Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- Death Destroyed - Isaiah Series (13) (Orchidee)
I\'m with you - abolish death and not forgetting time\'s ravishes -...
October 28th, 2020 08:20 - Tides of Fortune. (Goldfinch60)
You\'re right - we never know which shore we\'ll arrive at or the...
October 28th, 2020 08:18 - ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER (Michael Edwards)
Another one which really gets me going is pronouncing garage as garidge -...
October 28th, 2020 02:55 - Unruly (L. B. Mek)
What a superb structure to this meangful write.
October 27th, 2020 04:27 - Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
As an artist I see in detail what others fail to see at all and when I...
October 25th, 2020 02:42 - Just a second, or an hour...... (Orchidee)
So where does the extra hour come from?
Is it kept in the syllable store...
October 24th, 2020 10:03 - In The Last Century. (Goldfinch60)
I find it frightening. Especially when I look at old photos - it seems...
October 24th, 2020 10:00 - Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo (Jarcher54)
Ifeanyichukwu (Have I spelt that correctly?) is a great poet and deserves...
October 22nd, 2020 08:25 - you ask me why? (Dusk arising)
One never knows - just the little things I guess - great write (pleased...
October 22nd, 2020 03:49 - The Man From The Pru. (Goldfinch60)
Memories - the milk cart drawn by a horse, the rag and bone man.
Actually...
October 22nd, 2020 03:46 - Scary Sister -- A Fun Halloween Poem For My Kids (BlueHeron77)
You paint a picture of a loving caring family and a great poem too. You...
October 21st, 2020 15:42 - Hold Hard. (Fay Slimm.)
Batten down - great atmospheric shorty Fay.
October 21st, 2020 15:33 - Salvation Scenes - Isaiah Series (10) (Orchidee)
Ah the Save-a-Syllabe Society will be proud of you.
October 21st, 2020 15:31 - R E S P O N S I B I L I T Y ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oh yes - I chaired the University Hospitals of Leicester Ethics committee,...
October 21st, 2020 15:26 - Lost Pictures. (Goldfinch60)
Often happens to me - I see a suitable subject I want to paint and no...
October 21st, 2020 15:20 - All on a pleasant meadow (Jarcher54)
This really appeals to me and great artwork too. Did you leave art behind...
October 20th, 2020 02:42 - of Immortal Poetry (L. B. Mek)
The work of a true wordsmith in your own great style.
October 19th, 2020 13:54 - caring church minister. (Goldfinch60)
Part of \'me me\' culture that is rife although it has been nibbled away a...
October 19th, 2020 13:47 - Regret (Fay Slimm.)
Super piece fay.
October 19th, 2020 13:44 - go then (Dusk arising)
Eloquently expressess the loss of loved ones. Super stuff.
October 19th, 2020 13:40 - A CURRY A WEEK ~ SAVES LIVES ! ~ TEN RHYMING DOUBLETS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
as you would probably expect (Jeanne hails from Burma) I do like Burmese...
October 19th, 2020 10:18 - Blondie - A tribute to Debbie Harry (FineB)
I love her too - great tribute to a great artist.
October 17th, 2020 14:14 - Idiomatic Incisiveness (Orchidee)
Good work orchi
October 17th, 2020 07:43 - Driving Into Daylight. (Goldfinch60)
There is always light on the horizon if only you look for it. Fine write...
October 17th, 2020 07:41 - in fields of green (Dusk arising)
A moving write and may the fields of green serve to teach the human race...
October 17th, 2020 07:39 - Left Behind. (Fay Slimm.)
A ray of light - it should be called a Fay of light - you bring the...
October 15th, 2020 14:50 - Staying Alive (Lorna)
A beautiful poem and I just love Enya - always listening to her.
October 15th, 2020 14:48 - The Great Debate. (Trenz Pruca)
Well said - words fail me when trying to describe him. I am totally...
October 11th, 2020 00:03 - Autumn Rain (Lorna)
A delightful read and love the cartoon.
October 9th, 2020 13:21 - So Met. (Fay Slimm.)
Each couplet is is a gem in its own right - together they are just
October 9th, 2020 13:05 - BE OPTIMISTIC ~ THE BEST CHOICE ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Finding it hard at the moment to be optimistic - Jeanne went into Hospital...
October 9th, 2020 13:01 - Balaam\'s Oracles (4) (Orchidee)
Got problems with your oracles? Miss Berles can help you.
