Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Dancing to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
This lovely reads brought tears to my eyes dear Goldie - - a couple whose...
February 24th, 2018 03:03 - The Sailor\'s Farewell (Lorna)
The art of leaving behind things of the past put so succinctly in this...
February 23rd, 2018 07:32 - BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS (Michael Edwards)
Great imagery and super write on what beliefs do to the psyche. The...
February 23rd, 2018 03:35 - Depression And Anxiety (Christina8)
The comings and goings of sadness and worry you well describe in this...
February 22nd, 2018 10:56 - Sunshine Is Light (W c)
Such a happy read leaves me with added gratitude for the wonderful gift of...
February 21st, 2018 22:31 - Always.. (Poetic25)
This poem of grateful love reads so beautifully positive and has a great...
February 21st, 2018 14:14 - Shame And Doubt (Christina8)
Have missed your posts and comments dear Christina and so sorry to read...
February 21st, 2018 14:10 - LOVE IS ~ DUBIOUS DEFINITIONS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Have enjoyed the snow-roll myself when living up-country Brian and oh the...
February 21st, 2018 03:24 - Weeping Away The World. (Kevin browne)
The spirit which oozed from each line of this powerful lament touches the...
February 21st, 2018 03:03 - LOVE IS...etcetera (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - a most unexpected read Michael - loved every line of clever...
February 20th, 2018 06:46 - SALUKI ~ A Dog for all Seasons ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A gorgeous example of canine aristocratic stance -- loved the verse and...
February 20th, 2018 06:45 - RAINBOW ~ REFLECTIONS ~ A Mirror Acrostic ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love the depth of gratitude in this mirror acrostic Brian - there can be...
February 19th, 2018 17:12 - The Last Rail Ticket (Lorna)
Love the flow and formation of this verse Lorna. An excellent read.
February 19th, 2018 08:06 - Omniscient Observations (Orchidee)
Our Creator know all our hearts and this lovely observation of how cared...
February 16th, 2018 17:14 - Love can never be denied (FredPeyer)
Love the imagery you use in this confession of love\'s captive hold - ...
February 16th, 2018 17:11 - Bridges. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely description of life\'s different stages when searching for...
February 16th, 2018 17:09 - hate me love (Heather T)
Your use of metaphor slips between accepted word-meanings with such ease...
February 16th, 2018 16:42 - unprepared (Dusk arising)
A gem of write which says much about coping and moving on.
February 16th, 2018 16:27 - IN DENIAL (Michael Edwards)
Clipped and powerful these lines complete the circle of wisdom Michael. -...
February 16th, 2018 04:01 - Unequivocal Bliss (FredPeyer)
Ah - your pen describes perfectly the feeling of being at one with nature...
February 15th, 2018 14:16 - WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN (Michael Edwards)
First class write Michael - - love every stanza of this mystical journey...
February 15th, 2018 05:51 - HIGHWAY TO HAWAII (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Still grinning at this one Brian - Fred will be over the moon. Ha ha - ...
February 15th, 2018 05:48 - Just for You (Lorna)
Superb poetry here Lorna - must put this appealing few lines into my...
February 15th, 2018 05:45 - tease (Heather T)
Ah - - tease indeed in this place too Heather - so unpredictable from high...
February 14th, 2018 17:29 - For Valentine’s Day (Malubotelho)
Good to see you back posting again Malu and these lovely Valentine wishes...
February 14th, 2018 14:37 - My Red Arrow (Lorna)
Such a fresh and vibrant approach to Valentine\'s Day dear Lorna - I love...
February 14th, 2018 06:23 - I JUST PRAY THAT I\'LL SURVIVE ~ Title Progression Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love the flow of this poem and its Title Chase form Brian - along with...
February 13th, 2018 15:01 - DEATH IN A CANYON ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A caring and thoughtful write on the tragic loss of three young men in...
February 12th, 2018 08:39 - No Way to Kiss a Country Man (Lorna)
A well-written tribute to the men who were real in every sense Lorna - -...
February 12th, 2018 08:36 - You Saw Me (Christina8)
Oh this is a stunning Valentine message Christina - - your words of love...
February 12th, 2018 07:49 - WHO I AM (Michael Edwards)
Finding oneself is seen as freedom indeed in this modern world Michael -...
February 10th, 2018 05:06 - Counting The Months (Christina8)
I feel much the same way dear Christina - give me warmth over cold and my...
February 9th, 2018 17:14 - Forever Long (Kurt Philip Behm)
I can relate to these lines of night-time frustration Kurt -- great read.
February 9th, 2018 17:12 - SUCH LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh Yes - dear Brian - such is true love - - this read gave a beautifully...
