Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Numb (Christina8)
Your warm grateful heart comes through these few lines - may you beat...
March 14th, 2018 17:43 - The Urge Will Fade (Nicholas Browning)
Every line had me revited. - I love best the final stanza. First class...
March 14th, 2018 08:55 - Handful of Biscuits (Lorna)
A poem to send the heart into weep mode dear Lorna - - tenderly appealing...
March 14th, 2018 06:36 - The Visitor (HChristian74)
Your success in imaginative writing lies with your talent to twist and...
March 14th, 2018 06:08 - ELECTRIC LIVING ~ An Acrostic 8 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Changes are features of more civilized living or so they say - - I loved...
March 13th, 2018 12:05 - Shy bird (Willyweed)
So good to know you are back posting again Willy and that your words can...
March 13th, 2018 10:18 - Butter Side Down (Lorna)
Am smiling at that vision of cats with buttered toast on their backs -...
March 13th, 2018 04:29 - \'No milk spilt\' (Poetic25)
Clever form and well thought out message in this cry against those taking...
March 12th, 2018 17:52 - Bottled up healing (Poetic Dan)
Your words and music were sunshine to my eyes Dan - - loved your video and...
March 12th, 2018 17:44 - Measurements of Life (Lorna)
Lovely to read these well-written comparisons with life\'s journey and our...
March 12th, 2018 17:36 - My Prince (Christina8)
Oh such a romantic confession of love for a treasured Prince - a...
March 12th, 2018 17:31 - Spring Haiku (Jeremy Cohen)
Love the chosen image and the play on words in this refreshing haiku - ...
March 12th, 2018 09:37 - SPRING ~ A Word Flow Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Beautiful and well thought out this flow of a Spring read - thank you...
March 12th, 2018 06:05 - Ken Dodd (Goldfinch60)
A welcome and touching tribute to the great talent of Ken Dodd whose...
March 12th, 2018 03:37 - Twins (Christina8)
The loss of two babies at the same time is so great I can only imagine the...
March 9th, 2018 09:52 - HAPPINESS IS .................... ? An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Sharing my today\'s happiness aby sending a contented smile to you Brian ...
March 9th, 2018 05:35 - BURNING (Michael Edwards)
An exciting form Michael and the style of that watercolour is so...
March 8th, 2018 03:13 - SO MANY WARS (Michael Edwards)
Such true words embody the futility of war caused by false beliefs in...
March 6th, 2018 10:03 - The Angels are There. (Goldfinch60)
Yes I really agree that we are guided and cared for my friend - - a lovely...
March 6th, 2018 10:00 - Spring Is Springing! (Orchidee)
A good word and tune of hope Steve -- to find a single flower in bloom...
March 6th, 2018 09:59 - Too Cold For Anything (Lorna)
Ah - an apt finalé to your your expressive outcry against this wintery...
March 6th, 2018 09:57 - Addiction (double acrostic) (Poetic25)
Wow - this is a clever expression of well thought out double acrostic - a...
March 6th, 2018 09:52 - FACE BOOK (Lasergraph)
I love the rhyme used in this wry viewpoint on why Facebook is used. A...
March 6th, 2018 09:51 - C H A M E L E O N S ~ A Rhyming Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The acrostic enumerates so n=many reasons to really know those whom you...
March 6th, 2018 07:35 - State of Bliss (FredPeyer)
An ephemeral feel right through these lyrical words Fred - a soothing...
March 4th, 2018 05:18 - State of Bliss (FredPeyer)
Will be missing you and your wonderful writing Fred - - meanwhile not to...
March 4th, 2018 05:16 - The Call Of The Loon (W c)
A charming picture of a bird we never see here in the U.K. but which is an...
March 3rd, 2018 12:51 - Attention Addicts (Accidental Poet)
Self respect is certainly not the self absorbed attitude that some show to...
March 3rd, 2018 11:44 - The Conquest of Time. (Goldfinch60)
This verse has inspired me to view the programme -and thanks for the poem...
March 3rd, 2018 07:31 - Phoenix from the Ashes (Lorna)
Oh Lorna such heart-wrenching read of what can happen when health fails...
March 3rd, 2018 05:24 - WITH TIME (Michael Edwards)
Super write and picture.
March 2nd, 2018 14:29 - ANGELA ~ SNOW LADY ~ A Flow Line Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
May your snow lady fill your summers and winters to come dear Brian - a...
March 1st, 2018 09:38 - Willowing Whispers. (Kevin browne)
Love the flow and the subtle humour in this invitation to love Kevin
February 26th, 2018 13:54 - Death is just the beginning (Aa Harvey)
My belief has ever been that the best is yet to come at the end of our...
