Comments on community poems by Rocky Lagou
- New Wonder In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, I love this \"spark\" of love. Your words always describe the...
April 29th, 2022 10:43 - Flights Of Fancy (Rozina)
This was wonderful Rozina, I\'d also like to praise you here on MPS....
April 29th, 2022 10:37 - These Falls (Fay Slimm.)
And right now dear Fay, you have me \"breathlessly awed\" with your...
April 29th, 2022 10:33 - So (Chesterfield)
That last line, \"unspoken,\" will speak to many. Oftentimes when we feel...
April 29th, 2022 10:31 - F.A.L.L. (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
Wonderful Jerry! I always love your acrostics, they\'re so clever and...
April 29th, 2022 10:29 - We sit together and dream (Anny)
I can semi relate. I take like 2 hours to fully fall asleep and my mind...
April 29th, 2022 09:17 - ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ (Nidha Fathima)
Amazing! I love this self-upliftment. The message is fervent and the way...
April 29th, 2022 09:16 - grazed knees (Dusk arising)
Well that author\'s note made me see this entirely different, so like...
April 29th, 2022 09:14 - Sleep?! (Saxon Crow)
I relate so much. I literally never remember my dreams and whenever I do...
April 29th, 2022 09:12 - Hunger\'s Den :) (Vamsi Sudha)
Wonderful Vamsi! The kitchen truly means a lot for families around the...
April 29th, 2022 09:08 - A Shadow of Pain (Andrewchrispus)
This one felt fiery and lit. I adored the images you conveyed and they all...
April 29th, 2022 09:06 - man vs machine (Lucifer very very very 1st)
Okay I liked the abstract sort of style you\'re going for. It\'s quite...
April 28th, 2022 13:26 - 4/18 (Squeaky 28)
Welcome to MPS! You wrote in such a way that captivated my interest. I...
April 28th, 2022 12:43 - The Trumpster\'s Tale (Carole Slattery)
One heck of a first poem. Well welcome to MPS. I have mixed views on...
April 28th, 2022 12:41 - Persistence and Brainwashing (an antidote to the preacher poets) (Dusk arising)
You see, one thing I like about you Dusk, is that you\'re audacious. If...
April 28th, 2022 10:28 - In-between Moments of Dusk and Night (Saxon Crow)
Thank you for this spectacle. You truly have a gift to wed imagery with...
April 28th, 2022 09:05 - Colonoscopy prep (Crowns4Christ)
Hehe, I love how you\'re just dying to eat. Is this like normal procedure...
April 28th, 2022 08:55 - Double-Sided Decisions (Orchidee)
A splendid display of geniusness. \"Whosoever, they may saved be / If come...
April 28th, 2022 08:53 - THAT PRETTY GUYโจ (ChrisLyn๐)
Hehe. I swear it\'s just lust...or is it? Desires can truly consume the...
April 28th, 2022 08:48 - A Stranger\'s City (Khushi)
Your imagery is actually splendid. WELCOME to the MPS community and I...
April 28th, 2022 08:46 - Taking in the Seeds come Harvest (Neville)
A positive affirmation. This feels so optimistic and ripe, I just want to...
April 28th, 2022 08:44 - Rain Girl (Nicholas Browning)
A spectacular display of words. I can feel your passion for poetry that...
April 28th, 2022 08:42 - Dreams (Spilleronsheet)
\"as heavy as boulders,\" wow talk about a simile. This is so so delicate...
April 28th, 2022 08:41 - Encounter (Fay Slimm.)
What a gorgeous encounter indeed! Your descriptions are phenomenal and...
April 28th, 2022 08:36 - Almost a sonnet (Sorenbarrett)
Literally spectacular. I adore this strong bond you\'re conveying and it...
April 28th, 2022 08:33 - SR/U (MR.apocalypse)
The title could be, \"Soviet Russia vs. Ukraine,\" maybe? Or something...
April 28th, 2022 08:31 - Heaven on Earth (Ash :))
I literally adore the rhyme scheme and alliteration you maintained...
April 27th, 2022 12:49 - A Dead One\'s Nightmare (Hyacinthe)
A poem that truly piques the interest! I enjoyed your tone and that rhyme...
April 27th, 2022 12:21 - \"due five days ago\" (Empty vial)
So relatable though. I\'m literally responding to this as I\'m in a school...
April 27th, 2022 10:08 - Children\'s Moments. (Goldfinch60)
A spark of joy in my hectic day! Thank you as always for the upliftment...
April 27th, 2022 09:25 - Machine (Hesper J.)
An amazing metaphor. Very true message, without proper care of mental...
April 27th, 2022 09:20 - Living Bread (Orchidee)
Yes! The living bread! Wonderfully said!
April 27th, 2022 09:15 - Adherence (Fay Slimm.)
A spectacular family piece. That bond that just doesn\'t fade, it\'s...
