Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A yummy pleasure to have this free-verse piece to read about the value of...
April 13th, 2018 12:37 - Much Ado About Anything (Lorna)
Ah - such good poetry with its terse lines and clear message - - a really...
April 13th, 2018 09:35 - ALL MY OWN (Michael Edwards)
Fantastic new form Michael - powerful words - - the abstract reminds me...
April 12th, 2018 02:16 - MUSIC OF THE SPHERES ~ A 7-7-7-7 DOUBLE SONNET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The music of nature sings to our hearts here Brian and the picture adorns...
April 11th, 2018 16:59 - Closed Door (Christina8)
Losing a mother can raise much uncertainty of how we may have handled...
April 11th, 2018 16:47 - Butterflies Along The Way. (Kevin browne)
A tender love story which pulls at the heart - such a romantic final...
April 11th, 2018 16:37 - The Shade Garden (Lorna)
You make that garden so inviting dear Lorna -shade in high heat is your...
April 11th, 2018 07:12 - morning walk (Onepauly)
Hi Paul, - -that early morning walk must be a tonic without the arrival...
April 11th, 2018 05:38 - Cats and Dogs (Daveyboyz)
An excellent drawing and a finely versed tribute to both cats and dogs. I...
April 9th, 2018 03:31 - The Warp and the Weft (Lorna)
A gem of a read about time allotted for weaving what we ourselves turn out...
April 8th, 2018 08:37 - WITH RESOLUTION (Michael Edwards)
Just the place for a drink and some quiet contemplation Michael -- love...
April 8th, 2018 04:59 - WATER DROPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Watery drops described by a talented writer of form and beauty - love...
April 8th, 2018 04:57 - Day out with a muse (Daveyboyz)
Oh what a sweet romantic and well written confession of love - - hope the...
April 8th, 2018 04:31 - TREEES ~ BEAUTIFUL ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Trees are a true gift from heaven dear Brian - your verse outlines some...
April 8th, 2018 04:29 - Seeing My Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Music like this gracing an island of dreams !!! - ah - lovely Goldi.
April 8th, 2018 04:24 - Legacy (Aa Harvey)
A compelling read from the first stanza A.A, - -your words conjour...
April 8th, 2018 04:22 - EPIGRAM No 3 (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha - - what hidden depths you quill in today\'s epigram Michael --...
April 6th, 2018 11:24 - Snowdrops in the Morning (Lorna)
Such a beautiful name for a wondrous flower and reading this verse is a...
April 6th, 2018 11:19 - I Thought I Knew (Christina8)
Sometimes things work out which surprise us and later we see the sense and...
April 6th, 2018 11:15 - MARTIN LUTHER KING ~ 1929 - 1968 Gone but never Forgotten (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Fine tribute to a great man - he set the pattern for much future change...
April 5th, 2018 20:35 - I Wonder (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Such pathos in these few lines on love\'s fickle faces at times. A lament...
April 5th, 2018 16:21 - EPIGRAM No 2 (Michael Edwards)
Praise indeed for both the quite telling and meaningful epigram and the...
April 5th, 2018 13:17 - EPIGRAM No1 (Michael Edwards)
Love the pithy fun in this Epigram - I think quite a few who think they...
April 4th, 2018 16:21 - Tunnel Vision (Sylviasearcher)
A clever form to explain the feel of narrowing tunnel when vision seems...
April 4th, 2018 16:16 - ASK & YOU WILL RECEIVE ~ BUT NOT ALWAYS AS EXPECTED ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Whatever we ask some wonderful blessing always appears and not at times...
April 4th, 2018 16:13 - I\'ll Have Tea (W c)
My empty cup is at hand for another sip of this lovely poem - - Earl Gray...
April 4th, 2018 16:10 - Winnie and Roo (Lorna)
Count me in that adorable stage of delighting in games with you and Winnie...
April 4th, 2018 16:07 - Never smile again (Jo Middleton)
The sadness of break-up is in every line and really touches the heart with...
April 4th, 2018 16:03 - MODEL RAILWAY GEEK ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ha - - this fun-rhyme brought a smile to the dull day here Brian - -...
April 3rd, 2018 05:28 - Yours (Karoline)
Welcome to this friendly site Karoline - - I like the flow of this...
April 3rd, 2018 03:01 - 14 STATIONS OF THE CROSS ~ A ~ 4 4 4 2 ~ SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A sonnet filled with all the challenge faced by our Lord at that crucial...
April 2nd, 2018 12:59 - The Pink Moon (April) (Lorna)
Wonderful poetic shades in this charming read Lorna - first class
April 1st, 2018 09:34 - ON EASTER SUNDAY ~ An Acrostic 2-6-6 Sonnet. (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Reflections on why this time of resurrection is blessed dear Brian - -...
