11:00 - THE WHO (FineB)
This is a great tribute to a great band... I saw them three times.. the...
July 27th, 2019 10:29 - without drinking (Dusk arising)
this is such a good poem,.. regardless of the inspiration behind it and...
July 27th, 2019 08:35 - Family Focus (Orchidee)
I think it is important to focus on the family...
Focus is certainly...
July 27th, 2019 04:55 - Fishing Again. (Goldfinch60)
Not quite like riding a bike but hey.. you still got it fella and I am...
July 27th, 2019 01:44 - An Extraordinary Afternoon (Christina8)
well worth the wait .. it seems you did have a delightful afternoon..
I...
July 27th, 2019 00:19 - Thoughts on love (Christina8)
a very impressive and original analysis/poem.. much liked by me.... N
July 26th, 2019 23:47 - Ode to You (SerenWise)
told ya before.. it has just got to be love... a smashing ode to someone...
July 26th, 2019 23:44 - Love Is........ (Suresh)
this is a veritable treatise to love my friend.....
it hurts when its...
July 26th, 2019 10:04 - dusk arises (Dusk arising)
your muse is nocturnal then...
lucky you and all those of us who find...
July 26th, 2019 06:20 - Penitent Prayer (Orchidee)
only if one is truly sorry might they be allowed to forgive themselves......
July 26th, 2019 06:18 - Waking Gently (Christina8)
I\'m with Goldfinch60 on this & all the way.....
July 26th, 2019 06:13 - HAPPENINGS. (Fay Slimm.)
and they call it evolution.... strange that..... I have long called it...
July 26th, 2019 03:47 - Ignorant People. (Goldfinch60)
there\'s nowt as strange as folk ....
July 26th, 2019 01:52 - The catapult clause (Andrew Charles Forrest)
I\'m sure it does mate.. if it dont there\'s going to be hell to pay.... a...
July 25th, 2019 10:28 - Untarnished (Christina8)
this is very good... it is uncomplicated and has a kind of feel good...
July 25th, 2019 06:05 - Thunder (Poetic Dan)
now that\'s more like it... a little bit of optimism goes a long long...
July 25th, 2019 06:02 - Crucifixion? (Goldfinch60)
another great observation and get this, I never knew that...... cheers...
July 25th, 2019 06:00 - Salvation Security (Orchidee)
Do I detect a slight religious flavour herein.........
You have faith...
July 25th, 2019 05:57 - In This Life. (Kevin browne)
Methinks this is more self disclosive than one might at first imagine.......
July 25th, 2019 05:51 - Love\'s Call. (Fay Slimm.)
On reflection, these well crafted words remind me that war is not for...
July 25th, 2019 04:30 - for one another (Dusk arising)
words to remember
well penned, well shared and true...
July 25th, 2019 04:26 - Nurses--An Acrostic (Christina8)
Well constructed and essentially very true................. Neville
July 24th, 2019 14:29 - The \"who\" I shall retain (Poetic Dan)
You are not there yet, are you.. but you have moved forward, and that is...
July 24th, 2019 09:01 - My senses (Christina8)
it aint like this often, so thanks for reminding me that it can be.......
July 24th, 2019 04:53 - DEFENCES. (Fay Slimm.)
the juxtapositioning of the old tree and wise men/people is done...
July 24th, 2019 04:48 - Perseveringly Progressing (Orchidee)
This is a very well constructed hymn poem Orchidee.... it looks great on...
July 24th, 2019 02:11 - Boris (Dusk arising)
Difficult and otherwise troubled times ahead.. I am sure the buffoon wont...
July 24th, 2019 02:05 - Daddy\'s Gone (Christina8)
some people when they are gone, and for whatever reason gone, leave larger...
July 24th, 2019 01:42 - Nature\'s Anger. (Goldfinch60)
Cor blimey, what happened there..... what an amazing thing and described...
July 24th, 2019 01:37 - Sweet Rendezvous (Christina8)
there is a certain appealing charm to this ... kinda free verse rhyme......
July 23rd, 2019 14:52 - Passions (Christina8)
when you said these words are of an erotic nature.. you were not kidding...
July 23rd, 2019 13:12 - Calla Lily (Christina8)
The Calla Lily is indeed a most beautiful thing to behold.. and when spied...
July 23rd, 2019 13:10 - One Last Tear (Christina8)
Bring on tomorrow and start all over...
No more tears but be sure,...
