Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Robin (Classicmister)
The UK robin is a really brave little bird and seems less afraid of humans...
June 4th, 2019 07:56 - Everywhere I Look (Neville)
I never sensed anything was going on...blimey i am so detached and...
June 4th, 2019 07:51 - WHAT IS WINE ? ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Shurrup science teacher and get it down yer neck.... LOL
Its not about...
June 4th, 2019 05:09 - Believe it real (Poetic Dan)
Once again a lot of wisdom in your words.
The video though is quite...
June 4th, 2019 05:00 - LILY. (Fay Slimm.)
Now THERE is an expression of love for an often overlooked beauty. What a...
June 4th, 2019 04:30 - Here An Hilastrion (Orchidee)
You certainly know how to play to the gallery with this popular stuff...
June 4th, 2019 04:24 - Continuing Life. (Goldfinch60)
Excellent expression..... Why can\'t more of us be so enlightened?...
June 4th, 2019 04:20 - IN TRANSCENDENCE (Michael Edwards)
Four verses of considering... how am i gonna fix my motorbike - memories...
June 4th, 2019 04:15 - A Time for Everything (Lorna)
yep, there comes a time doesn\'t there.
Does this mean we can expect...
June 3rd, 2019 16:21 - Hardly a sound (Poetic Dan)
Careful with that wind M8. Though TBH i\'ve never smelled an eagles fart....
June 3rd, 2019 02:54 - The Senses For This Site. (Goldfinch60)
Watching a Woody Allen film over the weekend i discovered this piece,...
June 3rd, 2019 02:31 - Me ears are burning! (Orchidee)
Your ears and Fido\'s should indeed be all aflame ... see my comments to...
June 3rd, 2019 02:25 - HAUTEUR.. (Fay Slimm.)
Indeed a Steely piece for this feared hunter. I have seen sparrow hawks...
June 3rd, 2019 02:24 - Arbeit Macht Frie (Neville)
Three words to remind us all of tryranny and madmen. Work in that instance...
June 3rd, 2019 02:17 - DECLUTTER ~ THE RULE OF TEN ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 6 8 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I have TEN times too much clutter
Most of which is fit for the gutter
If...
June 3rd, 2019 02:14 - LIMPET LUCY (Michael Edwards)
Reminds me of Orchi\'s dog Fido
He lost his left ear to a Flymo
His pee...
June 3rd, 2019 02:10 - Salt Marsh Fields (Neville)
Great visions come out of this. I think youve encapsulated the magic of a...
June 2nd, 2019 05:06 - Thanks for pushing me (Poetic Dan)
Empathy, know what that is? Well youve got it in shedloads... thats how u...
June 2nd, 2019 05:01 - Four year olds should run the world! (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Absolutely delightful! I love my grandkids too.
June 2nd, 2019 03:51 - Where Are You Tonight? (SerenWise)
Hmmm maybe you dont want to hear the reply to the songs question.
I\'m...
June 2nd, 2019 01:45 - Newt (Sillygirl)
OMG what is it you are keeping now then? Is it big? What does it eat. Is...
June 2nd, 2019 01:41 - Let\'s Celebrate Something Together (Nafis Light)
Sounds like a damn good suggestion to me.
June 2nd, 2019 01:38 - Profitable Pause (Orchidee)
Orchidee, we dont share the same appreciation of what god is but i do...
June 2nd, 2019 01:36 - Emissary (Suresh)
I\'m not sure about this one. Maybe you should set Orchidee\'s dog on him?
June 2nd, 2019 01:34 - I Sit at the Table. (Goldfinch60)
On the face of it a sad piece but....
Alone, or getting used to...
June 2nd, 2019 01:32 - For Being Jack The Lad. (Kevin browne)
This gave me laughs Kevin. I can see theres a darker side but it\'s the...
June 2nd, 2019 01:23 - 4 years of sharing (Poetic Dan)
Some are gone and some remain.
Some are quite missed. MPS has...
June 2nd, 2019 01:18 - A Moment (Neville)
Dramatic Neville, very dramatic. Which is exactly what the subject...
June 2nd, 2019 01:08 - From Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
The light within us is our positive energy which generates purpose.
I...
June 2nd, 2019 01:05 - If i could stay (Dusk arising)
Well bless you Dan. I\'m pleased that my words have meant stuff for you. I...
June 1st, 2019 19:56 - the immersivity of pain (Jon Nakapalau)
That is one huge loss. I feel the pain in your words.
May 30th, 2019 19:17 - No Cage for Thee (Neville)
Beautiful separation of possessive romantic love from unconditional love....
May 30th, 2019 09:52 - WHISPERS. (Fay Slimm.)