April 1st, 2018 03:49 - Eternal Easter (Orchidee)
Loved the singing and words - a fine Easter write my friend.
April 1st, 2018 03:47 - Stratospheric Pulses (Kevin browne)
Perceptive write on the spin and bend of planetary existence and put in...
March 30th, 2018 16:05 - ANNIE\'S SONG FOR ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Lovely picture of a beautiful lady and the verse expresses love at its...
March 29th, 2018 14:58 - TEN TOP BRITISH PETS ~ COUPLETS & TRIPLETS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yes pets are a gift which when we care for them properly provide so much...
March 27th, 2018 16:10 - IN TONES OF GRATITUDE (Michael Edwards)
A woman\'s answer to adversity so aptly described in this super write...
March 27th, 2018 04:05 - THE BOAT RACE ~ OXFORD V CAMBRIDGE 2018 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your words made it all alive in my living room Brian - - a boat race which...
March 26th, 2018 12:56 - Accompanied by Trees (Lorna)
Trees stand as a reminder to ever look upwards and your poem directs us to...
March 26th, 2018 08:10 - The Thank You Poem (Lorna)
Good to feel part of a writing family dear Lorna - you are such a regular...
March 24th, 2018 12:28 - A Frequent Flyer (RickyMcG)
Love the close rhyme of this flight to freedom Ricky - - well versed.
March 23rd, 2018 07:40 - In Your Arms (Christina8)
A poem of closeness to one who cares - may you stay warm in that...
March 23rd, 2018 04:12 - COASTAL EROSION ~ EXPLOSION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A scary thought for those near the sea in houses too close to cliffside...
March 22nd, 2018 06:10 - Death Has No Sting. (Goldfinch60)
Such an uplifting feel to this verse and the picture lights up the...
March 22nd, 2018 06:08 - The Old And The New - Colossians Series - 5 (Orchidee)
Love the chosen hymn and the words fit so well into the theme Orchi....
March 22nd, 2018 06:06 - Snowglobe (Jo Middleton)
Love this poetic interpretation of what goes on in a snow-globe - great...
March 22nd, 2018 06:02 - There\'s a Kind of Hush (Lorna)
Perfectly presented and expressed this lament over the lateness of Spring...
March 22nd, 2018 06:01 - BETWEEN THE ROSES (Michael Edwards)
A pleasure greets the eye with the colourful painting and the smile which...
March 22nd, 2018 03:57 - The Sweetest Girl (Jamie)
Perfect rhyming in this engaging verse Jamie - - it has to be one of your...
March 21st, 2018 09:41 - A COLLECTION OF COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Super couplets spilling their truths and what an exciting picture to...
March 21st, 2018 05:57 - Famous poet (Jo Middleton)
Ah - a plain truth enfolded in this sensitive message dear Joe - - drams...
March 21st, 2018 05:55 - RAINBOW OF DEATH ~ A Classical Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A shiver went through my heart on reading this sonnet-lament over a young...
March 20th, 2018 14:27 - fruit and veggies (Willyweed)
A luscious message of love in this very fruity read dear Willy
March 20th, 2018 14:18 - THEY BLENDED OUT OF SIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Such a clever and artistic combo. of picture and verse - - one of your...
March 20th, 2018 05:27 - Awaiting Spring (Christina8)
Thank you for this lovely reminder that Spring\'s on the way dear...
March 19th, 2018 06:07 - Silence and Me (Lorna)
A well-deserved winner of any poetic competition to express the feel of...
March 19th, 2018 05:30 - VILLAGE STREET IN\'T SNOW ! Sonnet for FAY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Am highly honoured by this kind dedication dear Brian and the duo of...
March 19th, 2018 05:25 - Andres Segovia and the Night of Torture (Lorna)
Oh what a memory to teach you that petticoats made of nylony-tickles are...
March 16th, 2018 05:32 - Maestro Extraordinaire (Jamie)
Fantastic double acrostic and to a talented friend who deserves all the...
March 16th, 2018 05:26 - December shadows (Willyweed)
Loud applause for this mantra on chasing away fear\'s shadows dear Willy...
March 15th, 2018 09:15 - Bah! (Lorna)
Ha ha - thanks a load Lorna for this serious piece of advice in a wrap of...
March 15th, 2018 09:05 - STEPHEN HAWKING ~ An Acrostic Sonnet Tribute (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amazing what Stephen\'s fine example did for those whose disabilities...
March 15th, 2018 09:04 - Numb (Christina8)
Your warm grateful heart comes through these few lines - may you beat...
March 14th, 2018 17:43 - The Urge Will Fade (Nicholas Browning)
Every line had me revited. - I love best the final stanza. First class...
March 14th, 2018 08:55 - Handful of Biscuits (Lorna)
A poem to send the heart into weep mode dear Lorna - - tenderly appealing...
