Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat (Neville)
This is too much with too little, Neville. Needs a book or at least an...
November 18th, 2023 02:01 - Conscience (Bella Shepard)
I once worked with a grumpy old bugger (I were young then), whose...
November 17th, 2023 21:11 - An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness (Neville)
Best not the open beach, sadly .
Lock the door, draw the curtains...oh,...
November 17th, 2023 17:39 - Rights that are left (Sorenbarrett)
Up to your usual neat puzzle poem standard Soren.
Not sure man has the...
November 16th, 2023 15:07 - They lie beneath (Tallisman)
Definitely worth it\'s place in War Poetry - Owen and Sassoon would...
November 16th, 2023 06:42 - Bad poetry (Tallisman)
You deserve a response here, Tallisman. Thanks for the prompt. A moral...
November 16th, 2023 06:29 - Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter (Neville)
What a textured environment you grew up in Neville, rich in verbal colour....
November 16th, 2023 06:09 - Promises (Arqios)
From data storage to artificial lawns via AI, I got it alright - sums up...
November 16th, 2023 05:53 - Is It Me! (Goldfinch60)
Yes!!!! 😂
November 16th, 2023 05:29 - Gaza in tears (NafisaSB)
And so it goes with all wars.... of which there appear to be a never...
November 16th, 2023 01:21 - Now Looking Back With Anticipation (Neville)
With the sole exception of the tea choice, I cannot but feel myself in...
November 16th, 2023 01:12 - Self-Pity (Kayla Jackson)
There\'s a confession for you - shows plenty of self awareness.
September 28th, 2023 20:12 - Blind poet (Sorenbarrett)
You like the challenges (done in different schemes before) None the worse...
September 27th, 2023 18:06 - Do Shut Up Sometimes... (Orchidee)
You stay exactly where you are, and I think I will manage.
Met too many...
September 27th, 2023 02:26 - CRADLE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
On one level I like the simplicity and your usual polish.
But please,...
September 27th, 2023 02:19 - Bitter old man (EvenwheniLie)
Not... quite... sure... about... this...one ...at... all................
September 27th, 2023 02:05 - My Global Panorama (Joseph C Ogbonna)
National Geographic cover….” fantasize” ….. “dream” –...
September 26th, 2023 18:41 - In the Wake of a Wish (Neville)
Much depended on the hand I was delt - not a good \'un, but I played it to...
September 26th, 2023 04:57 - sixteen (Whispersaroundyou)
Keep us informed - month by month. You\'ll outlast me, that\'s for...
September 26th, 2023 04:35 - Late Kate (Cynthiavkelly)
Fun to read also, not just because of the rhyme, to which I\'m addicted,...
September 25th, 2023 20:23 - Ned’s View (Neville)
OK – going to attempt to parse this conundrum.
Ned…Ned Kelly? Nah, I...
September 25th, 2023 04:34 - Washed Away (Teddy.15)
I have absolutely no idea how your brain is wired (and, I admit, have been...
September 25th, 2023 04:15 - Simple Life. (Goldfinch60)
Story of my life, my friend....
September 25th, 2023 04:09 - Acronyms (2781)
Can relate to that - the number of times I have to resort to Prof Google...
September 25th, 2023 04:06 - FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD (Bobby O)
Not normally keen on on offerings of advice in poetic form here.
But...
September 24th, 2023 19:39 - Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House (Neville)
\"The end of the affair\"?
Subtle and neat. Though I read through twice...
September 24th, 2023 18:22 - Such A Beautiful Game. (Goldfinch60)
Still trying to understand Union. There are utube explanations, which I...
September 24th, 2023 06:29 - Mockingbird (Sorenbarrett)
Liked the tenor of your argument, Soren.
Birds, like humans are a pretty...
September 23rd, 2023 21:33 - Wants and needs (Hzugman)
Wot happens to Profits if everyone took your advice,...
September 23rd, 2023 21:11 - Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James (Parisab)
Thanks for the introduction, Parisab. Decided to find her and what she was...
September 23rd, 2023 20:52 - Origins of a terrorist (EvenwheniLie)
Nihilism personified and versified in your usual get to the root of it all...
September 23rd, 2023 20:29 - When My Heart Fell in Love (Neville)
I\'m leaving this one for those as do this kind of response...
September 23rd, 2023 02:35 - MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN (Bobby O)
Moral tale - powerful piece of advice........
That\'s.. (is.. was).....
September 23rd, 2023 01:48 - If we are not wise compassion will be our demise (A thought) (Sorenbarrett)
I don’t think we have evolved sufficiently to make that kind of choice,...
