Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Me ears are burning! (Orchidee)
adk;-we]02 = = v\';lrw3=0o = = which means I like this one Orchi - -...
June 3rd, 2019 11:35 - Stay (CindyB)
A linguistic medley of well-worded lines which you shape into such an...
June 3rd, 2019 05:29 - LIMPET LUCY (Michael Edwards)
This smile your verse left behind get bigger the more I think of Lucy the...
June 3rd, 2019 04:47 - Arbeit Macht Frie (Neville)
Work has a freedom agreed but labouring to sheer exhaustion which was the...
June 3rd, 2019 02:14 - I Sit at the Table. (Goldfinch60)
Your inspiring personality will find a way through when you can cope no...
June 2nd, 2019 13:49 - Four year olds should run the world! (Andrew Charles Forrest)
What a charming read Andrew and a wonderful tribute to your special yummy...
June 2nd, 2019 13:38 - Bethune Re-visited (Neville)
Oh this makes such clever use of exchangeable words -- - Bethune who was...
June 2nd, 2019 13:05 - Profitable Pause (Orchidee)
Daily meditation has been my stronghold for many moons now - a good read...
June 2nd, 2019 12:12 - VINEYARDS IN NEW ZEALAND (N I) ~ ANGELA ~ A SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A lovely sortéé into the New Zealand different wines and a bit of their...
June 2nd, 2019 09:46 - when out of my thoughts (Dusk arising)
The fact that you knew that your little gem giggled and smiled must have...
June 2nd, 2019 05:52 - Salt Marsh Fields (Neville)
Ah - - those were really the best of days Nev where innocence tried...
June 2nd, 2019 05:33 - From Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
The change from dark to the glory of light is worded so well in both your...
June 1st, 2019 16:25 - The Drowning Game (Neville)
Wow - what a compelling write with imagery to sigh for dear friend - - the...
June 1st, 2019 16:22 - A Moment (Neville)
The time when truth hits is often just one moment and you describe the...
June 1st, 2019 02:25 - Up With the Lark. (Goldfinch60)
Dawn breaking is a wonderful time of the day to see and hear lark...
June 1st, 2019 02:20 - I Dance Alone (W c)
Solo dancing can be such fun and your honest verse tells how it lifts the...
June 1st, 2019 01:52 - In Dreams (CindyB)
An amazing piece of poetry Candy - I must read this one repeatedly for...
June 1st, 2019 00:55 - Arid (SerenWise)
Such a pull of appeal in these few sad lines Seren - -- Arid indeed is...
June 1st, 2019 00:50 - FOUR SEASONAL HAIKU ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Beautiful Vivaldi music with his tribute to spring and thanks for your...
May 31st, 2019 14:05 - Less a Peach... more Apricot (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Andrew - no need at all to be sorry for this well-written lament on the...
May 31st, 2019 14:01 - Emotions - Hatred and Love (Suresh)
Emotionally charged your wise lines. Opposing and yet completing the...
May 31st, 2019 12:40 - My Mind is blank (FineB)
An engaging read of your present stagnation yet positive outcome Your...
May 31st, 2019 04:16 - Aithō (Neville)
Sunset (or rise) seen from a mountain comes to my mind after viewing...
May 31st, 2019 04:12 - If i could stay (Dusk arising)
A piece to put aside and come back to read when the need rises - your...
May 30th, 2019 16:39 - The Unsavoury truth (Jack Worrall)
Such an honest write Jack - -sincerely hope that now you are getting help...
May 30th, 2019 16:34 - Sans Sustenance (Neville)
When in need turn to imagery - - that describes me........... a telling...
May 30th, 2019 15:20 - Marrow Deep (CindyB)
So sensuous the read ignites feelings deeper than marrow - you draw my...
May 30th, 2019 12:49 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (4) (Michael Edwards)
Not knowing what to ask I will keep silent on the question of what I will...
May 30th, 2019 09:19 - Stars (CindyB)
Welcome back Cindy with the beguiling read - I could feel the pull of ...
May 30th, 2019 07:52 - No Cage for Thee (Neville)
Such a tender release would melt the need to fly free methinks - this ...
May 30th, 2019 04:21 - When Day Fades into Night (Suresh)
Night in the wild could not be versed better Suresh - thank you for...
May 29th, 2019 10:43 - New Direction. (Goldfinch60)
What a fine and hopeful write Andy - - keep looking for new ways ahead and...
May 29th, 2019 10:41 - RAINDROPS KEEP FALLIN* ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A LOVE SONG ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loud applause for this amazingly rhymed tribute to raindrops..... thanks...
