Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- Reef (Neville)
Paints a picture - wish I were there now .......ππ
February 26th, 2022 09:53 - A Senryu Attempt (Rozina)
Welcome to the world of the 575s - I prefer to avoid calling them by...
February 26th, 2022 03:24 - One Of Two. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like a great evening despite....
Cry me a river - only one...
February 26th, 2022 03:17 - We\'ll Be the Sunrise! (Haiku/SenryΕ« #2) (Rocky Lagou)
Welcome to the world of 575s - a great form if you forget the strict rules...
February 25th, 2022 14:56 - broken wing (Dusk arising)
Well I\'ve read it several times and still unsure how to interpret it -...
February 25th, 2022 14:51 - the love which made us who we are (Dusk arising)
I\'ve ever only known two loves: the love of my family and the love of my...
February 24th, 2022 14:48 - Singing In Love. (Goldfinch60)
May your singing continue for ever - but don\'t ask Orchi to join in.
February 24th, 2022 10:28 - Another South West Coastal Path Miracle (Neville)
This is so so good - inspired - hope you are well.
February 24th, 2022 04:26 - Where Went Love ? (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful words.
February 22nd, 2022 14:50 - Persevering Purpose (Orchidee)
Nice one O
February 22nd, 2022 14:49 - At One With Nature Once More. (Goldfinch60)
A super feel good write - I went for a walk in a local Botanic Garden and...
February 22nd, 2022 14:47 - The Last Ghost (Paul Bell)
Original and a captivating read - super write.
February 18th, 2022 16:08 - 22 Today? (Orchidee)
And I recall William slipping in Fido\'s poo and the arrow that went into...
February 18th, 2022 16:02 - Making It Perfect. (Goldfinch60)
Revenge comes sweet so never curse
and should the raging winds get...
February 18th, 2022 10:36 - Deliverance Dawnings (Orchidee)
Nice one Orchi
February 17th, 2022 12:41 - Limerick Attempts (Rozina)
Welcome to the Grand Order of The Elite Writers Of Loony Limericks - two...
February 17th, 2022 12:27 - but unbeaten (Dusk arising)
Another top notcher dusk - never call it a day.
February 17th, 2022 12:19 - Living Souls (Paul Bell)
This held me from the first line - love it Paul.
February 17th, 2022 12:17 - Filthy Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Without swearing I,m afraid most of the so-called modern comedians would...
February 17th, 2022 03:09 - Love\'s Dues (Fay Slimm.)
Love does indeed compose a duet - great words Fay.
February 14th, 2022 14:40 - Pursuing Praises (Orchidee)
Thumbs up Orchi
February 13th, 2022 07:31 - The People Who Matter. (Goldfinch60)
In this context (but not in all) those two last lines are so right. A...
February 13th, 2022 03:06 - quench (Dusk arising)
A real corker with such original lines - love it and a fave.
February 13th, 2022 02:59 - Thinking Old. (Goldfinch60)
Wise words Andy
February 11th, 2022 03:21 - Help Is At Hand (Orchidee)
Miss Berles needs a hand - she\'s expecting another delivery of syllables.
February 10th, 2022 13:35 - Full Bloom (Paul Bell)
A real joy of a read - top notch.
February 10th, 2022 12:12 - Timed (Fay Slimm.)
Just read dusks SOL and now this - a double bonus day to be sure
February 10th, 2022 12:08 - Multicultural Meal. (Goldfinch60)
A heart warmimg write Andy.
February 10th, 2022 12:06 - Sol (Dusk arising)
And its top marks from me - a stunner of a write.
February 10th, 2022 12:04 - Home (Lorna)
Words magically woven - super read dear Lorna.
February 8th, 2022 15:27 - downstream day (Dusk arising)
So original - don\'t know why but it put me in mind of a favourite track...
February 8th, 2022 15:19 - Sheep Service (Orchidee)
Did it ewe long to write it Orchi?
February 8th, 2022 15:17 - Forever And Beyond. (Goldfinch60)
I followed your journey here on MPS which was so touching - to think you...
February 8th, 2022 15:15 - Me more (Missy)
Not my kind of poem - well not usually - but this one my attention from...