February 9th, 2018 05:42 - HOME IS WHERE THE CAT IS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Cats - so full of mystery have a language that seduces a curious owner -...
February 7th, 2018 12:13 - Cleopatra: The Song of the Nile (Gino)
A poetic saga as tribute to a \"lovely embrace of myth\" and scribed with...
February 7th, 2018 12:11 - Pastures new (English Sonnet) (Poetic25)
A remarkable sonnet to read as best man at a friend\'s wedding - a first...
February 7th, 2018 12:09 - Creative madness (Poetic25)
A piece of engaging and creative writing and welcome to M..P. S. - - I...
February 7th, 2018 12:07 - THE GIRL I MARRIED (Lasergraph)
Ah - such a lovely romantic tribute to a much loved woman - - a treat of a...
February 7th, 2018 12:03 - The Real Me (FredPeyer)
Who you are is an internal priceless treasure dear Fred. That spirit which...
February 5th, 2018 02:50 - Of All the Hearts in All the Towns in All the World (Lorna)
Such a touching pathos to these brave words dear Lorna - -love never...
February 3rd, 2018 17:49 - The Majestic (TrystanBehm)
The lure of the deep is so powerfully presented in these engaging lines...
February 2nd, 2018 17:25 - Paint Your Wagon (Lorna)
Ha - -this read left me with a wide smile Lorna - - sometimes we wish we...
February 2nd, 2018 14:20 - Can You / Will You (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very apt questions and poetically expressed Kurt - - a powerful read.
February 2nd, 2018 14:16 - IF ALL THE WORLD...(2) (Michael Edwards)
Ooooh both cabbage and sprouts all in one go - no wonder that poor...
February 2nd, 2018 07:49 - Winter\'s Wrath (Christina8)
A lament that cold and winter engender - and so well rhymed Christina - -...
February 2nd, 2018 07:28 - ANGELA IN THE GARDEN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Full of the classic presentations of love - love the title to - -a...
February 2nd, 2018 06:05 - I can write! (FredPeyer)
You have no writing drought Fred by the construction of such inspiring...
February 1st, 2018 17:24 - Peace Of Mind. (Wallace)
The peace which comes from such night-walks is so aptly described by these...
February 1st, 2018 09:36 - The Cold Moon (February) (Lorna)
Look forward to the series on naming the different moon as months come and...
February 1st, 2018 09:31 - Better World. (Goldfinch60)
A perfect description of what music can do when listened to Goldi - - I...
February 1st, 2018 09:28 - RESERVED WITHIN (Michael Edwards)
A romance in the making were these mysterious lines bent on describing...
February 1st, 2018 09:26 - ONCE IN BLUE MOON ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A worthy tribute to that wonderous gift which keeps tides at bay and...
February 1st, 2018 09:23 - A Smile Across From You (AJ)
A few lines of pure encouragement to smile even when sad - - love the feel...
February 1st, 2018 09:16 - Reentering (Kurt Philip Behm)
Powerful imagery and clear result of intention to allow light into...
January 31st, 2018 20:01 - CLAUSTROPHOBIA ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh Brian - The very thought of underground exploration makes me shudder...
January 31st, 2018 06:11 - My Artist. (Goldfinch60)
The Pre-Raphaelytes were the best of the finest for clarity and detail...
January 31st, 2018 05:17 - A QUORUM OF QUINZANES (Michael Edwards)
Quizanes eh ? A most interesting form Michael - - love those jumps...
January 31st, 2018 04:49 - MY CAT TALKS TO ME ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great fun this kitty-kat read Brian - those visuals show just how...
January 30th, 2018 17:11 - SPILLED INK SHADOWS (Michael Edwards)
A dream of a read Michael --the title is stunning and I love the imagery...
January 30th, 2018 12:40 - Unfettered. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah - an eloquent comment indeed dear Brian and full of asides on the...
January 30th, 2018 09:49 - Call of the Sitar (Lorna)
A flow of mystery fills the lines of this engaging poem Lorna - - days...
January 30th, 2018 06:27 - SHORELINE DESECRATION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah - first my humble thanks for the dedication dear Brian - - the shore...
January 29th, 2018 11:12 - The Dream (Christina8)
Your dream sounds so complete dear Christina - - a beautiful and romantic...
January 29th, 2018 10:13 - Love is... (Owen Osborne)
This picture of many faceted love which penned so well shows that your...
January 28th, 2018 17:13 - Journey (Owen Osborne)
A truly refreshing expression of love missing its mark and the form you...
January 28th, 2018 17:09 - ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE (Michael Edwards)
I love the repetition of words at times in poetry Michael - - this imagery...