September 22nd, 2023 06:15 - NO MUSE (Twizzle48)
An accomplished piece, which says plenty about poetic inspiration.
Thanks...
September 22nd, 2023 06:06 - A Very Brief Moment (Teddy.15)
So that\'s how traffic jams occurred in London.....😂
September 22nd, 2023 05:53 - Accumulations (Neville)
History…that’s wot they woz…they’ve been well analyzed above, so...
September 22nd, 2023 05:45 - Music To Normality. (Goldfinch60)
As portrayal of a moment in (your) time, I cannot fault that, Andy.
September 22nd, 2023 05:25 - I have been waiting for you. (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
You could rework that poem and turn it into a meditation.....🙂
PS Your...
September 21st, 2023 19:40 - Nothing to Write About (Pop64)
Thanks Michael Hzugman for bothering to respond when I didn\'t even...
September 21st, 2023 17:39 - Nothing to Write About (Pop64)
I don\'t even have to empathise - just am in that state most of the time....
September 21st, 2023 09:08 - Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind (Neville)
My goodness golly gosh they must\'ve solved it for you above (if indeed...
September 21st, 2023 04:55 - Life Is Like A Song (Teddy.15)
Very deep, Teddy.
September 21st, 2023 01:43 - Poets Speak Out (Keith Jeffries)
Some can be........not sure all are......
Like your style.
September 20th, 2023 17:30 - Charing Cross Station (Keith Jeffries)
Bought back some ancient memories of my homeland and stamping ground...and...
September 20th, 2023 17:27 - Our Greatest Enemy (Keith Jeffries)
Worth a second, third or so read. I must keep this short, otherwise I will...
September 20th, 2023 17:16 - A Childlike Faith (Orchidee)
It may just be that over time you have gathered that I\'m not much into...
September 20th, 2023 04:53 - Have you ever (Sorenbarrett)
Sorry Soren. While I appreciate the richness of your imagery, any mention...
September 20th, 2023 04:34 - Ladybird (Teddy.15)
Nice to know the lashing will be smooth and hygienic.... LOL
September 20th, 2023 04:24 - Nature\'s Artwork. (Goldfinch60)
Speak for yourself, Son....no reason to gloat........ I\'m on my way to...
September 20th, 2023 04:18 - When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly (Neville)
Oo arr Jim, she be knowing what t\'is all about - look, the evidence be in...
September 20th, 2023 00:33 - Paradise !!! (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba)
Don\'t know much about popular music, so missed that connection...
September 19th, 2023 19:17 - Russell Brand, It\'s All Planned (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Not quite sure what you are saying here...What about the totally unproven...
September 19th, 2023 04:42 - Too Many Maybe’s (Neville)
Wot\'s this - a confessional?
You laying on a couch while another...
September 19th, 2023 04:35 - American superstar (EvenwheniLie)
Captured: the hideous superficiality of it all....
You really chewed on...
September 19th, 2023 04:22 - Unity\'s Struggle: The American Dichotomy (GeekSusie)
Failed State?
September 18th, 2023 18:14 - A Summer Affair (MendedFences27)
What\'s to be said here that hasn\'t been said above?....that last...
September 18th, 2023 17:30 - Mary (Neville)
I\'m going for context (I\'m in a contextual mood today)... Wasn\'t...
September 18th, 2023 04:56 - Of Mice And Pork Pies (Orchidee)
Yeh, well you are getting brave....VC on the way if you continue to serve...
September 18th, 2023 04:30 - SAILBOAT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
I have some sympathy for Roman Ragavan\'s position.
ln this imperfect...
September 18th, 2023 04:20 - Deluded (Kevin Michael Bloor)
You have been around this place (MPS) a long time - your work here always...
September 18th, 2023 00:54 - I am human (NafisaSB)
Never knew you are puny - don\'t believe it anyway.
Now then, you may...
September 17th, 2023 22:34 - Grace (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
(+1): Waste of time and energy even contemplating religion (though as a...
September 17th, 2023 21:59 - Mamma\'s Winter Coat (Bella Shepard)
Nostalgia - so rich I almost felt I knew that coat and would be looking...
September 17th, 2023 21:36 - Young Moon Killers (Parisab)
Parisab, your very short three liner made for some very interesting...
September 17th, 2023 20:57 - Swinging Topiary Trio (Summersounds68)
Alibaba rides again.... still, as the inspiration for a neat piece of...
September 16th, 2023 19:35 - Gracious Goodness (Orchidee)
Seems you got them all moving (wot kind of moving??) in the same...
September 16th, 2023 19:26 - Young Moon Killers (Parisab)
A situation (your second proposition) I\'m not familiar with.
What is...
