Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• child sometimes (Frank Prem) This describes our inner child so well Frank - -many a time my own...
  November 17th, 2017 08:57
• Cardinals (Christina8) Cardinals sound wonderful and very colourful Christina - - your tree...
  November 17th, 2017 08:53
• ANCIENT TRANSITIONS (Louis Gibbs) Anticipation is the answer to future transition Louis as I believe \"the...
  November 17th, 2017 05:31
• MEASURED REASON (Michael Edwards) Incredulity versus reason - -- interesting thoughts Michael on logic...
  November 17th, 2017 05:28
• IDEAS (Laura🌻) Very perceptive this acrostic dear Laura - I agree with each aspect of...
  November 17th, 2017 03:01
• My Love Was Left For Dead. (Kevin browne) Your talent for wording with depth attracting such attention to detail of...
  November 17th, 2017 02:58
• The Inventor (FredPeyer) Your rhyming in this wise piece of advice is outstanding Fred - - making...
  November 16th, 2017 16:18
• CHRISTMAS TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Of course a Mother warrants attention especially at Christmas and this...
  November 16th, 2017 10:44
• DEPRESSION (Drewp) Just letting someone know you and your poetic words are there can be...
  November 16th, 2017 09:04
• Her (M.E.M.) A first rate description of the face in the picture - - so strong yet ...
  November 15th, 2017 17:31
• ERRANT PROGRAMMING (Louis Gibbs) Yes programming is responsible for much of human conflictional error- a...
  November 15th, 2017 12:14
• Unexpected Moments. (Goldfinch60) Such a special song and treat to hear it again dear friend.
  November 15th, 2017 12:10
• FIVE SEASONAL HAIKU ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) All the five appealed to me Brian but I have to admit number three gave me...
  November 15th, 2017 12:09
• Just writing it out (Poetic Dan) To live in the moment brings ultimate clarity as to who we really are Dan...
  November 15th, 2017 12:02
• Nine syallables from a failed poet (Drewp) Super write Andrew - such a good poem with excellent rhyming.
  November 15th, 2017 12:00
• A Gift (Christina8) A very good way to see the future is wrapped in this positive poem -...
  November 15th, 2017 11:58
• ARTIST (Michael Edwards) Your art with both brush and pen is stunningly good Michael - so pleased...
  November 15th, 2017 03:05
• A N G E L A ~ Country Girl ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) A charming lady-love is your special Angela - - so pleased for your both...
  November 14th, 2017 17:18
• CELL PHONE INTRUDER (Lasergraph) Ouch - - I know just how mad it can make folks when naked they splash...
  November 14th, 2017 14:46
• Tears of Thorns (WL Schuett) Brilliant artwork and oh how I enjoyed that beguiling verse full of good...
  November 14th, 2017 14:40
• My Purpose (Christina8) Good aims dear Christina and put into a charmingly honest verse - you will...
  November 14th, 2017 07:26
• 1 Year Anniversary on MPS (Poetboy123) Oh what a delight to read such a tribute to this friendly site Poetboy - ...
  November 14th, 2017 07:24
• THE RING (Michael Edwards) The form is quite tricky and you make it exciting Michael. Great read.
  November 13th, 2017 17:30
• THE SURVIVOR (Louis Gibbs) A slow and sad feel to this grieving lament Louis - - how powerful those...
  November 13th, 2017 17:27
• C H R I S T M A S ! A Flow Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) You have perfected the flow poem with your exciting and seasonal sonnet...
  November 13th, 2017 17:24
• I\'ve Never Told (Christina8) A heart-wrenching feel to this honest piece dear Christina - the positive...
  November 13th, 2017 17:19
• An Ode To A Friend (Syd) Another compelling read Syd - - from your memory box old friends pop up...
  November 13th, 2017 13:01
• Dear oldest friend (Poetic Dan) A truly heartwarming read Dan and written with a nod to right metre and...
  November 13th, 2017 12:55
• I will always love you! (FredPeyer) Two sides to love\'s coin given very poetically here Fred. Good read.
  November 13th, 2017 12:53
• Towards Infinity. (Goldfinch60) An inspiring read Andy - and a favourite for me. Thanks for sharing.
  November 13th, 2017 04:33
• Affliction Assistance (Orchidee) A wonderful verse of encouragement to keep moving forward toward spiritual...
  November 12th, 2017 16:36
• Favorite Word (M.E.M.) Good points in favour of encouraging the feeling of hope M.E.M. and so...
  November 12th, 2017 16:33
• Hearing Aid (Edward Charles McDevitt) Such an honest admittance of frustrations Edward - - hearing clearly is...
  November 12th, 2017 16:31
• Writer\'s Block (Christina8) This comes to us all from time to time dear friend - - I keep pen and...
