Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• RADIOTHERAPY ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Wonderfully phrased empathy here in this informative acrostic dear Brian...
  February 26th, 2018 12:45
• Enchanting (Christina8) Good news that you feel better again Christina and the love who helps you...
  February 26th, 2018 12:42
• The Beginning Of The End (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Excellent usage of words meant to turn into other meanings Kurt. Good
  February 26th, 2018 12:39
• Forgive Me, I Beg (Kurt Philip Behm) Such a sad but beautiful write Kurt - your pen captures all the feelings...
  February 25th, 2018 17:15
• The Renaissance Lover (Lorna) Ah - loud applause for this melodious start to my Sunday morning along...
  February 25th, 2018 05:15
• Roaming around (Poetic Dan) Yes the centre of life\'s road is where we should walk to learn trust - -...
  February 25th, 2018 04:54
• Having To Let You Go (Lorna) Filled with anguish of heart as loss gets nearer these words sink so...
  February 24th, 2018 05:48
• Solemn Vow (FredPeyer) Keep that love of breath going my friend as life\'s ageless gift means...
  February 24th, 2018 03:07
• Dancing to Eternity. (Goldfinch60) This lovely reads brought tears to my eyes dear Goldie - - a couple whose...
  February 24th, 2018 03:03
• The Sailor\'s Farewell (Lorna) The art of leaving behind things of the past put so succinctly in this...
  February 23rd, 2018 07:32
• BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS (Michael Edwards) Great imagery and super write on what beliefs do to the psyche. The...
  February 23rd, 2018 03:35
• Depression And Anxiety (Christina8) The comings and goings of sadness and worry you well describe in this...
  February 22nd, 2018 10:56
• Sunshine Is Light (W c) Such a happy read leaves me with added gratitude for the wonderful gift of...
  February 21st, 2018 22:31
• Always.. (Poetic25) This poem of grateful love reads so beautifully positive and has a great...
  February 21st, 2018 14:14
• Shame And Doubt (Christina8) Have missed your posts and comments dear Christina and so sorry to read...
  February 21st, 2018 14:10
• LOVE IS ~ DUBIOUS DEFINITIONS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Have enjoyed the snow-roll myself when living up-country Brian and oh the...
  February 21st, 2018 03:24
• Weeping Away The World. (Kevin browne) The spirit which oozed from each line of this powerful lament touches the...
  February 21st, 2018 03:03
• LOVE IS...etcetera (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - a most unexpected read Michael - loved every line of clever...
  February 20th, 2018 06:46
• SALUKI ~ A Dog for all Seasons ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) A gorgeous example of canine aristocratic stance -- loved the verse and...
  February 20th, 2018 06:45
• RAINBOW ~ REFLECTIONS ~ A Mirror Acrostic ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Love the depth of gratitude in this mirror acrostic Brian - there can be...
  February 19th, 2018 17:12
• The Last Rail Ticket (Lorna) Love the flow and formation of this verse Lorna. An excellent read.
  February 19th, 2018 08:06
• Omniscient Observations (Orchidee) Our Creator know all our hearts and this lovely observation of how cared...
  February 16th, 2018 17:14
• Love can never be denied (FredPeyer) Love the imagery you use in this confession of love\'s captive hold - ...
  February 16th, 2018 17:11
• Bridges. (Goldfinch60) A lovely description of life\'s different stages when searching for...
  February 16th, 2018 17:09
• hate me love (Heather T) Your use of metaphor slips between accepted word-meanings with such ease...
  February 16th, 2018 16:42
• unprepared (Dusk arising) A gem of write which says much about coping and moving on.
  February 16th, 2018 16:27
• IN DENIAL (Michael Edwards) Clipped and powerful these lines complete the circle of wisdom Michael. -...
  February 16th, 2018 04:01
• Unequivocal Bliss (FredPeyer) Ah - your pen describes perfectly the feeling of being at one with nature...
  February 15th, 2018 14:16
• WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN (Michael Edwards) First class write Michael - - love every stanza of this mystical journey...
  February 15th, 2018 05:51
• HIGHWAY TO HAWAII (BRIAN & ANGELA) Still grinning at this one Brian - Fred will be over the moon. Ha ha - ...
  February 15th, 2018 05:48
• Just for You (Lorna) Superb poetry here Lorna - must put this appealing few lines into my...
  February 15th, 2018 05:45
• tease (Heather T) Ah - - tease indeed in this place too Heather - so unpredictable from high...
  February 14th, 2018 17:29
• For Valentine’s Day (Malubotelho) Good to see you back posting again Malu and these lovely Valentine wishes...
  February 14th, 2018 14:37
• My Red Arrow (Lorna) Such a fresh and vibrant approach to Valentine\'s Day dear Lorna - I love...