September 16th, 2023 19:19 - The All-Nite Cafe (MendedFences27)
Yes - but it was a very long time ago, Phil.
Have I detected the...
September 16th, 2023 19:06 - i am just me (NafisaSB)
Please know I haven\'t ignored your poem, but do find your comment...
September 16th, 2023 17:01 - I am human (NafisaSB)
Don\'t scare me off, will you...... Feel like I\'m walking on...
September 16th, 2023 16:46 - The Misguided Dance of Digital Discourse (GeekSusie)
Couldn\'t be without - my choice to engage or ignore.. This time...
September 16th, 2023 16:29 - When All Said and Done it’s All Over (Neville)
Owwww (howl to the moon - in case you are tone deaf and couldn\'t...
September 16th, 2023 06:41 - Through the Eyes of Never Enough (GeekSusie)
Welcome back to English for a while (I\'m hesitant to trust Google...
September 15th, 2023 20:24 - Petrols down (2781)
A well wrought piece which depicts a situation I recognise all too...
September 15th, 2023 19:49 - The Night Visitor Arrived (Summersounds68)
A dream which involves a phantom visitor, ghost busters and an Amazon...
September 15th, 2023 19:21 - Soaring Heights of Platitude (Bliss)
Must keep (fave) this one for future reference. My occasional campaign...
September 15th, 2023 19:03 - Golden Memories (Dove)
Good \'un , Dove. Smooth as silk on a subject, memories which help to keep...
September 15th, 2023 06:44 - Doggy Style (Teddy.15)
Prada bag a knock off - look at the stitching....😇!!!
September 15th, 2023 02:25 - My People (EvenwheniLie)
Keep at it. Although I sometimes only partially get where you are coming...
September 15th, 2023 02:20 - The Grieving Silence of An Empty House (Neville)
Recent discussions? A bit Zen? Don\'t you do that alone?
I feel the...
September 15th, 2023 02:12 - Bold Battlers (Orchidee)
I really don\'t understand you, Sir Orchi NS - after all that your...
September 14th, 2023 04:37 - The Sound of Darkness (Neville)
Gonna UFFFF offff an stay outa this - too full ov metaphor for me......
September 14th, 2023 04:19 - Sitting on a Cornflake (Summersounds68)
Thought that woz you last Saturday.............. Does Kellogg\'s pay up...
September 13th, 2023 19:31 - U-Haul Trucks aren\'t Allowed in Heaven (Summersounds68)
A truth. Wherever I end up (and I\'m not sure it is heaven or anywhere...
September 13th, 2023 19:23 - Cracks on the Sidewalk (Summersounds68)
Be of good cheer Ss68 is back! I\'m sure it is going to get better...😂
September 13th, 2023 19:16 - The Internet (Joseph C Ogbonna)
Precisely that - both pros and cons: but more pros than cons since each of...
September 13th, 2023 18:42 - Life\'s Circumference (Pop64)
That was a fun write. NYC sounds like a dangerous place to be walking...
September 13th, 2023 18:25 - A Bit Dry - Ramblings (Orchidee)
The agony and ambivalence of being a persistent poet, Sir Orchi...
September 13th, 2023 05:50 - That Day Came. (Goldfinch60)
Disclosed your old history with Kathleen Ferrier, Andy? 😆
September 13th, 2023 04:37 - One\'s nation (Sonal monhyung)
I understand you are twelve, so by rights I should leave you alone and let...
September 13th, 2023 04:31 - Forbidden Love (Stephwrites)
Have you just confessed that you are responsible for climate change and...
September 12th, 2023 19:20 - Three-Fourths Time (Sorenbarrett)
Experimental poetry?....well it felt experimental to a traditional plodder...
September 12th, 2023 19:07 - Abundant Carelessness (EvenwheniLie)
Bloody glad I don\'t live where you are, Mate
September 12th, 2023 05:47 - Prayer Petitioning (Orchidee)
Sir Orch NS, you have blinded me with numbers this time. Given up on Non...
September 12th, 2023 05:27 - THE STREETS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The ‘class war’ , some would argue, is dead.
BS. It’s just that the...
September 12th, 2023 05:13 - Ghetto Girls (Neville)
Keep \'em at it - encourage (or perhaps not even encourage, knowing the...
September 12th, 2023 04:41 - 9/11/2021 (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba)
Shocking. Innocent people die in war.
September 11th, 2023 16:23 - My Little Fantasy (Bella Shepard)
A teaser, Bella. I know - you will tell me that it is YOUR fantasy, and...
September 11th, 2023 16:20 - Be One This Day (9-11 rememberance) (Pop64)
Tragic, terrifying. Innocent people die in war.
September 11th, 2023 07:52
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