Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- MR BADGER: CREATRURE COMFORTS (Michael Champion)
Ah - I love the rhyming in this charming account of famous badger and his...
December 18th, 2017 17:28 - First weekend back (Poetic Dan)
Such a lively encounter with children and trains - - your parental care...
December 18th, 2017 14:30 - Old Man (Christopher Elwell)
You describe old age and its slow unsure steps with poetic phrasing and...
December 18th, 2017 14:23 - Our love (Christopher Elwell)
Ah - now that is what easy love feels like methinks - - a powerful read...
December 18th, 2017 14:11 - He Sat On My Hamster (Syd)
This true tale explains why young lads have to wait a while before...
December 18th, 2017 06:45 - Under Starry Skies (Accidental Poet)
Wonderful rhyming in this needed reminder of what the world needs most -...
December 18th, 2017 06:16 - TEN COLLECTIVE NOUNS FOR ANIMALS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah yes - that first and last description is perfect for the said creatures...
December 18th, 2017 06:08 - A Life That Never Died. (Kevin browne)
Kevin your pen paints the most powerful of experiences - a journey...
December 17th, 2017 13:25 - C H R I S T M A S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
That wondrous beginning at the birth of Jesus has left us all with so much...
December 17th, 2017 12:17 - Christmas Memories (Accidental Poet)
Juts listened to you chosen Christmas song - a tender and caring number...
December 17th, 2017 11:14 - Christmas Memories (Accidental Poet)
I love this enchanting tale of your memories A.P. - as this lovely poem...
December 17th, 2017 11:11 - Understanding with time (Lostthoughts)
Yes it mostly take time to find understanding - I like the pace and force...
December 17th, 2017 09:31 - LOVE IS ~ SENSUAL ! A 3 3 3 3 2 Sonnet. (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So romantic this sonnet to love - your pen is blessed with care as its...
December 16th, 2017 10:45 - Remember Me (Accidental Poet)
Such an appealing piece of questions of duo remembrance dear A.P. - a...
December 16th, 2017 10:42 - A BRIGHT STAR OVER BETHLEHEM! (RAJ NANDY)
A truly engaging piece of interesting poetry on the meaning of each gift...
December 16th, 2017 10:39 - A FEW COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Food for thought in some of these clever couplets Michael - love the...
December 16th, 2017 02:42 - POETRY IS.....RECEIVED BY LISTENING EARS (Michael Edwards)
Eloquently expressed these inspiring reasons for keeping the ink flowing...
December 14th, 2017 08:26 - MY CHRISTMAS STOCKING ~ A Contour Poem ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What a well-filled stocking dear Brian - - lovely contour poem.
December 14th, 2017 08:22 - Servant Salvation (Orchidee)
Wonderful read Orchi - - very inspiring.
December 14th, 2017 07:05 - Light From Dark. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful write my friend - -and what a thrill of a piece of music to go...
December 14th, 2017 07:03 - Jingle In My Bingle (Accidental Poet)
Ah - am still tapping my toes to this lovely Christmas jingle dear A.P....
December 14th, 2017 07:02 - Goldie Christmas. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely to see your kind face through that beard which shows all that Santa...
December 13th, 2017 07:38 - An Old Favorite Song (Accidental Poet)
A fa;vourite song of mine too A.P. and this engaging poem on looking...
December 13th, 2017 07:33 - I AM A CHRISTMAS TREE ! A Contour Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
:Love the tree form you used in this lovely seasonal read Brian - yes the...
December 13th, 2017 07:29 - Marathon Hearts (Accidental Poet)
Keep seeking deep down in your heart for that marathon strength dear...
December 12th, 2017 12:01 - CHRISTMAS GIFTS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yes those long-ago Wise men were very wise Brian - a charming and...
December 12th, 2017 11:59 - Peace (Christina8)
A fine piece of nostalgia together with wise advice on where Christmas...
December 12th, 2017 11:52 - ODE TO BARBIE (Lasergraph)
Aha ha - - what a wonderful fun-ending to this charming read - thanks...
December 12th, 2017 11:50 - Heaven In My Heart (Accidental Poet)
A shining love between mother and son so tenderly and honestly versed...
December 11th, 2017 17:16 - Young Man (Accidental Poet)
Full of experience and put so wisely these words say just how it is to...
December 10th, 2017 12:01 - YOU ARE A TREE ! A 7 7 Blank Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The tree your wise words describe where its shade keeps saplings...
December 10th, 2017 11:15 - ANOTHER BUNCH OF ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Love \'em - - all - - but \'specially the final one - and oh that...
December 9th, 2017 12:20 - The Beat of the Drum. (Goldfinch60)
Good to now you are encouraging musical talent dear Andy - the boy and...
