Comments on community poems by Neville
- seasonal diabetes (Arqios)
Great title lost somewhere in translation ...... maybe :)
April 13th, 2023 13:06 - Festival of Food (Orchidee)
talk to me not of fishes nor seafood, I have been off sick for the past...
April 13th, 2023 09:15 - Gifted (Fay Slimm.)
I have known many such gifted individuals .. some have clearly fallen on...
April 13th, 2023 04:27 - All Because of You (Accidental Poet)
say it like I truly believe it is .. and then wrap it in the warm...
April 12th, 2023 12:07 - The Magic of the Eyes (Mottakeenur Rehman)
yes, absolutely what a wonderful tribute my friend, Fariha is a very...
April 12th, 2023 07:06 - Morning Moon (Lorna)
ah\' the moon personified, perfectly captured and subsequently...
April 12th, 2023 05:16 - Resurrection Reign (Orchidee)
when will it all be over .. am asking for a friend ..
April 12th, 2023 03:07 - My Candy Shop (Eclisse)
you have a compelling pen ma\'am .. your mouth as above is both fitting...
April 12th, 2023 02:55 - Nature\'s Harmony. (Goldfinch60)
it is in the very nature of nature to be at its most beautiful in...
April 12th, 2023 02:49 - Listening. (Fay Slimm.)
Sshh .. listen, but don\'t say a word .. aint it just beautiful say\'s...
April 11th, 2023 12:13 - Commission Commitment (Orchidee)
Eggzactly .. very fittingly Easterfized
April 11th, 2023 03:50 - My Angel of Love (Accidental Poet)
Do you know what my fine literary friend, I could feel this coming as...
April 11th, 2023 03:43 - Memories (Fay Slimm.)
absolutely magnificent and I dont often use the M word Fay .. would I be...
April 11th, 2023 03:38 - If I be remembered let it be: Kindness that names me (L. B. Mek)
yes, truly amazing, I see what you mean and think similarly ..
and...
April 10th, 2023 05:00 - Value (Mottakeenur Rehman)
I\'m with the fella with the crimson hood and the big pointy nose
April 10th, 2023 04:51 - April\'s Insistence (Fay Slimm.)
in a word beautiful .. in a poem, even more so .. and I doubt you could...
April 10th, 2023 04:47 - Knowing (Lorna)
this is sweeter than a bucketful of demerara topped with a pint of...
April 10th, 2023 04:44 - Interval Imposed (Orchidee)
I believe this is perfectly timed ..
April 8th, 2023 03:50 - Back In The Sixties. (Goldfinch60)
good on you GF60 sir you can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a good old...
April 8th, 2023 02:25 - Loosing a bit (Spilleronsheet)
This must surely be among your very best to date my friend .. Neville
April 8th, 2023 02:19 - Unsung (Fay Slimm.)
for if not smothered stillness guides minds
to find in heard...
April 7th, 2023 06:54 - Gospel Goodness (Orchidee)
Happy Easter
April 7th, 2023 06:00 - Let\'s Pave the Way for a Future Bright (Mottakeenur Rehman)
a timeless song of hope .. in a tired and sad old world .. bravo dear...
April 7th, 2023 05:58 - You & Me (Shelbgirl11)
Decisions, decisions, decisions .. oh\' and so much choice too ..
It...
April 6th, 2023 12:57 - Poets Die, Poems Don\'t (Rocky Lagou)
Tis truly good to have you back Rocky, even if only in the interim .....
April 6th, 2023 08:49 - The City (MysteryGhost)
I guess it pays to keep one\'s eyes open in the city .. otherwise, just...
April 6th, 2023 08:39 - A Poem About Spring (MysteryGhost)
a fine, but clearly very sad observation on what might otherwise be, just...
April 6th, 2023 08:32 - Kinship (Fay Slimm.)
I don\'t care what that dog might say or think .. Fuck it, this just...
April 6th, 2023 04:02 - War is Never Proper (Mottakeenur Rehman)
this packs a hefty wallop and the kidney punch with a twist it delivers...
April 6th, 2023 03:55 - Plans (Lorna)
I beg to differ with my learned friend .. this is better than good .....
April 6th, 2023 03:51 - Sharing Supper (Orchidee)
I fear the importance of sharing, is sadly in decline .. but if you...
April 6th, 2023 02:23 - The Autumn Wind (MendedFences27)
methinks there is more to this than meets the eye .. a somewhat...
April 6th, 2023 01:51 - Slร inte Mhath. (Goldfinch60)
a grand tribute to a dear pall and what better than to toast his big day...
April 6th, 2023 01:48 - full stop (Arqios)
knuckles clenched & turning white .. drowning in adrenaline ..
