Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Edge - Co-Written by Goldfinch and Hood. (Goldfinch60)
A really good co-write on the light-dark difference - well done you two.
January 12th, 2018 11:01 - FUNKY FOOTWEAR ~ TANKAS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Filled with funky fun in the shoe-line is this tanka dear Brian - - with...
January 12th, 2018 11:00 - A little respect (Aa Harvey)
A telling rhyme of how fickle some treat that gem called love - - thanks...
January 12th, 2018 10:56 - Rapturous Rose (Orchidee)
A true statement that final one in this excellent write on the nature of...
January 12th, 2018 10:54 - Open your heart (Tony36)
Such good advice here Tony - - giving love another chance in the best...
January 12th, 2018 10:47 - Saved by the Light (FredPeyer)
A telling piece with first rate metaphor - -light indeed can come suddenly...
January 11th, 2018 17:20 - Another One (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Keep that ink flowing as poetry can by its power change our lives. Never...
January 11th, 2018 13:31 - TO A GRANDCHILD IN PASSING (Louis Gibbs)
A wisdom-packed bundle of truths in this tribute to a precious newly-born...
January 11th, 2018 13:19 - THE BEAST (Louis Gibbs)
Reading this makes my heart expand in sympathy for all such young victims...
January 11th, 2018 06:15 - 2018 ~ THE EXPECTATIONS ~ An Acrostic 3 11 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen to these inspiring words dear Brian. Togetherness is really...
January 10th, 2018 09:40 - SHUT UP (Michael Edwards)
Ah clever use of clerical terms in this reminder that danger lies in...
January 10th, 2018 05:33 - Double Doors (FredPeyer)
Looking forward is the best thing a lady can do under the cloak of...
January 9th, 2018 13:22 - The Moon - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful shot of the moon Andy and I love the verse too.
January 9th, 2018 13:17 - Rock Residings (Orchidee)
A very fine and inspiring write Orchi.
January 9th, 2018 13:15 - IN ECSTASY (Michael Edwards)
Oooh - love the descriptive words used in this short and sweetly sensuous...
January 9th, 2018 08:54 - Fire (Christina8)
LOVELY this tribute to an everlasting love dear Christina - your marriage...
January 8th, 2018 14:17 - Dead Roses (Syd)
Ah - this read gave me a slow smile Syd - some partners need a reminder to...
January 8th, 2018 14:14 - way poem #05: the five steps to wheaten pecks (Frank Prem)
The vivid draw of this poignant scene is a reminder that whatever comes to...
January 8th, 2018 14:11 - A Moment in Time (FredPeyer)
Such a heart-moving scene and how many times this must take place Fred - ...
January 8th, 2018 14:08 - 2018 ~ NORTHERN HEMISPHERE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A quick but very poetic presentation of seasonal passing dear Brian - all...
January 8th, 2018 14:05 - GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Great thought on the aging struggle Michael - love the painting too which...
January 8th, 2018 05:38 - You are my sunshine (Tony36)
A ;charming tribute to a loved other half - great read Tony.
January 6th, 2018 11:10 - I am (FredPeyer)
Survival is all around it we but look at these great examples Fred - thank...
January 6th, 2018 04:30 - SATURDAY (Michael Edwards)
The business of being retired comes through so well in this Saturday...
January 6th, 2018 04:29 - gippsland traveller (Frank Prem)
Such a vivid description of travel in places where native flora cries out...
January 6th, 2018 04:25 - Sailing into the Light. (Goldfinch60)
The clarity within shines through life\'s foggy times as this special...
January 6th, 2018 04:22 - Holy Homage (Orchidee)
A fine word-picture of the glorious Governor revealed back then - an...
January 6th, 2018 04:20 - WHO CREATED THE ROSE ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Multiplying after their own kind only surely gives evidence of glorious...
January 5th, 2018 05:37 - SNOWDROP BEAUTY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A lovely reminder of the wonderful snowdrops - heralds of Spring indeed....
January 4th, 2018 09:02 - Eternity Calls - FIB, (Goldfinch60)
Wonderfully inspiting words Goldi and I love the form used.
January 4th, 2018 03:14 - 2018 ~ GOD\'S BLESSINGS FOR PLANET EARTH ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen to these lines showing how blessed we are to be on this planet dear...
January 3rd, 2018 17:18 - way poem #02: who knew the way (Frank Prem)
Such food for thought in these interesting lines Frank - - I love the two...
January 2nd, 2018 14:59 - Suicide Survivors (W c)
a very perceptive write W,C. - - a suicide leaves behind so many...
January 2nd, 2018 14:56 - TROUT AN ACROSTIC ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An humming that lovely trout music as I write this comment dear Brian - a...