December 9th, 2017 11:10 - Faithful Focus (Orchidee)
A lovely and faith-strengthening message and thanks for sharing dear
December 9th, 2017 11:04 - TREASURE OF SNOW ~An Acrostic 8 2 4 Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A touch of magic in snowfall brings us all to our outdoor boards and...
December 9th, 2017 11:03 - The Spirit Within (Accidental Poet)
I agree with Louis about poets feeling the presence of angels because they...
December 9th, 2017 10:58 - Little Bird (W c)
A hesrtwarming picture you pen here W.C. with feeding the birds and one...
December 9th, 2017 10:51 - The Coming Dawn (Kurt Philip Behm)
Words of truth and written with poetic assurance the read becomes a...
December 8th, 2017 13:32 - FORGIVE and FORGET (Laura🌻)
A powerful read dear Laura which outlines the true reasons for cultivating...
December 8th, 2017 11:43 - NEW RESOLVE (Michael Edwards)
A splendidly presented tale of misfortune and how hand in hand two lovers...
December 7th, 2017 13:34 - You Will Come To Know (Accidental Poet)
A read to bring tears of empathy to the eyes as we remember those who are...
December 7th, 2017 13:27 - Tonight, I feel lonely (Myself and me)
Such pathos in these well written lines M&M - - loneliness described in a...
December 7th, 2017 13:23 - Clowns (Tony36)
This brings back so many memories for me - a lovely read Tony
December 7th, 2017 13:20 - The Poem We Did Not Understand. (Goldfinch60)
The genius of Spender glows through these recited lines and led so well...
December 6th, 2017 05:41 - ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4) (Michael Edwards)
That middle rhyme had me in stitches Michael - another clever slant on...
December 6th, 2017 05:37 - Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3) (Michael Edwards)
Ah a clever alternative to the nursery rhymes Michael and reading them set...
December 6th, 2017 05:33 - Here to teach and be taught (Poetic Dan)
Positive throughout are these poetic expressions of gaining ourselves...
December 5th, 2017 11:55 - Heaven\'s Strongest Love (Accidental Poet)
Wonderful thoughts on not giving up and what a beautiful poetic present ...
December 3rd, 2017 15:19 - Just a few thoughts of a busy mind (FredPeyer)
Finding time for a little wisdom-writing has bred a really deep poem Fred...
December 3rd, 2017 15:16 - THE CONFORMIST (Michael Edwards)
The box of sheer conformity is something we need to think about escaping...
December 2nd, 2017 06:10 - Count Rainbows. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful first read of my day Goldi - - rainbows are what we all need to...
December 2nd, 2017 06:06 - THE CAVE (Louis Gibbs)
Your perception of autism brought out in these lines is so moving to read...
December 1st, 2017 17:26 - THEY WOULD NOT BLEED (Michael Edwards)
Your depiction of village life by watercolour always astounds me Michael...
December 1st, 2017 17:22 - LUNAS D\'ESPANA ~ Por Santita y Christina (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Looking forward to German experiences from your golden pen dear Brian....
December 1st, 2017 17:20 - Thomas Ave. (Accidental Poet)
Going back home is described so well here A.P. and finding the remembered...
December 1st, 2017 17:16 - Wind (Tony36)
Good thought in this write Tony.
December 1st, 2017 17:13 - Never be afraid to go your own way (Poetic Dan)
A deep and powerful write Dan - - lots of super lines and my favourite...
December 1st, 2017 17:11 - As life goes. (Malubotelho)
Lovely to read your positive write and to know you are posting again dear...
December 1st, 2017 17:09 - Me, Myself, and I (FredPeyer)
Yes this question vexes us all and it seems we have to wait Fred for the...
November 30th, 2017 05:57 - forgotten : the night (Frank Prem)
Powerfully worded this short-line result of being forgotten - - dark and...
November 28th, 2017 10:51 - BE MINE (Michael Edwards)
Your talent for shape and for word are found in the wonderful small...
November 28th, 2017 10:43 - HARRY AND MEGHAN ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yes who could have thought this couple would set newer patterns of union...
November 28th, 2017 10:40 - The Grim Reaper\'s coming (Jeremy Leach)
Points well made in this compelling read and so well rhymed - - the...
November 28th, 2017 10:32 - Day By Day (Orchidee)
A lovely prayer and full of faith as it is the read warmed my heart dear...
November 28th, 2017 10:27 - Humanity (FredPeyer)
The message in this powerfully written verse is vital to keep close in...
November 28th, 2017 03:39 - CHICKS (Michael Edwards)
Love the line drawing and adore fluffy chicks - I know though that the...
November 27th, 2017 04:01 - inside the poem (Frank Prem)
Good questions Frank in this gem of a read. As most poets will say and I...
