Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- ONCE IN BLUE MOON ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A worthy tribute to that wonderous gift which keeps tides at bay and...
February 1st, 2018 09:23 - Seduced By Wood Grain (Accidental Poet)
Good to read this tribute to the craft used in bringing the gift of wood...
February 1st, 2018 09:19 - A Smile Across From You (AJ)
A few lines of pure encouragement to smile even when sad - - love the feel...
February 1st, 2018 09:16 - Reentering (Kurt Philip Behm)
Powerful imagery and clear result of intention to allow light into...
January 31st, 2018 20:01 - CLAUSTROPHOBIA ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh Brian - The very thought of underground exploration makes me shudder...
January 31st, 2018 06:11 - My Artist. (Goldfinch60)
The Pre-Raphaelytes were the best of the finest for clarity and detail...
January 31st, 2018 05:17 - A QUORUM OF QUINZANES (Michael Edwards)
Quizanes eh ? A most interesting form Michael - - love those jumps...
January 31st, 2018 04:49 - MY CAT TALKS TO ME ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great fun this kitty-kat read Brian - those visuals show just how...
January 30th, 2018 17:11 - SPILLED INK SHADOWS (Michael Edwards)
A dream of a read Michael --the title is stunning and I love the imagery...
January 30th, 2018 12:40 - Unfettered. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah - an eloquent comment indeed dear Brian and full of asides on the...
January 30th, 2018 09:49 - Call of the Sitar (Lorna)
A flow of mystery fills the lines of this engaging poem Lorna - - days...
January 30th, 2018 06:27 - SHORELINE DESECRATION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah - first my humble thanks for the dedication dear Brian - - the shore...
January 29th, 2018 11:12 - The Dream (Christina8)
Your dream sounds so complete dear Christina - - a beautiful and romantic...
January 29th, 2018 10:13 - Love is... (Owen Osborne)
This picture of many faceted love which penned so well shows that your...
January 28th, 2018 17:13 - Journey (Owen Osborne)
A truly refreshing expression of love missing its mark and the form you...
January 28th, 2018 17:09 - What’s a Man to Do? (Accidental Poet)
This is heart-tugger in its appeal for patient waiting for the right one...
January 28th, 2018 14:22 - ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE (Michael Edwards)
I love the repetition of words at times in poetry Michael - - this imagery...
January 28th, 2018 06:56 - HOLOCAUST MEMORY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Unspeakable crimes against innocent people will leave their mark for...
January 28th, 2018 06:49 - Help Me Lord. (Goldfinch60)
So very moving this honest appeal for help dear friend - - wishing you...
January 28th, 2018 06:46 - Return, Rebuild, Restore (Orchidee)
An informative and upbuilding write Orchi.
January 28th, 2018 06:43 - ADVERSARY RHYMES 13, 14, & 15 (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - fun reads to finish my day Michael and hey I remember all those...
January 27th, 2018 16:01 - Special Table (W c)
Ah - a table if only it could speak would be filled with the wonders of...
January 27th, 2018 15:59 - I need You! (FredPeyer)
Ha ha - now that had me fooled - - a yummy read Fred.
January 27th, 2018 15:55 - Look at the Stars. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful thoughts and comforting words.
January 27th, 2018 15:52 - She Broke All The Rules. (Kevin browne)
Love the flow and rhyme of this romantic stop-and-start affair Kevin - ...
January 27th, 2018 15:50 - Rare We Must Be (Accidental Poet)
A fine list of reasons why writers plough on every day to bring warmth of...
January 27th, 2018 10:44 - A TEDDY BEAR IS ~ BETTER THAN A MAN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thanks dear Brian for this Saturday smile with another lovely teddy poem -...
January 27th, 2018 10:41 - Heaven On Earth - Good News Series - 9 (Orchidee)
Such good news from the Revelations
-- well written Orchi.
January 26th, 2018 12:46 - HAPPY TEDDY BEAR ~ A Free Verse Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I love my collection of bears so I give lots of hugs and smile at each...
January 26th, 2018 06:42 - A TOUCH OF ROMANCE (Lasergraph)
Wow - so romantic - -a charming read Laser along with the wonderful...
January 25th, 2018 13:46 - Still giving time more time (Poetic Dan)
Ah - sad but expertly written this lament for past mistakes Dan - -love...
January 25th, 2018 13:42 - I AM A VEG~ET~ABLE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An ode to all things green and brown - and so deeeelishously done Brian -...
January 24th, 2018 10:49 - American Goldfinch (W c)
Birds give us so much for which to be thankful and this piece says it all...
January 23rd, 2018 06:10 - Gifts of Grace - Good News Series - 6 (Orchidee)
A fine piece to hum as we go about our day Orchi - - thanks for sharing.