May 29th, 2019 07:59 - C (Dusk arising)
This write fires the imagination until I now I too am crying with needing...
May 29th, 2019 05:57 - The NHS Alarm Call (Neville)
The disgraceful facts given right airing in this telling verse Neville....
May 29th, 2019 05:10 - New doors (Aa Harvey)
So much appeal in these words of wisdom - - I love the imagery and the...
May 28th, 2019 16:04 - Hippopotamus. (Goldfinch60)
That stance of your Hippopotamus shows careful art Andy - bet you are...
May 28th, 2019 07:10 - Faith Obeys The Word - James Series(1) (Orchidee)
Faith cares for those less fortunate knowing nothing of love is wasted in...
May 28th, 2019 07:04 - of Elspenore pt2 (Dusk arising)
Elspenore rises again with gods in the offing to please and placate -...
May 28th, 2019 04:36 - TOO MANY..... (Michael Edwards)
What a snow scene dear Mike - the ski company must be proud to own such...
May 28th, 2019 03:57 - Havana Skies (Neville)
Am packing my bags as I write to experience that flight into fancy under...
May 28th, 2019 03:54 - Old Cottage Dwellers. (Kevin browne)
Memories well captured in this piece of work show how enhanced is...
May 27th, 2019 16:01 - now i find (Dusk arising)
Lots of our aims have to bite the dust and your verse D.A. shows how in...
May 27th, 2019 15:48 - GNOME ENID (Michael Edwards)
What an amazing find Mike and now washed behind ears stony Enid will now...
May 27th, 2019 13:41 - Work Again? (Goldfinch60)
Work is fulfilling whatever our age and in later life working at things...
May 27th, 2019 10:40 - Warm Welcome (Orchidee)
Lovely picture and fine words Orchi.
May 27th, 2019 10:32 - I AM THE UMBRELLA MAN ! BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love the flow in this one dear duo - those underbrellas are most...
May 27th, 2019 04:50 - Freedom (Neville)
Ouch - - hope that scene with that lady whatsit never happened in reality...
May 27th, 2019 04:26 - A Very Special Day (Neville)
Ah - - am pleased I peeped into this little tribute to December 10th -...
May 26th, 2019 16:48 - Untitled - XVI (Suresh)
Clevery written and oh how true.
May 26th, 2019 15:52 - let him fall from heaven (Seeker123)
Love the imagery you use in this verse of yearning. The final line too is...
May 26th, 2019 05:01 - amid the hills (Dusk arising)
Thanks for the best way to a really wonderful outlook on life my friend.
May 26th, 2019 04:54 - A Cautious Distance (Neville)
A weekend tale of entanglement which threatens order and told with...
May 26th, 2019 04:51 - Our Truth (SerenWise)
A fine summary of conviction and in such romantic words - - - devotion...
May 26th, 2019 03:53 - IF I CAN HELP SOMEBODY ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The traits of willingness and service to others comes over beautifully in...
May 26th, 2019 03:47 - World in the Sky. (Goldfinch60)
Nature this coming week will no doubt reward your efforts to find peace...
May 26th, 2019 03:42 - Aiming for Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Aims keep us on track and the song you chose helps to know where to look...
May 25th, 2019 10:08 - A RAINBOW OF SENRYU (575) ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
wow Angela - what a magnificent dress and what a beautiful lady awearin\'...
May 25th, 2019 05:27 - A Single Breath (Neville)
The way to an amicable ending is found in this expressively tender verse ...
May 25th, 2019 05:24 - POEM WITHOUT WORDS ~ BRIAN for ANGELA ~ A NONRYU (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Sighs................
May 25th, 2019 00:51 - Manna from the Oven. (Goldfinch60)
What a yummy way to feed anger into the kneading of home-made bread - -...
May 24th, 2019 16:22 - ...Last Dance (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Oh simply beautiful these romantic and appreciative words Andrew.
May 24th, 2019 16:16 - Davey walked a mile (Dusk arising)
Your word- picture of early morning and road painter Davey doing his work...
May 24th, 2019 16:14 - The Hardest Goodbye (Meg)
Yes goodbyes can be the hardest of all when love has left a relationship...
May 24th, 2019 13:03 - Conch (Neville)
Clever comparison here Nev. to the cling of seashells with our lonely need...
May 24th, 2019 03:30 - ALLURE. (Fay Slimm.)
May 23rd, 2019 15:59 - Little lights blessing (Poetic Dan)
A grief shared is somehow not halved but helped for those having to live...