This is Fay at her finest. You are marvellous with the dawn. It\'s almost...
May 30th, 2019 09:47 - night troubles (Clair jane)
Consider the life of a Butterfly, from maggot, thru pupae to a beautiful...
May 30th, 2019 09:42 - A Letter From Those Who Will Stand (Nafis Light)
Troubled times and peaceful repair seem to come in repetative waves....
May 30th, 2019 09:35 - Ascension Alightings (Orchidee)
Is this done as a rap... if you haven\'t tried it as a rap, have a go. it...
May 30th, 2019 09:32 - LIFE*S DECISIONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 5 9 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great stuff. As a self employed person this has been my way of life since...
May 30th, 2019 09:30 - Of Inevitability (Andrew Charles Forrest)
So very true and you impart such wisdom here. Makes me smile.
Just...
May 30th, 2019 09:28 - Young of Age. (Goldfinch60)
Leave it out. I bet she made you all feel ancient but wishing you were 30...
May 30th, 2019 09:25 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (4) (Michael Edwards)
You didn\'t tell me to expect this.
May 30th, 2019 08:31 - In our own time (Poetic Dan)
I think those are your finest words Dan. Open and truthful and in contact...
May 30th, 2019 08:22 - Paraclete Promise (Orchidee)
Christ says this then he says something else... or so you wrote today, do...
May 29th, 2019 12:10 - SELFNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
As i matured I began to see this in older folk and still do. I wonder if...
May 29th, 2019 05:50 - The NHS Alarm Call (Neville)
A bit of a lottery is NHS nursing care today. Whilst mostly excellent,...
May 29th, 2019 05:47 - Waiting for you (Poetic Dan)
Good fun stuff.
May 29th, 2019 05:44 - When Day Fades into Night (Suresh)
And for some the night brings fear of what must be faced in the mind when...
May 29th, 2019 05:42 - New Direction. (Goldfinch60)
Always admire your positivity leaping out through your words.
May 29th, 2019 05:40 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (3) (Michael Edwards)
A knife could come in handy.
May 29th, 2019 05:39 - White Feather (Meg)
With buddhism there is no deity, no god (other than yourself) but there is...
May 28th, 2019 14:06 - A Silenced whisper Of An Old Chinese Doll. (Kevin browne)
How cruel our existence here can be. Thank goodness for Buddha and...
May 28th, 2019 10:55 - Double lock the gate! (Poetic Dan)
All the cats in the grass
will stand up and smile
at the very first...
May 28th, 2019 09:58 - THE VISION. (Fay Slimm.)
I recall the last time i took a plunge several ladies seemed to take...
May 28th, 2019 03:57 - Havana Skies (Neville)
I slipped on my Havanna Skiis, lowered my goggles and was off down...
May 28th, 2019 03:53 - TOO MANY..... (Michael Edwards)
Enter the Duracell washable, re-useable, indestructable protector....
May 28th, 2019 03:44 - TOO MANY..... (Michael Edwards)
Enter the Duracell washable, re-useable, indestructable protector....
May 28th, 2019 02:51 - WHAT IS A POET ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 7 7 BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Cor! and there i was thinkin, I could never be a poet. Now you\'ve shown...
May 28th, 2019 02:49 - Hippopotamus. (Goldfinch60)
Come on cheapskate admit it, you only bought it cos it was 50p.
Only...
May 28th, 2019 02:46 - Humanity - 1 (Suresh)
I\'ve pockets full of small change. Everything changes.
May 28th, 2019 02:44 - A dog whisper not many know (Poetic Dan)
Setting a target year is good and positive so long as you are mindful that...
May 27th, 2019 09:28 - Freedom (Neville)
Sacre disc blue mon sewer! These street beggars will cadge a fag and a...
May 27th, 2019 06:08 - LUSH. (Fay Slimm.)
You\'re so well aquainted with vinyards Fay. Now they do say that the vine...
May 27th, 2019 06:05 - Warm Welcome (Orchidee)
That lovely picture is the place my wife ran off with a goblin.
My ex...
May 27th, 2019 05:57 - I AM THE UMBRELLA MAN ! BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Delightful happy reading... get on the joanna Angela and belt this out...
May 27th, 2019 05:51 - Work Again? (Goldfinch60)
Sadly tha credit crunch scuppered my retirement finances and i have to...
May 27th, 2019 05:45 - GNOME ENID (Michael Edwards)
Hello Enid, peering out to greet us from you mushroom home. How fine your...
May 27th, 2019 05:39 - Untitled - XVI (Suresh)
Until wisdom is attained. Usually attained after experiencing the outcome...