I know...
April 5th, 2023 08:50 - Life in Retirement (Accidental Poet)
what\'s not to love about this idyllic life and lifestyle ..
perfectly...
April 5th, 2023 08:48 - Shepherd Sufferings (Orchidee)
my friend Clive was a shepherd .. he suffered a lot of embarrassment...
April 5th, 2023 08:45 - Passion is My Fashion (Mottakeenur Rehman)
reads just like a dream in the making .. :)
April 5th, 2023 04:15 - Libra Distressed (Lorna)
this made me wince .. and truly
a loss so great is undeniably...
April 5th, 2023 04:09 - stairs (Arqios)
I hear stairs have their own local accent or dialect .. I sure wooden...
April 4th, 2023 12:16 - Willing The Cross-Way (Orchidee)
a very timely Christian message methinks ..
April 4th, 2023 05:00 - April Affair (Fay Slimm.)
what a delightful and accurate reminder of this particular time of year...
April 4th, 2023 04:57 - Martyr (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Despite having visited twice to date and intending to again, I know far...
April 4th, 2023 04:46 - Spring Ascending (Lorna)
with respect, this is splendid
and in every single respect .....
April 4th, 2023 04:18 - But Where Has The Time Gone? (Goldfinch60)
In general terms, I ask myself the same question, all of the time .. ...
April 4th, 2023 04:11 - Birdsong (Bella Shepard)
these are not easy .. but you make it sound so .. ๐ท
April 3rd, 2023 13:40 - Anonymous Poetry (Accidental Poet)
your muse appears to have done us all a favour today my friend .. ๐ง
April 3rd, 2023 08:54 - Priestly Profile (Orchidee)
๐ฆ.. it helps to have a priestly profile .. have a heart said Henry .....
April 3rd, 2023 03:59 - Seeing into the Eyes of Mother (Mottakeenur Rehman)
your dream to become a great poet is well within the realms of possibility...
April 3rd, 2023 03:17 - O, Brother! (Christina8)
you can choose your friends, but sadly, you can\'t choose your relatives...
April 2nd, 2023 10:13 - Thermosphere is Descending (Mottakeenur Rehman)
an interesting and well crafted poem .. certainly enjoyed the first...
April 2nd, 2023 08:29 - Palms Procession (Orchidee)
I am sure this is a fine hymn poem and most fitting for this Sunday .. I...
April 2nd, 2023 04:34 - Hot (2781)
I think I need to visit Oz ..
April 2nd, 2023 04:09 - Fresh air (Poetic Dan)
Never doubt yourself Dan .. this is a little gem ๐ง
April 1st, 2023 12:44 - An Unconditional Exchange of Zero (Mottakeenur Rehman)
You just nailed it .. that crazy little four letter word love ๐
April 1st, 2023 06:21 - Returning Readiness (Orchidee)
those who are desperate to be prepared for every eventuality are often,...
April 1st, 2023 05:16 - Would We ? (Fay Slimm.)
Harrowing ..
I was not expecting that Fay .. Nevertheless,
such an...
April 1st, 2023 04:54 - Call it How You Likeโฆ.. (Doggerel Dave)
it is indeed, a most sorry state of affairs sir dog ..
April 1st, 2023 04:49 - thank you letter (Agocl)
This is a fine poem and a good introduction to your ink if you dont mind...
April 1st, 2023 04:45 - Love Changes Everything. (Goldfinch60)
Your title here not only say\'s it all .. it also hammers home what must...
April 1st, 2023 04:40 - The Way Itโs Meant to Be (Accidental Poet)
I have absolutely no doubt about the sincerity contained herein ..
March 31st, 2023 05:45 - Preaching Proclaimed (Orchidee)
I did not hit the like button by accident .. I\'m just feeling in a kind...
March 31st, 2023 05:43 - The Sun and Moon (Mottakeenur Rehman)
this is probably my favouwrite Mottakeenur Rehman poem to date sir .. I am...
March 31st, 2023 03:28 - This Empty Page. (Goldfinch60)
when your muse eludes ya just think of it as a temporary moult sir .....
March 31st, 2023 03:12 - Nonsensical Excuse (Mottakeenur Rehman)
good old Masihur Rehman .. that\'s what I say sir ..
March 30th, 2023 09:13 - My System (Doggerel Dave)
just in case you ever try to get too shirty, please note, it was me that...
March 30th, 2023 09:11 - Once Fired (Fay Slimm.)
I had been wondering why my stamens seem to have a mind of their own...
March 30th, 2023 09:08 - battle and dream (Arqios)
Takes me back a bit & then some .. Friday nights particularly spring to...
