Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- WHAT WILL HAPPEN IF --------- II (Suresh)
The human species is well on its way to its own demise and if things are...
June 11th, 2019 12:06 - Time is running out (Aa Harvey)
The poignant waiting for a Miss Right comes out clearly in this well...
June 11th, 2019 11:59 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (11) (Michael Edwards)
Love it - your rhyming in this four liner is perfect - the watercolour...
June 11th, 2019 11:56 - Michael\'s Artistic World (Goldfinch60)
Finding wonder in the laying of colour on a watery bed could never be...
June 11th, 2019 06:32 - therapoetic (Dusk arising)
A very inspiring theropoetic read my friend - am so glad you made it to...
June 11th, 2019 05:34 - Butterworth Crows (Neville)
Your talent for weaving surprise into stories is second to none my friend...
June 11th, 2019 03:34 - Watch Butterflies Float. (Kevin browne)
The first two lines did it for me Kevin - - - - On days when old became...
June 10th, 2019 13:21 - Your pocket or mine it will be fine (Poetic Dan)
The simple things in this life are the best and seem to satisfy the most ...
June 10th, 2019 07:54 - Does Size Matter. (Goldfinch60)
Maybe because the size of obesity demands it my friend - who knows - but...
June 10th, 2019 04:14 - Catching Flies (Neville)
A haunt of a read this report of what carers like yourself have to see and...
June 10th, 2019 04:07 - M E M O R I E S ! ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
How true the quote that memory is frail but we if can remember the smiles...
June 9th, 2019 10:39 - Blessed to know you all (Poetic Dan)
You have arrived at where you are meant to be Dan - - keep walking along...
June 9th, 2019 09:11 - Pentecost Pourings (Orchidee)
A fine poem-hymn dear Orchi.
June 9th, 2019 07:45 - The Light of Music. (Goldfinch60)
You are a true musician dear Andy and its power will ever be able to bring...
June 9th, 2019 07:44 - Blessed to know you all (Poetic Dan)
You have arrived at where you are meant to be Dan - - keep walking along...
June 9th, 2019 07:41 - Stay Beautiful (Meg)
Yes indeed Meg - we each have to work out ways to cope........ an...
June 9th, 2019 07:37 - Look... I\'m in your heart (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A worthy tribute indeed Andrew - the words of the song too say so much to...
June 9th, 2019 07:36 - Puppy Love (Neville)
Ah - \'tis but cupboard love Neville doncha agree -a common mistake and...
June 9th, 2019 07:21 - Ghost of You (CindyB)
Your writing has that something so special Cindy - this haunting lament...
June 9th, 2019 01:42 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards)
Say that phrase as you will your art-work today hit me squarely between...
June 9th, 2019 01:37 - Of those we lose (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A heart-touching read Andrew with the pain of loss so tellingly written -...
June 9th, 2019 01:32 - Wanting to be Wanted (Neville)
A woman high on words is often strangled with their hold - your first...
June 8th, 2019 11:17 - MAORIS DANCING & SINGING 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 PANTOUM 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An event to remember dear Angela - - no doubt your parents were very...
June 8th, 2019 06:19 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (9) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - a definite NO - and so she oughta after that most unromantic...
June 8th, 2019 01:49 - My Fathers Jacket (Neville)
A tribute that only experience could write Nev......described with words...
June 8th, 2019 01:42 - Home is me (Poetic Dan)
Life\'\'s journey is full of chances to learn and improve and your verse...
June 7th, 2019 10:18 - Willing Way (Orchidee)
A fine spiritual read Orchi.
June 7th, 2019 10:13 - Memory Lost. (Goldfinch60)
The courage to face such a memory loss must be the strongest of all and...
June 7th, 2019 10:11 - Discovery (Aa Harvey)
Ah - those questions after loving a love stay close to our heart all life...
June 7th, 2019 05:38 - SEASON OF SUMMER ~ BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An apt description of summer with lots of good memories - thanks for the...
June 7th, 2019 05:35 - Broken (Neville)
A tender remembrance of how to ease the bruises of life - your last...
June 7th, 2019 03:39 - CHOICES. (Fay Slimm.)
How very kind your comment on Choices my friend and I thank you sincerely.
June 7th, 2019 03:34 - prevail (Dusk arising)
Old memories stay fresh when they contain such travesty of cruelly slain...
June 6th, 2019 15:41 - My Muse (SerenWise)
Your Muse is well loved I see Seren - keep writing sweet poetry to...
