Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Me, Myself, and I (FredPeyer)
Yes this question vexes us all and it seems we have to wait Fred for the...
November 30th, 2017 05:57 - forgotten : the night (Frank Prem)
Powerfully worded this short-line result of being forgotten - - dark and...
November 28th, 2017 10:51 - BE MINE (Michael Edwards)
Your talent for shape and for word are found in the wonderful small...
November 28th, 2017 10:43 - HARRY AND MEGHAN ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yes who could have thought this couple would set newer patterns of union...
November 28th, 2017 10:40 - The Grim Reaper\'s coming (Jeremy Leach)
Points well made in this compelling read and so well rhymed - - the...
November 28th, 2017 10:32 - Day By Day (Orchidee)
A lovely prayer and full of faith as it is the read warmed my heart dear...
November 28th, 2017 10:27 - Humanity (FredPeyer)
The message in this powerfully written verse is vital to keep close in...
November 28th, 2017 03:39 - CHICKS (Michael Edwards)
Love the line drawing and adore fluffy chicks - I know though that the...
November 27th, 2017 04:01 - inside the poem (Frank Prem)
Good questions Frank in this gem of a read. As most poets will say and I...
November 26th, 2017 17:22 - Valencian episode (LukeMorrison)
A gem of a read Luke - the flow drew me into the local festivities and the...
November 26th, 2017 10:58 - LIMERICKS 8 30 & 34 (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - that final one had me in stitches and then I felt guilty bout...
November 26th, 2017 10:53 - POEM FOR ADVENT (BRIAN & ANGELA)
These comforting words fall into the heart of believers so easily as did...
November 26th, 2017 10:50 - Rosie Lee Sure Loved Me. (Kevin browne)
A tenderly written declaration which I hope Rosie Lee treasured my friend....
November 26th, 2017 10:47 - Whisper Me Gently. (Kevin browne)
I love the way you use the verbs iand play with the nouns in this picture...
November 25th, 2017 13:30 - TEN UNCERTAINTIES FOR 2018 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Uncertainty makes the changes needed in all of creation and we who believe...
November 24th, 2017 14:56 - Black Friday (Syd)
Being happy with what money cant buy in the answer Syd and when we in this...
November 24th, 2017 08:53 - SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3) (Michael Edwards)
Some of these finds are more subtle than the originals methinks - ha h a.
November 23rd, 2017 15:15 - THANKSGIVING DAY ~ A Rhyming Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A clear and beautifully rhymed account of the reason for Thanksgiving Day...
November 23rd, 2017 13:16 - Mountain Lion (W c)
An absorbing description of the powerful mountain lion and his wild life ...
November 23rd, 2017 11:56 - Always and Forever (Rrodriguez)
A whisper of eloquent romantic words in each of these beautiful stanzas my...
November 23rd, 2017 10:09 - Made to fight this fight peacefully (Poetic Dan)
\"Trying to achieve\" is all we ever need Dan - - a moving read about your...
November 23rd, 2017 09:03 - The pain of you (Thegirlwhowrites)
A powerful write on the pain love can present when given to the wrong kind...
November 23rd, 2017 08:58 - Thanksgiving (Christina8)
Wishing you the best of Thanksgiving Day dear Christina and may you and...
November 23rd, 2017 08:53 - Raindrops On My Blanket. (Kevin browne)
Wonderfully worded phrasing in this heart wrenching account of being out...
November 23rd, 2017 05:42 - Media Control (Syd)
A compelling and well written warning on the way media controls our...
November 23rd, 2017 05:39 - You (Tony36)
A beautiful confession of love Tony - - great read.
November 22nd, 2017 12:45 - Morpheus, Where Did You Go? (Goldfinch60)
A good question to put to the one who helps us shut down at night - love...
November 22nd, 2017 08:52 - CHRISTMAS CRACKERS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ha ha ha - I could not agree more with that final statement dear Brian -...
November 22nd, 2017 08:49 - Night Sky (FredPeyer)
Night sky so appealingly described in this perceptive write Fred - true...
November 22nd, 2017 08:47 - Supreme Sensation. (Kevin browne)
The gifts love bestows to those who treasure the places to find it - a...
November 22nd, 2017 06:24 - SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (2). (Michael Edwards)
So thrilling to read these lines recently unearthed by your ingenuity...
November 22nd, 2017 04:06 - Sacred Creek (WL Schuett)
Oh - these words paint a fantastic scene of sad nostalgia burned into...
November 21st, 2017 17:18 - WRAPPING PARCEL ~ An 8 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Sorry but In know not one man who does this delectable wrapping job Brian...
November 21st, 2017 08:37 - Cupboard Love. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - this describes well the intention of young children to \"help\"...