  November 12th, 2017 02:49
• Veteran (W c) A memorable tribute to a group of fine men who fought for animal health...
  November 11th, 2017 14:59
• Russian Rulette (Syd) A powerful warning Syd - - there is much to be said for living \"health...
  November 11th, 2017 11:48
• SEASONS OF THANKSGIVING ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) such a pleasure to read of your reasons for genuine thanks my friend - ...
  November 11th, 2017 07:34
• my place in nothing (Frank Prem) Such depth to these lines Frank - small becomes nothing which alters its...
  November 10th, 2017 12:34
• 10.000 feet. (Kevin browne) Ah clever wordsmithing here Kevin - - love\'s journey whether short and...
  November 10th, 2017 10:59
• Life is a Mess (FredPeyer) Your mind thinks in lateral style like all good poets Fred - -could really...
  November 10th, 2017 10:18
• THE BLESSED (Louis Gibbs) I find the first line so very true Louis - - blessed are those with simple...
  November 10th, 2017 10:16
• THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards) I could hear after reading that sigh of a mermaid from here in deepest...
  November 10th, 2017 09:34
• FUSION ON FLOWER ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) So many beauties from which to choose when writing of flowers- - I love...
  November 10th, 2017 09:26
• singing broken heart at number 60 (Frank Prem) Loud applause for singing duets with the famed Emmy-Lou - such a swinging...
  November 9th, 2017 14:12
• Glorious Sunshine (FredPeyer) Love these informing two liners Fred - - sunshine written like this feels...
  November 9th, 2017 14:08
• A SHELTERED NOOK (Michael Edwards) Brilliant form and given a painted location it sings its own invite as I...
  November 9th, 2017 14:06
• Stepping Off. (Goldfinch60) Fine piece of advice my friend - stepping out of our comfort zone will be...
  November 9th, 2017 14:03
• Broken Wings (Tony36) A fine testimony to a living faith Tony - - broken wings can be healed...
  November 9th, 2017 13:40
• Rebirth and Another Attempt (Michael J. Schaeffer) A gem of a romantic write to a special someone with magic eyes - - great...
  November 9th, 2017 12:08
• The Holidays (Christina8) Yes dear Christina our heart must shine through the gifts we give - - a...
  November 9th, 2017 11:06
• TO HUG ~OR~ NOT TO HUG ? A 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) p.s. I just love that beautiful example in the picture you chose - look...
  November 9th, 2017 10:47
• TO HUG ~OR~ NOT TO HUG ? A 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Genuine hugs mean the world to those needing them - good read Brian and...
  November 9th, 2017 10:43
• Tears Of A Shark (Syd) Such wisdom given in this fine piece of shared experience with ending...
  November 9th, 2017 05:58
• Reigning Reassurance (Orchidee) You work hard to get just the right metre and line length my friend in...
  November 8th, 2017 11:31
• Hear my plea (Poetic Dan) A heart-touching read and may all your efforts and dreams to help a much...
  November 8th, 2017 10:06
• The Beach With The Cave (Syd) A very poignant read Syd - many times we need memories and this verse...
  November 8th, 2017 08:50
• stirring the soup (Frank Prem) I can smell from here that stirring aroma of delectable soup Frank - am...
  November 7th, 2017 15:02
• The Land Of The Free (Christina8) Such a powerful and appealing write on the terrible tragedy of wild use of...
  November 7th, 2017 14:56
• HER TAINTED HEART (Michael Edwards) The flow slows to a poignant finalé in this ballad of love ending - -...
  November 7th, 2017 14:42
• AROMATHERAPY ~ OK (BRIAN & ANGELA) Oh the lovely perfume wafts from your every word on the art of...
  November 7th, 2017 06:02
• ALL CREATION PRAISES GOD ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A gem of a write which puts the praise for creation\'s great order in the...
  November 5th, 2017 17:27
• Falling Leaves of Autumn (Rrodriguez) What a beautiful and apt dedication to your much loved wife Roberto -...
  November 5th, 2017 11:04
• Death Of A Warbler (W c) All lovers of nature feel sad at these unfortunate happenings W.C. - a...
  November 5th, 2017 10:41
• THE TRADE OFF (Louis Gibbs) Ah - I agree with the alternative to the phrase - \"getting old\" -...
  November 3rd, 2017 10:47
• Glory Greatness (Orchidee) Verse 18 has long been a favourite of mine - - \"Jehovah\" - meaning -...
  November 3rd, 2017 10:44
• American Crow (W c) You picture the crow-scene very well here W.C. - - an apt tribute to the...
  November 3rd, 2017 10:40
• A day on the farm (Tony36) On single day described well here Tony - they say farm work is 24/7 in...