February 26th, 2018 12:56 - A WOMAN OF DIGNITY (Michael Edwards)
The strength within this Lady oozes from your tribute to dignity Michael...
February 26th, 2018 12:54 - Priest, Judge, King Prophecy (Orchidee)
A wonderful summary of the journey our Lord had to take to reach his true...
February 26th, 2018 12:52 - The Painting of Love (Goldfinch60)
A fantastic picture of breaking free Goldi - - your daughter has real...
February 26th, 2018 12:50 - In Defense of the Realm (Lorna)
A stunning verse of mysterious allure dear Lorna. - first class writing.
February 26th, 2018 12:46 - RADIOTHERAPY ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wonderfully phrased empathy here in this informative acrostic dear Brian...
February 26th, 2018 12:45 - Enchanting (Christina8)
Good news that you feel better again Christina and the love who helps you...
February 26th, 2018 12:42 - The Beginning Of The End (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Excellent usage of words meant to turn into other meanings Kurt. Good
February 26th, 2018 12:39 - Forgive Me, I Beg (Kurt Philip Behm)
Such a sad but beautiful write Kurt - your pen captures all the feelings...
February 25th, 2018 17:15 - Stealing Looks (Accidental Poet)
The state your verse describes is all too familiar today A.P. where...
February 25th, 2018 08:46 - The Renaissance Lover (Lorna)
Ah - loud applause for this melodious start to my Sunday morning along...
February 25th, 2018 05:15 - Roaming around (Poetic Dan)
Yes the centre of life\'s road is where we should walk to learn trust - -...
February 25th, 2018 04:54 - Having To Let You Go (Lorna)
Filled with anguish of heart as loss gets nearer these words sink so...
February 24th, 2018 05:48 - Solemn Vow (FredPeyer)
Keep that love of breath going my friend as life\'s ageless gift means...
February 24th, 2018 03:07 - Dancing to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
This lovely reads brought tears to my eyes dear Goldie - - a couple whose...
February 24th, 2018 03:03 - The Sailor\'s Farewell (Lorna)
The art of leaving behind things of the past put so succinctly in this...
February 23rd, 2018 07:32 - BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS (Michael Edwards)
Great imagery and super write on what beliefs do to the psyche. The...
February 23rd, 2018 03:35 - Depression And Anxiety (Christina8)
The comings and goings of sadness and worry you well describe in this...
February 22nd, 2018 10:56 - Sunshine Is Light (W c)
Such a happy read leaves me with added gratitude for the wonderful gift of...
February 21st, 2018 22:31 - Always.. (Poetic25)
This poem of grateful love reads so beautifully positive and has a great...
February 21st, 2018 14:14 - Shame And Doubt (Christina8)
Have missed your posts and comments dear Christina and so sorry to read...
February 21st, 2018 14:10 - LOVE IS ~ DUBIOUS DEFINITIONS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Have enjoyed the snow-roll myself when living up-country Brian and oh the...
February 21st, 2018 03:24 - Weeping Away The World. (Kevin browne)
The spirit which oozed from each line of this powerful lament touches the...
February 21st, 2018 03:03 - LOVE IS...etcetera (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - a most unexpected read Michael - loved every line of clever...
February 20th, 2018 06:46 - SALUKI ~ A Dog for all Seasons ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A gorgeous example of canine aristocratic stance -- loved the verse and...
February 20th, 2018 06:45 - RAINBOW ~ REFLECTIONS ~ A Mirror Acrostic ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love the depth of gratitude in this mirror acrostic Brian - there can be...
February 19th, 2018 17:12 - The Last Rail Ticket (Lorna)
Love the flow and formation of this verse Lorna. An excellent read.
February 19th, 2018 08:06 - Omniscient Observations (Orchidee)
Our Creator know all our hearts and this lovely observation of how cared...
February 16th, 2018 17:14 - Love can never be denied (FredPeyer)
Love the imagery you use in this confession of love\'s captive hold - ...
February 16th, 2018 17:11 - Bridges. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely description of life\'s different stages when searching for...
February 16th, 2018 17:09 - hate me love (Heather T)
Your use of metaphor slips between accepted word-meanings with such ease...
February 16th, 2018 16:42 - unprepared (Dusk arising)
A gem of write which says much about coping and moving on.
February 16th, 2018 16:27 - What If… (Accidental Poet)
Good question to describe such a longing A.P - - an engaging read.
February 16th, 2018 07:04 - IN DENIAL (Michael Edwards)
Clipped and powerful these lines complete the circle of wisdom Michael. -...
February 16th, 2018 04:01 - Unequivocal Bliss (FredPeyer)
Ah - your pen describes perfectly the feeling of being at one with nature...