January 2nd, 2018 14:54 - Scrutinizing (Satishverma)
A clever assessment of what humans can be when herded together Satish - -...
January 2nd, 2018 10:42 - Unity Unctions (Orchidee)
Some lovely and memorable lines of wisdom here Orchi - - thanks for...
January 2nd, 2018 10:40 - Smile at a Stranger. (Goldfinch60)
Good advice Goldi - - giving a smile always has an affect on passers by.
January 2nd, 2018 10:38 - In the Air between LA and Honolulu (FredPeyer)
You sum it all up well here Fred - we have no inkling of what respect...
January 2nd, 2018 10:36 - THE CHAPEL (Michael Edwards)
Such a sleep of peace surrounds these simple but very poetic words Michael...
January 2nd, 2018 05:39 - THE CHINESE BRUSH (Completed Work) (Michael Edwards)
Loud applause for this finished tribute to the Chinese Brush -- talent...
December 20th, 2017 05:55 - Six For Gold. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely to read of gratitude for the gold of life dear friend. A beautiful...
December 20th, 2017 05:50 - Winsome Worship (Orchidee)
Lovely read Orchi. - great final lines to this verse.
December 20th, 2017 05:48 - LOVE IS ~ CHRISTMAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A compelling subject on the One who made love his whole reason for coming...
December 20th, 2017 05:47 - The Concert. (Goldfinch60)
Good to see the fine picture of the choir Andy - - a lovely feeling when...
December 19th, 2017 10:19 - Saving Securities (Orchidee)
A fine seasonal reminder dear Orchi.
December 19th, 2017 10:15 - THE CHINESE BRUSH (Stage 2) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - Reading this makes me want to try for myself the mysteries of...
December 19th, 2017 03:05 - THE CHINESE BRUSH (1) (Michael Edwards)
Had to look back to this posting to see the first stages your mind made in...
December 19th, 2017 03:00 - MR BADGER: CREATRURE COMFORTS (Michael Champion)
Ah - I love the rhyming in this charming account of famous badger and his...
December 18th, 2017 17:28 - First weekend back (Poetic Dan)
Such a lively encounter with children and trains - - your parental care...
December 18th, 2017 14:30 - Old Man (Christopher Elwell)
You describe old age and its slow unsure steps with poetic phrasing and...
December 18th, 2017 14:23 - Our love (Christopher Elwell)
Ah - now that is what easy love feels like methinks - - a powerful read...
December 18th, 2017 14:11 - He Sat On My Hamster (Syd)
This true tale explains why young lads have to wait a while before...
December 18th, 2017 06:45 - TEN COLLECTIVE NOUNS FOR ANIMALS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah yes - that first and last description is perfect for the said creatures...
December 18th, 2017 06:08 - A Life That Never Died. (Kevin browne)
Kevin your pen paints the most powerful of experiences - a journey...
December 17th, 2017 13:25 - C H R I S T M A S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
That wondrous beginning at the birth of Jesus has left us all with so much...
December 17th, 2017 12:17 - Understanding with time (Lostthoughts)
Yes it mostly take time to find understanding - I like the pace and force...
December 17th, 2017 09:31 - LOVE IS ~ SENSUAL ! A 3 3 3 3 2 Sonnet. (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So romantic this sonnet to love - your pen is blessed with care as its...
December 16th, 2017 10:45 - A BRIGHT STAR OVER BETHLEHEM! (RAJ NANDY)
A truly engaging piece of interesting poetry on the meaning of each gift...
December 16th, 2017 10:39 - A FEW COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Food for thought in some of these clever couplets Michael - love the...
December 16th, 2017 02:42 - POETRY IS.....RECEIVED BY LISTENING EARS (Michael Edwards)
Eloquently expressed these inspiring reasons for keeping the ink flowing...
December 14th, 2017 08:26 - MY CHRISTMAS STOCKING ~ A Contour Poem ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What a well-filled stocking dear Brian - - lovely contour poem.
December 14th, 2017 08:22 - Servant Salvation (Orchidee)
Wonderful read Orchi - - very inspiring.
December 14th, 2017 07:05 - Light From Dark. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful write my friend - -and what a thrill of a piece of music to go...
December 14th, 2017 07:03 - Goldie Christmas. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely to see your kind face through that beard which shows all that Santa...
December 13th, 2017 07:38 - I AM A CHRISTMAS TREE ! A Contour Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
:Love the tree form you used in this lovely seasonal read Brian - yes the...
December 13th, 2017 07:29 - CHRISTMAS GIFTS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yes those long-ago Wise men were very wise Brian - a charming and...
December 12th, 2017 11:59 - Peace (Christina8)
A fine piece of nostalgia together with wise advice on where Christmas...