  November 3rd, 2017 10:35
• THE CLOWN (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - - fantastic form for the kind of humour you used . Love the...
  November 3rd, 2017 03:57
• Aftermath (FredPeyer) Oh such a powerful poem with rhyming to add to its dire expression - an...
  November 2nd, 2017 15:22
• My Goddess (Mugsdaddy) A passionate piece of prose Mugs - - I am in need of a cooling shower...
  November 2nd, 2017 15:20
• After this moment (Myself and me) A very poetic way with sorrowful words my friend. A compelling read.
  November 2nd, 2017 15:17
• Highlighting Hopes (Orchidee) Yes the two sides of \"chose\" in this enlightening verse tell us a lot...
  November 1st, 2017 11:44
• Hell\'s Crew (Michael J. Schaeffer) Something new learned here for me re such an event - A scary feel Michael...
  November 1st, 2017 04:57
• ACT OF TERRORISM ~ NEW YORK ~ NEW YORK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Tragic the time when outraged the populace becomes afraid - well...
  November 1st, 2017 04:51
• AND SO IT GOES (Louis Gibbs) Love this description from nights of cavorting to days when parts have to...
  November 1st, 2017 04:49
• THE DECISION (Michael Edwards) Fine write again my friend - - An outstanding place of beauty may...
  November 1st, 2017 03:55
• Loving You (Christina8) Ah - - this it the way love should behave - so so pleased you have found...
  October 31st, 2017 14:30
• Miles (Sandra) The agony of not knowing you write with honesty Sandra - -love can leap...
  October 31st, 2017 14:00
• LET\'S ALL WORK TOGETHER ! A Mirror Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) The need for a friend comes to everyone and this fine mirror sonnet...
  October 31st, 2017 05:39
• Other Dimension (FredPeyer) This has to be one of your best Fred - a perfect description of who we...
  October 31st, 2017 03:34
• MY LIPS ARE THE WOMBS OF HER BRUISES (Av) Ah yes - - I remember it well - covered all over and didnt dare show my...
  October 30th, 2017 14:09
• REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS (Louis Gibbs) The value of random acts of kindness so well outlined in this tribute to...
  October 30th, 2017 04:58
• the search for truth (Frank Prem) A grand tribute to those who revere life as they should -- I could see...
  October 30th, 2017 04:56
• Can You Hear It?? (Goldfinch60) Silence is golden as this lovely verse states - a good reminder of its...
  October 30th, 2017 04:53
• IN PRAISE OF HEDGEHOGS ! A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Oh such beautiful creatures - a really good hedgehog tribute dear Brian -...
  October 30th, 2017 04:51
• Is It Love (Ron parrish aka wordman) Wow - what a great number selected to hear when reading your honest and...
  October 30th, 2017 03:00
• Rock Star Poet (Christina8) Such a sincere tribute to a poet friend who will treasure these words i am...
  October 29th, 2017 09:04
• Communion Call (Orchidee) A loving reminder of the spirit that dwells within and the approach to...
  October 28th, 2017 10:01
• Our Tree (W c) Yes tree are certainly a welcome gift as your charming poem outlines W.C....
  October 28th, 2017 09:57
• bass lines (Frank Prem) Great poetic fun-wrte of the busy sounds around café life Frank. I fancy...
  October 28th, 2017 05:37
• Lake Michigan (Christina8) Oooh yes please - I want to go to Lake Michigan after reading its magic...
  October 28th, 2017 05:27
• SEASONS OF LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) You are a master at this form Brian - I love the flow of a good iambic...
  October 28th, 2017 05:22
• A Storm is Coming (LukeCoomer) Wow - loud applause for this collection of different weather conditions...
  October 28th, 2017 05:21
• Mirror (FredPeyer) We certainly reflect just like mirrors the world outside Fred - - a good...
  October 28th, 2017 05:17
• Internal Conflict (Alexa Pineda) A first rate picture of both dark and light which make such conflict - -...
  October 28th, 2017 05:15
• AT LAST IN LOVE (Michael Edwards) To paint one of these pieces would be a success but to produce two...
  October 28th, 2017 02:47
• You are gone (Myself and me) You express that lonely feeling so well with the metaphor you used in this...
  October 27th, 2017 13:32
• At the Party (FredPeyer) Oh what a surprise ending here Fred - a fantastic read which had all the...
  October 27th, 2017 03:25
• ronnie\'s other guy (Frank Prem) The folly of thinking we really know others around us eh? - a great...
  October 27th, 2017 03:22
• THE ANCIENT LAND (Michael Edwards) Super write again Michael - ancient the land and so well expressed in your...
  October 27th, 2017 03:20