Comments on community poems by Neville
- Ode to a Sticky D Key (Lorna)
I have a missing G string & Key on my bloomin uitar and PC .. now I\'m...
October 7th, 2020 08:27 - Praise Professions (Orchidee)
I kinda like this hymn ... and poem
October 7th, 2020 07:02 - Renzi (Dusk arising)
I dont know why I never came across this poem before now ... and a fine...
October 7th, 2020 06:50 - Battle (Fay Slimm.)
well you got the sky covered & who is gonna argue with Phoebus eh\' ... ...
October 7th, 2020 06:43 - Cleansing Our Lifetimes. (Goldfinch60)
Nice un GF60 .. and only people make us cry ......
October 7th, 2020 06:39 - ALPACA SOCKS (Michael Edwards)
Not only hilarious and very niftily clever sir ... but a mighty...
October 7th, 2020 02:18 - ESCAPE (Lauraš»)
It has been over a year now since I found these words .. and my word,...
October 7th, 2020 00:59 - Fear (Dove)
there is not a single thing that I knowingly fear .. I do dread the...
October 7th, 2020 00:53 - somehow something (Dusk arising)
This is so bloomin well structured and fits the page which frames it...
October 6th, 2020 11:43 - Seize Now (Fay Slimm.)
another perfect title to introduce the body of a poem that is itself...
October 6th, 2020 11:32 - Practising And Preaching (Orchidee)
I quite like drums and drummers and whilst the guy in the clip aint...
October 6th, 2020 11:28 - For A While (Lorna)
this is one of those that invokes a slow and steady sigh ...
filled...
October 6th, 2020 04:40 - Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60)
there will never be another year for you Goldie as bad as the one just...
October 6th, 2020 02:49 - Lost Loves Memories (Suresh)
there is indeed more than just a tinge of sadness here.... ...
October 5th, 2020 16:30 - Wished-For (Fay Slimm.)
You can beat an egg can\'t ya .. but you just cant beat a really good...
October 5th, 2020 10:11 - Fearless Faith - Isaiah Series (4) (Orchidee)
I had an auntie Faith .. she was a missionary in Africa .. and she was ...
October 5th, 2020 09:56 - Beauty (Dove)
This appeals to me no end .. so well writ and of course timely .......
October 5th, 2020 05:15 - New Joys. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m with the guinea pig opposite Andy .. that\'s a fine list of joys...
October 5th, 2020 04:51 - I Want Her (To Be Mine) (Hpoetry)
this is really quite something .. it is clear to your reader that you...
October 4th, 2020 15:36 - STRUCK (Michael Edwards)
I read ya loud n clear .. in between chuckles that is...
October 4th, 2020 12:37 - the sea (Dusk arising)
this has got the ache I used to recognise in the faces of folk I used to...
October 4th, 2020 12:32 - Kites (Lorna)
this is more than just a little Sunday whimsey .... this is the making...
October 4th, 2020 12:21 - DONāT YOU? (Lauraš»)
these words are still applicable ... unfortunately, they are timeless...
October 4th, 2020 06:15 - Sweetness. (Fay Slimm.)
I was drawn not like a poultice or a pen might draw one ..
.. but by...
October 4th, 2020 06:12 - Creation Collaboration (Orchidee)
I like animals & the idea of St\' Frank appeals to me greatly .......
October 4th, 2020 05:50 - Iām Leaning Towards Insane (Dove)
Reads like a rainbow ..
Ya need to dive right in ... when ya surface...
October 3rd, 2020 12:50 - Woof, woof! (Orchidee)
I like your very occasional \'not hymn poems\' Orchidee .. this one...
October 3rd, 2020 05:10 - Tide-Turn. (Fay Slimm.)
DA just took the words outa my own mouth .. this is another fine example...
October 3rd, 2020 04:45 - The Winds on Which We Sail (Lorna)
You just made me wanna fly a kite .. or just fly maybe .... You can...
October 3rd, 2020 04:33 - WHAT A MUPPET (Michael Edwards)
Seems like Trumps been trumped .. that\'s wot ya get when ya blow ya own...
October 3rd, 2020 02:08 - keeping it to myself (Dusk arising)
This is so sad .. I have known many poets who write along similar lines...
October 3rd, 2020 02:06 - Playing Fair. (Goldfinch60)
Dunno about that Trump issue but I agree with everything else you say...
October 3rd, 2020 01:37 - The World at My Table. (Goldfinch60)
Not only have you made me hungry .. just in time for my breakfast ... ...
October 3rd, 2020 00:29 - The Moon & Stars (Dove)
Surely the most perfect villanelle I have variously visited all day .......