December 12th, 2017 11:52 - ODE TO BARBIE (Lasergraph)
Aha ha - - what a wonderful fun-ending to this charming read - thanks...
December 12th, 2017 11:50 - YOU ARE A TREE ! A 7 7 Blank Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The tree your wise words describe where its shade keeps saplings...
December 10th, 2017 11:15 - ANOTHER BUNCH OF ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Love \'em - - all - - but \'specially the final one - and oh that...
December 9th, 2017 12:20 - The Beat of the Drum. (Goldfinch60)
Good to now you are encouraging musical talent dear Andy - the boy and...
December 9th, 2017 11:10 - Faithful Focus (Orchidee)
A lovely and faith-strengthening message and thanks for sharing dear
December 9th, 2017 11:04 - TREASURE OF SNOW ~An Acrostic 8 2 4 Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A touch of magic in snowfall brings us all to our outdoor boards and...
December 9th, 2017 11:03 - Little Bird (W c)
A hesrtwarming picture you pen here W.C. with feeding the birds and one...
December 9th, 2017 10:51 - The Coming Dawn (Kurt Philip Behm)
Words of truth and written with poetic assurance the read becomes a...
December 8th, 2017 13:32 - FORGIVE and FORGET (Laura🌻)
A powerful read dear Laura which outlines the true reasons for cultivating...
December 8th, 2017 11:43 - NEW RESOLVE (Michael Edwards)
A splendidly presented tale of misfortune and how hand in hand two lovers...
December 7th, 2017 13:34 - Tonight, I feel lonely (Myself and me)
Such pathos in these well written lines M&M - - loneliness described in a...
December 7th, 2017 13:23 - Clowns (Tony36)
This brings back so many memories for me - a lovely read Tony
December 7th, 2017 13:20 - The Poem We Did Not Understand. (Goldfinch60)
The genius of Spender glows through these recited lines and led so well...
December 6th, 2017 05:41 - ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4) (Michael Edwards)
That middle rhyme had me in stitches Michael - another clever slant on...
December 6th, 2017 05:37 - Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3) (Michael Edwards)
Ah a clever alternative to the nursery rhymes Michael and reading them set...
December 6th, 2017 05:33 - Here to teach and be taught (Poetic Dan)
Positive throughout are these poetic expressions of gaining ourselves...
December 5th, 2017 11:55 - Just a few thoughts of a busy mind (FredPeyer)
Finding time for a little wisdom-writing has bred a really deep poem Fred...
December 3rd, 2017 15:16 - THE CONFORMIST (Michael Edwards)
The box of sheer conformity is something we need to think about escaping...
December 2nd, 2017 06:10 - Count Rainbows. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful first read of my day Goldi - - rainbows are what we all need to...
December 2nd, 2017 06:06 - THE CAVE (Louis Gibbs)
Your perception of autism brought out in these lines is so moving to read...
December 1st, 2017 17:26 - THEY WOULD NOT BLEED (Michael Edwards)
Your depiction of village life by watercolour always astounds me Michael...
December 1st, 2017 17:22 - LUNAS D\'ESPANA ~ Por Santita y Christina (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Looking forward to German experiences from your golden pen dear Brian....
December 1st, 2017 17:20 - Wind (Tony36)
Good thought in this write Tony.
December 1st, 2017 17:13 - Never be afraid to go your own way (Poetic Dan)
A deep and powerful write Dan - - lots of super lines and my favourite...
December 1st, 2017 17:11 - As life goes. (Malubotelho)
Lovely to read your positive write and to know you are posting again dear...
December 1st, 2017 17:09 - Me, Myself, and I (FredPeyer)
Yes this question vexes us all and it seems we have to wait Fred for the...
November 30th, 2017 05:57 - forgotten : the night (Frank Prem)
Powerfully worded this short-line result of being forgotten - - dark and...
November 28th, 2017 10:51 - BE MINE (Michael Edwards)
Your talent for shape and for word are found in the wonderful small...
November 28th, 2017 10:43 - HARRY AND MEGHAN ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yes who could have thought this couple would set newer patterns of union...
November 28th, 2017 10:40 - The Grim Reaper\'s coming (Jeremy Leach)
Points well made in this compelling read and so well rhymed - - the...
November 28th, 2017 10:32 - Day By Day (Orchidee)
A lovely prayer and full of faith as it is the read warmed my heart dear...
November 28th, 2017 10:27 - Humanity (FredPeyer)
The message in this powerfully written verse is vital to keep close in...
November 28th, 2017 03:39 - CHICKS (Michael Edwards)
Love the line drawing and adore fluffy chicks - I know though that the...
November 27th, 2017 04:01
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