Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- IF I CAN HELP SOMEBODY ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The traits of willingness and service to others comes over beautifully in...
May 26th, 2019 03:47 - World in the Sky. (Goldfinch60)
Nature this coming week will no doubt reward your efforts to find peace...
May 26th, 2019 03:42 - Aiming for Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Aims keep us on track and the song you chose helps to know where to look...
May 25th, 2019 10:08 - A RAINBOW OF SENRYU (575) ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
wow Angela - what a magnificent dress and what a beautiful lady awearin\'...
May 25th, 2019 05:27 - A Single Breath (Neville)
The way to an amicable ending is found in this expressively tender verse ...
May 25th, 2019 05:24 - POEM WITHOUT WORDS ~ BRIAN for ANGELA ~ A NONRYU (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Sighs................
May 25th, 2019 00:51 - Manna from the Oven. (Goldfinch60)
What a yummy way to feed anger into the kneading of home-made bread - -...
May 24th, 2019 16:22 - ...Last Dance (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Oh simply beautiful these romantic and appreciative words Andrew.
May 24th, 2019 16:16 - Davey walked a mile (Dusk arising)
Your word- picture of early morning and road painter Davey doing his work...
May 24th, 2019 16:14 - The Hardest Goodbye (Meg)
Yes goodbyes can be the hardest of all when love has left a relationship...
May 24th, 2019 13:03 - Conch (Neville)
Clever comparison here Nev. to the cling of seashells with our lonely need...
May 24th, 2019 03:30 - ALLURE. (Fay Slimm.)
May 23rd, 2019 15:59 - Little lights blessing (Poetic Dan)
A grief shared is somehow not halved but helped for those having to live...
May 23rd, 2019 08:16 - Serving Sincerely (Orchidee)
A striking note to this hymn-poem Orchi.
May 23rd, 2019 08:13 - A GLASS HALF EMPTY OR A GLASS HALF FULL. (Michael Edwards)
Cheers for this al-co-holic fun-write Mike - - - er - - hic - that...
May 23rd, 2019 05:53 - YOU🧡LL NEVER WALK ALONE ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loud applause dear duo for this first rate write - this one I must save to...
May 23rd, 2019 05:48 - Bang On (Neville)
Ha ha - those glasses must take the blame...........
May 23rd, 2019 03:58 - small praise (Dusk arising)
The message of struggle comes over so well in these haunting lines D.A. -...
May 23rd, 2019 03:53 - Bang On (Neville)
What a sham of a first-time union that was as told in truly bold verse -...
May 23rd, 2019 03:31 - VOICES FOR CHOICES ~ BENJAMIN ZEPHANIAH (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes we could be happy with little more than the basics should we choose. A...
May 22nd, 2019 13:24 - tree uprooted (Dusk arising)
Words filled with chances to read, feel and empathize with life on a raw,...
May 22nd, 2019 11:22 - Words left hanging (Poetic Dan)
Loud applause for the wonderful ly positive words topped by colourful...
May 22nd, 2019 09:05 - Untitled - XIV (Suresh)
A sage mantra Suresh
May 22nd, 2019 05:29 - We the Innocent (Neville)
Powerful points made on those who think they create \"saints\" and for...
May 22nd, 2019 05:28 - WORDS (Michael Edwards)
Words and pictures show each of your gifts to the public and thank you for...
May 22nd, 2019 04:46 - Wonderful Evening. (Goldfinch60)
A telling write my friend and a gem of a read - knowing some evenings...
May 21st, 2019 11:12 - WE LOVE THE OLD THINGS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Old things have a scent and a presence which you bring out so well in this...
May 21st, 2019 10:18 - Six Degrees of Motion (Suresh)
Too true they will Suresh - keep looking ahead and you will get there.
May 21st, 2019 00:49 - Tserevo Koria (Neville)
Good to read such lovely warm memories of a favourite place and time your...
May 21st, 2019 00:47 - NATIONAL RULES ~ RULE ~ OK ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The best smile today came after reading these laws made for breaking dear...
May 20th, 2019 12:03 - Upon Her Ears (Neville)
Letting go gently could not be more aptly phrased in this tender view of a...
May 20th, 2019 02:47 - country road (Dusk arising)
Yes those maybe\'s can take us over and what more apt a place to cogitate...
May 19th, 2019 16:02 - Before Leaving (Neville)
A poignant hue to this read but a lesson in how to end an affair if ever I...
May 19th, 2019 13:35 - Distant (SerenWise)
A beautifully sad read Seren with such an appealing final line.