February 5th, 2022 09:45 - Question Of Sport. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m afraid I\'m not into hopping , skipping, jumping, bat and ball, but...
February 5th, 2022 09:41 - Ode to Dead Bird (Sylviasearcher)
My kind of poetry - to the point and so poetic - Superb write.
February 2nd, 2022 15:38 - Beauty (Fay Slimm.)
Super work Fay.
February 2nd, 2022 15:36 - Gedling memories (Dusk arising)
I pictured this as I read it through - I was there - well i was once a...
February 2nd, 2022 15:35 - Peace Presentation (Orchidee)
Thumbs up Orchi
February 2nd, 2022 15:31 - I\'m a Woolgatherer (Rocky Lagou)
Something quite different - enjoyed the read.
February 2nd, 2022 15:29 - Some People. (Goldfinch60)
Why is it on every committee on which I serve there is one, just one with...
February 2nd, 2022 05:20 - Back Then (Fay Slimm.)
Melancholic tides
sweep slowly
as memory recalls
back then.
And...
January 31st, 2022 10:17 - To Fade Without Warning (Neville)
Fay\'s right - a unique style, and a read to make you think.
January 31st, 2022 10:11 - Fat Cat (Rozina)
Great fun read - not that cats are my favourite animals.
January 31st, 2022 10:06 - Devotional Ditty (Orchidee)
Short and sweet
January 31st, 2022 10:04 - Beauty Within. (Goldfinch60)
Great positiveness - thats a long word - long live optimism.
January 31st, 2022 05:10 - Mercy In Mourning (Orchidee)
Great write O
January 24th, 2022 09:17 - That First Sign. (Goldfinch60)
Helebores, cyclamen, snowdrops primroses all in bloom in mine but no daffs...
January 24th, 2022 09:16 - the hazey dreams of Janice (Dusk arising)
Paints a sad picture - so evocative.
January 24th, 2022 09:11 - If only for a second (Poetic Dan)
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January 23rd, 2022 12:55 - Unbeatable (Fay Slimm.)
The quality of your words never falters dear Fay - simply reading it takes...
January 22nd, 2022 16:07 - Revival Requests (Orchidee)
Nice \'un O
January 22nd, 2022 15:58 - within the depths of beyond (Dusk arising)
A tapestry of dreams - great imagery.
January 22nd, 2022 04:19 - My Island of Peace (Goldfinch60)
I\'ll sure join you Andy - woulldn\'t it be great to meet up.
January 22nd, 2022 04:17 - If MPS Poets Met..... (Rozina)
Not been on for a few days and so glad I fiound this - a super write and...
January 22nd, 2022 04:16 - Jacob Rees-Smogg. (sic). (Goldfinch60)
Spot on - when I heard the \'light weight\' comment I immediately thought:...
January 14th, 2022 04:40 - Comments I see (FallenAngel1π)
Absolutely love this - so original in concept and a great read - you\'re a...
January 14th, 2022 01:28 - Beaching walk (Poetic Dan)
May the trickle continue into loves lagoons.
January 14th, 2022 00:34 - Take Care, Stay Safe. (Doggerel Dave)
Take the best of care and do hope you get your mojo back - sorry to see...
January 12th, 2022 16:50 - Hop On Hop Off (Rozina)
Original and a great read - super stuff.
January 12th, 2022 08:54 - Winter riddle (Saxon Crow)
A real gem of a write - love it.
January 12th, 2022 08:53 - My Little Rant(That Ends With A Question) (FallenAngel1π)
I can confirm it = it was ever on the cards. 1972? - you\'re a spring...
January 12th, 2022 08:52 - Paul. (Goldfinch60)
I love our language which is why I like poetry. As such I do recoil when I...
January 12th, 2022 08:42 - remembering lockdowntown (Dusk arising)
Yes a sad reminder but why is it called a lockdown. When your movements...
January 12th, 2022 08:38 - What If......? (Goldfinch60)
I spent my life with \'but for\' and \'what if\' but this was in my...
January 10th, 2022 02:24 - Senryu (James Michael)
Great 575 - reminds me of one of mine:
a rock shining wet
unseen by...
January 7th, 2022 21:08 - The Moon and The Lamppost (Rozina)
So original - a great write.