July 23rd, 2019 12:53 - Living in the Moment (Suresh)
I enjoyed these words and could very easily relate to them.... I once...
July 23rd, 2019 11:45 - Dead (Sylviasearcher)
In trying to avoid platitudes, I am presently struggling to find words...
July 23rd, 2019 04:48 - YOU ARE. (Fay Slimm.)
I bet I\'m not the only one who feels these words are meant for them......
July 23rd, 2019 04:45 - Glory Gladness (Orchidee)
it seems you did well to find that clip.... glory be....
July 23rd, 2019 02:59 - when i need (Dusk arising)
there is an ache that threads throughout this post.... and felt strong as...
July 23rd, 2019 02:57 - Everlasting Snow (Christina8)
what a wintry way with words you have my dear ... and what a wonderful way...
July 23rd, 2019 02:07 - Not Knowing (Suresh)
it seems a storm has blown...... N
July 22nd, 2019 14:31 - Of Loneliness (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Terrific in a very sad kind of way.. this is certainly a great write my...
July 22nd, 2019 14:22 - The Soul Remembers (SerenWise)
A beautiful and intriguing title... then followed by a pretty damn good...
July 22nd, 2019 14:10 - A ballet, by Full Moon (Suresh)
Thoroughly enjoyed & then some....
July 22nd, 2019 09:55 - I Talked to A Man (July 20th, 2019) (Nafis Light)
A delightful and otherwise illuminating poem.....
July 22nd, 2019 08:19 - I could never of made it alone (Poetic Dan)
this is what we want to hear, those of us out here who love ya that...
July 22nd, 2019 08:17 - ART (Michael Edwards)
that\'s one hell of a statement .. one hell of a painting and true... N
July 22nd, 2019 04:35 - Manic Monday (Christina8)
I understand the anxiety you weave throughout this fine poem ....
You...
July 22nd, 2019 04:34 - dont ask me why (Dusk arising)
a great poem DA and certainly one that many would relate to I\'m...
July 22nd, 2019 04:19 - UNTELLABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
You have certainly created magic here and these words are quite literally...
July 22nd, 2019 04:18 - strange land (Dusk arising)
you raise some very interesting issues here sir.... reads well and ends...
July 22nd, 2019 04:15 - Greeting My River. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m with the guy with the brush in his hand up there..... nicely penned...
July 22nd, 2019 04:12 - Unbearable! (Orchidee)
I just love it when you deviate from the norm.... an unbearable rant on a...
July 22nd, 2019 04:10 - but unbeaten (Dusk arising)
enjoyed & muchly so...
I particularly like the subtle word play of the...
July 21st, 2019 12:11 - A PLEB\'S WHAT I AM (Michael Edwards)
dunno whether I\'m meant to chuckle but I sure am.... not heard the term...
July 21st, 2019 07:00 - Away! (Sylviasearcher)
I found myself having to read these words through slower than I initially...
July 21st, 2019 03:57 - Witness To The World (Orchidee)
I kinda enjoyed these words sir... feels like I\'ve been away for ever...
July 21st, 2019 03:43 - Words Do Not Matter. (Goldfinch60)
well writ sir.. I reckon I Know where you are coming from
July 21st, 2019 03:40 - The Choir - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
sounds darn good to my sir....
July 21st, 2019 03:38 - PAINTED LADIES. (Fay Slimm.)
you paint an amazing picture of these truly amazing creatures and you seem...
July 21st, 2019 03:36 - A ballet, by Full Moon (Suresh)
a special poem and true..
July 20th, 2019 18:36 - Untitled - II (Suresh)
for a micro moment, I thought about trying to formulate a counter...
July 16th, 2019 00:35 - Snake Dance (Satishverma)
thoroughly enjoyed, thank you for posting...
July 15th, 2019 23:52 - Adrenaline (Christina8)
Very nice.. just what a guy needs before breakfast....
July 15th, 2019 22:31 - Twelve rounds (Poetic Dan)
write on and fight on squire, its not over till the fat lady sings......
July 15th, 2019 22:25 - A Tangle weed Majesty (Philip Daniel Cook)
these words are so very much deserving of one hell of a lot more views and...
July 15th, 2019 05:08 - How To On Deference (Philip Daniel Cook)
Sincerely well scripted sir & thoroughly enjoyed ... write from one end to...
July 15th, 2019 05:06 - Need (Christina8)
this is more than just a short poem about lovers in the dark..... until...