  February 14th, 2018 06:23
• I JUST PRAY THAT I\'LL SURVIVE ~ Title Progression Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) Love the flow of this poem and its Title Chase form Brian - along with...
  February 13th, 2018 15:01
• DEATH IN A CANYON ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A caring and thoughtful write on the tragic loss of three young men in...
  February 12th, 2018 08:39
• No Way to Kiss a Country Man (Lorna) A well-written tribute to the men who were real in every sense Lorna - -...
  February 12th, 2018 08:36
• You Saw Me (Christina8) Oh this is a stunning Valentine message Christina - - your words of love...
  February 12th, 2018 07:49
• WHO I AM (Michael Edwards) Finding oneself is seen as freedom indeed in this modern world Michael -...
  February 10th, 2018 05:06
• Counting The Months (Christina8) I feel much the same way dear Christina - give me warmth over cold and my...
  February 9th, 2018 17:14
• Forever Long (Kurt Philip Behm) I can relate to these lines of night-time frustration Kurt -- great read.
  February 9th, 2018 17:12
• SUCH LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Oh Yes - dear Brian - such is true love - - this read gave a beautifully...
  February 9th, 2018 05:42
• HOME IS WHERE THE CAT IS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Cats - so full of mystery have a language that seduces a curious owner -...
  February 7th, 2018 12:13
• Cleopatra: The Song of the Nile (Gino) A poetic saga as tribute to a \"lovely embrace of myth\" and scribed with...
  February 7th, 2018 12:11
• Pastures new (English Sonnet) (Poetic25) A remarkable sonnet to read as best man at a friend\'s wedding - a first...
  February 7th, 2018 12:09
• Creative madness (Poetic25) A piece of engaging and creative writing and welcome to M..P. S. - - I...
  February 7th, 2018 12:07
• THE GIRL I MARRIED (Lasergraph) Ah - such a lovely romantic tribute to a much loved woman - - a treat of a...
  February 7th, 2018 12:03
• The Real Me (FredPeyer) Who you are is an internal priceless treasure dear Fred. That spirit which...
  February 5th, 2018 02:50
• Of All the Hearts in All the Towns in All the World (Lorna) Such a touching pathos to these brave words dear Lorna - -love never...
  February 3rd, 2018 17:49
• The Majestic (TrystanBehm) The lure of the deep is so powerfully presented in these engaging lines...
  February 2nd, 2018 17:25
• Paint Your Wagon (Lorna) Ha - -this read left me with a wide smile Lorna - - sometimes we wish we...
  February 2nd, 2018 14:20
• Can You / Will You (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Very apt questions and poetically expressed Kurt - - a powerful read.
  February 2nd, 2018 14:16
• IF ALL THE WORLD...(2) (Michael Edwards) Ooooh both cabbage and sprouts all in one go - no wonder that poor...
  February 2nd, 2018 07:49
• Winter\'s Wrath (Christina8) A lament that cold and winter engender - and so well rhymed Christina - -...
  February 2nd, 2018 07:28
• ANGELA IN THE GARDEN (BRIAN & ANGELA) Full of the classic presentations of love - love the title to - -a...
  February 2nd, 2018 06:05
• I can write! (FredPeyer) You have no writing drought Fred by the construction of such inspiring...
  February 1st, 2018 17:24
• Peace Of Mind. (Wallace) The peace which comes from such night-walks is so aptly described by these...
  February 1st, 2018 09:36
• The Cold Moon (February) (Lorna) Look forward to the series on naming the different moon as months come and...
  February 1st, 2018 09:31
• Better World. (Goldfinch60) A perfect description of what music can do when listened to Goldi - - I...
  February 1st, 2018 09:28
• RESERVED WITHIN (Michael Edwards) A romance in the making were these mysterious lines bent on describing...
  February 1st, 2018 09:26
• ONCE IN BLUE MOON ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A worthy tribute to that wonderous gift which keeps tides at bay and...
  February 1st, 2018 09:23
• A Smile Across From You (AJ) A few lines of pure encouragement to smile even when sad - - love the feel...
  February 1st, 2018 09:16
• Reentering (Kurt Philip Behm) Powerful imagery and clear result of intention to allow light into...
  January 31st, 2018 20:01
• CLAUSTROPHOBIA ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Oh Brian - The very thought of underground exploration makes me shudder...
  January 31st, 2018 06:11
• My Artist. (Goldfinch60) The Pre-Raphaelytes were the best of the finest for clarity and detail...
  January 31st, 2018 05:17
• A QUORUM OF QUINZANES (Michael Edwards) Quizanes eh ? A most interesting form Michael - - love those jumps...
  January 31st, 2018 04:49
• MY CAT TALKS TO ME ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great fun this kitty-kat read Brian - those visuals show just how...
