Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Of Inevitability (Andrew Charles Forrest) So very true and you impart such wisdom here. Makes me smile. Just...
  May 30th, 2019 09:28
• Young of Age. (Goldfinch60) Leave it out. I bet she made you all feel ancient but wishing you were 30...
  May 30th, 2019 09:25
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (4) (Michael Edwards) You didn\'t tell me to expect this.
  May 30th, 2019 08:31
• In our own time (Poetic Dan) I think those are your finest words Dan. Open and truthful and in contact...
  May 30th, 2019 08:22
• Paraclete Promise (Orchidee) Christ says this then he says something else... or so you wrote today, do...
  May 29th, 2019 12:10
• SELFNESS. (Fay Slimm.) As i matured I began to see this in older folk and still do. I wonder if...
  May 29th, 2019 05:50
• The NHS Alarm Call (Neville) A bit of a lottery is NHS nursing care today. Whilst mostly excellent,...
  May 29th, 2019 05:47
• Waiting for you (Poetic Dan) Good fun stuff.
  May 29th, 2019 05:44
• When Day Fades into Night (Suresh) And for some the night brings fear of what must be faced in the mind when...
  May 29th, 2019 05:42
• New Direction. (Goldfinch60) Always admire your positivity leaping out through your words.
  May 29th, 2019 05:40
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (3) (Michael Edwards) A knife could come in handy.
  May 29th, 2019 05:39
• White Feather (Meg) With buddhism there is no deity, no god (other than yourself) but there is...
  May 28th, 2019 14:06
• A Silenced whisper Of An Old Chinese Doll. (Kevin browne) How cruel our existence here can be. Thank goodness for Buddha and...
  May 28th, 2019 10:55
• Double lock the gate! (Poetic Dan) All the cats in the grass will stand up and smile at the very first...
  May 28th, 2019 09:58
• THE VISION. (Fay Slimm.) I recall the last time i took a plunge several ladies seemed to take...
  May 28th, 2019 03:57
• Havana Skies (Neville) I slipped on my Havanna Skiis, lowered my goggles and was off down...
  May 28th, 2019 03:53
• TOO MANY..... (Michael Edwards) Enter the Duracell washable, re-useable, indestructable protector....
  May 28th, 2019 03:44
• TOO MANY..... (Michael Edwards) Enter the Duracell washable, re-useable, indestructable protector....
  May 28th, 2019 02:51
• WHAT IS A POET ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 7 7 BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Cor! and there i was thinkin, I could never be a poet. Now you\'ve shown...
  May 28th, 2019 02:49
• Hippopotamus. (Goldfinch60) Come on cheapskate admit it, you only bought it cos it was 50p. Only...
  May 28th, 2019 02:46
• Humanity - 1 (Suresh) I\'ve pockets full of small change. Everything changes.
  May 28th, 2019 02:44
• A dog whisper not many know (Poetic Dan) Setting a target year is good and positive so long as you are mindful that...
  May 27th, 2019 09:28
• Freedom (Neville) Sacre disc blue mon sewer! These street beggars will cadge a fag and a...
  May 27th, 2019 06:08
• LUSH. (Fay Slimm.) You\'re so well aquainted with vinyards Fay. Now they do say that the vine...
  May 27th, 2019 06:05
• Warm Welcome (Orchidee) That lovely picture is the place my wife ran off with a goblin. My ex...
  May 27th, 2019 05:57
• I AM THE UMBRELLA MAN ! BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Delightful happy reading... get on the joanna Angela and belt this out...
  May 27th, 2019 05:51
• Work Again? (Goldfinch60) Sadly tha credit crunch scuppered my retirement finances and i have to...
  May 27th, 2019 05:45
• GNOME ENID (Michael Edwards) Hello Enid, peering out to greet us from you mushroom home. How fine your...
  May 27th, 2019 05:39
• Untitled - XVI (Suresh) Until wisdom is attained. Usually attained after experiencing the outcome...
  May 26th, 2019 12:01
• Dreaded Words (Apete4010) Really brave words from you. My heart goes out to you receiving the news...
  May 26th, 2019 08:15
• Up to us to use what we see (Poetic Dan) Reading your comments, you do of course have great healing qualities. You...
  May 26th, 2019 08:10
• Is Anyone Happy? (Meg) Pah to social media. besides i\'m far too hideous.... imperfections - r...
  May 26th, 2019 08:02
• A Cautious Distance (Neville) ..postcard text... Dear poet, saw you in the cafe drooling over a really...
  May 26th, 2019 04:43
• World in the Sky. (Goldfinch60) A man enjoying the simple beauty of existence in our wonderful...
