Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- LIMERICK No54 (Michael Edwards)
I agree that the majority of writing here seems to be an outlet for...
April 26th, 2018 03:42 - Child Of Change (Syd)
A powerful tale Syd and I really enjoyed the form you chose. Great write.
April 26th, 2018 01:53 - Buy By All Means (Lorna)
This verse says it all in these crazy times of materialism\'s allure - a...
April 24th, 2018 08:53 - WILLIAM AND KATE ~ An Aristocratic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A precious happening is the birth of a child and this one being so special...
April 24th, 2018 03:34 - Dismay (Aa Harvey)
A true message of love which will never fade despite the dismay of not yet...
April 23rd, 2018 16:11 - Little Tiny White Things (Lorna)
A lovely piece of gratitude for all things little and white at this time...
April 23rd, 2018 16:08 - create (Onepauly)
I truly agree with these clever lines on the power of mindfulness Pauly.
April 23rd, 2018 16:05 - The Dance (Lasergraph)
Oh how wonderful for you be there when your five year old grandchild...
April 23rd, 2018 16:03 - SHE SHOPPED AT LIDL (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - I have seen that done Michael - - bags by the load are needed...
April 23rd, 2018 05:47 - EARTH ~ AIR ~ FIRE ~ WATER ~ TANKAS (57577) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Four seems enough when addressing the elements needed for gratitude to ...
April 23rd, 2018 05:44 - Does She Ever Stop? (Goldfinch60)
This gave me a Monday morning smile as I think I know the same lady - - ha...
April 23rd, 2018 05:40 - Trials And Tests - Epistles of Peter Series - 6 (Orchidee)
Fine words and great video on organ playing Orchi
April 23rd, 2018 05:38 - QUEEN ELIZABETH II ~ An Aristocratic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fitting and well written tribute to a wonderful lady who is such a...
April 22nd, 2018 05:36 - Yakety Yakety Yakety Yak (Lorna)
Ooooh love the number and those words deliver some truths with honest...
April 21st, 2018 16:14 - Along The Road. (Kevin browne)
This write is so moving Kevin - - it touches a depth of love which often...
April 21st, 2018 16:00 - CATS RULE ~ OK ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You sum up the cat so well in this verse which helps us choose whether to...
April 21st, 2018 13:38 - Shepherding Security (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi.
April 21st, 2018 03:58 - NEW ZEALAND ~ A Blank Verse DECACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Am already packing my bags after reading this colourful tribute to what...
April 19th, 2018 02:30 - EARLY MORNING (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful flower pic and super write Michael -- wishing all the best for...
April 19th, 2018 02:11 - The Black Flower (Lorna)
First class writing Lorna - the picture and number adorn the words which...
April 18th, 2018 06:33 - SUNDAY (Michael Edwards)
Love the flow and fresh feel to this verse Michael -- it describes...
April 18th, 2018 03:28 - NOW THAT I\'M OLD ~ A SCOTS PERSPECTIVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ha ha - your humour excels in that penultimate stanza - - the rhyming is...
April 17th, 2018 16:13 - The Hungry Shadows (Lorna)
The effect of shadows brought out so clearly and even a bit scary in this...
April 17th, 2018 13:58 - Bad Dream (Christina8)
Those kind of dreams always give a shock when waking and hoping by now you...
April 17th, 2018 13:54 - To Forget Is Good (W c)
You sum jup so well with poetic versing the need to forget and remember...
April 16th, 2018 11:09 - N ATURE\'S RAINBOW ~ COLLABORATION MAXINE & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Loud applause for this colourful rhyming by a wonderful duo - - congrats...
April 16th, 2018 10:16 - Riding Pegasus (Lorna)
Oh Lorna what a wonderful experience to fly on a horse - your husband \'s...
April 16th, 2018 10:13 - AN ARTISTS EYE (Michael Edwards)
A few little lines and the image of beauty is there in your wonderful...
April 14th, 2018 02:08 - Sixteen Years (Christina8)
A beautiful tribute to marital love and congrats. for reaching sixteen...
April 14th, 2018 02:04 - UNWINESQUE (Michael Edwards)
Wow you certainly got the feel of his hilarious wording Michael - - if I...
April 13th, 2018 14:57 - my muse (Blast219)
Written as the mood took you and full of honest and positive vibes - - a...
April 13th, 2018 13:33 - In The Stillness Of The Morning. (Goldfinch60)
Oh - I was going to add that the piece of music you chose is simply so apt...
April 13th, 2018 13:30 - In The Stillness Of The Morning. (Goldfinch60)
This fills the heart with its tender love toward a partner who slowly has...
April 13th, 2018 13:28 - Wedlock (Aa Harvey)
An amazing take on what happens as the lock of marital binding gets...
April 13th, 2018 13:23 - SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A yummy pleasure to have this free-verse piece to read about the value of...
