Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Faith Produces Humility - James Series (6) (Orchidee)
Humility is certainly needed for faith to develop - good points raised...
June 24th, 2019 04:32 - EUROPE ~ MOST DIVERSE CONTINENT ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A VIGINTI QUINQUE (5 6 11 3 !) (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Such an informative write and a big thank you for the tempting array of...
June 24th, 2019 04:15 - There Are No Graves (Neville)
The suddeness of your final line jerks this reader\'s heart to the core -...
June 24th, 2019 04:11 - Dylan (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A story of love despite situations so complex that only love could find a...
June 23rd, 2019 12:05 - Sing (CindyB)
Loud applause for this tribute to victorious love - must read this one...
June 23rd, 2019 12:01 - Ache (Neville)
A unique way of looking at aches love can create then leave behind
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June 23rd, 2019 11:58 - My Spirit. (Goldfinch60)
Really good points made in your posting today dear Andy - We are all...
June 23rd, 2019 11:55 - TIME ALONE (Michael Edwards)
Thoughts and what rules them time alone can reveal - redemption...
June 23rd, 2019 11:44 - The Window of My Life (Edward Charles McDevitt)
The words are so appealing in this expression of coping with stress - ...
June 23rd, 2019 11:39 - When You Were Perfect (Neville)
A moving and honest appeal to a long-gone lover with reasons for looking...
June 23rd, 2019 11:34 - Millennial (SerenWise)
How powerful these words of reflection - -- a compelling feel of...
June 23rd, 2019 11:29 - SHOPLIFTING ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A BIDECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A most needed reminder that all stealing is simply dishonest and taking...
June 22nd, 2019 13:20 - TRIBUTE TO SOUND (Thomas J. Dooley)
You verse the tribute to sound so well Thomas with your engaging outline ...
June 21st, 2019 08:06 - Bravely (CindyB)
Another gem of poetic expertise - a superb write Cindy.
June 21st, 2019 03:51 - Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5) (Orchidee)
Faith can certainly turn into wise ways of dealing with life\'s challenges...
June 21st, 2019 03:49 - If you come across (Poetic Dan)
A wonderfully refreshing read Dan - keep doing what you are doing and you...
June 21st, 2019 03:46 - Modesty? Moi? (Goldfinch60)
Am still chuckling at this read Andy - - Inner satisfaction coming to the...
June 21st, 2019 02:02 - THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (2) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - am still giggling at Neville\'s comment - - sad that dictionaries...
June 21st, 2019 01:59 - Old Sea Walls (Neville)
Days of yore peeping again from time\'s saline jaw - and you saw it...
June 21st, 2019 01:02 - Life Before Bar-codes (Neville)
Yes - before time sped into the confusion of what to press where and when...
June 20th, 2019 16:12 - Erigeron (Neville)
An endearing tribute to a gem from the daisy family that graces every...
June 20th, 2019 16:06 - Before I Go Blind (Neville)
Your write for once mystifies me - - I can see the sad state before...
June 14th, 2019 04:52 - That Wonderful Place. (Goldfinch60)
What a gift is music dear Andy and you describe its effect so well --...
June 14th, 2019 01:55 - Once an Item (Neville)
Ha - - that\'s memory getting fainter the longer it\'s not useful methinks...
June 13th, 2019 08:33 - The Earthworm and Caterpillar (Jenny Wren)
Hi Jenny - - I like this clever piece of adventurous fable - -- - sad...
June 13th, 2019 07:54 - Once an Item (Neville)
Some unique phrasing and more than good rhyming in this strong reminder ...
June 13th, 2019 07:48 - Saved (CindyB)
A poet\'s poem that touches the imaginative by use of metaphor and makes...
June 13th, 2019 02:08 - NEW ZEALAND ~ NEW EXPERIENCES ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Such a potently sad song you chose to illustrate the end of your parents\'...
June 12th, 2019 07:56 - Faith Proves Itself By Works - James Series (3) (Orchidee)
How true that faith must be followed by action - thanks for this tuneful...
June 12th, 2019 03:07 - Shadows (Suresh)
Doing our best is all that\'s expected by reasonable beings who live in...
June 12th, 2019 03:06 - I am.... (Poetic Dan)
A fine place to be is to have found our uniqueness - - a big step forward...
June 12th, 2019 02:40 - Who Am I - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
A powerful write and one to ponder again dear Andy -- this is a ...
June 12th, 2019 02:35 - beautiful pastime (Dusk arising)
Finding pleasure in physical union could not be penned better my friend. ...
