Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Polar Bear (Thinkerbell)
Don\'t delude yourself - there\'s nothing \'dear\' about me....🙃
February 27th, 2023 22:52 - Indifferent Nature (Fay Slimm.)
Frozen shoulder is indifferent too. I hope it doesn\'t last as long as...
February 27th, 2023 18:48 - I AM THE GREATEST POET ALIVE (Ok Waleed)
Get over yourself OK? 🙂
February 27th, 2023 18:14 - Polar Bear (Thinkerbell)
Given the trajectory the climate is on, the only polar bears alive will be...
February 27th, 2023 17:49 - Pandemic ITU ([email protected])
My fullest and undying (haven\'t had it yet - fully vaccinated and...
February 27th, 2023 17:35 - Hesitant to be neighborly (EvenwheniLie)
You don\'t know what bull shit is until you\'ve seen...
February 27th, 2023 17:20 - \"Mental Breakdown\" (Lv_2shiestyyy)
Existential questions.
February 27th, 2023 17:13 - Just in Case it Still Matters (Neville)
Orchi and the making up of the numbers....... I\'m doing my...
February 27th, 2023 06:12 - Insanity (Sorenbarrett)
I\'m no stranger to delusional folks, Soren, but could I request a little...
February 27th, 2023 05:15 - Sowing And Reaping (Orchidee)
Wow ..I didn\'t realise...I\'d have been more careful where I put it about...
February 27th, 2023 04:36 - Greenhouse Childhood (Arobot)
Solid message I like. Sooner or later those fragile beings surely must get...
February 26th, 2023 19:54 - Painting (Addy)
Some paintings....
February 26th, 2023 19:41 - The War Against Art (Ok Waleed)
Thanks, Mate. \'I was inspired heavily...\' By?
February 26th, 2023 19:39 - Mean for no reason (EvenwheniLie)
Thanks. The whole culture is shit.
February 26th, 2023 05:35 - The Creature from The City Of Lamps (Andino)
Since you have not told me anything about yourself, not read or commented...
February 26th, 2023 05:08 - Always Singularly Noticed (Neville)
Orchi, you are so deluded - It\'s me he\'s on about.... \"Under no...
February 26th, 2023 05:01 - Mission To Mankind (Orchidee)
His boss asked a lot of him....not sure he was being entirely fair -...
February 26th, 2023 04:54 - Winterlude (Neville)
Seem to remember some bloke walking on water...though it was a long time...
February 25th, 2023 19:49 - Winterlude (Neville)
Out of my depth there, Nev - I hope the ice is firm...🙂
February 25th, 2023 16:56 - When Jannis sang the blues (Sorenbarrett)
Agreed - Janis had something...no, more than something... A fitting...
February 25th, 2023 05:39 - Justice And Judgement (Orchidee)
I\'m beginning to believe you are older than that Lord... Do you pay rent...
February 25th, 2023 05:20 - AT OUR AGE!! (Goldfinch60)
\"We just do not understand,\" - That line, please eliminate. It occurs...
February 25th, 2023 05:06 - Michael Jackson (EvenwheniLie)
Not a healthy relationship? None of his latter years sound very healthy...
February 25th, 2023 00:30 - Where is the Naughty Step? (CST)
The situation is very deep, but as a working title \'Exasperated\' would...
February 25th, 2023 00:22 - I call out to you Nurse (CST)
I\'m really glad you received a good response - I missed out on you...
February 24th, 2023 17:58 - Returning Repentants (Orchidee)
Nah, Don\'t let\'s repent - just move on and let them pile up. You can...
February 24th, 2023 07:45 - When the Walls Were Magnolia (Neville)
You don\'t have to fess up to the identity of the \'he\' do you, Nev........
February 24th, 2023 07:35 - Footprints. (Goldfinch60)
They have to be special, but yes, they certainly do (or have) existed,...
February 24th, 2023 07:26 - The Kimono (Madam Butterfly not here). (Doggerel Dave)
So there you have it: Madam Butterfly was not involved in the making of...
February 24th, 2023 01:13 - Circle Of Life (Bella Shepard)
Your circle of life is really a link in a chain I feel, Bella. As you step...
February 24th, 2023 01:04 - Mama Said (Bella Wren)
Experiential learning.
February 24th, 2023 00:46 - Time for... (Orchidee)
Don\'t tell me you are taking Fido out for a walk? How can you let loose...
February 23rd, 2023 04:17 - Normal...right? (Ash :))
\"I hate myself and I hate my life
But I\'m a teenager so it\'s normal...
February 23rd, 2023 04:04 - Scientific breakthroughs (EvenwheniLie)
Greed is the word, mate - it pervades every level of a hierarchical...