April 13th, 2018 12:37 - Much Ado About Anything (Lorna)
Ah - such good poetry with its terse lines and clear message - - a really...
April 13th, 2018 09:35 - ALL MY OWN (Michael Edwards)
Fantastic new form Michael - powerful words - - the abstract reminds me...
April 12th, 2018 02:16 - MUSIC OF THE SPHERES ~ A 7-7-7-7 DOUBLE SONNET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The music of nature sings to our hearts here Brian and the picture adorns...
April 11th, 2018 16:59 - Closed Door (Christina8)
Losing a mother can raise much uncertainty of how we may have handled...
April 11th, 2018 16:47 - Butterflies Along The Way. (Kevin browne)
A tender love story which pulls at the heart - such a romantic final...
April 11th, 2018 16:37 - The Shade Garden (Lorna)
You make that garden so inviting dear Lorna -shade in high heat is your...
April 11th, 2018 07:12 - morning walk (Onepauly)
Hi Paul, - -that early morning walk must be a tonic without the arrival...
April 11th, 2018 05:38 - Cats and Dogs (Daveyboyz)
An excellent drawing and a finely versed tribute to both cats and dogs. I...
April 9th, 2018 03:31 - The Warp and the Weft (Lorna)
A gem of a read about time allotted for weaving what we ourselves turn out...
April 8th, 2018 08:37 - WITH RESOLUTION (Michael Edwards)
Just the place for a drink and some quiet contemplation Michael -- love...
April 8th, 2018 04:59 - WATER DROPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Watery drops described by a talented writer of form and beauty - love...
April 8th, 2018 04:57 - Day out with a muse (Daveyboyz)
Oh what a sweet romantic and well written confession of love - - hope the...
April 8th, 2018 04:31 - TREEES ~ BEAUTIFUL ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Trees are a true gift from heaven dear Brian - your verse outlines some...
April 8th, 2018 04:29 - Seeing My Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Music like this gracing an island of dreams !!! - ah - lovely Goldi.
April 8th, 2018 04:24 - Legacy (Aa Harvey)
A compelling read from the first stanza A.A, - -your words conjour...
April 8th, 2018 04:22 - EPIGRAM No 3 (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha - - what hidden depths you quill in today\'s epigram Michael --...
April 6th, 2018 11:24 - Snowdrops in the Morning (Lorna)
Such a beautiful name for a wondrous flower and reading this verse is a...
April 6th, 2018 11:19 - I Thought I Knew (Christina8)
Sometimes things work out which surprise us and later we see the sense and...
April 6th, 2018 11:15 - MARTIN LUTHER KING ~ 1929 - 1968 Gone but never Forgotten (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Fine tribute to a great man - he set the pattern for much future change...
April 5th, 2018 20:35 - I Wonder (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Such pathos in these few lines on love\'s fickle faces at times. A lament...
April 5th, 2018 16:21 - EPIGRAM No 2 (Michael Edwards)
Praise indeed for both the quite telling and meaningful epigram and the...
April 5th, 2018 13:17 - EPIGRAM No1 (Michael Edwards)
Love the pithy fun in this Epigram - I think quite a few who think they...
April 4th, 2018 16:21 - Tunnel Vision (Sylviasearcher)
A clever form to explain the feel of narrowing tunnel when vision seems...
April 4th, 2018 16:16 - ASK & YOU WILL RECEIVE ~ BUT NOT ALWAYS AS EXPECTED ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Whatever we ask some wonderful blessing always appears and not at times...
April 4th, 2018 16:13 - I\'ll Have Tea (W c)
My empty cup is at hand for another sip of this lovely poem - - Earl Gray...
April 4th, 2018 16:10 - Winnie and Roo (Lorna)
Count me in that adorable stage of delighting in games with you and Winnie...
April 4th, 2018 16:07 - Never smile again (Jo Middleton)
The sadness of break-up is in every line and really touches the heart with...
April 4th, 2018 16:03 - MODEL RAILWAY GEEK ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ha - - this fun-rhyme brought a smile to the dull day here Brian - -...
April 3rd, 2018 05:28 - Yours (Karoline)
Welcome to this friendly site Karoline - - I like the flow of this...
April 3rd, 2018 03:01 - 14 STATIONS OF THE CROSS ~ A ~ 4 4 4 2 ~ SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A sonnet filled with all the challenge faced by our Lord at that crucial...
April 2nd, 2018 12:59 - The Pink Moon (April) (Lorna)
Wonderful poetic shades in this charming read Lorna - first class
April 1st, 2018 09:34 - ON EASTER SUNDAY ~ An Acrostic 2-6-6 Sonnet. (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Reflections on why this time of resurrection is blessed dear Brian - -...