  May 26th, 2019 04:36
• We\'re meant to be, so why do I feel so? (Sugar Suicide) OK plain speaking. It reads like you are being taken for granted. If you...
  May 25th, 2019 18:41
• The Hardest Goodbye (Meg) Having read your 2nd piece I thought I\'d take a look at your first. Glad...
  May 25th, 2019 13:51
• Self Harm but Not As You Know It (Meg) Love the message conveyed here. Most conventional self harmers start at an...
  May 25th, 2019 13:46
• Love Does Blind (Asrealastheycome) Great poem about a lesson learned.
  May 25th, 2019 13:36
• A RAINBOW OF SENRYU (575) ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) I\'m dazzled.
  May 25th, 2019 13:34
• Daily Diligences (Orchidee) Oh your daily dalliances! ooooh, you are awful!
  May 25th, 2019 13:32
• Love was all that was wanted (Theskyisnotblue) To love and to be hurt by love is an ongoing thing. But don\'t ever let it...
  May 25th, 2019 13:31
• Countless Forgiveness (Nafis Light) Does love need to be asked to forgive?
  May 25th, 2019 13:27
• BLISS (Suresh) Reincarnation innit!
  May 25th, 2019 11:43
• A Single Breath (Neville) Something mesmerising about a single breast, ... the i realised you had...
  May 25th, 2019 10:06
• Aiming for Dreams. (Goldfinch60) That is undoubtedly good advice BUT with one proviso. Never tread on...
  May 25th, 2019 10:02
• Your Unread Lies. (Kevin browne) Love doesnt last. Partnerships can but often dont. Sounds like someone...
  May 25th, 2019 09:59
• Tides in my mind (Theskyisnotblue) If you are wary of the water, stay on the beach. There\'s a whole lot of...
  May 25th, 2019 09:55
• Untitled - XV (Suresh) Yep, this should be a government health warning displayed wherever they...
  May 25th, 2019 09:54
• Of Old Chartered Walks. (Kevin browne) THis is a fun and joyful read with some darkness which i havent fathomed...
  May 25th, 2019 09:51
• ...Last Dance (Andrew Charles Forrest) Theres so much we learn about love with our years. Love itself teaches...
  May 24th, 2019 07:46
• Not my normal writing but neither is life (Poetic Dan) We really are existing in a continuum where death is as much a part of...
  May 24th, 2019 07:43
• Conch (Neville) I most definitely shell have to agree for there was a time when all i...
  May 24th, 2019 07:36
• WALK EASY. (Fay Slimm.) Looking back it is easy to see the failures for they came as a shock to...
  May 24th, 2019 07:31
• Secluded and Reclusive (Asrealastheycome) I am so \'with you\' on this subject. A free-thinker, an...
  May 24th, 2019 01:33
• Manna from the Oven. (Goldfinch60) Hey fatty..... does it make good toast? You really shouldn\'t tell me...
  May 24th, 2019 01:19
• Demesne (SerenWise) OOOOOH, you are awful ...... but i like you.
  May 23rd, 2019 13:16
• A Living Scarecrow (Suresh) Tomorrow i hope you will be feeling better dressed.
  May 23rd, 2019 11:39
• ALLURE. (Fay Slimm.) The immense power of a rough sea meeting a varied coastline is a wonderous...
  May 23rd, 2019 04:19
• Bang On (Neville) Next time he\'ll not take his socks off and he\'ll use the curtains to...
  May 23rd, 2019 04:00
• Little lights blessing (Poetic Dan) Life is cruel and death is a thief when arriving out of time. Grief is a...
  May 23rd, 2019 03:55
• Pretty. (Goldfinch60) Were you as captivated by the picture on the puzzle box?
  May 23rd, 2019 03:50
• A GLASS HALF EMPTY OR A GLASS HALF FULL. (Michael Edwards) Sod the glass, pass me the bottle. And I agree with Goldfinch.
  May 23rd, 2019 03:49
• Be Kind (Demi.T) Great message but i fear those it is directed toward are deaf to the...
  May 22nd, 2019 12:12
• Through Ugly Rows And Telegraph. (Kevin browne) I\'m thinking theres a woman in here who was false. Attractive but out to...
  May 22nd, 2019 11:51
• Words left hanging (Poetic Dan) If i wish the world to love my offspring am i guilty of deluding myself...
  May 22nd, 2019 11:36
• We the Innocent (Neville) A fitting tribute to the murdering nutter of the twentieth century and his...
  May 22nd, 2019 11:12
• FLASHES. (Fay Slimm.) Agape indeed. Firstly, thats is a really super picture. You capture the...
  May 22nd, 2019 11:07
• this body/my body (Queer-with-a-pen) Great finale there. Your words made me think of your mind and its struggle...