October 3rd, 2020 00:10 - Gracious Guidance (Orchidee)
there but for the grace of gracious guidance go I .. or we or us .....
October 2nd, 2020 11:07 - Stalled (Fay Slimm.)
this is seriously good .. tis ragged and real as they come but with no...
October 2nd, 2020 08:35 - Palette of the Day (Lorna)
....... If I half close my eyes and focus .. I can see the picture you...
October 2nd, 2020 06:52 - Was it just a Dream (Dove)
I really like the progressive unhurried flow of these words .. from a...
October 1st, 2020 13:05 - A WINTER NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
She is only just around the corner ..
We have a log delivery due...
October 1st, 2020 12:14 - Autumn\'s Glory. (Goldfinch60)
Your poetic palette runneth over this fine fall mane Andy .. and what a...
October 1st, 2020 04:17 - Myself (Fay Slimm.)
Having read these words previously .. it was a delight to see them bubble...
October 1st, 2020 04:07 - Dear Friend (L. B. Mek)
I am back here simply because these few words stand tall ....
and...
October 1st, 2020 03:55 - Forward Faintless - Isaiah Series (3) (Orchidee)
if there is one ... my bet is that you just got a free pass in ...
October 1st, 2020 03:43 - Laughter For All. (Goldfinch60)
the way it ought to be ....
I say bring it on .... you should write a...
October 1st, 2020 00:58 - Carolyn (Lorna)
a little bird just got it write .. perfectly poemed Lorna .. and what...
October 1st, 2020 00:53 - Entirely Gone (Lorna)
unfortunately this is so very relatable and sad .. fortunately, and I am...
September 30th, 2020 13:54 - āSonnetā From the Ashes (Dove)
I can\'t imagine how I could possibly inspire anyone or anything .. and...
September 30th, 2020 11:02 - The Undisturbed (Fay Slimm.)
If I tried to pretend.. even for a moment that these words, once read...
September 30th, 2020 07:21 - lies to kill for (Dusk arising)
This is not just a poem .. this is actually an exceptional piece of well...
September 30th, 2020 07:06 - Greatness Of God - Isaiah Series (2) (Orchidee)
I must confess, I do struggle with the general Christian conceptualisation...
September 30th, 2020 06:54 - Long Days (Whimsical_1)
Ah but it will, just you wait and see... you are not the only one who...
September 29th, 2020 13:51 - seeing ..... her way (Dusk arising)
By Jove .. I think he\'s got it ...
.. this is something else DA .....
September 29th, 2020 12:56 - crossroads (Dusk arising)
there can\'t be many places where there are so many choices on top of...
September 29th, 2020 10:59 - ā Alluetteā Heaven (Dove)
wot a lark eh\'...
impossible to read without smiling and without...
September 29th, 2020 10:43 - Shallow Brown. (Goldfinch60)
Tis a goodly thing in all its guises
September 29th, 2020 04:31 - Together (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m right there with you .. both beside and behind ya ...
I just...
September 29th, 2020 03:18 - Michaelmas Melody (Orchidee)
enjoyed .. now back to bed .. night night
September 29th, 2020 02:53 - Transmutation (Lauraš»)
Beauty is indeed in the eye of the beholder .. beautiful words Laura...
September 29th, 2020 01:09 - Will She Sing to Me? (Goldfinch60)
I dont think you are really asking are ya Andy .. I\'m pretty sure you...
September 29th, 2020 00:34 - Take One (Fay Slimm.)
sadder than sad and truly felt ..
the title could not be bettered...
September 28th, 2020 09:25 - Salvation Song (Orchidee)
.... If there is such a place as heaven .. and I hope there is Orchidee...
September 28th, 2020 07:08 - Dear Friend (L. B. Mek)
Brevitas superbicus .. and quite writely ....
September 28th, 2020 06:21 - rude Awakenings (L. B. Mek)
Ah\' .. moments captured eh\' ... this is near perfect and all too...
September 28th, 2020 04:36 - ā Promises of Vows (Dove)
as a man of my word, as a rule, I vow never to make em ...
however,...
September 27th, 2020 12:07 - Enmeshed (Fay Slimm.)
this is quite beautifully and intricately crafted .. and whilst I would...
September 27th, 2020 05:25 - Salvation Seasons (Orchidee)
I enjoy these harvest themed hymnal poems so I do .... Cheers Orchidee
September 27th, 2020 05:21 - SO IT\'S SUNDAY (Michael Edwards)
You got Sunday off to a fine art don\'t ya just ..
I remember when...