January 23rd, 2018 06:08 - I Am Here. (Goldfinch60)
Wise introspection after a glass of fine wine Andy - an engaging read.
January 23rd, 2018 06:07 - May We Always Fly Free (Lorna)
Your pen evokes freedom with excellent imagery here - - much food for...
January 23rd, 2018 06:05 - Accountability (Accidental Poet)
A wise course to take in life as this fine poem reveals is to treat as...
January 23rd, 2018 06:03 - LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A moving and romantic ballad to found love - -- a beautiful and tender...
January 23rd, 2018 05:59 - Here if you fall (Poetic Dan)
A true treasure for your children to keep Dan - - your pen excels in...
January 22nd, 2018 17:37 - love is a lung (Heather T)
A heart-wrenching tribute to a very brave smile of a dear friend facing...
January 22nd, 2018 17:14 - blinds (Heather T)
So good to see your work here again Heather - your ink flows with rare...
January 20th, 2018 17:11 - ACROSTICS ~ The Animal Dentist ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
wow - who would ever want to reach inside the mouth of an un-sedated croc...
January 20th, 2018 08:37 - Winter Is My Favorite Time of Year (DHA)
I am with you in lots of these reasons why I like winter best too - a...
January 18th, 2018 13:18 - BLUE MOON or BLOOD MOON (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Blue Moon occuring as rarely as they do must be spectacular to watch Brian...
January 18th, 2018 11:51 - I know of none (Poetic Dan)
\"A new persona\" can teach us much as does the message in this compelling...
January 18th, 2018 11:48 - Two Rooks (Aislinn Wilson)
Interesting and engaging writes here Aislinn - -rooks with dark happenings...
January 18th, 2018 11:44 - Oh To Be A Swift (W c)
What a wonderful bird your verse celebrates W.C. - I should love to see...
January 18th, 2018 11:40 - LOVE\'S CYCLE (Michael Edwards)
Deep and telling these lines Michael - so pleased to have caught this...
January 18th, 2018 04:58 - Platform Four (FredPeyer)
Your words vividly portrayed the varied reasons why that platform held all...
January 17th, 2018 15:27 - SNOW TRANSFORMS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You describe the thrill I have always felt on seeing the carpet of...
January 15th, 2018 10:20 - COLD CRABS (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - love this play on words Michael
-- by the addition of one letter...
January 13th, 2018 17:25 - NESSUN DORMA (Michael Edwards)
Beauty in both the song and the writing here Michael - still trying to...
January 12th, 2018 11:05 - Edge - Co-Written by Goldfinch and Hood. (Goldfinch60)
A really good co-write on the light-dark difference - well done you two.
January 12th, 2018 11:01 - FUNKY FOOTWEAR ~ TANKAS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Filled with funky fun in the shoe-line is this tanka dear Brian - - with...
January 12th, 2018 11:00 - A little respect (Aa Harvey)
A telling rhyme of how fickle some treat that gem called love - - thanks...
January 12th, 2018 10:56 - Rapturous Rose (Orchidee)
A true statement that final one in this excellent write on the nature of...
January 12th, 2018 10:54 - Open your heart (Tony36)
Such good advice here Tony - - giving love another chance in the best...
January 12th, 2018 10:47 - Saved by the Light (FredPeyer)
A telling piece with first rate metaphor - -light indeed can come suddenly...
January 11th, 2018 17:20 - Another One (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Keep that ink flowing as poetry can by its power change our lives. Never...
January 11th, 2018 13:31 - TO A GRANDCHILD IN PASSING (Louis Gibbs)
A wisdom-packed bundle of truths in this tribute to a precious newly-born...
January 11th, 2018 13:19 - THE BEAST (Louis Gibbs)
Reading this makes my heart expand in sympathy for all such young victims...
January 11th, 2018 06:15 - 2018 ~ THE EXPECTATIONS ~ An Acrostic 3 11 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen to these inspiring words dear Brian. Togetherness is really...
January 10th, 2018 09:40 - SHUT UP (Michael Edwards)
Ah clever use of clerical terms in this reminder that danger lies in...
January 10th, 2018 05:33 - Double Doors (FredPeyer)
Looking forward is the best thing a lady can do under the cloak of...
January 9th, 2018 13:22 - In Search Of Me (Accidental Poet)
Thanks for these words of wisdom A.P. - I relate especially to the...
January 9th, 2018 13:19 - The Moon - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful shot of the moon Andy and I love the verse too.
January 9th, 2018 13:17 - Rock Residings (Orchidee)
A very fine and inspiring write Orchi.