January 7th, 2022 14:39 - A Letter, to Those Who Make Bots (AuburnScribbler)
Fine write about something that\'s getting worse. My scam box fills up...
January 7th, 2022 02:42 - Come follow, come follow (Saxon Crow)
My kind of poem - it transports you someplace else.
January 7th, 2022 02:36 - Looking Forward. (Goldfinch60)
Indeed - my first thoughts on waking are \'Ah great, I\'m still here\'....
January 7th, 2022 02:31 - Comfort in a name (Poetic Dan)
Keep writing Dan - you have an accomplished pen and here\'s to more in the...
January 5th, 2022 13:49 - Would I (Fay Slimm.)
You\'re an inspiration dear Fay - another gem of a posting.
January 5th, 2022 13:47 - Parable Points (Orchidee)
Parable points where? I\'ll ask Miss Berles.
January 5th, 2022 12:27 - Twelfth Night (Goldfinch60)
Yes it\'s all over and the house is back to its tidy self - thank goodness...
January 5th, 2022 11:38 - susceptible (Dusk arising)
Guess I\'m lucky - I live with the love of my life but should I be left on...
January 5th, 2022 11:35 - Kisses Remembered (James Alexander)
Love it - elegance in simplicity.
January 5th, 2022 11:32 - May I strut 2022 in my tune (Poetic Dan)
Sometimes it\'s also difficult to put into words but you\'ve done it - may...
January 2nd, 2022 15:48 - Re-Shaping (Fay Slimm.)
Something different from you Fay - your talent knows no bounds - a...
January 2nd, 2022 15:45 - their world (Dusk arising)
Hear hear - I have 6 grandchildren and it\'s their world now.
January 2nd, 2022 15:42 - Winter Fog (Jerry Reynolds)
A little beauty Jerry.
January 2nd, 2022 15:41 - No Washing Up! (Goldfinch60)
So it was a smashing meal
January 2nd, 2022 15:40 - Birth Blessed (Orchidee)
Nice one O
December 30th, 2021 03:43 - Raining In My Heart. (Goldfinch60)
I well remember you parting with the sad news - a poem written with such...
December 30th, 2021 02:40 - Midnight Vigil (Woundedheart)
Written with such feeling - great write.
December 30th, 2021 02:38 - Chasing Light (Neville)
And so may she blossom. Enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2021 15:13 - the educators (Dusk arising)
Just so - if only everyone spent more time mixing with others, learning...
December 29th, 2021 15:12 - Singing In The Bar. (Goldfinch60)
Ah memories - brings back mine.
December 29th, 2021 15:01 - To Rhyme Or Not To Rhyme (Rozina)
Two superb pieces and of course there is no need to rhyme. In fact there...
December 27th, 2021 06:04 - You Are (Fay Slimm.)
I am. A loving write.
December 27th, 2021 06:01 - Bag For Life. (Paul Bell)
Great read - must save.
December 27th, 2021 03:59 - Just Me (FallenAngel1π)
Pour away - love the short write and this a great example.
December 27th, 2021 03:56 - Life-Light (Orchidee)
Another fine collection of syllables - Miss B will be so pleased.
December 27th, 2021 03:54 - Trials Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Great reflective write Andy. Thankfully Jeanne\'s problems seem to be...
December 27th, 2021 03:53 - though tears (Dusk arising)
Beautifully expressed dusk. Great read.
December 27th, 2021 03:49 - Happy Birthday Again Chet. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m about to sit back and enjoy - thanks for posting it Andy.
December 23rd, 2021 15:17 - Benedictus Bestowal (Orchidee)
A whole day early - far too early to be late - Miss Berles is cooking the...
December 23rd, 2021 12:02 - torn but not forgotten (Dusk arising)
My immediate response: yes I do want to see your pain so I can console...
December 23rd, 2021 11:59 - A Life Sadly Lived (Neville)
How sad. A dear friend and excellent artist passed away a few weeks ago -...
December 23rd, 2021 11:38 - The Almost Heard (Fay Slimm.)
A classic Fay write - looking forward to many more in 2022. Have a great...
December 23rd, 2021 11:34 - HAPPY HOLIDAYS (Lauraπ»)
great poem laura and thanks for your support in what has been a difficult...
December 23rd, 2021 11:32
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