  January 30th, 2018 17:11
• SPILLED INK SHADOWS (Michael Edwards) A dream of a read Michael --the title is stunning and I love the imagery...
  January 30th, 2018 12:40
• Unfettered. (Fay Slimm.) Ah - an eloquent comment indeed dear Brian and full of asides on the...
  January 30th, 2018 09:49
• Call of the Sitar (Lorna) A flow of mystery fills the lines of this engaging poem Lorna - - days...
  January 30th, 2018 06:27
• SHORELINE DESECRATION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - first my humble thanks for the dedication dear Brian - - the shore...
  January 29th, 2018 11:12
• The Dream (Christina8) Your dream sounds so complete dear Christina - - a beautiful and romantic...
  January 29th, 2018 10:13
• Love is... (Owen Osborne) This picture of many faceted love which penned so well shows that your...
  January 28th, 2018 17:13
• Journey (Owen Osborne) A truly refreshing expression of love missing its mark and the form you...
  January 28th, 2018 17:09
• ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE (Michael Edwards) I love the repetition of words at times in poetry Michael - - this imagery...
  January 28th, 2018 06:56
• HOLOCAUST MEMORY (BRIAN & ANGELA) Unspeakable crimes against innocent people will leave their mark for...
  January 28th, 2018 06:49
• Help Me Lord. (Goldfinch60) So very moving this honest appeal for help dear friend - - wishing you...
  January 28th, 2018 06:46
• Return, Rebuild, Restore (Orchidee) An informative and upbuilding write Orchi.
  January 28th, 2018 06:43
• ADVERSARY RHYMES 13, 14, & 15 (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - fun reads to finish my day Michael and hey I remember all those...
  January 27th, 2018 16:01
• Special Table (W c) Ah - a table if only it could speak would be filled with the wonders of...
  January 27th, 2018 15:59
• I need You! (FredPeyer) Ha ha - now that had me fooled - - a yummy read Fred.
  January 27th, 2018 15:55
• Look at the Stars. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful thoughts and comforting words.
  January 27th, 2018 15:52
• She Broke All The Rules. (Kevin browne) Love the flow and rhyme of this romantic stop-and-start affair Kevin - ...
  January 27th, 2018 15:50
• A TEDDY BEAR IS ~ BETTER THAN A MAN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Thanks dear Brian for this Saturday smile with another lovely teddy poem -...
  January 27th, 2018 10:41
• Heaven On Earth - Good News Series - 9 (Orchidee) Such good news from the Revelations -- well written Orchi.
  January 26th, 2018 12:46
• HAPPY TEDDY BEAR ~ A Free Verse Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I love my collection of bears so I give lots of hugs and smile at each...
  January 26th, 2018 06:42
• A TOUCH OF ROMANCE (Lasergraph) Wow - so romantic - -a charming read Laser along with the wonderful...
  January 25th, 2018 13:46
• Still giving time more time (Poetic Dan) Ah - sad but expertly written this lament for past mistakes Dan - -love...
  January 25th, 2018 13:42
• I AM A VEG~ET~ABLE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) An ode to all things green and brown - and so deeeelishously done Brian -...
  January 24th, 2018 10:49
• American Goldfinch (W c) Birds give us so much for which to be thankful and this piece says it all...
  January 23rd, 2018 06:10
• Gifts of Grace - Good News Series - 6 (Orchidee) A fine piece to hum as we go about our day Orchi - - thanks for sharing.
  January 23rd, 2018 06:08
• I Am Here. (Goldfinch60) Wise introspection after a glass of fine wine Andy - an engaging read.
  January 23rd, 2018 06:07
• May We Always Fly Free (Lorna) Your pen evokes freedom with excellent imagery here - - much food for...
  January 23rd, 2018 06:05
• LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) A moving and romantic ballad to found love - -- a beautiful and tender...
  January 23rd, 2018 05:59
• Here if you fall (Poetic Dan) A true treasure for your children to keep Dan - - your pen excels in...
  January 22nd, 2018 17:37
• love is a lung (Heather T) A heart-wrenching tribute to a very brave smile of a dear friend facing...
  January 22nd, 2018 17:14
• blinds (Heather T) So good to see your work here again Heather - your ink flows with rare...
  January 20th, 2018 17:11
• ACROSTICS ~ The Animal Dentist ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) wow - who would ever want to reach inside the mouth of an un-sedated croc...
  January 20th, 2018 08:37
• Winter Is My Favorite Time of Year (DHA) I am with you in lots of these reasons why I like winter best too - a...
  January 18th, 2018 13:18
• BLUE MOON or BLOOD MOON (BRIAN & ANGELA) Blue Moon occuring as rarely as they do must be spectacular to watch Brian...
  January 18th, 2018 11:51