February 23rd, 2023 03:44 - Blessings In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Not rebellion, Andy - just means you have enough dosh not to worry.
February 23rd, 2023 03:38 - A Brief Inconvenience (Neville)
Really? He took the subtle hint?
Wot a sensitive soul......
Thanks, Nev...
February 23rd, 2023 03:33 - Humble Heard (Orchidee)
Don\'t often turn out for your hymn poems orchi, but one part line caught...
February 23rd, 2023 00:43 - my everything. (Ayathebest55)
Better diversify - Poetry of the \'He did me wrong\' variety is an...
February 23rd, 2023 00:28 - Words and questions (Sorenbarrett)
Although I think you are over egging it slightly Soren, I do believe it...
February 22nd, 2023 17:41 - We Are Marching To The Beat Of Who\'s Drum? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
The situation seems, right now to go from bad to worse.
A neat summary of...
February 22nd, 2023 17:28 - War before peace (EvenwheniLie)
It never ends, does it?
A truthful portrayal of the situation right now.
February 22nd, 2023 06:26 - I Matter, To Me (Mara \"Marzipan\")
You learnt from your experience, learnt to make better initial choices -...
February 22nd, 2023 06:16 - Cloudy Coffee Day. (Goldfinch60)
Got me there, Andy. I tend to be with Soren (above) on this one....
February 22nd, 2023 06:10 - Postulate (EvenwheniLie)
You saying there is some meaning to it all, even if it is only pain?...
February 21st, 2023 22:09 - The Convolutionals (EvenwheniLie)
I repeat, as often as I can: Man made God in his own image and then...
February 21st, 2023 21:55 - They want to look up your butt hole… (EvenwheniLie)
What are you psychic? You cannot tell if I was upset. Only I can know...
February 21st, 2023 21:51 - Past and present (EvenwheniLie)
The past as justification for today\'s retribution - no!
The past as a...
February 21st, 2023 18:24 - They want to look up your butt hole… (EvenwheniLie)
😆 You didn\'t.
February 21st, 2023 17:48 - Taken From a Diary Found (Neville)
Get away with it in the stiff canteen....?
Better than the mile high...
February 21st, 2023 03:24 - Togethering (Fay Slimm.)
Would that it were so, Fay...let\'s hope...
February 21st, 2023 01:28 - Grim reaper (Addy)
Not too keen on your Grim Reaper my self.....probably just a matter of...
February 20th, 2023 18:58 - Why (Zuzu)
There is nothing fair in this world. Understand that, swallow it and get...
February 20th, 2023 18:40 - Lullaby Of Sin (Iva Hotko)
The ephemeral stuff which result from my personal circumstances mean all...
February 20th, 2023 18:36 - Freethinker (Medium Rare) (Gary Edward Geraci)
Agreed - no thought is actually free or totally new, it always comes from...
February 20th, 2023 18:21 - Finding connection in the disconnection (Sophenia)
There\'s nothing wrong with being alone - as you rightly point out, you...
February 20th, 2023 07:20 - Don\'t trust residential streets (Norman Flagtea)
I know this is humorous, but haven\'t enough knowledge of the culture to...
February 20th, 2023 03:56 - It Should Never Happen To a Vet (Neville)
Absobloodylutely, Nev.
There are nothing but casualties - the only...
February 20th, 2023 03:45 - Now hear this (Hzugman)
Sage advice, H.
Considered before being acted out?
February 19th, 2023 20:17 - Nursing Home Nurse (Charles69)
Are you (or they - I\'m a little confused) paid enough?
Sounds like the...
February 19th, 2023 20:12 - Blow Wind (Bella Shepard)
Just the kind of greeting I need when I step outside on these very hot...
February 19th, 2023 20:03 - Ghandi (what legends are made of) (Sorenbarrett)
Without in anyway attempting to diminish Christ and Buddha, Gandhi should...
February 19th, 2023 05:13 - Two Odd Numbers (Neville)
Two odd numbers? I\'m not sure which, either the baked beans or the Kama...
February 19th, 2023 04:55 - Redundant Crows (Neville)
Really feel I should have used \'murmurations\' somewhere..... I\'ll keep...
February 18th, 2023 20:32 - Barmy Birthday! (Orchidee)
I wrote you a very long exquisitely (even if I do say so myself) worded...
February 18th, 2023 20:16 - A New Widow\'s Winters Night by brenniewebb (Brenniewebb)
Nice to hear - but no one knows who he is? You know who he is ....fame is...
February 18th, 2023 20:06 - Fear the reaper (Madeleinedutronc)
If everything is meaningless, then why fear your reaper? Be extracted from...
February 18th, 2023 19:55 - Everything is Fake (Plumeria.flower12)
In all probability you are suffering a dissociative state. Get it fixed.