April 27th, 2022 09:14 - The Dark days (Paul Bell)
Wow talk about a journey through words. I love the way you crafted and...
April 27th, 2022 09:11 - Out of Eden (Sorenbarrett)
Welp, pretty much epitomizes the whole banishment of Adam and Eve, very...
April 27th, 2022 09:03 - I See You (M. Evermore)
An adoring sight! I love the imagery of color you made prominent in this...
April 27th, 2022 09:01 - joey played the saxophone (Dusk arising)
An amazing display. The fact it\'s based on your true life as well makes...
April 27th, 2022 08:59 - Is (Screaming goat.)
Deep and poignant. I can relate to this state of \"just being\" where it...
April 27th, 2022 08:52 - Daddy (Christina8)
Yikes. That last line hit like a brick wall. Father issues is a place I...
April 26th, 2022 09:37 - Golden tunnel of love (Kitty the naughty poet)
Love this! Truly captivating. I\'d love to journey through the yellow...
April 26th, 2022 09:11 - Who (Nicholas Browning)
A truly captivatin write fellow poet. I admire the images you portray and...
April 26th, 2022 09:10 - what need in me for kisses (Dusk arising)
Wow. Truly emotional. Endearment is useless when there\'s no love within....
April 26th, 2022 09:08 - To Snail (Saxon Crow)
I love how you can just pick any simple thing and give it new life. This...
April 26th, 2022 09:05 - SHOW EM THE POEM๐ (ChrisLyn๐)
I LOVE THIS. Thank you for this. Poetry really means different things to...
April 26th, 2022 09:02 - What Memory? (Goldfinch60)
YESSS!! I literally love this. I feel this has happened to every single...
April 26th, 2022 09:00 - FIRES UNLIT (Michael Edwards)
Wow I admire your craftiness with words. The line \"travelling forward in...
April 26th, 2022 08:53 - Keep And Kept (Orchidee)
Thank you for the daily praise! Idk why but recently I\'ve been feeling...
April 26th, 2022 08:51 - Yonder (Fay Slimm.)
Yes Fay! That \"yonder\" or that desire that\'s so tempting and alluring....
April 26th, 2022 08:50 - Some things are Just Not Right (Neville)
I admire the way you sculpted this poem. It\'s like one long thin line of...
April 26th, 2022 08:48 - The price of wisdom (Ok Waleed)
I like how you leave blanks spaces for the reader to fill out, quite...
April 26th, 2022 08:40 - Skipping stones on the water (Anny)
I enjoy the imagery you portray. I sense this could be a wanting for...
April 26th, 2022 08:38 - Psychological cancer (Sorenbarrett)
A quite downhearted perspective. I can relate though, sometimes others can...
April 26th, 2022 08:37 - Cardiac neglect (Ivy Madara)
That line \"heard when skin meets skin and never heart meets heart\"...
April 26th, 2022 08:34 - You don\'t know yet (MR.apocalypse)
True words, you don\'t know one until knowing the other. In order to reach...
April 26th, 2022 08:32 - Sakura๏ผSakura (Arobot)
Wow, I enjoy this analogy of a cherry blossom representing this maiden. It...
April 26th, 2022 08:31 - Religious Confusion (Cameron lynne)
Relatable. Talk about it, religion and the need for a reason and a...
April 25th, 2022 13:28 - Just Because (senryu-maybe) (Bella Shepard)
This is excellent, to see you fit it in the senryu form as well is...
April 25th, 2022 13:25 - epitome (Empty vial)
Quite the epitome, indeed. Feels true and blissful, just hold onto that...
April 25th, 2022 12:59 - A Poem of Myself (M. Evermore)
And this right here... is quite the entrance to MPS my dear. I literally...
April 25th, 2022 12:40 - Let Me in, I will be. (Andrewchrispus)
This is your first poem?!?!? Dear poet, you have a gift. This is actually...
April 25th, 2022 12:35 - worse (Picklesthecat)
It sure looks rough, know that there\'s always light. It may seem...
April 25th, 2022 12:29 - A Boy Learns of Love (Accidental Poet)
You epitomized the sensation wonderfully. It\'s like love bubbles rise in...
April 25th, 2022 10:40 - Less and not Full (Eff Lynch B)
This right here is poetically immaculate. Your imagery and metaphors are...
April 25th, 2022 10:34 - Scar (Spilleronsheet)
This is beyond. That line \"but those pains arenโt big, as your dreams\"...
April 25th, 2022 10:30 - Mom (Christina8)
Literally so so so amazing. My mother passed away as well, as you know,...
April 25th, 2022 10:26 - The road less traveled (Crowns4Christ)
Robert Frost\'s poem instantly came to mind with the title. You surely did...
April 25th, 2022 10:23 - Pedantry Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
Gold.