November 26th, 2017 17:22 - Valencian episode (LukeMorrison)
A gem of a read Luke - the flow drew me into the local festivities and the...
November 26th, 2017 10:58 - LIMERICKS 8 30 & 34 (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - that final one had me in stitches and then I felt guilty bout...
November 26th, 2017 10:53 - POEM FOR ADVENT (BRIAN & ANGELA)
These comforting words fall into the heart of believers so easily as did...
November 26th, 2017 10:50 - Rosie Lee Sure Loved Me. (Kevin browne)
A tenderly written declaration which I hope Rosie Lee treasured my friend....
November 26th, 2017 10:47 - Chocolate Chip Cookies (Accidental Poet)
I can smell them from here A.P. - an eternal favourite is that fresh-yummy...
November 26th, 2017 10:40 - Whisper Me Gently. (Kevin browne)
I love the way you use the verbs iand play with the nouns in this picture...
November 25th, 2017 13:30 - TEN UNCERTAINTIES FOR 2018 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Uncertainty makes the changes needed in all of creation and we who believe...
November 24th, 2017 14:56 - Black Friday (Syd)
Being happy with what money cant buy in the answer Syd and when we in this...
November 24th, 2017 08:53 - SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3) (Michael Edwards)
Some of these finds are more subtle than the originals methinks - ha h a.
November 23rd, 2017 15:15 - THANKSGIVING DAY ~ A Rhyming Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A clear and beautifully rhymed account of the reason for Thanksgiving Day...
November 23rd, 2017 13:16 - Mountain Lion (W c)
An absorbing description of the powerful mountain lion and his wild life ...
November 23rd, 2017 11:56 - Always and Forever (Rrodriguez)
A whisper of eloquent romantic words in each of these beautiful stanzas my...
November 23rd, 2017 10:09 - Made to fight this fight peacefully (Poetic Dan)
\"Trying to achieve\" is all we ever need Dan - - a moving read about your...
November 23rd, 2017 09:03 - The pain of you (Thegirlwhowrites)
A powerful write on the pain love can present when given to the wrong kind...
November 23rd, 2017 08:58 - Dance of the Poet\'s Pen (Accidental Poet)
A lovely comparison and good use of imagery A.P. - - the poet\'s pen...
November 23rd, 2017 08:55 - Thanksgiving (Christina8)
Wishing you the best of Thanksgiving Day dear Christina and may you and...
November 23rd, 2017 08:53 - Raindrops On My Blanket. (Kevin browne)
Wonderfully worded phrasing in this heart wrenching account of being out...
November 23rd, 2017 05:42 - Media Control (Syd)
A compelling and well written warning on the way media controls our...
November 23rd, 2017 05:39 - You (Tony36)
A beautiful confession of love Tony - - great read.
November 22nd, 2017 12:45 - Morpheus, Where Did You Go? (Goldfinch60)
A good question to put to the one who helps us shut down at night - love...
November 22nd, 2017 08:52 - CHRISTMAS CRACKERS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ha ha ha - I could not agree more with that final statement dear Brian -...
November 22nd, 2017 08:49 - Night Sky (FredPeyer)
Night sky so appealingly described in this perceptive write Fred - true...
November 22nd, 2017 08:47 - Happy Thanksgiving (Accidental Poet)
And may your thanksgiving day bring many moments of blessed family-times...
November 22nd, 2017 08:45 - Supreme Sensation. (Kevin browne)
The gifts love bestows to those who treasure the places to find it - a...
November 22nd, 2017 06:24 - SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (2). (Michael Edwards)
So thrilling to read these lines recently unearthed by your ingenuity...
November 22nd, 2017 04:06 - Sacred Creek (WL Schuett)
Oh - these words paint a fantastic scene of sad nostalgia burned into...
November 21st, 2017 17:18 - WRAPPING PARCEL ~ An 8 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Sorry but In know not one man who does this delectable wrapping job Brian...
November 21st, 2017 08:37 - Cupboard Love. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - this describes well the intention of young children to \"help\"...
November 21st, 2017 08:32 - Cool (Accidental Poet)
Great rhyme A.P. and good to know the meaning of what\'s \"in\" with the...
November 21st, 2017 08:30 - Ode to Pugs (M.E.M.)
A delightful tribute to the remarkable pug-doggie M.E.M. - - they are all...
November 21st, 2017 03:04 - MY POETIC SIDE ~ OK ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
And long may you write and read and comment with encouraging support the...
November 20th, 2017 15:27 - A Christmas Poem (Christina8)
Lovely time to look forward to with family and friends and you verse it so...
November 20th, 2017 15:23 - SEEKING HAPPINESS ! (RAJ NANDY)
A fine representation of that which is true wealth Raj - - written too in...
November 20th, 2017 15:17
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