  May 22nd, 2019 01:57
• Untitled - XIV (Suresh) Cor! you don\'t half write them..... I love this. Brings to mind...
  May 22nd, 2019 01:48
• Obscurity Goldiku. (Goldfinch60) Tallest mountains snowbound footprints Yeti A Duskiku (of uncounted...
  May 22nd, 2019 01:47
• WORDS (Michael Edwards) Thought provoking words today. Also your paints are waiting for your...
  May 22nd, 2019 01:42
• WE LOVE THE OLD THINGS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) ok thanks for replying ... i will know where to look in future
  May 21st, 2019 19:59
• WE LOVE THE OLD THINGS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Whats this \"sorry i replied with a comment - please check\" check...
  May 21st, 2019 17:31
• The Killer Of All Time. (Kevin browne) You busy mind finds time stretched and echoing as time itself is taking...
  May 21st, 2019 14:14
• The love plan (Aa Harvey) Wow, tremendous love poem. Been there, done that, T-shirts are all worn...
  May 21st, 2019 14:06
• WE LOVE THE OLD THINGS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) My love of old things has now become self love. Yep, i\'m antique. My...
  May 21st, 2019 14:03
• The Gnome knows (Poetic Dan) I used to have a gnome but he buggered off after some swine pinched his...
  May 21st, 2019 07:29
• RE-WRITING RHYMES. (Fay Slimm.) Ha ha ha love it. I have done similar things with this lovely poem several...
  May 21st, 2019 07:26
• Wonderful Evening. (Goldfinch60) Blissful moments when the things we have long enjoyed come together and we...
  May 21st, 2019 07:22
• Six Degrees of Motion (Suresh) Is this simulator as advanced as you are. Are robots as advanced as we...
  May 21st, 2019 07:17
• Tserevo Koria (Neville) Encouraged by daredevil M.E.\'s comment i found the 4x4 vid on you tube...
  May 21st, 2019 06:55
• Diamonds and Dust (SerenWise) heres an extract from something i wrote recently:- for thats where every...
  May 20th, 2019 14:46
• Ignorance\'s Dilemma (Suresh) Elusive politicians cannot claim the lack of the right questions when they...
  May 20th, 2019 14:39
• Ignorance\'s Dilemma (Suresh) Elusive politicians cannot claim the lack of the right questions when they...
  May 20th, 2019 12:10
• My Problem. (Wholeheart97) Emotional stuff. Do you think this situation will get any better? I\'m...
  May 20th, 2019 08:31
• Know Thy Worth (Hidden) A lot of good stuff in there sir and nicely written. A pleasure to read.
  May 20th, 2019 08:25
• Don’t Cry (Demi.T) Don\'t look too closely, no one else sees the you which you see. So brave...
  May 20th, 2019 05:37
• NATIONAL RULES ~ RULE ~ OK ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) In Luxembourg, so i have heard trains never run on Sundays it\'s not...
  May 20th, 2019 04:38
• Epilogue (Poetic Dan) Everyday is followed by a rhyme. Monday is followed by Tuesday... they...
  May 20th, 2019 04:33
• Chasing After Tomorrow (Gino) Yes, we overlook those familiars in a rush of chasing dreams. But our...
  May 20th, 2019 03:15
• Upon Her Ears (Neville) Your way of imparting these words speaks of so much more finesse and...
  May 20th, 2019 03:06
• WOMAN-FED. (Fay Slimm.) Wonderful taken for granted days of yore. You give initially a really...
  May 20th, 2019 02:59
• A Night at the Opera. (Goldfinch60) Initially i joined the music scene as a singer and went on to front...
  May 20th, 2019 02:51
• SHE WAITS (Michael Edwards) I had in mind Goldilocks until i realised she had only three bears unlike...
  May 20th, 2019 02:48
• Hal Blaine (SoulMeetsBody) Welcome to MPS where you will find many of us have the music coursing thru...
  May 19th, 2019 13:47
• Long distance bittersweet (Theskyisnotblue) Love is a beautiful thing and it simply oozes out of your words today. A...
  May 19th, 2019 13:44
• Everyday I still remember (Demi.T) This is a really moving and heartfelt tribute to a loved person. It is a...
  May 19th, 2019 10:12
• Signor (Neville) Ahhh Cuba eh? Heavenly Havannah. Thanks for the big smile.
  May 19th, 2019 03:51
• Our Way to Move Forward (Nafis Light) Good positive reading and delightful. You validate this/our way of life...
  May 19th, 2019 03:49
• A Letter Unsent (Gemma) Those letters we write but dare not send are the bleeding of our true...
  May 19th, 2019 03:45