April 25th, 2022 10:20 - Gossiping (Rozina)
Talk about it! Gossiping is just embedded in some, and it\'s downright...
April 25th, 2022 10:20 - First Flush (Fay Slimm.)
What a blessing your poetry is! I enjoy the way the poem tapers in length...
April 25th, 2022 10:19 - Wind Dancer .. a Haiku (Neville)
\"Without a care,\" ahh. What a blessing it is to be problem-free, no...
April 25th, 2022 10:16 - Food for Thought (Saxon Crow)
Literally immaculate. I mean the entire metaphor is genius. Food for...
April 25th, 2022 10:00 - Sparrow (Cameron lynne)
I love the shortness of your poems. This one is quite thought-provoking...
April 22nd, 2022 12:42 - Thoughts of a narcissist (Sorenbarrett)
Sorrennnnn SORRENNNNN!!! YOU ATE IT UP with this one. I\'m literally at a...
April 22nd, 2022 12:40 - Dusk arising (Crowns4Christ)
I honestly didn\'t even know you could block poets on MPS. Hope whatever...
April 22nd, 2022 12:23 - Dry Red (Garth Rakumakoe)
Hey! This is a glorious display. Been missing you on MPS not gonna lie....
April 22nd, 2022 12:16 - The Goddess\' Lament (Tinymoonchild)
\"all those senseless chains.\" Yes. I love that line. We\'re often so...
April 22nd, 2022 10:56 - starry midnight sky (Empty vial)
I totally feel this sensation you convey. That line \"only the rain drops...
April 22nd, 2022 09:06 - Bits of LIFE !!! (Vamsi Sudha)
I love the paranthetical \"I\" after the \"Eye.\" I feel we\'re all trying...
April 22nd, 2022 08:23 - Detours (DestinysPerspectives)
\"I don\'t want to lye here in wasted potential\" I feel you speak to so...
April 22nd, 2022 08:20 - My thoughts (NafisaSB)
\"Doubts give rise to doubts.\" Yes. and Yes. We are our own setback. I...
April 22nd, 2022 08:18 - Love #1 (Saxon Crow)
Amazing. That rhyme you sustained is wonderful as well. Love means...
April 22nd, 2022 08:16 - Lord Over Life (Orchidee)
Great gospel song Orchi!
April 22nd, 2022 08:15 - Garden of Eden (Joslouis)
Yes, I think we all want our own little bliss. Sadly in today\'s world...
April 22nd, 2022 08:13 - mY bEtRaYiNg sOuL! (Sree_Haripriya22)
Literally, so amazing. I can relate so much, as I have depression and...
April 22nd, 2022 08:11 - Coffee (Rozina)
I\'m living for this coffee fantasy. I can relate as coffee is my \"life\"...
April 22nd, 2022 08:05 - My Sunset Sky. (Goldfinch60)
Yes. A wonderful reminder that life does carry hope. Lovely imagery....
April 22nd, 2022 08:04 - Iโm Here (Ameljor)
A reassuring poem, indeed. That line, \"As we recline / On the waves of...
April 22nd, 2022 08:02 - When I look at the skies (Anny)
I enjoy the way you tied in so many intense emotions into one cohesive...
April 22nd, 2022 08:00 - EARTH WE HATE (MR.apocalypse)
Quite the \"Earth Day\" poem. It\'s very real. When will this...
April 22nd, 2022 07:58 - Waterlogged (Distorted mikey)
\"The pressure of the weightlessness is too much to bear\" wow. Talk about...
April 22nd, 2022 07:56 - Senryu #4 (Laura๐ป)
May be insomnia. Although I don\'t personally deal with it, it takes me a...
April 22nd, 2022 07:51 - looking forward (Dusk arising)
Wow. This is a message for our generation and all the ones to come. I feel...
April 22nd, 2022 07:48 - Me and the Willows (Hyacinthe)
This is truly quite the spectacle. I adore this metaphor which I feel...
April 21st, 2022 12:43 - Flowers (Cameron lynne)
These are some quite invasive flowers, hehe. I can just imagine them...
April 21st, 2022 12:38 - Played On Words (Wilj235440)
A spectacular piece fellow poet. I felt the emotions you were going for...
April 21st, 2022 09:29 - Galilee Gathering (Orchidee)
Emotive and expressive and enticing and exact!
April 21st, 2022 08:55 - Donโt cry Anny (Anny)
A lot of emotions and a lot of venting. Hope everything\'s alright.
April 21st, 2022 08:53 - everything (Terribletruthkindlie)
I mean I enjoy this embrace of power, but also \"un-embrace.\" With the...
April 21st, 2022 08:51 - Senryu #2 (Laura๐ป)
Wow, this right here takes the cake. Bravo!
April 21st, 2022 08:49 - Touching Ways. (Goldfinch60)
An encouraging poem, indeed. A simple smile has an effect we don\'t even...
April 21st, 2022 08:48
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