January 28th, 2018 06:56 - HOLOCAUST MEMORY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Unspeakable crimes against innocent people will leave their mark for...
January 28th, 2018 06:49 - Help Me Lord. (Goldfinch60)
So very moving this honest appeal for help dear friend - - wishing you...
January 28th, 2018 06:46 - Return, Rebuild, Restore (Orchidee)
An informative and upbuilding write Orchi.
January 28th, 2018 06:43 - ADVERSARY RHYMES 13, 14, & 15 (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - fun reads to finish my day Michael and hey I remember all those...
January 27th, 2018 16:01 - Special Table (W c)
Ah - a table if only it could speak would be filled with the wonders of...
January 27th, 2018 15:59 - I need You! (FredPeyer)
Ha ha - now that had me fooled - - a yummy read Fred.
January 27th, 2018 15:55 - Look at the Stars. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful thoughts and comforting words.
January 27th, 2018 15:52 - She Broke All The Rules. (Kevin browne)
Love the flow and rhyme of this romantic stop-and-start affair Kevin - ...
January 27th, 2018 15:50 - A TEDDY BEAR IS ~ BETTER THAN A MAN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thanks dear Brian for this Saturday smile with another lovely teddy poem -...
January 27th, 2018 10:41 - Heaven On Earth - Good News Series - 9 (Orchidee)
Such good news from the Revelations
-- well written Orchi.
January 26th, 2018 12:46 - HAPPY TEDDY BEAR ~ A Free Verse Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I love my collection of bears so I give lots of hugs and smile at each...
January 26th, 2018 06:42 - A TOUCH OF ROMANCE (Lasergraph)
Wow - so romantic - -a charming read Laser along with the wonderful...
January 25th, 2018 13:46 - Still giving time more time (Poetic Dan)
Ah - sad but expertly written this lament for past mistakes Dan - -love...
January 25th, 2018 13:42 - I AM A VEG~ET~ABLE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An ode to all things green and brown - and so deeeelishously done Brian -...
January 24th, 2018 10:49 - American Goldfinch (W c)
Birds give us so much for which to be thankful and this piece says it all...
January 23rd, 2018 06:10 - Gifts of Grace - Good News Series - 6 (Orchidee)
A fine piece to hum as we go about our day Orchi - - thanks for sharing.
January 23rd, 2018 06:08 - I Am Here. (Goldfinch60)
Wise introspection after a glass of fine wine Andy - an engaging read.
January 23rd, 2018 06:07 - May We Always Fly Free (Lorna)
Your pen evokes freedom with excellent imagery here - - much food for...
January 23rd, 2018 06:05 - LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A moving and romantic ballad to found love - -- a beautiful and tender...
January 23rd, 2018 05:59 - Here if you fall (Poetic Dan)
A true treasure for your children to keep Dan - - your pen excels in...
January 22nd, 2018 17:37 - love is a lung (Heather T)
A heart-wrenching tribute to a very brave smile of a dear friend facing...
January 22nd, 2018 17:14 - blinds (Heather T)
So good to see your work here again Heather - your ink flows with rare...
January 20th, 2018 17:11 - ACROSTICS ~ The Animal Dentist ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
wow - who would ever want to reach inside the mouth of an un-sedated croc...
January 20th, 2018 08:37 - Winter Is My Favorite Time of Year (DHA)
I am with you in lots of these reasons why I like winter best too - a...
January 18th, 2018 13:18 - BLUE MOON or BLOOD MOON (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Blue Moon occuring as rarely as they do must be spectacular to watch Brian...
January 18th, 2018 11:51 - I know of none (Poetic Dan)
\"A new persona\" can teach us much as does the message in this compelling...
January 18th, 2018 11:48 - Two Rooks (Aislinn Wilson)
Interesting and engaging writes here Aislinn - -rooks with dark happenings...
January 18th, 2018 11:44 - Oh To Be A Swift (W c)
What a wonderful bird your verse celebrates W.C. - I should love to see...
January 18th, 2018 11:40 - LOVE\'S CYCLE (Michael Edwards)
Deep and telling these lines Michael - so pleased to have caught this...
January 18th, 2018 04:58 - Platform Four (FredPeyer)
Your words vividly portrayed the varied reasons why that platform held all...
January 17th, 2018 15:27 - SNOW TRANSFORMS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You describe the thrill I have always felt on seeing the carpet of...
January 15th, 2018 10:20 - COLD CRABS (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - love this play on words Michael
-- by the addition of one letter...
January 13th, 2018 17:25 - NESSUN DORMA (Michael Edwards)
Beauty in both the song and the writing here Michael - still trying to...
January 12th, 2018 11:05
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