October 9th, 2020 12:57 - Happy Trad. (Goldfinch60)
Funny how all the popular Trad Jazz bands here in the UK happen to be...
October 9th, 2020 12:56 - Ode to a Sticky D Key (Lorna)
All the \'Ds\' have been used up in the past tense of infinitives.We could...
October 7th, 2020 14:52 - Battle (Fay Slimm.)
Great write Fay
October 7th, 2020 14:43 - Blue Light (Neville)
First Goldy and now another 575 - I really must write more of these - love...
October 7th, 2020 02:12 - Cleansing Our Lifetimes. (Goldfinch60)
Super write - I love this form.
October 7th, 2020 02:04 - Wild Company (Lorna)
And here\'s me setting humane mouse traps - super write Lorna.
October 5th, 2020 10:05 - Fearless Faith - Isaiah Series (4) (Orchidee)
Is that Fearless Faith Berles - Fine work O.
October 5th, 2020 08:21 - Wished-For (Fay Slimm.)
I\'d like to be more understanding and, better still, to be more...
October 5th, 2020 08:19 - New Joys. (Goldfinch60)
I love the way you are managing your life - I only hope I will be as...
October 5th, 2020 07:47 - Mr. Mediocre (Neville)
Great inky penloads N - muchly enjoylots.
October 4th, 2020 08:16 - Creation Collaboration (Orchidee)
Nice one O
October 4th, 2020 08:13 - Kites (Lorna)
A great one - made me smile.
October 4th, 2020 08:12 - Kathleen Sings To Me (Goldfinch60)
Thankfully her recordings live on - I often listen to her when driving but...
October 4th, 2020 08:11 - Iām Leaning Towards Insane (Dove)
I know you\'ll think I\'m sad
but I\'m leaning towards insane
and it\'s...
October 3rd, 2020 15:26 - The Winds on Which We Sail (Lorna)
I\'m looking forward to the southerlies and love John McD - great posting...
October 3rd, 2020 07:41 - Tide-Turn. (Fay Slimm.)
Now this great write has inspired a whimsy - will get it down on paper and...
October 3rd, 2020 04:01 - Woof, woof! (Orchidee)
Could be about the Hattle of Bastings. - well I gave it my best shot.
October 3rd, 2020 03:59 - Playing Fair. (Goldfinch60)
As my Dad used to say: \'When money comes in sport goes out\'.
Mind you...
October 3rd, 2020 03:57 - Some Words are not Just Words (Neville)
Some words stand alone but other words need other words and ... not sure...
October 3rd, 2020 03:55 - keeping it to myself (Dusk arising)
A sad read but when the pie appears take a big slice and feed the soul.
October 3rd, 2020 03:52 - The World at My Table. (Goldfinch60)
A feast for a king - sounds just great.
October 2nd, 2020 08:36 - Was it just a Dream (Dove)
The words carry you with them - super work.
October 1st, 2020 16:09 - THE POLITICIANS ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You\'ve said it all - I think you have to a certain type to be a...
October 1st, 2020 16:08 - Myself (Fay Slimm.)
Late to the table and it\'s all been said - a flow of a wriite dear Fay.
October 1st, 2020 16:06 - Autumn\'s Glory. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s been a strange year - usually the grass burns and yet this year...
October 1st, 2020 16:03 - Oblivious (Neville)
Fay say\'s it so well and love the idea of word-painting which describes...
October 1st, 2020 09:39 - Carolyn (Lorna)
A beautiful poem and a great track - love this kind of music.
October 1st, 2020 01:21 - rude Awakenings (L. B. Mek)
A great write as I\'ve said before and I am indebted to you for your...
September 28th, 2020 05:30 - ā Promises of Vows (Dove)
Doesn\'t matter what it is - It\'s still a great write.
September 27th, 2020 11:23 - Enmeshed (Fay Slimm.)
Oh Fay
what can I say
the words you display
have made my day.
September 27th, 2020 11:21 - Words (MendedFences27)
I love words and this so well expresses the power of them - great write...
September 27th, 2020 04:04 - Discarded 2 (Neville)
Even with family once we are no longer within living memory we are no...
September 27th, 2020 03:59 - Salvation Seasons (Orchidee)
Good one O
September 27th, 2020 03:56 - Hope is There. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s what we doing at the moment - Consultant on Tuesday - fingers...
September 27th, 2020 03:55 - Comforting Call - Isaiah Series (1) (Orchidee)
Yus tis cold - had to make a promo video in my shirtsleeves in my studio -...