March 14th, 2018 06:36 - The Visitor (HChristian74)
Your success in imaginative writing lies with your talent to twist and...
March 14th, 2018 06:08 - ELECTRIC LIVING ~ An Acrostic 8 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Changes are features of more civilized living or so they say - - I loved...
March 13th, 2018 12:05 - Shy bird (Willyweed)
So good to know you are back posting again Willy and that your words can...
March 13th, 2018 10:18 - Butter Side Down (Lorna)
Am smiling at that vision of cats with buttered toast on their backs -...
March 13th, 2018 04:29 - \'No milk spilt\' (Poetic25)
Clever form and well thought out message in this cry against those taking...
March 12th, 2018 17:52 - Bottled up healing (Poetic Dan)
Your words and music were sunshine to my eyes Dan - - loved your video and...
March 12th, 2018 17:44 - Measurements of Life (Lorna)
Lovely to read these well-written comparisons with life\'s journey and our...
March 12th, 2018 17:36 - My Prince (Christina8)
Oh such a romantic confession of love for a treasured Prince - a...
March 12th, 2018 17:31 - Spring Haiku (Jeremy Cohen)
Love the chosen image and the play on words in this refreshing haiku - ...
March 12th, 2018 09:37 - SPRING ~ A Word Flow Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Beautiful and well thought out this flow of a Spring read - thank you...
March 12th, 2018 06:05 - Ken Dodd (Goldfinch60)
A welcome and touching tribute to the great talent of Ken Dodd whose...
March 12th, 2018 03:37 - Twins (Christina8)
The loss of two babies at the same time is so great I can only imagine the...
March 9th, 2018 09:52 - HAPPINESS IS .................... ? An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Sharing my today\'s happiness aby sending a contented smile to you Brian ...
March 9th, 2018 05:35 - BURNING (Michael Edwards)
An exciting form Michael and the style of that watercolour is so...
March 8th, 2018 03:13 - SO MANY WARS (Michael Edwards)
Such true words embody the futility of war caused by false beliefs in...
March 6th, 2018 10:03 - The Angels are There. (Goldfinch60)
Yes I really agree that we are guided and cared for my friend - - a lovely...
March 6th, 2018 10:00 - Spring Is Springing! (Orchidee)
A good word and tune of hope Steve -- to find a single flower in bloom...
March 6th, 2018 09:59 - Too Cold For Anything (Lorna)
Ah - an apt finalé to your your expressive outcry against this wintery...
March 6th, 2018 09:57 - Addiction (double acrostic) (Poetic25)
Wow - this is a clever expression of well thought out double acrostic - a...
March 6th, 2018 09:52 - FACE BOOK (Lasergraph)
I love the rhyme used in this wry viewpoint on why Facebook is used. A...
March 6th, 2018 09:51 - C H A M E L E O N S ~ A Rhyming Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The acrostic enumerates so n=many reasons to really know those whom you...
March 6th, 2018 07:35 - State of Bliss (FredPeyer)
An ephemeral feel right through these lyrical words Fred - a soothing...
March 4th, 2018 05:18 - State of Bliss (FredPeyer)
Will be missing you and your wonderful writing Fred - - meanwhile not to...
March 4th, 2018 05:16 - The Call Of The Loon (W c)
A charming picture of a bird we never see here in the U.K. but which is an...
March 3rd, 2018 12:51 - The Conquest of Time. (Goldfinch60)
This verse has inspired me to view the programme -and thanks for the poem...
March 3rd, 2018 07:31 - Phoenix from the Ashes (Lorna)
Oh Lorna such heart-wrenching read of what can happen when health fails...
March 3rd, 2018 05:24 - WITH TIME (Michael Edwards)
Super write and picture.
March 2nd, 2018 14:29 - ANGELA ~ SNOW LADY ~ A Flow Line Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
May your snow lady fill your summers and winters to come dear Brian - a...
March 1st, 2018 09:38 - Willowing Whispers. (Kevin browne)
Love the flow and the subtle humour in this invitation to love Kevin
February 26th, 2018 13:54 - Death is just the beginning (Aa Harvey)
My belief has ever been that the best is yet to come at the end of our...
February 26th, 2018 12:56 - A WOMAN OF DIGNITY (Michael Edwards)
The strength within this Lady oozes from your tribute to dignity Michael...
February 26th, 2018 12:54 - Priest, Judge, King Prophecy (Orchidee)
A wonderful summary of the journey our Lord had to take to reach his true...
February 26th, 2018 12:52 - The Painting of Love (Goldfinch60)
A fantastic picture of breaking free Goldi - - your daughter has real...
February 26th, 2018 12:50 - In Defense of the Realm (Lorna)
A stunning verse of mysterious allure dear Lorna. - first class writing.
February 26th, 2018 12:46
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