November 21st, 2017 08:32 - Ode to Pugs (M.E.M.)
A delightful tribute to the remarkable pug-doggie M.E.M. - - they are all...
November 21st, 2017 03:04 - MY POETIC SIDE ~ OK ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
And long may you write and read and comment with encouraging support the...
November 20th, 2017 15:27 - A Christmas Poem (Christina8)
Lovely time to look forward to with family and friends and you verse it so...
November 20th, 2017 15:23 - SEEKING HAPPINESS ! (RAJ NANDY)
A fine representation of that which is true wealth Raj - - written too in...
November 20th, 2017 15:17 - Be Yourself A Little More (Edthepoet)
Love the slant-eyed use of wording and good rhythmic flow in this piece of...
November 20th, 2017 15:12 - ONLY GHOSTS AND ANGELS (Michael Edwards)
First rate writing Michael and has to be among my faves.
November 20th, 2017 03:20 - Amazing grace by the shore (Poetic Dan)
A touching read Dan - - a gentle reminder too of the value of faith -...
November 19th, 2017 21:11 - THREE ONE-LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Powerful and intricate these one-liners Michael - -- the final one did it...
November 19th, 2017 03:17 - ZIMBABWE ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A terrible struggle for the right to be free of tyranny Brian and written...
November 18th, 2017 10:56 - Sunshine Streets Of Gold (Edthepoet)
Wow - loved the form and flow of this positive write Ed. - Must read it...
November 18th, 2017 10:52 - All by Myself (Mugsdaddy)
Reading these saddest of lines describes read loneliness Mugs. - hope...
November 17th, 2017 17:46 - Ragdoll (Edthepoet)
Powerful lines Ed - telling the sad tale of unfaithful behaviour where...
November 17th, 2017 17:45 - SNOWMEN ~ ELEGANT ! A 7 7 Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A magical read which brings back many Snowman-making joys when I lived...
November 17th, 2017 13:41 - You (Tony36)
A truly lovely romantic confession to a very special other half. Great...
November 17th, 2017 13:34 - Selfish (JLL517)
A compelling read and welcome to this friendly site - I smiled at your...
November 17th, 2017 09:39 - child sometimes (Frank Prem)
This describes our inner child so well Frank - -many a time my own...
November 17th, 2017 08:57 - Cardinals (Christina8)
Cardinals sound wonderful and very colourful Christina - - your tree...
November 17th, 2017 08:53 - ANCIENT TRANSITIONS (Louis Gibbs)
Anticipation is the answer to future transition Louis as I believe \"the...
November 17th, 2017 05:31 - MEASURED REASON (Michael Edwards)
Incredulity versus reason - -- interesting thoughts Michael on logic...
November 17th, 2017 05:28 - IDEAS (Laura🌻)
Very perceptive this acrostic dear Laura - I agree with each aspect of...
November 17th, 2017 03:01 - My Love Was Left For Dead. (Kevin browne)
Your talent for wording with depth attracting such attention to detail of...
November 17th, 2017 02:58 - The Inventor (FredPeyer)
Your rhyming in this wise piece of advice is outstanding Fred - - making...
November 16th, 2017 16:18 - CHRISTMAS TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Of course a Mother warrants attention especially at Christmas and this...
November 16th, 2017 10:44 - DEPRESSION (Drewp)
Just letting someone know you and your poetic words are there can be...
November 16th, 2017 09:04 - Her (M.E.M.)
A first rate description of the face in the picture - - so strong yet ...
November 15th, 2017 17:31 - ERRANT PROGRAMMING (Louis Gibbs)
Yes programming is responsible for much of human conflictional error- a...
November 15th, 2017 12:14 - Unexpected Moments. (Goldfinch60)
Such a special song and treat to hear it again dear friend.
November 15th, 2017 12:10 - FIVE SEASONAL HAIKU ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
All the five appealed to me Brian but I have to admit number three gave me...
November 15th, 2017 12:09 - Just writing it out (Poetic Dan)
To live in the moment brings ultimate clarity as to who we really are Dan...
November 15th, 2017 12:02 - Nine syallables from a failed poet (Drewp)
Super write Andrew - such a good poem with excellent rhyming.
November 15th, 2017 12:00 - A Gift (Christina8)
A very good way to see the future is wrapped in this positive poem -...
November 15th, 2017 11:58 - ARTIST (Michael Edwards)
Your art with both brush and pen is stunningly good Michael - so pleased...
November 15th, 2017 03:05 - A N G E L A ~ Country Girl ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A charming lady-love is your special Angela - - so pleased for your both...