May 26th, 2019 12:01 - Dreaded Words (Apete4010)
Really brave words from you. My heart goes out to you receiving the news...
May 26th, 2019 08:15 - Up to us to use what we see (Poetic Dan)
Reading your comments, you do of course have great healing qualities. You...
May 26th, 2019 08:10 - Is Anyone Happy? (Meg)
Pah to social media. besides i\'m far too hideous.... imperfections - r...
May 26th, 2019 08:02 - A Cautious Distance (Neville)
..postcard text...
Dear poet, saw you in the cafe drooling over a really...
May 26th, 2019 04:43 - World in the Sky. (Goldfinch60)
A man enjoying the simple beauty of existence in our wonderful...
May 26th, 2019 04:36 - We\'re meant to be, so why do I feel so? (Sugar Suicide)
OK plain speaking. It reads like you are being taken for granted. If you...
May 25th, 2019 18:41 - The Hardest Goodbye (Meg)
Having read your 2nd piece I thought I\'d take a look at your first. Glad...
May 25th, 2019 13:51 - Self Harm but Not As You Know It (Meg)
Love the message conveyed here. Most conventional self harmers start at an...
May 25th, 2019 13:46 - Love Does Blind (Asrealastheycome)
Great poem about a lesson learned.
May 25th, 2019 13:36 - A RAINBOW OF SENRYU (575) ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I\'m dazzled.
May 25th, 2019 13:34 - Daily Diligences (Orchidee)
Oh your daily dalliances! ooooh, you are awful!
May 25th, 2019 13:32 - Love was all that was wanted (Theskyisnotblue)
To love and to be hurt by love is an ongoing thing. But don\'t ever let it...
May 25th, 2019 13:31 - Countless Forgiveness (Nafis Light)
Does love need to be asked to forgive?
May 25th, 2019 13:27 - BLISS (Suresh)
Reincarnation innit!
May 25th, 2019 11:43 - A Single Breath (Neville)
Something mesmerising about a single breast, ... the i realised you had...
May 25th, 2019 10:06 - Aiming for Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
That is undoubtedly good advice BUT with one proviso. Never tread on...
May 25th, 2019 10:02 - Your Unread Lies. (Kevin browne)
Love doesnt last. Partnerships can but often dont.
Sounds like someone...
May 25th, 2019 09:59 - Tides in my mind (Theskyisnotblue)
If you are wary of the water, stay on the beach. There\'s a whole lot of...
May 25th, 2019 09:55 - Untitled - XV (Suresh)
Yep, this should be a government health warning displayed wherever they...
May 25th, 2019 09:54 - Of Old Chartered Walks. (Kevin browne)
THis is a fun and joyful read with some darkness which i havent fathomed...
May 25th, 2019 09:51 - ...Last Dance (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Theres so much we learn about love with our years. Love itself teaches...
May 24th, 2019 07:46 - Not my normal writing but neither is life (Poetic Dan)
We really are existing in a continuum where death is as much a part of...
May 24th, 2019 07:43 - Conch (Neville)
I most definitely shell have to agree for there was a time when all i...
May 24th, 2019 07:36 - WALK EASY. (Fay Slimm.)
Looking back it is easy to see the failures for they came as a shock to...
May 24th, 2019 07:31 - Secluded and Reclusive (Asrealastheycome)
I am so \'with you\' on this subject. A free-thinker, an...
May 24th, 2019 01:33 - Manna from the Oven. (Goldfinch60)
Hey fatty..... does it make good toast?
You really shouldn\'t tell me...
May 24th, 2019 01:19 - Demesne (SerenWise)
OOOOOH, you are awful ...... but i like you.
May 23rd, 2019 13:16 - A Living Scarecrow (Suresh)
Tomorrow i hope you will be feeling better dressed.
May 23rd, 2019 11:39 - ALLURE. (Fay Slimm.)
The immense power of a rough sea meeting a varied coastline is a wonderous...
May 23rd, 2019 04:19 - Bang On (Neville)
Next time he\'ll not take his socks off and he\'ll use the curtains to...
May 23rd, 2019 04:00 - Little lights blessing (Poetic Dan)
Life is cruel and death is a thief when arriving out of time.
Grief is a...
May 23rd, 2019 03:55 - Pretty. (Goldfinch60)
Were you as captivated by the picture on the puzzle box?
May 23rd, 2019 03:50 - A GLASS HALF EMPTY OR A GLASS HALF FULL. (Michael Edwards)
Sod the glass, pass me the bottle.
And I agree with Goldfinch.
May 23rd, 2019 03:49 - Be Kind (Demi.T)
Great message but i fear those it is directed toward are deaf to the...
May 22nd, 2019 12:12
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