June 12th, 2019 02:31 - On Being Human (Neville)
Starkly true these informed words my friend - yet I see its message in its...
June 12th, 2019 02:05 - WHAT WILL HAPPEN IF --------- II (Suresh)
The human species is well on its way to its own demise and if things are...
June 11th, 2019 12:06 - Time is running out (Aa Harvey)
The poignant waiting for a Miss Right comes out clearly in this well...
June 11th, 2019 11:59 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (11) (Michael Edwards)
Love it - your rhyming in this four liner is perfect - the watercolour...
June 11th, 2019 11:56 - Michael\'s Artistic World (Goldfinch60)
Finding wonder in the laying of colour on a watery bed could never be...
June 11th, 2019 06:32 - therapoetic (Dusk arising)
A very inspiring theropoetic read my friend - am so glad you made it to...
June 11th, 2019 05:34 - Butterworth Crows (Neville)
Your talent for weaving surprise into stories is second to none my friend...
June 11th, 2019 03:34 - Watch Butterflies Float. (Kevin browne)
The first two lines did it for me Kevin - - - - On days when old became...
June 10th, 2019 13:21 - Your pocket or mine it will be fine (Poetic Dan)
The simple things in this life are the best and seem to satisfy the most ...
June 10th, 2019 07:54 - Does Size Matter. (Goldfinch60)
Maybe because the size of obesity demands it my friend - who knows - but...
June 10th, 2019 04:14 - Catching Flies (Neville)
A haunt of a read this report of what carers like yourself have to see and...
June 10th, 2019 04:07 - M E M O R I E S ! ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
How true the quote that memory is frail but we if can remember the smiles...
June 9th, 2019 10:39 - Blessed to know you all (Poetic Dan)
You have arrived at where you are meant to be Dan - - keep walking along...
June 9th, 2019 09:11 - Pentecost Pourings (Orchidee)
A fine poem-hymn dear Orchi.
June 9th, 2019 07:45 - The Light of Music. (Goldfinch60)
You are a true musician dear Andy and its power will ever be able to bring...
June 9th, 2019 07:44 - Blessed to know you all (Poetic Dan)
You have arrived at where you are meant to be Dan - - keep walking along...
June 9th, 2019 07:41 - Stay Beautiful (Meg)
Yes indeed Meg - we each have to work out ways to cope........ an...
June 9th, 2019 07:37 - Look... I\'m in your heart (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A worthy tribute indeed Andrew - the words of the song too say so much to...
June 9th, 2019 07:36 - Puppy Love (Neville)
Ah - \'tis but cupboard love Neville doncha agree -a common mistake and...
June 9th, 2019 07:21 - Ghost of You (CindyB)
Your writing has that something so special Cindy - this haunting lament...
June 9th, 2019 01:42 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards)
Say that phrase as you will your art-work today hit me squarely between...
June 9th, 2019 01:37 - Of those we lose (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A heart-touching read Andrew with the pain of loss so tellingly written -...
June 9th, 2019 01:32 - Wanting to be Wanted (Neville)
A woman high on words is often strangled with their hold - your first...
June 8th, 2019 11:17 - MAORIS DANCING & SINGING 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 PANTOUM 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An event to remember dear Angela - - no doubt your parents were very...
June 8th, 2019 06:19 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (9) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - a definite NO - and so she oughta after that most unromantic...
June 8th, 2019 01:49 - My Fathers Jacket (Neville)
A tribute that only experience could write Nev......described with words...
June 8th, 2019 01:42 - Home is me (Poetic Dan)
Life\'\'s journey is full of chances to learn and improve and your verse...
June 7th, 2019 10:18 - Willing Way (Orchidee)
A fine spiritual read Orchi.
June 7th, 2019 10:13 - Memory Lost. (Goldfinch60)
The courage to face such a memory loss must be the strongest of all and...
June 7th, 2019 10:11 - Discovery (Aa Harvey)
Ah - those questions after loving a love stay close to our heart all life...
June 7th, 2019 05:38 - SEASON OF SUMMER ~ BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An apt description of summer with lots of good memories - thanks for the...
June 7th, 2019 05:35 - Broken (Neville)
A tender remembrance of how to ease the bruises of life - your last...
June 7th, 2019 03:39 - CHOICES. (Fay Slimm.)
How very kind your comment on Choices my friend and I thank you sincerely.
June 7th, 2019 03:34 - prevail (Dusk arising)
Old memories stay fresh when they contain such travesty of cruelly slain...
June 6th, 2019 15:41 - My Muse (SerenWise)
Your Muse is well loved I see Seren - keep writing sweet poetry to...