February 18th, 2023 19:53 - My ebbing physical prowess and strength (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Know how you feel...although I doubt I could open up quite like...
February 18th, 2023 19:49 - The Self-Crowned Emperor Of The French (Joseph C Ogbonna)
I “Don\'t know much about history” – or at least, not that early...
February 18th, 2023 19:44 - My Nordic Christmas Story (Joseph C Ogbonna)
I love the idea of Nigeria (where you claim to be from), subject to “icy...
February 18th, 2023 19:41 - Tomorrow (Chris Duffy)
The agony of it all... right to end it that way - truth will out, Chris....
February 17th, 2023 19:22 - Taking My Shot (FallingAwake2)
The only redeeming feature of this piece (apart from the fact that it is...
February 17th, 2023 19:03 - Existential Angst (FallingAwake2)
I\'ll pay that one; extend it to \"I never asked to be born who I am\" and...
February 17th, 2023 18:54 - I Am American (August)
Why on earth would anyone aspire to be American, or (I add quickly, before...
February 17th, 2023 18:42 - Courage (Iva Hotko)
Haven\'t quite put my head down yet...
Sturdy definition, Iva....
February 17th, 2023 05:28 - That person was you (Arie_jac)
That\'s life - a learning experience. Do it.
Enjoy your stay at MPS.
February 17th, 2023 05:17 - They\'ll Cut Off The Lights And Gas Tomorrow.... (Charles69)
Succinct neat poem about a situation which afflicts too many in so called...
February 17th, 2023 05:03 - One Day Perhaps (Neville)
Wow - not often we hear of that from you, Nev....perfection....🙂
Your...
February 17th, 2023 04:43 - In my head (Jessica rose)
With all due respect to charles69 above, his churchy religious way is...
February 17th, 2023 01:25 - If I vanished... (ModernPoemLover)
Maybe no one does much...and that\'s alright too ...who wants to be...
February 16th, 2023 19:35 - Africa\'s vote (Isa)
You write for fun? Then I don\'t understand your poem at all!!
Care to...
February 16th, 2023 19:01 - a plastic flower (Georgiaa)
Sad alright - please move on....
February 16th, 2023 18:53 - A Future In Ashes (Archdoom)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-155649
February 16th, 2023 06:20 - Dance of Love (Iva Hotko)
You promised something controversial. Nothing controversial there - what...
February 16th, 2023 06:16 - Kindness Of Snow. (Goldfinch60)
Remember the slush as it melts.......🙂
February 16th, 2023 06:06 - Fully engaged (Billy Birch)
Now that orchi has done his thing I understand...but why so coy? Couldn\'t...
February 16th, 2023 06:03 - For Everfriends Everywhere (Neville)
Which one of the 64 friends you have here woz it?
February 16th, 2023 05:59 - Modern Times (Chris Duffy)
You old grouch....all too miserably familiar, Chris. Cheered me up...
February 16th, 2023 05:53 - It wasn\'t long ago (Thinkerbell)
A beautifully rendered piece which captures some of the trauma both...
February 15th, 2023 20:38 - The Death of Joy (Archdoom)
Absurd? Agreed - But for me anyone who uses such terminology as \'the...
February 15th, 2023 07:32 - Eyes of The Past (Asher)
You may want it to be up to my interpretation - I want you to state...
February 15th, 2023 07:03 - Oldest And Youngest. (Goldfinch60)
The thought of you acting crazily boggles the mind, Andy - but point well...
February 15th, 2023 06:57 - A Time for Everything (Neville)
I read that all the dust in my place which I have hitherto blamed on the...
February 15th, 2023 06:53 - The World Is Still Young (Iva Hotko)
Not keen on love poetry, but still wrapped up in your words and
February 15th, 2023 06:46 - The Death of Joy (Archdoom)
I won\'t be reading many of yours, Sir - they are too bloody grim.
And...
February 15th, 2023 06:40 - Precisely As it Did Not Happen (Neville)
Well who\'d have thought ?.............................. I cannot but...
February 14th, 2023 20:08 - Anti-valentine (M.E.M.)
My feelings/attitudes conveyed in their entirety - though expressed here...
February 14th, 2023 19:53 - Hopeless Romantic (A Poem on Valentine’s Day) (AuburnScribbler)
I\'m not good on the topic of love, so despite the fact that it was you,...
February 14th, 2023 19:46 - Zoning Out is Easier (Andy Kemp)
Going to float through MPS too?
If you do put your feet down at MPS for...
February 14th, 2023 19:41 - Desire (Iva Hotko)
The whole poem is a whisper, polished and complete.... complete, that is,...
February 14th, 2023 19:33
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