March 30th, 2023 09:03 - Oh My Young Brigade (Mottakeenur Rehman)
... this reads very much like a freedom song .. I can almost feel the...
March 30th, 2023 04:45 - Promises Provision (Orchidee)
it is of course the honourable thing to do isn\'t it .. making provision...
March 30th, 2023 02:12 - I am a Father (Mottakeenur Rehman)
A fine combined tribute and dedication to all good and decent fathers...
March 30th, 2023 01:32 - The Strength of the Warrior (Mottakeenur Rehman)
an intriguing and otherwise muchly enjoyed poem sir .. thank you for...
March 29th, 2023 08:17 - Telling. (Fay Slimm.)
ouch .. I bet the rat never thought he would feature in such an...
March 29th, 2023 08:11 - A Discourse (Orchidee)
I do not have a problem with your faith Mr. O .. and hope that there...
March 29th, 2023 08:03 - awkward footfalls (Arqios)
now just let that be a warming to you all folks ..
March 29th, 2023 05:14 - Dear Mama (L. B. Mek)
please note the date of this entry .. 28.03.2023 .. please also note, this...
March 28th, 2023 05:28 - Sheep Safety (Orchidee)
Fur enuf squire, but you would be hard pushed to be called a good...
March 28th, 2023 05:00 - Becoming Other (Fay Slimm.)
if you originally poemed this blinda on paper and in ink .. then I want...
March 28th, 2023 04:51 - chiseled out (Arqios)
this is so much like something I have incorporated into the manuscript...
March 28th, 2023 04:45 - Dear Mrs. Christie (Bella Shepard)
What a delightful & unexpected find this mane my friend .. I fully...
March 28th, 2023 04:24 - A Melody of Love (Accidental Poet)
Do you know what .. I think even if your last visit didn\'t jog my...
March 28th, 2023 04:12 - ODDS AND SAUSAGES (3 ) (Michael Edwards)
true shorties are so much better than tall stories ........... ๐ง
March 26th, 2023 15:55 - Counting Sheep (Fay Slimm.)
made me feel like visiting my friend who is a local shepherd .. so...
March 26th, 2023 07:38 - Pursuing The Passion (Orchidee)
Hey .. take it easy why dont \'cha .. that\'s a very swoonworthy title...
March 26th, 2023 04:04 - Negative Or Positive. (Goldfinch60)
I do believe that one\'s capacity for problem solving and likewise...
March 26th, 2023 02:52 - Lost Gypsy Wife (MendedFences27)
my mental muscle pointed me in the direction of a Canadian Jewish poet...
March 26th, 2023 02:40 - The Confectionery of a Lover (Scarletttt)
very much enjoyed ma\'am & welcome to MPS ..
March 25th, 2023 14:50 - Invention (Fay Slimm.)
Milton would be proud of you Fay and I sure aint talking about Milton...
March 25th, 2023 07:18 - Troubles Told (Orchidee)
this is a hymn poem in 6,6,8,6 format isn\'t it ๐๐
March 25th, 2023 04:38 - Glory (2781)
you pose a question I\'m sure many would like an answer to ..
March 25th, 2023 04:33 - Infinity Equals Zero (MendedFences27)
hard hittingly ragged and real and with maybe a hint of an aftertaste I...
March 25th, 2023 03:03 - The Reason (Dove)
in the most succinct terms that I can muster, without getting in a...
March 25th, 2023 02:48 - Aphrodite Goddess of Love (Dove)
I still got that lovely warm feeling .. so before I go on, thank you...
March 25th, 2023 02:43 - Mothering (Fay Slimm.)
Yesly, indeedly & most superbly executed poetry .. ๐x
March 25th, 2023 02:19 - Flows. (Doggerel Dave)
an interesting poem and one that I presently feel both compelled and...
March 25th, 2023 02:14 - Green Or Grey. (Goldfinch60)
Like I have said countless times before .. sometimes I am ashamed of my...
March 8th, 2023 03:58 - Worship Me? (Orchidee)
my personal Buddhist path precludes my worshiping anyone or thing .. but...
March 8th, 2023 03:35 - Dwelling Delights 2 (Orchidee)
would someone please pen dwelling delights 3 and swoon as possible ..
March 7th, 2023 09:36 - Newly-Felt. (Fay Slimm.)
I am well n chewly masticated our Fay .. a delightful main course .....
March 6th, 2023 10:14 - Jump From Temple Top? (Orchidee)
I think I\'ll just give this one a miss for now and just watch how you...
March 6th, 2023 04:18 - The Beautiful World Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like a grand time was had by all .. well poemed indeed sir &...
March 6th, 2023 04:14
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