June 6th, 2019 13:15 - The Carousel Ride (Lorna)
Life\'s endless roundelay of trying not to fall and make mistakes your...
June 6th, 2019 13:01 - Famous Last Words (Neville)
By thunder I feeleth those shaftes and lances as ancient battle commences...
June 6th, 2019 04:40 - Just Like An Angel. (Kevin browne)
The flow to these well-rhymed words adds something special to the...
June 6th, 2019 03:15 - SHORE LINE (Michael Edwards)
Michael I second the message underlying this clever rhyme of outcry...
June 6th, 2019 03:06 - Dedication to my Grandmother (Jo March)
You capture so much about your much missed Grandmother in this tribute to...
June 6th, 2019 00:28 - MAMA & PAPA ~ ANGELA ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a lovely pantoum as tribute to your much love parents dear Angela -...
June 5th, 2019 13:03 - Nature\'s Canvas. (Goldfinch60)
Your words are inspiring and gratitude shines through every line of this...
June 5th, 2019 03:01 - THE MISSING \'E\' (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - this raised a big smile my friend - I love the unexpected twists...
June 5th, 2019 02:57 - Penang White Coffee (Neville)
What could be better than the lure of romance as reason for recording...
June 5th, 2019 02:15 - Ode to the Artist (Sylviasearcher)
A beautiful and very poetic usage of imagery which leaves this reader...
June 4th, 2019 06:23 - The Evening Ball (Lorna)
Ah - such a charming piece of imagery-full linguistic delight dear
June 4th, 2019 06:02 - Everywhere I Look (Neville)
A powerful push in the right direction for someone who has left the road...
June 4th, 2019 04:46 - Me ears are burning! (Orchidee)
adk;-we]02 = = v\';lrw3=0o = = which means I like this one Orchi - -...
June 3rd, 2019 11:35 - Stay (CindyB)
A linguistic medley of well-worded lines which you shape into such an...
June 3rd, 2019 05:29 - LIMPET LUCY (Michael Edwards)
This smile your verse left behind get bigger the more I think of Lucy the...
June 3rd, 2019 04:47 - Arbeit Macht Frie (Neville)
Work has a freedom agreed but labouring to sheer exhaustion which was the...
June 3rd, 2019 02:14 - I Sit at the Table. (Goldfinch60)
Your inspiring personality will find a way through when you can cope no...
June 2nd, 2019 13:49 - Four year olds should run the world! (Andrew Charles Forrest)
What a charming read Andrew and a wonderful tribute to your special yummy...
June 2nd, 2019 13:38 - Bethune Re-visited (Neville)
Oh this makes such clever use of exchangeable words -- - Bethune who was...
June 2nd, 2019 13:05 - Profitable Pause (Orchidee)
Daily meditation has been my stronghold for many moons now - a good read...
June 2nd, 2019 12:12 - VINEYARDS IN NEW ZEALAND (N I) ~ ANGELA ~ A SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A lovely sortéé into the New Zealand different wines and a bit of their...
June 2nd, 2019 09:46 - when out of my thoughts (Dusk arising)
The fact that you knew that your little gem giggled and smiled must have...
June 2nd, 2019 05:52 - Salt Marsh Fields (Neville)
Ah - - those were really the best of days Nev where innocence tried...
June 2nd, 2019 05:33 - From Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
The change from dark to the glory of light is worded so well in both your...
June 1st, 2019 16:25 - The Drowning Game (Neville)
Wow - what a compelling write with imagery to sigh for dear friend - - the...
June 1st, 2019 16:22 - A Moment (Neville)
The time when truth hits is often just one moment and you describe the...
June 1st, 2019 02:25 - Up With the Lark. (Goldfinch60)
Dawn breaking is a wonderful time of the day to see and hear lark...
June 1st, 2019 02:20 - I Dance Alone (W c)
Solo dancing can be such fun and your honest verse tells how it lifts the...
June 1st, 2019 01:52 - In Dreams (CindyB)
An amazing piece of poetry Candy - I must read this one repeatedly for...
June 1st, 2019 00:55 - Arid (SerenWise)
Such a pull of appeal in these few sad lines Seren - -- Arid indeed is...
June 1st, 2019 00:50 - FOUR SEASONAL HAIKU ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Beautiful Vivaldi music with his tribute to spring and thanks for your...
May 31st, 2019 14:05 - Less a Peach... more Apricot (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Andrew - no need at all to be sorry for this well-written lament on the...
May 31st, 2019 14:01 - Emotions - Hatred and Love (Suresh)
Emotionally charged your wise lines. Opposing and yet completing the...