May 19th, 2019 13:24 - Mid Winter (Philip)
Love is indeed the only way we can move forward to light - an inspiring...
May 19th, 2019 13:22 - Before 40 I\'m building a starship (Poetic Dan)
Yes dear friend - life is a vital gift in which to discover the traits...
May 19th, 2019 04:54 - Signor (Neville)
Well said this telling message . Seems easy exchange for food on the table...
May 19th, 2019 04:49 - Our Way to Move Forward (Nafis Light)
Yes indeed an outlook which is petaled with smiles and forgiveness will...
May 19th, 2019 03:09 - Open Arms Welcome Poetry Muse (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A bouquet of reasons for giving the Muse a big welcome - -and so...
May 19th, 2019 03:02 - A Call In Calamity (Orchidee)
To be renewed is a blessing - that you for this reminder dear Orchi.
May 19th, 2019 02:57 - MANTRAS FOR HAPPINESS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Dealing with gentleness to all is the way to success. Thank you for all...
May 19th, 2019 02:55 - Wine for Water. (Goldfinch60)
Good cooking advice Goldy - -- wine maketh the dish.
May 19th, 2019 02:53 - IN LIFE SPARE US (Michael Edwards)
I second this view of mirrors - good point made Mike.......... a first...
May 19th, 2019 02:50 - No Pillow Required (Neville)
Sensuous and very appealing that need for no pillows Nev. .............. ...
May 18th, 2019 11:12 - the love poet (Dusk arising)
This deserves loud applause - tenderly composed and a style to which your...
May 18th, 2019 11:02 - Soul Petals (Mirela Athanas)
Good thoughts and so well expressed - thanks for the phrase...
May 18th, 2019 10:51 - The painter of the war (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A read that reaches the heart and brings tears for the fallen - you verse...
May 18th, 2019 08:37 - THIRTY ONE # TIME GONE ? ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Warmest wishes for a special year reached - may your past experiences ...
May 18th, 2019 05:25 - Dark and light, never two shall meet (Poetic Dan)
Yes balance is all we can benefit by Dan - I love the expression...
May 18th, 2019 04:17 - Are you thinking about suicide? (Sylviasearcher)
A touching video and a vital reminder. Such wise advice to see and speak...
May 18th, 2019 04:15 - Back in the Day. (Goldfinch60)
My head was nodding as I listened to the older Quo playing their famous...
May 18th, 2019 03:22 - Sincere Seeking (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi.
May 18th, 2019 03:19 - Beautifully Broken (Neville)
A type of Florence Nightingale come to mind here my friend. A tender...
May 18th, 2019 03:18 - BY CRAFTSMEN LONG SINCE DEAD (Michael Edwards)
So appealingly written I felt I was on that distant walk around crumbling...
May 18th, 2019 02:29 - The Initiation (Neville)
Worded with care by your much missed pen is innocence on display - the...
May 17th, 2019 12:55 - TEA? (Michael Edwards)
Black with no milk but a dash of lemon - that\'s my favourite cuppa and...
May 17th, 2019 10:18 - A rhyme is a rhyme (Poetic Dan)
You describe the reasons and essence of poetry so well here Dan - - a very...
May 17th, 2019 04:47 - Borrowed Love (Caleb.A)
Love is as your well-chosen words describe it here Caleb - a treasure...
May 17th, 2019 04:45 - A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Magic (Aa Harvey)
One of a series I hope my friend - love is to some never attainable and...
May 16th, 2019 12:57 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (6) (Michael Edwards)
Top marks for the artwork and as for the sen. - gotta admit my shoulders...
May 16th, 2019 12:51 - Selfhood (Poetic Dan)
Powerful truths and beautifully written - a memorable read Dan.
May 16th, 2019 10:44 - Someone to Watch Over You (Lorna)
A charming and delightful look at what a good gatekeeper can and does do...
May 16th, 2019 05:40 - The Kingdom To Come (Orchidee)
A very fine write Orchi - - based on the Biblical prophet called Micah it...
May 16th, 2019 05:37 - LA ABUELA MIA : MY GRANDMAMA ! A TRIBUTE : ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You build well with tenderest rhyme the best picture of a much loved...
May 16th, 2019 05:34 - DESERT ISLAND RISKS ! A RHYMING SONNET ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Must have me books and they weight a load - most of \'em of course are...
May 15th, 2019 06:40 - Dame Janet. (Goldfinch60)
Another gem of tribute to the art of singing and the gift of a wonderful...
May 15th, 2019 06:36 - Flowers Musing on Rain (Lorna)
Could feel the frustration of those flowers appealing - - such an...