September 27th, 2020 05:18 - Perfect Victim (A Boy With Roses)
once started, I could not stop until the end ...
a compelling tale told...
September 27th, 2020 03:07 - Hope is There. (Goldfinch60)
... a sentiment, philosophy and priceless value statement so well stated...
September 27th, 2020 03:00 - āa kyrielle ā New Start (Dove)
I think without doubt, this is the most perfectly crafted kyrielle that...
September 26th, 2020 11:19 - āPalindromeā Passion (Dove)
How absolutely amazing Romantic Bloom ...
I have noted on several...
September 26th, 2020 11:14 - Cheese Straws. (Goldfinch60)
.. In my humble opinion, the only thing wrong with cheese straws, is the ...
September 26th, 2020 03:41 - Compromise (Fay Slimm.)
Having considered these words already, and several times before...
September 26th, 2020 03:28 - ā Kyrielle Sonnetā Mountain Peaks (Dove)
I used to do a lot of mountain climbing .. this made me shiver just...
September 24th, 2020 14:09 - Sweetness. (Fay Slimm.)
Hey... I\'m with L.B and never mind the queue .... a guy could wait all...
September 24th, 2020 05:24 - Burden Bearers And Sharers (Orchidee)
better to be a sharer than a lone bearer ....
September 24th, 2020 02:05 - Sex Saves Lives. (Goldfinch60)
although the sympathy vote has never swung my way before, and its...
September 24th, 2020 01:41 - Changeling. (Fay Slimm.)
.. So beautiful it almost hurts to expel or exhale any of it.... so...
September 23rd, 2020 16:23 - Clerihews- comic verses (Dove)
Hardly bardly, but wunderfully wurdly...
Mary had a little duck, she...
September 20th, 2020 09:31 - Wheat And Weeds (Orchidee)
I lost all track of time ... is it that time of year already.. nice :)
September 20th, 2020 07:42 - IN MEMORIAM TRACY LAMAR WYATT (Jarcher54)
sadly and ever so.. but necessarily so .. this poem is quite like your...
September 20th, 2020 07:38 - Hippie Am I. (Goldfinch60)
Brilliant sir...
and for what itās worth, if I could endorse any poem...
September 20th, 2020 02:59 - Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.)
An absolutely great bit o poetry here Fay and even more than just...
September 20th, 2020 01:05 - Hope of Heavenly Help (Orchidee)
September 19th, 2020 06:03 - Stolen (Fay Slimm.)
Uncompromisingly beautiful dear Fay and deeply moving... almost every...
September 19th, 2020 05:57 - Together. (Goldfinch60)
Sadder than sad and no doubt about it, truer than true...
... I am so...
September 16th, 2020 01:18 - wild horses (Dusk arising)
If there was a section for passion, love and regret... and prizes...
September 15th, 2020 12:27 - Let me Serenade You (Dove)
... Ahā that both reads and feels so bloomin good...
... And I...
September 15th, 2020 10:44 - Intake. (Fay Slimm.)
... There aināt nothin can compare with the Kernow coastline ......
September 15th, 2020 08:40 - Gracious Goldfinch (Orchidee)
.... Nicely poemed Orchidee šš
September 15th, 2020 07:49 - Honey (Delilah)
.......................Sweet :)
September 13th, 2020 01:01 - DOWNTOWN GIRL (Lauraš»)
... a timely, most fitting and fine tribute if ever there was ..
......
September 12th, 2020 14:45 - Water is life and seems alive (š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½)
It seems you have got this most precious of commodities off to a fine art...
September 12th, 2020 04:04 - Chimerical (Fay Slimm.)
... there is something rather ethereal about the sound of distant or...
September 6th, 2020 03:44 - Friday night (when the light is right) AKA Mothballs (Andrew Charles Forrest)
this little gem should appeal not only to us moths mate but to them...
September 6th, 2020 03:39 - Absolutely Stunning! (Goldfinch60)
How amazingly beautiful Andy, you are absolutely spot on sir .. Your...
September 6th, 2020 01:15 - Revival (Fay Slimm.)
Ah\' I recall this little gem.. and enjoy it as much today as i did when...
September 5th, 2020 02:37 - bunch of criminals (Dusk arising)
How absolutely splendid old chap... every one off to a Teee .. hee hee
September 5th, 2020 02:27 - Storm Stilled (Orchidee)
a finely tuned write .. can\'t beat a good storm tho, can ya...
September 5th, 2020 02:21 - Undiluted (Fay Slimm.)
... Me n me mate D A are in complete agreement with regard to how well...
September 4th, 2020 09:11
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