June 6th, 2019 13:15 - The Carousel Ride (Lorna)
Life\'s endless roundelay of trying not to fall and make mistakes your...
June 6th, 2019 13:01 - Famous Last Words (Neville)
By thunder I feeleth those shaftes and lances as ancient battle commences...
June 6th, 2019 04:40 - Just Like An Angel. (Kevin browne)
The flow to these well-rhymed words adds something special to the...
June 6th, 2019 03:15 - SHORE LINE (Michael Edwards)
Michael I second the message underlying this clever rhyme of outcry...
June 6th, 2019 03:06 - Dedication to my Grandmother (Jo March)
You capture so much about your much missed Grandmother in this tribute to...
June 6th, 2019 00:28 - MAMA & PAPA ~ ANGELA ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a lovely pantoum as tribute to your much love parents dear Angela -...
June 5th, 2019 13:03 - Nature\'s Canvas. (Goldfinch60)
Your words are inspiring and gratitude shines through every line of this...
June 5th, 2019 03:01 - THE MISSING \'E\' (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - this raised a big smile my friend - I love the unexpected twists...
June 5th, 2019 02:57 - Penang White Coffee (Neville)
What could be better than the lure of romance as reason for recording...
June 5th, 2019 02:15 - Ode to the Artist (Sylviasearcher)
A beautiful and very poetic usage of imagery which leaves this reader...
June 4th, 2019 06:23 - The Evening Ball (Lorna)
Ah - such a charming piece of imagery-full linguistic delight dear
June 4th, 2019 06:02 - Everywhere I Look (Neville)
A powerful push in the right direction for someone who has left the road...
June 4th, 2019 04:46 - Me ears are burning! (Orchidee)
adk;-we]02 = = v\';lrw3=0o = = which means I like this one Orchi - -...
June 3rd, 2019 11:35 - Stay (CindyB)
A linguistic medley of well-worded lines which you shape into such an...
June 3rd, 2019 05:29 - LIMPET LUCY (Michael Edwards)
This smile your verse left behind get bigger the more I think of Lucy the...
June 3rd, 2019 04:47 - Arbeit Macht Frie (Neville)
Work has a freedom agreed but labouring to sheer exhaustion which was the...
June 3rd, 2019 02:14 - I Sit at the Table. (Goldfinch60)
Your inspiring personality will find a way through when you can cope no...
June 2nd, 2019 13:49 - Four year olds should run the world! (Andrew Charles Forrest)
What a charming read Andrew and a wonderful tribute to your special yummy...
June 2nd, 2019 13:38 - Bethune Re-visited (Neville)
Oh this makes such clever use of exchangeable words -- - Bethune who was...
June 2nd, 2019 13:05 - Profitable Pause (Orchidee)
Daily meditation has been my stronghold for many moons now - a good read...
June 2nd, 2019 12:12 - VINEYARDS IN NEW ZEALAND (N I) ~ ANGELA ~ A SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A lovely sortéé into the New Zealand different wines and a bit of their...
June 2nd, 2019 09:46 - when out of my thoughts (Dusk arising)
The fact that you knew that your little gem giggled and smiled must have...
June 2nd, 2019 05:52 - Salt Marsh Fields (Neville)
Ah - - those were really the best of days Nev where innocence tried...
June 2nd, 2019 05:33 - From Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
The change from dark to the glory of light is worded so well in both your...
June 1st, 2019 16:25 - The Drowning Game (Neville)
Wow - what a compelling write with imagery to sigh for dear friend - - the...
June 1st, 2019 16:22 - A Moment (Neville)
The time when truth hits is often just one moment and you describe the...
June 1st, 2019 02:25 - Up With the Lark. (Goldfinch60)
Dawn breaking is a wonderful time of the day to see and hear lark...
June 1st, 2019 02:20 - I Dance Alone (W c)
Solo dancing can be such fun and your honest verse tells how it lifts the...
June 1st, 2019 01:52 - In Dreams (CindyB)
An amazing piece of poetry Candy - I must read this one repeatedly for...
June 1st, 2019 00:55 - Arid (SerenWise)
Such a pull of appeal in these few sad lines Seren - -- Arid indeed is...
June 1st, 2019 00:50 - FOUR SEASONAL HAIKU ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Beautiful Vivaldi music with his tribute to spring and thanks for your...
May 31st, 2019 14:05 - Less a Peach... more Apricot (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Andrew - no need at all to be sorry for this well-written lament on the...
May 31st, 2019 14:01
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