May 15th, 2019 06:32 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (5) (Michael Edwards)
Wow this one tells me a story - not so obscure to my eye Michael - - and...
May 15th, 2019 06:29 - of Elspenore pt2 (Dusk arising)
Mystical phrasing attracts all the more the singing of praises to the...
May 14th, 2019 16:29 - DORIS DAY AN ACROSTIC TRIBUTE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A sure favourite of mine too was Doris - - she was a winner in all...
May 14th, 2019 16:22 - Red Cushions (Lorna)
A taste of summer in a change of decor -what a wonderful idea for a poem...
May 14th, 2019 13:15 - Love Letter (SerenWise)
Honest and full of delightful imagery this ode to devotion comes home loud...
May 14th, 2019 00:53 - Mix Ups #27 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
And that old lady was right my friend........ thanks Andrew for the...
May 13th, 2019 12:20 - Chet Blow Your Horn. (Goldfinch60)
Another Chet fan here Goldy - could listen to his playing all night and...
May 13th, 2019 12:17 - All The Love He Kept. (Kevin browne)
Such an absorbing and wonderfully expressed write - - such a moving...
May 13th, 2019 05:23 - Thinker (Suresh)
I found these few words more than moving - truth wrapped in poetry stays...
May 13th, 2019 04:34 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (4) (Michael Edwards)
Turned white and dry they droppings make good Five Jacks didya know Mike ?...
May 13th, 2019 04:09 - HUMAN HANDS ~ ALMOST INDISPENSABLE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a wonderful and sometimes overlooked gift are human hands - as your...
May 13th, 2019 04:06 - Rainbows (Lorna)
A beautifully written verse - - full of positive vibes to remember dear...
May 13th, 2019 03:28 - SUNRISE ~ SUNSET : A BLANK VERSE SONNET : ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A wondrous time to be outside is sunrise or sunset -- -or both. Thanks...
May 12th, 2019 03:02 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha - -- not so obscure to me....good one Mike.
May 12th, 2019 03:00 - it just wouldnt rhyme (Dusk arising)
First class writing my friend - a very inspiring read - - - - - I...
May 10th, 2019 10:32 - We\'re all needed (Poetic Dan)
a wonderful rhyme of sound advice Dan - we all need each other to help...
May 10th, 2019 04:31 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Nonsense was never better expressed for I see in these lines a lifestyle...
May 10th, 2019 04:29 - Friends Are Special (W c)
So pleased I caught this lovely tribute to the special place friends hold...
May 9th, 2019 09:51 - COFFEE A LA MODE ~ A Sonnet in Internal Rhyme ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thanks so much for outlining the different coffees - I have learnt much...
May 8th, 2019 08:05 - Bum lie (Poetic Dan)
This has to be one of your best Dan - - loved the title and what it...
May 8th, 2019 06:02 - Peaceful Buzzard. (Goldfinch60)
A favourite of mine is the majestic buzzard - - here in south Cornwall...
May 8th, 2019 05:59 - of elspenore (Dusk arising)
Wow - this reads like the start of a marvelous saga D.A. - makes me want...
May 8th, 2019 04:50 - Royalty Reflections (Orchidee)
A very happy write my friend.
May 8th, 2019 04:45 - Fire-Crest (Neville)
A scene when enacted brings out raw feelings in females like me..........
May 8th, 2019 04:44 - Satisfaction in Life. (Goldfinch60)
I know what satisfaction a completed puzzle can bring - - a lovely read...
May 7th, 2019 16:41 - Treasure Hunting (Suresh)
A meaningful read Suresh -- I like the notion of hunting for treasured...
May 7th, 2019 16:37 - Hark (Neville)
Even on Holy Days the earth\'s sighs, if heard, can reverberate in still...
May 7th, 2019 16:33 - Skylark (Moordykspot2)
Ah - the skylarks have deserted this part of south-western Cornwall for...
May 7th, 2019 14:38 - CHOCOLATE AN ACROSTIC ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A wonderful few moments just watching the making of chocolate from the...
May 7th, 2019 12:38 - new world (Dusk arising)
A fantastic journey down memory land with names I remember so well
- -...
May 7th, 2019 11:20 - Rest Request (Orchidee)
Another fine read Orchi - rest after labour is needed by all ages;
May 7th, 2019 11:14 - Find your rhythm (Poetic Dan)
Really good advice and worth a few reads Dan - - saved to my faves.
May 7th, 2019 05:51 - Ghosts & Shells (Neville)
Real poets need no admiration but feed on word-mindfulness which is a...
May 7th, 2019 03:58
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