May 31st, 2019 12:40 - My Mind is blank (FineB)
An engaging read of your present stagnation yet positive outcome Your...
May 31st, 2019 04:16 - Aithō (Neville)
Sunset (or rise) seen from a mountain comes to my mind after viewing...
May 31st, 2019 04:12 - If i could stay (Dusk arising)
A piece to put aside and come back to read when the need rises - your...
May 30th, 2019 16:39 - The Unsavoury truth (Jack Worrall)
Such an honest write Jack - -sincerely hope that now you are getting help...
May 30th, 2019 16:34 - Sans Sustenance (Neville)
When in need turn to imagery - - that describes me........... a telling...
May 30th, 2019 15:20 - Marrow Deep (CindyB)
So sensuous the read ignites feelings deeper than marrow - you draw my...
May 30th, 2019 12:49 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (4) (Michael Edwards)
Not knowing what to ask I will keep silent on the question of what I will...
May 30th, 2019 09:19 - Stars (CindyB)
Welcome back Cindy with the beguiling read - I could feel the pull of ...
May 30th, 2019 07:52 - No Cage for Thee (Neville)
Such a tender release would melt the need to fly free methinks - this ...
May 30th, 2019 04:21 - When Day Fades into Night (Suresh)
Night in the wild could not be versed better Suresh - thank you for...
May 29th, 2019 10:43 - New Direction. (Goldfinch60)
What a fine and hopeful write Andy - - keep looking for new ways ahead and...
May 29th, 2019 10:41 - RAINDROPS KEEP FALLIN* ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A LOVE SONG ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loud applause for this amazingly rhymed tribute to raindrops..... thanks...
May 29th, 2019 07:59 - C (Dusk arising)
This write fires the imagination until I now I too am crying with needing...
May 29th, 2019 05:57 - The NHS Alarm Call (Neville)
The disgraceful facts given right airing in this telling verse Neville....
May 29th, 2019 05:10 - New doors (Aa Harvey)
So much appeal in these words of wisdom - - I love the imagery and the...
May 28th, 2019 16:04 - Hippopotamus. (Goldfinch60)
That stance of your Hippopotamus shows careful art Andy - bet you are...
May 28th, 2019 07:10 - Faith Obeys The Word - James Series(1) (Orchidee)
Faith cares for those less fortunate knowing nothing of love is wasted in...
May 28th, 2019 07:04 - of Elspenore pt2 (Dusk arising)
Elspenore rises again with gods in the offing to please and placate -...
May 28th, 2019 04:36 - TOO MANY..... (Michael Edwards)
What a snow scene dear Mike - the ski company must be proud to own such...
May 28th, 2019 03:57 - Havana Skies (Neville)
Am packing my bags as I write to experience that flight into fancy under...
May 28th, 2019 03:54 - Old Cottage Dwellers. (Kevin browne)
Memories well captured in this piece of work show how enhanced is...
May 27th, 2019 16:01 - now i find (Dusk arising)
Lots of our aims have to bite the dust and your verse D.A. shows how in...
May 27th, 2019 15:48 - GNOME ENID (Michael Edwards)
What an amazing find Mike and now washed behind ears stony Enid will now...
May 27th, 2019 13:41 - Work Again? (Goldfinch60)
Work is fulfilling whatever our age and in later life working at things...
May 27th, 2019 10:40 - Warm Welcome (Orchidee)
Lovely picture and fine words Orchi.
May 27th, 2019 10:32 - I AM THE UMBRELLA MAN ! BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love the flow in this one dear duo - those underbrellas are most...
May 27th, 2019 04:50 - Freedom (Neville)
Ouch - - hope that scene with that lady whatsit never happened in reality...
May 27th, 2019 04:26 - A Very Special Day (Neville)
Ah - - am pleased I peeped into this little tribute to December 10th -...
May 26th, 2019 16:48 - Untitled - XVI (Suresh)
Clevery written and oh how true.
May 26th, 2019 15:52 - let him fall from heaven (Seeker123)
Love the imagery you use in this verse of yearning. The final line too is...
May 26th, 2019 05:01 - amid the hills (Dusk arising)
Thanks for the best way to a really wonderful outlook on life my friend.
May 26th, 2019 04:54 - A Cautious Distance (Neville)
A weekend tale of entanglement which threatens order and told with...
May 26th, 2019 04:51 - Our Truth (SerenWise)
A fine summary of conviction and in such romantic words - - - devotion...
May 26th, 2019 03:53
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