May 23rd, 2019 08:16 - Serving Sincerely (Orchidee)
A striking note to this hymn-poem Orchi.
May 23rd, 2019 08:13 - A GLASS HALF EMPTY OR A GLASS HALF FULL. (Michael Edwards)
Cheers for this al-co-holic fun-write Mike - - - er - - hic - that...
May 23rd, 2019 05:53 - YOU🧡LL NEVER WALK ALONE ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loud applause dear duo for this first rate write - this one I must save to...
May 23rd, 2019 05:48 - Bang On (Neville)
Ha ha - those glasses must take the blame...........
May 23rd, 2019 03:58 - small praise (Dusk arising)
The message of struggle comes over so well in these haunting lines D.A. -...
May 23rd, 2019 03:53 - Bang On (Neville)
What a sham of a first-time union that was as told in truly bold verse -...
May 23rd, 2019 03:31 - VOICES FOR CHOICES ~ BENJAMIN ZEPHANIAH (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes we could be happy with little more than the basics should we choose. A...
May 22nd, 2019 13:24 - tree uprooted (Dusk arising)
Words filled with chances to read, feel and empathize with life on a raw,...
May 22nd, 2019 11:22 - Words left hanging (Poetic Dan)
Loud applause for the wonderful ly positive words topped by colourful...
May 22nd, 2019 09:05 - Untitled - XIV (Suresh)
A sage mantra Suresh
May 22nd, 2019 05:29 - We the Innocent (Neville)
Powerful points made on those who think they create \"saints\" and for...
May 22nd, 2019 05:28 - WORDS (Michael Edwards)
Words and pictures show each of your gifts to the public and thank you for...
May 22nd, 2019 04:46 - Wonderful Evening. (Goldfinch60)
A telling write my friend and a gem of a read - knowing some evenings...
May 21st, 2019 11:12 - WE LOVE THE OLD THINGS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Old things have a scent and a presence which you bring out so well in this...
May 21st, 2019 10:18 - Six Degrees of Motion (Suresh)
Too true they will Suresh - keep looking ahead and you will get there.
May 21st, 2019 00:49 - Tserevo Koria (Neville)
Good to read such lovely warm memories of a favourite place and time your...
May 21st, 2019 00:47 - NATIONAL RULES ~ RULE ~ OK ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The best smile today came after reading these laws made for breaking dear...
May 20th, 2019 12:03 - Upon Her Ears (Neville)
Letting go gently could not be more aptly phrased in this tender view of a...
May 20th, 2019 02:47 - country road (Dusk arising)
Yes those maybe\'s can take us over and what more apt a place to cogitate...
May 19th, 2019 16:02 - Before Leaving (Neville)
A poignant hue to this read but a lesson in how to end an affair if ever I...
May 19th, 2019 13:35 - Distant (SerenWise)
A beautifully sad read Seren with such an appealing final line.
May 19th, 2019 13:24 - Mid Winter (Philip)
Love is indeed the only way we can move forward to light - an inspiring...
May 19th, 2019 13:22 - Before 40 I\'m building a starship (Poetic Dan)
Yes dear friend - life is a vital gift in which to discover the traits...
May 19th, 2019 04:54 - Signor (Neville)
Well said this telling message . Seems easy exchange for food on the table...
May 19th, 2019 04:49 - Our Way to Move Forward (Nafis Light)
Yes indeed an outlook which is petaled with smiles and forgiveness will...
May 19th, 2019 03:09 - Open Arms Welcome Poetry Muse (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A bouquet of reasons for giving the Muse a big welcome - -and so...
May 19th, 2019 03:02 - A Call In Calamity (Orchidee)
To be renewed is a blessing - that you for this reminder dear Orchi.
May 19th, 2019 02:57 - MANTRAS FOR HAPPINESS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Dealing with gentleness to all is the way to success. Thank you for all...
May 19th, 2019 02:55 - Wine for Water. (Goldfinch60)
Good cooking advice Goldy - -- wine maketh the dish.
May 19th, 2019 02:53 - IN LIFE SPARE US (Michael Edwards)
I second this view of mirrors - good point made Mike.......... a first...
May 19th, 2019 02:50 - No Pillow Required (Neville)
Sensuous and very appealing that need for no pillows Nev. .............. ...
May 18th, 2019 11:12 - the love poet (Dusk arising)
This deserves loud applause - tenderly composed and a style to which your...
May 18th, 2019 11:02 - Soul Petals (Mirela Athanas)
Good thoughts and so well expressed - thanks for the phrase...
May 18th, 2019 10:51
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