July 15th, 2019 03:36 - She Kissed My Cheek. (Kevin browne)
If there aint love here, I shall eat my next anthology..... Nice one...
July 15th, 2019 02:28 - A ballet (Suresh)
and perfectly executed... do ballets do encores by any...
July 15th, 2019 02:25 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (3) (Michael Edwards)
Truth hurts people, even poets so I\'m told.... wise words indeed.. yours...
July 15th, 2019 02:23 - Witch (Sylviasearcher)
many a true word written in haste
I imagine you are not a witch, but...
July 15th, 2019 02:21 - WINGED. (Fay Slimm.)
simple, to the point and almost contained within a heart shaped poem........
July 15th, 2019 02:16 - Faith Prays And Praises - James Series(9) (Orchidee)
Ah\' Noah\'s song, I know it well....
July 15th, 2019 02:13 - Forgotten. (Goldfinch60)
it happens all the time... but remember, there is safety in numbers and I...
July 15th, 2019 02:01 - Mantra\'s Mistique. (Fay Slimm.)
Pon my very word, we all need such a mantra...... and your final stanza is...
July 14th, 2019 09:43 - Loyalty Limited (Orchidee)
fear is one hell of a motivator ....
is it almost that time of year...
July 14th, 2019 09:31 - Quiet Love (Christina8)
you have a very lucky pen... a pearl of a poem & true...
July 14th, 2019 02:34 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (2) (Michael Edwards)
you have penned a little masterpiece here Michael, tho brief, I think this...
July 14th, 2019 01:48 - My Beautiful Friend, Peace (Gino)
what a delightful message you have woven throughout this well crafted poem...
July 14th, 2019 01:44 - Doves. (Goldfinch60)
Doves are greedy beggars and can be bullies too.... we have a dovecote but...
July 14th, 2019 01:41 - Maybe if... (Suresh)
clever use of diminishing words and much liked by me......
July 14th, 2019 01:10 - Barriers (Satishverma)
a poem filled with feeling and unexpected at that...
they do indeed and...
July 13th, 2019 07:31 - She has me. (Tayama)
I like these words & would very much like to see them liked more....... ...
July 13th, 2019 05:14 - conversation with a weed (Jon Nakapalau)
I\'m not proud, I talk to anything.. and often.... I also enjoyed this...
July 13th, 2019 05:12 - Inside Breath. (Fay Slimm.)
this is indeed an elegant poem, a joy to read and a pleasure to see...
July 13th, 2019 03:54 - I sit by me again offering a hand (Poetic Dan)
Well penned friend.... never give up on hope
okay........................
July 13th, 2019 03:25 - FIRST SIGHTING (Michael Edwards)
Yes sir a fine write indeed & guess what... I am listening to a cuckoo as...
July 13th, 2019 02:43 - Temple Tenancy (Orchidee)
I distinctly recall the story you tell here from when I was a young lad.. ...
July 13th, 2019 02:39 - Action (Suresh)
tis true, tis very true & well said.... N
July 13th, 2019 01:46 - Smaller Mouth. (Goldfinch60)
I see its not just ya mouth you missed, seems like ya miss those old...
July 13th, 2019 01:44 - The Truth Of It (SerenWise)
Here, you do more than just justice to love..... and you do it in such a...
July 13th, 2019 01:41 - THE SUNFLOWER. (Fay Slimm.)
you got the heart of it and that\'s the whole of it........ beautiful...
July 12th, 2019 11:46 - LOST (Kaylss)
A fitfully fine emotionally charged rant of a poem if ever there was.......
July 12th, 2019 04:09 - Darkness Dismissed (Orchidee)
I kind of like your authors notes here orchidee & the positive glow...
July 12th, 2019 04:06 - Life is the plan (Poetic Dan)
every day is a new lesson ... I say learn from each one of em....
July 12th, 2019 04:04 - Guilt Ridden. (Goldfinch60)
You know how I feel about you and your love for Joyce my friend and these...
July 12th, 2019 04:02 - Servitude (Suresh)
I shall agree with ya.. just to be on the safe side & keep my options...
July 12th, 2019 03:59 - Winnow The Wind. (Fay Slimm.)
I am watching the cobwebs play with my own vines this very hot mane... ...
July 12th, 2019 02:29 - THE VILLAGE HALL PACKAGE DEAL (Michael Edwards)
I reckon you have got it just about right with this post Michael.. at...
July 12th, 2019 02:22
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