September 26th, 2020 13:24 - Cheese Straws. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m the same with chocolate - never leave a bar around or it will all ...
September 26th, 2020 01:54 - Where Am I. (Goldfinch60)
i was in the same place until a few days ago - my wife\'s waiting results...
September 26th, 2020 01:05 - LITTER LOUTS ~A SALUTARY PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Such a serious subject so why are some totally oblivious to the harm they...
September 26th, 2020 01:02 - Sedoka : Glow of Soft Moonlight (Dove)
just found this - a gem of a write.
September 21st, 2020 13:22 - Acceptable Atonement (Orchidee)
Nice one O - is ther such a thing as unacceptable attonement?
September 21st, 2020 03:22 - HIGHEST MOUNTAINS IN THE UK ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Too late at my age - but good write as ever A&B
September 21st, 2020 03:21 - Before Lockdown. (Goldfinch60)
Something I keep asking myself - it seems to be a far off dream at the...
September 21st, 2020 01:44 - Clerihews- comic verses (Dove)
Great fun - must write some - now see what you\'ve done. lol š
September 19th, 2020 11:08 - SONG FOR SUNDAY ~ PEACE PERFECT PEACE ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Well constructed - great example of the genre.
September 19th, 2020 10:44 - Stolen (Fay Slimm.)
A super write - heart-felt.
September 19th, 2020 10:42 - finding her (Mydesirelines)
Once you have found her never let her go - I didn\'t thankfully. Enjoyed...
September 19th, 2020 10:40 - Venus Destroyed. (Goldfinch60)
And destroying it they/us are.
September 19th, 2020 10:38 - a beautiful life (Crowns4Christ)
Great sentiment - also a great life ends with it. i am towards the end of...
September 17th, 2020 10:46 - Bonus. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes much of my plantings are showing signs of winter retirement . Still...
September 17th, 2020 03:59 - WORK ~ HOME OR AWAY ? WHICH WOULD U CHOOSE ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I work at being retired and I do it at home but have many social meetings...
September 17th, 2020 03:56 - Touched by Literature. (Goldfinch60)
As I am and so often literature inspires my writes
September 17th, 2020 01:42 - Oxtail Stew. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m salivating - a recipe from the past - and to follow: steamed apple...
September 13th, 2020 05:54 - Ennui (Trenz Pruca)
A question that comes to us all from time to time - fine write Trenz.
September 13th, 2020 00:33 - PROVERBS FOR POETS ~ AN ANTHOLOGY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A poet composes with words. i enjoyed this one Brian - great posting.
September 12th, 2020 14:38 - Covenant Communing (Orchidee)
Great write Orchi
September 12th, 2020 14:25 - Weird Enjoyment. (Goldfinch60)
Can\'t stand ironing or hanging out the clothes but quite enjoy washing...
September 12th, 2020 14:24 - Diverse Paths. (Goldfinch60)
A geat write and so pleased it was inspired by one of my humbvle...
September 10th, 2020 12:36 - FARMERS & POETS ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I loved the wurzels and a great write A&B
September 9th, 2020 15:21 - Poem, Day by Day (AwHec8)
And it gave me a smile as well.
September 9th, 2020 13:37 - Unnoticed (MrNobody40)
And it deserves a fave from me as well.
September 9th, 2020 13:36 - THE BIG STORM (Trenz Pruca)
You have a style of your own - a joy
to read.
September 9th, 2020 13:29 - Inclusive Invitation (Orchidee)
Nice one Orchi
September 9th, 2020 13:27 - Clarity and Freedom. (Goldfinch60)
Life holds only pain and strife
within the many webs it weaves
and in my...
September 9th, 2020 13:26 - Waking. (Fay Slimm.)
I feel sleepy just reading your dreamy poetic prose - don\'t wake me if I...
September 9th, 2020 12:58 - A room that echoes (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A melancholy write - love the simple format which underlines it so well.
September 7th, 2020 08:24 - Disguised. (Fay Slimm.)
One of the most stately of flowers - the regal rose. Great write Fay.
September 7th, 2020 05:33 - Miracle For A Multitude (Orchidee)
A miracle for one will do me - fine write Orchi.
September 7th, 2020 05:32 - Tame Your Unquiet Minds. (Goldfinch60)
I was listening to a barber shop choir only yesterday - they were a cut...
September 7th, 2020 02:16
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