February 15th, 2018 14:16 - WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN (Michael Edwards)
First class write Michael - - love every stanza of this mystical journey...
February 15th, 2018 05:51 - HIGHWAY TO HAWAII (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Still grinning at this one Brian - Fred will be over the moon. Ha ha - ...
February 15th, 2018 05:48 - Just for You (Lorna)
Superb poetry here Lorna - must put this appealing few lines into my...
February 15th, 2018 05:45 - tease (Heather T)
Ah - - tease indeed in this place too Heather - so unpredictable from high...
February 14th, 2018 17:29 - For Valentine’s Day (Malubotelho)
Good to see you back posting again Malu and these lovely Valentine wishes...
February 14th, 2018 14:37 - My Red Arrow (Lorna)
Such a fresh and vibrant approach to Valentine\'s Day dear Lorna - I love...
February 14th, 2018 06:23 - I JUST PRAY THAT I\'LL SURVIVE ~ Title Progression Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love the flow of this poem and its Title Chase form Brian - along with...
February 13th, 2018 15:01 - DEATH IN A CANYON ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A caring and thoughtful write on the tragic loss of three young men in...
February 12th, 2018 08:39 - No Way to Kiss a Country Man (Lorna)
A well-written tribute to the men who were real in every sense Lorna - -...
February 12th, 2018 08:36 - You Saw Me (Christina8)
Oh this is a stunning Valentine message Christina - - your words of love...
February 12th, 2018 07:49 - WHO I AM (Michael Edwards)
Finding oneself is seen as freedom indeed in this modern world Michael -...
February 10th, 2018 05:06 - Counting The Months (Christina8)
I feel much the same way dear Christina - give me warmth over cold and my...
February 9th, 2018 17:14 - Forever Long (Kurt Philip Behm)
I can relate to these lines of night-time frustration Kurt -- great read.
February 9th, 2018 17:12 - SUCH LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh Yes - dear Brian - such is true love - - this read gave a beautifully...
February 9th, 2018 05:42 - HOME IS WHERE THE CAT IS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Cats - so full of mystery have a language that seduces a curious owner -...
February 7th, 2018 12:13 - Cleopatra: The Song of the Nile (Gino)
A poetic saga as tribute to a \"lovely embrace of myth\" and scribed with...
February 7th, 2018 12:11 - Pastures new (English Sonnet) (Poetic25)
A remarkable sonnet to read as best man at a friend\'s wedding - a first...
February 7th, 2018 12:09 - Creative madness (Poetic25)
A piece of engaging and creative writing and welcome to M..P. S. - - I...
February 7th, 2018 12:07 - THE GIRL I MARRIED (Lasergraph)
Ah - such a lovely romantic tribute to a much loved woman - - a treat of a...
February 7th, 2018 12:03 - The Real Me (FredPeyer)
Who you are is an internal priceless treasure dear Fred. That spirit which...
February 5th, 2018 02:50 - Of All the Hearts in All the Towns in All the World (Lorna)
Such a touching pathos to these brave words dear Lorna - -love never...
February 3rd, 2018 17:49 - The Majestic (TrystanBehm)
The lure of the deep is so powerfully presented in these engaging lines...
February 2nd, 2018 17:25 - Paint Your Wagon (Lorna)
Ha - -this read left me with a wide smile Lorna - - sometimes we wish we...
February 2nd, 2018 14:20 - Can You / Will You (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very apt questions and poetically expressed Kurt - - a powerful read.
February 2nd, 2018 14:16 - IF ALL THE WORLD...(2) (Michael Edwards)
Ooooh both cabbage and sprouts all in one go - no wonder that poor...
February 2nd, 2018 07:49 - Winter\'s Wrath (Christina8)
A lament that cold and winter engender - and so well rhymed Christina - -...
February 2nd, 2018 07:28 - ANGELA IN THE GARDEN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Full of the classic presentations of love - love the title to - -a...
February 2nd, 2018 06:05 - I can write! (FredPeyer)
You have no writing drought Fred by the construction of such inspiring...
February 1st, 2018 17:24 - Peace Of Mind. (Wallace)
The peace which comes from such night-walks is so aptly described by these...
February 1st, 2018 09:36 - The Cold Moon (February) (Lorna)
Look forward to the series on naming the different moon as months come and...
February 1st, 2018 09:31 - Better World. (Goldfinch60)
A perfect description of what music can do when listened to Goldi - - I...
February 1st, 2018 09:28 - RESERVED WITHIN (Michael Edwards)
A romance in the making were these mysterious lines bent on describing...
February 1st, 2018 09:26
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