November 14th, 2017 17:18 - End of the Blues (MendedFences27)
A sad ending for the triangle of lovers in this wonderfully textured...
November 14th, 2017 17:12 - CELL PHONE INTRUDER (Lasergraph)
Ouch - - I know just how mad it can make folks when naked they splash...
November 14th, 2017 14:46 - Tears of Thorns (WL Schuett)
Brilliant artwork and oh how I enjoyed that beguiling verse full of good...
November 14th, 2017 14:40 - My Purpose (Christina8)
Good aims dear Christina and put into a charmingly honest verse - you will...
November 14th, 2017 07:26 - 1 Year Anniversary on MPS (Poetboy123)
Oh what a delight to read such a tribute to this friendly site Poetboy - ...
November 14th, 2017 07:24 - THE RING (Michael Edwards)
The form is quite tricky and you make it exciting Michael. Great read.
November 13th, 2017 17:30 - THE SURVIVOR (Louis Gibbs)
A slow and sad feel to this grieving lament Louis - - how powerful those...
November 13th, 2017 17:27 - C H R I S T M A S ! A Flow Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You have perfected the flow poem with your exciting and seasonal sonnet...
November 13th, 2017 17:24 - I\'ve Never Told (Christina8)
A heart-wrenching feel to this honest piece dear Christina - the positive...
November 13th, 2017 17:19 - An Ode To A Friend (Syd)
Another compelling read Syd - - from your memory box old friends pop up...
November 13th, 2017 13:01 - Dear oldest friend (Poetic Dan)
A truly heartwarming read Dan and written with a nod to right metre and...
November 13th, 2017 12:55 - I will always love you! (FredPeyer)
Two sides to love\'s coin given very poetically here Fred. Good read.
November 13th, 2017 12:53 - Towards Infinity. (Goldfinch60)
An inspiring read Andy - and a favourite for me. Thanks for sharing.
November 13th, 2017 04:33 - Affliction Assistance (Orchidee)
A wonderful verse of encouragement to keep moving forward toward spiritual...
November 12th, 2017 16:36 - Favorite Word (M.E.M.)
Good points in favour of encouraging the feeling of hope M.E.M. and so...
November 12th, 2017 16:33 - Hearing Aid (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Such an honest admittance of frustrations Edward - - hearing clearly is...
November 12th, 2017 16:31 - Writer\'s Block (Christina8)
This comes to us all from time to time dear friend - - I keep pen and...
November 12th, 2017 02:49 - Veteran (W c)
A memorable tribute to a group of fine men who fought for animal health...
November 11th, 2017 14:59 - Russian Rulette (Syd)
A powerful warning Syd - - there is much to be said for living \"health...
November 11th, 2017 11:48 - SEASONS OF THANKSGIVING ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
such a pleasure to read of your reasons for genuine thanks my friend - ...
November 11th, 2017 07:34 - my place in nothing (Frank Prem)
Such depth to these lines Frank - small becomes nothing which alters its...
November 10th, 2017 12:34 - 10.000 feet. (Kevin browne)
Ah clever wordsmithing here Kevin - - love\'s journey whether short and...
November 10th, 2017 10:59 - Life is a Mess (FredPeyer)
Your mind thinks in lateral style like all good poets Fred - -could really...
November 10th, 2017 10:18 - THE BLESSED (Louis Gibbs)
I find the first line so very true Louis - - blessed are those with simple...
November 10th, 2017 10:16 - THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards)
I could hear after reading that sigh of a mermaid from here in deepest...
November 10th, 2017 09:34 - FUSION ON FLOWER ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So many beauties from which to choose when writing of flowers- - I love...
November 10th, 2017 09:26 - singing broken heart at number 60 (Frank Prem)
Loud applause for singing duets with the famed Emmy-Lou - such a swinging...
November 9th, 2017 14:12 - Glorious Sunshine (FredPeyer)
Love these informing two liners Fred - - sunshine written like this feels...
November 9th, 2017 14:08 - A SHELTERED NOOK (Michael Edwards)
Brilliant form and given a painted location it sings its own invite as I...
November 9th, 2017 14:06 - Stepping Off. (Goldfinch60)
Fine piece of advice my friend - stepping out of our comfort zone will be...
November 9th, 2017 14:03 - Broken Wings (Tony36)
A fine testimony to a living faith Tony - - broken wings can be healed...
November 9th, 2017 13:40 - Rebirth and Another Attempt (Michael J. Schaeffer)
A gem of a romantic write to a special someone with magic eyes - - great...
November 9th, 2017 12:08 - The Holidays (Christina8)
Yes dear Christina our heart must shine through the gifts we give - - a...
November 9th, 2017 11:06
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