January 9th, 2018 13:15 - IN ECSTASY (Michael Edwards)
Oooh - love the descriptive words used in this short and sweetly sensuous...
January 9th, 2018 08:54 - Fire (Christina8)
LOVELY this tribute to an everlasting love dear Christina - your marriage...
January 8th, 2018 14:17 - Dead Roses (Syd)
Ah - this read gave me a slow smile Syd - some partners need a reminder to...
January 8th, 2018 14:14 - way poem #05: the five steps to wheaten pecks (Frank Prem)
The vivid draw of this poignant scene is a reminder that whatever comes to...
January 8th, 2018 14:11 - A Moment in Time (FredPeyer)
Such a heart-moving scene and how many times this must take place Fred - ...
January 8th, 2018 14:08 - 2018 ~ NORTHERN HEMISPHERE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A quick but very poetic presentation of seasonal passing dear Brian - all...
January 8th, 2018 14:05 - GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Great thought on the aging struggle Michael - love the painting too which...
January 8th, 2018 05:38 - You are my sunshine (Tony36)
A ;charming tribute to a loved other half - great read Tony.
January 6th, 2018 11:10 - I am (FredPeyer)
Survival is all around it we but look at these great examples Fred - thank...
January 6th, 2018 04:30 - SATURDAY (Michael Edwards)
The business of being retired comes through so well in this Saturday...
January 6th, 2018 04:29 - gippsland traveller (Frank Prem)
Such a vivid description of travel in places where native flora cries out...
January 6th, 2018 04:25 - Sailing into the Light. (Goldfinch60)
The clarity within shines through life\'s foggy times as this special...
January 6th, 2018 04:22 - Holy Homage (Orchidee)
A fine word-picture of the glorious Governor revealed back then - an...
January 6th, 2018 04:20 - WHO CREATED THE ROSE ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Multiplying after their own kind only surely gives evidence of glorious...
January 5th, 2018 05:37 - SNOWDROP BEAUTY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A lovely reminder of the wonderful snowdrops - heralds of Spring indeed....
January 4th, 2018 09:02 - Eternity Calls - FIB, (Goldfinch60)
Wonderfully inspiting words Goldi and I love the form used.
January 4th, 2018 03:14 - 2018 ~ GOD\'S BLESSINGS FOR PLANET EARTH ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen to these lines showing how blessed we are to be on this planet dear...
January 3rd, 2018 17:18 - way poem #02: who knew the way (Frank Prem)
Such food for thought in these interesting lines Frank - - I love the two...
January 2nd, 2018 14:59 - Suicide Survivors (W c)
a very perceptive write W,C. - - a suicide leaves behind so many...
January 2nd, 2018 14:56 - TROUT AN ACROSTIC ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An humming that lovely trout music as I write this comment dear Brian - a...
January 2nd, 2018 14:54 - Scrutinizing (Satishverma)
A clever assessment of what humans can be when herded together Satish - -...
January 2nd, 2018 10:42 - Unity Unctions (Orchidee)
Some lovely and memorable lines of wisdom here Orchi - - thanks for...
January 2nd, 2018 10:40 - Smile at a Stranger. (Goldfinch60)
Good advice Goldi - - giving a smile always has an affect on passers by.
January 2nd, 2018 10:38 - In the Air between LA and Honolulu (FredPeyer)
You sum it all up well here Fred - we have no inkling of what respect...
January 2nd, 2018 10:36 - THE CHAPEL (Michael Edwards)
Such a sleep of peace surrounds these simple but very poetic words Michael...
January 2nd, 2018 05:39 - THE CHINESE BRUSH (Completed Work) (Michael Edwards)
Loud applause for this finished tribute to the Chinese Brush -- talent...
December 20th, 2017 05:55 - Six For Gold. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely to read of gratitude for the gold of life dear friend. A beautiful...
December 20th, 2017 05:50 - Winsome Worship (Orchidee)
Lovely read Orchi. - great final lines to this verse.
December 20th, 2017 05:48 - LOVE IS ~ CHRISTMAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A compelling subject on the One who made love his whole reason for coming...
December 20th, 2017 05:47 - The Concert. (Goldfinch60)
Good to see the fine picture of the choir Andy - - a lovely feeling when...
December 19th, 2017 10:19 - Saving Securities (Orchidee)
A fine seasonal reminder dear Orchi.
December 19th, 2017 10:15 - THE CHINESE BRUSH (Stage 2) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - Reading this makes me want to try for myself the mysteries of...
December 19th, 2017 03:05 - THE CHINESE BRUSH (1) (Michael Edwards)
Had to look back to this posting to see the first stages your mind made in...
December 19th, 2017 03:00
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