April 1st, 2018 03:49 - Eternal Easter (Orchidee)
Loved the singing and words - a fine Easter write my friend.
April 1st, 2018 03:47 - Stratospheric Pulses (Kevin browne)
Perceptive write on the spin and bend of planetary existence and put in...
March 30th, 2018 16:05 - ANNIE\'S SONG FOR ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Lovely picture of a beautiful lady and the verse expresses love at its...
March 29th, 2018 14:58 - Digging Deep (Accidental Poet)
You dug deep here in this well-crafted verse A.P. - - a super write.
March 29th, 2018 14:55 - TEN TOP BRITISH PETS ~ COUPLETS & TRIPLETS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yes pets are a gift which when we care for them properly provide so much...
March 27th, 2018 16:10 - IN TONES OF GRATITUDE (Michael Edwards)
A woman\'s answer to adversity so aptly described in this super write...
March 27th, 2018 04:05 - THE BOAT RACE ~ OXFORD V CAMBRIDGE 2018 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your words made it all alive in my living room Brian - - a boat race which...
March 26th, 2018 12:56 - Accompanied by Trees (Lorna)
Trees stand as a reminder to ever look upwards and your poem directs us to...
March 26th, 2018 08:10 - The Thank You Poem (Lorna)
Good to feel part of a writing family dear Lorna - you are such a regular...
March 24th, 2018 12:28 - A Frequent Flyer (RickyMcG)
Love the close rhyme of this flight to freedom Ricky - - well versed.
March 23rd, 2018 07:40 - In Your Arms (Christina8)
A poem of closeness to one who cares - may you stay warm in that...
March 23rd, 2018 04:12 - COASTAL EROSION ~ EXPLOSION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A scary thought for those near the sea in houses too close to cliffside...
March 22nd, 2018 06:10 - Death Has No Sting. (Goldfinch60)
Such an uplifting feel to this verse and the picture lights up the...
March 22nd, 2018 06:08 - The Old And The New - Colossians Series - 5 (Orchidee)
Love the chosen hymn and the words fit so well into the theme Orchi....
March 22nd, 2018 06:06 - Whispers on the Wind (Accidental Poet)
Those whispers of wind and weather are wo well expressed in this most...
March 22nd, 2018 06:05 - Snowglobe (Jo Middleton)
Love this poetic interpretation of what goes on in a snow-globe - great...
March 22nd, 2018 06:02 - There\'s a Kind of Hush (Lorna)
Perfectly presented and expressed this lament over the lateness of Spring...
March 22nd, 2018 06:01 - BETWEEN THE ROSES (Michael Edwards)
A pleasure greets the eye with the colourful painting and the smile which...
March 22nd, 2018 03:57 - The Sweetest Girl (Jamie)
Perfect rhyming in this engaging verse Jamie - - it has to be one of your...
March 21st, 2018 09:41 - A COLLECTION OF COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Super couplets spilling their truths and what an exciting picture to...
March 21st, 2018 05:57 - Famous poet (Jo Middleton)
Ah - a plain truth enfolded in this sensitive message dear Joe - - drams...
March 21st, 2018 05:55 - Welcome Back Spring (Accidental Poet)
Loud applause for this lovely tribute to my favourite season
March 20th, 2018 14:28 - RAINBOW OF DEATH ~ A Classical Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A shiver went through my heart on reading this sonnet-lament over a young...
March 20th, 2018 14:27 - fruit and veggies (Willyweed)
A luscious message of love in this very fruity read dear Willy
March 20th, 2018 14:18 - THEY BLENDED OUT OF SIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Such a clever and artistic combo. of picture and verse - - one of your...
March 20th, 2018 05:27 - Awaiting Spring (Christina8)
Thank you for this lovely reminder that Spring\'s on the way dear...
March 19th, 2018 06:07 - Silence and Me (Lorna)
A well-deserved winner of any poetic competition to express the feel of...
March 19th, 2018 05:30 - VILLAGE STREET IN\'T SNOW ! Sonnet for FAY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Am highly honoured by this kind dedication dear Brian and the duo of...
March 19th, 2018 05:25 - Andres Segovia and the Night of Torture (Lorna)
Oh what a memory to teach you that petticoats made of nylony-tickles are...
March 16th, 2018 05:32 - Maestro Extraordinaire (Jamie)
Fantastic double acrostic and to a talented friend who deserves all the...
March 16th, 2018 05:26 - December shadows (Willyweed)
Loud applause for this mantra on chasing away fear\'s shadows dear Willy...
March 15th, 2018 09:15 - Bah! (Lorna)
Ha ha - thanks a load Lorna for this serious piece of advice in a wrap of...
March 15th, 2018 09:05 - STEPHEN HAWKING ~ An Acrostic Sonnet Tribute (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amazing what Stephen\'s fine example did for those whose disabilities...
March 15th, 2018 09:04
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